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This being said, when you want to critique the common Patreon practice then please name the devil by its real name.
- Shameless self-advertising all across the internet. How often do I have to see this elf-face? If you create a good product it will advertise itself. It's understandable that a bit additional effort is needed in the beginning, but considering how well some of those creators do, it really is questionable if additional advertising serves any meaningful purpose now. It becomes annoying, especially since so many Patreon users do this. And if you pretent to be some random person that just 'came across' it you make it ten times worse. I am sure it would be illegal, if people would not start to double pretend this to ruin other businesses. If you are in fact the creator you are a horrible person.
- Not offering the most recent Version for free. This way it is not free content in the way you present it since it is not 'the game' you get, but a premature version. It's false advertising. This practice is intolerable because it hinders any constructive critique process. You would have to (continually!) spent money, just to be able to critique the actual up-to-date product. If you do this it shows that you have zero interest in producing an actual quality product and in my opinion instantly discredits you as any serious developer.
- The overall low quality of content in adult games. Yes it is a niche genre, at least here in the west, but it doesn't mean you should be ably to get away with putting up utter crap and charge more money than most major full release of actual quality games would cost. Why do you use RPG-Maker? It doesn't run smoothly with acceptable fps for most uses. Using the RTP results in an incoherent design and will (most of the time rightly) be interpreted as laziness on the part of the producer. If you are not able to create a different engine on your own, pay someone to do it. With that much money you get at this point, there is no excuse not to. Can you guarantee that you are creating a worthwile game? Say, in the picture, why is her face three times on the screen? Actually, how big is your mastery as a content creator? Is it worth the attention and the money? How much again would it cost per month to get the up-to-date version? 20 bucks? How long will your work stay in development? One year? Two years?
- User generated content. In what way will it benefit the end-product? In your case it has nothing to do with 'being part of the creation process'. It's a sellout. I am sure your sugar-daddies will have a lot of fun for their 100$ monthly mail-exchange, but what about the average Joe to whom you advertise this product as being free? Do you even know how the finished game is going to look like? In 'J.U.L.I.A Among the Stars' you try to unrevel the mystery why every former crew-member you encounter has died and at one point you learn that one of them is named 'Necrosis Thanatos'. Surely this doesn't mess with the narrative at all.
Additional material for Patreon boni leave less time for actual development and result in the impossibility of a controlled and coherent world. The same goes for the absolute majority of votable content. You are literally whoring your own product. Just look how the girl is undressing herself by the 100$ reward description. That is you.
- Most creators are completely instransparent with their budget. Why do you need money? Tell us! If someone happens to be extraordinarily good in his field it might be completely justified for the person to earn himself a luxurious lifestyle through his work. But what about you? If someone considers backing you he wants to know if he is helping you survive, or if he merely buys you a more expensive coffee on your Friday. How much do you need to be able to continue? This is the most important number. Now how will additional funding actually result in a higher quality of product? Please explain! Why do you need 2000$ a month to buy a better video card? What video card are you planning to buy and how much does it cost? If people are willing to give you money they want to be able to check if it used effectively and possibly give feedback, it's their money after all.
I haven't played the demo since I hate the 3D style so I cannot actually give any critique on it. That fucking picture killed my boner like 3 times before. I want to punch that face in and I would even consider spending some money on your Patreon to see this happen. [2/2]