/monster/ - The Last Bastion of Romance

Incest is immoral anon. Ya'll niggers need our lord and master Dagon in your life.

>>132115

Sex with stepsisters is not incest, anon.

>you will never be forcefully adopted by a Succuokasan in the middle of your dream

>you will never meet your new oneechan

>you will never experience family night in a succubus house hold

>be school age

>Acquire sister

>new sister is a succubus

>Normal looking girl, slight blue tint to skin, darker at extremities and hairline

>Straight dark blue hair and a barely noticeable pair of horns poking through

>and the tail of course

>smile of an angel. Very polite with my mom

>first rape within half an hour of arrival

>Mom left new siblings literally for 10 minutes to set the table for dinner

>Was still in the middle of saying "Hi"

>When suddenly she is behind me, one hand on my mouth the other and tail arm locking both arms

>Mind still going WTF, mom's voice still carrying from the hallway telling us about what she cooked

>Meanwhile new sis has my hands tied up, pants already down, holding tightly by the balls with one hand, jerking me off with the other

>whispering that if I make a sound she will make me a eunuch

>Mom comes back 10 minutes later

>Sis pulled my pants back just in time, now sitting on the sofa three steps away

>I am still where mom left me coming around

>Balls empty, still in shock, heartbeat deafening seems like ear slightly wet from her tonguing and whispering right into it

>Dick still wet with her saliva when she clamped down like pressure seal right as I started cumming

>was too busy orgasming to do use limb freedom to do anything but hold on to her

>"Come on, time to eat…. 'kids'

>on way to kitchen 'You seem shocked Anon. We didn't want to tell you until it was a done deal. When it was, she was already coming home with us. Sorry for surprise, Anon. Just be nice. It will all work out."

>>132141

> 2 weeks passed

> life not mine anymore

> new sis is slightly younger than me (turns out named Aviel)

> I am now 'the kid' in the family

> Didn't even notice the bitch doing it

> Don't know what the fuck happened

>Probably because she is fucking perfect.

>Perfect daughter, perfect young woman, perfect student dream of any parent

>She goes to my school now - teachers love her

>Turns out she is fucking smart, and apparently did advanced classes

>She helps around the house. Voluntarily

>took over many house chores

>She cooks dinner for me

>She does laundry after school

>She cleans up

>She is always polite, cheerful and seems so fucking mature

>Suddenly my parents leaving her in charge

>I don't think they even noticed the new order of things

>"Listing to your sister Anon" on their way out

>WTF?

>>132145

>When we are alone suddenly she is not perfect at all

>She's been telling me I am her slave now

>Fuck that.

>But she won't fucking stop

>Can't fight her - she is stronger then me.

>She is faster than me

>She apparently knows some kind of weird ninja-wrestling technique

>Don't think I could win even if she fought fair

>she never fights fair

>She has mind control magic

>serious scary kind

>Stop moving Anon, and suddenly my body won't listen

>One time when we were alone tried to rush her from her blindspot

>Took her down but soon as she looked me in the eyes

>suddenly I am naked, tied up on the floor

>time missing…

>no matter what I try to fight back, she wins

>tried ignoring her, she just went straight to rape

>trying to bullshit her, she cut right through it

>Than it's always the punishment

>her idea of punishment is making me cum till I stop fighting her

>It's hard to get the energy to resist after third orgasm in half an hour

>My dick listens to her like she owns it

>Every time she makes me cum, she makes sure to hold me afterward

>Right when my body is feeling weak and sleepy, she is there all soft and warm promising it safety

>I hate that it works so well, I know what she is doing and she knows it - not shy of teasing me about it

>But try as I might, once in a while I slip and give away how good it feels

>Worst part of it all is, I can't make myself hate her because I think she actually likes me

>She always treats me like her own toy

>but she obviously limits herself

>One time she used her hypno-magic-whatever to order me

>made me get on my knees

>somehow her making my body move against my will was so much worse than just paralyzing me

>Tried not to let it show how much it freaked me out

>But I think she noticed somehow

>Probably gentlest 'milking' (as she likes to call it) after that

>and she never used her magic like that again

>Doesn't even use it in teasing

>And her wrestling moves

>sometimes she hurts me but stops soon as I stop resisting

>It pissed me off that not only does she always win

>I know she is always holding back

>even when I try my best to fight back

>>132147

They're cool if they're done right.

>>132149

Continue please

>>132113

I didn't know I wanted this so much.

>>132149

Pretty great, please go on.

>>132149

>time passes

>according to the calendar, it has barely been four months

>but I find it difficult now to even recall a life without Aviel around

>she changed my entire world so drastically that despite living in same house, going to same school

>I might as well be in a different world

>My life now is a constant game

>an onslaught of change has turned my life surreal

>some were big and sudden

>some small and incremental

>she enacted them all together

>assaulting my world from every direction

>until over the course time, my life was not my own anymore

>and I feel like every minute of every day I am competing against her one way or another

>sometimes a memory jumps out at me - a stark contrast of 'then' and 'now'

>and I examine in my mind exactly how I got from there to here

>times like that, I see one of her schemes that she set in motion, followed through and kept pushing

>until she got me where she wanted

>like safety

>that was probably the one she took first and the one I tried to fight hardest for

>first month or so parents obviously wanted us to get along

>went out of the their ways to leave us to spend time together

>or send us together on errands

>assigned me to help her

>readily accepting when she volunteered to accompany me

>it was very obvious to me what they were doing

>and they were very oblivious at what their new daughter was actually doing

>they thought we were bonding

>in truth she was teaching me that she could take me anywhere and any time

>She is really good at that - pulling off things one wouldn't consider plausible

>It's like watching one of those spy movies or secret op shows

>where people seem to get away with stuff that normally wouldn't fly, all the fuckng time

>I thought it was fiction

>well it's not

>>132179

>I should be safe showing my sister the local park

>If someone asked me - 'can you get raped in a public park on a Satuday afternoon?'

>LOL NOPE. there are people fucking everywhere

>I once took a girl to the park to try to make out for the first time - fucking people starting everywhere

>Which is why I totally didn't expect Aviel to casually trip me down a ravine, right off one of the busiest paths

>there were like eight people in sight of me

>and they all happened to be looking the other way

>and three seconds later before I am done coming around after the tumble

>I am suddenly bottomless

>"Yell for help if you wish Anon. Your pants and me are going to be gone by the time those people you see turn their heads."

>Suddenly I am not feeling like convincing a bunch of strangers I am not a streaking pervert.

>a couple with small kids is passing by 6 meters above me

>and suddenly I desperately want to be quiet, because I've seen how good she is at dissapearing

>two seconds of hesitation while I look up and try to decide on a way out of this

>two seconds my eyes aren't watching her

>and now she looped her thin girly string belt around my ballsack and pulling up

>i am mostly busy trying not to make noise

>she is busy tying my balls to a branch just high enough to keep me on all fours

>5 seconds ago I was up there on the path, with a bunch of other people. Safe

>and now I am pantless and all my muscles are straining to hold my ass up enough for me to keep my balls

>and all I can think off as I watch the path above and the silhuettes of people through the branches

>is that my white ass is going to be noticed through the thin tree cover if any one of them glances this way

>"That's right, Anon. Just be very quiet and stay still"

>then it got worse

>she has her purse open in front of my face

>and she pulls out a bottle of lube and one blue glove

>between being suspended face down on all fours

>and the sheer shame of what she was about to do

>my face could probably start a forest fire right about now

>and the only thing I can think off as I feel her smearing the cold liquid on my asshole

>'I should have screamed soon as she pushed. If they find me now, it's going to be so much worse."

>her warm hand is stroking my dick

>and I hear her soft cooing behind me, her tail is softly brushing my hair

>right about now I should fucking hate her. But the only thing I feel is fear of being discovered by others like this.

>well that and disbelief that my dick is getting hard

>her hand is so warm and firm on it

>her cooing mooth is practically kissing my balls

>and her gloved finger insistently pumping inside as it gets deeper

>"Show your sister around the park, anon." seemed like such a safe instruction

>it's not something that should lead to one's first prostate massage, and a literal pool of cum that she extracted from me over half an hour

>half an hour where my mind could only switch between forced orgasms and hyper-aware fear of the people above hearing my stifled wheezing

>and the only coherent thought that flashes again and again 'This CAN'T be happening'

>when your sister is a succubus - apparently it can.

>when she is done, she has tissues in her purse too. Feel her cleaning me up like a baby.

>she unties me. Now I could fight back.

>but I spent half an hour bent over on strained limbs, and half of that time I spent cumming.

>she had to help me dress

>and than climb

>and than walk

>and by the time my brain was sort of working again

>we were already back on the path

>there were people in sight in the front

>and some mom with a kid behind us

>and everything was so normal again.

>except for me barely having the strength to move my feet

>and my sister's knowing smile

>>132180

There's always the run away option. Wait until everyone goes to bed, then leave.

>>132205

No, that's what your mother is for. ;^)

>>132205

I mean if they're not related and didn't even grow up together there's really nothing unusal about it. Frankly, his adoptive mother has to know what's going on here, what with her daughter being a literal semen demon moving in with a boy.

>>132203

by my categorization, this story is rated 'Fluffy and some kinky sex'. She hasn't harmed or hurt him or even exposed him to public embarrassment. I am trying to write a succubus here as a kinky sex demon not to be taken lightly even when she is being nice by her definition.

>>132212

/ara/ isnt always incest, anon

>>132214

i know, im just shitposting

>>132180

my boner is diamonds at work

pls continue

>>132226

>he visits /monster/ at work

You're a braver man than I am, anon.

>>132229

8ch's image server is blocked by the filter, so there's technically no porn here lmao

>>132229

It's not that hard.just dick around on your phone while you have macros running.

>tfw no loving succubus onee to sneak up behind you while sleeping to give you a handjob and whisper lewd things in your ear

>tfw she will never hug you and fall asleep right next to you after licking off her fingers

>>132180

>the thing about succubus monster girls

>is their sheer versatility in human environment

>before Aviel showed up in my life, I never really got that.

>Succubus are quite big in monster girl ranks

>but it's when I started living with one that I understood how relatively insonspicious they are

>people tend to get scared of the strange and the unknown

>but they don't consider Succubuses to really be all that unkown

>ask anyone. "they are just really honry girls. Everyone knows that'

>and they don't fit the 'strange' category either.

>not unless they want to

>I can see it easily looking in from outside.

>Took her less than a day for literally everyone but me to start treating her like just another pretty human girl

>sure her skin is tinted blue and she has a tail

>but she is pretty - not like sex-dripping fantasy people tend to expect when they hear of her species

>she is pretty like a young, teenage girl who happens to have zero skin problems and happens to be perfectly shaped for her body height

>she is 'normal' pretty, whenever she wants to be

>All it takes really. She looks like a nice teenage girl and she behaves like one.

>people see what the expect to see

>and everyone's danger sense falls asleep around her

>Even mine

>One would think that after even one attack like that, my body would develop an instinctual fear of her

>or something like that

>and it did in fact happen

>problem was - she knows how to switch it off

like right now when we are getting ready for our day

>everyone is moving around the kitchen, doing their thing

>i catch myself watching her and right than I see her as my parents see her

>and it is so easy to just see an average girl getting herself ready for school

>she looks at my mom and smiles

>and there is nothing alarming there. A flash of pretty white teeth, and warm dark eyes.

>it's so normal. I bet my mom doesn't even notice her tiny horns anymore.

>I wonder if it's the pretty face - I read people are instinctually relaxed by certain types of physical beauty

>but than there is also her body language

>in stories a succubus is always supposed to move 'sensually' and every pose is supposed to be 'sexy'

>but when Aviel is washing an apple and a lock of her hair gets loose and into her field of vision

>she goes to purse her lips and puff it out of the way

>and a bit later when she wipes her hands, she automatically tucks it behind her ear

>looking at those movements, the absent minded, relaxed way she does a picture perfect imitation of 'girl'

>it's still feminine and yes sexual to a horny teen

>but not alarming

>>132239

>it doesn't fit.

>watching as she looks herself over in the mirror and seemingly slightly uncomfortable, corrects her blouse

>that slender nervous young woman

>doesn't fit the toned nude body that materialized seemingly out of nowhere right as I was coming out of the shower last night

>her timid stance does not match her confident and precise movements when she twisted my towel around my hands and neck and planted me face first and ass up into the bathroom rug

>I watch as she bends to tug at the top of her knee socks

>I felt that knee yesterday as she pressed it into my neck

>it was like a pressure piston of some powerful machine, pressed down just hard enough to securely trap the bundled towel and hands at my neck

>I remember my eyes looking sideways at her, only seeing expanse of smooth leg extending from my neck

>and the perfect curve of her naked hip and buttock

>and my mind could hardly believe something so damn beautiful and lithe could feel so deadly

>but when my mouth opened to yell I could see that slight and calculated shift of her leg muscle, the tiny twist of that perfect hip

>which translated into undeniable pressure that suddenly cut off my breath and voice

>perhaps most of all it's her hands that are decieving

>they look so dainty - unblemished soft skin, graceful and slender.

>It seems like these hands can only ever be tender and gentle in their touch

>and its hard to imagine them doing the sort of things that my body has felt

>unthinkable that those long, thin fingers

>were the ones tumbling my testes so mercelessly yesterday

>constantly pressing and plying hard enough to keep that shadow of pain in my mind

>precise enough never to realize it.

>that the small palm of her hand

>was that slippery, hot vice that pumped me yesterday in relentless, slow temp

>seemingly always on the verge of crushing if only it was could get a better grip

>these same hands, only yesterday they spoke to my flesh and bid me to cum, or else.

>and I did

>>132240

>She has noticed me watching her

>Her eyes. That's where she always lets me see the real her

>My parents haven't noticed because they don't watch her eyes when she looks at me

>Suddenly I see her for the predator she is and my thoughts these last few minutes seem insane

>the hair on the back of my neck is standing on end and it seems ridiculous that my parents are right there, not feeling what she is

>one second and suddenly my body is actually shivering with nerves and instinctively its looking for a way out

>I feel like prety

>she smiles and turns away - and suddenly the illusion is back. Or the reality.

>If I am the only one who sees it, which is which?

>we need to get moving, everyone is heading out.

>that look… she is going to rape me again today. That's what her eyes said to me.

>"Somehow, somewhere… expect it all you like. Gonna get you."

>I walk beside her, past my dad getting into his car.

>"You okay, son?" as she stops a few feet from me and twirls a bit to look at the sun rise

>In the morning sunshine it seems silly to be afraid

>car radio starts crowing that old song - dad likes the classics

>"But she's not theeere"

>What can I answer?

>Maybe not right now.

>>132242

Gonna echo this anon's sentiments >>132192

Kid's going through some serious torment, I'm surprised he hasn't tried booking it yet, or considered the more messy, much much more permanent option out

>>132258

>the more messy, more permanent way out

You mean the homemade manufacture of aphrodisiacs and paralyzing agents to even the playing field right?

>>132266

Nah, I meant more like eating a bullet.

To be fair, I don't care for the whiny "woe is me" suicide crap. I just like seeing oblivious or asshole aggressors/predator MGs finally realizing just how fragile their target of affection/prey is.

>>132272

i get your point, i also find amusing the drama that comes with guilt-tripping.

But i'd rather see a happy ending.

>>132258

i can sort of see that sentiment when reading a story like this, but i think it misses the rather critical aspect of emotional association.

1) Anon is a teenager who never saw a real naked girl. Avelia is his first. Also, this one matches his taste of 'perfect' female in terms of looks really closely. Think of whoever is your most perfect idea of female beauty is - would you really be in such a rush to run away from that if she behaved likewise?

2 Physical sensation - consider also that while she often renders him helpless during her assaults, she never actually hurts him. Since she showed up, the biggest association to her right now in anon's head is a months of mind blowing orgasms usually enhanced by sharp emotions of danger/helplessness. They may not have been of free will, that doesn't mean they felt any less pleasant.

3) Sexuality is trained a lot. People who orgasm frequently, get used to orgasmic frequently, and they get horny more often - making anon more and more susceptible to her charms. No magic required - human bodies get used to everything, and things that feel good in particular. More specifically, sexuality is trained in fetishes as well up to a certain limit - certain acts get less repellent, more acceptable the more one experiments with them. Less negative association leads to more positive ones. (unless of course there is a screw up in execution which a succubus is unlikely to do) I am betting if any guy was "pleasantly" raped by a girl he finds sexy for several months, they would start to like it on some level even if they prefer being dominant.

Perhaps I am projecting, but I don't think that combo would lead into suicide reaction for most guys. There would probably be angst and depending on how they rate on sub/dom scale there might be plenty of resentment, but naked girls and orgasms tend to alleviate that a lot.

>I told my oneesan that I didn't want to be in a long term relationship since we were siblings

>She took it very well and understood

>But now she is always setting up dates with me and one of her monster friends

>Always let my shyness and autism get in the way and find an excuse to leave

>When I get home, I lie to her and say there has no chemistry, or some variation of that

>Later on she fucks me silly to cheer me up

>Cuddles me afterwards, tells me that there's always next time

She doesn't deserve a brother like me.

>>132275

It would probably make sense for depressing or apathy to set in. Being shown up by someone else and being tormented by that someone would tear away at people.

I'd at least assume some runaway attempt later.

>>132277

"Being shown up by someone else and being tormented by that someone would tear away at people" - exactly where I was sort of heading, assuming I get time to continue this

>>132278

Well, I hope you do. This is interesting.

I could see you going down that path a mile away.

>>132115

Incest is the purest form of love you ugly faggot.

>>132242

This is pretty good stuff anon. I love pathos, I hate that it gets ignored so much in mg stories.

>>132408

It's all mai waifu stuff, which isn't bad in moderation.

But these girls are called MONSTER girls for a reason, as Onee-Sadist will soon find out~ I think. The poor bastard can only take so much.

>>132141

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>>132242

Thank you anon for writing a succubus properly, instead of another generic cosplay with nothing of note whatsoever.

I'm sure it will trigger some over-sensitive faggots but don't mind them, they're the same people that will complain about succubi being bland and boring in another thread.

>>132277

>get amazing if kinky sex by extremely good looking literal semen demon

>depression and apathy

Feeling overwhelmed, confused, and disoriented yes, but I don't know how people who can't handle this without becoming suicidal can go through every day life without breaking down and crying every day.

>>132275

You're not projecting, it wouldn't lead to anything near suicide reaction for most. This is why monstergirl stories are almost always bland and boring shit that is getting really old: if its anything but handholding and hugging, some will complain.

>>132509

Yeah I'm with this guy; it's nice to see something that isn't the same bland stuff.

Good work man, and I hope you keep it up.

Seriously it's hot.

>>132509

I dunno, man. He's clearly afraid of her and doesn't want to be around her, no matter how good the succubutt thinks her rape is.

>>132509

Most people don't live their lives looking at sex as the ultimate goal. Being able to move around freely, and live out your own life without being essentially controlled down to your breathing and daily schedule is a pretty big key to happiness for humans in general. Once you have someone who has your entire day in the palm of their hand and never lets you forget it, that can get pretty depressing, actually. You say that it'll trigger some over-sensitive faggots, but you're bitching about people who don't rate sex as numero uno on their list of goals and accusing them of breaking down and crying every day, which seems a bit hypocritical. I'm also speaking from personal experience here with what amounted to a real life yandere. Kinky sex only goes so far once your freedom is stolen from you

>>132629

Most people don't live around an actual succubus.

And the succubus is showing at least some consideration for him what with not controlling his body to make him do stuff.

>>132629

>with what amounted to a real life yandere

Oh anon, do tell. How was it? I actually have some second-hand experience on them, a close relative, but he didn't wanna talk much about it.

It's okay if ya don't anyways, just being a curious faggot.

Also sage for off-topic i guess.

>>132600

It's only the breaking process anon, after that she'll take it a bit easier (I think). Not to mention it's straight up stated she stops when she notices she's gone too far. He also states several times he does like it when/after it happens, it's the fact that he never knows when it might happen that scares him.

>>132629

See above, and in that case you probably don't want a succubus. I know KC makes every MG bland and boring in an attempt to appease every single person but seriously, I don't see a reason every monstergirl should appeal to everyone, I actually don't even see a reason every monstergirl should appeal to the majority. Succubi being like this (at least at the start) makes them at least interesting, if one doesn't like the idea of it there are many other MGs that are a lot less assertive about dating.

As long as it ends happily, a few months of "suffering" are fine.

Real life yanderes are shit because you never know when one might stab you or someone else, seriously hurt you, or do God knows what, I think it's implied an MG wouldn't do that.

>>132635

Just gonna point out quick, not everyone's on the same even mental keel especially around here, so what you may percieve as "Care" on her part may be torment to another. Like >>132629 said earlier

>Being able to move around freely, and live out your own life without being essentially controlled down to your breathing and daily schedule is a pretty big key to happiness for humans in general. Once you have someone who has your entire day in the palm of their hand and never lets you forget it, that can get pretty depressing, actually.

The anon in the story may have some physical enjoyment over her rape on occasion, but he's clearly breaking down mentally. And when you're not all there mentally, sometimes you might make some stupid decisions.

To clarify though, I'm also immensely enjoying the story, I'm just not sugar-coating what I'm seeing. And, as far as the Succubus' care being legitimate? Well, the road to Hell was paved with good intentions.

And as another anon who's dealt with some serious crazy, I know how it feels when someone else controls every facet of your life because they "care" about you. That shit does bog down on you more than you'd think.

>>132635

Even you are referring to it as a breaking process. Her reasons for doing what she is doing aren't gone over so maybe she really does like him and is showing it in her own way, and yes, it looks that way, but not every story like this would have a happy ending. Like you said, not everyone is going to be open to this kind of thing, and it seems like the main character in the story is one of those.

>>132209

"Fluffy" and "CBT" exist on opposite ends of the spectrum, anon. The "you're trapped and can never escape" flavor of the story also makes it feel claustrophobic. Too dark.

>>132635

>Not to mention it's straight up stated she stops when she notices she's gone too far.

The worst harm can come from long-term stress, and that is exactly what she's doing here. The narrative indicates the MC is slowly breaking down. At this rate, he's either going to have a psychotic episode, or end up a gibbering nervous wreck who can do nothing more than lay back and occasionally squirt.

This is the kind of thing that legitimizes manletshit.

>>132242

I love it, will you continue it ?

>>132629

>Being able to move around freely, and live out your own life without being essentially controlled down to your breathing and daily schedule is a pretty big key to happiness for humans in general.

Yeah, look at all those people in Somalia with their total freedom, they thoroughly enjoy their life.

>>132834

Look at all that happiness in North Korea, sure wish I lived there.

>>132834

Yeah, look at all those people in Airstrip One with their total oligarchy, they thoroughly enjoy their life.

>>132800

Indeed, she is the kind of monster that should be purged for the safety of all.

I don't care how much she "loves" him, bitch needs to go.

>>132845

The story is not finished yet, go back to your containment thread.

>>132845

>>>/r9k/

>>132242

(Posting from different location)

I am continuing the story, but this next bit has expanded into several scenes which I think would go better together so I don't want release them separately.

So far I am only 1/5th done.

Approximate ETA is end of next week - I will post a link to a pastebin in this thread.

>>132881

I'm hoping for a happy ending but I'll settle for whatever so long as succubutt feels like shit at the end for all this abuse she's putting MC through.

>>132881

Looking forward to it, hope it is hot.

>>132149

Nigger this is just depressing. Succu-sluts are shit teir in every concivable way.

>>132793

The story doesn't have CBT. I admit threat of it is part of how succuslut keeps the MC obedient but she doesn't really do it.

CBT would be punching, kicking or even using hot iron on male genitalia. Not "squeezing the testicles just enough so you feel bit uncomfortable

>>132881

Looking forward to it. Take your time.

>>132888

I agree with you to some degree. Succubutt should admit she has mistreated MC and aim for more equal relationship if she wants it to be long-term. I would go for combination of Stockholm Syndrome and gradually gentler succubutt.

>>133488

>I agree with you to some degree. Succubutt should admit she has mistreated MC and aim for more equal relationship if she wants it to be long-term. I would go for combination of Stockholm Syndrome and gradually gentler succubutt.

God no.

This whole "make the girls gentler" all the goddamn time is annoying.

>>134010

>gentler

I don't think it's 'Gentler' so much as the Mon start seeing the guy less as a walking, talking baggie of their own personal brand of heroin and actually start appreciating them as a fellow sapient.

Empathy always makes for good endings, unfortunately.

>>134017

If I wanted to read how people got forced into really shitty situations from which they had no escape, and how it fucked them up for life, I'd read the newspaper.

>>134061

This is true, real life is the darkest story of them all.

Maybe you can get the guy to actually escape their family and get a new one through legal and moral means, keeping it slightly dark yet have a bright future for the MC if you don't want to go the "Lel erryone learns their lesson" route.

Also, am I literally the only one who wants a Succu-Oneesan that DOESN'T want to rape me 24/7 and actually finds incest icky? Instead she just ships me with various Mamono and tries to get me and her newest target together, cue shenanigans

>>132242

7/10

woulda been 10/10 without pegging. come back again please writefag

>>134069

Only to end up aghast when her little bro ends up with a human woman :^)

>>134069

Someone should write this.

>>134010

This. She should lighten up later once they're married or as good as married and maybe not pull this shit 10 times a day, but the general gist of it should stay the same. Maybe a bit less sudden sex in public and more at home, but if there isn't the sexual anxiety of never knowing if it might happen or not would remove a lot.

>>134076

>pegging

That never happened. Nor did CBT like someone said earlier. Where are people getting this stuff from?

>>134172

>Shoving her fist in MC's ass in a public park

You're right anon, it's not pegging, it's just anal fisting.

I don't know what CBT stands for

>>134176

>fisting

It was a single finger.

CBT = Cock and Ball Torture, anything from punching to outright castration. Fucked up vile shit. Either way tying your balls to a branch isn't CBT, unless she explicitly did that with the intent of making you fall.

>>134205

Should clarify, the branch thing is only almost torture, castration is full torture

>>134205

Should clarify, the branch thing is only almost torture, castration is full torture

Fucking let me post god dammit

>>134182

>getting your balls tied to anything

>not torture

>>134205

I was going to say that the branch thing was what I meant as "almost torture" and to not confuse it with castration, but after two failed posts now I'm thinking.

If a man ran up to you and said a woman had just tied his balls to a tree branch forcing him to stay on all fours while she stuck a finger up his ass, all in a public park so close to the sidewalk that one wrong moan and he'd have been arrested for indecent exposure, would you envy or pity him?

Succubutt is going beyond bullying in this thread, and suffering no consequences is making her bolder. I just hope we get to see her find out what happens when you really break a human. Not, "Oh no, I'm hard even though I don't like it" but "I see my adopted sister behind every lamp post, lurking in every shadow, in the face of every passerby, waiting for a chance to molest me, and now I haven't slept in a week and a half"

>>134208

>>134210

In the time it took to write this, my post made it through anyways. Neat. polite sage

>>134205

I was going to say that the branch thing was what I meant as "almost torture" and to not confuse it with castration, but after two failed posts now I'm thinking.

If a man ran up to you and said a woman had just tied his balls to a tree branch forcing him to stay on all fours while she stuck a finger up his ass, all in a public park so close to the sidewalk that one wrong moan and he'd have been arrested for indecent exposure, would you envy or pity him?

Succubutt is going beyond bullying in this thread, and suffering no consequences is making her bolder. I just hope we get to see her find out what happens when you really break a human. Not, "Oh no, I'm hard even though I don't like it" but "I see my adopted sister behind every lamp post, lurking in every shadow, in the face of every passerby, waiting for a chance to molest me, and now I haven't slept in a week and a half"

>>134208

>>134210

In the time it took to write this, my post made it through anyways. Neat. polite sage

All these failed posts are starting to worry me

>>134205

I was going to say that the branch thing was what I meant as "almost torture" and to not confuse it with castration, but after two failed posts now I'm thinking.

If a man ran up to you and said a woman had just tied his balls to a tree branch forcing him to stay on all fours while she stuck a finger up his ass, all in a public park so close to the sidewalk that one wrong moan and he'd have been arrested for indecent exposure, would you envy or pity him?

Succubutt is going beyond bullying in this thread, and suffering no consequences is making her bolder. I just hope we get to see her find out what happens when you really break a human. Not, "Oh no, I'm hard even though I don't like it" but "I see my adopted sister behind every lamp post, lurking in every shadow, in the face of every passerby, waiting for a chance to molest me, and now I haven't slept in a week and a half"

>>134208

>>134210

In the time it took to write this, my post made it through anyways. Neat. polite sage

All these failed posts are starting to worry me

Holy fuck is this the worst it's ever been?

>>134230

>>134228

>>134234

Good god what it wrong with this website.

I guess only post once and pray it goes through from now on and don't risk posting three fucking times like me. I even forgot to sage the last one.

>>134230

>>134234

>>134228

*Jesus Christ, HW.*

>>134205

If she only did things you were comfortable with, where would the fun be?

>>134222

Did she hit your balls? No. Did she tie them up with the purpose of making you fall? No (would have undone it if you were about to). Not CBT, only threat of CBT.

I have an idea that could add to this story.

>Somebody could have used divide-and-conquer tactics on my family

>She doesn't need to resort to something so crude

>Her manipulation is much more sophisticated

>She keep telling my parents how happy she is to have such a sweet brother as me

>I can't say anything negative about her without sounding like a douche

>When I got D from test she told parents it was because I helped her instead studying myself

>In reality she milked me entire night and I stayed barely awake during the test

>>134222

It's a bit nasty but in this case it doesn't count as torture. Being on all fours is easy (I only tried a minute or so but I think I could easily stay like that for the time the scene took.) It depends a bit on the angles you put your limbs into. Knees probably start hurting but you can compensate with your toes, elbows and palms.

>>134316

Who is this

semen demon

sperm worm

boner toner

spunk monk

cock dock

erection ejection

dick tick

cum plum

seed steed

prick chick

cock stock

seminal sentinel

phallus chalice

anus ignoramus

smegma enigma

beef curtain hurtin

cunt runt

jism prison

ballbiting ballerina

dongle mongle

penis machinist

chin chin bin

scrotum sorceress

wiener cleaner

pole populator

stiffy stimulator

pillar pimper

column culminator

testicle tamer

sperm specialist

glans gladiator

frenulum fractionizer

foreskin forenicator

Penile Private

Smut Sergeant

Cock Captain

Orifice Officer

Rear Admiral

Cummander

Lewd Lieutenant

Meat Major

Cunt Colonel

weiner witch

phallus phalanx

cock commandant

dong deity

seminal fluid druid

jizz wiz

benis burglar

wang waxer

schlong sentinel

dick dastard

jizz jezebel

tally wacker packer

schlong sorcerrer

weenie genie

chode road

male repoductive organ gorgan

shaft shaft

ding dong dungeon

cock dock

scrotum totem

ballsack knapsack

testicle vestibule

ball butter nutter

cock cream captivator

man milk Mephistopheles

>>134572

She's still purge-tier.

>>134596

Pretty sure that's Setagaya Mari from Itadaki! Seieki. A half-vampire half-succubus.

>>134590

>"I-It's not torture to be forced to walk on hot charcoal"

>"You just have to avoid sinking your feet in it"

Fucking Succubus sex toy, I bet you enjoy getting stepped on your balls.

>>134572

Point guns at people all you want, after all you're not actually shooting people!

>>134590

Have you ever tried remaining on all fours for even half an hour?

>>134627

I thought that was something where, at the time, they weren't actually together yet, but two guys tried to rape her, and it turned into a gangbang where she taunted them for having such thin cum compared to the MC but also the MC was gangbanging her too or something. And then after that she decides she loves him and him alone and they're actually together from that point.

>>134626

I just tried. I lasted almost 7 minutes. However usually I never spend time on all fours. If I had succubus sister who'd make me regularly do that as part of other stuff I would of course get more accustomed to it.

>>134662

More like get your limbs rekt.

If those complaining don't like it, they could go somewhere else?

There's plenty of threads where the same stuff is repeated, let those of us who enjoy this have the one story.

>>134590

>>134662

Alright anon, now try being on all fours with a finger in your butt. It gets a bit more difficult.

>>134718

I'm not saying the story should stop, I'm just saying that succubutt is being a huge cunt about her sexual bullying.

Writefig pls we miss you

>>135879

still on it. Soooon.

>>132881

http://pastebin.com/PbfaN0Gp

Decided to continue via pastebin due to length. Switched to normal prose format.

This is the first time I posted any of my ideas online - they usually die unfinished on my hard drive. This one wouldn't let go.

Will continue at some point, but probably not for a week or more.

Also, have no beta - so expect errors.

>>136480

Thank you, really enjoying the story!

>>136480

Interesting. Hopefully the guy manages to succeed in doing… something worthwhile in the next update.

Are you gonna put part one on there as well?

>>136480

Pretty good. I wonder what would happen if Anon decides to run away from home?

>>136480

Goddamn this guy's getting fucking rekt.

>>136555

He will either do that or break down crying at some point. Will probably be the turning point when she realizes she's overdoing it a little.

>>136565

Personally I hope he just snaps and books it one day, despite what he thinks about doing it.

>>136567

A lot of people would by this point, this shit is edging towards psychological warfare, no pun intended.

Honestly if anything in this story is putting me off it is the butt stuff.

Sorry to say this folks but butt holes are gross.

>>136480

Interesting story so far, I'm enjoying it.

This story makes you wonder how a Lilim would be, doesn't it?

>>136842

something like this

>>136480

Well written, better than most,in my opinion.

Do you still have your other writing on your hard drive?

I'd very much like to read it.

>>136480

diff ip.

>>136555

>>136853

to answer that is a story spoiler

I kind of tried to explain that in the end there: with getting so completely and constantly 'rekt' as another anon put it, for MC at this point, him not giving up completely and/or running away is pretty much the only 'win' he can chalk up on the scoreboard. Sometimes in life the only thing you can hold on to is the fact you are still standing, and in such cases it usually seems very important not to lose that. Less one has left, the more one values it sort of thing. In more general terms story-wise: right at the start when I saw prompt of 'succubus sister', I've decided that MC's most suitable 'super power' would need to be mental resilience. My idea of a succubus is heavily influenced by ManyEyedHydra's writing, in terms of personality variance and a guy would need to be really able to hold it together to last long term with one.

>>136552

yes, just going to rewrite it as normal prose first and probably adjust the level of internal edginess a bit

>>136850

They are way too unfinished to share at this point. They are mostly just ~10k words of intros that stop before the plot starts moving. On the plus side - i've kind of pushed myself to finish this part in the 1 week deadline I set for myself and will now try to continue one of them.

https://8ch.net/monster/res/126579.html#128417

I did write this short piece in another thread, though it's less lewd and much shorter.

>>136692

not sure if that will help, but when I write scenes like that it's under assumption that MC is a neat freak when it comes to personal hygiene I've considered including a paragraph on how thoroughly he cleans himself to try to lower the disgust factor but just couldn't find a way to fit it anywhere without breaking the flow of the other scenes. Also that succubus magic/saliva/lubrication specializes in cleansing anything that's not a sex-related fluid on automatic. They are supposed to be personification of magical eroticism after all and it will be one of her passive abilities that he will discover in the course of the story.

>>136870

Nah it is not even about being super clean person it just kind of grosses me out still.

>>136870

Can you explain a bit more why do you think that "not running away" is a win for MC? I understand that you want to play up his mental fortitude, but that would mean MC willing to be constantly raped until succubutt gets desperate or bored, and she is far from desperate now. Basically she said "I have mindbroken you, stop being in denial and give in." You cant really stay sane if you are physically broken, and MC is very close to this. You said that MC cannot fight succubutt, cannot reason with her, cannot avoid her. And right now she is planning something big, since she needed to send away MC's parents, despite them being completely under her thumb. The only way to disrupt her plans and not be subjected to whatever she is planning is to run away. It's the only thing MC has not tried yet. In fact it also might be the only way train himself to counter her strength and magic. She is obsessed with breaking him so he can count on her following him and set up a trap. I know you probably think that he can somehow win against her without running away, but I still think it's far from being "defeated", considering everything else was tried and did not work.

>>137080

Well, he could always go full Anon Kovac and install ten locks on his bedroom door. It's not as extreme as running away, and he can still maintain a bit of peace in the sanctum of his room. Worst case scenario she gets a ladder or flies up to his window and starts smashing her way in, but a yandere succubutt is another problem entirely.

He's gotta be at least suffering by this point, he was pinned down and forced to roll for anal circumference until he was a quivering in a pile of fluids on the floor. If that's his idea of mentally withstanding her, that's a pretty Pyrrhic fucking victory.

>>137085

Nigger, that is not the worst case scenario of going full Anon Kovac

>>137085

>go full Anon Kovac

Fucking hell, no escape. Ever.

>>137085

Going fill Anon Kovac is much, much worse then you realize. ALSO I WANT OFF THIS FEELS TRAIN ;-;

>>137080

>needed to send away MC's parents, despite them being completely under her thumb

She didn't send his parents anywhere - they are a middle aged couple that have been affected by her passive effect of gradually arousing everyone around her. Living with her gave a supernatural kick to their hormone levels. They recently started feeling like they are back in their 20s in terms of energy levels, libidos and emotions and they are taking full advantage of that.

>running away

am surprised that so many anons think this would be the appropriate thing to do in this case. To run away right now means to abandon his family, his home, most of his possessions and consign himself to a life as a homeless teen. It's a dead end solution - sure it might get him away from her… at the cost of his entire life. His win is that he hasn't caved to her wishes yet and is still intent on resisting. More to the point about the reactions - so far all the scenes I've described are like a 3/10 on my sexual abuse scale. I just seriously don't see it even close to long term 'mindbreaking' an average guy at this point. She hasn't even hurt him yet (well she did a little, but imediately more than made up for it with pleasure). >

Nicely done writer.

I'm liking what I'm reading, hope you keep it up!

>>137138

Some people are just really set on nothing but pure-hearted feelsy romance all the time

>>137138

I think what most anons are getting at is the loss of control that the MC is feeling. Teenagers really want more control over their lives, it is seen as the rebellious phase by many as they demand more freedom and control over their lives.

Suddenly this girl comes along and takes that all away from him. His parents give control over him to this girl, she takes control of him with just her words. She can force him to do what she wants, even if she does not do it again the damage was done when she did it. That fear would be in the back of MCs mind still. He has lost control over his life and probably the only control he could get is by running away.

>>137171

Not really that I prefer lovey dovey stories. But it is well written don't get me wrong, just as I pointed out the lack of control MC is feeling at the moment is going to make him snap

>>136870

>ManyEyedHydra

This explains a lot. Reminds me I gotta check his page again.

>>137177

That's what makes the story hit a bit close to home for me: The lack of control for the MC. I had literally zero autonomy for most of my teenage years, and I always had someone hounding me every minute of every day. Granted, it wasn't for mind-bending orgasms (which might have improved things), but it does start to pull at every little nerve in you. It'll make you paranoid as fuck being both dependent on and/or under someone else's permanent watch and unable to get away from it.

Polite sage for blogpost.

>>137181

I'm just now reading his stuff for the first time, I can definitely see the connection.

Jesus, Anon here has it pretty sweet compared to some of the bastards in those stories.

>>136480

Am I the only one that gets a very Tyler Durden vibe off Aviel? I'm reminded very heavily of the line "I'll bring us through this. As always. I'll carry you - kicking and screaming - and in the end you'll thank me. " during line 250. Anyways, I love moral ambiguity and tail pegging is a niche fetish of mine, so I'm more than on board with this story.

>>136480

>>136870

>>137138

I fail to see how sticking around to be abused is some kind of "win" for anon here.

Someone rapes you and destroys your dignity, and makes it their business to rek you at everything you do just to spite you, and you stick around? What the fuck kind of reasoning is that? That is just straight up Stockholm syndrome.

I tell you what, if someone just showed up, raped me for months and humiliated me so completely, I would off myself pretty darn quick, no questions asked.

Any sane person would run far, far away from such an abusive household. People having their dignity constantly smashed may as well not have anything else to live for.

I'm really sorry for sperging out at this but seeing Anon so horribly abused and him doing fuck all about it like the kid who does nothing when he's bullied really pissed me off.

I guess it just hits too close to home when I've seen this happen IRL. I'll shut up now.

>>137181

>>137238

Got a link to Hydra's pastebin?

>>137313

Just google manyeyedhydra, derpman. He's on literotica.

>>137138

>3/10 on my sexual abuse scale.

3/10 sounds about right, it's only been threats of abuse to increase arousal. The problem is people are so used to the bland MGE writing where the difference between a kiki and a vampire is, at best, the preference of being on top or not during sex for the purpose of procreation. People used to MGE would find hot wax to be way too far.

What do people expect out of a Succubus, exactly? Who says "I want to fuck a Succubus" and doesn't expect to get a tail in his ass at the very least?

Also running away would basically be a surrender, showing her he can't beat her, which I think the MC is trying his best to avoid.

>>137177

>>136870

Keep going, I wanna see where this ends up.

After going through ManyEyedHydra's writing, I implore you not to do his types of endings.

The end usually had the guy dying and that's such a boner killer,man.

am genuinely miffed that more write anons have not jumped in this thread

>>137498

I can try would be present tense "what do I do?" though

>>137703

Go on. Its good.

>>137722

I can update on my situation tomorrow. Any advice for what to do, though?

Also, trying to do a whole "realtime" thing. I'm sure I can throw something together by tomorrow night, and maybe make the presentation more attractive.

>>137722

also, thanks

>>137726

Try and introduce conflict, something interesting.

Don't make it all sweet and sugary like every other story out there.

But don't go too much shadow the edgehog,too.

Other than that, it's fine, your grammar is fine as far as I know.

>>137746

>>I'm the guy who detarailed the hegemony thread.

Nope.

>hegemony thread.

No clue nor interest in what that is.

>>137726

>Any advice for what to do, though?

get back at Jynsha by rolling around in her bed, naked

good luck getting any sleep with my scent everywhere

make sure to barricade your bedroom door

>>137835

will do.

>>137822

[spoiler[interesting but not too sweet or edgy. i think i can do that[/spoiler]

>>137849

Fucking hell, how do I keep fucking up spoilers

>>137851

Just use two stars before and after the specific words you want to hide.

Kind of like inverted commas, but you're doing it twice.

>>137849

>>137835

Don't just roll around, jizz on her pillow.

That way she can catch our main character in her bedroom jacking off

>>137835

>>137855

I can do that. I just got to school, the first morning in the semen demon household has already been hectic. I'll let you guys know later tonight.

Right, back with more Tales from Titty Town

I wake up at 5:30 to a clusterfuck of guitar insanity: Assassin, by Muse. Never fails to get me out of bed. Before I get out of bed, though, I look around. Nope, no demons to be seen. Door looks like it's still locked, too.

At least, that's what I think as I get out of bed. Very quickly, I find myself on the hardwood floor, face to the ground. She was under my fucking bed. God damn it.

Quickly, Jynsha rolls me onto my back and locks lips with me, all the while holding me down with both hands and grinding her scantily clad hips on mine. She can definitely feel my boner, as she specifically targets in with her aggressively thrusting hips. Faster than anyone has ever taken off my shirt, ever, she tears off the white undershirt I wore to bed and begins to work with her mouth, licking kissing, and biting until she reaches the flannel bottoms, which she pulls down with her mouth. I hear a slight giggle as my dick pops out and hits her in the face, and then she goes to work, taking me all the way consistently. Somehow, it's even better than last night, and within minutes I shoot ropes of cum into her mouth, which she swallows appreciatively.

"Get dressed," she says, standing up from the floor. "We have to get to school. It shouldn't be too hard, I've already done half the work for you."

Fucking hell. I dress myself in a pair of jeans and a t shirt and start to run down the stairs. Unfortunately for me, I run directly into Orinia (who's probably coming to wake me up), and we both fall down. She sniffs a bit and then completely spaces out.

"Uh, good morning," I say. "Sorry."

"Mmm." She has her eyes locked on me now.

"Ms. Orinia? Are you alright?"

Quickly, she snaps out of it and begins blushing furiously, her red eyes darting about. "Oh. Oh! I'm so sorry, Anon, I didn't sleep well and I wasn't paying attention and–"

"Oh, no, it's fine. Don't worry about it," I say, smiling. She just continues to blush. "A-anyways, I made pancakes for you and Jynsha."

I express my thanks and go downstairs to eat at the dinner table. In a few minutes, my foster sister joins me, sitting next to me at the table. In a few seconds, her tail has already snaked up my pants and coiled around my leg.

"Do you mind?" I ask, not necessarily upset, just bothered that my personal time with the absolutely amazing pancakes is being interrupted.

She just smiles and eats. "Mom knew."

God damn it, some classic comedy moments could be occurring if I had some sort of liquid in my mouth. "Fucking hell, this doesn't bother you?"

She just shrugs. "Not really. I'm really behind the curve on all of this. All of my friends have already claimed someone, so–"

"I'm gonna stop you right there. I hardly know you, Jynsha. And you're my sister." "Foster sister." "Yeah, whatever. I know how the claiming thing works. I know that I don't really have a choice. But I want to make my own decisions on this shit."

She laughs. "You think I'm going claim you? I never said that. You're nuts."

"Was I wrong?" I counter.

Her face goes from slightly pale to bright red in a matter of seconds. "S-shut up! Stupid jerk!"

Fucking hell. Tsundere demons.

We finish our breakfast in silence. By the time we do, Orinia has calmed down and is waiting with the car keys by the back door. "Allez-vous!" she shouts cheerily, tripping down the first step out of the house. Time to go to school.

By the time we get there, the school is bustling with activity. It's about 6:30, and everyone is just relaxing before the day begins. Turns out that I have all the same classes with Jynsha. Due to some malevolent deity, no doubt. I meet her friends pretty quickly, as she doesn't really let me out of her sight. Although it takes me a few tries to get the names right, I eventually get them all: the Kitsune is Selene, the dormouse is Christie, the fairy is Nuala {spoiler]I have no shame[/spoiler], and the human is Becca.

Jynsha wasn't lying when she said all of her friends had already claimed someone, it seems. All three of her monster friends have guys basically attached to them. They're pretty cool guys, it turns out, so I'll probably be hanging around them later.

Weirdly enough, they're all also named Anon

Classes are pretty boring. Unlike my chinese cartoons, no one in real life really does the whole "meet the new student" shtick, so I just introduce myself to those who care and relax for the most part. I was involved in an IB program at my last school. They have one, but I've missed enough due dates and etc. that it doesn't matter, I'm not getting that specific diploma anyways. I notice a few girls taking notice of me in the time between the beginning of the day and lunch: a few hellhounds, a manticore, a faggot cat. I don't return the attention in as much magnitude, but I do acknowledge their presence.

Knowing my luck, that will come back to bite me.

Anyways, Jynsha pulls me aside by the hand when lunch rolls around. Instantly, I feel my dick retract a few inches into my body. Fucking hell, nowhere is safe.

"If we're going to do this, please, god, tell me you have somewhere safe," I sigh.

"What? Ew, no, I'm not going to do that shit at school. I'm on the way to valedictorian, I'm not going to fuck that up over my little brother's dick."

I scowl at the way she says little brother. I guess she is 18, and I'm 17, but shit, she seemed way too happy about saying that.

She drags me up a few flights of stairs to the roof of the school, where her friends are participating in the worst kind of debauchery: cuddling and holding hands. I almost vomit when I see it. It's a bit cold for lunch outside, but I handle it. We sit around in a circle and eat our lunch, just talking. Jynsha has some pretty nice friends, I find. They're very interested in me and my life, so I give them the short version.

"Basically, shit went down at home, I voluntarily went into the system, and everything's come up roses now."

Selene giggles a bit at my explanation, for no apparent reason. "How do you like Ms. Orinia?" Nuala asks brightly.

"She's super nice. A bit ditzy, but definitely a hell of a lot nicer than my biological mom. I can see why the system trusts her so much."

Nuala's Anon snorts. "Yeah, that sounds like her." Jynsha scowls at him in response, before lying her head on my lap.

Fucking what.

All of the girls begin giggling some more, and I feel all of the blood in my body rush to my face. Hastily, Jynsha sits back up, her face just as red as mine.

You know that look I said Jynsha got when we met? All of the girls have that look now. Except maybe Christie, who looks like she's going to ragdoll into sleep any moment. I can feel the questions and the dogging coming, but then, my saving grace: the bell. Thank god, I think.

Jynsha and I then head to our last class, Theater. They're doing some sort of collaborative project for the IB program, and I, of course, get stuck with my lusty foster sister. It's like there's some malevolent force controlling my luck, I swear. Anyways, that finishes after we do some weird ass theater games to encourage teamwork or some hippy bullshit. Finally, the last bell rings, and we're out for the day.

contd.

will be back in 30, have to shit, shower, and shave

>>137830

I was saying that I was the guy and forgot how greentext works. Disregard.

>>138226

You did a terrible mistake by accepting those panties.

Succusluts are like danukis without the fluffy tail, if you think she gave them to you for free, then you are mistaken.

She's probably going to be even more aggressive now.

Enjoy your life as a fuccboi.

** >how did i do?

I like it, keep going fam. **

also, im confused, does succumom want your dick?

>>138240

>You did a terrible mistake by accepting those panties.

fuck…

>also, im confused, does succumom want your dick?

dude, I don't know. I'm 100% sure it's illegal until I hit 18

to be honest I'm just keeping the option open

>>138246

>implying a succubbus cares about legal or moral matters

Just let it happen.

>>138294

Legal matters are one thing. But cucking your own daughter is something else entirely.

>>138297

Who says cucking is on her mind? Maybe she wants to share with her daughter but doesn't want to make things more awkward for Anon than they already are

>>138246

Accepting them might not be the end, not all succubi are that bad, though yeah, no small amount of them are. Jynsha seems pretty chill for a succubus considering she didn't a) drain you dry on the spot or b) go for orgasm denial. All told, for getting caught fucking around in her room you got off light, plus she gave you something to help you get off. She might legitimately like you, tsundere tendencies aside. I guess you'll see where it goes depending on how she acts after this.

>>138395

>not all succubi are that bad

So I've heard

>Jynsha seems pretty chill for a succubus

Yeah, especially considering the story that other guy was talking about in this thread. It definitely could be much worse.

>go for orgasm denial

Well, she did once. Do we count it if it's revenge?

Anyways, school just got out, and I just got home with Orinia and Jynsha, so I'm probably going to give you guys another late night update.

>>138399

>Do we count it if it's revenge?

Probably not, you kinda brought that one on yourself. Either way, stopping short of letting you finish and then letting you go is like a 1/10 on the orgasm denial scale, man. It could have been a lot worse.

>>138403

>1/10

>It could have been a lot worse.

I… I don't think I want to know.

>>138406

Ay friendo

Here's an idea

Set a trap for her.

Splooge into some sort of container so you can seal it (so they won't smell it). Next, put some of it in one of those snake in a can gag things. Now, load that shit up with glitter.

You have to make the can look innocuous; something she would be curious enough about to open but not enough to set her warning alarms off. Put it in her room somewhere that she would definitely encounter, like the bottom of the closet, under her bed, or behind a book on a bookshelf.

You're going to have to be clever for bigger pranks after this. Like putting some of your splooge in her shoes or notebooks (just a little) so it gets all the mon in class hot and bothered.

Also I anticipate that she'll angrily snu-snu you afterwards, so you have to be ready for that too. I suggest spraying glitter all over her when you orgasm, yelling "surpise!"

Also I suggest you demand she hold your hand while she does lewd things to you. You must also maintain eye contact the entire time.

>>138435

Uhh… Have you considered just trying to talk to her before you resort to glitter and semen fueled prank warfare? Because that's going to be a hard one to take back if anything goes wrong.

>>138440

He's right, let's start by leaving the cumsock we used that night under her bed.

This way, there's a chance that the mom finds it instead

>>132180

>>132179

>>132149

Why the fuck am I reading this in a stereotypical film-noir self-narrating voice?

>>138440

>>138458

I guess turning it straight up to 11 would not be preferable for my life.

Dammit, I had the glitter ready, too.

>>138478

What's the worst she could do?

Rape you?

You show her who's the boss.

Alright, round three. Let's do this.

Today was a bit more interesting, to say the least. You'll see.

I wake up to the same song at the same time. Almost instantly, I dazily check under the bed for intruders. Nope, nothing. So I get up and walk over to the corner closet only recently filled with all of my clothes. I've pretty much picked out a shirt when I notice a glint in the darkness.

"Ah, shit."

I'm hit full force and taken down almost instantly. Jynsha is making forcible eye contact with me, not breaking it for even a second. I can feel her breath on me, ragged and strong. She's in just her underwear, if it can even be called that. It's very skimpy, but expect no less from a succubus, I suppose. She's straddling me by now, softly gyrating her hips on mine. Her pussy is hot and wet, I can feel that even through the two or three layers of clothes separating our sexes. Jynsha begins biting me softly, all over. I know what this is almost instantly, every girl (all two) I've ever been with has done this. She's trying to find my weak spots, where she can get me hot and bothered. It doesn't take long for her to find each and every one. With every gasp I give, she giggles a bit, plays with that spot, then moves on to find another. God damn, she's good at what she does. She feels me get hard, even slipping a hand down my pants to lightly stroke my shaft.

"That'll come later," she says with a shit eating grin.

Oh. Oh jeez. What comes later?

Before I can ask this question, she stands up and walks out like nothing had just happened, her ass shaking smoothly through the air, her tail doing almost the same. She's like poetry in motion, every inch of her.

God damn, do I like her?

I shake this thought quickly. She's put me through… well, something. At least I'm not going to smell even stronger than usual, so Orinia won't have yet another testosterone-induced panic attack. I throw on a shirt and jeans (again), pack my shit, and head downstairs, quickly pouring a bowl of Lucky Charms and saying good morning to a robed Orinia, who just smiles endearingly. At the same time, she seems really relieved that I don't smell too strong. I'm definitely going to have to keep that in check in the future.

"Oh, Anon," she says softly. "Would you mind driving you and Jynsha to school? I'm afraid I have some things to handle here."

"Oh, not at all," I say. Surely Jynsha won't fuck around with me when I'm driving… right?

Right?

I have this concern on the drive from home to school, but all she does is rest a hand on my thigh, not doing much of anything with it, but just lightly resting her hand on top of it, with her fingers barely tickling my inner thigh. It isn't enough to make me hard, but it's enough to get me going, more than a bit. She can probably tell.

We get to class early again, this time it's Theory of Knowledge. The short version is that IB is a shitty curriculum that decided to put in an ethics/history/humanities class because fuck you.

I cope with the monotonous hugbox boredom that is that class. Eventually, the teacher decides that the conversation should turn to that P a l a d i n d u that got shot by a lizardman in Missouri last year. She tries to push the topic of discrimination against the dindus, but given that over a third of the class is monster and very pissed, she decides to drop the topic.

I, of course, find it hilarious.

"Do you even have P a l a d i n s here?" I ask Jynsha quietly.

She laughs under her breath. "Of course. A lot of them decided to make private schools when mamono came into the picture, but we still have some fuckers screaming 'Deus Vult' at the top of their lungs and punching people out every so often. It's fucking hysterical, so long as you aren't the one being punched out."

After an age and a half, we finally get out of the bullshit class and head to English.

>>138614

fucking hell I knew that line was shit

Jynsha and I beeline for the car almost instantly, so as to avoid the bulk of the traffic. As with every school, this fails horribly, and we get stuck in the line for a bit.

"So," my foster sister starts, eyes affixed on the red minivan in front of us. "I know you gave us the short version of why you're in the system, but what's the long version?"

I frown. It's a touchy subject. "Uh, why?"

"I'm just curious. I'm not gonna use it against you or anything," she says, looking at me. I ponder this for a second. She seems to be telling the truth.

Do I trust her? Yeah, fuck it.

"Back when I lived with my family–you know, my biological family–there were a lot of issues. A lot of yelling. A lot of emotional abuse. A lot of me waiting outside for hours in the blistering cold because they forgot that they were my only ride. I sank into depression. Last year, I decided I was fed up with it, and ran away. They got me of course, but the cops questioned me, and so I told them the truth–that I didn't feel safe or comfortable in my home, that I had emotional harm. My sister and I had a choice–live with family or go into the system. Sister chose family, I chose system. I haven't really regretted it so far. Hell, the only reason why my last family dropped me was due to the system saying they weren't legally allowed to foster anymore. That's how I'm here."

"Oh," Jynsha whispers.

I nod. "It was a rough time, but I'm over it. I'm happy now."

She's quiet for the rest of the ride. It's a very cold day today and the heater's out in the car, so by the time we get home, we're both shivering with cold, and we sprint/stumble inside, bags in hand. When we get inside, we both look at each other and smile, faces both red from the cold and not embarrassment for once.

"Hi there, you two!" Orinia says, smiling brightly. She's bundled tightly in a form fitting blue sweater. Fucking hell, I can't handle the milftacularity. "How was everything?"

We humor her for a bit, then I decide to go upstairs where it's warmer and a bit less boner inducing. Also, mostly to check the replies to the thread I posted Wednesday night.

Pretty quickly, I see >>138473's post, and my mind explodes. This is gonna be good. First making sure that she's still downstairs, I grab Jynsha's cum covered underwear and sneak into her room. Hastily, I stuff it under the bed covers before sneaking back into my room.

Mission accomplished. I have glitter on hand as well, and I'm 100% ready for the next surprise rape

I dunno man, from the way you're talking, I get the impression you like her, or at least that you're not entirely disliking your situation. Nothing wrong with that though, I suppose. From what you've said, they seem like generally decent (if horny) folks. Why not ask Jynsha to show you around or something? You could probably stand to treat her something while you're out, since from what your wrote it sounds like she took care of you after you passed out.

By all mean, continute. It's an enjoyable read

Fucking Hell.

>>138690 is supposed to be in reply to >>138666

>>138748

>Doing really stupid shit to them

Dude, that's like the only thing I'm good at.

>get her a small gift of some sort

Not a bad idea…

>Also thank ara ara for being a welcoming foster parent and try and make it clear that thing should stay strictly platonic.

Yeah, it's probably for the best for our continued relationship.

>And for the love of Illias don't decide to talk to her right after you rub one out or get frisky with Jynsha.

I feel like that's something I should have figured out from day one.

>I think you're doing a really good job btw

Y-you too.

Turns out I can get past the school internet blocks, but my shit eating grins are inciting a weird look from Jynsha so I should hop off momentarily.

By the way, I've been informally invited to hang out at around 5ish with all of Jynsha's friends (her included). Apparently there's some kind of concert that they want to go to, can't say I've heard of the artist before. I'll try to type up some stories from today between getting home and leaving, then let you know what went down when we get home.

>>138779

*you guys

>>138651

>She pauses for a bit. "Jerk."

;_;

>>138666

I'll be straight with you anon, the story above got me pretty buttblasted because I hate the domination humiliation shit.

When I was reading your story my brain was constantly thinking he should run away or something.

Your comfy story about kind succubus and consensual vanilla is making me happy and less buttblasted.

Thanks.

>>136480

So when can we expect more?

posting from phone

yes I know I'm later than I said

Day 4 of my new household.

I wake up, and I'm instantly cautious, looking for an assailant in every nook and cranny. Surely I won't get assaulted again… Right?

Either way, I'm cautious throughout. I don't see Jynsha anywhere in my room. Thank god. So, I get dressed and step into the bathroom to pee.

And, I'm tackled from behind.

Lovely.

Jynsha has pinned me to the floor. At least she's actually wearing clothes this time: a plaid skirt and a button down with the sleeves rolled up to her elbows.

I expect more furious eroticism, but I just get a neat, fast kiss on the lips, and she's off of me just as quickly as she was on me. She smirks when she sees the puzzled look I have on my face.

"What? We can't have another mysterious incident with you and Mom. You'll get yours later."

She did that to be a tease. Curse you, lusty semen demon sister.

We head downstairs at the same time, passing Orinia on our way down. She seems very, very relieved that we don't smell like sex, even giving a telltale sigh. "Good morning, Anon, Jynsha."

"Morning," I reply, brightly. I know she'll worry if I show any sign of daze or distance, she's just that kind of person. So, I do my best to hide anything upsetting, and it works.

Jynsha and I eat breakfast quickly, then Orinia hands me the keys again. Not that I mind, it's nice to get out for a drive. I grab my bag and slide into the front seat. Jynsha joins me, and we're off to school early.

We pull into one of the barren side parking lots at around 6:20. I start to get out of the car, but she makes sure that I don't with a strong grasp.

Oh shit, no wonder we were out so quickly.

Jynsha just smiles devilishly, brushing a strand of hair out of her eyes. She then begins to work, pulling me out smoothly and working my shaft with a gentle squeezes and an expert's touch. It's the only thing she's paying attention to, and she just goes at it, working the shaft with a potent fusion of lustful intent and gentleness. She grins when I begin to twitch. I'm close to orgasm, and she knows it. So, she takes it all in her mouth, and I erupt. As she pulls off, she swallows a wad of my cum, accidentally letting a strand stick to the side of my shaft. Delicately, she licks it up, then wipes her mouth clean of semen.

"Heh. You never disappoint with the orgasms."

"Hey, so…" I start to ask, thinking that I'd like to figure out this relationship dynamic.

"Yeah? What's up?" she asks a bit eagerly.

And, yet again, I flounder.

"Ah, never mind. Sorry."

She chuckles. "You're a wreck."

I just shrug. "Yep, that's pretty descriptive. Come on, let's get to class."

Class is pretty monotonous yet again, except the fact that almost every monster can smell me. I'm short on time, so I'll spare you the details.

Anyways, at lunch, Nuala's Anon pipes up at last. "Is everyone free? We should hang out tonight."

We concede, and that's how I ended up "Sharing warmth" for several hours in the back of a shitty pickup truck on the way to a concert/club thing in the blistering cold. We just got to the thing, and I've slipped into the bathroom to throw this post up online. I'll let you guys know how it went down later.

Succufag signing off.

>>138879

Tsunderes, am I right?

>>138881

No problem!

>>138888

Witnessed.

Fucking hell, time to actually give a complete update that isn't the trash I wrote up in the bathroom.

Tonight was a bit more wild than I expected, so hold onto your butts.

Right, so the lewd happens, school happens, and we get home. Pretty much instantly, I go to take care of the MILF situation (as recommended).

"Uh, Ms. Orinia?" I say a bit nervously. She's working at her computer diligently. Working from home seems to be one of very few things she does consistently.

"Oh! Anon!" Instantly, her face darkens a few shades. "I, uh, I'm sorry about yesterday. I didn't mean to… you know…"

"Uh, yeah, about that…"

I swear to god, I've seen more women blush at me in the past week than ever in my lifetime. I'm not sure if I love it or if I'm just confused. Probably both.

"Ms. Orinia… Orinia… Thank you for being such a great foster mom. Over these first few days, you've really gone above and beyond to make me comfortable, and I really appreciate it. You've given me a place in your home more than my biological parents ever did. But… I can't do anything physical with you. I want things to be strictly platonic between us, just in the interest of our mother/son relationship. Is that okay?"

I breathe after vomiting out this chunk of words. Now, the moment of truth.

She just sighs and smiles. "That's totally fine, Anon. I understand what you mean."

Then, her tone shifts completely, from happy to intimidating. It's more than a bit surprising to me.

"You treat my daughter well, Anon. Don't try to lie to me, I know what you're doing. You be good to her."

"I… yes ma'am."

She giggles. "Ara ara, don't call me ma'am. It makes me feel old. Now shoo, shoo, I have work to do."

I left my new mom, closing the bedroom door behind me. What a relief that's over with, I think, but I think that if she wants to make me into her personal supplementary food source, no amount of words can stop her.

Well, that's frightening to think about.

I grab a snack from the pantry and bound upstairs to my room. At last, I can relax.

Of course, I don't, and spend all of my time thinking of ways to mess with Jynsha. I grab the recommended glitter (mostly because I really want to do this anyways). I also decide that tender headpats are the best to get back at her. It may violate every single law over cruel and unusual punishment ever, but it will be effective, especially when used in tandem with hand holding.

Unfortunately, I can't use my arsenal just yet, as Jynsha is actually just out cold, taking a quick nap. By the time 5 rolls around, I've watched a few episodes of Bleach and taken a quick catnap.

"Hey, dumbass," my adoptive sister says through the door. "Ride's almost here. We're going to Seline's house before the club, so be presentable or whatever."

I stay silent, continuing to fuck around on my computer.

I hear a sigh, and then she pushes my door open. "Hey, are you listening?"

Holy shit.

She looks stunning.

Jynsha's dressed in a pair of tight black jeans and a tank top, with a plaid button down over the top. She fills the clothes completely, as if they were made for her. Every curve is accentuated, every tone evident, and every bit of clothing filled by her body. It takes a bit for me to fully comprehend this, to fully appreciate this. I know I've already used this phrase, but god damn does it work for her: poetry in motion.

"Uh. Uhm. Yeah, sorry. I'm ready to head out whenever you are."

"Good, that's now. Allez-vous!"

We hurry down stairs, bundle up, and hop in the back of Nuala's Anon's truck. After a quick drive, we finally reach Seline's house.

>>139045

Fuck, I don't have time to finish tonight.

Jynsha's dragging me to bed (long story I can explain tomorrow), and not allowing any excuses.

Wish me luck, guys. I'll fill you in ASAP.

>>138888

Seconding this.

>>138888

Not for a while yet

Haven't abandoned the story but have had no time to work on it this week aside from a few notes on future scenes.

>>139253

Fuckin cute comfy warmth sharing.

10/10

>>139256

>>139253

>"I see what you're doing. I don't break that easily, Succubus, remember?"

Alright friendo

You can't go and try and surprise her with lewd stuff, she's a succuslut. You can't really surprise her with vanilla stuff because we all know that's what she secretly wants.

You have to surprise her with crazy shit. Stupid crazy gags. Childish things you thought you grew out of when you were 8. Channel your inner shitnick. Invisible ink. Saran wrap on her door. Mentos in the icecubes for her soda. Tying her shoelaces together. A box gift that's spring loaded with packing peanuts.

Also, put porno mags or something like that around her room. Stuff you're into I guess would be the safest bet, but generally do really really tame and vanilla stuff that isn't lewd in the fucking slightest. Like saccharine sweet, almost disgusting how boring it is.

Also, she asked you about your birthday, which probably means hers is somewhere close. You have to find out when it is and get her a present or you're a sorry excuse for a brother. Also plan a surprise party with all her friends.

Holy jesus I'm getting way to into this. You have to stop me Succufag, I'm taking this way too seriously.

>>139297

> and get her a present

g-get her a wedding ring

>>139303

Okay, hold up a bit.

You get her a clone a willy first, but you don't tell her till the two of you are having birthday sex in your cute little sailor outfit, by shoving it into her ass and nibbling on her spade.

Of course you lube it up first.

>>139253

The band sucks.

This doesn't stop us from having fun.

The combination of body heat, dancing, and space heaters keeps everyone warm through the cold night. There are some guys, some girls, and some monster girls, all scattered throughout, all enjoying the shitty music and the great people, and mostly all hormonal teenagers.

It's, of course, as chaotic as one would expect, all Sex, Drugs, and Rock n' Roll. Sometimes all at once. The smell of pot is absolutely in the air, mixing with the smell of sexual juices. It's enough to overwhelm the senses and put everyone into a daze of drugs and lust.

The couples that came with us are, of course, in their own loving world, leaving Becca and I at the "bar." I use bar loosely, because it's really just a couple of chairs set up next to a row of crates, all put together by some guy a few years older than me, his oni girlfriend, and a cooler big enough to hide a body in.

"So, what is up with you and Jynsha?" Becca yells, trying to be heard over the deafening sound of the end of a poorly done rendition of "New Fang." It doesn't even sound like these fuckers are sticking to the album, they're just playing their favorite songs off the album first.

"You're asking as if I know!" I reply with equal decibels. I really don't at this rate. Curse the Tsundere and their alien ways.

The guitar slew of New Fang's end finally finishes, the band pauses for a few moments, then starts off one of my more favorite songs by TCV, video related. Suddenly, as I'm sipping some shitty beer, a wild Tsunderus (Succudere?) appears, with a look on her face to rival every supermodel ever.

Shit's going down, isn't it.

Jynsha grabs me by the arm and hastily hauls me onto my feet. Without a word, she pulls me towards the crowd, stopping me with a solid hand on my chest at the fringes of the mass of people. Lightly, her fingers dance circles on my chest. Then, she starts dancing, a ravenous look on her face, her dark eyes simply saying two reverberating words: Join me.

So I do.

I don't put nearly as much work into it as she does, but she's focused and determined, more than anyone else at this half-assed concert. With each move, she comes a little closer, until her moves result in her brushing against me. Our bodies touch almost every second, breaking off every so often like we're coming up for air. Her hands are on me, all over me, as if to her I'm the most valuable, beautiful thing in the universe. Maybe, in this moment, I am. I return the contact, dancing my hands down her sides, her hips, her back, her stomach. This is passion unchained, I think. But, as quickly as the song started, it's ended, and our dance does the same.

"C'mon, Anon," she breathes in my ear. "Let's get a drink."

>Cont'd, now with 75% less gap

>>139256

I just wanna say you write just like Jexx. I know you're not him but when I first saw you I mistook you for him.

>>139337

i don't know what that means, never read Jexx, but y-you too.

>>139339

Are you the one doing the food service CYOA by chance?

>>139338

Neither have I. Closest I've ever come was furiously shaking my head to skrillex at a dance in 8th grade. never again.

>>139339

And if you just go to the dragon bully thread and look at his writing you don't even need to read it and you'll see what I mean

>>139340

Nope but that faggot needs to update, need to know what's up with Dormouse cuddles.

>>139344

He updated last week, after about a month hiatus

this post will be short, then I have shit to do and will make the update for today later

After some bartering with the guy with the cooler, he finally gives and lets us take a bottle of "pretty good vodka, man" for the low, low price of 80 shekels. His girlfriend tries to make me give them my underwear, but none of us are having any of that shit, so the Oni just furrows her brow and pouts.

Of course, it's a pretty shitty, watered down plastic bottle of vodka. It isn't too bad, though, and it's a 60 ounce bottle (1.75 L for those not from THE GREATEST COUNTRY ON THE UNIVERSE), so we crack it open

The vodka goes its way around her (I should learn to call them my/our at this point) friends pretty quickly, excepting Anon Kovac, who's driving home. Even so, he takes a sip or two from the bottle before letting someone else have it.

By the time the concert ends, we aren't even in the damn place anymore, and have wandered out into the cold, muddy fields surrounding the barn. We're still drinking from the bottle, and talking about the nonsensical stuff that friends just talk about, such as if we're alone in the universe and if trees dream.

I don't notice it at first, but at some point Jynsha and I start holding hands while looking at the stars above. The canvas of the night sky has much more stars than I'm used to, and it's amazing to see tonight.

Eventually, though, Christie and Becca start getting bombed by texts from their overprotective parents, and it's time to go. So, we hop in the back of Kovac's pickup and floor it. In the back, we continue to nurse the bottle, eventually finishing it and shoving it into a corner of the truck bed.

By now, we're all a bit tipsy, but Jynsha is a bit more than everyone else. She gulped the bottle more than once, and is currently out cold in my arms, her face red from all of the alcohol.

"She likes you, you know!" Seline says, yelling over the roar of the truck. We're really the only ones still awake at this point, mostly just to make sure no one dies.

"You think?" I shout in response.

"I know!"

"How?"

"Call it women's intuition!"

"Bull!"

"Anon, 20 years ago everyone would have said the same about magical fox girls! Look at where we are now!"

She was right. When the monsters were revealed to the public 20 years ago as refugees from their home, everyone was too shocked to be bigoted over it until the first few months. It was a long process before they were recognized as citizens, but in 2003, all UN affiliated countries accepted Monsters as full citizens. Japan was first. By then, the first wave of modern monster babies had been born and were ready to enter school. Most countries began the integration process with the schools, starting with the kids in kindergarten, slowly letting them trickle through the grades. Thinking about this, I realize something.

"Hey! We're the first monster/human class to graduate! Like, ever!"

She smiles. "Yep! It's awesome, isn't it!"

I nod excitedly.

We then just relax and watch the scenery of the road pass by. At least, that's what I mean to do. Instead, my gaze gradually begins to drift to the girl leaning on me. She's breathing ever so softly, and looks so incredibly peaceful.

I can't believe I wanted to hatefuck this girl hours ago. Curse the Tsundere.

>>139371

Kovac finally pulls up to our house after dropping off Christie and her Anon (Anon Anonson) and Becca. I nudge Jynsha awake, and she looks at me with dazed, drunken eyes.

"Mmm, whaddizit, Anon?" she slurs.

"We're home. Let's go."

"Mmokay."

I say goodbye to Seline, and help Jynsha out of the truck. She can walk, but not that well, so I sling her arm over my shoulder and walk her in, waving goodbye at the truck before it peels out.

"Hey, Anon…" Jynsha mumbles.

"What's up?"

"Iiiiii'm not wearing any pantieeeees," she says in a singsong voice, grinning madly at me. "Wanna see?"

"What I want to do," I say gently, "is get you to your bed. Okay?"

"No, I wanna sleep in yer bed. With you."

"Why?"

"'Cause."

I just sigh. "If that gets you to bed…"

"Yay!"

I walk Jynsha up the stairs and into my room carefully, trying to set her down carefully on the bed. She instead favors flopping face first into the full sized mattress.

"I'm gonna let Ori–Mom know we're home, okay?"

She just mumbles, so I hurry downstairs to Orinia's room, making sure to knock first. She's still up, reading a book.

"Hey, I just wanted to make sure to let you know we got home okay," I say quickly as she looks at me with a raised eyebrow.

"I heard. You've been drinking?"

"Uh…"

"It's fine if you have. I hope you can get her to bed yourself."

"Won't be a problem."

"Mmhmm. Let me know if you can't."

I back out of the room and close the door, then go back upstairs to a very surprising sight.

Jynsha has lost most of her clothes over the space of a minute, left with only a bra she can't seem to remove at all and a pair of socks.

"Anon, help me with my bra…" she whines, turning her back and her very round ass to me. I can't help but look.

"Jynsha, why?"

She looks at me with a pout. "Hey, I told you to call me big sister."

Fucking hell.

I grimace as I say it. "Big… sister, why?"

"'Cause I want you. I want you in me. I want that," she says lustily, pointing at my crotch. "I want you t'make me not a virgin."

Holy fuck, she's a virgin?

"Jy–Big Sister, not like this," I say, furrowing my eyebrows and stifling the power of boner. "You're drunk. You'll probably forget it, and I don't want you to regret it."

She frowns. "But…"

"What about cuddles? Is that okay?"

She pouts a bit. "Fine."

"Let me do something really quickly, Big Sis. I'll get right back with you."

"Mmmokay…"

So, I grab my computer, shitpost on here in the bathroom until she harasses me out, and I join Jyn in my bed. She still hasn't managed to remove her bra, and wants me to help, so I do, because I know she won't go to sleep until she gets it off. Her perky, soft breasts rest on my side as we drift off together in an embrace, and the last thing I remember is seeing her gentle smile and feeling something hold my hand.

well, hopefully it didn't suck. I need to review King Lear now. The adventures will continue.

So I totally procrastinated on writing my paper. I'm gonna do that, then writefag because IDGAF about the Super Bowl.

Thoughts so far?

>>139560

Definitely still enjoying it.

So I just typed out an entire update and it kinda died without saving.

Great.

>>139778

*So, I finish writing up stories

What a tweest!

>>139725

>apron that's had a hard dick rubbing against it

can't wait till mum tries to cock you breakfast and goes on a rape rampage

Today was relatively uneventful. N-not because I want to time sync or anything. Jynsha woke me up early this morning, at least letting me know she was leaving for her room. Definitely something I appreciate. Turns out Orinia is a massive football fan, so she spent all day watching related Superbowl shit. We just joined her, spending the day unwinding. Jyn didn't seem to mind a dry spell after yesterday, probably partially because she didn't want more glitter in her face.

Anyways, I've seen some of you guys recommend I get her something. What kind of thing are we talking about? And how much should I bully/tease/whatever her? How?

What next?

Also, how am I doing? Any writing pointers?

>>139790

Also, am I inducing too much diabeetus?

>>139789

Oh, fuck. Well, thank all that's holy that I forgot to hang it back up.

>>139793

You are but I'm enjoying it. You do an excellent job balancing humor and romance. I would add in a little more conflict, doesn't have to be a big drama bomb but relationship stories can always use a little conflict or they risk descending into glurg fests.

I've really enjoyed it so far, keep it up.

>>139790

Ask her mother when her birthday is, if it's within the next month then save up and buy her a pendant with a small ruby.

If not then maybe a pendant with a red garnet instead.

Red gems would go best with red eyes but azure or cerulean would also be a nice match.

>>139844

So, I just asked Orinia.

It's Valentine's Day. Of course.

>>139866

>two special days in one

kek gg no re

Definetly needs to be a heart shaped pendant. Ruby if you can since you're having to roll 2 gifts into one.

Also drink lots of fruit juice on the days coming up to it. For… reasons.

Try to focus on the birthday part more too, it's far more important to an individual.

godspeed comrade

>>139725

>Now's not the time for fear. That comes later

You sound like a pretty big guy.

>>139866

>Valentine's Day

Oh boy here we goooooooo

I like the idea of a heart shaped pendant/necklace that other anons have suggested.

But that's not all: you must also gift her a dick in a box. With glitter on it, of course.

And don't forget to conspire with her friends to throw a party for her despite it being Valentine's Day.

>>139901

>You sound like a pretty big guy.

For you.

I'll probably hunt down that pendant.

Have already begun the conspiring. Jyn suspects something's going on. She doesn't know what.

>a dick in a box. With glitter on it, of course.

Yes.

>>139515

The last paragraph of this was awkward to read, mainly because it seems you sacrificed realism for comedy's sake. The rest of your story still maintains a consistent level of realistic behavior between the characters, but for some reason, the spontaneous glitter plus her lack of notable reaction and the whole semen pancakes bit was just odd.

Other than this particular part the story is really great!

>>140039

Yeah, I do agree with that statement. I think I went a bit too far.

A bit.

So, uh, updating from my phone.

Guys, shit went down.

The short version is that Jynsha's arm is broken. I would type out an update but the wifi is blocking 8chan.

Fucking hell, I can't even concentrate enough to sit up.

I, apparently, seriously underestimated manticore venom.

Someone grabs me and holds me with her shoulder. "Jynsha?" I mutter under my breath.

"No." Seline. Good enough. I feel a hand pull up my pants and button them and relax a bit, though I still throb.

"You fucking bitch!" the familiar voice of Jynsha screams, tearing at my eardrums. "What the hell do you think you're doing?!"

I finally manage to refocus my eyes and see an absolutely furious Jynsha, her face deep red, her eyes watering, and her fists clamped so tightly that all the blood has emptied from them.

"What I want," the manticore spits. "Put the snack down, fox."

Seline twitches a little at the venom in the manticore's voice, but she holds firm.

"You aren't touching him, Sable!" Jynsha yells. By now, curious students and teachers have begun to flow out of the classes, attracted by the sounds of screaming. They likely figure out quickly due to what I can only assume is a raging erection and an oozing tailpussy.

"Try and stop me, slut. See what happens."

Oh god, she's coming over here. Ohshitohshitohshitohshit.

My foster sister then does the stupidest or bravest thing she's done since I met her, and she steps between me and certain rape.

"I warned you."

The bitch then takes a swing at Jynsha, and she tries to block it, using her left arm. Considering manticore strength, this isn't even slightly brave. It's just stupid. I hear a sickening crack and a scream, and Jynsha falls to her knees. I feel every cell in my body fill with rage

"Drop the meat, fox," Sable says, stepping over my sister.

Shakily, I stand by myself. Shit, that's hard.

This girl doesn't even seem fazed by the panicking teachers, who are all more concerned with Jynsha than I. "Come on, cumsack."

I take a step towards her, and she grins. She won't expect it.

A word of advice, Anons. I may stopped taking martial arts 4 years ago, but there's one thing I always remember: a palm hits harder than a fist.

So, in a venom hazed state, I quickly wind up and slam a palm right into her lower sternum, right between her breasts. She doesn't expect it, and falls to her knees, clenching her chest in pain. I almost collapse as well, but Seline catches me as the teachers race to grab the manticore, Sable, one of them yelling to call the campus security.

"Put me down," I mutter to her. "Call Orinia."

Gently, she sets me down, pulls a flip phone out of her bra, and dials. I can't help but chuckle at the old ass phone, even though all of this shit just happened.

Fuck, Jyn looks like she's hurting.

My foster sister is trying and failing to hold back tears, holding her arm gently. It doesn't look too bad, all things considered, but I have no doubt that it hurts like a bitch. Seline snaps her phone shut and looks at me. "She was worried about you, Anon. You were gone for a good 15 minutes, even though you said you were just going to take a leak. I tried to tall her you were fine. Thank Ammit she didn't listen to my dumb mouth." Seline seems genuinely pissed at herself over this.

"H-how did you find me?" I stammer, still fucked from the manticore venom.

"She could smell you. At least, that's what she said. I don't dare question the workings of succubi."

Seline glances over to the teachers, who're trying to help an upset Jynsha to her feet and to the office. "C'mon. I'll take you with her."

She then looks to a very concerned Christie and a very confused Anon Kovac. "One of you get their shit. Orinia's coming to get them."

Kovac jumps to it, running to grab the stuff as Seline walks me to the office.

By the time Orinia gets to the office, the venom has worn off and I'm consoling Jyn, who still has watery eyes.

"It hurts."

"Yeah, I know. Have you ever broken one before?"

She just shakes her head.

"I have. Three times. Two on my right arm, one on my left," I say, cracking my left wrist to emphasize how fucked up it still is.

She laughs a bit. "Gross."

"That one was when I tripped up the stairs."

Jynsha laughs some more, wincing in pain when she accidentally jostles her arm. "It'll be fine. They give you a cast and shit. It itches like you wouldn't believe, but you can get people to sign it and everything."

"I know."

>>140293

Really enjoyed that, nice to see them fight for each other like that. You did a good job adding conflict without it feeling overdramatic or stupid. Good job mate.

>>140293

The next several hours are absolutely chaotic nightmare as we have to wait in the hospital for everything to actually fucking move along (amerifag so hospitals are shit). It takes 4 hours to get her in for an x ray, and another 3 for a cast. Orinia calls a friend to take care of Alecta while we wait, so at least that's handled.

"What happened, Anon?" Orinia asks, looking at her sleeping daughter.

"She… well, she saved me. Helped me, I guess."

I tell her what happened, and she smiles. "That's my girl."

"I'm sorry, Ori–Mom."

She shakes her head at me. "Don't, anon. It's not your fault."

I nod, and we sit quietly.

***

Jynsha is, quite frankly, a mess, guys. Her right arm has a broken radius and a fractured ulna. I've tried apologizing and thanking her, but she chewed me out, so I kept my mouth shut about it.

I stayed with her after Orinia went to bed. We talked until she dozed off, and she's sleeping next to me right now.

Jynsha'll be going to school tomorrow. I made sure to take the first signature on the cast.

The cast is red.

Well, Anons, looks like there's no school today due to snow.

Alecta's already barreling through the drifts outside with Orinia, and Jynsha and I are just sitting and watching sitcoms on TV with mugs of hot cocoa.

It looks like it's set up to be a pretty relaxed day, guys.

>>140334

Thanks! First real writefaggotry, glad everyone likes it.

>>140351

Yeah man, it was pretty fucking rough.

>>140459

>tying up a manticore

It's like you want me to be clobbered by freakish manticore strength.

I will be arming myself with hot things, though. Good idea.

I may not have to worry, anyways. Sable's been suspended and arrested for sexual and normal assault (she's 18). I don't know what kind of wait to expect for her to get back, though. Normally I would say a week but… don't know what's up with the assault. I know Orinia's pressing charges, though. So that'll be fun.

>>140305

YOUR VENGEANCE SHALL BE SWIFT AND JUST

>>140463

It's so nice to see a rapist actually getting punished for it by the system. Far too many OC has the monsters getting away with far too much shit.

>>140459

There'll probably be a restraining order so just get a tazer incase she comes close I guess.

So, my CPA case worker came by this afternoon. Totally forgot that was going to happen. It seemed to go well. I won't bore you with heavy details over that, but she asked how things were going, if I was comfortable, things like that. Of course, she had to ask about the incident yesterday, and I did fill her in. It won't be a problem in the future, she said it could be spun to be Defense of a Third Party or Self Defense. Something along those lines, at least.

Also, she had to make sure there was not "forced penetration," though I assured her the only complaints I had were over Sable.

I managed to call Seline's number from Jynsha's phone. She's happy to come to a surprise party (because Jynsha never has birthday parties, apparently), but incessantly bothered me about what I'm going to do to her, since it's her birthday and Valentine's day.

I think I can assume she's been informed of everything.

Finally, I was incredibly close to having intimate encounters with Jyn several times, but each time failed due to Orinia's cockblocking. She's really just trying to help her daughter, but it is getting in the way a bit. As our first few encounters happened last week, I definitely would not have expected to be disappointed at someone getting between Jynsha and I.

Anyways, sorry that there wasn't more to update on. We'll be going to school tomorrow.

Sorry that this one is shit. Because I'm mostly sticking to the schedule of the region I'm in, there was actually a snow day and the schools were actually out, so I just went with that. Immersion, bitches. More in depth writefagging tomorrow.

>>140788

Also: Is there anything you guys think I can do to help her tomorrow?

>>140807

holy fuck i can't stop watching

I probably should have assured her of the whole "tailpussy whore" thing today. Fuck my brain.

>>140788

>I was incredibly close to having intimate encounters with Jyn several times, but each time failed due to Orinia's cockblocking.

shes making you save it for valentines day obviously

>>140836

Sex demons don't give a shit if you're not even the fourth greatest lover in the world, if they aren't shit, anyway they just want your dick. And they have many ways of making it feel good for the both of you, mundane and not.

>>140836

She's a virgin, it'll be fine.

Awkward and clumsy as fuck, but fine.

>>140793

set up a romantic evening with the manticore

then trap her in a cage and make tender love to sis in front of her.

>>140877

No, do not sink to her level.

>>140877

>trap a manticore in a cage

The only way a manticore is going in a cage is if there's dick there. Your dick.

Not exactly a smart plan.

>>140877

I don't think anon has a deathwish.