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bd7285 No.190

This board may be tiny, if not desert, but I really likes its concept and you guys inspired me to make a furry CYOA, we need to start somewhere.

It's my first one so there's nothing really fancy about it, but I greatly enjoyed making it

I didn't want to make mention of this board in it, because CYOAs are anonymous but feel free to talk about us if you post it somewhere else.

bd7285 No.191

>>190

I'd like to add that I'm not a native english speaker so there could have hidden mistakes in the text. Actually I just spotted one in Akiko's part (1st line) but it was too late to cancel the thread making.

If you want to save the corrected version, check it out here : http://i.imgur.com/s1U8BnV.jpg

Feel free to criticize the cyoa or pointing out grammatical errors that I could have let slip.


a2e6b8 No.192

I noticed a bunch of errors in that picture and decided to rewrite some parts.

>After one thousand years of seclusion, the kemono tribe has finally decided to reveal itself to mankind again. The recent boom in popularity of anthro-related media across the world along with the neglect of women by men in favour of herbivore/NEET lifestyles, has greatly affected their decision.

>Knowing our affection for their kind and to fight population decline (from both camps) the government, in agreement with the tribe, has decided to send young healthy men to various kemono villages to find out if long term human/kemono relationships are possible. They called this project "The Marital Exchange Experiment".

>You have been chosen by your country to be one of these "ambassadors". You have been dispatched to one of these villages and will have to live a whole year with one of the female kemono volunteers. Afterwards if you and your fiancee are happy, you two could choose to have a proper marriage. The future of human/kemono relations as well as your own happiness is in your hands.

Akiko

>Her husband died ten years ago and she never had the chance to have any children. She is very clingy because of that.

>Very traditional, a skilled cook and housekeeper. Other than gardening she doesn't have many hobbies. She is open to trying new hobbies.

>Lives in an old Japanese-styled house with a large garden and a hot spring in the backyard.

>Can be a bit possessive at times and will treat you as a child. If you want her to stop you will have to stand up for yourself and act like a man.

>Maternal as she may be, she's still a woman. You will have to be one hell of a stud if you truly want to satisfy her. She is patient and will gladly guide you.

>Desires nothing more than to have your children and start a family.

Leena

>When she was young her parents were killed by hunters while traveling the human world in their "animal forms". She has developed a hate for humans because of this.

>She didn't register for the "marital exchange experiment" and did not expect to ever see a human show up in her home, however she didn't protest nor complain in order to protect the pride of her village.

>Lives alone in a small apartment and pays her rent with the meager pay she gets working as a maid. Hardworking and faithful to her principles.

>Believes that all humans are sex-crazed murderers. If your feelings are true and pure, perhaps she will change her mind about you and manking in general.

>Very feminine, lady-like attitude, has a passion for the fine arts, she plays the violin and hopes to become a famous violinist.

>Loathes displays of violence, real or fictional.

>100% submissive and vanilla, but is secretly attracted to humans. (Has a strange attraction to your nose, ears and feet. Fascinated by human anatomy.)

I want to like parts of this, but she makes no sense. Especially the part about her being attracted to humans. Sounds a bit bipolar.


a2e6b8 No.193

>>192

Yomi

>She is the shaman/witchdoctor of the village, her role is maintaining the village's psychic barrier and warding off evil spirits.

>Lives in a remote cabin in the nearby forest.

>Often seems absentminded, communicating with whatever spiritual force that crosses her mind. Doesn't like small talk.

>She is very wise and enjoys learning new things.She will gladly discuss philosophy and/or spirituality with you.

>Considers herself a loner and will avoid the other villagers, though they hold her in high regard and sometimes come to ask her for advice or help.

>Can teach you lucid dreaming and/or astral travel as well as certain. Will gladly accompany you in your astral travels.

I'm not sure what you mean when you say "not a very tactile person". Do you mean that she's a distant and reserved person? Doesn't like being touched?

Sacha

>A tomboy who craves adrenaline and excitement. Boys usually see her as one of the guys and aren't all that attracted to her. She is looking for someone who will understand her.

>Shares a flat with two /fit/ bears (I wouldn't use the word "bara" because that means "men's love")

>Very social and will introduce you to her friends

>She has a hard time staying calm or quiet.

>Loves being on top and dominant, will switch only after losing a bet.

>Tends to drink quite often and gets really aggressive while drunk.

Koba

>Has worked at a juvenile detention center for kemono youth in a foreign country, but now teaches high school students. Has a reputation of being a very strict teacher.

>She isn't really tactful and often speaks in a harsh way, even if she doesn't want to cause any harm or offense. Brutally honest.

>Enjoys traditional games like Chess or Shogi. She's also a movie fan.

>Practices kickboxing in her spare time…

Emi

>The heir of a wealthy family. She belongs to a race of "high kitsune" who can stop their aging and are more proficient at magic than other kemono races.

>Lives in a mansion with her family. The mansion has a large staff of domestic servants. (Leena works here as a maid)

>Is a huge nerd and owns a collection of various media imported from the human world by her family.

I'd leave out the bit about the universal translator because it sounds really dumb.

>Lives the NEET life, and doesn't understand why she or you would go outdoors now that you both have each other. Will call you a wageslave if you work.

I'd leave out the bit about the vidya/anime industry job and focus more on her wealth and inheritance.

>Works on her own doujin RPG series when she isn't shitposting on the internet.

>Her parents want her to remain chaste until the end of the marital exchange experiment. You can try to fuck her if you dare, but if they find out you're fucked.

>Makes up for her lack of physical assets with a great sense of roleplay and many kinks.

I think I like this one the most.

>Pertinent information/Some information you may want to know:

>Located in a cold northern region, the Katekina village is a small town of around 1336 inhabitants (68% female/32% male). The community survives by cultivating kitsune berries (?) and cabbage (just cabbage?) during spring and summer, and by the craft of of enchanted amulets during the colder seasons. Save for a few basic structures (a school, an old sports stadium, a library and an old theater) there isn't much to do. So you will have to appreciate the quiet and traditional way of life in the village.

What exactly do they do with the amulets?

>The majority of the people here either work in the fields or in the old magic factory. If you must find a job those would be the first places to look.

This part needs fleshing out.

>There are many kemono villages like this around the world. They are usually located in secluded places (deep valleys, remote plains or wastelands) and are protected by a psychic barrier that makes them invisible to humans.

>The kemono civilization has developed in parallel to the human one with the kemono counterpart being more in harmony with nature. The architecture and level of technology is similar to ours. However their technology is powered by magic.

>Despite the legends about them being seductive in nature, the kemono tribe actually holds monogamous relationships in high regard and while they may have a strong libido the number of life partners is usually very low, if not limited to one person.

You need to explain some of this, especially magic part.

I can't be bothered with doing a full rewrite and edit of this, because I am lazy and not actually a writer. I'm pretty shit at this. Doesn't really matter, it's just a CYOA image.


c3d3c4 No.194

>>193

>II can't be bothered doing a full rewrite of this because I am lazy.

Nah, its okay, you've done way more than I had expected when I asked you to spot the mistakes.

I will make a proper update, with your corrections and advices, thanks.


a2e6b8 No.195

>>194

If you need help be sure to post here.

Emi is best girl.


d3d8f6 No.220

>>190

I'm just simply go full for Akiko, she is my milf waifur but I want at least help Leena :/

I love the blackground/life story you made for the characters, really well done, I really enjoy reading them… do you have a website or a place you put your stuff?


375cea No.222

>>220

No sorry, it's the first time I ever done something like this. It was fun though, and I may made more in the future… I think I will release the corrected version this week-end anyway.

Excellent choice btw




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