I was starting to get a little bit bad to ask for something. Been following you on Tumblr and stuff as well.
It's been hard to describe a NPC for a Roleplay I'm starting, and your style looks great. So here is what I was shooting for…
I was thinking of combining the concepts of these two suits. Pretty much a flight suit as baggy as the typical fighter pilot, but with a vest like the first anime character (with sailor collar even). And her vest'll have pockets too, not on the belt. It'll even have the life preserver underneath the sailor collar (the padded collar on the pilot guy's survival vest).
What I was thinking is she is pretty well grown (even in breasts), with medium length hair, asian eyes, and some freckles. I know you'll not draw in color, so just having some lines on the suit to mark different sections of the suit (I might color this after it's done).
If you wanted to do a scene I was thinking of her holding her parachute over her head and body like a cloak, weeping a bit and embarassed as she just got shot down, looking soaking wet and the life preserver's inflated as she stands on deck after being fished out of the water.
The setting is a competetive dogfighting setting, where the pilots are larger than life and showy, reflective of pro wrestlers.
I've tossed in a couple extra examples for inspiration.