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79ab7d No.101661[View All]

Hey guys, it's the SCHARPG writefag from the big Conservative Sunset Shimmer thread. I know the thread didn't hit bump limit, but I felt like it was kind of a mess and that it would be a good idea to have a thread specifically for this story, now that it's officially a thing. It also might attract new readers who might not have wanted to dive into a prompt thread that turned into a political debate/circlejerk/greentext flood. This one will be strictly for me dumping greentext and you anons talking about it.

Here is the pastebin of the story so far, including this week's update:
http://pastebin.com/MLfWzsit

As /pone/ has post ID's and I'm not really worried about anons trying to impersonate me, I will not be tripfagging. For now, anyway. If other anons can convince me it's a good idea, I might in the future.

Anyway, thanks for reading, and I hope you enjoy the story! Read the pastebin first if you're new and looking to check out what this is all about. Dumping in a few moments.
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83804e No.122850

>>122839

>Then again, perhaps it's just part of Celestia's royal largesse, intented to make her slave-subjects feel as if they're getting something in return for allowing themselves to be tyrannized

good old libanon


e9eacb No.122907

>>122721

It's just Anon, who was completely depraved of any affection in his sick miserable life, mistaking kindness for attraction.


73aae2 No.125056

File: 1430969903798.png (690.25 KB, 1000x1000, 1:1, potion_ponk.png)

>>122907

Yes, that seems to be what's happening. Libanon's internal monologue has already explicitly expressed that he does not view ponies in a sexual light. So it's been amusing to see how the cogs have been turning in his mind in the last few scenes, as libanon is going all out brainstorming ways to get Flutters to confess her love. His subconscious may indeed want to ponk a pone…

In any event, it looks like to me based YAH86 is setting up for an amusing conflict. Can't wait for more!


86d08d No.125118

>>122841

>Wield Hoe 1

so how long do we have to grind to master the art of the Hoe


e9eacb No.125123

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>>125118

Not long if you know the best grinding spots.


c144c9 No.125131


86d08d No.125388

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79ab7d No.127173

Sorry that I've been inactive for so long, anons. I just wanted to let you all know that I haven't forgotten the story or my promise to give you some lewd soon and that I plan to write more this week. I'm pretty sure twice-weekly dumps aren't coming back thanks to my new schedule and normie lifestyle, but as usual I will make every bit of green I submit as fun to read as possible. The saga of libanon will never die.


6463af No.127262

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>>127173

Hey it's fine

we just need three posts a week


dbb190 No.127298

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>>127173

>normie lifestyle

I'm in the same boat m8, those damn tradeoffs. Makes me wanna skip sleep sometimes for the extra time, but that only ever worked a few times in college as last acts of desperation or the few restless nights spent reading fimfics


83804e No.127360

>>127173

I'll be okay with the lessened rate I guess…


79ab7d No.127370

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>>127262

>three posts a week

By that I hope you mean what I've been averaging so far, anon. I would post more if I could. The truth is, I'm a terrible writer. It takes me hours to write each little three-post snippet I typically deliver, and hours more to think of where to next advance the plot. I could never do this shit professionally. I only started writing it because it's something I wanted to see written and no one else was doing it; now it's got a life of its own and I'm just along for the ride, so to speak.

>>127298

I know those feels m80. It's hard to decide what to do with my time, now. I sleep less, and yet the hours before and after work are spent in suspense or recuperation, respectively. It doesn't help that I have to get up super early. I guess I'll get used to it, though. It's less a matter of having free time and more one of not being afraid to order it and spend it how I wish. Spending years paying absolutely no attention to the flow of time fucks with you.

>mfw I'm just as much of a loser as before, only now I have pocket change

>>127360

You've got the right to grumble. I delivered a story people like and now I'm constricting the flow. I'd be disappointed, too. Like I keep saying, though, this is too much fun for me to stop completely.

If it makes you feel better, I don't claim any special ownership of the whole libanon in tradquestria concept, so if other anons wanted to try their hand at writing little scenes or one-shots in this thread for everyone's amusement, I'd be fine with it. The way I see it, it's the concept and not necessarily my writing that draws anons to the thread. I may be wrong, though. I just want everyone to have a good time, and hope that I've been able to deliver that so far.


83804e No.127378

>>127370

don't worry so much, you're doing fine


e9eacb No.129939

Why is it that Autistic CYOAS like For want of a truth and Quetsing in Equestria can go on for fucking thousands of posts while all the good writefaggotry gets burried and abandoned almost every time?


0b317f No.129992

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>>129939

It's not abandoned, anon. Just on hiatus


79ab7d No.130094

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>>129939

Good things are more precious for being rare and ephemeral, or so they say.

Also, this anon >>129992 is correct, I'm on hiatus, not just just fucking off entirely. I've been called into work waaay more than I expected this week. I've no intention of abandoning this story, though.

I'm glad you guys like the story enough to be angry when I don't deliver, makes me proud of myself. I promise to get right back on it when I have time to rest.


73aae2 No.132986

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>>130094

>I've no intention of abandoning this story, though.

I think that's what matters most. You've got a really good tale with a unique premise going here and as long as you aim to continue it, we'll keep this thread bumped and await your return.

Work hard and keep to your values.


0b317f No.134957

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>>130094

Conservative bump. You make Reagan proud, writefriend. Hope you've rested up soon.


52d153 No.134977

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>>130094

>Good things are more precious for being rare and ephemeral, or so they say.

I believe I have heard something like that phrase before.


0b317f No.134985

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>>134977

There ya go.


0b317f No.136426

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>>136305

You're the most basic of memes


0b317f No.138663

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>>136426

Unrelated bump, but we got a gameshow going on here in case anyone's interested: >>138439


c144c9 No.140266

>>138663

>It's been over a month

hold me I'm scared


2b485d No.140315

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>>140266

Life must have hit our poor writefag pretty hard. Pray these dubs may bring him back.


26a841 No.140347

>>134985

Poor Spike. Even he can read between those lines.


dac5bf No.140721

File: 1434099495813.png (283.66 KB, 1280x720, 16:9, fluttershy_puppyface.png)

Come back writefag, I miss you.


79ab7d No.141033

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>>140266

>>140315

Those dubs are pretty nice. Life hit me hard, alright, in the sense that blessings often do. I'm finally getting my life together, but it's a challenge to adjust. Luckily the hardest part is already over; I made a lot of mistakes but didn't die. Funny how that needs to be demonstrated to some people, but it does.

>>140721

I missed you too, anon.

It's been a month, already, huh?

I won't apologize any more for being away or offer any excuses, not because I'm not sorry to leave you guys hanging or because I don't have any good excuses - I miss writing for you fags a lot and I'm also busier than I've ever been in my life. No, rather, I just wanna get straight to ponies, if you don't mind. So, without further ado, the long-awaited continuation of SCHARPG:

>You are Rarity.

>You're feeling absolutely fabulous right now, and it has less than usual to do with your ensemble, though you must admit that your sun hat and silk scarf combination is perfect for the weather and occasion. Across from you in the traincar sits your dear friend Fluttershy, and next to her in the window seat sits an immaculately dressed human named Anonymous, the only one you've ever met. By this point you also consider him to be a friend, even if he doesn't seem to believe it yet. No matter; by the end of the day he won't have a doubt. It's for this reason, and out of excitement for what will certainly be another magical visit to Canterlot, that you can't help but hum softly to yourself with elation as you watch the scenery roll by in the window. Anon is asleep at the moment, sitting in that curiously upright fashion that seems natural to humans, his head lolling off to one side. You were a little afraid he might snore, but thankfully that doesn't seem to be a thing humans do; instead, he breathes gently through that odd little snout of his and mumbles gently to himself from time to time. You wonder what sort of fantastical scenes from his homeland he must be dreaming about at the moment, and whether it's a good dream.

>You hope that it is, but ever since you met the young fellow you got the feeling that something is troubling him. You can't put your hoof on it, exactly, but your natural attention to social graces lets you see right through his polite and well-spoken exterior. In his eyes you see the same look of existential bewilderment that you once saw in Spike's eyes when he set out on his quest to follow the dragon migration. It's the look of someone who isn't sure who they are or where they belong, and as with Spike, it saddened you greatly. The oddest thing about it, when you gave it some thought, is that it doesn't seem to be due to his being stuck in Equestria. You don't know whether he's simply putting on a brave face, but you never once got the sense that Anonymous felt homesick, per se. Rather, he seems quite at home in Ponyville, almost like he'd been there before. And he knew just how to act with Sweetie Belle and the other fillies… His mind seems troubled by something else entirely, and you have no idea what it might be.

>You wonder if Fluttershy might know. She's naturally grown very close to Anonymous in the few days since he arrived, being the first pony he met, in Ponyville at least. You haven't spoken with her about him since Pinkie's welcome party, and are curious to find out what she knows. Now that Anonymous is asleep, it's the perfect opportunity for a private chat before the day's excitement begins. Anything you might find out that could help you make Anon feel more comfortable would be useful.

>Fluttershy sits with her legs tucked demurely up under her, facing the aisle, just like you. You silently get up from your seat out into the aisle and stretch your legs in as ladylike a fashion as possible, and then wave a hoof at Fluttershy to follow you. She glances over at Anonymous and then shakes her head, not wanting to leave him alone. You roll your eyes and wave harder a second time, and this time Fluttershy gets up and follows you, a curious look on her face.

>You lead her into the next car, which like all the others is brimming with fancily dressed ponies ready for a night on the town. You manage to find an empty booth and take a seat next to the window, using your magic to open it and let in some fresh air.

>"There now, isn't that better, darling? I didn't want to wake Anonymous, but it was getting a little stuffy in that car, wasn't it?"

>"That's not why you brought me with you, is it?" It wasn't a question.


79ab7d No.141035

>>141033

^Check 'em

>"Well, no…I was thinking we could have a little chat. You see, I'm a tad concerned about Anonymous. Something seems to be bothering him, and I was wondering if you might know what it was. I just want him to have a good time with us today."

>"So you've noticed it, too? At first I thought he was still homesick, but now I'm sure that can't be it."

>"And why is that, darling? I don't think he's homesick, either, mind you, but it seems strange that he wouldn't be, doesn't it?"

>"That's just it, Rarity. The first night he spent at my cottage, he had a nightmare and woke me up. I told him that he might be homesick and he agreed, and I think he meant it at the time, but…"

>Fluttershy pauses contemplatively for a few moments, her mind on the cusp of some realiziation.

>"Go on, Fluttershy. What is it?"

>"I don't know. Since then, he hasn't seemed too worried about being stranded here. He hasn't talked about his girlfriend Chloe, either. He must have loved her an awful lot to leave home forever for her sake, but he doesn't seem too interested in finding her. In fact, he told me that today's outing would be a chance for him to take his mind off of her."

>"Oh, well of course he wouldn't want to be reminded of his two biggest problems, darling! Surely you can see that?"

>"I know…it must be really painful for him. Yet, he doesn't act that way. He seems more concerned with trying to fit in in Ponyville. Maybe he took my words to heart, after all."

>"What did you say to him?"

>"When he woke up from that nightmare, I told him that even though he couldn't go home, he could try to make Ponyville his new home. That seemed to make him feel better for a while. But then earlier today he started acting…strangely." Fluttershy looks very uncomfortable, as if she doesn't want to continue.

>"However do you mean?" you plead, a note of concern in your voice.

>Fluttershy paws the floor nervously. "I was making breakfast, and I turned around to say something to him, and I found him, umm, staring. Not at me, I don't think. More through me." Fluttershy's blush belies her words, but what she's implicitly suggesting is too silly for you to countenance at the moment. You let her continue. "Anyway, he had obviously been lost in thought about something. It wasn't his look that was strange, it was how he reacted to me catching him thinking about whatever it was he was thinking. He said he had been thinking about his girlfriend, and I started to suggest that if he was feeling badly that we could postpone our outing today, but that seemed to upset him somehow. That's when he said that he'd like to get his mind off of his girlfriend."

>You blink. "And you don't believe him?"

>"It's not that. It's the way he said it. But oh! I'm being silly. I can't read his mind. I've never met a human before, and even if I had, I can't guess what he's thinking after only two days. This whole conversation is silly." The abashed little pegasus allows her mane to fall over her eyes.

>"Please understand, Fluttershy darling, I'm not asking for gossip. You don't have to tell me anything private. I just think that perhaps there's something wrong with Anonymous that he's not telling us. As his friends, I think it's our job to help him if we can."

>Fluttershy perks up semi-indignantly. "Of course it is! I just don't want to go making guesses about what he is or isn't thinking, when we hardly know him at all!"

>A few dignified-looking ponies turn their heads questioningly in Fluttershy's direction. She utters an "Eeep!" and falls silent.

>"You're right, dear, of course you are. Just promise me one thing, will you? Keep an eye on Anonymous. If something is bothering him, I want him to feel like he can talk to us. You understand?"

>Fluttershy nods, and the two of you enjoy a companionable silence for quite some time before going back to check on your new human friend.


79ab7d No.141037

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>>141035

I think that's it for tonight. Gotta get up early tomorrow. But I'm feeling a lot more comfortable attempting to balance work and other things, now, so expect the story to pick back up soon. Thanks for having so much faith in me, faggots. Couldn't have done any of it without you.


79ab7d No.141045

File: 1434156220739.png (Spoiler Image, 121.45 KB, 775x659, 775:659, onetimething.png)

>>141037

Oh, and don't think I forgot that I promised you guys some lewd green a while ago. It's coming. Pepper your angus.


3acc1d No.141152

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>>141033

Holy shit it worked.


e9eacb No.142256

>>141035

Oh god, a ghost.


76034e No.142539

File: 1434358088944.jpg (418.03 KB, 758x1200, 379:600, nothin much.jpg)

holy shit OP ain't dead!


0b317f No.145576

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>>142539

Conservative values never die.


646e3d No.147408

>Thread hasn't been replied to in 5 days

Is the story over? I still need to catch up on the entire thread. I haven't been able to read updates for a while.


83804e No.147478

>>147408

no, we're all just waiting on the writefag

he's got real life shit, I guess


79ab7d No.147497

File: 1435496557164.png (175.86 KB, 515x472, 515:472, pinkiesweating.png)

>mfw I wrote so much so quickly just a few months ago and nowadays can't seem to find the time

>mfw I made a lot of anons happy for a while and am now mercilessly cockteasing them

>mfw I started this story as a NEET faggot, wishing I could trade my time writing pony greentexts for a normal life and a job

>mfw I should have been careful what I wish for

>mfw I think if I don't deliver soon, anons will find out where I live and force me to continue at gunpoint

Feels bad man. I tell you guys what, though. I work today and then don't have a full day till 4th of July weekend. Between tomorrow and Friday I'll write for you guys. That's a Pinkie Promise. Breaks my heart to see my fellow horsefuckers languishing in a board full of shitty threads without any good OC.


0b317f No.147500

>>147497

Don't worry writefag, I'm in the same boat and extremely agitated about it. Thanks for checking in with us once again.

Hopefully I'm completely uninterrupted today, got a lot of shit to get to


c144c9 No.147505

>>147497

having a job is an okay excuse, though

me, I just spent last night drunk so I didn't update stuff I was working on, not so good an excuse


6463af No.148190

>>147497

I am eagerly waiting once more!


79ab7d No.150043

File: 1435968927418.gif (1.7 MB, 639x533, 639:533, depressed_dash.gif)

OP failed to deliver. Too tired. Can't think. Too many hours at work. More to come. Must sleep now. Sorry for breaking Pinkie Promise. Will write next week maybe. Should stop making promises…


44b194 No.150109

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>>150043

>OP is alive

Keep on chuggin' on space cowboy. We'll wait for you.


2a42ec No.150169

>>150043

don't forget, work makes you free!


79ab7d No.150487

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>>150109

You guys are way too forgiving. If a writefag I followed failed to deliver, I'd at least have to let him know he's a faggot.

>>150169

>Arbeit macht frei

As a /pol/ack, I'm in quite a bind, aren't I?

To explain, what happened was that I thought I'd have this week free till the weekend, but one of the only three other people who tends the store I work at decided to quit without notice. Yes, it was a woman. So I got called in. Then July 4th hit, and we sell beer and bait in rednecksville, so you can imagine it was a tad busy.

Anyway, I'm tired of this thread becoming my personal blog, and I'm starting to think I don't have the time to write much anymore, so instead of trying to make promises I can't keep, I'm putting SCHARPG on semi-hiatus. If the thread dies, so be it - I'll just make a new one if I happen to write any more. Like I keep saying, I'll work on it if I have time; I just can't predict my schedule any more. My NEET days of spending eight hours writing a page or two of pony greentexts is over. If any other writefag wants to run with my idea, you're free to do so.

I hope this story wasn't one of the only things keeping you anons on /pone/; I'd hate to see any of you loveable bastards leave. As for me, I'll be lurking here till the ride ends. So, for eternity. Thanks for all your encouragement so far, and I'm glad you like the story.

Oh, and happy Independence Day to all my fellow burgers!


2a42ec No.150594


0b317f No.151527

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>>150487

>Anyway, I'm tired of this thread becoming my personal blog, and I'm starting to think I don't have the time to write much anymore, so instead of trying to make promises I can't keep, I'm putting SCHARPG on semi-hiatus. If the thread dies, so be it - I'll just make a new one if I happen to write any more. Like I keep saying, I'll work on it if I have time; I just can't predict my schedule any more. My NEET days of spending eight hours writing a page or two of pony greentexts is over. If any other writefag wants to run with my idea, you're free to do so.

We understand. I've been going through the same thing, but I've also learned recently that the pressure you put on yourself is usually worse and more unwarranted than what others might put on you. It's not a question of masochism, but of principle; you want to deliver, and you'll be damned if you let more time slip by. But now you're learning your limits as a full-time worker, and the most important thing you can do is give yourself time to rest and not try to bite off more than you can chew.

It'll still be unsatisfying, thinking about all that stuff you want to do for the board, but as long as you're enjoying being on here, you can better focus on your work and take breaks when needed. Then maybe you'll feel better about venturing a paragraph or two of greentext here and there.

Baby steps and all that.


37bbae No.154540

File: 1436801375374.png (114.88 KB, 457x355, 457:355, 1403660447209.png)

>>150487

SCHARPG officially on hiatus? Say it ain't so! Where else am I going to get my fix of small traditionalist horses while the show itself takes a three month break?

>Anyway, I'm tired of this thread becoming my personal blog

Holding true to the spirit of an anonymous imageboard, writefag, thank you. But I actually never minded; always nice to hear fellow /pol/acks break escape from NEETdom

>If any other writefag wants to run with my idea, you're free to do so.

Nah, brah, this story is yours and yours alone. We all know what happens in the entertainment when creative control of stories is transferred. Never works out.

Basically, what >>151527 said. Take your time, and we will await your return.


28f339 No.155458

ls this a meme''''


6463af No.158022

bump


37bbae No.161233

So how long is a "mini-hiatus", anyway? My guess is three months, as it is for the show. If OP lives far enough north then maybe he'll go from selling beer and bait to just beer.

Then again, rednecks don't stop fishing just because it gets cold.

Then again again, maybe "selling bait" is a metaphor for this thread




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