>>784>to go full on loli, that was a bit too much and probably only to appease fans.Its common to see lolis saying they are 18 years old, for legal reasons. 18 is just as stupid as 38.
>and probably only to appease fans.As opposed to what? You said it yourself : emphasis on sexual acts as opposed to story. They would obviously pander to their buyers when considering body types.
>Iori has some pretty disgusting h-scenes.Why is it disgusting? Does it describe smells and orifices in overwhelming detail? Is the dialogue full of insults and general humiliation? Is it just because it contains a fetish you do not like? Is it full of missionary sex?
I dont know you. For all I know you could easily find all buttsex repulsing.
Those h-scenes could contain the world's greatest watersport erotica and it wouldnt matter if the reviewer is not suited to appreciate them.
"I think its disgusting" tells me absolutely nothing about the scene's quality if you dont mention
why.
>I personally believe the game would be a lot better if Momoka’s route was handled differently and if Nene wasn’t a loli, but that’s how it is.There was no need to repeat these comments. Its already pretty obvious the game would be better to you if the flaws didnt exist.
If you absolutely must convey that you haet loli, consider wording it differently, like "despite Nene being a 38 years old loli and all those problems with Momoka's route, I still recommend the game overall".
>I’m going to open with this: screw MangaGamer. This game is not worth money.Your opening a shit.
Either substitute "game" for "translation" or change your intro into a disclaimer against mangagamer instead.
Dont fucking open a review with "this game is worth jack shit…………… btw the main reason for this has nothing to do with the original game".
Not everyone is looking exclusively for this specific english translation and not everyone will read past the bad score and the first line to see that the original is "a moderately okay nukige".
>Her character isn’t bad, though she reminds me too much of Milfeulle Sakuraba from Galaxy AngelYou're implying this similarity is a bad thing, but not telling why.
Last time I checked Milfeulle was not objectively a shit character.
At least not in galaxy angel sim date rpg.Is it bad because the character is unoriginal or almost a copy paste? Is it because of something you dont like in Milfeulle? I have no idea.
Again, useless comment for anyone deciding if they want to purchase the game or not.
>basically, a>The quiet sister she is in charge of the family’s finances.>Her route has you tricking you in pleasuring you>willing to slog through this translation to due to the character designI dont usually sperg about typos, but at least proofread your resume ffs.
>There is supposedly a harem route, but I quit before finding it as I didn’t want to finish Hiyori’s route.>After a bit into the story it basically felt like the main character was using her being young to trick her into sex and that made me feel dirty, so I stopped playing.There are dozens of better ways to convey this information to the reader, but you had to choose the most retarded and normalfaggiest one possible.
If words trigger you that much for you to drop the prospect of a harem, you have two options :
- Be a professional, endure the parts you do not like to unlock the ones that you do and make it abundantly clear what kind of content is not your thing, so if the reader's dick disagrees with you, he can easily dismiss the "its disgusting" parts of your review.
- Dont review porn you dont like in the first place
No one benefits from Newgrounds-tier "Eww she had a dick, 0/10" reviews.
If these two samples were random reviews that a normalfag was forced to do, there wouldnt be a problem.
The fact that you handpicked these to showcase your talent is concerning to say the least.
The fact that you sat through rape but felt too dirty to proceed when the MC did lewd things to a naive loli is hilarious.