/film/ - Film

Grossly affective. There were a few moments where I saw a more of myself than I'm comfortable with. Like when your ability to express an idea is failing and everything comes myopic and retarded. The visual element worked well, but could have been more engaging at times. The social criticism + childhood art scene did it perfectly, though more of exactly that would have been overbearing. the banality of evil/10

How much of the interview was scripted vs improv? I assume you helped make this?

How lucky I am to be on DXM when this is posted.

I think you definitely could have made it more concise and had some variety with the imagery, as well as maybe planning out some shots more. it felt like you were just wandering around his place just shooting whatever, which has merit, but you only need so many random shots of clutter and filth. I would have worked the video game angle more, shown him running over pedestrians in an SUV in GTA or something. the interview was well done

you should've used this for your end credits

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uBHl76NE_Yw

this is better, a little different but still similar