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 No.508293

(I've always wanted to do one of these! When the post ends, post commands for our protagonist! I'll take all into account and continue the story accordingly. Let's get started!

You've been in Silvervale for all of 2 hours and all ready you're flat broke and completely lost. After the city's introductory mugging you've been left with nothing but the clothes on your back. After wandering around town aimlessly for an hour or so, you come across a rather uninviting looking pub with faded sign-board reading "THE PISS'N DRINK" scrawled in big, ugly, red letters. If there's one thing life has taught you, it's that bars are the best and fastest (and morally questionably way to make quick gold. The door sits slightly cracked, smoke seeping through the gap and rising slowly to the bright blue sky above. You hesitate no longer and tiptoe your way inside.

Immediately you're assaulted with the stench of tobacco, puke, piss, and unwashed drunkards. The inhabitants seem far to busy drinking and fighting to notice you worm your way inside, but a couple wayward glances make you feel uneasy. Though you mostly go unnoticed, the bartender's keen eyes fall upon you the second you enter the room. He's a short, rugged looking wolf with a missing eye and a sour expression. His face is covered in scars and scratches, some fresher than others. His muzzle seems to bend at a weird angle, as if it had been broken and realigned multiple times. You settle yourself into a bar-stool, reviewing a couple possible lines to break the ice. The bartender does it for you by unceremoniously spitting onto the floor and grunting "Who are you and what do you want?" Well, who are you?

(Name, Gender, Species, Details)

 No.508296

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I Relirelilike Thisimg, Neutral, Banana, Shitpost


 No.508310

>>508296

…God Damnit


 No.508336

Bump. Let's hear some suggestions!


 No.508339

OP, rule 1 about questing: Don't give a shit about participant count.

Rule 2: Nobody cares if you don't draw shit

Also, what the absolute fuck kinda story is this? Give us more to work with.


 No.508345

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>>508339

Well, I cant draw. So there's that. Are people's attention span so small that they can't read something without pictures? As far as the story being vague, it's intentional. The story will become more in-depth as it goes along. Just roll with it for now.


 No.508388

Don't know about gender, but I think a badger would be cool.


 No.508389

>>508339

Someone can draw shit if they want to. I'm okay with it being text-only.


 No.508442

bump


 No.508447

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Pyramus

Male

Calleta Silkmoth (Eupackardia calleta)

We came to Silvervale to get a new start as a silk merchant, which we thought would be easy since our species literally shits it out to form a cocoon during metamorphosis, and it's just laying around everywhere in our remote home village. The silk samples we brought with us were stolen. They were actually from our own cocoon, so they had a sentimental value as well as monetary. The mugging damaged our left antennae and we have a really bad headache.

Drinking something sweet would take the edge off.


 No.508449

>>508447

Holy shit, you really went all out on this!


 No.508452

>>508449

That's the power of autism, lad.

Glad that you're enthusiastic about this, I need something creative in my life.


 No.508465

>>508447

I should also probably specify physical attributes: short (probably short as the bartender), weak, delicate, fluffy. The intro already implied this, but I just wanted to make it explicit.

Ask if they have any fruit juice.


 No.508498

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>>508465

>>508465

I like this Idea so I'm running with it.

>>508293

Do an inventory check. I want to know what we have on hand. Do we literally just have cloths? What cloths do we have? If we are attacked do we have a means to defend ourselves?

Look around to see if there are people we would want to avoid or people we can talk to. Try not to look directly at anyone or stare. Blend in as best you can. Try to make it look like you know what you are doing. Walk and act with purpose. We don't want to appear too vulnerable and be attacked as we leave the bar or something.

I don't think we should order drinks until we actually have money to pay for them with. We're already fragile enough and not in a very good state mentally. Can't afford pissing more people off, especially such a gruff looking bartender.

Now some questions. How are bars quick and easy ways to make gold? Seems like a place people would give a lot of gold to the bartender, not so much random patrons walking in. Do we get information here for where to get gold? Do people look for employees here? Do we get a job here? Are we going to sell our body (Is that really a good idea as a weak, fragile moth)? Is there some drug trafficking or something going on? You said life has taught you this, so how have we made gold from bars in the past? Would that method even work in this bar?

Speaking of gold, how does money work in this place? What is the exchange rate of gold to silver to copper or whatever metal people use? Do they even use metal or is it all just fiat currency? What will one 'gold' get us? What can we sell for a 'gold'? Do we even know any of this or are we going to have to ask around to figure it out?

Aside from what I've said before, right now I would advise going someplace the employees aren't going to instantly ask you what you want to eat/drink (don't sit at the bar, don't sit at a table). This way you don't have to turn down service and maybe anger someone that you, a non paying patron, are talking a seat that would otherwise be filled with a paying customer. Does this place have a bathroom? That be ideal as it would give you time to prepare a gameplan and wash up a little in the process. Even better if there is a line. More time to prepare, an excuse to not be served, and we are out in the open and can observe what is going on in this bar and gather more information.


 No.508576

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>>508498

You only have 3 multicolored cloths, but you mostly just use them as cum rags


 No.508624

>>508447

You quickly relate your sad misadventure, leaving out the part where you were cowering in fear as the mugger snatched your purse (satchel!) and bonked you over the head. That purse had what little gold you came here with, and the bit of silk you were planning on showing off to the local tailors. You could always make more, but the principal of loosing your birth-silk makes you sick to your stomach; in conjunction with your splitting headache and sore antennae, you could really use a pick-me-up.

>>508498

The sudden onslaught of questions gives you a miniature anxiety attack. Inventory? You pretty much have only the clothes you came here with, a nice woven suit and dress pants made by your parents, now slightly crumpled and stained after your illegal encounter. You considered purchasing a dagger at the weaponsmith, but gold was tight and you feared you wouldn't have the courage to use it should the need arise.

Aren't bars the place to get shady jobs and quick gold? Y-you didn't ACTUALLY know for a fact that was the case, but plenty of stories and literature back home point to that being the case. It's too late now, might as well ask him.

After you finish your story, the bartender's one good eye scans you up and down, perhaps deciding what to do next. You consider ordering a drink to break the tension, but you're flat broke and fruit juice doesn't seem to be on the menu. You finally ask about any sort of jobs or tasks that might end in you making a quick mint. The bartender scratches his chin, pretending to be deep in though.

"No."

He quickly goes back to wiping off a glass with a sullen rag, his eye still trained on your meek form.

"You gonna order something or just sit there? I gotta a business to run, kid."

There goes your one and only idea. There's gotta be something he needs done! You consider pushing the topic, but you're not too sure. The last thing you'd need is another twisted antennae.


 No.508676

>>508624

>You could always make more

I was thinking of placing a bit more limitation on the player, and have it be like real life where silk comes only from larvae producing their cocoon, and as an adult we would be incapable of making it. To get more, we would have to trudge all the way back to our village. Then again, having spider-like abilities could offset our physical weakness.

Tell the bartender that you're not interested in drinking right now, but that you want to know where he buys his ale. (The following is a lie) At many points in your journeys, you heard fellow travelers consistently mention The Piss'n Drink as having the best ale of all the cities they visited, strong and delicious. You're curious as to how one pub can be so far above the rest in quality, and want to meet the Brewster or Alewife that makes such a perfect nectar.

I'd also be alright with nudging this even more towards lewd, but my vote is for waiting until we can power-bottom.


 No.508692

>>508676

We shall see. Also note to everyone, try not to make TOO specific of a command, as it kinda limits what I'm able to do with it. I try to include multiple poster's commands, either using them or just acknowledging them. Just an FYI.


 No.508767

bump


 No.508816

>>508692

I will try to keep that in mind.

>>508624

>You finally ask about any sort of jobs or tasks that might end in you making a quick mint. The bartender scratches his chin, pretending to be deep in though.

>"No."

Looks like those old stories lied to us. Time to look elsewhere. When you can, listen around and see if anyone in the bar is looking for employees in a field you have experience. Are there any jobs we're good at? Seems like becoming a merchants apprentice would push us towards our goal of selling silks, and if the people who stole your silk from you are selling it, having someone on the inside (and being on the inside yourself) would make finding it easier.

Then again, we may need to look in the black market (if this town has one).

>>508676

Why are we talking to the bartender if it's obvious he just wants us to buy something? He doesn't really seem in a chatty mood. Not to mention it would be a bit bizarre to ask where he gets his ale and say we've heard so many good things about it, all the while declining to to drink it. He may be more eager to give information if we buy some stuff first and ask more casually. He doesn't seem like the kind of guy who would be swayed by flattery. And come on, we're in a suit, we look like a businessman (businessmoth?) albeit a bit messy. If I was running a bar and a guy in a suit walked in, didn't drink anything, but tried to flatter me into telling him where I got my ale from I wouldn't tell him jack shit because it sounds and looks like he's trying to start a bar and undercut my business.

Also, why again are we tracking down where the ale comes from? I'm sorry, but I don't see how this pushes us towards any of our goals.

We don't know if there is an opening to work there, so we don't know if we have a job there to make any money.

If we do want to start selling ale we have no money for startup costs.

If the place the ale comes from is a ways away this could put us further from the people who stole our silk or anyone who would want to buy our silk.

Before we ask for any information, ask if water is free, and if it is get some of that. If we are going to start asking the bartender questions I think it would be more productive to ask if he knows of any merchants looking for an apprentice or if he knows where silks are sold. If we are going to ask about the black market try to do so in a way that doesn't use the words "black market" as that might attract undesired attention. Mine as well get turned down asking for useful information


 No.508875

>>508816

Eh, the idea was to just find out if there was any inefficient step in the supply chain for ale. A large percentage of ale brewsters were widows (assuming this is a medieval fantasy setting), so it's not a huge leap to assume that she's an old woman and might need help gathering herbs for gruit, or just transporting the stuff. Maybe peasants from the surrounding villages would need help transporting grain. But I agree, that's a bit of a long-shot.

We don't need to specifically work in the silk industry or even with textiles, we just need to awaken and satisfy the burning greed that lies dormant within us. The silk plan relied on us having samples to show interested buyers, that will have to be put off to a later date.

Finding a merchant would be a good way to learn about the black market in a covert manner, it wouldn't actually be necessary to ask the bartender. We ask a merchant about commerce laws, and we find out what is illegal and therefore desirable. We could just play this like Mount & Blade and ask where the Guild Master is, or if he doesn't answer, just wander around until we find someone with nice clothes.


 No.508952

>>508875

Ah, that makes sense. If the bartender is willing to talk I say this is a good coarse of action.


 No.509152

>>508624

You could try to press the bartender for info. Or just ask around. There has to be someone with a job that needs doing.


 No.509235

>>508816

The bar does seem pretty lively, you decide to ask around. Most of the patrons seem annoyed or disinterested in your inquires, and the others just simply don't have any tasks that need doing. Well, some do have something they're willing to pay for, but you're not gonna do THAT.

This whole adventure is crumbling before your very eyes. You're flat broke, lost in the near endless streets of Silvervale, and have no clue where to go or what to do next. Even if you wanted to return home, you haven't got nearly enough gold to board a boat back; and you don't think you could handle the shame of returning home defeated and humiliated.

You try (and fail) to keep your composure as all these thought flood your mind at once. You can feel your antennae twitching and your wings fluttering out of anxiety. You think that a quick step outside to clear your thought might do you some good, so you make your way to the door.

"Hang on, kid."

You turn, your hand still on the door to see the bartender's eye fall upon you. His glare seems a bit less sharp, maybe even a hint of pity seeping into his expression. He motions for you to come back to the bar table, which you do quickly.

"If you're aching for something to do, I may have a job for ya." You can barely contain your excitement, you finally have something to do! Your wings flutter with anticipation as you wait for your first quest. "It's nothing big, kid. I just want you to pick up the tab from Montley and his buddies. They've been drinking here for a week now, and they still haven't payed off their debt. They know it's due, so they should have it ready when you get there. And if they start getting feisty, just remind them that I personally sent ya, and I'd be VERY upset if anything happened.

You've been listening intently, you'd be writing this down in your journal if you still had it. The bartender tells you the location and sends you on your way, not before telling you that Montley is a pudgy badger with light gray fur and a line of jet black fur running right between his eyes.

You make your way out of the bar and head off towards your objective, a slight bounce in your step now that you have a new purpose in life!


 No.509306

>>509235

Oh wow, I'm fully expecting us to get shoved in a bag and gang-raped. Just try to be diplomatic and cute, I guess. Maybe the threat of how we're just the messenger for the badass bartender will mean that we get shoved in a clean bag instead of a smallpox sack.

>boat

We're on the coast, that's great. Try to take in the city layout as we joyfully skip to our destination. Note the buildings we pass, any tall buildings in the distance, etc.

Just a tip to OP since this is your first time doing a quest: it would have been better if you allowed us to accept or reject the job. I mean, it was the obvious option so it still would have happened, but your role is to set up an environment/situation to give us choices, and our role is to choose. On that note, try to make our possible options more clear. Like with >>508624, just end it with an explicit question, "Will you push the topic, ask other patrons, or leave?" All of your posts should end like that. And also be open to people doing something not on the list.


 No.509318

>>509306

Will do. I just took into consideration what the character would do. I'll try to leave things more open at the end. I wish there was some way to identify myself as the storyteller, so people don't get confused.


 No.509349

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>>509318

Required reading.

http://tgchan.org/wiki/Advice_for_Running_a_Quest

You probably already know a lot of the stuff there, but it has some good advice.


 No.509686

bump


 No.510124

>>509349

I'll check that out!


 No.510428

>>509235

This ought to be interesting…




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