Okay, so it was pointed out to me yesterday that the first one was basically a dude with thick thighs and big pecs.
The Anon wasn't rude, far from it, it's just when it was pointed out I was like "shit. He's right." and then spent somewhere around 2-3 hours on the second one doing a revision. And promptly realizing I have no idea what the fuck I'm doing with females.
The Anon mentioned it in his observation as well, he could tell right away that I've spent most of my time drawing male anatomy and female is a new concept to me.
The point of posting this here is I'd like people to just tear into the second one, right one I guess as well even though I've since scrapped it, and let me see if I'm missing anything here.
From my view, what I see wrong with the second one is
>her left arm is too long
>left shoulder is too high up, maybe too large
>right arm is too long
>right forearm is too thick
>right forearm too vertical of an angle
>right elbow sticks out too much and doesn’t connect properly
>left breast too low
>either left breast is misshapen or the slope of the shoulders doesn’t match with it
>abdominal perspective doesn’t match
>abdominals in general aren’t very well done
>midsection too long with hips and pelvis appearing too low
>thighs don’t match up with hips
>neck too long
>head angle is off and doesn’t match face
>eyes maybe too big, despite them being deliberately oversized
Also for clarity's sake, the first one is scrap042_c(3), and the second one is scrap042_e