No.30302
3D loli is allowed it seems as long as it is clear enough that it is 3D. In this case, cartoony.
Anyways, Been working on this for a while in Source FilmMaker and I've just finally gotten it finished. Posting it here because some people shown interest in it. Also I figured that some people might have questions and it might inspire more people to use SFM or make comics.
Staggering the release, a part a day, because some places I'm uploading it to can't handle 76 pages at once.
No.30304
Looking good so far, I won't judge too much until things get lewd though because lets face it thats what we're here for.
No.30305
>>30304
I admit, the really lewd stuff doesn't start until the latter half, but there's bits of it sprinkled throughout. The benefit of posting here is that I can get some input for my future ideas too.
No.30306
Looking very nice!
The paneling and the speech bubbles/character overlay are giving it an authentic comic feel. I hope you're not using Photoshop to do all this because things like this are a nightmare to work with in it.
I love the motion lines and effects on the sword swing and sound effect.
Will Rachel at some point transform back to her real form (an old lady)? It'd be funny if you use that in a lewd scene.
No, actually that'd be disgusting.
This really makes me want to get back to doing more comics.
No.30307
>>30306
It was a mix of Source FilmMaker for the renders and Photoshop for putting it together. Believe me, if you plan it right then PS can make it a lot easier. PS was needed a lot of layer effects and in some cases I needed to touch up some renders I made. That and some panels made use of greenscreening, like page 8 for example.
The image is the way I organized it. "70" is the page number, Layers 32-29 are page sketches that I put on top to get an idea of where each panel and speech bubble goes, Text is of course text, for speech bubbles and narration boxes. Then there is speech bubbles, they are shapes I premade and then put into a group with a layer effect to make them outlined and connected. Then gutters (the white dividing lines, they also have a subtle outline on them). Then there is speech bubbles again (for when I want a bubble underneath a gutter rather than on top of it. Finally there are the panels, renders taken in SFM. I put these in place, making sure they are the right size, then trim the bits that stick out.
It may seem intimidating but once you plan it all out it's pretty simple to do. Rambling on probably doesn't help. I'll probably detail it all at some point, make it easier to understand.
As for Rachel, while it's not written into the comic, the reason for her looking the way she does is making herself immortal at 8 rather than 18 or 28. Not to say that I couldn't figure out a way to use Aunty Greenleaf, possibly as her mother or something.
No.30308
Nice… This is the effect I will be going for, in my visual novel game.
I am interested. Also in any tips you have for getting that effect from 3D, if they are not just painted skins. (Post effects.)
No.30309
>>30308
The textures for the models are like that, though I did a little editing of them to get them the way I wanted. The "sketch lines" on them are part of the original models from their games (Clem from The Walking Dead and Rachel from The Wolf Among Us) though the model I used for Rachel has two versions, one with the sketch lines and one without.
The textures that were modified were Rachel's dress (originally yellow with flowers) and Clem's skin (added the paint on) and clothing (originally purple underwear).
Not many post effects in these few pages. I was using greenscreens for the renders so I could crop around the models neatly, have them stick out of the panels and so on. That and the glow on Rachel's staff on the bottom of page 7 (can't have the radiating glow on a greenscreen). Rachel on page 3 was the result of playing around with the files for the model so that she had the purple sheen to her. The runes on her body was a one off texture I made for her. Her buttocks needed some photoshop work because the way they moved when the legs were up in that position. I did do a the silhouette on page 5 but that was mostly in SFM. I simply took the models up above the map so only the trees were there and used an inverted light on them so instead of lighting them up, it made them pitch black. I then added the curved road later on in Photoshop.
That may seem like a lot but much of it comes from planning ahead. Think of the effect you want and find a way to achieve it. Don't get too attached to the idea though if it turns out not to be that possible.
No.30333
No.30345
>>30333
Patience. I assure you, it will be well worth the wait. Enjoy the groan-inducing puns in the mean time.
No.30350
>>30308
Curious as to what you are planning for your VN. If there's something you want to know about the comic and how I did I can explain there.
No.30351
>>30327
>seriously, are you? I can't tell any more
I laughed way too hard.
Carry on, OP. I love you already
No.30353
This is a really fun little comic :)
Looking forward to the next part
No.30356
That's some quality OC, keep it up!
No.30367
Thats pretty fucking funny mate. Make your next comic not loli and you do this shit for money.
No.30371
>>30367
Or, you know, he could set up a donation patreon and not censor himself like all the other artists and renderers with any notable talent have done in recent history.
No.30375
Man, that's fucking hilarious! Keep it up!
No.30377
>>30302
>Page 04
>What the firt tastes like.
SOILED IT
No.30393
>>30377
Well damn it, I had someone point that out to me while I was in the process of putting the pages together. I fixed it but it seems that I accidentally used the unedited jpeg in the upload.
No.30396
dat timing, just got home
No.30501
>>30440
Ha! her battle cry literally IS "Arggh!!!"
Loving it so far OP
No.30508
>>30506
Pick up the pace pal this is getting good
No.30510
Is her spell-book full of lewd fanfic about her and Clementine?
Huh. I wonder if Clem knows? haha. XD
No.30512
>>30510
It's a book with unlimited pages, it would be a waste if all she used it for were spells.
Luckily for Rachel, Clem never bothered learning how to read because she had better things to do with her time.
No.30520
>>30512
reading is such an overrated skill.
Untill you get to a written sign at least.
Anyway, tentacle fun! Keep it up!
No.30538
where is the rest?
>>30537
No.30539
>>30538
We've been doing a part a day for 6 days now. Part 7 is tomorrow.
No.30541
Hi TehRiddles, I really enjoy your comic so far, the girls are cute. Are the models from a video game or DAZStudio?
Also it looks like they are actually enjoying the tentacle rape a little too much, :) Please continue!
No.30547
I like the style. Keep going please!
No.30556
>>30541
Rachel and Clementine are from The Wolf Among Us and The Walking Dead respectively. The models I am using are made for Source FilmMaker by Croix. A bit of searching on Rule34Hentai can put you on the path to find them.
No.30573
Hey Riddles, I'm loving this and can't wait to see the conclusion. I have a question though:
Did you know how to render the model's clothes without their bodies? I only ask this because I notice we don't seem to have any shots of any of the tentacles gripping on some dangling panties, or any of their clothes discarded on the floor. Though I might be mistaken.
It's a pretty easy trick, though it does have its limitations:
>spawn a second loli
>right-click on the model and select "override materials"
>go to the model part of the element viewer and expand the materials line
>find the relevant materials of the model (namely the body and the head) and right click on them
>go to "add attribute" and "float" for each material and type "$alpha"
This will set a default value of 0 which will cause them to disappear leaving any clothing they might be wearing visible. Then you can rearrange them how you want like in pic related.
Of course you may have already known how to do that. Just letting you know in case you didn't.
Also one last thing, I love these skins you've made for them, would you mind posting them here? I might make use of them.
No.30575
>>30302
Where do these SFM models come from, anyway? I've wondered where people get them… You know, for a friend…
No.30590
>>30573
>Did you know how to render the model's clothes without their bodies?
I was not aware of the method you said to be honest. On page 48 where I had Rachel's dress pulled up over her head, I used two models. One with the dress and one without. For the model with the dress at first I tried bending the legs 180 up above the bottom of the skirt. That worked perfectly fine for the angle I was going for.
However your method leaves things a hell of a lot more open, definitely writing it down.
>>30575
I use the Steam Workshop as well as SFMLab (18+) and DigitalEro (18+). The Rachel and Clem models I got from Croix on Rule34Hentai.net (log in to see 3D loli). Search his name on there.
No.30601
>just solved rachel's "incantation"
…god damn it Riddles.
By the way he's uploaded the final part of this comic to rule34hentai.net, not sure whether he's forgotten about this thread or what.
No.30604
Bravo OP, this is great work. The only flaw I can see is that the dark-skinned girl is ugly as sin. But, I suppose this is a matter of preference.
No.30605
For Some reason Riddles can't post the stuff on Loli, due to a board error or something. I tried uploading the files on his behalf and ran into the same error. May have to wait till tomorrow, but check rule34hentai and his pixiv untill then.
>>30601
No.30606
>>30537
Part 7, the final part. Would have been up a bit earlier but something is messing with uploading at the moment.
Ends on page 76 just in case I can't upload the next 5 after this one.
No.30607
>>30606
Okay, finally managed to upload some images, hopefully this lot will upload too.
>>30601
What clued you in to solving it? :D
No.30610
>>30607
>color spelled with a U
You thought I wouldn't notice, but I did!
No.30611
>>30601
>>30607
So what does the spell really translate to?
No.30619
>>30610
What do you mean?
>>30611
Translate probably isn't the right word. Cipher is what you want to look into. I think the search for the answer makes the answer so much better than outright saying it.
And no, it's not the text seen on the book on page 52 and 53.
No.30620
>>30619
Spelling it "colour" just ain't natural!
No.30651
Sooo…
any more to come?
I need to know where to put the folder
No.30654
>>30651
No current plans to make more at the moment but I'm pretty sure there will be more chapters in the future. Would be a waste of ideas if I didn't.
No.30655
>>30620
Everybody knows American English spellings are superior to British English spellings. No need to boast.
No.30718
>>30619
Just solved the cipher
Go fuck yourself.
No.30728
>>30718
Glad you enjoyed it.
No.30762
>>30619
You're a cunt. I was hoping the cipher would at least be a bit lewd.
No.30763
>>30619
In all seriousness though, that was fucking great. I eagerly anticipate any future works you produce.
Is that tentacle pictured in the last panel dead, or is she keeping it as a toy to play with later?
No.30773
>>30763
He's alive, poking out from the confines of the tome.
Also Rachel isn't particularly the kind who indulge in that sort of thing. Not to say she doesn't like to have a bit of one handed loving every now and then but for her to willingly engage with a tentacle monster he would have to have one hell of a personality.
No.32243
>>30619
>>30718
>>30762
It's just random letters to me. How do I go about deciphering it?
No.32619
>>32243
Outright telling you defeats the fun in finding out. It's a cipher, that's enough to go on to figure it out. Not even a difficult cipher either.
No.32635
>>32619
Do you have more wacky adventures for those two?
No.32735
>>32635
At the moment no, but I've plenty of ideas and I will likely get started on one of them soonish.