>>6015
It looks like this could be a painting-which I like.
Try to pay attention to the perspective and angle of the figure in space. Make sure the gesture isn't impossibly flexible and pay attention to the spine,
Despite how difficult it may be, I like the perspective you are trying to do.
As far as anatomy goes, I'm not sure whether or not you were exaggerating anything or not, but there could be a bit more stomach fat with how big the butt is.
Keep at it, and you could end up making a great picture.
Looking at the OP sketch I drew, the figure appears too flat, and the lines are too faint for the white background. Overall, it was lazily done, and more thought and effort could have been put into it. At the same time, having a poorly draw OP could make more people compelled to post their works.