No.2078
how can I improve?
critique and discussion
No.2081
put something in the middle
Even if it's just an open road leading into the mist, that would still be something to look at. Right now it leads your eyes through the middle but then just breaks into a mess. The fact that the skeletons are both looking away from the image makes it worse, because it feels like the picture really wants you to find something in the center.
Also, for a scene with skeletons and spooky shit, it's oddly bright. It looks like someone opened the wall to daylight, completely breaking the spoogy atmosphere and making it more like "wow look at this interesting old place".
The horizon is also somewhat mixed, the background seems to suggest a different horizon than the skeleton thingies.