/co/ - Comics & Cartoons

>>547606

the last image is by a different person, here's some of her other art

Howdy /co/, I was hoping if I could get some criticism on this here lil' cutie or somethin.

Creator of Tom and Artie here, I'm dropping the link for the progress I've made on the script.

https://www.scribd.com/doc/305470505/Tom-and-Artie

Granted it's been a year since I worked on this and just did some reformatting. Would be helpful if anyone wants to give it a read and tell me what they think of it.

>>547606

>tumblr

well, this is oddly relevant

been for a while trying to reinvent old teenage-years sonic fancharacters and that kind of shit, both mine and others I remember, into a looser, more "disney comics"-ish, "children's anime"-ish style, in a cyberpunk setting. Recently spent a whole day waffing in a city with a notepad, and ended up sketching a ton of characters, which I'm now refining. This is one such pass. Since so far I'm mostly just doing this for the designs themselves, I don't have specific stories going on, although just by the fact I'm shoving all these together, I'm starting to get ideas.

>>547963

>>547650

The character design itself isn't the character so much as the primary look/uniform of a private army of infinitely disposable children/really convincing midgets.

These little assassins were tailored specifically for their boss's tastes, and are paid only in candy.

The kids that still have families typically live semi-normal lives, save for whenever they're assigned on some mission, so another child must cover for them at home while the child going on the mission does their thing.

Thanks to the regular frequency of deaths/mysterious disappearances suffered by Buttons, many parents find that "their" children are acting strange or different from hours or even days ago.e

Their main thing is getting hired for ridiculous assassination jobs with little to no stealth needed at all, gladitorial style battles for private enjoyment, mundane tasks, and the occasional odd job

Ay Bronons,

Got a design here i just created.

Need some critique.

>>548188

'Nother design for the fire.

>>548235

Thank for the input the character was made to be a character sheet for practicing with animations later on. Wanted to make it simple to execute multiple times for fluid and clean animations.