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Hey, sorry how long it took me to get back to you until now. I went through some of your stuff, and in all honesty, it's all really good. I wouldn't change much of anything, tbh. Perhaps the one criticism I have for you is to just watch some of your punctuation (mostly comma usage), but other than that, like I said, I wouldn't change much of anything that you've done. Hope this was some help to you. :)