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File: 1414381726721.jpg (167.65 KB, 900x900, 1:1, 1411182280733.jpg)

 No.1262

Because you need to draw.
Beginner or not.
Post results, receive/give crit.
-edit-

 No.1270

File: 1414468066573.jpg (125.02 KB, 444x516, 37:43, hfftyjjiijfdde.jpg)


 No.1272

File: 1414474056463.png (405.88 KB, 563x598, 563:598, study1.PNG)

i dont think ive ever done a painted or face study

 No.1273

>>1272
Not bad, could almost be an alien from mass effect.

 No.1281

>>1273
Thank you!
Im surprised it doesn't look like a potato with a face.
Is there any critique specifically? I can see now that the eyes are way too far apart :(

 No.1282

File: 1414525316299.jpg (380.44 KB, 700x606, 350:303, portraitstudysmall.jpg)


 No.1283

>>1281
Ah I think you know the problems, as always keep practicing and don't worry about making things perfect. Often the mistakes are the most interesting thing. The mistakes of a novice vs that of a master are not the same. Heh maybe you could call the professionals mistakes just his style.

 No.1285

>>1270
Nice rendering on the face, but you got lazy with the neck and shoulders. The most glaring problem is the proportions of the face though. You made her look like a completely different person, even somehow managing to change her expression. Try again, man.

 No.1288

>>1282
Her eyes are a tad farther apart here than they are in the ref. Pretty obvious you know what you're doing in the rendering dept, looks like you just need more practice in regards to faces. You over defined some areas in the mouth and nose, making her appear older in your study. when compared to the ref.

 No.1290

>>1288
Yeah, I know, it doesn't look much like the ref at all. Thought it looked alright anyway, so I left it this way.

 No.1376

File: 1415147858543.jpg (1.07 MB, 1250x1721, 1250:1721, studywoman.jpg)


 No.1380

>>1376
the shoulders are really nice. i think working on facial proportions would help you.

 No.1382

>>1376
Enchantress pls

 No.1389

>>1376

Sadfrog.jpg

 No.1390

File: 1415293508896.jpg (2.18 MB, 2396x3292, 599:823, IMG_20141106_0002.jpg)

Eh..

 No.1391

File: 1415303835712.jpg (598.13 KB, 1299x1455, 433:485, estudio 1.jpg)

I maed thing.

 No.1396

File: 1415359268652.png (219.22 KB, 711x892, 711:892, portrait_Paul_Apal'kin_sh.PNG)

>>1391

maed pretty good

very paint

 No.1397

File: 1415374522179.png (33.07 KB, 628x540, 157:135, Oekaki.png)

Oekaki is pretty difficult but fun.

 No.1398

>>1397
dayum, those graphics

 No.1399

File: 1415380003303.png (10.4 KB, 500x250, 2:1, Oekaki.png)

It's abstract.

 No.1402

>>1399
Shitposting as a joke is still shitposting.

 No.1410

>>1382
lmfao bro

 No.1412

File: 1415499658809.jpg (57.2 KB, 626x576, 313:288, practice1.jpg)

I really shouldn't look at other people's posts before posting.

 No.1420

File: 1415553416401.png (800.58 KB, 964x1162, 482:581, prac.png)

...Kinda got lazy. I need to do studies more often.

 No.1421

File: 1415557031366.png (55.8 KB, 244x250, 122:125, Oekaki.png)

>blurry_oekaki.png

 No.1427

File: 1415648453747.jpg (56.29 KB, 945x1000, 189:200, Untitled-1.jpg)

I don't usually do these, but I think I should start sometime

 No.1433

File: 1415677775424.png (724.44 KB, 1000x1000, 1:1, ensaio.png)

I never done anything like this, would appreciate some feedback. Even though it doesn't look much like her, I'm a little impressed with myself, specially because I used no layers (except for the background) and no blending modes.

 No.1438

>>1412
Looks like you're drawing what you think you're looking at, instead of what you actually see.

i.e. You see an eye, so you draw an eye as you imagine it. But you should be drawing what you see, even if it's not what you think makes an eye.

 No.1449

>>1438
Ah hell, I really got to work on that. Thanks for the heads up.

 No.1459

>>1427
I like it.

 No.1476

>>1427
I like it a lot. It's very muddy, but not in an ugly way. If that makes sense. Keep up to good work.

>>1433
The eyes are very off. Her face looks as if she is staring at us with her eyelids closed. You did well on the collar bones. I think you need to work in colors a bit, too. Keep practicing, I like your stuff and see potential in it.

>>1390
I don't feel like you are getting her angle into it. It alsk looks as though she is facing toward us completely. I do like the hatching/shading a lot, though.

>>1420
I think you should focus on placement of the eyes, nose, and mouth. The hair is very well done.

 No.1479

File: 1415930800961.png (726.13 KB, 1000x1000, 1:1, ensaio.png)

>>1476
>The eyes are very off. Her face looks as if she is staring at us with her eyelids closed. You did well on the collar bones. I think you need to work in colors a bit, too. Keep practicing, I like your stuff and see potential in it.

Thanks, made a few changes to the eyes, I'm hoping it looks a little less weird.

 No.1504

File: 1416053922460.png (157.63 KB, 372x498, 62:83, eltbus.png)


 No.1520

>>1479
much better. You're almost there!

 No.1521

File: 1416206230936.jpg (193.65 KB, 1800x900, 2:1, Study.jpg)

It's still a work in progress and I'm going to have to go in to tweak the face since some of the parts are higher/lower than they need to be, but just wanted to share what I have.

 No.1523

File: 1416250949125.jpg (439.74 KB, 2220x2293, 2220:2293, study.jpg)

I feel that the head is not as sutbley tilted like the girl in the pic. The nose is bigger.

 No.1534

File: 1416345094028.png (941.87 KB, 612x816, 3:4, photo.png)

Did this >>1504 the other day as a joke (lined paper, pen sketch, shadow of camera, etc.).

Decided to do it today properly as I haven't drawn in years, and remembered I actually have no plain paper. I'll get some tomorrow.

Until then, can someone tell me the best method for approaching this? I fucked up a couple of times, ended up using a "draw in shapes" method and that seemed to work well, but I did something terrible to her head that makes her look significantly older.

Any advice?

 No.1535

Muh art skill

 No.1536

File: 1416349767960.jpg (242.54 KB, 900x900, 1:1, lefacefacexd.jpg)

>>1535
Forgot pic like an imbecile.

 No.1555

File: 1416517811426.png (338.63 KB, 700x700, 1:1, Well it's shit, what can I….png)

>>1262
Still trying to crawl out of symbol drawing limbo. It's not going well.

 No.1561

>>1555
Baby steps. Mine started out looking like yours, and I just kept working at it until it looked like >>1521. This isn't one of those 8x sped up YouTube speedpaints. You just keep working at it until it looks right.

 No.1567

File: 1416590359402-0.png (717.57 KB, 952x665, 136:95, Screen shot 2014-11-21 at ….png)

drawing without erasing cause i like to challenge myself and look like a fool when i fail.

 No.1570

File: 1416620894783.png (143.69 KB, 1000x1000, 1:1, 0000000000076.png)


 No.1576

>>1567
Well you're fucking awesome.

 No.1577

File: 1416809981305.png (372.48 KB, 612x792, 17:22, Photostudy apalkin.png)

Hi, guys. First time posting here.
Seems a bit more tame than /ic/
I think some of the values are a bit off but I'll fix that later

 No.1578

>>1577
A bit too contrasty, but I love the look of the flat brush strokes

 No.1579

File: 1416849226883.png (363.56 KB, 612x729, 68:81, Photostudy apalkin.png)

>>1578
>>1577
You're right. I may have pushed the values a bit too far.
I think this is as far as I'll take it

 No.1693

File: 1417852898887.jpg (196.33 KB, 1800x900, 2:1, Study.jpg)

Haven't had much time to work on it. All I was able to do was work on the eyes. They still feel weird, so someone might need to point out what I'm doing wrong here.

 No.1747

File: 1418074150001.png (515.87 KB, 1920x997, 1920:997, sketch1.png)

i tried. i need to get gud.

 No.1749

File: 1418106034698.png (646.94 KB, 884x531, 884:531, klaskdslfa.PNG)

is it ok to stylize a little in your studies? or would that be taking shortcuts/being lazy?

 No.1750

>>1749
That depends.

Are you stylizing because you know exactly what you're doing and could do it "right" if you wanted to, or are you stylizing because it just happened that way and it's easier to not fix it?

 No.1753

>>1750
a bit of both
if I took more of my time I could probably do it "right" but the reason I stylize is mostly because it's easier (which I'm guessing is the wrong way)

 No.1754

>>1753
Well, the point of studies is to learn, not to make a pretty picture. So taking shortcuts for the sake of ease is usually not a good idea, you might be avoiding the process that you "should" be doing this for.

Also, on second though stylizing can be very harmful. If you stylize something "wrong" (usually because you don't know any better), you would avoid fixing it just because it's easier to do it your way. When you study real life, you're getting the pure form of that information. So technically it's always right, and that's what's most important to learn. Doesn't mean you have to do it, but it's very important to know it and be able to use it.

 No.1756

File: 1418154920893-0.jpg (2.12 MB, 2480x3508, 620:877, study9b.jpg)

Got frustrated and decided to let it be.

 No.1774

File: 1418252536856.jpg (2.9 MB, 2448x3264, 3:4, study.jpg)

This is my first time doing this, loved it. I feel it came out alright, her expression isn't quite right - her head is probably too big, and so are her eyes.

 No.1776

File: 1418294727512.jpg (3.43 MB, 2448x3264, 3:4, studytu.jpg)

>>1774
Touched it up a teeny little bit. Not sure if the difference is clear. (Shading, mainly)

 No.1779

File: 1418336190298.jpg (3.2 MB, 2448x3264, 3:4, IMG_20141211_231319.jpg)

My version looks angry for some reason

 No.1780

File: 1418343506160.jpg (6.51 MB, 4000x4000, 1:1, study.jpg)

Here it is, I need some feedback.

 No.1810

>>1776
I like this a lot, do you have a website/tumblr?

 No.1829

>>1779
Looks like you widened the eyes. Wide eyes with downturned brows like that looks angry.

Also, you used lots of warm colors, which can be associated with aggression, and upped the contrast between lights and shadows in the face.

All of this creates a dynamic tension in the painting that comes across as very aggressive.

 No.1832

File: 1418603131008.jpg (97.14 KB, 1031x1500, 1031:1500, 8chan-study-1h.jpg)

Need to do more studies again.

 No.1834

>>1832

Good work, solid contrasts. Love it!

Just be careful with eyelids. Make sure you definite those lid wrinkles, or else it looks like cow eyes.

 No.1837

File: 1418620448407.jpg (119.51 KB, 1031x1500, 1031:1500, 8chan-study-2.jpg)

>>1834
Thanks! Yes, it could use a lot more refining, especially around the features and eyes, but I limited myself to an hour originally. I added another 15 minutes now to touch it up a bit more and try to include your suggestion.

 No.1838

>>1837

Wonderful, absolutely wonderful.

And don't stress. It's only a practice piece, but I do love the detailing.

Your hard work is definitely showing. I'm sure instructors are proud.

 No.1845

>>1555
You're not perfect

 No.2899

File: 1432607592491.jpg (788.44 KB, 2448x3264, 3:4, 1411256740482.jpg)


 No.2923

>>2899

Can't help feeling like that neck looks too thin to hold up her head.

Maybe making it a bit thicker on the left side would make it look better.


 No.3921

File: 1442136357845.png (272.69 KB, 574x575, 574:575, Screenshot from 2015-09-13….png)

I think I learned everything I'm going to from this one.

didn't do a structured drawing, and mixed colors on the canvas.


 No.3924

File: 1442183745278.png (444.91 KB, 900x900, 1:1, stadddy.png)

god I didn't even think i'd be able to do this at all


 No.3931

File: 1442233873186.jpg (876.78 KB, 1520x2688, 95:168, 2015-09-14 22.26.39.jpg)

Left eye is kind of wonky, Idk. Women's faces are difficult - use too many lines and suddenly you're dealing with a case of manface.


 No.3956

File: 1442697571432.png (215.1 KB, 626x498, 313:249, smugChinLady.png)


 No.3962

File: 1442796447418.png (30.55 KB, 140x140, 1:1, avatar_986928_1424722940.png)

don't even think about it, just draw


 No.3972

>>1780

You fucked up the head shape and eyes, but I still love the coloring and shading. If you just look at the jaw.


 No.3993

File: 1443049591704.jpg (96.13 KB, 722x790, 361:395, yes.jpg)


 No.3995

>>3993

i came


 No.4032

File: 1443217025682.png (447.38 KB, 1024x1024, 1:1, 8practice - Copy.png)

how'd I do?

>erased name in corner for privacy


 No.4034

>>4032

pretty poor. it's lacking structure, go read Loomis or Hampton sometime. Good job on keeping the hatching going in the same general direction though.

also

>signing your name on a study

don't do that


 No.4035


 No.4037

>>4034

wait what's wrong with just writing my name on my stuff. (not like a 'look at me' signing just printing name) ?

Sage for double post

also thanks for crits.


 No.4051

File: 1443295117800.jpg (1.49 MB, 2448x3264, 3:4, IMG_0690.JPG)

Did I do it right?


 No.4052

>>4051

Yes, that is one handsome fellow.


 No.4053

>>1570

>>1570

thumb looks really good

avoid line weoights for a while.


 No.4056

>>4034

Nevermind my question, I read a book and kinda found out why


 No.4396

File: 1446522286009.jpg (143.48 KB, 954x1329, 318:443, img004.jpg)


 No.4398

File: 1446536862143.png (2.38 MB, 1800x2464, 225:308, FRECKLEDwoman.png)

weh


 No.4408

File: 1446600823856.jpg (2.39 MB, 4128x2322, 16:9, 20151103_192945.jpg)

Think I might have tried to do too much.


 No.4409

File: 1446609449591.jpg (3.56 MB, 5312x2988, 16:9, 20151103_215226.jpg)

Will probably be rotated. Goddamn mobile.


 No.4411

File: 1446611957342.jpg (1.13 MB, 2322x4128, 9:16, 20151103_223545.jpg)

Tried to fix a few errors I saw in mine. Other than the hair, I guess.

>>4409

It's correctly rotated if you open in a new tab. I like the nose lines, but the eyes put me off a bit.


 No.4440

File: 1446975618665.jpg (1.21 MB, 3264x2448, 4:3, 20151108_120126.jpg)

I am afraid of adding the features

Is the base of the drawing id any good ?


 No.4456

File: 1447221899162.jpg (470.83 KB, 852x1127, 852:1127, SCANS.jpg)

Here goes.


 No.4478

>>4440

The shoulders are small.

>>4408

>>4396

Study and practice more.


 No.4512

File: 1447480059460.jpg (1.75 MB, 2448x3264, 3:4, woman.jpg)

This was harder than I expected.


 No.5004

File: 1456006032618.jpg (116.78 KB, 576x864, 2:3, study .jpg)

im recently starting to learn ps, i am decent at oil and traditional mediums. layers blew my mind , still dont use em much tho


 No.5005


 No.5012

File: 1456188261523.jpeg (798.47 KB, 1839x2592, 613:864, image.jpeg)


 No.5022

>>5012

long face


 No.5034

File: 1456669920693.jpg (48.2 KB, 900x900, 1:1, 1414381726721.jpg)

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA


 No.5036

>>5034

>just_fuck_my_shit_up.jpg


 No.5037

File: 1456706482884.jpg (18.21 KB, 422x239, 422:239, pan.jpg)

>>5034

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA


 No.5038

File: 1456724072960.jpg (1.11 MB, 2048x1536, 4:3, 20160229_133011.jpg)


 No.5049

>>5038

Das ist very pretty


 No.5053

>>5049

Thanks fam. How to better though?


 No.5054

>>5053

stop using lined paper


 No.5064

File: 1457811704908.png (1.34 MB, 2267x2184, 2267:2184, study.png)

>>1262

Fuck, I really need help here.


 No.5066

>>5064

Just be more accurate, esp. between the nose and mouth.




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