d56d83 No.156977
0983a0 No.156985
>>156974
Are you self-promoting, OP?
ac12d4 No.156988
>>156985
Not mine. Far too old to be mine.
3d213e No.156992
>>156974
It doesn't make sense with there character development at that point, maybe if this happened in season 4 I can see them reacting that way, but not as soon as season 2.
091544 No.156995
>>156974
>filename
U fkn wot ur ded to meh
ac12d4 No.157008
4d7170 No.157011
>>156974
All you have to do is read the comments to find out this isn't worth reading.
363f46 No.157035
>>157011
>not wanting to look just to see how bad things get
disdain_for_plebs.png
4d7170 No.157045
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>>157035
I wish I still had the time and energy anon, but the ride of life has taken much of both by now.
3f9b6c No.157673
>>157011
>Listening to FimFiction's opinions
>Ever
shiggy diggy
2de1ee No.157880
>>156974
I rate it "a 7 year old girl proves that she can write a better episode than Hasbro can".
Speaking of which it wasn't just Discord's episode which was written pessimistic, negative, in bad taste and against the ponies. It was most of season 2's episodes and the latter seasons.
363f46 No.157969
>>157045
My apologies and blessings.
>>156974
>all these page breaks
>Fluttershy's section
>somehow screams meta-fic without being one
>"writing a television screenplay to prose" is now trying to beat the shit out of "edgy Donut Steels" as number one no-no in fanfics
>on top of everything he is openly a fan of Redwall and a part of a Christian Bronies writer's group.
>the commenters and the writer are hatefucking even to this day
>mfw
>>157880
Yeah, the episode was potentially better under this guy, but the major problem is that the content is too sparse. With prose, especially the most common third-person omniscient perspective, you can nose about in a character's noodle. Streams of consciousness in some places would have helped the idea immensely. I might just sign in to my fucking account to tell the guy this.
d56d83 No.157987
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>>157880
Are you a Season 1 Faustfag too?
4d7170 No.158003
>>157969
Think he'd rewrite it, or would one of us have to do it?
363f46 No.158005
>>158003
Considering he has nothing to lose, I'm sure he'd try. I can't set aside time to rewrite an entire botched prose with finals coming up.
2de1ee No.158023
>>157987
I'm a G3 fan, but I'm not a fan of G1 and Tales(G2). I'm what you'd call a hipster fan who's too special to fit anywhere, but I don't do it by choice, I genuinely dislike some things.
2de1ee No.158032
I find it ironic that a Redwall fan would ever consider a more positive direction to be better, when Redwall was all about constant doom and gloom every episode and season.
I guess it takes someone to actually taste the bitter pill before they start appreciating the sweet one.
363f46 No.158035
>>158032
Oh aye, I understand what you mean very well. But there was a fucking television show? I only read one of the books.
932ae7 No.158045
I think I feel good knowing that I haven't read anything like that including have never visiting that site at all
excluding any greentext from here or from post fanhitshitting /mlp/
still haven't read fallout and i don't don't know if all the circlejerk around it is actually worth it
2de1ee No.158146
2de1ee No.158279
YouTube embed. Click thumbnail to play.
Fridge horror anyone?
I wonder what Larson's original script was like…
4d7170 No.158570
>>158279
>that whole garden is filled with petrified, living ponies
>those ponies were victims of the cockatrice or Celestia's wrath
Urge to fanfic rising.
2de1ee No.158604
>>158279
That's what happens when the writers are too dumb to realize the implications.
c432cf No.158621
>>158279
I don't get it. Why did that pony immediately start yelling 'What have I done?' makes it more scary being that was the first thing to come out of her mouth.
What where the circumstances of her being frozen.
What role does the scroll play?
ac24e5 No.158820
I wonder what it would be like MLP was written by actual 5-10 year old girls…
683e98 No.159001
>>158604
Too Many Pinkie Pies anyone?
>>158279
Full comik
74a035 No.159156
>>158841
Where can I buy these online, I occasionally see them in store but they're only meme characters like derpy and "Dr Whoof" As it says on the package.
d56d83 No.159157
74a035 No.159165
668d95 No.161472
>>156974
Still a better love story than Twilight / 10
668d95 No.161473
>>156985
Why would you care, anon? Unless you're one of those /pol/lacks who believe jews are ruining the world?
8801d5 No.161722
Redwall OP of OP, just because you have bad prose, that doesn't make you a bad writer. Writers often times have great prose, but no imagination for the events and execution. Or rather they have no taste and go only with bad pessimistic ideas which don't fit my little pony.
773ebc No.161738
>>158570
Because that's never been done before.
10b73e No.162476
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>>156974
Remember when we still didn't know Discord's design or we believed he had more forms/designs he was going to transform into?
05266f No.163588
>>156974
Ahahaha oh wow those fucking comments, I love how they're not even butthurt because of his undetailed script prose, but because they simply hate him writing Return Of Harmony in a more happy and optimistic way without those emo grey ponies.
I swear it's like 99% of this fanbase is composed of hasdrones and geeks who only live for mlp and nothing else.
Where is the sane part of the fandom which isn't afraid to say: MLP sucks cocks and will always be shit.
ff60c8 No.163590
>>163588
>Where is the sane part of the fandom which isn't afraid to say: MLP sucks cocks and will always be shit.
Being not a part of the fandom.
d56d83 No.163593
>>163590
Sounds like a hatedom to me.
05266f No.163637
>>163590
Originally /co/ disliked the show, they only liked it for the memes and irony, which is pretty shallow.
They would never downright defend it, idealize it, suck it's cock and become so butthurt ocer someone saying the show is shit and tryint to improve it.
4c2b1d No.163658
>>163637
I've seen plenty of people declare the show to be shit, but they never suggest improvements. They just bitch about things they don't like and then call the fandom dead.
d56d83 No.163671
>>163658
Do they say things like "Twilicorn/eqg runied forever"?
4c2b1d No.163672
>>163671
Oftentimes, yes. It hasn't been Twicorn of late but when you talk to these people you can tell they're still bitter about something.