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File: 81d31631f93bd13⋯.jpg (304.76 KB, 1200x1743, 400:581, hail_satan.jpg)

 No.334758

This is the Corruption of Champions mod being developed by OtherCoCAnon and the denizens of /hgg/.

Corruption of Champions is a text-based flash game overhauled with new dungeons, new mechanics, new characters, and a lot of lolis.

The mod is open to content submissions, anons can and are writing new content to be implemented all the time.

Downloads

Latest Version (1.4.5)

https://mega.nz/#F!St0HiaTC!oNQs48SWTDvmDBLHWZuHHA

Use a standalone flash player (projector), this shit is no longer supported by any web browser.

Remember to save to file to prevent save loss.

https://www.adobe.com/support/flashplayer/debug_downloads.html

Information

>Game Related

Source Code: https://gitgud.io/BelshazzarII/CoCAnon_mod

Changelog: https://pastebin.com/CDU8byhd

>Thread Related

Previous thread: >>330906

Thread Archives: https://gitgud.io/Blank/CoCAnon_mod/raw/OPT/Archives

OP Template: https://pastebin.com/raw/q38Ccy3n

>Writing Related

Content Submissions (Chronicles): https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iuDsLw3PxshvL8yYUkOeiJr6DSJ7zpjaeGvumF65l_I

Submission & Misc. Archive: https://drive.google.com/open?id=1LGK4sPuWH69iEZ9ZmX2fnfDRrhj7h4hQ

Writing Guide: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PGysInt0S0VHYvPv0b__4xpHqrfbE-zikQiRonsnUsU

Bounty Board: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZUtah0gtbBQzB5kM7wElYlcNAwU8-QOgNkovO0_7WUI

 No.334759

Notes for Lesbi's Helspawn sleeping:

>If you want me back anytime just let me know, okay?

You might consider a comma after "anytime."

>She looks at you again and you lovingly hug her.

comma after "again"

>any time

You wrote this as one word earlier. Either is fine, but it's probably best to be consistent.

>and see that [helspawn]'s got

I believe "gotten" is the US standard, but I don't know if this is something we want to bother being consistent about.

>to bed before you. [if chastespawn "She's laying on her back, seemingly waiting for you to come to bed

Also the slutspawn variation.

>It doesn't take long at all for her to fall asleep, arm still loosely draped over your body. It's comfortable, at least. And it's not long

>moves her tail to rest in between your legs. It's almost like having a pillow between them.

Why are you trying to make me regret choosing chastespawn, huh?

>You get ready for bed and she

Probably comma after "bed," but you could argue for this one's omission, I suppose.

Very nice stuff.


 No.334778

File: ad02ae494c07321⋯.png (55.96 KB, 326x182, 163:91, Akkogun.png)

>>334758

Put Akko in the fucking game.


 No.334779

>>334778

>implying she's not already


 No.334806

Notes for yuribot's slutspawn sex:

>She's everything you're not–and that only makes you [if (corrupt) want|love] her more.

I'm a bit unsure if just having low libido makes her "everything you're not" (you could even be a salamander). Fuck, I think I just inflicted more conditionals on myself.

>her [helspawn eye color] eyes

They're red by the way, I spent like five minutes trying to track that down with the reading thing. There are more later on.

>You shiver under [Helspawn]'s fiery heat

This feels a bit off to me, but I also feel like I might be wrong to feel that way.

>her thumb teasing your clit] every time you shudder (same thing for the male side).

Wouldn't you be shuddering because she's doing that, not the other way around?

>She always is–your beautiful, smart little girl who knows exactly what her [father] needs. Your daughter grows quiet at the praise

I tend to not like when it's not clear that you actually verbalized that, but you can ignore me if you so wish.

>when she gently pushes you back, her eyes as fiery as her tail when

repetition

>her up against [if (cabin) the cabin wall|your water barrel].

Thank you for the chuckle, but the water barrel will need to be built after the upcoming rework.

>It's only by her mouth on yours that you stay silent

"By" feels off to me here.

>her leg slips between your thighs, and every thrust along the subtle ridges of her scales seems to echo through you, driving your pleasure ever higher.

Wouldn't these thrusts be her motions? If so, they wouldn't be along her own scales, and if not, you might want to clarify that.

>[cock1]

Just [cock] does that.

>[if (low corrupt) No matter what you tell yourself, you want this as much as she does.

I don't know that having low corruption would necessarily make you ambivalent about this.

>Ever since [helspawn] [if (underage on) was a little girl|first matured], you've fantasized about this very moment.]

Is this supposed to be a first time scene? This'd be a bit weird if you just shagged her five minutes ago.

>[if (goo)

You've been forgetting some of the "is"s for things like this and "isnaked."

>Now, hilted within her, truly joined with your daughter in a love that few [father]s have, it's easy to see that she's still your beautiful little girl

Why would it not have been easy to see this before?

>bathing the two of you in a candlelit glow

But it's not a candle.

>[if (balls) [balls]|[cockplural],

Needs a ].

>With every thrust it's there at the front of your mind

What's this "it" supposed to be? The last nouns were "sound [and] slickness." You also might want to consider a comma after "thrust."

>your chest tight and white-hot

I feel like this might be one absolute too far, and I don't know about "white-hot" here.

>She [if (cocks > 1) catches some of your errant cum

Wait, how? She's hugging you.

>ground.] Just

Move the space inside the conditional, as this would be the first line.

>A light kiss to her [if (she's taller) cheek|forehead] and she blushes

comma after the conditional

I'll finish out the other option soon. Thanks for doing this, slutspawn needed the love. By the way, was that Rent-an-Alice thing done? Sorry I haven't gotten to it yet.


 No.334812

>>334806

>They're red by the way,

It depends on who fathered her, unless that was taken out since I started this. Pretty sure nobody actually sees that, but it's there.

>I tend to not like when it's not clear that you actually verbalized that

I feel like a lot of scenes do that, but I'll change it.

>Wouldn't these thrusts be her motions?

I already changed this mess when working on the other scenes.

>Just [cock] does that

Even with multiple? Or does it need another cocks > 1 check

>I feel like this might be one absolute too far, and I don't know about "white-hot" here.

Reading it again, the rhyme makes it sound dumb anyway.

> By the way, was that Rent-an-Alice thing done?

It should be.


 No.334813

Did the heltaur content ever get released?


 No.334814

>>334812

>It depends on who fathered her, unless that was taken out since I started this. Pretty sure nobody actually sees that, but it's there.

I found that within two seconds of looking this time, so I don't know how I missed it the first.

>Even with multiple? Or does it need another cocks > 1 check

Yes, [cock] always returns a description for your first cock. [cock 1] actually also works (and [cock 2], etc.), but I don't know why you'd ever do that. That hasn't stopped it from being in the game seven times, though.


 No.334828

>>334758

Satan has not showed up lately i hope he is alright. And that he is having a smooth time writing the lore and her too.


 No.334829

>>334813

You ask this every thread, are you trying to make a new ironic meme?


 No.334830

First for pantyjobs are most unloved kink


 No.334832

>>334830

Why would you want to wank to a bit of soiled fabric? Are you a watersports fetishist in denial?


 No.334841

File: ae461e11cee9193⋯.jpg (40.76 KB, 342x500, 171:250, 51ATHoV76vL.jpg)

>>334778

Do this please!

So i can behead her with my scythe


 No.334851

>>334841

Speaking of scythes

Scythe before late game when?


 No.334857

>>334832

pretty much


 No.334889

>>334851

This so much please


 No.334901

>>334851

I doubt it is going to be really hard to find a non-anime scythe to repurpose as weapon so you could in theory find one ib a lot of places


 No.334905

>>334832

Project harder.


 No.334917

How do I charviewer


 No.334918

>>334851

>>334901

I'm surprised there isn't a completely normal scythe you can find from running around the farm.


 No.334924

>>334918

There is one written, even with acquisition text and quest required to get into mod

Except it to get looked at somewhere in next six months


 No.334925

I remember months back there was talk of eldritch horror lolis, like made out of pure darkness girls and stuff. Did anything come of that? I was looking for the pictures for inspiration for something else, but can't find them in the archives.


 No.334927

>>334924

I looked over it briefly, and the writing isn't too great. Whitney's dialogue is a problem in particular, it reads nothing like her. The quest is kinda stupid too.

>>334917

It's broken and being disabled next patch.

>>334925

The anon writing that disappeared.


 No.334935

>>334927

>The anon writing that disappeared.

Bummer. Do you remember what thread it was?


 No.334951

Alright, finishing up the slutspawn sex:

>Your little girl deserves it all, starting with your lips on her neck, feeling every vibration of her needy whimpers when you slide your [cockplural] away.

That "feeling" is a dangling participle, and the "starting" might be, depending on how you meant it.

>Slipping ever lower, pausing ever-so-slightly when her sounds shift to a groan as you suckle on her favorite spot.

I'll note that this fragment doesn't work well at present, but probably will when you fix the previous sentence.

>fingertips brushing over smooth scales to defined muscles to the sweet swell of your daughter's breasts

I don't know if "over […] to" works in the same way "from" would.

>Then lower,

The last sentence didn't mention you moving your hand or anything, so I don't think this level of ellipsis is recommended.

>marveling in your daughter's flavor.

I think you meant "reveling in" or "marveling at."

>Teasing her folds, gently parting them with your tongue–and

Not a fan of this fragment.

>Her body begging you to fill her up with seed that will never come,

You're doing a lot of these kinds of fragments in this section, and a lot of them seem awkward.

>as you work her through her orgasm

A bit of an odd way to establish that she's currently orgasming.

>while your own [cockplural] drips

Could you slap some brackets around "drips" so that I remember when the time comes?

>[say: You're the best, [Dad].]

I might recommend adding a tag or moving this to the next paragraph.

>[if (cabin) wall|barrel]

Another barrel.

>[cock2]

Space in between

>her muscle yielding to your length as you fill both her holes.

"muscles"?

>At your hesitation she pushes back

I'd highly recommend a comma after "hesitation."

>fully connected to your daughter in a way that others can only envy, the first thrust

That "connected" is dangling.

>. Showing just how much she needs you

Another fragment, and this one I'd recommend just attaching to the previous sentence.

>grips you tighter as she cries out, body trembling as her walls clench around you, the warm, wet grip

repetition

>[if (balls) balls|[cockplural]

]

>thrust into her depths

You had "with each thrust as you sink yourself into her depths" last paragraph.

>[say: Yes!]

I'd recommend giving this a tag or moving it out of this paragraph.

There's a chance I'm wrong about this fragment thing, but I'd really recommend looking over them.


 No.334966

So, how does one get rid of the obsidian tentacles? All I know is 'something very slippery'. I've tried a few items and people, haven't figured out anything else yet.


 No.334971

>>334966

Wet cloth


 No.334999

>>334563

Cowgirl-style and counter testing makes for a happy bird. Life is good, and the Shove/Play fork is appreciated.

As a foreword, there were a handful of places where I, personally, would have swapped word order or been less verbose, but that's a style choice, not a grammar issue. As such, I tried to keep my editorializing relevant and minimal. Write as you want to write.

Capitalization at 135:

>She [if default: {Slips off

<slips

At 147:

>fit you inside entirety

<entirely

>around you, is still

Pretty sure this comma is unnecessary

At 150:

>down on you, makes you shudder

Also pretty sure this comma is unnecessary

>Her [Snug preg: {swollen tummy and milk}] breasts

>milk breasts

Do you mean 'milk-laden' or something like?

At 153:

>gives into pleasure

I believe 'in to' is the proper form in this context; the pc's "giving in", rather than "going to", pleasure.

>your shaft finally gives into pleasure

An interesting way of putting it, implying the pc's shaft is giving in rather than the champion. Not sure if this is intended.

>The two of you both

A bit redundant, 'two' and 'both' together. A couple suggestions:

<The two of you

<Both of you

At 159:

>slipping you past dripping entrance

past her dripping entrance?

>"If you'll beg me; tell me something like

; → ,

At 162:

>milk leaking

Believe that should be hyphenated, 'milk-leaking'

At 165:

>A pleased moan escapes her while she grinds you against her slick inner walls that happily wrap around you in a welcoming manner.

Something about this sentence nags at me. It's grammatically correct as near as I can tell, but it seems to run on. I believe the term is "run-off-at-the-mouth". It's not an eggregious example of that, no need to change it, just thought you should know it gave that impression.

>Feeling your digits press into it, causes your member to happily pulse and Snuggles lewdly grins.

The comma is unnecessary where it is, but it would be appropriate after pulse.

<Feeling your digits press into it causes your member to happily pulse, and Snuggles lewdly grins.

At 168:

>Snuggles lick her lips clearly excited for you soon filling her.

Lick should be plural, there should be a comma after lips, and the 'you soon be filling' seems to be missing something, a "to be"? How does this read to you?

<Snuggles licks her lips, clearly excited for you to soon be filling her.

>her face his brightly flush as

Something went awry, but I think I know what you meant. A couple suggestions:

<her face has a bright flush as

<her face flushes brightly as

At 170:

>She then lies next to you a contented sigh, devotedly snuggling up to you.

'a contented sigh' seems out of place, but it would make a good beginning to the next sentence.

<She then lies next to you, devotedly snuggling up to you.

<With a contented sigh, "I felt really good

>I felt really good, it was fun taking the lead

, → ;

At 176:

>gentle yet, firm tone

Misplaced comma. A couple suggestions depending on intended tone:

<gentle yet firm tone

<gentle, yet firm, tone

>moving onto the just

In this context: onto → on to (onward/towards as opposed to 'on top of')

At 178:

>The girl's quim quivers at your touch, letting out delighted sighs

Snuggles' quim is … sighing? O.o insertthisismyfetishjokehere

At 181:

>her snug folds

Silly Mode - pun opportunity here

>she lets out lewd whimpers, while gripping

Capitalization on 'she', and the comma is unnecessary

>member unable

Seems to be missing a word

<member being unable

At 187:

>Snuggles's

>trembles and you

<trembles, and you

>you let groan as

Either 'let' is unnecessary or something is missing. A couple suggestions:

<you groan as

<you let out a groan as


 No.335012

>>334999

>the Shove/Play fork is appreciated.

Glad you liked it, and thank you proof reading her.

>An interesting way of putting it, implying the pc's shaft is giving in rather than the champion. Not sure if this is intended.

Changed it to 'that you finally give in to pleasure.'

>past her dripping entrance?

would 'in to' work better than 'past'?

>Something about this sentence nags at me.

Are you sure I shouldn't split it up? It can probably be broken into two separate sentences.

>How does this read to you?

I believe that's better for sure.

>Snuggles' quim is … sighing? O.o insertthisismyfetishjokehere

While probably disappointing to those that want sentient vaginas, I changed it to 'The girl's quim quivers at your touch, causing her to let out delighted sighs' for now at least.

>Silly Mode - pun opportunity here

Should I put [if silly: {snug} else: {welcoming}] there?

On the bright side, there's only a few more sex scenes to go until i get to her kids. finished her first time anal today so that leaves second+ time and spanking her and maybe a centaur pc fucking her from behind variant for the counter scene.


 No.335017

>>334924

>with acquisition text and quest required to get into mod

Why does it need a quest? Can't the player just stumble onto an old scythe lying around?


 No.335021

>>335012

>Should I put [if silly: {snug} else: {welcoming}] there?

No, you should put "[if (silly) snug|welcoming]" so that it actually works.


 No.335026

>>335012

>Glad you liked it, and thank you proof reading her.

No problem. Glad to help as time permits.

>would 'in to' work better than 'past'?

Either would work as long as 'her' is added for clarification. If you opt for 'in to', the proper form, in this context, is 'into'. Ah, the joys of language.

<You let out a soft groan, enjoying the sensation of Snuggles just barely slipping you {past/into} her dripping entrance.

>Are you sure I shouldn't split it up? It can probably be broken into two separate sentences.

You could split it, though I think it will be fine with some restructuring. How does this sound to you?

<A pleased moan escapes her while she grinds against you, her slick inner walls wrapping around you in a happy, welcoming manner.

>Should I put [if silly: {snug} else: {welcoming}] there?

I like it. It avoids an unintended pun in normal mode, and it's a good pun (if such a blasphemous thing actually exists) for those so inclined.

Looking forward to reading what else you come up with, including the kids when they come around. Which reminds me: any thoughts on how Snuggles would feel about champions with ovipositors laying eggs in her, fertilized or otherwise? It's one way an otherwise female champion and Snuggles could have kids.


 No.335028

>>334999

>Snuggles' quim is … sighing? O.o insertthisismyfetishjokehere

I don't know where you come from, but you should stop being such a colossal faggot.


 No.335039

Could someone tell me the flag for enabling Akky? My game has him named as Akbal in the pet menu and you can't gift him anything aside from fish.


 No.335040

>>335039

If you have him in the pet menu, he's enabled, and his name has nothing to do with any of his scenes.


 No.335042

File: 5a108365cf1a5a6⋯.png (390 KB, 666x500, 333:250, Chronicles.png)

Content Submissions (Chronicles):

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iuDsLw3PxshvL8yYUkOeiJr6DSJ7zpjaeGvumF65l_I (UPDATED)

———————————————

>>334935

Read the OP you moron, there is a link marked as a submission archive for a reason there.


 No.335043

>>335040

Pet menu? What the hell did I miss?


 No.335046

>>335043

You unlock it after obtaining the terrastial fire magic.


 No.335055

Who are all the females that can join you back at camp? I only know of Amily, Izma, and Marble.


 No.335067

>>335055

Isabella: a (possibly Dutch) cowgirl, Helia: a shameless slut, Kiha; a tsundere dragon-girl, Ember; a customizable tsundere dragon girl/boy, Sophie; a Harpy MILF, Phylla; an ant princess you save in the desert who just wants to make babies for you, Arian; an old lizard apothecary who develops such a crush on you while you help heal him he'll turn himself into a woman, Shouldra; a kinky ghost, Valeria; a goo girl living in a suit of armor, and a slave girl with tits so big and milky you can take communal baths in it.


 No.335068

>>335067

Thank you


 No.335070

>like lewd mommies

>playing as one

>can't fuck a lot of things, including other lewd mommies

>could grow a dick

>but dicks are gross I don't want one on my lewd mommy and I hate futa

>could play as male

>but then 70% of the content becomes gay

THE DUALITY OF MAN

I think the obvious solution here would be giving me some kind of dick option that's not… a… dick… like I don't know a shapeshifting tail that can morph into a dick??

If anyone here played Erotic Eater they'll know what I mean.

And please don't make me look like an idiot by saying something like this is in already.


 No.335089

File: ac22a5cb37572f7⋯.jpg (28.73 KB, 480x740, 24:37, ged_gros.jpg)

>>335070

The closest I can think of is either Valeria, an ovipositor (probably your best bet) or just a dildy. Also, have you ever considered that chix w/ dix is just gay, in any form it takes?


 No.335096

Is this mod ever going to add more followers who can move in with you at camp?


 No.335110

>>335070

>want to play as a female without a dick

>want to have sex with other females without dicks

>there's not enough of this, how can this be fixed?

>taildicks are the obvious solution

Do you have a brain tumor by chance? Getting 30 new lesbian scenes is more likely than getting one "tail transformed into a dick" scene.


 No.335111

>>335110

Just add a 'tail-dick' variable, done


 No.335113

>>335017

You need to have either at least 10k words or a quest associated with an item if you want it to get into the game


 No.335115

>>335113

No you just need to have at least a double-digit IQ and an idea that makes sense. The magic wand anon (you?) was sketchy on both counts.


 No.335117

>>335021

I thought it was fine to not write the coding bits.

>>335026

>You could split it, though I think it will be fine with some restructuring. How does this sound to you?

Sounds good to me.

>how Snuggles would feel about champions with ovipositors laying eggs in her

How do the ovipositors work exactly, do the eggs take the form of whatever the champion turned into? That'd be either a drider or a bee-girl, i think. I don't think she'd be against having the PCs kids, but I also feel like having spider/bee monsters crawl out of you would be a horrific sight, so she'd probably try it once then never again.

Are those even the pc's children since you can't fully become what you change into?

>>335070

>think the obvious solution here would be giving me some kind of dick option that's not… a… dick…

Would more scenes using sex toys be a solution? Guess there is tamani's double ended dildo at least. Maybe the demonic strap-on that vapula gives you.

>>335096

Satan is writing an "angel" character you can take home.

>>335113

That seems like a lot to write for just one off generic items.


 No.335118

>>335067

>TFW wearing valeria is a bad idea because of terrible stats

>No upgrade quest

Fuck savin desu


 No.335119

>>335117

>Satan is writing an "angel" character you can take home.

Complete with transformations?


 No.335120

I'd like to clarify something: which build is the mod made on?

The 'official wiki' page of CoC states the latest CoC build is 1.4.13 (https://wiki.smutosaur.us/CoC/Patchlist#1.4.13:), but the .swf download from Fenoxo's site states 1.0.2

I assume the build number of the mod has nothing to do with the vanilla build, but will all content as specified on the aforementioned wiki page be included?


 No.335121

>>335120

Those are revamp builds, unrelated to us at this point.


 No.335124

>>335121

Damn, that's what I was afraid of. So at which point did /hgg/ mod 'offshoot' compared to revamp?


 No.335125

>>335117

>I thought it was fine to not write the coding bits.

But that's a parser, not a coding bit. Changing from the way you do it to this not only makes it easier to implement, it's less characters to type. If the syntax wasn't clear from the last example, it's [if (condition) <thing if true>|<thing if false>]. The vertical bar and <thing if false> are optional.

>>335121

Not entirely true; we still might take certain things from Revamp. For instance, I think the next update is adding spar intensity to a few NPCs, and it should be fine to bring that over.

>>335124

There's no specific point. We initially included most Revamp content (barring a few things like their upgrade system) but more recently have been taking about parts of it that are awful (e.g., the pointless mimics and the dick splinter dryads).


 No.335130

How do you activate fera? I've been looking in the deepwoods forever and she doesn't show up. I ate a pumpkin seed and beaten akbal a million times. Is there a requirement im missing?


 No.335131

>>335119

I don't know, maybe? I'm not exactly interested in it, so you should check the content submissions if you're curious how it's going.

>>335125

Ah I see, it is less to type at least and I'll try to use it from now on if it makes it easier to implement.


 No.335138

>>335125

>Not entirely true; we still might take certain things from Revamp.

We pick and choose specific things when we get around to it, so we get some of their changes but the actual builds and version numbers are unrelated.


 No.335147

I know this is really late, but it just finally hit me. The obvious answer for everyone who wanted an Alice follower that should still please everyone who didn't want more demon followers.

An Alice-Morph. There could totally be another champion that some demon higher up on the corporate ladder decided to transform and keep as a pet for shits and giggles.


 No.335151

>>335147

That's extremely retarded. And the issue was not that people didn't want demon followers (I think maybe one person complained about that), the issue is people either not understanding the lore or drafting up huge projects that they'll never complete.


 No.335152

>>335147

Just take an alice and hang her on the wall


 No.335175

>>335130

> I ate a pumpkin seed

AFAIK you need to eat around 5. You'll know it's enough when you get a vision of a pumpkin or something.


 No.335177

>we never got non-tsundere Ember

F U C K I JUST WANT A SHY DRAGON LOLI


 No.335178

>>334927

Any reason the charviewer is broken and is getting disabled instead of fixed? I remember it working fine a few versions ago.


 No.335179

>>335178

It used to work (way more than a few versions ago), but it never "worked fine", it was always a cheap, unfinished experiment with hastily thrown-together proof-of-concept art.


 No.335185

>>335178

It was never worked on by anyone from this mod (to the best of my knowledge), just something we ported over from elsewhere. If someone there manages to make something decent, we can re-enable it, but I wouldn't hold out too much hope for that happening (or for someone from here taking enough of an interest to fix it).


 No.335190

>>335185

>>335179

Ah that's too bad, I thought it was pretty neat. Still, I can understand it being disabled if it was deemed shit and not worth the maintenance. Thanks for the insight.


 No.335192

>>335175

any idea what enemies drop pumpkin seeds? I honestly don't even remember how I got the first one.


 No.335193

>>335190

If we had a dedicated artist to create bodies and parts that actually look good and cover the huge variety of possibilities (including things we add in the future), it would definitely be worth maintaining. But right now it's very limited and low quality.


 No.335197

>>335067

>Ember; a customizable tsundere dragon girl/boy

>customizable


 No.335198

>>335197

What do you mean? While the personality part never got written, there are three genders and many different body features to choose from.


 No.335208

>>335193

Maybe the sprite guy could help on that but that might be too much work for him and character sprites are more of a priority


 No.335210

>>335192

The alraune in the Deepwods


 No.335211

>>335192

tentacle beasts drop them rather commonly.


 No.335213

>>334832

peefag here, pantsu are disgusting. If I have a loli pissing for me she's pissing right down my face for maximum freshness. Pantsu fags would let that shit sit in a jar and go stale


 No.335222

>>335213

>>335221

FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT


 No.335223

>The Drake’s Heart flower you gifted her is delicately placed on a small pile of earth, next to where he sleeps.

Hmmmmm


 No.335224

>>335223

Fixed, you faggot.*


 No.335226

File: 6a28cbe68b702c4⋯.png (80.15 KB, 686x689, 686:689, 1529169873537.png)

>>335224

It's the only way to have some /ss/


 No.335227

>>335226

>liking shota

>pairing shota with hags


 No.335234

Is there anywhere I can read about how shit works or will I have to be in here constantly asking questions if I want to do shit that I don't already know about?


 No.335237

Fucking around with kid A, your progression is get a BJ, stick it in, go back to getting BJs. The flag kFLAGS.ANEMONE_KID increments to three and the code doesn't handle it properly.

Also I can't seem to get the scene where kid A fucks your tigersharks, but for that one I don't know what the problem is.


 No.335238

>>335236

I'm specifically asking for resources to use so I don't end up a needy newfag you cocksucker do you faggots have a wiki/something I can read from or not


 No.335239

>>335238

If you can't read an OP, why would you be able to read a wiki?


 No.335242

>>335239

>changelog isn't detailed enough

>chronicles of coc mod doc doesn't have nephila in it yet

>other two documents are for people wanting to contribute content

not helpful

>>335240

If I wanted to be spoonfed I'd have just asked what I want to know off the bat. Is there anywhere I can learn what does what in the game other than playing through it myself or asking you unhelpful faggots how everything works?


 No.335244

File: d420ec9f9ce6ae4⋯.jpg (566.04 KB, 1183x1123, 1183:1123, feb5b52993.jpg)

Got Snuggles' other anal scene done. Would finish the last two scenes tonight but I kind of want to play some vidya By Sunday all her sex scenes will be done, then its camp events, then working on Smiles and generic crow kids.

https://pastebin.com/ydbsx9Ma


 No.335245

>>335242

>chronicles of coc mod doc doesn't have nephila in it yet

You're really not demonstrating your reading comprehension here. The in game credits (shocking that you didn't think of looking at the game) are the most complete content list.


 No.335248

Why must Hummanus make one taller? I don't want to do keep doing cocktail of imp stuff and hummanus just to get shorter.


 No.335253

>>335245

the nephila file in the google drive does not say how to get rid of nephila parasites


 No.335254


 No.335261

>>335248

literally restores you to the default/average human including height.


 No.335262

>>335248

You really shouldn't need that much hummanus to get rid of goblin/imp traits. Little bit of savescumming should keep you small.


 No.335263

>>335262

Speaking of being small, Hellmouth TF so I myself can be a pudgy pale fucksack?


 No.335266

>>335261

>default human height

That would explain some things. Changed it during creation to be smaller.


 No.335272

>>335263

What would the item be? Of course, you can also mostly achieve the same thing with goblin ale, eggs, and ectoplasm(ashen-grey skin).


 No.335279

>>335272

you don't get the fuck huge mouth though


 No.335282

>>335279

shark teeth TF


 No.335289

>>335282

or the giganto ears or the titular throat portal.


 No.335290

>>335272

iunno, fukken… bottle of hell-drool.


 No.335292

>>335290

Just shove your hand inside the portal and scoop the portal stuff bro


 No.335293

>>335289

You're not getting a throat portal TF.


 No.335294

File: 01d82854e6eebcc⋯.png (62.63 KB, 166x170, 83:85, annoyed mp5.png)

>>335293

>No throat portal TF

>No fairy TF (proper minigirl)


 No.335295

>>335289

Enormously long elf ears is my kink

>titular throat portal

Hellfire perk, done.


 No.335296

I want to take a fairy from the deepwoods, back to camp with.


 No.335297

>>335296

You'd need an empty bottle, I don't think we have any of those. A bug-catching net might also be required.


 No.335298

>>335297

>In a bottle

Those inspire self-sacrificial thoughts on faeries it doesn't sound wise at all


 No.335300

>>335297

>>335298

I want to capture one in a bottle and hold it over a flame as she begins to panic until the glass is burning her skin, then take her away from the fire and smash the bottle against a tree so she'll be covered in cuts and burns

then take her back to camp


 No.335301

>>335300

faeries are not for bulli


 No.335303

>>335301

feed her liddellium, then she'll be for bulli


 No.335307

>>335303

But what if i drink liddelium will i be for bulli then?


 No.335308

>>335304

That reminds me how is that music box that turns you into a teen going?


 No.335309

>>335304

Listening to Pretty Little Psycho nightcore, you cannot stop this any longer. I don't have to listen to you.

>>335307

Pathetic overweight neets that play hours of a smutty text adventure where they collect waifus all deserve the bulli, no liddellium needed. Go take a shower you disgusting degenerate


 No.335311

>>335309

Jokes on you i just showered 10 minutes ago


 No.335317

File: a700f3504cd7fda⋯.mp4 (6.35 MB, 900x506, 450:253, Rejection.mp4)

>>335312

I've always gotten off on insulting guys that disgust me, and I was here before Chronicler


 No.335325

>>335317

What did i do to you to get your disgust?


 No.335331

>>335325

Existed. My default stance on people around here is that they're all pathetic and gross. There's just some sense I have about you, that you're a worthless trash human being that nobody loves. I'd bet you're ugly too, for what little that even matters when you've got a personality as repulsive as yours. It's not even that you necessarily do terribly gross and unclean things, you're just not a person that is likable. When you talk, it's not that interesting, and you suck at sharing your interests with anybody outside the small bubble of troglodytes you associate with online. The greatest accomplishment you can claim is that you at least pay for yourself, if even that.

Perhaps I'm off on a few details, I don't care, but I feel confident I'm hitting a good number of marks. Go ahead and try to argue against it if you'd like. Even if you aren't lying in your defense, it'd still be pathetic to feel like you would have to justify yourself anon-to-anon on a porn board.


 No.335337

>>335325

Ignore him, he's just enjoying going maximum edge

>>335331

Lol


 No.335338

>>335331

>Go to the gym to improve my body

>Nice enough dude (in my opinion at least) with close circles of friends that i share a good chunk of laughs with

>Pretty enough to not be considered ugly and maybeee a bit above average looks

>My parents like me

I would consider myself at least decent on what person worth is concerned, you are right about sucking about sharing my interests Anhedonia is a bitch. I do try to be better though.


 No.335339

>>335331

Glad you're back, but could you get back to justifying my OP choice?


 No.335349

I want to petition for Hellmouth to be the fellatrix camp lover. Isabelle has it all, but the size prerequisite for morning blowjob to take effect makes me sad. A hellmouth seems like the creature to not care for such things.


 No.335353

>>335238

someone already linked the smutosaur site but the revamp wiki will cover some more stuff since this mod is kind of built over that mod


 No.335377

>>335244

I'm sure folks would appreciate more waifus having anal sex and spanking options. Good to get those bases covered early.

At 200:

>You suppose this is as much as she can safely take you.

As is, 'you' is hanging. The simplest correction is to remove it, but there are a few other ways to make it grammatically correct:

<You suppose this is as deep as she can safely take you.

<You suppose this is as much as she can safely take.

<You suppose this is as much as she can safely take of you.

<You suppose this is as much of you as she can safely take.

At 202:

>//PC dick not not 'big';

Redundant 'not', strike for coder clarity.

At 203:

>hardest to futily expel

fultily → futilely

At 206:

>you give you her

<you give her

>another whack, causes

Unnecessary comma

At 208:

>so hard you that leave

Transposed words: you/that

<so hard that you leave

>tighter, forces

Unnecessary comma

At 210:

>rectum seem milk you hungrily

Did you mean 'seems to milk'?

At 220:

>flip her onto her back to your gaze upon her fine derriere.

'to' seems out of place and in need of punctuation. My suggestion:

<flip her onto her back, your gaze upon her fine derriere.

>consent albeit, hesitantly.

Misplaced comma

<consent, albeit hesitantly.

>"Just be gentle, [Player]…" she pleas

I believe that's the wrong form of 'plea'. Pleas is a plural noun while pleads is a 3rd person verb

<"Just be gentle, [Player]…" she pleads

At 231:

>surrender to lust, and fire

Unnecessary comma

>pull free your flaccid shaft free from

One of these 'free' are redundant; either can be deleted for the same effect.

>glue-like cum

I've never heard it referred to in that way …

At 233:

>go limp, and keeps

Unnecessary comma

At 235:

>and take some time to rest up rather.

'rather' is out of place. It can be removed or replaced depending on the effect you want. A few alternatives:

<and take some time to rest up.

<and take some time to rest up instead.

<and take time to rest up instead.

A general thought: you may want to add a variant for knots on the 'not big' branches, for consistency with earlier sex scenes.


 No.335387

Holy balls, why is it SO hard to find an Alice? Is the Lidellium content even in the game anymore?


 No.335390

>>334759

You don't need a comma before every 'and', you brainlet.

Finish highschool English at least..


 No.335404

File: dfc7780d287ae12⋯.jpg (110.42 KB, 600x600, 1:1, MV5BYmJmYmNmMzMtZDI2Yy00Zj….jpg)

>>335387

>why is it SO hard to find an Alice?

Just explore the deep forest you find them,i usually find them quite often and 100% kill them anyway either with my scythe or gun.

I'm quite surprised that people find them rare though,either i'm very lucky or these Alices are to dump to live wanting to encounter my MC


 No.335406

>>335387

>TFW every time in encounter an alice i can't help but to just let her do her thing


 No.335408

>>335404

I basically never encounter them to the point where I just let them do their thing most of the time and still shave off that corruption before I can encounter a new one.


 No.335420

How can the combat system be better re-ordered to support more playstyles? I still feel like everything constantly leans towards the same playstyles, the distance mechanic switches it up a bit but maybe not enough.

Would an abstract grid for keeping track of distance be interesting? It seems to me that actually being able to fight with other beings on your side, more importantly inbetween you and the enemy, would be something to really strive towards. It would give good reason to birthing out creatures if you could keep them around for battle purposes.

Leadership type skills could sprout from this too. Pure/Corrupt variants.


 No.335422

>>335420

Hate it. Sounds like an absolutely shit idea and I reject it with every fiber of my being.


 No.335428

>>335420

I didn't signed up to play RTS or slowly unperson all my daughters and companions like in free cities


 No.335429

>>335428

>slowly unperson all my daughters and companions

oh, I'm suggesting keeping it as a separate category of NPC completely. So they wouldn't be regular companions, maybe having to construct some sort of structure in your encampment to house them (but more importantly manage them, keep everything related to this segregated away in its own menu system)

>I didn't signed up to play RTS

Sure but the idea here is varying playstyles, no need to drop the original battle scenario. What I mean by an abstract grid is that this is just how the game tracks it vaguely in the background but you're still presented with relatively the same battle screen.

I'd just love to play as a cleric who is defenseless once her knights have fallen or a corrupted succubi using lust to control a triage of imps as her personal meatshields while she sits back and enjoys the show.


 No.335430

>>335429

>>Reddit spacing

No wonder your idea is absolute shit


 No.335431

File: 8979115b499be62⋯.jpg (138.57 KB, 850x1371, 850:1371, 08b0ec93f518609.jpg)

>>335377

>I'm sure folks would appreciate more waifus having anal sex and spanking options.

Anal seems pretty basic to have, after all, it's natural contraception. I don't know too many characters that have spanking content off the top of me head and thanks for editing her again.

>As is, 'you' is hanging. The simplest correction is to remove it, but there are a few other ways to make it grammatically correct

Went with: 'You suppose this is as much of you as she can safely take.'

>I've never heard it referred to in that way…

Really? I've read a good amount of doujin where it was referred to as 'glue-like'. I could change it to something else though, one of these: 'extra thicc/thick/potent' should work.

>A general thought: you may want to add a variant for knots on the 'not big' branches, for consistency with earlier sex scenes.

I'll add it to both anals really quick before starting the next scene, though my reasoning for knot doing so was that it seemed unsafe to do that to a girl's butthole. At the very least I should make a short line that mentions the pc having a knot.

>>335429

While the game is shit, it sounds like CoC2 has what you want. You can have companions who will fuck the monsters if you win or get fucked with you if you lose.


 No.335432

>>335431

>You can have companions who will fuck the monsters if you win or get fucked with you if you lose.

This is something I'd actually have a bit of a problem with, I feel like there's something here that mirrors the problem of doing sprite-porn or 2d CG porn in general, in that if you make one small addition you suddenly have to make a whole host of changes to a lot of other stuff, like adding an outfit for a girl in a 2d game and suddenly you have to add that outfit to a billion scenes.


 No.335435

>>335432

I'd rather not have any companion characters in coc.

The idea of having Orcy the swole Orc or Mino Tom beat me somehow then take my innocent cleric companion against her just makes me sad. The obvious solution is to not lose, but on a first time playthrough you won't know how.

But in terms of combat being changed in CoC, maybe adding a system like fallout's vats: allow the pc to target specific limbs at the cost of fatigue and let monsters do the same too to the pc. Crippling a leg could lower spd and affects like dodging; arms being damaged lowers atk and acc. Could make the melee combat more engaging to strategically disable an enemies limbs to disable certain attacks. crush a mino's balls to stop them from shooting cum at you?


 No.335441

>>335435

>But in terms of combat being changed in CoC, maybe adding a system like fallout's vats

Sounds like you're more describing Dwarf Fortresses adventurer mode combat there. Tactical combat like that is fine but you run the risk of bloat and would need (like Dorf Fort has) the ability to just get your character to twack at will against the enemy, especially when you completely outpower them.

>The idea of having Orcy the swole Orc or Mino Tom beat me somehow then take my innocent cleric companion against her just makes me sad. The obvious solution is to not lose, but on a first time playthrough you won't know how.

Sure but I was veering more towards you being the innocent cleric, my point is that adding companions as battle-companions would be just too much bloat in terms of sex scenes and what I'm really looking for is just a bit of a change to combat allowing my character to take a more backseat role over generic minions who can meatshield for me, all for roleplay purposes really. And the possibility of being able to grind up basic equipment for them, birth some new more/powerful minions or recruit more powerful ones.

Incubus characters being able to dick down Valkyries and corrupt them enough to serve as meatshield minions?


 No.335448

>>335420

I think(in terms of gameplay and practicality) it's better to tie the things the PC can expel out of her vagina into another mechanic instead of tying it so strongly to combat.

And some people already hate the distance mechanic, so I'm very hesitant to add any more dimensions of complexity.

I think it would make more sense to have one of these asscreed-like 'send people on missions' systems where your(hopefully adult) sons/daughters would raid some demon camp or something and then return with some loot.

>>335441

I think Koraeli has more hopes for a party system than I do, but it's been a while since I checked up on that. The main problem is that a lot of combat logic is hard coded to be against the player(monsters don't attack other creatures, monsters attack the player) and all attack descriptions are based on that too.


 No.335449

>>335448

>The main problem is that a lot of combat logic is hard coded to be against the player(monsters don't attack other creatures, monsters attack the player) and all attack descriptions are based on that too.

doesn't seem to be the case now that there's checks in place for distance, though.

>I think it would make more sense to have one of these asscreed-like 'send people on missions' systems where your(hopefully adult) sons/daughters would raid some demon camp or something and then return with some loot.

Seems a bit too abstract though, doesn't it? I mean you could make a frustrated logical connection there and wonder why you couldn't take some of your dutiful sons/daughters along with you for bodyguard duty instead of always rolling RNG dice for loot with a timer.

The reason I'd tie it to what you can birth is because it gives a new dimension to that, although I suppose if you didn't want to keep your birth or lacked the corruption/power to bind them to you, you wouldn't have to deal with them suddenly following you about?


 No.335451

>>335449

>doesn't seem to be the case now that there's checks in place for distance, though.

distance just limits what a monster can do, they always attack the player still. It's only a logical change(that took quite a lot of fucking effort to do, by the way). The changes required to allow monsters to attack something else would need to be made both in text and in logic.


 No.335453

NPC allies in fights is something I'd like to do, but it's a very low priority. Even if it does happen, I don't think it would be a general party system where you can take any follower with you everywhere; that would require rewriting hundreds of scenes, because everything is written as if you're alone.

Generic minions that can be ignored in scenes could work though (crafted golems, undead raised through necromancy, mobile plants controlled with druidic magic, etc.), and fighting alongside your companions in specific scenarios that are written for them.


 No.335467

>>335390

You generally need commas before conjunctions that separate independent clauses. These can sometimes be omitted under certain conditions, which I even mention in the post, but I'm not sure you can actually read, so replying at all is probably a mistake.


 No.335476

>>335448

Distance is the only thing that can keep my loli safe in early game why people hate it don't they use spears?


 No.335478

>>335420

Just have 3 states of position instead of two. Short range gives you higher physical damage at the cost of barely no, mid range is neutral and long range gives immunity to physical attacks as currently is.


 No.335480

>>335478

barely no what


 No.335481

>>335480

The cost of no, but just barely.


 No.335484

>>335481

how much is a no worth?


 No.335494

>>335467

>The first two changes suggested literally are not even independent clauses

Ok buddy, retard


 No.335496

>>335494

The second one is, you drooling idiot, and the first one doesn't have an "and," which was your complaint (not to mention the fact that it's clearly labelled as a recommendation, not a required one). I understand not knowing or caring about comma rules, but why are you so upset over something you clearly don't understand?


 No.335498

how many bestiality scenes are in the game? i know the horse ones, the fox/loli one, and i think i remember some wolf scene in the snowy place. what else is there?


 No.335500

>>335498

Anything with Akbal or hellhounds, a couple scenes with the Erlking's hounds.


 No.335507

File: 4271ac8e6721fd7⋯.jpg (579.27 KB, 1003x1060, 1003:1060, Delicious_Moth.jpg)

Mofff

https://pastebin.com/zjpCzESq

Okay, the first part of the fem version of the moth oyakodon is done. The continue option will be written shortly as soon as I get some sleeping Marielle lewds.


 No.335515

File: cd6f67ae0121104⋯.png (138.94 KB, 614x614, 1:1, a4490b418900e5c8448532ed8.png)

Alright, so I managed to finish centaur PCs fucking her from behind if they built her store as an alt version of counter testing, her spanking scene, and added a line about the pc having a knot in both her anal scenes. In regards to centaurs, using something like 'front [legs]' should be fine, right? in context, pc puts their front legs onto the counter.

With this her sex scenes are sort of done until i get to her kids. I might do her store doc next since that should be short and easy. Give her some cheeky unique items to sell if her shop is improved and some shitty rusted/dull weapons too for when her shop is at its lowest point.

https://pastebin.com/ydbsx9Ma


 No.335516

>>335515

>Snuggles will never offer her panties to you, before rubbing them on your face/cock and teasing you to orgasm

Why even live

>>335507

I forget, does Marielle model underwear for us yet?


 No.335517

>>335515

>In regards to centaurs, using something like 'front [legs]' should be fine, right?

What are you trying to achieve with that? Whatever it is it's wrong, because [legs] returns "four legs" for a centaur.

What do you want [legs] to return if not "legs"? It's not like you can be a gootaur putting your front goo on the counter, or a nagataur putting your front tails on the counter. I can't think of any reason to use the parser here at all when the scene already requires being a centaur.


 No.335528

File: 8d3f6def9e8a0fa⋯.jpg (67.96 KB, 746x720, 373:360, 46232585_264376924226672_1….jpg)

>>335516

>Snuggles will never offer her panties to you, before rubbing them on your face/cock and teasing you to orgasm

I guess there'll be two more scenes for tonight then or tomorrow. There's no reason to not make people slog through more of my mediocre work.

I'll try my best to write something along those lines, though if she's wearing the skimpy bikini she isn't letting you keep her bottoms.

>>335517

>What are you trying to achieve with that? Whatever it is it's wrong, because [legs] returns "four legs" for a centaur.

I wanted legs to return a plural leg description. This is the specific sentence: "Giving her butt a quick swat makes Snuggles lets out a quiet squeal, and you move to raise your front [legs] up and place them onto the wooden counter." Should I just remove the parser? I think you can be a centaur without hooves though, right? So i thought people would want their freaky front legs mentioned. I'll check the parser guide again maybe there's a specific one.


 No.335530

File: 61deb9ccb0a03a8⋯.png (158.25 KB, 347x485, 347:485, 1366141153764.png)

>>335507

>It happens to be an article on local fauna. Well, that has certainly changed since this was written, but it should still suffice for entertaining your child. As you start to read from it, Dolores hangs on your every word, amazed at your ability to decipher the cryptic signs crawling across the page. Despite not knowing what they mean, she stretches out a single tiny hand to trace across those magical letters, the other three gripping onto the edge of the book as if it were some grand treasure. Your daughter stares in open wonder as you start flipping the pages, slowly sounding out each word as you go along, and her look of utter astonishment leaves you in doubt as to whether she’s actually getting any of this.

You expect me to even remotely consider the moth daughteru in any non-platonic way after reading this!?


 No.335532

>>335528

>So i thought people would want their freaky front legs mentioned.

If people want that here, people are wrong. There's no reasonable way that can be done.

"your front furry legs"

"your front fuzzy, bunny legs"

"your front fox-like legs"

There's just no way for it to ever sound good to put any kind of description in the middle of "front legs".


 No.335543

>>335507

>Your [legs] tangle

"tangles" for single leg.

>happy with how things are proceeding, so you happily

Repetition.

>but the sensation of a long, slow lick along your [vagina] quickly assuages that

For nagas, it's going to be a bit difficult to imagine this whole position. But the question is if you want to accommodate for that or not.

>against your daughters

daughter's

>the pert well

swell

>she not in any position

Forgot an "is".

>Dolores barely even reacts at the contact

"to" would be the better-fitting preposition.

>[if (isnaga) tail|body]|inner thigh] lightly, causing faint tingles to run through your body

Repetition if single leg but not naga.

Good stuff so far, I don't think I have anything to complain about, really.

>spoiler

I have something close enough coming up, but actual sleeping molestation would be difficult with her.

>>335516

>does Marielle model underwear for us yet?

She doesn't, but it's something I have in mind for after she's done. No promises.


 No.335549

>>335528

If you really want to do it, you'd need to check for different foot types manually, I think, and replace 'them' with 'your hooves' or 'your paws' or whatever else you can have.


 No.335551

>>335549

There's a [feet] and [foot] I think that'll return hooves and the like


 No.335552

>>335530

There are many ways to love your daughter, and I respect your choices.

>>335543

>"tangles" for single leg.

[Legs] always returns something plural so that it isn't a nightmare to use. Did you think it returned "leg"?

>For nagas, it's going to be a bit difficult to imagine this whole position. But the question is if you want to accommodate for that or not.

I can imagine some mildly awkward tail positions that would still make sense (if not a whole lot of it). Is it better to disable the scene or have it be a bit off?

Thanks for the help, I'll have the second course along soon.


 No.335554

>>335552

>Did you think it returned "leg"?

I thought it returned "tail" for nagas. What does it return there, "coils"?

>Is it better to disable the scene or have it be a bit off?

I heavily dislike gating scenes without writing an alternative like that. I'd rather have a scene that doesn't quite make sense than have none.


 No.335555

>>335554

>I thought it returned "tail" for nagas. What does it return there, "coils"?

"Snake-like coils"


 No.335556

>>335532

>If people want that here, people are wrong.

To be fair, anyone that gives up their human legs is wrong but it isn't usually my problem except in this instance i suppose.

>>335551

So could i swap [legs] for [feet]?

"Giving her butt a quick swat makes Snuggles lets out a quiet squeal, and you move to raise your front [feet] up and place them onto the wooden counter."


 No.335557

>>335556

>So could i swap [legs] for [feet]?

No you could not. He said to replace "them", not "legs".

<Giving her butt a quick swat makes Snuggles lets out a quiet squeal, and you move to raise your front legs up and place your [feet] onto the wooden counter.

I haven't looked at the actual output of [feet] to be sure that would make sense, but I think it would.

Also, "lets" should be "let".


 No.335561

File: ee74dd5af966c7d⋯.jpg (230.57 KB, 874x852, 437:426, 13b4f.jpg)

>>335557

Alright, thanks. I changed it on my end, but i'm going to get new scenes done before updating the doc.


 No.335566

What does the no-fur mode actually do? Remove NPCs and content or adjust descriptions?

The sprites stay the same naturally, I assume.


 No.335568

>>335515

It's good to see some love for the centaurs out there, and the same goes for the knotty cocks (no pun intended).

At 193:

>redder, with

Unnecessary comma

At 195:

>view, with

Unnecessary comma, in these cases 'with' is acting as a transition. If 'with' is deleted, a comma becomes proper.

>with you being unable to help in grapping the luscious cheeks.

'help in' is a bit confusing. I assume you mean something like irresistable?

<with you being unable to resist grapping the luscious cheeks.

At 197:

>slit that is

Word choice, that → which

At 252:

>Your tightly fingers dig into her flesh

Seems a bit out of order as written. Shifting 'tightly' over a bit:

>Your fingers dig tightly into her flesh

At 262:

>you firmly smacking her rear that slowly ripples from the blow.

Word choice, that → which, and a comma after 'rear' is probably appropriate:

<smacking her rear, which slowly

>Her hips tremble from the blow and the stinging red hand print you left behind stands out on her [{fair}|{tanned}] complexion.

Missing comma after 'blow': two independent clauses joined by 'and'

>You point out how you know she likes it, she's a pretty perverted girl.

, → ;

At 264:

><b>smack</b>.

As a sound effect, I don't believe the period is necessary; it's not really a sentence.

>Mnnng!…!" another<b>smack</b>. "making me feel good

A few corrections here. Spacing after 'another', the period (as above), and the following 'making' can be capitalized since it's effectively the start of a new sentence, even though Snuggles' is not speaking in complete sentences at this point. How does this read:

<Mnnng!…!" another <b>smack</b> "Making me feel good

As a general observation, you probably don't need 'another' 'and another' paired up with <b>smack</b>. The reader has the needed context, and it simplifies the grammar.

At 266:

>tushy, that leaves

Word choice, that → which

At 268:

>together, with your attention

with

>you so, be just

Looks like a misplaced comma, though there's a couple ways it could read:

<I love you, so be just

<I love you so … be just

At 272:

>head, no.

'no' is probably unnecessary, but it can be left in as clarification on the head shake. If so, I think it requires quotations or other emphasise, without the comma. Something like:

<head "No".


 No.335570

>come back after awhile

>Helia and Minotaur scenes were removed

Damn. I know it caused a shit storm but it still made me hard.


 No.335576

I completely forgot that CoC 2 exists for some reason

>Savin is the main author

>Savarra is the name of the world

WEW LAD

Why not just name it 'Savinia' at this point or something? Holy fuck.

What's /hgg/'s opinion on CoC 2? I'm not all that against TiTS, standard Fenoxo bullshit aside.


 No.335577

File: 6aa48fd9568aa8b⋯.png (2.17 MB, 2055x2282, 2055:2282, ClipboardImage.png)

>>335576

Apparently they're getting a moth-girl at some point, so I might check it out then, but my impression when it first released was pretty bad. The world was uninteresting furshit, and the main plot hook didn't grab me at all. The characters that were there at the time seemed pretty unappealing, and I imagine that more like them will keep getting added.


 No.335579

>>335576

TiTS is a disgusting furry-fest built from the ground up to be just that.

CoCII is a secondary furrybucks milker that is built from the ground up with polyamory where the forced first companion will always whore herself out to everyone around you because of her "religion."

They're both absolute trash, and you'll find no sympathizers for either here nor will they get the modding treatment CoC is getting.


 No.335581

>>335577

Oh, and the images, like pic related, seemed off to me. I like some of what Cheshire's done, but he absolutely can't draw masculine men, and the quality definitely seems like it's taken a downturn.


 No.335582

>>335576

Should have been a direct sequel set a couple hundred years in the future with the city of New Ingnam built around a mysterious portal as the central location.

The city's locations, plenty of characters encountered, and events occurring would be dependent on the save import.

Should explore the conflict between human vs non-human (as in furries and/or mutants, not just demons) as a plot point, with some kind of ANCIENT EVIL AWAKENS shoved in there too

Would never happen anyways because 'a bloo bloo that actually requires effort and locks content depending on your save'


 No.335590

>>335515

>Placing you hand on the counter you built

your hand

>pull down her tight leather pants, and white panties to her thighs in one swift motion

No comma

>with you being unable to help in grapping the luscious cheeks

Presumably one of 'grabbing' or 'grasping'

>her fold's incredible slickness

folds'

>her slick walls happily welcoming the only [cock] it's ever had

The parser will make this end up reading like it's the only, say, dog cock she's ever had–implying she's had other types. Probably not what you intended.

>Snuggles merely shutters

shudders

>from her shiver depths

shivering

>pulling them apart to gaze at her puckered backdoor making her let out a sudden shriek

and making her

>line your [cockhead] up for a what's to come

Remove 'a'

>let out adorable cries that compliment your grunts of satisfaction

complement

>walls of her rectum seem hungrily milk you

seem to

>While still trembling for release

Presumably 'from' since you just came.

>Giving her butt a hard smack, makes the girl lewdly moan

No comma

>sloven slit

Now there's a word I never expected or needed to read in a sex scene.

>Snuggles nervously looks over her shoulder at you, the look on her face is a mix of uncertainty and excitement at what you might do.

and the look (also, two looks)

>from the blow. Her hips tremble from the blow

>her body trembling up the successive strikes

trembling from


 No.335591

>>335590

>her slick walls happily welcoming the only [cock] it's ever had

Haven't read the rest, but this should be "they've" rather than "it's."


 No.335601

Satan's anemone cock scene notes:

>The handling of it only serves

I'd recommend removing "the" (and the "of" to adjust), as this is a specific instance of handling, not a general thing that handling does.

>gradually you notice that you're feeling the sensation of your own pulling not from the skin at the point of attachment

Your own what? You also could consider commas after "pulling" and/or "attachment," but neither are necessary.

>you can [if (has anemone cock) already ]feel the sharp pain

I don't quite see the logic behind this conditional, but it's not a problem or anything.

>Biting back the sensation,

That doesn't work like that. You bite back reactions, not the stimuli themselves.

>the nearest water appears to be a barrel.

The barrel isn't water. You could say "water source" or "source of water," or you could even say that "the nearest water appears to be in a barrel," but you need to change something.


 No.335602

>>335556

You are not the boss of me i will have whatever legs i desire to have just like marae intended


 No.335603

>>335601

>Your own what?

Your own pulling. A comma after pulling would make that clearer.


 No.335605

>>335566

No fur mode adjusts descriptions of aallllllll things that are furry to be monstergirls at most.


 No.335606

File: 3d4ef7475347708⋯.jpg (96.21 KB, 850x711, 850:711, 96a6345391ea3b54fa.jpg)

>>335568

Made your changes, and thank you for checking it again.

>As a sound effect, I don't believe the period is necessary; it's not really a sentence.

I was too sure how to go about the whole sound effect thing when i was writing it out honestly.

>>335590

Made your corrections, thank you for checking it.

>sloven slit

Well its messy with her juices, not from a lack of hygiene or anything. Perhaps I should put a different word there, i'll do that in a few seconds.

>and the look (also, two looks)

Changed second look to 'expression'

>from the blow. Her hips tremble from the blow

removed 'from the blow' part now.

>>335591

Haven't read the rest, but this should be "they've" rather than "it's."

Changed it now.

>>335602

>Not having human legs.

Degenerate. You do whatever makes you happy anon.

Anyway, added some panty scenes to Snuggles and made corrections (i don't believe i missed any but i'll triple check tomorrow).

You can ask for her underwear which she'll either give them to you or jerk you off with them. If she gives you her underwear then you can jerk off with them from the masturbation menu. She won't give you another pair until you return the previous one.

The scenes read worse then usual to me.

https://pastebin.com/ydbsx9Ma

>>335516

Anyway you got her having panty scenes now.


 No.335609

>>335576

Well it let's me kill demons and corrupted characters so that a big plus.

Oh and you can have a kitsune wife too,so all in all it's not that bad compared to Tits


 No.335618

Notes on 2hu's Alice bear gifting:

>[Give] .tooltip = It's probably just a lost little girl. Give her a teddy bear and tell her to head home.

Did you want this to be limited to the first meeting? If so, it doesn't really flow from the choices you get there, so you should probably reread it. If not, you know what an Alice is after the first encounter, so this doesn't make sense.

>you can still feel there's an air of restlessness coming from her.

Two things: I'd highly recommend you remove either the "there's" or the "can," and this doesn't fit with the Alice's behavior at all.

>[pc child: kids your age]/[else: children]

This notation is not great;

>A passing thought enters your mind that [pc child: kids your age]/[else: children] like toys, and end up quickly recalling the stuffed animal that you're currently carrying in your pack.

You're missing a "you" after the "and," and you should probably remove the "quickly."

>stuffed animal that you're currently carrying in your pack. Perhaps she'll be happy to have it? You take the stuffed

repetition

>There's a confused expression on her face, as she hesitantly says

Remove the comma.

>She mentions, "Oh, but before I go… Shouldn't I pay you for the bear, [miss/mister]?

"Mentions" doesn't really work here, and it's just [mister].

>Though, I don't have any gems…

Remove the comma.

>[alice.panties?]

[alicepanties]

>Even though there's been a warm sensation stirring within you, you assure her the bear is a gift.

"Been" is a bit odd here, but not strictly wrong.

>but you doubt any parent will be happy

Change "will" to "would."

>showing up in tow with their innocent child

The "in tow" goes after "child."

>she looks over her narrow shoulders to face you again with a bewildered look on her face.

If she's looking over her shoulder, she's not really facing you.

>Once she's out of sight, you can only hope that she'll get home safe and sound.

There should be a transition between this and the last sentence. You don't establish that she starts moving again after she looks at you or anything.

I'll try to look through more stuff in the quality control section.


 No.335619

File: c8bc1873a8e8ae7⋯.png (1.11 MB, 900x1400, 9:14, 1555163911633.png)

>>335606

In my defence, you already planned it >>333479

Also, if it feels off, you might wanna cut it out for now and come back to it. You don't need to do everything at once.


 No.335626

>>335606

>your dream of her enjoying her recently worn panties

Your dream is to enjoy her panties yourself, right? Remove the first 'her' in that case.

>pulls down her tight leather pants slipping them off along with her cotton panties

Comma after pants

>teasingly against near your nose

Pick one of 'against' or 'near'

>starting to lewdly rubbing you

rub

>is it just because they belong to a young girl?

>don't you want to feel a young girl jerking you off

I'd suggest making alternatives for children and teens, as these are a little off if you're actually younger than her.

>soft feeling hand

'soft-feeling' if you mean it to feel soft or 'soft, feeling' if you mean it to be soft and feeling [you]

>guarded in your pocket. perhaps you can use them to masturbate

Capitalize 'perhaps'

>someone who get this excited

gets

>from an innocent girl's warm panties

See, this one works much better for kids.

>warm panties," her words are hushed

panties." Her

>fliuids

fluids

>While relishing in the both her smooch

Remove 'the'

>load of cum of out of your already fatigued body

Remove the second 'of'

>Without a word she slips her now cum-soiled panties back on

Comma after 'word'

>sticker

stickier

>You firmly grab your [cock], vigorously stroking your erect member that throbs in delight.

, which throbs in delight

>you buck your hips instinctively relishing in imagining filling her with all you can

Comma after instinctively (or hips, depending on whether the bucking or imagining filling her is what's instinctive)

>Taking you fabric you wrap it around you shaft

the fabric, your shaft and comma after fabric

>managing a more strokes

a few more?

>Suddenly you trembling in bliss

'you tremble' or 'you're trembling'


 No.335689

Where is Better Sprite Anon? Has he made anything new recently?


 No.335691

>>335609

>kitsune wife

it makes my dick diamonds, now if we could take the three deep forest kitsunes as cocksleeves that would be great.

That and see them pregnant after you've fucked them silly.

>>335626

>alice masturbating you with her panties

i was waiting for this for ages, i was thinking of a follow up for a high libido PC not satisfied with the panty rub, going crazy from her lust aura (like the Champion's strong "temptation" of licking her chest when in combat) and fucking her hard for hours.


 No.335714

File: 63dec3db42648c8⋯.jpg (211.7 KB, 782x1093, 782:1093, Moth_Thighs.jpg)

MMM

https://pastebin.com/zjpCzESq

I've finished the Moth x Moth x Mom. Not sure how the overall flow turned out, might need some tuning. Anway, outside of a few minor things (the headpat variation, maybe gifting the silk panties, maybe spar intensity), I've finished basically everything I wanted to for the character. Suppose I should think about starting another project now.


 No.335716

>>335618

>Did you want this to be limited to the first meeting? If so, it doesn't really flow from the choices you get there, so you should probably reread it. If not, you know what an Alice is after the first encounter, so this doesn't make sense.

I made a note that the intro portion should be rewritten, I don't intend to do that myself right now though. Maybe after Snuggles is finished I'll redo the intro portions of it.

Fixed up what you corrected at least and added a line to establish she starts moving again, thank you for checking it.

>>335619

>In my defense, you already planned it

Only excuse I got is I forgot.

>Also, if it feels off, you might wanna cut it out for now and come back to it. You don't need to do everything at once.

It's probably passable, at least I don't think its as bad as I did yesterday.

>>335626

>I'd suggest making alternatives for children and teens, as these are a little off if you're actually younger than her.

Would these work?: '[pc is teen/child: [{adorable} | {young}] girl?' and '[pc is teen/child: [{cute} | {young}] girl jerking you off with her warm panties?'

I made your corrections and thank you for taking time to proofread it.

>>335691

>alice masturbating you with her panties

>i was waiting for this for ages.

But it's not an alice, it's Snuggles giving you a panty fap/you fapping with her panties if you had asked for them.


 No.335718

>>335716

>[pc is teen/child: [{adorable} | {young}]

This is actually both not what I (twice) asked you to use (with examples given) and a decent bit worse than the way you used to do it, because you're now opening a bracket you aren't closing. If you really want to go back to how you did it previously, that's not the end of the world, but don't do this.


 No.335721

File: f235dd49c1b2b95⋯.jpg (178.18 KB, 1200x1200, 1:1, Mariya takegunchi.jpg)

>DUDE DARKEST DUNGEON LMAO

Who is responsible for this


 No.335722

>>335714

>I've finished the Moth x Moth x Mom

You mean the Moth x Mother x Mothest


 No.335723

File: 20faa78faed3b66⋯.jpg (440.9 KB, 708x1000, 177:250, untitled_by_chaamal_dcx9mj….jpg)

Somewhere, I could hear a calling for more angel, as if from the ether. I conclude that OP is telepathic.

Anabelle the Angel

Shouldra Intro Version: https://pastebin.com/Px9SZ9AU

Basic screen interactions: https://pastebin.com/NnCrSWiY Includes [Appearance] screen

What sorts of chatters do you want with Ana? Give your suggestions and I'll let you talk with her as you wish.

Also wrote the scenario for having Shouldra leave or entering while you have Anabelle, but it contains a very minor spoiler so I won't post the link. Just note that part was done. It's on my pastebin if you're dying to see it.


 No.335730

What happens when you try to take Fera's Boon for gaping/tight when you have the other one from previous NG?


 No.335731

Guys there is a CoC 2? How far along is it? Is TiTs finished?


 No.335733

>>335731

>>>www.fenoxo.com


 No.335736

>>335723

Notes on part 2:

>triggers if you choose to [Wake].

I'm confused by this [Wake] option you're talking about. Is there some menu detailed somewhere that I missed?

>{-3 str, -3tgh each day, including the start. The daily drain changes by progress}

You should probably write up a short blurb of the champion experiencing this drain so that they know what's going on.

>Now manifested fully, you

Misplaced participle

>She'll be better suited to make

making

>but soon returns her incorporeal form to you.

That phrasing would suggest that her form is something she's giving back to you after borrowing.

>The icy touch is a mild shock to your [skin]

I feel compelled to ask what type of output you want here. Do you want adjective/tone? Do you want the first point of contact (like fur or feathers) or what's actually underneath?

>you feel a firm understanding of this spell now

I think you're missing a "(that) you have" after "feel."

>it's a style wholly separate from [magic]

That currently returns "Black & White." Do you want me to add "magic" onto the end of that? Whichever you prefer is fine, I think you're the main person who's going to use it.

>from this point on, every encounter auto-casts Aegis Alsia, regardless of if the player is using that school of magic or if they have the perk required.

Seems a bit broken, as long as you can manage the stat drain.

>I also loved butterflies, finding them so beautiful.

This is a bit stilted for dialogue, which is 100% fine if you intended it to be like that.

>Tell me more about you!

This seems like an abrupt and suspicious change of topic after having given you only some very minor details about herself, which is fine, but the champion seems to fully buy into it in the next sentence.

>It is the difficulties of a demon-stricken world

I'd highly recommend adding a "one of" after "is" to make the number match.

>to what the bulk of your time had been spent on

has

>all these major points that lead you to be who you are.

"These" is pretty strange here. I'd recommend either "those" or "the" (with a "have" after "that" if you go with "the").

>[if (history:Paladin|Alchemy|Fighting|Fortune|Healing|Religion|Schooling|Slacking|Smithing|Slutting,Whoring|Thief)

Oh god, my eyes are bleeding from this paragraph.

>about the extent you have gone to be a paladin.

Think there should be a second "to" next to the other one. If you don't like them rubbing shoulders, you can also go with "to which you have gone."

>The fortune you'd always seemed to have

Remove the "'d," as that would imply that that stopped being the case before you left.

>I wouldn't trust me to manage money!

Myself? Depends a bit on the intent here, but she seems to generally go with a higher register most of the time.

>As healing had been a big part of your life before coming here

Again, the pluperfect (signaled by your use of "had") doesn't really fit here. It would if the current frame of reference were past tense, but CoC is written in present tense, so this "had been" should be "was."

>you can't say for sure it makes for the most interesting of stories.

I'd recommend adding an "if" after "sure" (a "that" could work too, I guess).

>work to mend wounds, and it's certainly a skill to help yourself when danger strikes. While I could work

repetition

>I'm not the best healer, your skill is something to be truly proud of!

You should probably replace this comma splice.

>You time in Ingnam

r

>maintaining a devout life around the temple before coming to this world

Dangling participle

>[say:Such

Missing space

>to see one that pursues peace and an adherence to a code

Remove the "an."

>It had been a scholarly life for you,

Another "had" to remove.

>striving for a better grasp of the knowledge out there.

Misplaced participle

>to your studious background

Don't know that "studious background" works.

>is one of the greatest asset

s

>but moreso than that

"Moreso" doesn't really fit here at all. I'd recommend going with "more <adjective>" (important, valuable, etc.).

>is the dedication and mental malleability to building

Just "build"

>but you can work to make sure you learn well and easy

It would be "easily," but I'd recommend removing it entirely.

This is probably long enough for the moment, so I'm stopping here. My only overall comment would be that Ana's dialogue often sounds like someone trying to sound smart, rather than someone who actually does talk in that register. If that's intentional, carry on, but if it's not, you might want to look into that.


 No.335738

>>335731

No, but it's definitely getting to be just as shit as TiTS.


 No.335739

>>335736

>often sounds like someone trying to sound smart

Forgot to mention, it also works if she's supposed to sound like she doesn't know the language that well, although that's a topic that seems entirely handwaved in this game.


 No.335740

>>335731

The first companion you get is literally NTR cuck shit, it's being written by the gayer one, so its horrible.


 No.335743

>>335730

The tightness scale is tight, normal, loose, gaping, gaping wide, and clown-car.

The tightness perk prevents you from going above "loose" when being stretched out.

The gaping perk prevents your tightness from recovering naturally over time.

So with both you'll eventually end up stuck at "loose", unless it's changed by TF or something.


 No.335745

>>335743

Interesting. Thanks.

Coincidentally: if you don't fuck the flower and don't get the boon, Fera gives you the Akbal quest. Would you know if she still does give that quest if you DO fuck the flower for the boon?


 No.335747

>>335745

>Would you know if she still does give that quest if you DO fuck the flower for the boon?

On the next encounter, yes.


 No.335748

>>335747

Cool thanks. Though fuck doind that quest, it took me ~15 in-game days of spamming Deepwoods to get all Akbal encounters.

Where does Fera interaction end anyways? I'm really tired of spamming Deepwoods.


 No.335749

>>335721

I am, shoot me


 No.335751

>>335748

Fera encounters currently end with finishing the quest. Your spamming was all in vain, there are time delays. None of Fera's or Akbal's encounters are rare, except re-encountering Fera to get the quest after getting the second perk, and that can be made more common with pumpkin seeds.


 No.335754

>>335751

>Your spamming was all in vain, there are time delays.

Are you fucking kidding me

I should've known


 No.335762

>>335723

>more angel

yey


 No.335763

>>335749

I won't if you tell me what the fuck do I need the perk 'Revelations' for and how to get through Jeremiah


 No.335768

>>335763

revelations just improves your chance of getting a good roll from Test Resolve.

as for Jeremiah, unless something broke horribly you should just fight him


 No.335777

This Ebonbloom grind is some serious MMO farming bullshit


 No.335786

Anything else to build besides the cabin+furniture? Also holy shit Shield Bash with the fatigue perks just lets me stunlock for days. Who needs magic and guns when Shield Bash exists?


 No.335789

>Playing without cooldowns


 No.335791

So how do I go about importing other players' waifu monstergirl slaves so I can humiliate, rape, impregnate, and finally mindbreak them?


 No.335793

>>335791

by playing a different game


 No.335797

Would anyone know why opening the game with the standalone flashplayer causes nothing to happen? It opens the player but the game doesn't load.


 No.335801

>>335797

Nvm looks like I solved my issue


 No.335810

>>335791

What do you mean? There's no custom characters in this game outside the PC

Lilith's Throne has exactly what you're describing though, provided someone gives you their character export


 No.335811

>>335777

Does it seriously ONLY drop with an abysmal drop rate from the high mountain basilisks and phoenixes?

Fuck me, I'd just cheat it in if the save editor worked


 No.335812

>>335811

just use the debug menu son


 No.335813

>>335811

>if the save editor worked

It does, but the in-game debug menu is still better.


 No.335818

File: 2bc17be644ba083⋯.png (1.2 MB, 1200x800, 3:2, ClipboardImage.png)

>>335811

While the save editor does work, fear not, I've written an acquisition scene for occasionally just finding one in the high mountains:

https://pastebin.com/cvC49t6c

There may be other/more appropriate sources coming in the future, but this should hopefully help ease the grind a bit for now.


 No.335821

>>335716

>>335691

Now I do kinda want a pantyjob from Alice, damnit.


 No.335831

>>335718

It's close though.

[if (condition) <thing if true>|<thing if false>].

[pc is teen/child: {adorable} | {young}]. sure the 'if' isn't in there and closing the bracket was just something i forgot.

>>335821

You could write it if you want it you know? or try catching somebody posting a "first request i write" post.


 No.335832

>>335831

I don't have the energy to stalk Satan for ten years to get first reply post, even if he would be best fit for writing Alices. I figure he prolly doesn't like pantyjobs.


 No.335834

>>335714

>[say: [Father]… " + player.mf("D-Dad", "M-Mom") + "…]

Something I assumed was on purpose last time, but I still have to ask if she's supposed to address you here twice with two different names or if one of those was meant for Sylvia.

>if you want, that is…

Special ellipsis.

>glances over to her mother

Potential repetition, but could use a variation for two mothers anyway. "other mother" or something.

>a nearby rug, Sylvia following you closely and drawing you into a brief kiss when you reach your destination—a conveniently placed rug.

Redundancy and repetition.

>Each action, each tender, thoughtless touch

Minor, but as "tender" can be a noun, there's potential confusion here. Took me a split second.

>a thousand fold

Usually one word or at least hyphenated nowadays, even when after the word it modifies.

>loses herself to the moment

Can you use "to" here? Too lazy to check, but I've only ever seen it with "in".

>moment. But she still doesn't let up for a single moment

Repetition.

>to let gp,

"go", and comma splice. If intentional, here my answer: Eh.

>and soon after you hear a loud moan

Could use a comma for clarity.

>As your climax sweeps you

"sweeps you up"? "sweeps through you"?

A bit more bumpy, this one, I found. For one, it took me a solid three paragraphs to understand the position. Shifting the description of where Dolores' head is to an earlier point would help immensely with that.

>You lean forward and take in her scent, relishing in the anticipation of what's to come.

>As you're in the midst of enjoying yourself

The wording "enjoying yourself" made me think you were doing quite a jump here at first, as you at times do, and I only realised you aren't even touching her until

>She was graciously patient while you got yourself situated, so you return her generosity as best you can, using everything you know about her body to drive her wild with pleasure.

came about. Perhaps make that "yourself" a "her aroma/fragrance". And the sentence when you do finally dive in feels pretty anticlimactic, I would make that one far more descriptive. The PC's climax as well is little more than a single sentence without any physical description. I guess that's partially the point, but in general, the scene could be a little more elaborate here and there, even outside those two instances.

That wing thumping was heart-meltingly adorable though, thank you for that one.


 No.335835

>>335831

>sure the 'if' isn't in there and closing the bracket was just something i forgot.

The 'if' isn't there, the parentheses aren't there, and you added braces. That's a bunch of extra complications.

>Your old way: [if pc is teen/child: {adorable} else: {young}]

>Your new way: [pc is teen/child: {adorable} | {young}]

These two are pretty much equivalent (with the brackets fixed), but the old way is a bit more convenient. For reference, the ideal way would be:

>[if (pc is teen/child) adorable|young]


 No.335842

>>335835

So for this: [if default clothes: {loose shirt} else: {kimono} else: {bikini top}].

Something like [if (default clothes) loose shirt|kimono|bikini top] feels off though.


 No.335862

>>335831

The main thing that was annoying me was the extra opening bracket, but as >>335835 says, your old way is easier to correct to the proper way if you don't want to use the actual conditional parser.

>>335842

That makes literally no sense either way, though. What's supposed to trigger the kimono vs the bikini top? If this is supposed to be something you can choose between, just write something like [clothes] or [snugglesclothes], it wouldn't be handled with a conditional anyway.


 No.335866

>>335842

You have two "else" but only one true/false condition. That's impossible no matter how you write it. What you're saying is:

>If she's wearing her default clothes: loose shirt

>Otherwise: kimono

>Third option (which can only mean "she's not wearing her default clothes but she's not NOT wearing her default outfit", but really just doesn't make sense): bikini top


 No.335912

>>335832

that's an odd thing to figure

>>335834

>Special ellipsis

Special?


 No.335922

>>335862

Her outfit was something the pc could select after giving her either the kimono from tel'adre or the the skimpy bikini. I don't think a variable like [snugglesclothes] would work completely. While it could work in the previous example i don't think it'd work for: [if default clothes: {take off her buttoned-up shirt} else: {undo the front of her elegant kimono} else: {slip off her bikini}],

>>335866

really? made sense to me. if default clothes = loose shirt; else = kimono or skimpy bikini.


 No.335928

>>335922

You haven't given any condition for choosing between the kimono or bikini. You can't just say "do this or that" without saying when or why you would choose one or the other. Even if you just want to pick an option at random, you need to mention that.


 No.335941

>>335928

how should I do that?


 No.335943

>>335922

When you do if/else, the "else" means "if the condition wasn't met". It is literally impossible to have two "else" with only one "if", nothing about that can ever make sense.

You can do "if (condition) {thingone} else if (othercondition) {thingtwo} else {thingthree}"


 No.335949

File: 127e247111396c0⋯.png (3.22 MB, 1920x1261, 1920:1261, ClipboardImage.png)

As illusory as my will to write

https://pastebin.com/vmGpvAzw

Did a little one-off scene from the desert. Will probably be doing more like this over the coming weeks, so if you have ideas, feel free to present them.

>>335834

>but I still have to ask if she's supposed to address you here twice with two different names or if one of those was meant for Sylvia.

The former, she calls Sylvia "mother" too.

>Minor, but as "tender" can be a noun

Very uncommonly and not in a sense that would work here, though.

>Usually one word or at least hyphenated nowadays, even when after the word it modifies.

Oh yeah, I was going to look this up, because I felt like what I wrote was off. Guess that didn't happen.

>Can you use "to" here? Too lazy to check, but I've only ever seen it with "in".

Yeah, I'm sure you've seen stuff like "loses herself to pleasure" all the time.

>"go", and comma splice. If intentional, here my answer: Eh.

Out of a semicolon, colon, and dash, which would you prefer here? I'm pretty ambivalent about the whole thing (I still kinda like the comma splice, even).

>And the sentence when you do finally dive in feels pretty anticlimactic, I would make that one far more descriptive.

I just looked back at that, and I think I probably meant to write way more there.

>The PC's climax as well is little more than a single sentence without any physical description.

I tried to focus more on the buildup than the actual event this time. Did that not work at all, or does it just need a slight extension?

>That wing thumping was heart-meltingly adorable though, thank you for that one.

Glad it worked out. Had almost finished the scene when I felt it could use something more mothy.

>>335912

Special ellipses are a type of special character that many word processors automatically replace three periods with. However, you generally shouldn't use special characters like that when writing for CoC.

>>335922

>I don't think a variable like [snugglesclothes]

That would be a parser, not a variable. Her clothing status is always going to be stored in a variable; that's just how you track that sort of thing. The problem here is not the fact that you have multiple options, it's that the logic for choosing them is all fucked up. You can never have a sequence of two "else"s without another condition. You can honestly just do [take off her buttoned-up shirt|undo the front of her elegant kimono|slip off her bikini], it'll be clear what you mean.

Finally, first request I get, I write. But no pantyjobs, you've telegraphed your move too hard.


 No.335956

>>335949

Kitsune tail cuddling


 No.335959

>>335941

For something like this with several options (and the possibility of expanding it in the future), the basic parser wouldn't be used at all, so all you need to do is make it clear what you want. Examples:

>[default clothes:{text}, kimono:{text}, bikini:{text}]

>[clothes: defaulttext|kimonotext|bikinitext] if you're careful to always keep them in the same order


 No.335978

>>335949

>You can honestly just do [take off her buttoned-up shirt|undo the front of her elegant kimono|slip off her bikini], it'll be clear what you mean.

Wonderful, i'll just drop the if default clothes thing from her doc then. Maybe make a note at the top about it as well.

>>335959

>For something like this with several options (and the possibility of expanding it in the future), the basic parser wouldn't be used at all, so all you need to do is make it clear what you want. Examples:

>[default clothes:{text}, kimono:{text}, bikini:{text}]

>[clothes: defaulttext|kimonotext|bikinitext] if you're careful to always keep them in the same order

Or maybe i'll go with this, I'll figure it out tomorrow. Then start her other bits. Expanding it in the future may be nice once more good clothes come along. While not related to this conversation I really wanted her to wear spats but sadly, there were not any spats in tel'adre. Was pretty sad about it honestly.


 No.335981

>>335978

As a note, It would be easiest to just make a parser for the actual name of her clothing if you're using it frequently, so do use [snugglesclothes] if it comes more than a couple times.


 No.335982

Why are the Alices so stingy with their candy?


 No.335986

>>335982

Not all of them are.


 No.335987

File: 34fc89b903595fb⋯.png (50.66 KB, 583x454, 583:454, sewayaki_kitsune_no_senkos….png)


 No.335996

>>335949

>copious amounts of juice

Can "juice" be a mass noun? I think it can, but if not, plural here.

>Very uncommonly and not in a sense that would work here, though.

As "someone who tends to something". Sure, doesn't really make sense, but for me that's close enough to at least attempt the association here, and as this is a list of nouns, looking for one isn't too strange. But then, my obsession with warships makes that word more common to me than to others.

>Out of a semicolon, colon, and dash, which would you prefer here? I'm pretty ambivalent about the whole thing (I still kinda like the comma splice, even).

For me, that splice is on the verge between egregious and acceptable. I guess you could keep it if you really like it. A dash would be best, but you already have one in that paragraph, and a semicolon might be a little clunkier than you would want, so close to the climax, but I could still see myself using one. You could just put a conjunction in there; "as" offers itself here.

>I tried to focus more on the buildup than the actual event this time. Did that not work at all, or does it just need a slight extension?

A slight extension, probably at the very end, could be fine. Build-up like that needs a fitting finale, and the focus of the scene is split between all three of you, so careful to not disappoint the reader by being too niggardly with words.


 No.335999

>>335818

Super rare black lotus item when


 No.336001

File: f3b3dde7eeb3d1e⋯.jpg (72.25 KB, 1280x720, 16:9, Wary of petting.jpg)

>>335987

Man, that is such a good manga.

The anime just aired the first episode, too, and I hope the quality stays up.


 No.336004

>>336001

It won't


 No.336008

File: 24d509b1804f83e⋯.gif (2.43 MB, 640x480, 4:3, Staring at you.gif)

>>336004

On a fundamental level I'm aware of that, but you can't stop me from hoping they get at least one solid season.


 No.336013

>>335996

>Can "juice" be a mass noun?

Yes, it almost always is. The only time it isn't is when you refer to a drink as a juice (e.g., "I'll have a juice, please").

>As "someone who tends to something".

I didn't even think of that meaning, that seems even stranger here. In any case, the confusion should be very brief for the few people who construe it in that way, so I think it's probably fine.

>You could just put a conjunction in there; "as" offers itself here.

Not a big fan of "as." Going to have to think on this one a bit.

>A slight extension, probably at the very end, could be fine.

I expanded it a bit, added in a paragraph break too. Hopefully works a bit better now.

>>335999

But what would it do? Remove your fatigue? That's the only slightly analogous resource system I can think of.


 No.336023

>>336013

>Yes, it almost always is.

In the case of vaginal juice(s), it's most often used as a countable, though.

>than most other can claim

"others", or a plural noun it modifies afterwards.

Much improved. I'm proud of you. Now give me that boiled pupa scene.


 No.336039

>>336008

Anime got ruined by the Jews


 No.336043

>>336039

Anime got ruined by the Japs.


 No.336045

I've been away for awhile what happened with the Minotaur and Helia scenes? Just curious.


 No.336048

File: 87ba31d80591d69⋯.png (336.82 KB, 375x523, 375:523, tap_fluffy_tail.png)

>>335956

A very nice request, thank you.

https://pastebin.com/tkEt2nhv

For some context, the unparsed text is used to get around kitsune vision briefly.

>>336023

>Much improved.

Thanks, always nice to hear. Never saw myself writing so much yuri back when I started.

>spoiler

How greedy, after I gave you that cocoonjob and everything.

>>336045

Well they got removed.


 No.336050

>>335812

>debug menu

>>335813

in-game debug menu is still better

?


 No.336053

>>336050

You need to have at least double-digits in your INT stat to use it, though.


 No.336070


 No.336071

How many lollipops do I feed to the egg before it stop coming out a boy?


 No.336072

>>335723

>another spirit sharing MC's body

And the MC is slowly becoming an walking legion.


 No.336074

>>336071

Enough that it causes a integer overflow and corrupts your save.


 No.336081

>>335723

>Shouldra's question

That touches me on the feely part for some reason


 No.336090

>finished my generic kitsune dragon build

Hmmm, something is missing

>added a pair of bunny ears

Perfect


 No.336096

So with furry stuff being banned this is the last CoC thread, right?


 No.336102


 No.336104

>>336096

>last CoC thread

What did i miss?


 No.336105

>>336096

gr8 b8 m8


 No.336106


 No.336108

>>336096

we killed furry it's ok


 No.336143

>>335981

I just went with:

[(snugclothes) loose shirt|kimono|bikini top] pretty sure i kept it all in the same order.

[if (snugskin) fair|tanned]

[if (snughair) black|blonde]


 No.336144

File: f40f3e4b05edcd0⋯.png (1.04 MB, 1500x2153, 1500:2153, Lost in the sauce.png)

>>336048

That was very enjoyable.


 No.336152

>>336143

I don't know what's not getting through here, but with things like that, you don't use an if statement. All three of the ones you've written there would just be [snugclothes], [snugskin], and [snughair]. It's not an insane amount of extra work for me to replace them when the time comes, but understanding how things work will help you in the future.


 No.336167

How do I activate the scenes with that fox(?)-guy thief who appears when you wake up and gives you a bodysuit? He only appears for females and traps.


 No.336179

So guys, been away a few months so… what's new? What racial mixup the non-vanilla modded characters are anyway?


 No.336180

>>336179

This mod adds new undead and mothgirl lovers, and fuckable-but-not-lovers demons, humans, plantgirls, and a wolf (it existed in Revamp but wasn't fuckable because bestiality).


 No.336186

>>336180

> humans

We can recruit fellow humans?

Who and where?


 No.336188

>>336186

The first step would be to actually read what you're replying to.


 No.336189

>>336188

>This mod adds new undead and mothgirl lovers, and fuckable-but-not-lovers demons, humans

I'd assumed that with lovers you can recruit them aswell and it did say humans though.

Cuz right as of now there are only 2 pure humans the PC and Bathgirl(Shame that one wants to expand her)


 No.336195

>>336189

Giacomo is a human.

You can't fuck him though.

What's his deal anyways?


 No.336196

>>336195

That traveling merchant?

>What's his deal anyways?

He made a deal with a demon or something,that bottle demon said that he finally sold her "potion"


 No.336200

>sheepgirl with 9 kitsune tails

Is that too much floof? Actually, there is such thing as "too much floof"?


 No.336202


 No.336203

>>336195

Wait Giacomo is a human?


 No.336205

>>336189

>I'd assumed that with lovers you can recruit them aswell and it did say humans though.

It very clearly says that the humans are not lovers.

>Cuz right as of now there are only 2 pure humans the PC and Bathgirl

This is false.

>Shame that one wants to expand her

This is false.


 No.336206

I wish there was a perk/achievement scene where your flexible/well worn/capacity modified character could stick their head their own vagina. Maybe it'll give them the label "Stuck-up cunt"


 No.336208

I refuse to let Shouldra into my camp.


 No.336209

>>336205

>This is false.

So there are other pure and 100% humans then?

Must have missed then i guess

>Shame that one wants to expand her

>This is false.

Oh bathgirl is getting expanded? nice to hear she is a very underrated character imo and her quirk is kinda funny too bigger tits=less intelligence,smaller tits=more intelligence


 No.336211

>>336208

How clingy you don't wanna let go?


 No.336212

why is helia only giving me 1 xp per battle now? I can't grind with anything else.


 No.336217

>>336211

I just want to ejaculate on my own terms, rather than hers.


 No.336219

>>336212

exp gains diminish with your level raising, fight against ember or izumi instead


 No.336220

was there actually a way to get rid of the obsidian vines?


 No.336221

>>336220

They can't stick to amorphous things


 No.336222

>>336212

She is cucking your xp


 No.336242

>>336203

I loosely remember some other NPC saying something like "Giacomo is the only human I know of"


 No.336243

>>336152

I changed it all to these for the sake of uniformity.

[(snugclothes) loose shirt|kimono|bikini top]

[(snugclothes) unbutton her loose-fitting shirt|take off her elegant kimono|slip her skimpy bikini top off]

Just putting [snugclothes] could work for both of those?

>>336208

You can ask her to leave after you recruit her (i think). I remember taking her with me to get her out of the the town ruins encounter pool until i got amily back to camp. Don't have her in my current save to check.

>>336212

Did they really remove the xp scaling from Helia sparing? Thats pretty disappointing and gay, no reason to even recruit her now.

Pop open the save editor and set yourself to whatever you want. It's no different to just raw grinding outside of time spent, just tell yourself your champion did a few push ups. You could also just set it so foes scale to your level in the options menu.


 No.336245

>>336243

>Just putting [snugclothes] could work for both of those?

No. For the first one. I don't know if I need to start drawing diagrams or what.

>Did they really remove the xp scaling from Helia sparing? Thats pretty disappointing and gay, no reason to even recruit her now.

I don't know why everyone was so excited about that black hole when they could have just shoved a camera in your ear. Nothing has changed about Helia's experience rewards, and your opinions are pretty garbage.


 No.336247

File: b083789ecc208c1⋯.jpg (156.43 KB, 965x446, 965:446, 1.jpg)

Go ahead and mock me if I'm retarded but I cannot for the fuck of me find this debug menu unless it's this

I turned on debug mode in the settings and tried just about every option in the game menu and main menu


 No.336250

File: 7cbbaec5bb40ded⋯.png (44.7 KB, 554x439, 554:439, SpqCZCv.png)

>>336245

>No. For the first one. I don't know if I need to start drawing diagrams or what.

I think it's better for it to be uniform then hence why i kept it all the way i did. Was going for consistency when i was touching it up. it's why i (hopefully) removed all the {} at least and just put [if (x)].

>Nothing has changed about Helia's experience rewards

Yeah i checked the change log after that post and i assume xp changes would be listed there.

>and your opinions are pretty garbage.

What? that I wouldn't bother to recruit Heila unless she could give me loads of cheeky xp? She's not very interesting to me outside of taking me to fuck up the tower. If you like her that's perfectly fine. You just need to understand that you have shit taste and reflect on it.


 No.336255

>>336250

>I think it's better for it to be uniform then hence why i kept it all the way i did.

How curious. Well, it's probably fine unless someone has been telling you that it's way easier to do it another way for like two days now oh wait.

>Yeah i checked the change log after that post and i assume xp changes would be listed there.

You can read?

>What? that I wouldn't bother to recruit Heila unless she could give me loads of cheeky xp?

That point's somewhat minor. It's more the "just cheat, who cares?" thing (along with all of your other garbage opinions). You only care about your shallow power fantasy, but you can't even be assed to do literally any work to build up to it? Do you just like seeing big numbers? You should try jingling some keys in front of your face, you might enjoy it.


 No.336259

>>336247

YOu gotta type the letters "debug" (No speech marks) into the game when you are in the game(like, chilling in camp)


 No.336261

What is the secret for higher tigershark babies with Izma, without transforming? I want an equal split of sharkgirl and tigershark children for obvious reasons.


 No.336263

>>336261

Tigersharks are naturally rarer, so…


 No.336264

>>336255

>it's way easier to do it another way for like two days now oh wait.

The message is that i'm doing it how i want, but it's rude to just say it.

>It's more the "just cheat, who cares?" thing (along with all of your other garbage opinions).

I actually listed setting enemy scaling as an option as well, giving multiple solutions doesn't hurt. If someone wants to cheat then cheat, who gives a shit? If you want to grind then grind, who gives a shit? If you want to have a cheesy build that exploits the game, who gives a shit? Nothing wrong with any of that. It's a single player game and people play games for different reasons and in different ways.

>You only care about your shallow power fantasy, but you can't even be assed to do literally any work to build up to it?

I grind characters up from 1 to 50 all the time because I enjoy it, leveling up and assigning stat points is my favorite thing ever, using a save editor for that would ruin the fun. Personally, I restart my character the moment I finish the side content I enjoy or hit lv 50.

You are 100% right that I do love seeing big numbers, but what's wrong with that?


 No.336265

File: 870abaab956e4d3⋯.png (81.2 KB, 750x120, 25:4, ClipboardImage.png)

Bit of an error I noticed in Sylvia dialogue. My name is not name.


 No.336266

>>336259

Well, thanks. Had to do it in a menu where one of the letters wouldn't end up being a hotkey. How the fuck was I supposed to know that in the first place


 No.336268

>>336266

You're clearly not. It's called a DEBUG menu, not a gameplay enhancer. Or, you know, the usual route any non-moronic faggot would take: a search engine.


 No.336269

>>336263

I need answers, not reasons.


 No.336270

File: 2e2afc796e99c0a⋯.png (73.81 KB, 468x116, 117:29, ClipboardImage.png)

Having just fought Helia in camp.


 No.336271

>>336269

Presumably you're fucked.


 No.336272

How come nobody ever tried to add a tattoo system? It could literally just copy all the code from piercings and be modified from there.


 No.336275

>>336264

>The message is that i'm doing it how i want, but it's rude to just say it.

Oh, well have fun not getting your stuff put in because you're both too dumb to understand how anything works and too lazy to do it the way people tell you to. Why do you insist on wasting so much of other people's time?

>If someone wants to cheat then cheat, who gives a shit?

He didn't say he wanted to cheat; you're recommending that he cheat.

>>336265

Well that's embarrassing, fixed.


 No.336276

>>336269

If anything would help, it'd be being a futa yourself.


 No.336278

Can I nurse Alices now? It says in the changelog that Alice nursing was added but I don't have the option when I encounter an Alice?


 No.336279

>>336272

>How come nobody ever tried to add a tattoo system?

There is a tattoo system. It's just only for NPCs, and it's tied to horribly-written content.

What would the tattoos do? How would they work in terms of choosing the design?

>It could literally just copy all the code from piercings and be modified from there.

It literally couldn't.


 No.336280

>>336272

There is already a tattoo system in the game.


 No.336281

>>336269

40% of your shark daughters are tigersharks. There's no way in the game to change this. Stop being such a nigger.


 No.336282

>>336276

>>336271

Guess I'll save trying to balance things for my second ascension.


 No.336284

>>336275

>Oh, well have fun not getting your stuff put in

i'll finish her anyway, rather then just delete everything again. If she gets added that's fine. If not, then at least i finished her.

And you've already said before that it doesn't make things much harder with me doing it either way.


 No.336285

>>336270

what am I looking at?


 No.336286

>>336285

Helia giving 843 XP at level 82.


 No.336287

>try CoC2 for the first time

>dickgirls everywhere right from the first NPC

kek

I don't even mind that much, but I can't see it now without thinking of these threads.


 No.336291

>>336287

>first npc is dickgirl

Unless something's changed, or you mean first sex scene, the first NPC you run into is either the male wolf bartender or the female catgirl priestess.


 No.336292

>>336285

Helia not giving 1xp.


 No.336293

>>336291

Yeah, first sex scene with Kassrya or whatever.


 No.336294

>>336284

>And you've already said before that it doesn't make things much harder with me doing it either way.

No, I said that you using your old conditional notation was fine (if annoying); I never said that with regards to this. It's literally easier for you to write [snugclothes] (or [snugglesclothes] or whatever) than having it longform every time. It will almost certainly be done using a parser when it's put in, so you not doing it that way is wasting my time. I'm going to try to be a bit less mean now, as I understand you mean well, but it's very annoying when you need things explained to you repeatedly and refuse to do relatively simple things to help me out. People put a lot of time into helping you write your stuff, so the least you can do is to bit in a bit of effort to make her easier to implement.


 No.336296

>>336294

>It will almost certainly be done using a parser when it's put in

The parser doesn't have anything like switch statements so not really, unless you use a string of nested if statements every time


 No.336297

>>336296

I'd have a function that spits out a string based on what clothes she's wearing (as that'll be necessary for the nonstandard instances like "she removes her shirt" vs. "she pulls off her bikini top") and then just have a parser for that function with just the names as arguments.


 No.336298

>>336293

Iirc, you don't actually gotta fuck her.


 No.336299

File: a947f7220819915⋯.png (369.58 KB, 758x592, 379:296, 0.png)

>>336272

Is pic related not enough?

>>336278

The option is there.


 No.336303

>>336284

>>336297

And just to again clarify, [(snugglesclothes) thing1|thing2|thing3] is fine when it's not just the name of her clothes.


 No.336305

File: efb514b3c636511⋯.jpg (27.85 KB, 500x564, 125:141, 6jXgwPw.jpg)

>>336294

I'll apologize for being a faggot.

I'm going to be honest, when i said "The message is that i'm doing it how i want, but it's rude to just say it." I was being a dick and really just don't understand how i should go about the parser thing despite it being explained thoroughly. While i can understand using it for her hair and skin tone change ([snughair] and [snugskin] i'll change those in a bit); the clothes one is throwing me off.

[(snugclothes) loose shirt|kimono|bikini top] this can just be [snugclothes] but I want to refer specifically to the top portion of her outfits for the loose shirt and bikini. As with the loose shirt she still has pants on and the bikini still has the bottoms.

Doesn't really matter much for the kimono, but the other two outfits i'm pretty sure i mention removing them like this: [(snugclothes) slips off her tight leather pants, leaving her clad in only her white button-up shirt and matching colored panties|pulls up the hem of her kimono to expose her white panties to you|shifts her skimpy bikini bottoms]

>>336303

[(snugclothes) unbutton her loose-fitting shirt|take off her elegant kimono|slip her skimpy bikini top off] and [(snugclothes) slips off her tight leather pants, leaving her clad in only her white button-up shirt and matching colored panties|pulls up the hem of her kimono to expose her white panties to you|shifts her skimpy bikini bottoms] is fine then? I'm sorry, i really am trying to understand.


 No.336309

>>336305

>[(snugclothes) unbutton her loose-fitting shirt|take off her elegant kimono|slip her skimpy bikini top off] and [(snugclothes) slips off her tight leather pants, leaving her clad in only her white button-up shirt and matching colored panties|pulls up the hem of her kimono to expose her white panties to you|shifts her skimpy bikini bottoms] is fine then? I'm sorry, i really am trying to understand.

Yes, that's fine. Upon looking again, I realize that you don't use the exact same wording as much as I thought you did (there are variations I didn't notice at the time), so there's less need for a parser. However, it would allow you/future authors to shorthand in scenes where you just want to say "shirt/kimono/bikini," if you're so inclined. As for the non-standard ones, they'll be put through a function (meaning they'll be changed regardless), so the only thing you need to worry about is that they're always in the same order/number (you don't need to write the (snugclothes) part if you don't want to). I see a few times where you just have panties/bikini bottom, and that's fine, as I can easily understand what you mean there, but be careful that your intention is always clear. Sorry for the bullying earlier.


 No.336320

File: 0be128475531444⋯.jpg (24.85 KB, 447x469, 447:469, 133637782238.jpg)

>Decide to try this modpack out again

>Want to make chad Paladin who destroys thots

>Also want to experience all the new content which will mean fucking demons

>Spend 6 hours on the character creation screen being an indecisive fuck

Just end me. Please.


 No.336322

>>336320

Chad paladin who eventually falls to temptation and ends up fucking demons. Easy.


 No.336324

>>336301

wonder-cunny


 No.336325

>>336309

You don't need to apologize, I'm sorry that I was being difficult for no reason. I think i'm going to leave (snugclothes) there for now though, since it should make checking that i kept default clothes/kimono/bikini in the same order each time easier (pretty sure i did but never hurts to have a fast way to check for now). I have changed her hair and skin to have a parser now and noted it at the top: [snugskin] = fair or tanned [snughair] = black or blonde. i'll update the doc again in a bit after checking the order of her clothing.

I assume i'd want to use the parser if i'm referring to the whole outfit usually. something like "You remove Snuggles' [snugclothes] to leave her body completely bare." or something like that makes a lot of sense and understandably saves time. The variations is what made me uncertain of using the parser for her clothes.

plz no more bully

>>336320

Slacker turned chad knight is my go to personally.


 No.336326

>>336325

>TFW i always choose slacker because it is the origin i personally relate to

I personally call it lack of motivation desu, fighting demons and make them lick your cunny is more fun than counting turnips.


 No.336333

>>336325

I'd do that if not for the fact that the Paladin passive would become completely dead weight and I'd then have wasted one of my starting perks. And while I'm autistic when it comes to roleplaying, I'm also equally as autistic when it comes to minmaxing.

>>336322

I guess I can do something like that my first run and save the full on Deus Vult Paladin Chad for another run.


 No.336334

>>336333

Paladins can fuck demons without losing the bonus. Just have to be careful not to get too corrupt in the process.


 No.336335

>>336334

Well now I just feel stupid. Thanks for the heads up.


 No.336336

Probably irrelevant bug: Helspawn's internal stats seem to have been copied from Hel's, even when they shouldn't be. They have the same height (which oddly enough doesn't match up with either of their described heights), hair length and cup size (at the very least), but they obviously shouldn't based on their appearance screen.


 No.336341

File: b38aae48d2a22c4⋯.png (584.28 KB, 1204x594, 602:297, XPcuck.png)

just to prove it


 No.336344

>>336341

You haven't even recruited her?


 No.336345

>>336344

no do I need to?


 No.336347

>>336345

No I was just wondering, keep doing what you're doing.


 No.336348

>>336344

How do you recruit her? Asking for a dog.


 No.336350

>>336326

I like it for the narrative purpose. The guy who was a good for nothing sent as a sacrifice ends up luckily getting away from the first imp, then he bums around until he finds a reason to save the world and gets swole.

>>336333

>minmaxing

I can understand that, i still think the starting perks that affect spellcost or fatigue recovery are some of the best overall. Spells cost being less is great and quick fatigue recovery spd for physical or magic spam could be dangerously decent i'd imagine.

>>336348

Punch her a lot.


 No.336352

>>336336

And the eye color mentions that don't use her parser:

>you scoop up the giggling salamander, her red eyes widening

>She gasps, looking back at you with {Helspawn Eye color} eyes glazed over with lust

Maybe that one works, but it looks different from the rest so I'm mentioning it anyway.

>Her golden eyes glisten inches from your own

>With the flash of a smile you place your [hands] on [helspawn]'s hips and stare directly into her golden eyes


 No.336355

>>336352

>With your [cock] in hand you press your [cockhead] up against [helspawn]'s rear entrance. She swoons as you rub your slick cock against her pristine back entryway, your chest swelling with pride at how good her hygiene is.

Not related and not a bug, I just felt this was also something people needed to know about.


 No.336359

>>336352

There wasn't a parser for her eyes until two seconds ago, so please do report any instances where they're incorrect.


 No.336362

>>336334

it doesn't make much sense(and maybe I should make paladins gain corruption per fug to compensate) but I didn't want paladin characters to not access 99% of the content in the game.


 No.336366

>>336359

Looking at the latest commit, you missed the last one I mentioned.

And

>Whatever demonic properties in this weapon is gone now but it's still an effective weapon.

Whatever demonic properties were in this blade are gone now, but it's still an effective weapon.


 No.336375

File: e8a547889006676⋯.png (19.45 KB, 300x309, 100:103, 1517093063159.png)

Holy shit Ebonbloom are so fucking hard to get.


 No.336376

>>336366

Whatever demonic properties were in this blade are gone now, but it's still an effective weapon.


 No.336378

>>336350

Yeah, the fatigue related perks look really nice. Wish there was one that reduced the cost for physical attacks too since I'm a basic bitch that likes to hit things with weapons, but I'm greedy.


 No.336381

>>336376

Am I having a stroke, or are you?


 No.336384

>>336286

The least you could've done is screenshot the victory screen to show said XP gain and not be so confusing.


 No.336385

>>336266

you can remap hotkeys nigger.


 No.336386

>>336384

He literally did, what the fuck are you talking about?


 No.336390

File: 99d311dae95f391⋯.jpg (43.46 KB, 506x789, 506:789, 99d311dae95f39113fb02df5e9….jpg)

>>336386

All that the screenshot shows is that XP went up. It doesn't show the AMOUNT of XP gained in the fight. Anon should have provided a "before" picture so we could actually see the change in XP.


 No.336391

File: 7a4bd569d3a045b⋯.png (72.19 KB, 468x116, 117:29, 2e2afc796e99c0ae67670fcbc8….png)


 No.336392

File: 4816c9b20131b99⋯.png (70.48 KB, 468x116, 117:29, BlindorStupid.png)

>>336390

Are you blind or just stupid?


 No.336394

File: 0b28ad8bc371686⋯.jpg (659.34 KB, 2272x1704, 4:3, 13809b6e06e75ccd5f7b21190c….jpg)

>>336391

>>336392

Man I glaze over the after-fight text so often I completely missed that it tells you. My bad.


 No.336398

>>336219

ember also only gives 1 xp


 No.336409

>>336299

>Is pic related not enough?

It's a start.

>>336279

>>336280

Yes, well, I can't tattoo the PC, can I?

>What would the tattoos do? How would they work in terms of choosing the design?

You choose the ink which gives stat bonuses, an area for the the tattoo, and then write your own description.


 No.336417

Do futas still "accidentially" cum on your face?

Does the PC still do reach-arounds?

Is cuck finally removed, not just hidden behind "it's not NTR, it's just implied NTR!"


 No.336427

>>336417

>Do futas still "accidentially" cum on your face?

That's a risk you have to accept when you suck their cocks, anon.

>Does the PC still do reach-arounds?

If you make them.

>Is cuck finally removed

Most of it can be removed by disabling Urta.

>not just hidden behind "it's not NTR, it's just implied NTR!"

This has never been the case.


 No.336473

So here's Snuggles' store doc so far. Someone's going to need to double check this to be sure I didn't copy items we already have. I tend to not really gather too many items outside the ones I always use. So it's very possible the game has items that do this stuff.

https://pastebin.com/Mh9BjqeJ

It includes improving her store inventory through simple ways, as I didn't think it should be too complicated. I figured her store should be in tiers, 0, 1, 2, 3, and 4.

There's a lot of weapons in there, some are like rusted ones for when her store is crappy and others are unique for when her store is upgraded, a few swords, maces and other junk. I'm a little uncertain about the throwing knives, like whether they should be a consumable or primary. For now, i went with primary.

There's some robes for mages that i thought might be neat, don't know if we have something like them exactly already.

I'll take suggestions on them and if anyone has some neat little suggestions feel free.


 No.336476

File: 400733902418ea9⋯.png (34.72 KB, 911x390, 911:390, mage sprite.png)

i still have no clue how to manage the descriptions, some are scarce at best. I found a description for a concealing cloak, white scales and auburn eyes. if anyone has some description fo arian i missed do tell. I swear im not lazy, im just horrible at finding it. So heres the first draft of Arian. any critique and pointing to incorrections welcomes. Also who should be next on the list?

Not sure how often i can promise updates but i will do my best, atleast for the time being.


 No.336483

What's the deal with that katana you pick up from the boat? Is it actually useless or is there a way to unlock its power?


 No.336488

>>336483

>Useless

Nigga just try it


 No.336493

>>336476

In case you missed it in the previous thread >>334511


 No.336497

File: 5051d1ea4e42853⋯.png (215.76 KB, 989x347, 989:347, literally_been_one_hour.png)

is she supposed to keep repeating this dialogue every single time? I poked briefly at the source code and one of the comments makes it seem like it shouldn't


 No.336499

>>336497

I set my IQ to 0 instead of the tracker for that. Fixed.


 No.336511

>>334758

Is someone else having problem with Jojo not drinking the Bimbo Liqueur?


 No.336512

>>336511

Is someone else willing teach you English? May be you be reading changelog then, improve life quality.


 No.336513

>>336512

I can teach you portuguese and spanish, and you can help me improve my english. Later, though. Now i'd be glad if someone got the same problem.


 No.336514

>>336493

ah right, i forgot. will be updating that next time i make something. sorry


 No.336515

>>336513

Sadly, many people have the same problem where they can't read the changelog. It's basically an epidemic at this point.


 No.336529

File: b603eeb4880b0dd⋯.png (75.6 KB, 384x347, 384:347, strong and thick.png)

Is there a way to change dragon scale color so it isn't based on your skin color or do you have to change your skin color first then get the dragon scales? Please help a retard out.


 No.336539

>>336513

Everyone has that problem because it's been removed.


 No.336540

>>336539

Of course I say that as if it's actually a problem.


 No.336542

>>336529

Skin colour and scale colour are literally the same thing as far as the game is concerned, scales are just a different type of skin. There's no need to change the colour before getting scales though, unless you want a colour that only comes from some mutation that removes scales.

Skin oils are the easiest way, but plenty of transformatives can change your skin colour.


 No.336543

>>336529

>>336542

Unless you mean scales on a specific body part, instead of general scaly skin?


 No.336559

>>336542

>>336543

Nah, that's what I meant. And yeah, looks like the only way to get blue thus far is to go lizan. Thanks.


 No.336560

>>336559

Just use blue skin oil.


 No.336561

>>336560

I hate to ask 'where', but Rathazul is the only guy I know that sells them and he only sells basic skin colors. Unless there's a way to upgrade his stock and I'm just too much of a brainlet to figure it out.


 No.336562

>>336561

Capitalism


 No.336569

>>336562

Pretend for a moment that that I'm a full blown retard who doesn't know what that means because the last time they played CoC was a million years ago before this mod even existed. Because that's what I am, sorry.


 No.336570

>>336569

Rathazul sells 24 different types of skin oil.


 No.336572

>>336570

He's only selling the base skin colors for me so I guess that means I gotta do something to unlock it or I accidentally broke something. Guess I'll just have to fuck around and find out.


 No.336585

>>336473

>While primitive in appearance there's no doubt to its effectiveness at bludgeoning people to death.

Comma after appearance

>An old spear that likely belong to a now deceased solider

belonged

>its sharp enough

it's

>glowing orange ruins

runes

>It won't hurt the innocent as much.

I'm not sure "innocent" always works to mean "not corrupt", but maybe it is true. Is there anything with low corruption that attacks you unprovoked?

>A golden mace designed [if (silly) to praise|after] the all-powerful sun and smite darkness from the land.

That 'and' should be 'to' in the non-silly version.

>A black sword that is cover in countless barbs

covered

>A magic shield that helps the user regain their strength faster.

This might be pure pedantry, but I'd change 'strength' to something that isn't the literal name of an unrelated stat.


 No.336595

File: 0ce505c53d53e3f⋯.jpg (357.69 KB, 1000x1414, 500:707, feb5b5299a4712e4b8957e1fb6….jpg)

>>336585

Thank you for checking this.

>I'm not sure "innocent" always works to mean "not corrupt", but maybe it is true. Is there anything with low corruption that attacks you unprovoked?

I'm pretty sure a lot of enemies aren't corrupt and attack you anyway. Goblins aren't corrupt, I think.

Out of curiosity, does this read better for the sword description?

"A noble looking sword that is long and sharp enough to be effective at both thrusting and slashing. It appears to be made from an odd metal and is coated in blessed silver. The ruins that adorn the length of this glimmering blade occasionally glow orange, indicating some form of enchantment." Though it doesn't explain the damage penalty vs non-corrupt beings i think it reads better overall.

>That 'and' should be 'to' in the non-silly version.

So like this?: "A golden mace designed [if (silly) to praise|after] the all-powerful sun [and|to] smite darkness from the land."

>This might be pure pedantry, but I'd change 'strength' to something that isn't the literal name of an unrelated stat.

Changed it to this: "A magic shield that helps the user recover their fatigue faster."

Also added attack text for throwing knives, not sure if that's needed or not.

Attack text: You take one of your knives and throw it at your foe, with the blade [if (missed) regrettably flying past|painfully stabbing into] them.


 No.336607

File: 201b14c81d67aac⋯.jpg (69.48 KB, 1280x720, 16:9, 1480904687236.jpg)

>>335716

>>335606

I can completley brush off horse cocks, monster rape, ws, incest, tentacles, monsterwomen and all sorts, but for some reason stuff involving panties/clothes scents makes me feel like a skeevy weirdo. The fuck's wrong with my brain?


 No.336608

>>336607

New fetish i guess? Magical girl outfit fucking wen


 No.336626

Is Izma still suppose to charge you for reading the books when she is your follower?


 No.336644

Is the Opportunist perk chanced based or something? I've had it for a good bit now and every time something distances itself I don't get any new text or an option or anything, they just distance themselves.


 No.336645

>>336644

Nevermind, I didn't realize that they have to _succeed_ at distancing themselves, I kept chasing them


 No.336654

>>336619

Satan had that as a project idea once but he decided against it.


 No.336659

File: 650f3dd00700c4c⋯.jpg (17.31 KB, 260x273, 20:21, 650f3dd00700c4cb5f35915cf8….jpg)

Any good trap/shemale characters yet? Rubi has limited potential.

I'd write some stuff myself but free time isn't my forte.


 No.336661

File: ac6d1d0134bfab4⋯.jpg (82.84 KB, 564x1005, 188:335, d3e6bb744e4122eaa8c04c49e0….jpg)

>>336427

If a certain NPC is one action away from deep throating and womb-basking minotaur cum, then she's pretty much cucking you constantly by just existing. Elevate your quantum mind, Peanut.


 No.336684

Did a full playthrough and didn't encounter any new characters other than dullahan from months ago. What am I missing here?


 No.336685

>>336607

>stuff involving panties/clothes scents makes me feel like a skeevy weirdo.

Isn't part of the appeal of jerking off with a girl's worn panties her slight scent of sweat?

Honestly, i don't exactly know why you'd chose to jerk off with Snuggles' panties when you could just pound her whenever you wanted anyway.


 No.336698

>Spend the last thirty minutes trying to get the dragon face transformation

>Literally nothing

>Load up an old save of the vanilla game and also spend the next 30 minutes trying to get that face transformation with no dice

Don't know if this is a bug or if Ember actually has to be full dragon for you to proc that transformation, but this whole experience has taught me one thing and that's that I'm probably a closeted scalie.


 No.336699

>>336698

>Ember actually has to be full dragon for you to proc that transformation


 No.336701

>>336699

Really? Well shit. At least this gives me an excuse to start a new game and try something different instead of just cheesing most encounters with shield bash like a brainlet.


 No.336716

Is that loli encounter in tel'adre a one time thing?


 No.336719

>>336684

Lots. My favorite character is Changlelog-chan, she never gets enough love.

>>336716

Yes.


 No.336730

>>336719

>You will never drive changelog-chan to multiple orgasms by reading her contents slowly and carefully


 No.336732

What does no-fur mode actually do? Does it remove all the furry content, or does it replace it with a non-furry version, or what?


 No.336753

>>336736

Not even in the archives, the question's been answered in this very thread.


 No.336763

File: ba372827cebd0ed⋯.png (351.54 KB, 904x500, 226:125, gitgud.png)

Error in the text when Rathazul comments on Bimbo Sophie.


 No.336764

>>336763

It's a joke.


 No.336768

File: 8a05e13044715c0⋯.jpg (170.02 KB, 940x940, 1:1, 8a05e13044715c0873e4612ce0….jpg)

>>336764

Oh right, I remember seeing a note about a coding joke being somewhere in Silly Mode, guess that was it.


 No.336790

File: 401a5479e310485⋯.gif (998.3 KB, 250x251, 250:251, we_just_don't_know.gif)

>>336781

You'd need the IP count to answer that question. Semi-regulars, I'd estimate we've got about ~15 writers, ~3 spriters and the poor fucker/s that code and throw it all in the game. Then of course you have the lurkers and the ones that come and go.

Might be more, might be less. Check the credits if you're interested.


 No.336791

I just can't get into female Arian. That old man lizard sprout is a boner killer.


 No.336794

>>336790

>I'd estimate we've got about ~15 writers

Seems a bit high. We haven't gotten any new ones in a bit.


 No.336800

>>336781

All me, I do everything


 No.336801

File: cf1119751c220ee⋯.png (1.01 MB, 1275x900, 17:12, Don't_feed_the_Seagulls.png)

So I meme'd Akbal to death and turned him into a housecat. Went to my cabin to go play with him, and when I talked to him, it started a little event chain where he runs off to Sophie's nest and plays with the PC's daughter, with the option to join in.

Sweet scene, but my PC has no children and has done nothing lewd with Sophie. Seems the event chain didn't actually check if I had children with her.


 No.336803

>>336801

Fixed. I'd try to find out why I do these things, but they haven't made a 23.5 and me yet.


 No.336847

Where do I get Flameheart Spear you faggots?


 No.336853

>>336847

Go to the soup kitchen, they feed niggers like you there.


 No.336862

File: a3895718e3e1708⋯.png (214.28 KB, 534x644, 267:322, akky.png)

A minor akky bug: if he's not around when you click the pet button, his location doesn't call him by whatever you named him.

Helspawn footjob

>"It’s always so nice feeling your arms around me, Daddy”

She calls me Mom in every other mention.

>“Say, “Mommy”, do you think there’s anything a bit more… unconventional you’d like to try?”

Extra quotes around Mommy.

>You tell her your preference and she nods her head.

I'm guessing this was supposed to be only for herms, as it makes little sense in context.

Helspawn facesitting

>Sitting on top of her, you move your body forward and up to position your vulva above her face. Hovering over her, you position yourself so that your crotch is just above her mouth.

I think I'm only supposed to see one of these lines.

Helspawn lovemaking

>You hold onto her hips, fingers sliding over her smooth redscales, slowly moving your member in and out.

redscales, and I don't even have a member.


 No.336872

>>336862

>Extra quotes around Mommy.

Intentional on the author's part.

>I think I'm only supposed to see one of these lines.

Just a repetition issue.

>I'm guessing this was supposed to be only for herms, as it makes little sense in context.

Wasn't listed as such, but I can do that.

Thanks for the reports.


 No.336878

>>334759

Fixed that stuff, sorry for it being just a tiny bit late.

>>336872

>Intentional on the author's part.

It's actually not that'd be a fuckup of mine. The quotes should definitely disappear there.


 No.336887

File: 659bea6cc587b69⋯.png (379.97 KB, 915x584, 915:584, tempsnip.png)

Think this should be "Evelyn's horse".


 No.336889

>>336887

Delete that before everyone realizes they're the same person.


 No.336890

File: abc318838a8151a⋯.jpg (57.15 KB, 834x640, 417:320, cat_with_a_bat.jpg)

>>336889

If you're serious, I wouldn't have even begun to make any connection like that. I've yet to see anything that shows they're the same person. If you're shitposting, well done.


 No.336892

I feel like I should burn this onaflower at my camp, but I want to see if any of my children with dicks can make use of it.


 No.336896

File: c23845adeaef1c3⋯.png (132.84 KB, 912x181, 912:181, Helia.PNG)

Seems that something is missing here.


 No.336905

So how do I get Marble to build a Nursery? I've already built everything in Cabin and put up a wall +gate for camp.


 No.336906

>>336896

A space inbetween make and just


 No.336907

>>336896

The problem is "just like how cowgirls have addictive breastmilk" is written as narration instead of dialog. That's a spoken line the player character is supposed to be saying to Helia in response to her (semi-rhetorical) question.


 No.336920

>>336907

Was gonna say it's missing punctuation, but yeah it is suppose to be your dialog now that I read it.


 No.336929

>>336685

Like I said, I don't know why the fuck it appeals. Or why it feels weirder than the hundreds of other things in game.


 No.336942

>>336906

>>336907

>>336920

I hope at least two of you are trolling.


 No.337044


 No.337051

>>336595

question about knifes what are the stats going to be?


 No.337082

File: 219affdffb4ee16⋯.jpg (49.79 KB, 485x600, 97:120, 7daa.jpg)

>>337051

Dunno what numbers will actually be given to them, but I noted them to have: Type: Ranged, Attack: 4, Effect: base 30% chance to critically hit, 10% armor pen.

Pretty sure those numbers are kind of low, but I rather them not be insanely high. Might be nice for them to have some unique special move though. Maybe two if time stop magic ever becomes a thing.


 No.337083

>>337082

>Spoiler

There's some time stuff already in, and there's more being added next update.


 No.337084

>>337082

neat

>>337083

Wait what


 No.337090

File: b49d30176f0122e⋯.png (395.04 KB, 685x1066, 685:1066, b49d30176f0122e21bfbdfa057….png)

>Unlock Withering Touch

>Duration based on Spell Mod

>Spell Mod at 368%, have yet to see the spell end before the enemy dies

>just sit there refreshing Divine Wind every 3 turns and laughing as monsters with self-heal drop to -2000 HP when they try to heal themselves

It's fun to game the system like this. Doesn't work on bosses that recover in dialogue, but it makes all the monsters that normally have strong heals (Akbal, Corrupted Witch, etc.) basically kill themselves


 No.337094

>>337083

Searching timestop or time stop in the change log doesn't turn up anything.

What kind of time stuff we talking? I'm pretty sure the seamstress has a time stop shield, or at the very least one was written.

But i'd rather have pocket watches or stands.


 No.337100

>>337094

>LMAOOOOO PUNCH GHOSTS

Gay. The only stands i accept are either shouldra or the angel waifu.


 No.337103

File: 4817e2f47823ff9⋯.gif (2.33 MB, 460x259, 460:259, K9UjkaY.gif)

>>337100

>shouldra or the angel waifu.

I don't typically let trash into my body if I can help it.


 No.337106

>>337094

I didn't say there was a time stop ability in the game, I said there was time stuff.


 No.337111

>>334758

How do I restore my anal virginity without cheats?


 No.337114

>>337111

1. You save frequently and restore your last save

2. You save once in a while like a fucking loser and load your last save.

3. You make a new character and start from scratch.

4. You fucking kill yourself and stop shitting up this board.

These are your options, pick one, preferably 4.


 No.337117

>>336907

>>336920

I remember that being worded differently before. I also remember that someone on this board went on a fucking crusade to remove first-person dialogue of the PC. This is probably one of their fuckups.


 No.337118

File: 6e36b62a6a91a96⋯.png (331.83 KB, 480x524, 120:131, Crucify.png)

>>337111

>How do I restore that which cannot be restored

Don't stick things up your ass next time.


 No.337127

>>337103

No need for that as you are trash from the inside out


 No.337131

>>337090

Ok but why the fuck would you feel good about cheesing in fucking CoC


 No.337145

>>337111

get a new ass


 No.337147

File: 3e3e430e07e5891⋯.jpg (89.44 KB, 488x516, 122:129, 3e3 (2016_03_14 03_50_42 U….jpg)

>>337131

Because it's NG++, I've mastered every weapon Eldritch Staff + Dragonshell Shield is by far the winner, and I've murderboned these things enough that the combat itself is a chore.


 No.337407

???


 No.337418

What is this dev null niggerdly shit?


 No.337549

>>336896

fixed, my fuckup


 No.337569

File: abcae2b91e17a9d⋯.swf (9.44 KB, Sleep Not Working.swf)

I found a bug. Sleeping doesn't seem to work properly after either you build a bed in your cabin, or after day 100. I hit both milestones at the same time, so I don't know which is actually the cause. What happens is the button takes two clicks to go through, and you don't recover any fatigue from the act. Time passes normally however. Save attached, just press "Sleep" to see it.


 No.337573

Another bug, if you do the "Drinking" sex option after beating the futa kitsune in the deepwoods, after acquiring the warhammer it'll put you back into the "fight" screen with the kitsune down to 0 health, and then you can pick drinking again, etc, repeatable infinitely for infinite warhammers.


 No.337574

>>337569

I couldn't reproduce that with your save; it just works normally for me. Are you playing on the most recent version?

>>337573

Fixed, thanks.


 No.337575

>>337574

If the most recent version is 1.4.5, then yes. I've just reached day 115 now, and suddenly it's fixed itself. I'm highly confused.


 No.337579

File: e8908a814d1ccf1⋯.jpg (426.92 KB, 878x637, 878:637, peaches.jpg)

Peachy Keen

https://pastebin.com/vmGpvAzw

Wrote a short one-off scene where you find a fruit (not hard in this thread, but use your imagination) in the forest. I've also written that Dolores headpat variation, but I'm not spoiling it here. Anyway, taking another request this week, as I'm feeling particularly uninspired. Slight modification this time—it can be a bit longer than normal (e.g., requiring a couple small scenes rather than being one self-contained thing). Short ones are fine too, though.

>>337575

We've willingly invited Satan into our homes, this is the sort of black magic we get. I'll check around a bit, but I have no clue what's happening.


 No.337583

>>337579

Sleep With option for Helia where she sleeps with you nightly. As for the extended scenes part, write entirely new and seperate scenes where you can sleep with both Helia and Helspawn at the same time. You can collab the latter scenes with Lesbianon if you/she wants to who's doing a Sleep With option for Helspawn.


 No.337586

>>337579

>>337583

The logistics would be that it prompts you to sleep with both if you're already sleeping with either of them and try to sleep with the other. So it would need a scene of asking Helia when you're already sleeping with Helspawn, and the other way around as well. It could be locked behind something like making a king-sized bed for your cabin to properly accomodate your loving family, but that can always be done at a later time as a building incentive.


 No.337592

Started playing the hgg mod. Fucked Jojo once, now I can't again. Help I want my mouseboy


 No.337596

>>337592

Jojo sex scenes were disabled several builds back for quality control. If you want them back, I suggest you read the changelog in the OP, then download one of the builds from before Jojo's scenes were disabled.

This has been my one good deed for the year. Please do not make me regret it. → Read the OP.


 No.337597

>>337596

Bless, anon


 No.337611

What retarded bullshit is the fucking crystal in the old manor with 100k health and 300 max lust ?


 No.337612

>>337611

It's lethicite you fucking retard use your fucking brain.


 No.337616

>>335740

>The first companion you get is literally NTR cuck shit

What


 No.337637

>>337611

optional fight if you have a lust based build. Defeating it makes the final boss easier.


 No.337639

>>337583

>>337586

But Hel already has a sleep with option. You just hug her from 9 pm onwards.


 No.337642

>>337639

The only thing that has is a single nightmare she gets and

>You curl up next to Helia, planning to sleep for nine hours.

Appended to every time you sleep.

That also doesn't cover sleeping together with her and Helspawn.


 No.337645

>>337642

Expanding an existing option is fine, but I was asked to make a whole new scene that already exists, and I wasn't told which parts would need expansion.


 No.337647

>>337645

>and I wasn't told which parts would need expansion.

What's there is a single nightmare that keeps repeating over and over and that single line aside from the Cuddle option that enables it.

If you look at what Lesbianon did for Helspawn, roughly the same should be done for Helia, which is several (the more the better) small scenes where you turn in for the night and go to sleep with her, and an actual Sleep With option that's standalone from the cuddle as it's very restrictive and unlike other Sleep With scenes. Also still the family fun-time sleeping together with both Helia and Helspawn (potential father and lover variations also possible).


 No.337648

File: 4d03c1f8354076c⋯.jpg (72.59 KB, 625x833, 625:833, 4d03c1f8354076c4a84cd0c7e1….jpg)

>penis is an inch long

>can still fuck


 No.337653

>>337648

it just works


 No.337668

>>337648

It's like getting fucked by your thumb


 No.337678

>>337648

>penis 30 feet long

>can still fuck


 No.337688

>>337678

>Penis is 50 feet

>fuck constantly because it has achieved sentience and can't fight it's wishes because monopolizes all your blood supply


 No.337703

>>337668

My thumb is far longer than an inch, anon.


 No.337737

>>337612

if you're thinking a crystal that's supposed to be destroyed before a boss to weaken him should be harder to win than the boss itself is "good" and logical, you're the one being retarded.


 No.337739

>>337737

it's supposed to be easier to beat for lust builds(it has high max lust, but very little resistance) but not for raw damage builds, since they don't need the extra help anyway.


 No.337742

>>337737

It's vastly easier than the boss you brainlet. It's effortless if you're not retarded


 No.337744

>>337737

If it's more difficult than the boss for you, that means you have no need to destroy it. It's only there to help out with playstyles that would have little chance against the boss normally.


 No.337749

>>337737

What do you think the word "optional" means you fucking nob? And yes, it's "good" and "logical" IF you're using a build that the main boss itself is strong against, like others have pointed out.

Also, for the rest of you guys, anyone mind adding a third "never" button to the vagrant cats encounter in Tel'adre? Some people don't want to touch that story and getting interrupted with "intervene" or "get help" randomly every time you move around the city is pretty annoying.


 No.337762

>>337739

more like corrupt builds because the majority of the "lust" resist and damage perks are exclusive to high corruption, since i was playing a pure character (already maximum lust with a bit of resistance for available perks) this is annoying and becomes impossible.

30 lust gain per hit out of 120 maximum lust for normal builds is too much, as in 3-4 turns it's over and since dark magic spells can't be used until you have a bit of lust (50) it's too late to use them.

If i wanted to 100% the mansion without a corrupted PC, it's royally screwed over.

>>337742

Too bad i've recked the necromancer, and he did have an army of skeletons with bleeding effects, yet with potions like god mead i could keep up the HP but the lethicite ignoring lust resistance is stupid, it's not "vastly easier", it's easier for corrupt builds, genius but making a broken fight it's not "challenge", it's poor logic.

>>337744

It's just annoying to get beaten by a crystal that has huge lust damage when you have access to endgame abilities and was able to easily handle Lethice's minions and Lethice herself.

i wanted to 100% the mansion and destroy the crystal, only got it abusing the pure water to reduce the lust, and i could barely keep up around ever shifting 40-70 lust

>>337749

as i've said "optional" i wanted to 100% the mansion, so it includes the crystal, "nob", i don't give a fuck about the fact that boss it's "optional" , i wanted to complete the mansion with my pure character, so i should be able to without abusing cheats to defeat it.

>it's logical to make a subboss stronger than a main ending dungeon boss

no it's not, the fight should be accessible to lower lust characters, so it would make sense if it had 200 lust instead of 300.

The whole idea should making a lust option for lust related character like a divergent path, but shouldn't impact the 100% completion so it's up to the player's skills to match the boss.

The crystal is not, it just assumes that one plays a certain playstyle instead of leaving the player a choice how to handle this, for example a strength\corruption check.


 No.337764

>>337762

>it's not "vastly easier", it's easier for corrupt builds

Win in 2 turns with a non-corrupt lust build. Easily. Maybe you should stop being a complaining cuck. Corruption doesn't even help, you lunatic.

>I wanted to complete the mansion with my pure character

Just toss on some spellpower gear and cast Arouse. You win in one turn. You don't need to abuse cheats, you need to be less retarded. Hard, I know, but it's the way to do it. You're pretty goddamn stupid.


 No.337765

>>337764

Yeah, sure,

too bad i deal 20 lust damage to the crystal and 30 per spell attack, retard, but the monsters take instead 30 40 lust per normal arouse and 60-70 for my spell variant, it's easy to assume it's the crystal being broken.

So since to use the lust spell it requires 50 lust and i gain around 30 per hit, in 2 turns i'm "dead" with the crystal having only around 100 lust.

yes it does help retard, you have access to the high lust resistance perks, also gain passive lust damage (arousing aura)


 No.337766

>>337762

>but shouldn't impact the 100% completion

As far as the game is concerned it doesn't. If you want to make it into a personal challenge (but also don't want it to be challenging?), that's on you.

It sounds like all your problems would be solved if the crystal simply disappeared when the necromancer is defeated so you don't even have the option to fight it.


 No.337767

>>337765

>>337762

relax. Don't get triggered by a boss fight in a mod of a furry text porn game. I'll have a look at the crystal.


 No.337768

>>337766

I'm a completionist so i want to be sure not to miss anything and beat all bosses, getting all artifacts.

>having the crystal dissapear if you fight the necromancer first.

That's actually a good idea, for once.

>>337767

I'm not triggered, i just happen to dislike broken boss fights.


 No.337769

>>337768

I'll implement that and reduce the lust damage. There's still Arian's talisman to reduce lust though, that might have helped.


 No.337770

>>337768

>I'm a completionist so i want to be sure not to miss anything and beat all bosses, getting all artifacts.

That's great, but you also don't want it to be at all meaningful. If you can do everything easily, even when you're doing something you aren't intended to do and also doing it the wrong way, then "completion" becomes trivial and meaningless.


 No.337773

File: fa667252b31a351⋯.jpg (97.22 KB, 1024x595, 1024:595, mindflayer.jpg)

>>337762

>Lust build boss

>no it's not, the fight should be accessible to lower lust characters


 No.337784

>>337773

I just want to applaud this image.


 No.337786

>>337773

Did you burn your last brain cell to come up with such idiotic reasoning?

The necromancer is not a lust based boss, the crystal is, since in case i wanted to destroy it with my normal warrior character (to be 100%), i can't and have to use cheats to beat it so i suggested to lower lust gain to make it possible for non pure lust builds to be completionist, got it or too complicated for you?


 No.337787

>>337762

>>it's logical to make a subboss stronger than a main ending dungeon boss

<I'l put words in his mouth that he never said to try and make a point, that will show him!

Okay sure retard.


 No.337788

File: 7ca387dfafdd543⋯.png (606.21 KB, 1024x595, 1024:595, ClipboardImage.png)

>>337786

>Lust build boss

>no it's not, the fight should be accessible to lower lust characters


 No.337789

>>337787

>hurr not mah words

>>337788

nice try, bait


 No.337790

>>337789

The same argument has just been made twice; fuck coming up with a second reply when the first suffices.


 No.337792

Here's something that furfag Kitteh never could be assed to fix that could be something worth looking into. In vanilla CoC, Shouldra should only appear after you found both Equipment Racks in the Town Ruins area. Yet the fucking faggot put in a Shield Rack because of the whole shield mechanic in the mod, yet forgot to set Shouldra to check if all 3 racks are found, and appears even if you only have 2 out of "all", and for some dumbfuck reason you have a higher than normal chance to find the shield rack first over the normal 2. Could someone check that and possibly fix it?


 No.337793

>>337792

How does this pose a problem?


 No.337794

>>337792

This is a problem why?


 No.337795

>>337793

>>337794

Fighting the body inflation fetish ghost 40 times "before" you're even "supposed to" meet her just to get that stupid third rack gets boring, and is also something that wasn't broken before the mod fucked it up. It doesn't require a new scene, or even that much effort to fix beyond maybe a line of code that the furfag mod author forgot to check over. If we're going for bugs and consistencies, at least let's actually go for consistency.


 No.337796

>>337795

The what?


 No.337798

>>337796

Shouldra.


 No.337817

>>337798

You fight her when she has not appeared yet?


 No.337823

This was a few versions ago, but I seem to remember destroying the crystal with a pure character once. It was hard as balls and it took several in-game days of preparation to do, and my main complaint is that there's no further reward other than making the necromancer boss easier. Felt like a huge waste of time.

Something that hard to beat either needs to be toned down a little, or have something more rewarding to players for beating it, especially if you already beat the necromancer. Even just dropping a couple Lethicite would be nice since that's a rather rare item (either that or I don't know where to look)


 No.337826

>>337823

I actually had the idea of making it drop lethicite, but the overall consensus was that the dungeon is a bit too dense with rewards as it is.

I toned down the lust gain a bit. I might tone the max lust to 250 too, not sure.


 No.337828

>>337817

>Fighting the body inflation fetish ghost 40 times "before" you're even "supposed to" meet her

Reading comprehension.


 No.337830

What the fuck are these giant pumpkin seeds? I'm scared to eat them, but that stat boost though. I noticed that I got the thanksgiving event. I assume that seasonal events are all enabled and the pumpkin seed is related to halloween?


 No.337831

>>337830

pumpkin seeds are a way to access halloween events outside of halloween.


 No.337832

I was excited for personal onaplant at camp, then time passed and it became a dumb addition.


 No.337840

>>337823

I got my pure character, decked out in some spellpower gear, and beat the crystal extremely easily with the arouse spell. It's not hard, it's trivial. We don't need it to be easier, we just need to ignore everybody that complains about it


 No.337841

>>337831

Oh cool, thanks. That's pretty neat.


 No.337842

>>337840

I personally find the complaints hard to ignore, as rare as they are, because I'm not exactly an experienced game developer so I have no idea if what I'm doing is right or not.


 No.337846

>>337842

The crystal fight was fine. If you're not a lust build or can't be arsed to pump yourself up for the fight, then it's not for you and it's as simple as that. You don't need to accommodate dumbass self-proclaimed completionists who can't be bothered to actually play the game. I defeated the crystal on a non-lust build character with nothing but spellpower and magic, and I wasn't even overleveled/powered.

>I personally find the complaints hard to ignore

That's pretty evident. Every time someone complains something is hard it gets nerfed to shit to make it a cakewalk.

Honestly, I'd say revert the change and what will be will be.


 No.337851

>>337846

hm, I reduced the amount of lust-resistance-reducible damage the crystal deals but added another bit of damage(3-8) that can't be resisted, kinda like the corrupted aura perk.


 No.337852

>>337842

Crystal fight is pretty obvious how to defeat. If one isn't aware of different tactics by that point of the game, it is their own fault for either not knowing, or willfully ignoring. I do disagree with it not dropping lethicite, though. If you live for a dickload of years, it should be reasonable to expect that one will have tons of cool loot.


 No.337853

>>337852

>If one isn't aware of different tactics by that point of the game, it is their own fault for either not knowing

Why would someone know the correct tactic if they have never fought it before?

This is the biggest problem with gimmick bosses. If you give players enough to time to mess around and figure out what does work, you can't lose unless you're an idiot. If you don't, losing because you didn't try the right one quick enough is frustrating.

I don't remember which side this particular boss falls on, but the doppelganger always gets me the first time because I never remember what you're supposed to use.


 No.337855

>>337853

the crystal is pretty obvious because he has max armor and 100k health.


 No.337858

>>337855

>the crystal is pretty obvious because he has max armor and 100k health.

>he

That's going straight into the lore bible.


 No.337859

>>337855

shitloads of HP and compartively fuck-all max lust. It's really obvious.


 No.337860

File: b68f194e575b760⋯.gif (478.72 KB, 300x226, 150:113, 1359069939898.gif)

>>337858

add this to the lore bible: it was born a woman


 No.337865

Does Iron Fists boost ALL physical attacks or just punching?


 No.337866

>>337860

Done. Now I just need to know what he tastes like if you licked it to finish his entry.


 No.337867

>>337866

salty millk and coins


 No.337945

>>337855

>>337859

Well excuse me for not thinking in pure terms of crunch, because the way I thought of the fight it made no logical sense to try seduce a huge lump of crystals. Not even a crystal golem in the shape of a big-busted woman, just a literal giant crystal a-la Final Fantasy or Bravely Default.

Maybe if there was some hint lore-wise somewhere that this thing can be defeated through lust there'd be a lot less complaints.


 No.337946

>>337865

should be just punching.


 No.337948

>>337945

>thinking anything oca does is with lore in mind

OH MAN. I admit I may have been unconsciously looking at it from a mechanics perspective instead of lore because I already know oca doesn't think about that stuff. You do have me there. I completely admit I didn't even consider that.

That said, still feels pretty fucking obvious.


 No.337949

File: 48d2fdfebe715f6⋯.jpg (27.89 KB, 375x375, 1:1, 48d2fdfebe715f61fb41f2e079….jpg)

>>337945

>Maybe if there was some hint lore-wise somewhere that this thing can be defeated through lust there'd be a lot less complaints.

>is the only one complaining on this much of an autistic level in this thread and since its implementation

Yeah man, whatever you say.


 No.337950

>>337945

Just admit you can't into critical thinking, anon. Unga bunga fighting works in a lot of places in the game, but when a giant crystal is assaulting you with sexual magicks, as opposed to just slam jamming like the living statue, it should not require having read some book in Tel'Aldre about how you should try using pleasure techniques to beat an object created when one gives up their humanity for pleasure.


 No.337952

>>337949

>>337950

Sorry to break it to you guys, but I'm not even that same anon as before.

By the way, is there any good way of gathering Lethicite? There's a staff Rathezul can craft but I can't seem to find anything other than from that "pure" goblin warrior girl that pops up every now and then in the late-game.


 No.337954

>>337952

the staff is currently impossible to get considering that the only drop for lethicite was the now-removed priscilla.

we're thinking about possible sources for it right now. I'm of the position that grinding is bad so I don't want to set it as a 0.01% drop chance from a random enemy like it was before.


 No.337957

>>337954

Is there a lore reason you can't use part of Marae's lethicite to make it? We know Rath can work with it since he does the thorn shell.

Doesn't help for pure champions, but it seems like an obvious alternative for some characters.


 No.337958

>>337954

If the enemy is a demon and not just a morph, why not have a chance for them to drop? Purging demons should net something, seeing as that was the whole premise of getting to Mareth. I was pretty annoyed that Sheila flaunts her multiple lethicite, but I have to try and outspeed a goddess to have a chance of getting one.


 No.337960

>>337958

I don't think it would make sense for weaker demons to be carrying it around.


 No.337961

>>337960

yeah, any weaker demon would just immediately eat it if they get their hands on lethicite.


 No.337962

File: ec91b5f2e352302⋯.jpg (54.39 KB, 542x783, 542:783, januari_februari.jpg)

Now, as drunk as I can possibly get, first request I get, I write.

Also you're welcome to ask stuff or make suggestions about Ana while I'm here


 No.337963

>>337960

>>337961

Fair enough.

>>337962

Marble and Isabella double blowjob.


 No.337966

>>337963

What a waste.


 No.337967

File: 66e187ad8114c2d⋯.jpg (32.71 KB, 448x380, 112:95, letstryit.jpg)

>>337963

Why would they do that? I cannot fathom such a line of reasoning that would lead them to double blowjob. They may be both cow girls, but they don't have any real connection between them.

But no one else is requesting anything, so I guess I'll indulge you.

Marble + Isabella double blowjob

https://pastebin.com/r3zDMX2z


 No.337969

File: d371a22bbec4171⋯.png (629.18 KB, 1280x1641, 1280:1641, Bunbun.png)

>>337967

I missed my chance to suggest an expansion for Easter bunny content.

My shame is immeasurable.


 No.337971

>>337967

>no one else is requesting anything

It's all your fault, Stan. You posted just when I was away.

Admittedly I was just going to request a scene of a girl of your choosing being forced to climax entirely too many times trough a combination of lust drafts and arousal magic. But I'd like to think that's better than just a double blowjob.


 No.337972

>>337967

What better way to make connections with each other, than with a saltlick made of penis? Although contests over whose milk is superior would have been better idea.


 No.337973

>>337967

I had thought it was a reasonable request because I never did Isabella's content so i didn't request something late.


 No.337974

>>337962

>>337967

A semi-rare scene where you encounter a Hellmouth in the volcanic crag. The twist is that when she spots you, she starts opening her mouth before the fight starts to cough up an imp. You get the choice to wait it out and start the fight against her and the imp right from the start, or to sprint up to her with medium speed and hold her mouth closed with medium strength.

Then she'll either start giving you puppy eyes or tearing up a little, after which you can let her go if she promises to not be a bully and fight you. Of course with the choice of sex afterwards ensuing, either just present her sex menu, or write if you're up for it a more intimate sex scene with her where she hugs and holds you tightly while you fuck her in the pussy.


 No.337979

File: b7c486a8eaa7f50⋯.png (903.23 KB, 1080x1127, 1080:1127, 1484239346536.png)

What does Whitney do with all the semen she gets from the cock milker?


 No.337980

File: 703e164b66dd151⋯.png (265.07 KB, 429x387, 143:129, 2f11601fe4175da224ccaa621d….png)

>>337969

The ditzy retard in the plains that ejaculates eggs? Neon pink eggs, for that matter?

Why are you such a waste of space?

>>337971

Sounds too vague anyway

>>337972

Milk related interactions sounds like something with some traction. Could work. I don't know either of these characters or the properties of their milk enough for that though.

>>337974

Sure. Here's hoping a genuine attempt at writing doesn't turn out too terribly in my present state.

Hellmouth gets squelched

https://pastebin.com/Sn4wu0EQ

>>337979

Ferments it in sugar until it becomes cum wine, then drinks it. All of it.


 No.337981

>>337979

There's a thriving market, I'm sure. Considering the minotaur chef cooks with spooge, there is probably an entire culinary school for it.

The real question is who she would sell it to, since there's fuck-all in terms of non-corrupt places she'd be able to get to.


 No.337982

File: 2abafdfc00dcde7⋯.jpg (161.85 KB, 1191x1684, 1191:1684, How viera wear black mage ….jpg)

>>337980

I meant expansion as in doing something actually good with the character. De-dicking them entirely would be the preferred thing, but that would probably be more effort than a one-shot scene.

My idea was going to be that you catch one hiding eggs around the campsite for your kids to find (because easter egg hunts) and you could either help her, shoo her away, or fuck her into the ground and then give her the boot. In the morning, your kids find a few eggs and start the hunt in earnest. Depending on how many kids you have, you'd end up with either a handful of eggs or a small mountain. None of them are transformatives, but they're all brightly decorated or made of chocolate.


 No.337988

>>337982

In addition to the fact that that's a lot more than a one-off scene, that's also not what you asked for.


 No.337990

>>337988

Well, yeah. Removing dicks from futas is a feature, not a writing prompt. I only mentioned that because Satan assumed my tastes and insulted me by thinking I liked them in their current state.


 No.337991

>>337967

Bravo.


 No.337992

>>337990

Well you asked for writing in their current state, fag.


 No.337993

I don't get the obsession with dedicking futas.


 No.337994

>>337993

I don't get why you're so homosexual. Do you think it was your genes, or was there some seminal episode that made you a faggot?


 No.337995

>>337980

A couple corrections for consideration:

Plural and word choice/spelling at 11:

>clasp her jaw shut

jaw → jaws, or you could swap jaw for maw, I suppose.

>She wines

wines → whines


 No.337998

>>337992

The dick would only come up if you actually picked the "fuck the rabbit" option. And even then, that's something easily tweaked if they ever get out of their current state.

I'd fix them myself if I could write worth a tinker's damn.


 No.337999

>>337995

>jaw → jaws, or you could swap jaw for maw, I suppose.

The "jaws" plural generally isn't used in situations like that.


 No.338002

>>335949

A couple corrections for the One-off Scenes:

At 6:

>Your endurance help greatly

help → helps

At 12:

>more treacherous that you had thought.

that → than


 No.338004

File: ef5fd3b1ac31c44⋯.png (91.28 KB, 369x391, 369:391, frey.png)

>>337981

>>337980

Unfortunately I've misplaced my 'freya drinking from a mug' reaction image to go with a discussion about gokkun, because I am a retard.

If she doesn't keep it for herself, which she might, I imagine goblins would be all over it. Maybe she uses it to pay them off & that's why she only ever has trouble with imps. Maybe she sells it to a resaler who goes to Teladre or the Bazaar.


 No.338007

File: 757251579b5be8d⋯.jpg (220.44 KB, 531x600, 177:200, You whackin' it to fairies….jpg)

>>338004

She could also "sell" it to fairies.


 No.338009

>>338007

What is their society like? Do they even have gems to buy stuff with?


 No.338010

>>338007

Whitney as a drug-pusher? Doesn't seem in-character for her, not unless the Champion's gone and corrupted the farm anyway.

>>338004

Didn't she mention using the Cock Milker 'produce' to inseminate livestock? It shouldn't work, but considering that some transformatives can turn humans into feral animals, it may be her 'livestock' is actually former humans. Now that I think on it, there's even a Farm - Explore scene where a cow gives you a look that suggests just that.

Or maybe there's hand-wave-y magic involved to make it work. Lore only knows.


 No.338012

>>338010

Breeding between species should not even work on the first place doesn't it? Just consider the thought that this might open the can of getting pregnant with feral animals.


 No.338013

>>338009

Well, they're fairies. Who knows what they find. Gems, fruits, trouble…

The list goes on.

>>338010

True.


 No.338016

>>338012

Anything is possible with enough goblin help. They'll figure out how to transcend any species barrier, if it gets them knocked up.


 No.338017

>>337817

She is SUPPOSED to appear AFTER you collect ALL Equipment Racks in the TOWN RUINS. The bug that kitteh made but never fixed is that the mod's new Shield Rack breaks the "ALL Equipment Racks" prerequisite, making her appear BEFORE you have ALL of them. All i ask for is for this to be corrected.


 No.338018

Does anyone else think the power scaling on the enemies is kind of fucked? The demon queen that is considered the big bad boss is absolutely minuscule when compared to the skeleton gang in some random manor and the random skeleton gang in some shitty manor is minuscule in comparison to a retarded literally who golem that does literally nothing but stomp around in what used to easily be the dullest area in the game due to how little content it had.


 No.338020

>>338010

True, but she only has like one barn full of cattle & maybe one mare. I don't know how efficient her artificial insemination techniques are but I doubt she's expanding the herd so aggressively she's using everything she has for that purpose. And unless there's something in the TF badends that I don't know about- which is possible because I've never seen them- they'd still have pregnancy rules like the player does which is SUPER fucking weird to think about.


 No.338022

>>338018

And the random goon enemies themselves are pretty fucked as well. For example, a giant minotaur with an axe is weaker than a goblin with a shitty wooden shield or a dumb bimbo harpy.


 No.338024

>>338020

Eh, point taken; I'm probably overthinking it. Mareth is a place where mind alteration, body transformation, and cross-species impregnation are all cannon.


 No.338030

>>338022

>Dumb bimbo harpy

That's just sophie but all harpies have THE HIGH GROUND and knifes as toes


 No.338031

>>338030

One of my daughters with Sophie had human feet, instead of talons.


 No.338032

>>338031

That kinda is a exception to the rule SPECIALLY when human genetics being what they are on setting


 No.338036

>>335606

It's been a few days since I've been able to read through the thread properly, and what do I find? Panties.

I'm okay this. Here's some suggestions for Snuggles' panty scenes to add to my fellow anons' earlier work.

Minor corrections at 273 and 277. These are comments, not in-game text, so this is just for tidy bookkeeping:

>//PC tires to spank

tires → tries

>wearing the skimp bikini

skimp → skimpy

At 286:

>Your lover doesn't wait for an answer, instead she leisurely

, → ;

At 288:

> excite you or is it

Comma after 'you'

>they belong to a [if (pc teen/child) adorable | young]

This could read as 'a adorable' when it should be 'an adorable'.

I believe you need a hyphen at 290:

>naughty smelling

<naughty-smelling

At 295:

>breaks the smooch apart

An odd mental image there … I take it you mean the 'smooch' ends as the Champion and Snuggles move apart, but it reads like the 'smooch' is being broken into pieces. You can probably remove 'apart' to avoid that.

At 299:

>Perhaps you can use them to masturbate soon if you want,

Something about this sentence reads awkwardly, like words are unnecessary or out of order. I'm not sure how to express it, but here are a few suggestions:

<You can use them to masturbate soon, if you want,

<Perhaps you can use them to masturbate, if you want,

<If you want, you can use them to masturbate,

At 305:

>She then breaks the kiss she was sharing with you apart,

Same mental image as from 295; removing 'apart' corrects it.

>saliva from mouth her

Transpose 'mouth her' → 'her mouth'

At 313:

>after glow

In this context it's one word: afterglow

At 318:

>Hmm… I don't recall these stains being here…? must be me imagining things

This seems to be musing aloud rather than a question. Whether it's a question or not, a new and complete sentence is begun after the ellipses, so 'must' should be capitalized. How does this read to you:

<Hmm… I don't recall these stains being here… Must be me imagining things


 No.338050

File: 20713a7c5b970da⋯.jpg (626.46 KB, 800x1200, 2:3, 1555753288895.jpg)

I haven't played for quite a while. How much bunny girl content is there?

And what more can be added? I kinda feel like doing some bunny girl scenes.


 No.338051

Is the Woods the only date you can take Dullahan on? or have i just not unlocked anything else?


 No.338055

>>335110

Don't Gnolls in the plains have some sort of "elongated labia" or whatever? Some sort of semidickvagina thing they can fuck you with that's not actually a dick?


 No.338066

>>338055

Hyena pseudophallus, yeah. Bit of a "stranger than fiction" sort of thing though, so wouldn't work too well on a widespread basis.

Really though I just want to see more clit-fucking.

>>338051

As far as I can tell yes, sadly.

I desperately need a way to defy the evil magic and knock her up, she's one of my favorite characters

(also if whoever is in charge of her is around, a WS scene or two with her would also be much appreciated~)


 No.338069

>>338055

Giant clit != taildick, though.


 No.338103

File: 8520b521cfd7551⋯.jpg (36.61 KB, 291x400, 291:400, jack.jpg)

>>338036

>breaks the smooch apart

Changed to: 'She then pulls her lips away and gives you a wink'

>She then breaks the kiss she was sharing with you apart,

Changed to: She then pulls her lips away from yours, a strand of her saliva still connecting you together.

I also went and checked the doc of other instances of breaking a kiss apart and changed those as well.

>Perhaps you can use them to masturbate soon if you want,

'If you desire, you can use these to masturbate,' is what i went with.

Hopefully the people who like to do things with a girl's underwear will be slightly pleased at least. Also, thank you for your corrections, I appreciate it. I'll update the doc once I do a few more camp events, I've only finished the store building stuff at the moment.

On a side note: I need to figure out something to do with Smiles at camp, it'd be nice for her to have some utility beyond sex and being smol. Was thinking potion making, take her out into the woods or other places to gather ingredients so she can create them.

Or turn her into a someone who loves stabbing things, though having another glade killer/camp guard seems unnecessary.


 No.338106

File: f6ea429e0d52fe3⋯.jpg (604.72 KB, 1374x752, 687:376, soon.jpg)

https://pastebin.com/R0y2xebF

Finished revising Marielle's intro. Nothing fundamentally different, but more choices to break the monotony of its length, less sanguine insanity, a hopefully better flow, her speech is now the pseudo-archaic mess I had in mind, and a couple of additional details here and there for flavour.

I might add a few more stat-based variations, but other than that, I can now devote myself to pastes that probably won't need as much work as this one.


 No.338107

>>338066

I technically am in charge of her(original writer),but the dates weren't my work.

There's actually more work from the woods date writer to implement, I've just not gotten around to it.


 No.338109

>>338018

well, the general consensus was that shit was too easy, so when I started adding shit I generally focused on making it harder than what we had.


 No.338121

>>338106

Define 'Sanguine Insanity', i'm curious.


 No.338127

>>338109

Maybe putting Difficulty overhaul or something like that on the bounty board would be a good idea.


 No.338129

>>338127

Well Koraeli's had that planned for some time now. I doubt a bounty board entry would do anything, the only things that have gotten done from there are short writing tasks.


 No.338132

>>338129

>Koraeli

Bless that madlad.

>I doubt a bounty board entry would do anything

Probably but it is the thought that counts


 No.338136

>>335118

>wearing valeria is a bad idea because of terrible stats

Isn't she the best armor in the game?


 No.338137

>>338136

Not at all.


 No.338139

>>338121

Less bloody murder that's there just for the sake of it. It was a little excessive before, even for me.


 No.338140

>>337980

Notes:

>You aren't sure what or where, but the instinct to put your guard up has come to the forefront.

The "what" and "where" don't have anything in the sentence to link up to.

>left to leave

Not a fan of that.

>She wines,

"Winces" or "whines"?

>Her sad eyes, seeking such pity

"Such" definitely doesn't work here.


 No.338141

>>338002

Appreciated, fixed those.


 No.338155

>>338136

She used to be, in vanilla. But even in regular revamp mod there's better, and in this mod, even beyond.


 No.338164

Why aren't there any orcs? They even have a bunch of info in the codex.


 No.338165

>>338164

Pretty sure there's one orc.


 No.338167


 No.338170

>>338165

that ork makes me feel fuzzy on the head for some reason


 No.338171

>>338170

makes me feel disgusted and resentful.


 No.338174

>>338171

Not in a Fuck he is hot but more of What a nice guy


 No.338200

>>338050

There's the rabbit futa in the plains that you can fuck in one of several ways, and there's the encounter with said futa who's got a cockring on that's resulted in ballsack inflation. That's pretty much it, to my recollection.

Honestly you can only go upwards from where they are currently.


 No.338202

>>338200

There's also Loppe, who is pretty much what you'd expect from a tel'adre character, and that trap at the bazaar.

Anything would help.


 No.338206

>>338202

Oh right, the other rabbit futa, except this time with horsedick.

And I'll admit I never paid much attention to the trap, so he did slip my mind.


 No.338236

I noticed that I can use a "Lolipop" on Ember's egg. I think I know what that does, but where do I get a lolipop?


 No.338237

>>338236

Deep forest.


 No.338267

File: 88a1d65f92e330a⋯.png (342.12 KB, 850x611, 850:611, ClipboardImage.png)

Helia and Helspawn Hibernation

https://pastebin.com/wGSV08VP

Alright, wrote the sleep with option and the sleeping scenes for Helia, as well as the scenes for sleeping with both salamanders at once. The option on Helspawn's side is being written by Lesbianon, so look forward to that with her other Helspawn sleep stuff.


 No.338270

>>338267

Cool beans. How long until I can sleep with isabelle?


 No.338279

File: 341b918a185f33f⋯.png (590.42 KB, 641x354, 641:354, living with helspawn.png)

Finished up the mommy half of fucking your slutty salamander: https://pastebin.com/CcQVHaAi

>>334806

>>334951

Fixed these I think


 No.338281

>>338267

>Thankfully, the sleeping salamander seems to react to your presence, easily allowing you get into

Into what?What am I getting into?

>Sounds like a great idea, love mine.

lover


 No.338288

I regret sissifying erlking. He pops up literally half the time. Do I kill him?


 No.338289

>>338288

I regret that there isn't an option to make him a her completely, and keep her in your camp like an exotic pet.


 No.338291

>>338267

This is cute.

>[say: Hey, stop hogging [if (hel incest) him|

[him]

>When she finally manages to get it off, she pushes you down and back

Missing the ending punctuation.


 No.338293

>>338289

>more dumb useless shit in your camp

No thanks, gayboy.


 No.338296

>>338281

>>338291

Thanks, don't know why I keep forgetting to finish sentences.

>>338270

Until someone writes it.


 No.338298

>>338267

I like the scenes a lot, but there's one thing that slightly bothers me. If non-incest Helspawn it's all about family, and incest Helspawn is all about lewd here. Helspawn in general focuses on your parental bond with her, would you mind terribly if the incest variants are slightly altered to include both lewd and family love?

>>338279

Even more Helspawn, what a lovely day.


 No.338300

>>338293

I'd argue liking a trap is gayer, but you're right, the camp is relatively crowded.


 No.338304

>>338267

And here is the option on Helspawn's side. https://pastebin.com/raw/kFHWFrd9


 No.338311

I like that I can raise Helspawn into a pure daughteru that I will not touch sexually. Am I missing out?


 No.338312

>>338311

Helspawn will always be inferior to your self-conscious tigershark children.


 No.338314

>>338311

Yes, yes you are, but if incest with your best daughter-waifu isn't your thing, don't worry about.


 No.338317

>>338298

I can look into that, yeah. The scenes are pretty short though, so you can't put everything everywhere.

>>338304

Thanks, can you also do a scene for asking her to stop while you're all sleeping together? Unless the normal one works.


 No.338318

>>338237

Ok maybe I'm a dumbass but I've been fucking around the deepwoods periodically for hours and no lolipop. My gut says it has to do with the Alice encounter. Do I have to kill one of them?


 No.338319

>>338311

The original scene got silly-moded out for some reason, but I thought it was breddy gud. Kind of a pain in the ass to switch sillymode on and off to either see the scene or not see Kiha talk like fucking Steve Urkel.


 No.338321

>>338317

I think the normal one should work but if you disagree just say so.


 No.338326

>>338318

Fuck, I finally got one off an Alice. I must have just been really unlucky.


 No.338328

>>338326

Good job, anon. You actually played the game to find something out for yourself instead of being one of the countless faggots who want the thread to play it for them. Lolipops aren't stupidly rare drops from alices, so the unlucky part holds. There's another source for them also including an alice, so keep your wits about you as you discover more and play through the game.


 No.338335

>>338328

>aren't stupidly rare drops

My 10:1 ratio of succubi delight to lollipops says otherwise. Not counting the no items at all drops.


 No.338338

>>338326

They also come from fox boxes. They're rare but you can savescum.


 No.338339

File: ccb51be8e4c541d⋯.jpg (179.52 KB, 850x1202, 425:601, sample_b30ea8c85ac1852b72c….jpg)

>>338167

Since he just wants the dick anyway, could he be convinced to go girl?


 No.338340

>>338338

Can't you just ask Ceraph for one? Or is that liddelium? (Been a while since i didn't kill her)


 No.338342

>>338339

I'm not entirely sure it works like that. Why not just an original orc character?


 No.338343

>>338339

He's gay, not a tranny.


 No.338345

>>338343

Please use words appropriately. There are complete biology changing edible items in the game. You can't be a "tranny."


 No.338346

>>338343

Then you'd be curing him while still giving him what he wants.

>>338345

Isn't trannyism all about making up words and muddying language to be a giant attention whore? I'm sure it's still possible.


 No.338347

>>338345

Please hang yourself.


 No.338348

>>338304

>it might be nice for all three of you to sleep together. You are a family, after all. You suggest to [helspawn] that it might be nice

>for all three of you to sleep together. You are a family, after all. You suggest to [helspawn] that it might be nice for all three of you to sleep together

>and [if (slutspawn) she grins approvingly.|smiles happily.]

Move the "she" outside the conditional.

>| Sleep

Remove the space (it'd end up going right after the opening quotation mark).

>That sounds like it would be really nice!

Mild repetition with the earlier "might be nice".

>really nice! I really

People do talk like that, though, so I dunno.

>[Dad.]

Move the period outside and make it a comma.

>[say: I can't wait, [Daddy]

Period

And yeah, your current no sleep option works for this. Is there something you were still planning to add to it? It's in WIP in the chronicles.

>>338298

Alright, I've added a bit to those scenes. The second one was always completely family-based, and I've added mentions of family/love to the others.


 No.338365

>>338348

This might add a possibility for a threesome with Helspawn and Helia.

Related, Chastespawn incest defloration/sex when?


 No.338373

>>338335

>My 10:1 ratio of succubi delight to lollipops says otherwise.

That's pretty bad luck. 20% chance of lolipop, 30% chance of succubi's delight, 50% chance of nothing.


 No.338444

Anyone else think it's weird there's even furries in this game? The setting and theme feels like it caters a lot more towards mythological creatures, deities, and monsters.


 No.338446

>>338444

furbux means everything must cater to furries


 No.338447

>>338444

furry was the true corruption all along


 No.338449


 No.338450

File: 52de7c0285b801c⋯.png (340.27 KB, 800x807, 800:807, 1534554890525.png)

Why hasn't anyone fixed the mess that is the frog girl? She is definitely one of the most infuriating "enemies" in the game. You don't get the chance to fight her no matter what and all she does is either mindfuck and impregnate you, try to shove her problems on to you by playing the pity card, or tell you that you're a worthless scumbag and that she's better than you before instantly knocking you out.


 No.338451

File: 10217234a6b3828⋯.png (284.59 KB, 540x380, 27:19, Harold.png)

>>338450

if people really want to I'm sure either myself or satan could write a kill scene for her. If nothing else it would allow players to remove an encounter from the pool there.


 No.338453

>Go to fuck Yamata

>PLACEHOLDER TO FUCK YAMATA

Something tells me Yamata's content isn't finished.


 No.338454

>>338453

Also just noticed the humiliate option for fighting Aiko doesn't have anything show up. Not sure if it's a bug or if it's just another thing that's missing content.


 No.338456

>>338453

>Aiko

>Finished

Funny


 No.338457

>>338453

Kitteh's denial fetish drives him to never let anything in his mod be finished.

>>338454

Just checked, and it worked for me. What's your genital situation (i.e., number and size of various things)? Would help narrowing down the issue, as the scene's a fucking mess to look at.


 No.338458

So with all the loli content that's being added, is there any chance there will be incest sex scenes for Amily and Sophie's kids before they grow up?


 No.338460

>>338458

Let us not forget the shark daughters.

>Not yet able to flood your grey daughters full of daddy seed while your tiger daughters spurt their cream into their moist tight assholes.

Why live.


 No.338462

>>338458

I hope so. I also hope i can just throw lolipops like candy so they stay the way i like them.


 No.338463

>>338451

Would be good for a chuckle if players with whitefire could slowly boil her alive. Trick her into thinking she's getting a hot tub experience or something and keep increasing the temperature of the water. She'd never notice if you did it slow enough!


 No.338466

>>338463

I have a better suggestion Freeze the frog


 No.338469

File: bb1efa9d1ca698e⋯.gif (99.68 KB, 374x400, 187:200, Nineball.gif)


 No.338470

>>338106

Back where we started:

>The quagmire

Probably should either make that a "this" or justify the "the" by adding something like "you're in".

>As the dilapidated building comes into view behind the growth around it

It can't come into view behind something. "From behind" is what you want, if you want that.

>and you [if corruption <50:(grimace) else:(frown)]

Not a problem, but I don't see the point.

>//Next temple visit will trigger the same intro again until you [Approach]

I'll note that it'd be pretty ridiculous if she was just rotting there for months until you finally decide to talk to her, whereupon she'd act like it hasn't been that long.

>A long, light-blue summer dress, fallen straw hat, blonde hair. Small, scrawny, you can already see the bones poking against her white, papery skin.

I like these individually, but I think two sentences like this in a row isn't the best.

>traveller

I've been meaning to ask, how do you want to handle this stuff? Pointed out and fixed individually, or done in one big batch when everything's done? I'm not guaranteed to notice all of them (as you know well by now).

>you notice the sword strapped to her waist by way of a cute sash

Is this new, or is it just never brought up again?

>grey-blue

Well I'll keep mentioning them for now.

>so you keep your grip

Is that a thing? It doesn't seem offensively wrong to me, but I'm not sure that's an established usage.

>but you confirm regardless.

I vaguely remember the last iteration of this tidbit also giving me pause, but this needs some sorta change. What are you confirming? How are you confirming it?

>[is strength <30:( even)]

Comma in this?

>her breathing ragged and wheezing

Not sure about "her breathing wheezing".

>strangely discolored at several places

in

>You have no ear for her pleading and trudge back

"Have/has" is always a bit awkward when joined with other verbs like this.

>some as large as circling the entirety of her wrist

That doesn't quite work. "Some large enough to…" would.

>scarlet in embarrassment

It would be "with", but you do have a "with" earlier already, don't know if that's a problem for you.

>[if corruption <50:(You're not inclined to steal someone's eyeball, so you) else(While it might be interesting to see how she would react if you said no, you still)]

The intervening months have not dulled my desire to keep her eyeball. Also, it would be a bit odd for certain characters to hand it back, like paladins, for example.

>giving you nothing more than a soft \"<i>Hnngh</i>\"

I don't know that "giving you" works for this situation, as it's not directed at you in any way.

>I owe that to my, ah, nature, such… peculiarity.

"That" and "peculiarity" are fighting for a spot in this sentence.

>//Tooltip: "and kill her."

Well, well, well, the shoe's on the other foot now. Where are your square brackets, pray tell?

You probably don't need me to say it, but I will anyway: I really like Marielle, and I'm very excited by her approaching completion.


 No.338487

how do i embrace destiny as a nephila queen


 No.338490

>>338487

Keep stuffing things up your cunt.


 No.338542

File: 208a825af92dffe⋯.jpg (97.08 KB, 850x572, 425:286, f7c0ec5d0c567311c790918e1.jpg)

Considering it's Easter, here's Snuggles laying her first egg.

Right now, it's just some of her first pregnancy stuff and constructing her a store. In terms of pregnancy length, I went with 4 weeks, and i'll probably go with 3 weeks for the egg to hatch. I'd think people would prefer kids not instantly grow up, but not take months in game to grow either, so I guess 8 weeks for infant and toddler stage then they can just stay as lolis or shotas. Maybe corrupted pc's could lead to futa kids being mixed in? Not sure on the futa thing.

I used the cabin stuff for the store building scenes with some slight changes as I have no clue how building a building works exactly. Going to do the egg hatching scene tomorrow then generic egg laying + hatching scenes before jumping to the kid interactions. I want to get to writing the incest stuff.

https://pastebin.com/pGnQe56V - Snuggles part 6: camp events


 No.338543

Is weapon upgrading still a thing? Does the divine pearl sword still benefit and increase from killing corrupted named enemies? I don't know what to do with the Pure Pearl.


 No.338545

>>338543

>Is weapon upgrading still a thing?

It never has been in this mod.

>Does the divine pearl sword

Never existed in this mod.

>I don't know what to do with the Pure Pearl.

Eat it. If you already have or don't want the perk, the only other use is freeing Vala.


 No.338549

>>338545

Got it, thanks.


 No.338555

>>338348

Okay fixed the stuff https://pastebin.com/raw/kFHWFrd9

>Is there something you were still planning to add to it?

Yeah I believe so, I'll try and get around to that tonight.


 No.338590

>>338470

>Probably should either make that a "this" or justify the "the" by adding something like "you're in".

The way I justify a definite article in situations like these is by there being only one of these areas in the game.

>It can't come into view behind something. "From behind" is what you want, if you want that.

Are you sure? If anything, a "from" seems a little redundant and optional to me, and a quick look at Google Books supports me there.

>Not a problem, but I don't see the point.

"Grimace" is a fairly presumptive word here, and it makes far less sense for high-corruption characters, but could be appropriate for pure ones. Do you just want me to use "frown" for everyone?

>I'll note that it'd be pretty ridiculous if she was just rotting there for months until you finally decide to talk to her, whereupon she'd act like it hasn't been that long.

Something something magic, I don't really fucking care. Guess there could be a limit of two or three days before she just disappears from the game.

>I like these individually, but I think two sentences like this in a row isn't the best.

Five, even. Does it not work?

>I've been meaning to ask, how do you want to handle this stuff? Pointed out and fixed individually, or done in one big batch when everything's done? I'm not guaranteed to notice all of them (as you know well by now).

Assuming you aren't memeing me, you may butcher the game's language on your own, but I won't help you.

>Is this new, or is it just never brought up again?

That's new. Wanted to give her a weapon, since travelling without one sounds like suicide to me in a world like that.

>Is that a thing?

What do you mean? "Keep your grip (on smth)" is common enough, I think.

>What are you confirming? How are you confirming it?

Not clear enough? Too far removed from her question? You confirm that you're helping her, and the latter is up to the player's imagination.

>Comma in this?

I'm kinda leaning towards one here as well, but is it optional or not? ", so that's no issue even for you."

>"Have/has" is always a bit awkward when joined with other verbs like this.

I was wondering about that, but liked the construction itself too much to change it. Could "spare no ear" work at all, or is that butchering the idiom too much? Sounds perfectly fine to me, but my sensibilities are evidently far lower in these regards.

>It would be "with"

Apparently, "turn (colour) in (emotion)" is used, though far less often than "with". Too uncommon?

>The intervening months have not dulled my desire to keep her eyeball.

I'll think about something. Sounds like it means another couple thousand words though. And why paladins?

>"That" and "peculiarity" are fighting for a spot in this sentence.

Indeed they are.

>Well, well, well, the shoe's on the other foot now. Where are your square brackets, pray tell?

Square brackets are still a terrible way of reminding yourself of unfinished sentences. And unfortunately for you, this one is intended as a continuation of the button name. I tried to be cute with a tooltip for once, and this is what I get.

>You probably don't need me to say it

It's still nice to hear. Thanks, dude.


 No.338597

>>338590

>The way I justify a definite article in situations like these is by there being only one of these areas in the game.

Which is fine for "the bog", but not "the quagmire".

>Are you sure? If anything, a "from" seems a little redundant and optional to me, and a quick look at Google Books supports me there.

It's definitely not redundant; it depends on how the "behind" is working. Here I'm construing the things it's behind as things that would intervene in your line of sight, so it can't be behind them and visible. This would work if you're approaching from an oblique angle, and the things are just meant to block it from a different line of sight, but that didn't seem like what was happening.

>Do you just want me to use "frown" for everyone?

Might be for the best. Stoic pure characters, etc..

>Five, even. Does it not work?

The other ones aren't lists. It would even be fine spaced out a bit, it's just that having two sentences with the exact same (somewhat unusual) construction one after another is usually not great (unless you're trying to hammer something home with repetition, but that's not what you're going for here).

>Assuming you aren't memeing me, you may butcher the game's language on your own, but I won't help you.

Wait, do you not fix the "our"s and "ll"s I point out?

>Not clear enough?

Not even remotely. You need something like "confirm your intentions to help her." Her question isn't even finished, so you definitely need to be concrete here.

>I'm kinda leaning towards one here as well, but is it optional or not?

It's optional, but recommended.

>Could "spare no ear" work at all, or is that butchering the idiom too much?

Is that even an idiom? I think "have no ear for" works, but I don't know if it's common enough that you could call it that. Rather than change your wording, you can just change the "and" to a ", so you".

>Too uncommon?

It's more natural the other way, but you can keep it if you really want.

>Sounds like it means another couple thousand words though.

You don't need to go crazy here.

>And why paladins?

If you're a righteous crusader who's going to attack this undead fiend two seconds from now, why would you hand her her eye back? What if you're just cruel? What if you don't trust her?

>And unfortunately for you, this one is intended as a continuation of the button name.

The lowercase start kinda makes it seem unfinished. It might work with an uppercase "a" or an ellipsis at the start.

>It's still nice to hear. Thanks, dude.

I remember this time being the major slog in my own project, so I want to make sure you know that what you're doing is good, and that people are excited for your work, and that there is a light at the end of the tunnel.


 No.338602

>>338545

>>338549

There is a third option for the Pure Pearl but, it may have been removed at sometime because I generally go full corrupt in most of my playthroughs. If you keep the Pearl until you beat Lethice and have the Pearl in your inventory and (I think) You have to be Pure as well. You can use the Pearl on Lethice and it unlocks some special Pure ending where Maere makes Lethice into a new being that takes the corrupted souls of demons and purifies them as well which returns every demon into their original form. Again, its been a long time since I saw it and it may have been when I was playing another COC mod variation entirely but, I figured if you were curious what else tou could maybe do with the pearl well, there ya go


 No.338603

>>338602

That has nothing to do with the pearl, here or in any mod.


 No.338604

>>338597

>It would even be fine spaced out a bit

Added some ellipsis, then.

>Wait, do you not fix the "our"s and "ll"s I point out?

No, did you think I would? I assumed it was some elaborate joke of yours, though with you pushing that weird grey/gray change recently, I guess I should have realised you're serious. Ou to o and s to z I "fix" while writing, since those are the two big ones everyone notices, but nobody actually gives any shits beyond that. Europeans and Canadians grow up with both, Aussies will just look at you like you're an idiot, and even Americans are nowadays confronted with both spelling conventions on the internet anyway, so even for the Murricans I know, the differences are basically invisible unless you're mixing them within the same scene or character. Personally, I don't care much either when reading, but writing it physically hurts, so I just do the bare minimum.

>You don't need to go crazy here.

If you insist on keeping her eye, then I'll need another kill scene, a scene for giving it back later, something to do with the damn thing, her periodically asking for it, as well as variations for every time I mention her eyes, should you be keeping it. It's one thing to give the option, it's another entirely to write the repercussions.


 No.338605

>>338603

Really? Could have sworn you needed the Pearl for it but, if I'm just fucking retarded then I stand corrected. Nevermind my dumbass.


 No.338624

>>338604

>Added some ellipsis, then.

Stop it, no. If that wasn't carefully designed psychological torture, I meant spaced out with actual words, and the ellipsis makes no sense there. I'd recommend looking into just adding a "she" before "small".

>No, did you think I would?

I thought you had been doing that, yeah. Not a big deal, no need to get those bloomers in a twist.

>If you insist on keeping her eye, then I'll need another kill scene

Just not giving to her immediately would be the major thing needed. I dunno, maybe it's not a big deal, but the option to be reluctant about it would help roleplaying a decent bit. Probably no one cares though, so I guess ignore this.


 No.338625

is there a way to mod perks with the ingame debug menu?


 No.338627

Is there any chance for a dullahan romance option besides just fucking her?


 No.338628

Is there a way to save more than a 10% in your insurance?


 No.338631

>>338542

Store building and family building? Busy champion. Here's some grammatical fixes, suggestions, and some thoughts on implementation too.

At 4:

>For one reason or another, you inquire as to why she was eyeing your cabin.

'For one reason or another' seems unnecessary. It doesn't clarify anything, and it's already assumed that the Champion has a reason for querying Snuggles, whether or not the reason is important. If you do want to clarify, I recommend something like the following:

<Curious, you inquire

At 6:

>handy work

There's a compound word for this

<handiwork

>My family and me

Grammatically, it should be 'my family and I' but this is a person speaking, and people rarely speak with perfect grammar. If it's in-character for Snuggles to speak this way, it's fine as-is.

>her wares, and gems

Unnecessary comma

At 11 & 17 & 27:

>pc works for 4/8/10 hrs

A potential issue for building is daylight. You may want to put in a check for time-of-day to avoid the issue, disabling the button or aborting the action with a preset message like:

<Noting the time of day, you realize you won't be able to finish before dark. Best to start earlier on another day.

At 24:

>The process takes plenty of grueling hours

Have you considered an appropriate fatigue cost to implement? That's another check that might be required before the Champion begins:

<You're too tired to start this project now. / You won't accomplish much with how tired you are.

At 28:

>A simple enough task with your skills and knowledge, but time consuming none the less.

Technically not a complete sentence, adding 'It's' to the beginning is enough.

<It's a simple

>building up

In this case, I think a hyphen is appropriate

<building-up

At 30:

>into place, before

Unnecessary comma

>rafters which

Not sure if a comma is proper after 'rafters' or not. I'm inclined to say it is, since the phrase 'which isn't too tough' could be omitted without compromising the sentence. In which case, it should read as follows:

<You set the ridge beam into place before moving onto the rafters, which isn't too tough, once you figure out the right cut.

At 32:

>By the time your done, you're covered in sweat and exhausted, but you've made significant progress on this project.

Another place to consider an appropriate fatigue cost to implement.

At 38:

>All that's left really is to construct a counter and stool.

Another point to implement fatigue

At 42:

>a simple enough counter.

'enough' seems unnecessary in this context.

>is simple

>even simpler

A bit repetitive with the earlier use of simple. If you want to breakup the repetition, you could replace the first 'simple' with 'basic', or you could replace the later 'simple's with other adjectives like 'straight-forward' or 'easy'.

At 50:

>smooth, before

Unnecessary comma

At 58:

>The [sun] shines in through the window, illuminating the space nicely enough.

I gather you mean the lighting is both sufficient and pleasant, though as written, 'nicely enough' could be interpreted as "adequately pleasant" - not quite the same. You may want to rephase for clarity.

At 65:

>Looks great though, maybe

In this context, the comma should be earlier.

<Looks great, though maybe

>nice, since

Unnecessary comma, 'since' acts as a proper conjunction here

>has left speechless, her expression now

Missing pronoun after left. I recommend:

<has left Snuggles speechless, her expression now

At 67:

>In between her smooches that you return,

In this context, that → which. Also, as it's a bit of an aside, comma after 'smooch'.

<In between her smooches, which you return,

>a store, thank you

, → ;

At 73:

>her stomach that you

As in 67, in this context: that → which

<her stomach, which you

At 79:

>within her, fills

Unnecessary comma

At 87:

>her egg, thus hurry over.

Seems to be missing a pronoun. Could be corrected a couple ways:

<her egg and hurry over.

<her egg, thus you hurry over.

At 89:

>Our of curiosity

Our → Out

>tightens and you're

Comma after 'tightens'

At 91:

>The egg feels warm as you pick it up, it's rubbery in texture too, and you can feel life stirring within it.

Run-on sentence. A couple suggestions:

<The egg feels warm as you pick it up. It's rubbery in texture too, and you can feel life stirring within it.

<The egg feels warm as you pick it up; it's rubbery in texture too. You can feel life stirring within it.

At 93:

>before snuggly wrapping

A pun, or close to it, the egg going from wrapped in Snuggles to being snuggly wrapped. It doesn't feel "silly", exactly, but it is a noticeable.


 No.338632

>>338542

>>338631

For clarity in the pregnancy event comments, it may be better to mark each event by days/weeks from conception, rather than relative to each other. For example:

<//Snuggles is preg event 1, day 07 of pregnancy (starts to show), auto-procs; Snuggles pregnancy lasts 4 weeks; This one is for the first egg;

<//Snuggles is preg event 2, day 21 of pregnancy (getting close), auto-procs

<//Snuggles is preg event 3, day 28 of pregnancy (day of egg laying), auto-procs


 No.338633

What is the purpose of the ligh rail avenger? Is it just a joke item for, god rest his soul, irl vergil?


 No.338636

>>338624

>Stop it, no. If that wasn't carefully designed psychological torture, I meant spaced out with actual words

It was, yes. Looking at it though, I do think an ellipsis actually works, since that segment is a stream of consciousness.

>the option to be reluctant about it would help roleplaying a decent bit

I know, and I did want to give the option, but then we get to the slippery slope leading down to were people want to keep the eye for good, which is were the real work starts. So the question is whether I want to write a choice that's lacking or rather none at all.


 No.338643

>>338451

Yes. Do it.


 No.338647

How do you trigger the tiger shark bullying?


 No.338660

Never went corrupt in my multiple previous playthroughs. I'm pretty miffed that I was not aware I could have made corrupt oral slave for camp.


 No.338691

File: 8a961d433892cbb⋯.png (367.14 KB, 1118x1600, 559:800, Jingai Shunman Se no Sho.png)

>>338631

>Store building and family building

Didn't even think about it like that. Thanks for the corrections and suggestions.

>A potential issue for building is daylight. You may want to put in a check for time-of-day to avoid the issue, disabling the button or aborting the action with a preset message like: You're too tired to start this project now. / You won't accomplish much with how tired you are.

Would this be good? Just changing a button tool-tip to say the pc can't start it until they have enough fatigue or the time is enough?

//If pc doesn't have enough fatigue to work on the store or the time of day is too late; Blank out the button and use one of these tooltips.

[Store] .tooltip = You're too tired to work right now.

[Store] .tooltip = It's too late in the day to start working on this now.

>Another place to consider an appropriate fatigue cost to implement.

I've noted fatigue costs like this for now: //Building her a store part 2; requires store part 1; selects button [Store] under build; takes 4 hrs; costs 40 fatigue;

Also added lines for the pc stopping to sleep before continuing a section of the store if it got too late.

>I gather you mean the lighting is both sufficient and pleasant, though as written, 'nicely enough' could be interpreted as "adequately pleasant" - not quite the same. You may want to rephase for clarity.

Would this work? 'The [sun] shines in through the window, illuminating the space well.' or maybe 'the [sun] shining in through the window properly illuminates the space well enough for you to see.'

>>338632

Made these changes as well, should do something like this for egg hatching too?

//First egg hatching, 21 days passed since it's laid, auto procs

>>338643

>Simply killing the frog girl instead of reworking the her into an enemy that only desires your seed instead of laying eggs in your ass.

Shame.


 No.338692

>>338691

but what if i want eggs in my ass?


 No.338693

File: 71bc4589253f1e0⋯.jpg (143.34 KB, 1332x850, 666:425, Frogs.jpg)

>>338692

I suppose that could still be an option, just have it come up as a possibility after you've impregnated the reworked, not Urta-tier shit, frog girl. I hate when writers do that, '0 chance to win this encounter against a total rando with nothing going for them regardless of your stats, and you're an asshole for not playing along with my fetish', bullshit. It is like Urta all over again, or the millionaire from that Era game.

Shame too, frog girls are top tier.


 No.338694

File: 8f136cc70e64867⋯.gif (471.79 KB, 500x496, 125:124, EIyJ3TO.gif)

>>338692

Sure you can have her laying a brood in your ass like a weirdo.

But wouldn't you rather have a frog girl desperately trying to get your seed to fill the bog with loli frogs? You knock her up enough to take her home and build her a nice pond in your camp that she can safely raise your progeny in. She can even put her freaky frog tongue up your ass to smash your prostate if you're into butt stuff.


 No.338695

File: 07d0e0a037b8ec1⋯.png (3.96 MB, 1701x2220, 567:740, hero_comparison.png)

>>338693

>Shame too, frog girls are top tier.

<posts the abject worst girl in the class, arguably the series

lawfrog only deserves the noose


 No.338699

>>338695

The strip you just shown implies that she knows she was wrong though


 No.338704

>>338699

But she knew exactly what was going on. Deku and the gang wanted to investigate the tracker and possibly help save their classmate in any way by following a lead only they had reliable access to; lawfrog wanted to leave him for dead - which he would have been along with All Might and in turn the entire fucking country because Bakugo would have still been in the way

Then on top of that; she started attentionwhoring and crying after all was said and done because she didn't get to exert complete control over her peers.

Bitch should have been disintegrated at USJ.


 No.338728

>>338704

Are you an autist? Serious question.


 No.338729

>>338694

>freaky frog tongue up your ass to smash your prostate

well I'm sold


 No.338730

>>338704

She is crying because she knows she fucked up and doesn't know what she could possibly say or do to make things right. The strip you just showed makes that very clear with no uncertain terms.

I'm genuinely autistic and I'm still not as socially inept as you.


 No.338732

Being able to reduce populations when? I want to kill all these creatures from showing up.


 No.338733

>>338732

>I want less game in my game


 No.338735

>>338733

I want more player consequence in my game.


 No.338742

>>338729

Might be fun to rework her into an actual enemy at least, but I don't think I should start anything else.


 No.338747

>>338742

To turn her into an enemy you would not have to change much in her dialogue i think? She is desperate as fuck to get the eggs out or something right? From there a yes/no option with no starting the fight


 No.338749

>>338691

> Blank out the button and use one of these tooltips

That should work fine.

>The [sun] shines in through the window, illuminating the space well.

Sounds good to me.

>//First egg hatching, 21 days passed since it's laid, auto procs

Depends on how many timers/flags the game's tracking. You could keep one timer for the pregnancy and use it throughout (conception, egg events, egg laying, egg hatching, Smiles maturing, etc). You could also use multiple timers and hand-off as different events complete (i.e. pregnancy timer → egg timer → Smiles maturity timer). I'd touch base with the coder to see what's preferable.


 No.338750

I think we can all agree that Goblins are the best girls in this game.


 No.338751

>>338750

Some of my shark daughters like fucking them so I suppose the green shits aren't awful.


 No.338754

File: ad787ee602ec5bf⋯.jpg (380.73 KB, 1600x1251, 1600:1251, Skulls for the Skull Thron….jpg)

Minotaur genocide when?


 No.338759

Did Helia's quest thing for first time and her minotaur event. All I'm seeing is that like she likes fucking when she wants and berserking for the sake of fighting.


 No.338761

>>338759

That is Helia, yes.


 No.338764

>>338750

One day faeries will RISE UP as best girls


 No.338766

>>338749

>I'd touch base with the coder to see what's preferable.

Pregnancies have an automatic timer that runs until the birth as well as support for adding events during that time (so hours/days into the pregnancy or remaining in the pregnancy are useful). After that, I would use one resetting timer and a variable (we don't use flags anymore) to keep track of after birth events, so "X days after the last event" is fine.


 No.338767

>>338764

One day faeries will RISE UP my urethra and ravage my balls from the inside.


 No.338768

>>338767

Hot, someone should write a scene of that.


 No.338770

>>338768

Agreed


 No.338773

How do you increase virility without going full corruption?


 No.338775

>>338773

Chop off your dick and burn it in honor of Satan.


 No.338779

>>338759

But I should be able to leash her before she goes after a Mino, Reee.


 No.338780

>>338747

While maybe dialogue wouldn't need to be changed much I think it'd need a decent bit of writing to make her an enemy.

I don't even remember why she needs to lay her eggs in our asses. I'm also thoroughly disgusted by anything laying eggs in an ass.

>>338749

>That should work fine.

>Sounds good to me.

Excellent.

>Depends on how many timers/flags the game's tracking

Well i can change it to whatever is desired, or at least try.

>>338766

>so "X days after the last event" is fine.

Well that's good.

Got the egg hatching stuff done, but I figure i can do out a few more scenes instead of playing dark souls. So i should have an updated camp events doc by tonight.


 No.338783

>>338633

pretty much. Here's how the design process went

>man, I think a skill where the player could "bet" continuously into a higher damage attack would be neat

>ok, skill coded, how do I add this to the game?

>meme

and then it was done

>>338602

actually, if you have the "Temptation" modifier on, eating the pure pearl will completely remove the corruption buildup.


 No.338785

>>338783

wait, the modifier is Creeping Taint.


 No.338817

File: fbe48d894f53aef⋯.jpg (496.31 KB, 1280x1829, 1280:1829, The enemy.jpg)


 No.338829

File: badad6e74239274⋯.png (329.67 KB, 500x410, 50:41, LookAtThisRetardPostingHen….png)

>>338817

Sauce?


 No.338833

File: fc29635aae62be6⋯.png (540.49 KB, 500x750, 2:3, ClipboardImage.png)


 No.338837

previous coc save editors dont seem to work with this modded version. I can't port over my old characters because there are too many game differences and it always crashes upon trying to load them.

Could someone point to towards a save editor that works with the modded version? I really don't want to have to start all over.


 No.338838

Well here's a few more camp events for Snuggles. There's her saying she won't have more kids, the first egg hatching, and scenes for the generic eggs being laid.

Need to check the parser guide in the morning to see if there's something for the pc's original hair color.

https://pastebin.com/pGnQe56V


 No.338840

>>338829

Seieki ni Muragari Suitsuku Yousei-tachi


 No.338841

>>338837

CoCEd mostly works fine. If you don't need to mess with perks or status effects, the debug menu is better than a save editor.


 No.338843

>>338837

>previous coc save editors dont seem to work with this modded version. I can't port over my old characters because there are too many game differences and it always crashes upon trying to load them.

>I really don't want to have to start all over.

Imagine being so fucking retarded that in the same breath you admit just how much of a newfag you are and also skipping all the new content in the early game. Kill yourself, faggot, and go back to sucking off Kitteh's cock while jacking it to his Revamp shit.


 No.338844

>>338841

thats what i mean. the newest version of coced dont want to work with my saves as it says the versions are too different. if you had a version of coced that works with the modded saves that would be great.


 No.338846

>>338840

>spoonfeeding


 No.338847

>>338844

It works. Just use it.


 No.338849

>>338844

Yeah, just ignore the warning.


 No.338855

>>338838

>if there's something for the pc's original hair color

I don't think so, but you could ask them to add one.

>She blunts tells you

bluntly

>I hope we can have lots eggs

lots of

>The baby slowly ceases it's wailing

its

>While your holding your child

you're

>Snuggles lets out a happy sigh and you move your attention to her

Comma after sigh

>As you give your daughter to her mother and the little girl begins to cry again.

As you give your daughter to her mother, the little girl begins to cry again.

>Snuggles comes up to with a smirk on her face

up to you

>Snuggles has Smiles sitting next to her who greets you with an awkward expression and cheerfully exclaims

Smiles is the one greeting you here, so you want to get her over by the "who greets you…" bit. Something like "Beside her is Smiles, who…" or another way of rearranging it.

>before gently taking the eggs and placing them down gently

Remove one of the 'gently'


 No.338859

>>338783

>man, I think a skill where the player could "bet" continuously into a higher damage attack would be neat

So it actually does something, I never even equipped it. Cool.


 No.338873

So is it furry characters people hate, or the weird degenerate fetishes that come along with said characters? Like how do people feel about Amily and similair "tame" furry npcs? Also blatent newfaggotry, I know.


 No.338874

>>338873

Both. I hate furries and their obsession with diapers. I use the nofur option so Amily starts defurred.


 No.338879

File: f71f96419259a39⋯.jpg (153.95 KB, 750x600, 5:4, cleanse.jpg)

>>338873

Degenerate fetishes are almost entirely avoidable, so you can have a run of near entirely pure vanilla if you do so (hence why basegame abominations like Urta, the original creators coldsteel dindu Mary Sue hermaphrodite fursona I assure you when I say that not using a single one of those adjectives are used as a mere buzzword have been removed/optionalised). I'd prefer the option to be able kill any enemy so I could remove fetishes in a more metaphysical sense, but I can tolerate the degenerate faggots provided they keep far away to themselves and don't force themselves and know their fucking place as subhuman filth. The line is blurry for many fetishes, so it's mostly easier to just keep the bars off since for the most part subjectivity is a major factor in 'acceptance' of what is and isn't degenerate; see Loli in the West or Bimbo/Gyaru in the East.

Furfags simply get the bullet for obvious reasons.


 No.338880

>>338873

I agree with >>338874 and add that furries(the people) are also really terrible writers. It's not just the fetishes, the personalities themselves are often absolute trash. One of the characters in TiTS is literally a tranny with autism(not lying).

Amily is a mixed bag. Though the core premise to her arc is that she needs to constantly be popping out kids until a whole village of them can exist, the rest of her is quite vanilla. She's vaginally a virgin too, though not anally. Not much of that in the game. But besides the sexual stuff, she's a decent person with some imperfections but decent fundamental morals. She's an alright girlfriend I guess, which stands out a lot in CoC.


 No.338883

>>338873

Furries practice a form of taqqiya where they pretend to be relatively normal people with just a weird kink and some cutesy quirks to infiltrate communities before swinging the door open and letting in the most degenerate filth imaginable that drives out any sane God-fearing individuals and assimilates the rest.

Purge with fire. Especially the "good" ones.


 No.338884

>>338880

Also the Izma Amily dual potion scene is really good.


 No.338889

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>>338883

>Furries practice a form of taqqiya


 No.338891

>>338883

>>338880

>>338879

>>338874

Aight, I was basically just wondering whether the hatred was for furfags, anthropomorphic characters, or both. Because i'm mostly fine with anthropomorphic stuff as long as it's not shit like Urta or Loppe. Was curious where others drew the line.


 No.338907

fiddling with debug menu, how to find flags to edit? it says i need to look at a file.


 No.338908

Bimbo Sophie is great. Free 50% minimum lust for continuous dickings.


 No.338910

Is the secret to terrestrial fire a synergy? Cus I feel like I've tried every order of casting I can think of. At first I tried also maxing out regular Casting. If it's not a synergy I'm not sure what it is.


 No.338911

>>338910

It's a generally poor idea that Koraeli added. You need to have every effect active at once, but that never worked for me. You arent' missing anything though, as it's just an over-powered spell that makes already easy fights just one-button trivial


 No.338919

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>>338908

Another brother sees the light.


 No.338926

>>338880

The thing that clinches Amily for me as a top tier girlfriend is that she actually has the conviction to try and bring her village back to life at all costs. She would even go through a defur procedure if it meant you'd be kind enough to help her. (If you're playing vanilla or no-fur off that is)


 No.338929

>>338843

Not him but i do use the save editor a lot to skip the early game money and stat grind. Just pop myself up to 100 in all stats and give myself 10k gems and that's it. Granted the save editor i use works just fine for that purpose, so the original guy can fuck himself if he wants more than that.


 No.338931

>>338926

Hell, she'll turn herself into a futa, something which she (initially) despises, just to make it happen


 No.338936

>>338907

look around in the repository for the kFLAGS.as file. It has all the constants used, though the names may not be immediately descriptive as to what they do exactly and you might not know what values you should input in the first place.

>>338837

There's a fair bit of backwards compatibility code going on to at least try to get old saves(or CoCEd) saves working, but with every update it's a harder and harder thing to make work.

You can do pretty much anything with the debug menu, though.


 No.338937

>>338694

That's what frog girl should have been, it should have been the girl begging you to impregnate her.


 No.338938

>>338754

That or feminize them all into hollstaurs craving the Champion's dick, also taking their "harems" away from them.


 No.338939

>>338873

I am neutral to furry stuff a bit doesn't hurt. Too much furry stuff however makes me want to purge it.


 No.338942

So I've seen Halloween and Thanksgiving. How do I start the winter events?


 No.338947

>>338911

>one-button trivial

One button after 7 turns of setup, and it's weaker than just whitefire with soulburst.


 No.338949

>>338947

soulburst was a mistake


 No.338950

>>338911

>>338947

So how exactly do I set it up if I wanna see it in action at least once?




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