/monster/ - The Last Bastion of Romance

>>146085

woops, here's the archive link, not that the other thread will vanish for awhile…. https://archive.is/eT2UX

Here's a couple of resources that are useful. A dictionary (what words mean), and a thesaurus (a collection of words that mean the same thing or the opposite (synonyms and antonyms).

http://dictionary.reference.com/

http://www.thesaurus.com/

Also, how to write a monstergirl story.

http://pastebin.com/tg6Utm8m

can someone link me to all the pastebins about wights….pretty please

>>146091

I'd like to read it, sure.

>>146093

http://pastebin.com/kV65TcTr

I think you already saw Code Wight in the last thread, but if not, here ya go.

These are some story ideas I have floating around.

1) Toxicology student gets involved with a hikimori art student oomukade who has severe appearance issues due to her centipede half.

2) Knocked Up MG version: A saytros in a medieval world gets knocked up after a one night stand with a villager during a fertility festival. He agrees to raise the baby with her and it would be about her shedding her hedonistic life style while growing to love him.

3) Ara ara lilim/succubus working as a producer/editor in the porn industry finds out her assistant is in in love with her. Complicating things, she hasn't had sex in years and has given up on ever finding someone that will love her as more than a perfect lay.

4) A kejorou high end prostitute in Zipangu falls in love with a merchant who wants to marry her and make an honest woman out of her. Probably just a one shot.

Just some ideas, thoughts and comments appreciated. None of them are super concrete, though I have done a little writing for the first one.

>>146127

If I can add to this:

Mindflayer hits on war veteran suffering from PTSD in a bar, reads his mind and experiences the trauma that led to his PTSD, then spends the rest of the story helping him heal with a bit of gentle femdom.

Husband of a Kikimora sends her out with her friends for her birthday so he can surprise her by cleaning the house which he may or may not clumsily fail at, and they have warm, cuddly birthday sex.

I think I've seen both of these suggested before so they might have been done already, but there's a criminal lack of stories involving Mindflayer and Kikimora.

>in my late teen years

>living in a lower class neighborhood

>usually filled with monster girls because this was before they gained rights

>I have a small group of friends, we usually hang out

>several of them are Paladindus

>we decide to go to the elementary school playground to shoot some hoops because they leave it open on weekends

>we get there, start playing basketball having fun

>this group of monstergirls is watching us for about 10 minutes

>in this group there is a hellhound, a succubi, a sphinx, and a lamia

>we decide to ignore them figuring in the best case scenario they go away

>they never leave

>eventually we all start staring at them

>they decide to walk up to us

>they start flirting with us

>pally friends aint having that shit

>they become hostile around them

>that just makes them even more smug

>they start joking about how cute we are

>Paladindu friend pulls out a knife and tells them to fuck off

>he gets pounced by the hellhound

>she starts clawing at his fucking face

>scream at her to get off him

>she wont stop

>I grab the knife off the ground and stab her in the back

>she shrieks out in pain

>get tackled by the lamia

>she coils me and starts suffocating

>I see me friends are at this point fighting these whores

>eventually pass out

>wake up in police station

>talking to an officer

>he tells me that I am free to because what I did was self defense

>they drive me home in the police cruiser

>get inside my home

>my mother is crying and visibly shaken

>She doesn't know what to say

>tells me that our house will now be a future target for these monstergirls

>she says that they would mangle me like they did to my friend

>tells me that we have to leave because it is unsafe here

>"but where, you know we have no money to move."

>she crys even more now

>"I know we don't have anything, if I could have gotten us out of here I would have. That's why I can't come with you"

>tell her she can't be serious and that without me she will probably get killed by them

>she says she knows the risks and she wants me to be safe

>she tells me she has no choice

>"you're moving with your auntie and uncle in Bel-Air"

I'm sorry

>>146171

NOW THIS IS A STORY ALL ABOUT HOW.

I swear to god, I guess this has to fucking happen now.

>Work nights in a gas station. Had to take it after my drinking cost me my job and (human) fiance.

>Fuck it, pays the bills, gotten me some sweet hookups for illegal shit that I sell on the side.

>Where did I go wrong, maybe I should sort my life out. Maybe if I had a reason to, a person to take care of perhaps….

>See monstergirls here and there, pretty well behaved, better than most human customers. Never had any complaints, local rednecks don't like em, but fuck em I dont like the rednecks

>Cept for the Succubus who tried to proactively date me. Whatever, I ran faster than she did,

>Dead of night, havent seen anyone for a while, reading book about Andrew Jackson

>Door chimes "Hello." I call, as I always do, not even looking up

>"H-hello." A quiet voice replies.

>Mark place in book, look at customer

>A lamia. At two in the damn morning. In the middle of winter. Green hair with viridian scales to match. Gorgeous lips and pretty blue eyes I could lose myself in.

>"Do you have a restroom?" She asks, startling me out of my reverie. She seems to be shivering and moving/talking slowly. Not a surprise when its only 30 degrees out; miserable enough for us warm-blooded creatures, must be horrible for her.

>I point to it. As she walks (slithers?) by I notice her scales are flaking, her skin is covered in dirt, and there's a twig in her hair, as well as a few leaves

>Probably living in the nearby woods

>Monstergirls have to have a host home in this area, I'm sure there is a good story here

>Also feel a twinge of concern, couldn't pin down that emotion for a minute.

>Hear her come out of restroom

>"Thank you. Have a good night." She says as she walks (is it slithers? I should look into this) away.

>RUMBLERUMBLERUMBLE

>She turns red. Contrasts nicely with her scales.

>Internally sighing, I ask, "How long has it been since you've eaten?"

>She drops her gaze, the mumbles something I can't hear.

>"Could you speak up? I'm hard of hearing."

>"I-I'm fine anon. Please don't worry about me. I'll just eat when I return home."

>I stop her, "Darlin, your starving from the sound of it, and I have money to burn. Grab whatever you want, I'm buying."

>"But, but anon, I couldnt ask…"

>You didnt ask," I interrupt, "I offered. Get some food damn it."

>She picks out some hotdogs, some gummy worms, chips and a soda.

>"Alright, stay inside here and eat. It's too cold for you outside."

>She begins to protest, but dosen't seem to have the energy for it. I set her up on the other side of the counter, then lean against the rack of cigarettes while she eats

>I have to be tactful about how to broach the subject of what exactly is going on here.

>Damn if she isnt cute, I think. A lot cuter than my ex. Seems less bitchy too.

Continue?

>>146403

>You begin to compose yourself remembering there's a bar here

>"Loosening myself up will help a lot" saying to yourself as you enter the building

>You motive several other men and even many girls as you walk and sit to the counter

>You're about to pull out your wallet for pay when the bartender chimes "Drinks are always free here"

>You choke up, but the desire to drink outweighs the nerves. "Gimme whiskey sour"

>>146396

Alright brother, lets do this

>Decide the best approach is probably direct

>"So, how are things with you?"

>She looks up from her food, which is almost completely gone. She looks like she wants to spill her guts, then tries to lie instead.

>"Just taking a quick walk (now I dont have to look that up.) My host family is very nice but I wanted to see what other humans were like!" She smiles as she finishes her story.

>Fuck she's adorable. That smile, my god, its like everything just got brighter.

>Focus damn it, I tell myself.

>Time to move in for the critical hit. "I take it your host family are elves?"

>She stares at my quizzically

>I sigh, "You have twigs and leaves in your hair. Your also covered in dirt."

>She sort of looks away, like shes deciding if she wants to run

>I continue, "Look, if your doing some Lamia cultural thing or whatever, I'm not going to judge you. But I've learned a lot in this job. I'm guessing you ran off and have been living in the woods nearby?"

>She nods as tears from in her eyes

>God fucking damn it, why am I starting to feel sympathy for her?

>"Why did you run off?"

>Tears run down her cheeks as she starts. "My host family seemed wonderful. They had two daughters, we played dolls and pretend together. Their mother taught me to cook and clean, she told me I was so pretty that I should be ready to be a housewife. But the father….he…he liked to drink

>Where Have I heard this before.

>She's still crying, "I was there a month, and a week ago he got *hiccup* he got* hiccup* drunk. Screamed *hiccup* at the girls and at his wife. Then he…he came into my room…he *hiccup* he…..he he he

>"He forced himself onto you." I finished.

>She nodded. "I smacked him with my tail, just enough to get him off of me. He started to scream at me, threatening to get me arrested. I didnt want to go back home, so I ran…." She started crying so hard she couldn't continue.

>I decided to guess at what happened next, "And you've been hiding in the woods for a week now. Your also shedding, and might even be sick."

>She nodded.

>God fucking damn it. All I wanted was a simple life working a simple job selling drugs on the side. Worse case scenarios I either started drinking again or died in a police shootout. Was that too much to ask?

>Guess it was.

>Knowing I'm about to do something monumentally stupid, I offer a solution.

>"Alright look, It's Saturday morning. The Bureau of Monster Affairs is closed today and Sunday. Monday and Tuesday are also federal holidays (lazy Government bastards have those off.) If you want, you can crash with me until Wednesday. We'll go in together and get this all sorted out.

>She panics, "B-b-b-but anon, they'll deport me! Or arrest me! Or or or or…..

>I hold up a hand to stop her. "They wont do either. I'll make sure of that, come Hell or high water."

>Where did that come from? Must have dredged up some courage from those sparkling blue eyes. Man she's cute.

>Those baby blues light up. "Really anon? You wouldn't mind? I dont want to be a bother or get in your way."

>"If I minded I wouldn't have offered. I'll take the next few days off so you wont have to be alone, shouldnt be a problem to do that, the boss….

>I cant finish that sentence as she leaps across the counter and embraces me in her arms, coiling her tail around me simultaneously.

>I can't breathe damn it

>I smack her arm to get her attention.

>She notices and quickly loosens her grip, blushing deep red again.

>Still an amazing contrast.

>I realize I'd forgotten a key detail. "You know my name, but whats yours?"

>She smiles and answers, "Lily! Nice to meet you anon!"

>Taking one more look into those deep eyes and drinking in her smile, I can feel that my simple life is gone for good.

If there's any interest I'll keep going, dont want to burn anyone out

>>146410

>You're on your third drink before you feel a tap on your shoulder

>You turn around to face her. She's what you've always dreamed

>As if you were made for each other

>>146417

Thanks man, guess I'll keep going

>Lily's smile quickly fades. "But anon, won't I get you in trouble?"

>I smiled, "With the law for harboring a fugitive or my boss for having a Lamia in the back room when he get's here?"

>She panics, "I-I-I didn't think about your boss!"

>Clearly she has her priorities straight. "Calm down, he ain't going to fire me for this. He probably won't care when I tell him what's going on. Actually he won't care even if I don't explain whats going on."

>Tears are forming in her eyes. This girl hasn't known me for more than twenty minutes and in those twenty minutes she's shown more kindness than my ex ever did

>I never really cared one way or the other about the vigilante palidindus, but I'm starting to think they're assholes.

>"Anon," she starts, "Don't worry about me, I don't want you to be arrested because I was with you." She smiles while she cries. "Thank you for your kindness."

>She starts to slither back over the counter, but I grab her shoulder to stop her.

>"I'm willing to take that chance. I'm not going to let you back out there in this weather. You'll freeze to death in the cold. Not to mention the shedding, your going to get an infection if you keep this up."

>Her eyes look on the verge of tears again. Jesus save me.

>Now, go in the back. I'm off in a few hours, we'll head home after that.

>Boss comes in around five, I'm supposed to get off at six.

>I explain the situation, with a quick wave he tells me to go home, "I'll call Jack in early. Hate that little bastard, it'll be fun to piss him off

>Best boss in the world right here.

>I go to the back

>"Alright Lily, we're leaving now." I take off my coat and wrap it around her.

>"What about you anon?"

>"I'm fine, this won't affect me too much. You on the other hand…"

>She slightly blushes this time, and places her hand on mine "Thank you, anon."

>Damn. Damn. Damn. I'm starting to like this girl. A lot.

>But is she a girl?

>She is a monster after all

>Is this sick? Is this normal? Is this…

>You know what? Fuck it. I'm not a philosopher.

>As far as I can tell she's kind, selfless, and warm. And those gorgeous eyes and perfect lips. And that's all that matters.

>I open the door for her. "Alright lily," I point towards my car. "That's our ride. Don't worry, the bench seat in the back collapses, you'll fit."

>She grabs my hand, laughs, and starts running (fast slithering?) towards the car.

>Damn near yanked my arm off.

>And so it begins.

I know this is a place for sharing what you've written, but for longer greentext stories that aren't CYOA'S it might be better aka, please do it to put them in a pastebin.

>>146442

How do I put it in a pastebin? And im literally writing this as I go.

>>146446

http://pastebin.com/

Make an account, or just post the stuff there, hit create paste, done.

I know you're posting as soon as you finish a section, but for a story like this, having a finished product, or coming back after writing for awhile and saying, "next part is ready!" Might be nice.

Besides having a pastebin of your own would allow a place for all your stories to reside in the future in case an act of God fucks your comp.

>>146448

…Or an act of scootmoot fucks the thread. We don't have moearchive to keep a live backup of threads any more, remember? If it dies before the bump limit it's doubtful anyone would have archived it.

>>146740

So when you have a pastebin, whats the best way to post a link to the story?

>>147257

When you've posted the paste, it'll have its own unique URL, just post that in the thread and say "Hey faggots, I wrote a thing, tell me how awesome I am."

in a nutshell

(polite sage for reply)

>>147260

Ok, im really new at all this so sorry, but when I post it here, on the board it will have its own URL?

>>147261

For example.

I wrote a thing and it's the best goddamn thing ever. WORSHIP ME AND ALL MY WRITEFAGGOTRY!

http://pastebin.com/PMVf5AHQ

Alright, if anyone wants to continue the story here is Lily the Lamia part 4.

http://pastebin.com/shuH09pA

If anyone is enjoying themselves with this story I'll keep going. If it sucks by all means tell me, I'm trying to grow as a writer.

Thanks to everyone for help with the pastebin issues.

>>147266

By all means keep going, I'm enjoying it thoroughly!

Although if I might make a suggestion, it would probably be better to do the whole story as one paste, including the earlier entries. (You can edit and re-publish it when you've finished.)

>>147267

I've thought about that, bitch of it is when i've tried that with other stories it always sort of peters out. If we're trying to save post space or whatever I'll attempt to write it all in one go. Also, do you think that the Anon/MC is a little too 3edgy911me, or am I just overthinking this?

>>147268

It was just a suggestion, if you prefer to append the story as you go or make separate entries it's your baby. :)

And nah, guy's a drug dealer working at a servo who's just been dumped by his girl. You'd expect him to be a little rough.

I am interested in seeing how you're going to resolve Lily's issue with guns/drugs though

so i wanted to try my hand and writefaging

to think, i was once aspiring to be a great Paladinduu

i would always look up to these "noble and pure warriors" thinking they were doing humanity a favor

>these thoughts went through my head as his mace came crashing against my shield

>the sudden deflection of his weapon came as a surprise to him

>he staggered but regained his balance

>"i shouldnt be surprised that a heretic would be using demon magic!

this isnt demon magic, hell i dont even know if you could call it magic at all

>the broken black shield i was holding vanished as fast as it appeared

>"no matter, ill kill that monster and ill make you watch before i kill you too"

>he swung his mace again in an overhead strike this time, aiming for my shoulder

>it clanged against my sword

>the head of his mace fell to the floor, just the hilt was left in his hand

>he was speechless

>turned around and bolted away

welp, those are Paladinduus for you…

>i turn to the lost inari child

are you okay?

>with tear filled eyes she meekly nods

alright then, lets get you back to your parents

do you know the name of the street you live on?

>in a shaking voice she says"vine"

>vine street wasnt too far away from here, i gave her my hand and we walked back

>on the way back we came across her father who was frantically looking for her

>"daddy!" with the generic scene of them running and embracing eachother

>i used that moment to book it on out of there

daddy! that man over there saved m- eh?

>iv never really been much of a social person

>i got home just in the nick of time to get ready for work

>i work the night shift at IPS stacking boxes into trucks, not the best job but it pays well and supplements my workout schedule

>the night goes by fairly smoothly. just that i kept getting a chilling feeling that someone was watching me

>i shrug it off as my annoying manager spying on me to point out my fuckups and continue working till the end of my shift

>i clock out and get to the parking lot, not many cars there at 3 in the morning

>still that feeling of being watched

>kinda frustrated now

> i quickly get to my car, start it up and drive towards the freeway

> i stop at the light at the entrance to the freeway, why it flicks between red and green at 3 am ill never know

>it turns green, i accelerate

>just as i begin to move i hear an extremely light tap on the hood of my car

>at this point too tired to give a fuck

>drive home

>get to my apartment building

>paranoia tells me to give a quick scan around the area

>find nothing

>go home

>go to bed

>wake up

where the fuck am i?

>"good morning my lord"

>i look to my left where the voice came from

>a kunoichi sitting on her knees next to me

>silver hair in a short ponytail and bangs, the works. silverish eyes and silver makings on her arms and legs. wearing standard lewd ninja gear. wasnt very well bestowed though… like im talking A cups…

yeah yeah good morning

>was super groggy and thought i was dreaming, went back to sleep

>wake up again

>"good morning my lord"

!!!

THE FUhhK?!

>i let out while pushing myeself into a seated position, not breaking eye contact

this any good? do i go on?

>>147619

I don't think I've ever seen a kunoichi writefag before

Go ahead, but you should put it in a pastebin like >>146442 said.

>>147619

You seem to have an idea of grammar and such in English, but unless the story calls for it you should do regular sentence structure rather than greentext. Greentext works better with CYOAs or short one-offs.

Also noticed some simple spelling mistakes, but I'm too lazy to point all of them out. Microsoft Word or Libre Office can do all that for you though.

So I stood up an hour and a half writing the intro to smut. I need to go to bed so if someone could proofread and critique, that would be cool I guess. I hope I could contribute something.

“Just a bit more.” Hiro uttered as he wiped the sweat from his brow. He was walking with a handcart full of various items to the cave that overlooked the village. A faint glow could be seen emanating from the cavern. “She must be working, as usual.” Hiro thought to himself. She's always burning the candle at both ends. She seemed to be working especially hard since she couldn't get around as she used to. “I should get her some more books. She really needs to relax.” The villagers thought the same thing about Hiro. He lived in a house he had inherited from his parents. He was affluent and educated and could have easily lived the rest of his life in the lap of luxury. But Hiro chose to help his community any way he could. Whether that meant helping in the fields or teaching the village children what he knew, Hiro was glad to enrich the lives of the village he loved.

>>148894

But for the last month, Hiro had a bit more work than usual. He had a cart full of records and offerings to the woman in the cave. That woman was Chie, the village Crow Tengu. Crow Tengu are not exactly human. This type of mamono had the torso and head of a human woman, but the wings and legs of a crow. They are well known for keeping records of human settlements and are generally well liked by those societies. The records they keep have helped the village prepare for natural disasters, given clues to curing diseases, and gives information about ones ancestors. Chie usually went around gathering information herself, but she had broken a wing and had difficulty walking around. Hiro took it upon himself to gather what she needed to do her work. After all, he was one of the few people who could actually read and write.

>>148895

Hiro finally reached his destination. The large cave was illuminated by many torches which flickered against the darkness. The warm glow felt nice compared to the outdoor twilight. “Hello? Chie? I'm here!” There was hardly any echo as the cavern was filled with many bookcases and even more books. She was likely in the study, so Hiro gathered the records and left the rest of the handcart contents near the entrance. He walked to the study with an arm full of records, feeling a little guilty to be giving her more work. He reached his destination and saw her sitting at her desk, her face brimming with focus. After almost a minute of complete silence, Hiro cleared his throat to make his presence known. Chie jumped at the sudden noise. She scowled at Hiro, but said nothing. “So,” Hiro said finally breaking the silence, “I have the field reports from the southern farms. Mrs. Hirohito finally had her baby, it's a g—.” Chie suddenly spoke, “Y-you don't have to keep coming here you know!” Hiro smiled smugly. “Now Chie, you know you would either die of boredom or starve without me. Speaking of which, you have quite the feast waiting outside. I'll cook it up, but I want to do a little reading first.” Chie faced her work once more. “Do what you want,” she said coldly.

>>148896

Hiro shrugged and headed back to the library. He really wished she would have warmed up to him by now. He could tell that she loved the village as much as he did, working that hard all the time conveyed that notion. If only she would smile though. Hiro found himself in center of the library. The books spanned for generations on numerous topics. He was free to read anything he wanted, as long as he didn't read anything on the villagers from the current generation as that info was to be kept private. This didn't bother him though, he completely understood. He read for a good hour before getting up to cook for Chie and himself. Hiro took a look inside the cart at the potential feast before him. Unable to decide for himself, he decided to bother Chie once more to ask what she would like for dinner. Before entering the room, he began to speak. “Hey Chie, what do you feel like e–.” He stopped when he noticed something.

>>148897

Chie was fast asleep. A small snore emanated from her slightly agape mouth. Hiro couldn't help but chuckle softly. She was really cute all tuckered out from writing. He noticed that she had a pile of books on her desk. Hiro decided to help her clean before making dinner. He quietly gathered the books and made his way to the library to shelf the documents. Thankfully Chie was very organized and labeled both the books and the shelves for easy storage. After he put away most of the books, he noticed different something about the book currently in his hand. The book had his name on it. He was tempted to open it, but he had promised Chie that he would not read anything from the current generation. Making good on his promise, he went to shelf the book unopened. But something struck him as odd about the shelf that his records was supposed to be on. Most families had a only a couple books on their lives. For some reason, Hiro had an entire bookshelf dedicated to him. The curiosity was too much for him to handle. It was a book on his family anyway right? It's not like he would be prying into other people's lives, just his own. Hiro cracked open a book at random and took a peek inside.

>>148899

Dear Diary,

Today Hiro came by as usual. He looked so cute in that blue tunic that I like! I could tell he was helping in the fields because he was still glistening with sweat. He smelled so manly! Anyway……

What. Hiro couldn't believe what he was reading. He chose another book at random and opened the page.

>>148902

Dear Diary,

Today I heard about something Holstaur milk having the ability to make your breasts larger. Do you think that Hiro likes big breasts? Maybe I should order some……

The information was still not registering. Another book was chosen.

>>148903

Dear Diary,

I learned that human women will right the name of the men they love one thousand times so that those men will fall in love with them. It sounds silly, but at this point I will try anything.

Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma …..

>>148904

Still not registering. Hiro reached for another book when he heard a voice shout, “You read it didn't you!” Hiro jumped in surprise. Behind him stood a beet red Chie. Hiro tried to speak, but could only stammer nonsense. “Chie—I—-sorry—-uh”. She was silent for what seemed like forever. Chie finally uttered two words. “Follow me.” Hiro complied as he wouldn't dare try to make things worse. He followed her into a room he had not seen before. He looked around his new surroundings. He could see a small bookcase(figures), a tall mirror, a bed…Wait? Bed? Was this her bedroom?

Gotta end on a cliffhanger. Night /monster/.

>>148894

First off, dialogue should be on it's own line entirely, since that's how things are supposed to be but also it makes it easier to read (in my opinion anyway).

>He was walking with a handcart full of various items to the cave that overlooked the village. A faint glow could be seen emanating from the cavern.

I think "He was walking with a handcart full of various items to the cave that overlooked the village, a faint glow could be seen emanating from it." would flow better, since both sentences refer to the same thing/have the same subject.

>She's always burning the candle at both ends. She seemed to be working especially hard since she couldn't get around as she used to. “I should get her some more books. She really needs to relax.”

This could be broken up into separate lines for each sentence, since I assume each one is a different thought.

> He was affluent and educated and could have easily lived the rest of his life in the lap of luxury. But Hiro chose to help his community any way he could. Whether that meant helping in the fields or teaching the village children what he knew, Hiro was glad to enrich the lives of the village he loved.

This would be better as "He was affluent and educated and could have easily lived the rest of his life in the lap of luxury, but instead chose to help his community any way he could, whether that meant helping in the fields or teaching the village children what he knew. Hiro was glad to enrich the lives of the village he loved."

>>148895

>But for the last month, Hiro had a bit more work than usual.

Would be better as "But for the last month, however, Hiro had a bit more work than usual."

>He had a cart full of records and offerings to the woman in the cave. That woman was Chie, the village Crow Tengu.

"He had a cart full of records and offerings to the woman in the cave, and that woman was Chie, the village Crow Tengu."

>Crow Tengu are not exactly human. This type of mamono had the torso and head of a human woman, but the wings and legs of a crow. They are well known for keeping records of human settlements and are generally well liked by those societies.

"Crow Tengu are not exactly human, however. This type of mamono had the torso and head of a human woman, but the wings and legs of a crow. They are also well known for keeping records of nearby human settlements and are generally well liked by the inhabitants."

> The records they keep have helped the village prepare for natural disasters, given clues to curing diseases, and gives information about ones ancestors. Chie usually went around gathering information herself, but she had broken a wing and had difficulty walking around. Hiro took it upon himself to gather what she needed to do her work. After all, he was one of the few people who could actually read and write.

"The records they keep help the village prepare for natural disasters, give clues to curing diseases, and give information about one's ancestors. Chie usually went around gathering information herself, but she had broken a wing and had difficulty walking around so Hiro took it upon himself to gather what she needed to do her work. After all, he was one of the few people who could actually read and write."

fix your shit firetires

>>148896

>Hiro finally reached his destination. The large cave was illuminated by many torches which flickered against the darkness. The warm glow felt nice compared to the outdoor twilight. “Hello? Chie? I'm here!” There was hardly any echo as the cavern was filled with many bookcases and even more books. She was likely in the study, so Hiro gathered the records and left the rest of the handcart contents near the entrance. He walked to the study with an arm full of records, feeling a little guilty to be giving her more work. He reached his destination and saw her sitting at her desk, her face brimming with focus.

"After a few more minutes of walking, Hiro finally reached his destination. The large cave was illuminated by many torches which flickered against the darkness, the warm glow feeling nice compared to the outdoor twilight. “Hello? Chie? I'm here!”, Hiro called out. There was hardly any echo as the cavern was filled with many bookcases and even more books. She was likely in the study, Hiro thought, so he gathered the records and left the rest of the contents of the cart near the entrance. He walked to the study with his arms full, feeling a little guilty to be giving her more work. He reached his destination and saw her sitting at her desk, her face brimming with focus."

>After almost a minute of complete silence, Hiro cleared his throat to make his presence known. Chie jumped at the sudden noise. She scowled at Hiro, but said nothing. “So,” Hiro said finally breaking the silence, “I have the field reports from the southern farms. Mrs. Hirohito finally had her baby, it's a g—.” Chie suddenly spoke, “Y-you don't have to keep coming here you know!” Hiro smiled smugly. “Now Chie, you know you would either die of boredom or starve without me. Speaking of which, you have quite the feast waiting outside. I'll cook it up, but I want to do a little reading first.” Chie faced her work once more. “Do what you want,” she said coldly.

"After almost a minute of complete silence, Hiro cleared his throat to make his presence known. Chie jumped at the sudden noise before scowling at Hiro, saying nothing. “So,” Hiro said finally breaking the silence, “I have the field reports from the southern farms. Mrs. Hirohito finally had her baby, it's a g—.” Chie suddenly spoke, interrupting him. “Y-you don't have to keep coming here you know!” Hiro smiled smugly. “Now Chie, you know you would either die of boredom or starve without me. Speaking of which, you have quite the feast waiting outside. I'll cook it up, but I want to do a little reading first.” Chie faced her work once more. “Do what you want,” she said coldly."

>>148897

>Hiro shrugged and headed back to the library. He really wished she would have warmed up to him by now. He could tell that she loved the village as much as he did, working that hard all the time conveyed that notion. If only she would smile though. Hiro found himself in center of the library. The books spanned for generations on numerous topics. He was free to read anything he wanted, as long as he didn't read anything on the villagers from the current generation as that info was to be kept private. This didn't bother him though, he completely understood. He read for a good hour before getting up to cook for Chie and himself. Hiro took a look inside the cart at the potential feast before him. Unable to decide for himself, he decided to bother Chie once more to ask what she would like for dinner. Before entering the room, he began to speak. “Hey Chie, what do you feel like e–.” He stopped when he noticed something.

"Hiro shrugged and headed back to the library. He really wished she would have warmed up to him by now. He could tell that she loved the village as much as he did, working that hard all the time conveyed that notion. If only she would smile though. Hiro found himself in center of the library. He was free to read anything he wanted, as long as he didn't read anything on the villagers from the current generation, as that info was to be kept private. This didn't bother him though, he completely understood. He read for a good hour before getting up to cook for Chie and himself. Hiro took a look inside the cart at the potential feast before him. Unable to decide for himself, he decided to bother Chie once more to ask what she would like for dinner. Before entering the room, he began to speak. “Hey Chie, what do you feel like e–.” He stopped when he noticed something."

>>148899

>Chie was fast asleep. A small snore emanated from her slightly agape mouth. Hiro couldn't help but chuckle softly. She was really cute all tuckered out from writing. He noticed that she had a pile of books on her desk. Hiro decided to help her clean before making dinner. He quietly gathered the books and made his way to the library to shelf the documents. Thankfully Chie was very organized and labeled both the books and the shelves for easy storage. After he put away most of the books, he noticed different something about the book currently in his hand. The book had his name on it. He was tempted to open it, but he had promised Chie that he would not read anything from the current generation. Making good on his promise, he went to shelf the book unopened. But something struck him as odd about the shelf that his records was supposed to be on. Most families had a only a couple books on their lives. For some reason, Hiro had an entire bookshelf dedicated to him. The curiosity was too much for him to handle. It was a book on his family anyway right? It's not like he would be prying into other people's lives, just his own. Hiro cracked open a book at random and took a peek inside.

"Chie was fast asleep, a small snore emanating from her slightly agape mouth. Hiro couldn't help but chuckle softly. She was really cute, all tuckered out from writing like that while noticing the pile of books on her desk. Hiro decided to help her clean before making dinner for the two of them. He quietly gathered the books and made his way to the library to shelf the documents. Thankfully, Chie was very organized and labeled both the books and the shelves for easy storage. After he put away most of the books, he noticed different something about the book currently in his hand: the book had his name on it. He was tempted to open it, but he had promised Chie that he would not read anything from the current generation. Making good on his promise, he went to shelf the book unopened. But something struck him as odd about the shelf that his records were supposed to be on. Most families had a only a couple books on their lives. For some reason, Hiro had an entire bookshelf dedicated to him. The curiosity was too much for him to handle. It was a book on his family anyway right? It's not like he would be prying into other people's lives, just his own. Hiro cracked open a book at random and took a peek inside."

>>148902

>Dear Diary,

>

>Today Hiro came by as usual. He looked so cute in that blue tunic that I like! I could tell he was helping in the fields because he was still glistening with sweat. He smelled so manly! Anyway…

>

>What. Hiro couldn't believe what he was reading. He chose another book at random and opened the page.

>>148903

>Dear Diary,

>

>Today I heard about Holstaur milk having the ability to make your breasts larger. Do you think that Hiro likes big breasts? Maybe I should order some…

>

>The information was still not registering. Another book was chosen.

>>148904

>Dear Diary,

>

>I learned that human women will right the name of the men they love one thousand times so that those men will fall in love with them. It sounds silly, but at this point I will try anything.

>

>Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma Hiro Kazuma…

>>148905

>Still not registering. Hiro reached for another book when he heard a voice shout, “You read it didn't you!” Hiro jumped in surprise. Behind him stood a beet red Chie. Hiro tried to speak, but could only stammer nonsense. “Chie…I…sorry…uh.” She was silent for what seemed like forever. Chie finally uttered two words, in barely a whisper. “Follow me.” she said. Hiro complied as he wouldn't dare try to make things worse. After putting the book back on "his" shelf, he followed her into a room he had not seen before.He could see a small bookcase, a tall mirror, a bed…Wait, a bed? Was this her bedroom?

fix your shit Hotwheels

also it might be better to put this in a pastebin instead so people dont have to read a wall of text in the thread

and i say that, but i basically had the story up twice:^)

I wrote a thing for the waifu dice thread. I got unlucky and got a Matango with super high intelligence and tech use and not very kind and…

So you know what, I wrote about a bank heist. ENJOY.

http://pastebin.com/Fm5u0bGS

>>149376

Nicely done. I only felt a moderate urge to purge the foul infection.

srsly though, larping aside, this doesn't sound like a half-bad setting to leap off something regular.

http://pastebin.com/nKwSkZHv

Wardrobe Malfunction. An Apsara gets sent to deal with a crazy sage, to try to convince him to not murder the Demon Lord and cause the death of everyone who's living with a monster girl. The predictable, nay, the inevitable happens.

>>150479

What the hell? Not even 1/4 of the way there but this is really good. Better than 90% of what everything else that's written.

>>150956

I have no idea, but I guess seeing would be believing

>>150956

I've been writing something like these for a while. They don't sell well or get anywhere near as much attention as Chuck Tingle's… masterpieces… but they're fun to do. I'd say go for it.

>>151042

You think Mr. Tingle is more successful because there's a bigger market for gay porn or because of his titles/covers?

>>151043

Absolutely the titles/covers. Like I HAVEN'T written gay monster porn?

The thing about Chuck Tingle is that he has a huge advantage in that his stuff is deliberately bad. People can leave a review saying 'I LOVED POUNDED IN THE BUTT BY MY OWN BUTT! BEST GAY ANUSES EVER' and have it be a sort of a joke of a thing. But for someone to actually come out and say 'Hey, this porn? It REALLY turned me on' is a lot harder for people, and much more exposing.

It is the nature of irony that something that is ironically bad can be more openly enjoyed. So, y'know, something worth thinking about.

>>151162

imgur.com/NCrL6g4

Sorry I forgot the final score

Hey, i have a problem of getting depressed and full of self-hate partway through writing up stuff. I end up giving up and deleting all my notes relating to what I was writing.

Any way to fix that?

>>151240

Channel your depression and self-hate into writing a bittersweet but touching story.

>>151240

Don't give up and realize a writefag's biggest critic is himself.

>>151240

Git gud you fucking casual. Every failure is a step to godhood. Gods are made, not born. I've been writing for 8 years, entering contests and gay poetry shit for years. It's all bullshit. The only thing that matters is getting your point across in as few words as possible without skipping details. That's why greentexts work.

Secondly, lower your fucking standards. Improvement is more important than victory.

As I've said to another writer; No one can leap an entire mountain in one jump, but one step at a time and they can pass the horizon. Determination is godliness.

>>151240

Put the stuff out there, even if it's bad. I've had someone describe something I'm planning on putting up as 'excerable' and 'un-fucking-readable'. And I'm still going to put it up. Being bad is a completely unavoidable step on the way to being good, and being bad where no one can see you makes it very hard to tell what about your work is good. Write something, get depressed, think it's shitty, and instead of deleting it, post it for everyone to see. It may get you yelled at or mocked, but you still should put it out there.

You won't ever find perfection in your own head.

>>151240

When starting out, write something you want to write, and then proudly post it. You'll figure out quick if you've made mistakes or not and you can seek to improve upon what you've already done.

If you keep deleting and never create, you'll never know what you can have ended up doing. If at the start, YOU'RE proud of what you did, then use it to build upon.

>>151240

Stop being a faggot.

>>151267

it's all pink color saying that but that shit takes millenniums , mfw i had like 3 ideas for nearly solid stories for years and never got to wrote them

>>151155

Perfect. Just going by the titles I came up with, I think it would be in the Chuck Tingle vein. For example:

"The Little Mermaid and the Dolphin Rape Cave"

>>151322

Yep, that'll happen

Honestly you don't have to set the bar at multi-chapter 100k word fucking novels. Throw out a 500 word lewd, throw out a 300 word cute, throw out a 1 post greentext of how your mc met their waifu, just put something up. Writing's an excercise of practice just as much as drawfaggotry.

>>151042

What have you done besides 1001 Starry Nights? I mean that you sell.

>>151356

>>151240

Please don't write 400k word pieces like I did right off the bat.

It's a trip, but yeah, stay small starting out. You'd be surprised what you can accomplish once one thing is finished, even if it's small.

>>146090

http://www.quickanddirtytips.com/education/writing/7-typical-writing-mistakes

http://silvablu.skeeter63.org/HMG/00-Introduction.htm

https://archive.today/jYgeG

Few links I've found helpfull in my shitty fanfic hobby.

Hey anons, does anyone have tips for getting past writers block? I know how I want to continue and eventually finish my story, but it will take a long time and I'm only half way through it, I usually end up not having time to write enough of what I want, but when I do get time I usually don't have the energy.

Pls halp

>>151405

This is going to sound really shitty, but this is how I do it. Try to picture a scene and how you want it to start and how you want it to end. Then put on some mood music, clear out your distractions and start typing. Most of my detail work comes in after I write a rough draft and then fill in with details.

I can't stress this enough, the biggest way to conquer writers block is to just write. I know, that sounds super dumb, but it's how I do it. You can always fix stuff later, you don't have to be satisfied with your first draft. Momentum is huge for getting stuff done.

>>151405

I literally just pushed past writer's block by a drive to actually finish. You might have to come back and look at certain parts you're iffy about, but I'm sure you know the feeling of getting to a part you really want to write and then losing track of time and just getting into it?

Writing something short as an exercise might be an interesting way to keep it fresh also. I'm surprised we don't have requests like we did last thread, but I guess not many were really done…

Joke's on me, I'm sort of in writer's block atm too, but I can't keep writing short stories to distract myself from this forever

>>151405

>>151410

Basically that, yeah. Personally I imagine and play out the scene in my head, and then write what's happening almost like a reporter would. If how I wrote something seems flimsy, I "play back" the scene until I can think of a better description. Momentum and mood are essential if you want to stave off the whole "I don't wanna do it right now" thing.

alternatively you could just look at more memes

>>151405

>>151411

Jokes on you both. I'm also in a writer's block at the moment. I have ideas for what I want to happen in the story, I just can't put those ideas down into words and since I want to have some actual development in the story before the smut happens, I haven't written shit for a few months.

No idea if this would work for you, and it probably wouldn't be a good idea to start one now both because of your current writing situation but also the amount of them going on right now, but I've found out that after doing a simple slice-of-life CYOA – doesn't last longer than a week before the readers waifu the girl, and the story is usually around 20,000 to 30,000 words – I've been able to write a few one-offs for a few weeks before I hit that wall again.

>>151405

Also, I like to use playlists. This is my favorite for when I want to think.

>>151413

Oh hey Beardicus

>>151415

Go pet your catgirl waifu or something you fucking faget. :^)

>>151410

>>151411

>>151412

>>151414

See that's actually what I did for most of the first half when I had free time, thing is I don't want to short dick anything and have things be rushed. Powering through has helped before though, I'll give the playlist idea a go too.

Faggotcat, you still suck at memes.

>>151412

>>151405

Also forgot to mention, I was mostly joking about the memes.

Sometimes if I'm stuck I'll listen to music and/or browse through my images. My more /tg/ stuff and reaction images even lewd to see what rattles my brain enough to make something click.

You can find inspiration in a lot of places.

>>151418

:^)

>>151419

I was thinking I'd go listen to some Lord of the Rings music, seeing as how our heroes are at Moria's doorstep now.

>>151421

I am existing in a quantum state of excitement and dread for Jamal to tell elrond to 'Stop being a Bitch Nigga'

You guys aren't comparing vaginas to mollusks enough nor are you talking about how defenseless anuses are.

You have brought grim dishonor on the foundation of writefaggotry that has preceded you. Atone for your sins by writing a 500 word persuasive essay on the topic of whether or not you believe lamias have assholes.

ᕕ( ᐛ )ᕗ It is your duty as brave monster girl filth writer warriors to solve the 911 of butt problems.

>>151421

I posted some thoughts on your stuff in my story thread, don't know if you saw it or not.

>>151429

Godamn bromont, do I need to do one on "Centaurs: human vaginas, horse vaginas or both?" as well?

>>151410

>>151405

>>151411

Lol? I don't do anything at all. I'd rather it be good and late as fuck than shit and forced. What are they gonna do, not read it? Deadlines are different though, don't give yourself deadlines.

>>151363

I've written maybe 20~ short stories, ranging around 7,000 words each, that are on sale. And one 60,000 word CYOA about a woman in a castle full of predatory monster girls.

As to writer's block, my secret is green tea. Caffeine plus magical alkaloids that help you focus. There's a 90% chance that the whole thing is bullshit, but the important thing here, the REALLY important thing, is that it doesn't matter if it's bullshit if you believe it. A routine is one of the best things for writing, as well; Creating a posture, a place, a time where you feel compelled to write. That gets the creative juices flowing.

>>146439

>I'll call Jack in early. Hate that little bastard, it'll be fun to piss him off

Heh one of my old bosses said this once when I needed an early dart from work one day. Not Jack obviously, but the rest is pretty much what he said word for word. That manager was a bro.

Polite sage for off topic nostalgiaposting

>>151161

>didn't get first place

another writefag brought down by the man smh #FreeStarglider

>>151429

Snek cloaca is a shit headcanon and everyone who has it is a faggot. A bit short of the requested 500 words, but there's not much more to say on the matter.

>>151421

Well, Jamal is basically the MC's Vassal, and also his best buddy since he got out of meth head central from his hometown. Jamal is gonna give some Elves shit soon though

>>151437

I did see it, and I gave you a reply a few minutes ago.

>>151543

My thoughts exactly, this is my first story too and I didn't really plan anything out first, I just sat down and made shit happen.

I'm scared of this brain I have, I made memes become reality

Shilling my pastebin here so you guys can read my story without having to go through 3 whole threads. All of the parts will be added in a few days.

http://pastebin.com/u/Anon_357

Judge it how you see fit, for I simply wish to provide enjoyable content.

http://pastebin.com/JMhagjMe

>>151429

http://pastebin.com/99Xz2egC

I'm sorry Mr. Bromont, my essay ran a little long.

>>151852

*Do stars have assholes?** Jesus Christ, I can't breathe, laughing too hard!

>>151824

Interesting setting. I look forward to seeing you expand on it!

>>151881

By the way, what ever happened to that light novel you were working on?

>>151891

I don't care how related to monster girls it is, I'd throw money at my computer the second I saw a book by you for sale.

>>151928

>I see all these published shorts telling full stories in 2k-5k words, yet the only things I've written are like 8k plus words.

Are they though? Or do they just SEEM finished because the author's taking your foreknowledge of the subject material as a given?

One thing I've found, (and had to check myself on) is the tendency for authors in the MG sphete to rely on the presumption of common knowledge, for instance, there have been times when I'll have to look some random Nipponese ghost thing because all the author gave me was a name and a very vague description.

Now if they said 'minotaur' or 'harpy', I've got an instant representation in my mind.

I guess the question is, how much do we take for granted, and how much reliance on it is too much?

(Polite sage for discussion)

>>151940

I was very confused the first time I came here because I wasn't acquainted with mge manticores or tailpussies. I do think you can do a fleshed out short story in 2,000-5,000 words, though they are usually slice of life or curtain fics with the couples already together.

>>151940

Oh, sorry. By published works, I mean shorts published on magazines, anthologies, etc. Not "unofficially published", like, pastebin or TFC. So in actuality, we have the advantage of foreknowledge. That's one of the reasons I find myself inadequate for writing stuff.

There was this one like, 2k word story about a guy who tattooed people's blood on himself to inherit their memories and personality and stuff, bringing JUSTICE to their killers/rapists/etc, and it had so much to offer and I was like, "wow, that's neat." Told a lot about a person and his supernatural power and left most of it to the end. That was in some online magazine, forgot which though.

Meanwhile I spend a full 1k just to get some exposition done. Thanks for the input.

>>151957

What do you mean by 1k for exposition?Like doing some scenes to show the world? Because 1k just on exposition seemed excessive.

>>151928

I'm literally the worst editor here, but if you go back, you'll probably find something that isn't necessary to the actual story itself. I think proper editing, you'll probably find what you're looking for to drop. Still, if 7k is what you need to tell the story, then that might be how it is!

>>151940

This is essentially fan fiction and we fall into the same traps all fan fiction writers fall into. For the most part, half the work is done for us.

>>151962

That was just me exaggerating, I don't really have an idea on what I'm trying to improve on exactly. I guess, I'm not too bothered by long exposition, I'd just like it to either be short, or entertaining. Long and boring is bad.

>>151964

That's true. I also realized that placing a story's starting spot during or shortly after something interesting, or with dialogue makes the expository scene less agonizingly boring.

>>151964

>This is essentially fan fiction

I call shenanigans. Partially because the thought of being 'one of those fanfic writefags' makes me feel icky inside, but mostly because in order for something to be fanfiction, there has to be an established canon, and when it comes to MGs, there's not.

Sure, we borrow from KC, but that's just because he draws good shit and he's had the forethought to set it as a reference. We recognise that. But there's also just as much drawn from MGE/Q (Ilias/Maou), Monster Musume, Darkstalkers, and countless other shit featuring a cute girl with ears and a tail. I myself will admit to influences from Anime to conventional fantasy to WHF/40K.

If we've got to put a name on our primordial autism, It's closer to trope-fiction than fan-fiction, because I'd put it to you that we'd drop KC like a hot rock if some artistfag dropped round tomorrow with a better story than "Everything is rape all the time."

>>151981

>MGE/Q

I realize this is KC, I don't know why I put it in as an example of not KC. I haz the dumb and cannot brain today. Still, point stands.

>>151405

Listen to blood pumping music, its what I do. Also helping to run scenes through your head works. For lewd get aroused and write, just don't start touching yourself as that'll lead to problems, regulation is key

>>146439

Will this ever be continued?

Really liked it

I have a bad habit of writing things out as a post first, and as soon as I post, I suddenly see the dozens of spelling and syntax mistakes I made all over it.

I feel like writing in a separate program before copy pasting it into a post would encourage a bit more discipline in preflighting my writing.

What's a good preferably free text editing program?

>>152690

OpenOffice is amazing. it has a built in word counting tool, is open source and free, and reduces the byte size on massive documents. You can change between page and web views, and after learning the tools, it becomes a writer's best friend.

Plus the excel, powerpoint, and calculator page bootlegs do the job.

https://www.openoffice.org/download/

Just remember to check all the settings and remove autocorrects where you can find them. You might have to google a few things to stop the auto-corrects but once that's out of the way the program is 10/10

>>152009

Does embed related count?

>>152737

More like this

Speaking of Marie's story is now at what, 13 parts? been a long time coming and hopefully this upcoming bit I'm doing is good

Hey guys I got a question about Pastebin, I just finished adding the 2nd part of my autistic story in my pastebin, and when I clicked my user name to bring me back to the little list page for my pastes, it already had like 43 hits… How is that possible? How can that many people see it the moment I finish it?

Polite sage

LET ME POST HOTWHEELS YOU CUNT

>>152825

When you post it as public, a shitload of random people on Pastebin see it, and, curious, might click on it momentarily when they see it in the 'newest pastes' section on the right. Or maybe its bots or some shit. Point is that they don't love you, a lesson it took me too many years to learn.

>>152867

Oh, okay. I was wondering what happened there.

It's okay if they don't love me, I'm just another writefag is all

>Tumblr writer

>uwotm8.png

>>152867

That sad, i like your stuff.

blood is thicker than yadayadaya was really cute and hot, and I liked granberia and tamamo's alt endings

>>152867

I love your stuff if it makes you feel better.

Blood is thicker than yadayadaya is one of my favorite short romance stories and I like the effort you put into the alt ends for tamamo and granberia.

>>152871

>>152890

That means a lot to me, you guys. At least I know 8chan loves me. Sure, it may be tough love, it may even be scary ball-stomping monster girl love, but still.

>>152870

I feel that it's important to give people fair warning. You never know WHAT kind of shit I might write.

I'm sorry, those were both me. 8chan ate my post and then decide it would post it anyway.

And even though there weren't a lot of lewds in the Erubetie ending, it was the one that touched my feels the most.

>>152916

Okay, fair enough. I'm the same way though.. What with all the kind of shit I've pulled off with my first story thus far.

>>153118

Spelling/Grammar suggestions: You're doing a lot of dialogue without quotes. This wouldn't come across as necessarily an error, except you have the dialogue in quotes in other places.

>“It looks like I have been led astray, sorry about the wait.” Mentioned the floating man clad in ragged red satin robe

When you follow up a line of dialogue with 'He said', 'mentioned', or anything really that suggests that the sentence is just a continuation of the dialogue like that, you should end the dialogue line with a comma instead of a period, and not capitalize the next word after the quote.

>The creature bowed with a refinement that would be found in a kings court.

Should be 'A king's court'.

>I am the Arch-legious for those who are laplacian

… Wait, okay, so, from my understanding, Laplace operators are usually used in the study of celestial mechanics and give a constant multiple of the mass density when applied to a given gravitational potential. Now, it would take a scientist to explain this, and I'm in the humanities, but… Does that mean the Laplacians are burdened under the weight of the world? :-D

So, you've got a bit of work you could do on grammar/spelling. Stylistically is more difficult. Style, after all, is a deeply personal thing, and all stylistic advice exists only to help you fit someone specific's tastes. You can only really change things if it feels right to change that.

The main thing that stands out to me here is that you're hinting at a lot of world building stuff, but since we don't have the context of the setting, it raises a bunch of questions without giving us a chance to figure any of that out.

> So both You and Aldiester will be able to transform into Dread Lords. A type of monster that your Order never hunts due to the sheer amount of potential horrors they can bring about.

That's a good example of it. What are these 'sheer amount of potential horrors'? It's ominous, but- vague. Also, if she's a part of the order, wouldn't she know these things? It's one of the troublesome parts of trying to explain your world in a story. It's a bit easier for authors to get around it. If she's the one who's thinking 'Oh, we'd be safe like that, my order never hunts those', it fits in a bit better. But again, stylistic choices; Those are the kinds of things that you have to take with a grain of salt. And they should never stop you from writing the way that feels right to you.

Don't know if any of that's helpful, but I hope you keep writing. I really do like the Laplacian thing.

>>153125

going to edit it like you said. the laplace was supposed to be a placeholder for demons.

but thanks for helping me out. I had a old copy that messed up the dialog, between the lich and the nun.

>>153129

No worries. Laplace's Demon, huh? I should have recognized that. I think it'd make a good term for them anyway. :-D

>>153118

That is perhaps the least threatening sword I have ever fucking seen. Would just fly directly out of the hand if used. For some reason is terminated with a dull point of glittering gold. Weight is all in blade. No pommel to speak of. Little fucking girl holding it. Abusing the life of a saint for fun and profit. Almost as bad as the catholic church.

Oi, I'm currently being a scrub who has my own story ideas, but I feel like taking a request to do sometime this weekend probably.

>>153473

Meant to respond to >>153471

>>153471

Woops, meant to add that I'd prefer not to do lewds unless it strikes me fancy for some reason.

>>153473

Oh yeah, I never really checked up on that thread after reading the first time, didn't see how it developed or anything.

>>153480

>>146141

You could try your hand at these requests someone came up with. Neither requires lewds and they sound fun. People write the mindflayer off but I think she has good story potential.

>>153480

I actually have a few story ideas kicking around if you want to give them a try;

*a depressed engineer/machinist finds a dilapidated living doll. he learns that she was actually an heirloom of a very long-lasting family that has died out.

he starts to bond with them, and teaches himself the traditional trades(woodworking,painting,etc.) to repair her. she then helps turn his life around.

*a dudebro ends up alping, and has to come to terms with himself

*a manticore,Oomukade,or some other venomous mamono learns that their boyfriend is forming a medical condition where continued intake of venom would kill them. they then have to struggle to restrain themselves for the sake of their boyfriend's health.

*a potter has to deal with a Jinn of the jar that keeps hanging out in his shop.

*a hakutaku as a school counselor tries to pair up a kid and a bullying mamono

*a danuki that gets more turned on by business jargon than dirty talk.

*a lake fisherman meets a Sahuagin, who he tries rescuing thinking she is a dead/drowning girl. he is then rescued by her because he got his legs stuck in the mud.

I'm glad this thread isn't dead. I have other ideas for stories that I've had lingering, I don't want to start on them until after I've finished the story in the highschool threads though. But here's what I got Anons.

>A psychopathic anon who can't feel love or empathy gets cured by his Lich waifu

>A battle at sea against a Human controlled commercial crab fishing boat involving a Kraken, Shark Girls, and Dhampir pirates/corsairs

>A general adventure story about a young squire making a very important mail delivery, and gets into big trouble on the road (involves Orcs and a Crow Tengu)

What are your thought's anons?

>>153493

Squire, reminds me of the hellhound mail story, RIP :(.

>>153505

Well, mine is gonna be a little different than that. It's gonna have both low and high fantasy elements with a lot of action, and some character building for Crow Tengu, best flyer

>>153493

That second one sounds like the most fun.

>>153592

Perceptive, I like that. That one is going to have the most memes and fun stuff.

Like shark girls gang raping fishermen

>>153493

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ppnG1wqKyVE

>A battle at sea against a Human controlled commercial crab fishing boat involving a Kraken, Shark Girls, and Dhampir pirates/corsairs

>>153596

Like that idea eh Starglider?

>>153600

If it's basically fucking whale wars then yeah. Whale wars was the shit. Throwing hot, sticky butter all over the whales.

>>153603

Hate to spoil it, but it is going to be the shortest out of the three, the squire/mail delivery one is going to be the longest

>>153490

Aha! It was me the whole time!

http://pastebin.com/mQK2RNcL

So, for some reason the idea about the Jinn of the Jar and the potter jumped out and me and I just had to write this up real quick. I think it's a sweet little story and I hope you enjoy it.

It's been awhile since I was on /monster/, has the writefaggotry improved?

>>153664

You be the judge.

http://pastebin.com/u/Anon_357

Polite sage for shilling my pastebin again, still not finished copy and pasting either.

>>153667

http://pastebin.com/u/starglider

>>153668

You mother fucker

Clicks link

>>153664

I'd say most of the named writefags on here are pretty talented. I don't think I've read a bad story from someone like Ace, Starglider, Beardicus, etc. The tumblr writefag posts some really good vanilla stories (most of the ever after endings for MGQ, Blood is thicker than yadayadaya,the Taste of Salt if you want to see what I mean.) but you need to read the tags to their stories because they can write some pretty out there shit.

I might include Pissed Lich if that nigger wasn't currently sleeping inside of his coffin while everyone else is waiting for him to finish his story.

>>153668

Not bad at all, needs more memes though.

>>153672

I know I'm one to talk because I can drag my feet on shit, but I spent like an entire week one summer catching up on his quest and then it has screeched to a stand still. He needs to drop all his real world obligations and finish his free internet story for our entertainment, godammit!

How's engineering going? I haven't read it since the bus incident.

>>153675

You should read wizardquest

>>153676

I have been nigga, I was the one talking to you about the cat-o-ninetails from the last writefag thread.

Godamn it, I just want her and the wizard to fugg. I like their chemistry. Fucking virgin fueled magic.

>>153675

Everything's going swimingly again. They're apologizing to Nauni and Jexx fucked off. It was all my fault, I should've stuck with my gut instead of doing what I did and I've learned to be more adamant with myself as a result.

>>153677

Oh, rock on, I forget things.

Guess you'll have to read on and find out ;^)

>>153678

You're stronger than me. I wanted to do a monster buddy cop/romance cyoa about a minotaur and human fighting a danuki crime organization set in my Cross Worlds universe but I've been intimidated by having to interact with an audience. Because of that and the recent glut of cyoas, I thought doing my orc story would be good practice for a longer story.

Are you doing a second part to Ellipsed Table soon?

>>153679

I guess I will. You better not break my heart Ace!

>>153680

Yes. I'm trying not to rush it because I don't want it to be bad. I feel like I can do amazing if I actually tweak it, unlike the first one.

I could be convinced to post a sneak-peek though, since it's taking such an abysmally long time.

>>153681

Fucking rolled over the 3.5e comment.

I feel so bad for Sir Cumfrence.

>>153681

I liked your little story about the three knights and the Wyvern, it was cute.

Waits for part 2 patiently, while procrastinating on my own story born of autism and insanity

>>153682

Hello Orc writefriend, loving the Thomas the Pain Train angle

COME ON! MOTHA FUCKAS COME ON!!

>>153685

It did get a little autistic in there, but goddamn that may may is gold for Thomas.

>>153651

Awww cute!

Would have liked to see who she picked for a husbando though

>>153685

BTW, I'm glad you wrote that part too, it was pretty exciting to read

Polite sage

>>153691

Thank you!

I was going to end it on the "I'd love to!" but it didn't feel definite enough of an ending. I feel it could work just fine without that last blurb however, and I didn't want to throw terribly much detail into it so you can sort of imagine how life was. Some people don't like that, i understand, but I think it fit there without making it needlessly long.

>>153692

You've probably noticed, but I like to do a scene with some character development in the relationship, then shift back to Lorka's parents a bit, then do an action scene to shake some stuff up, then do a romance scene, etc.

I've been doing it to try and mix it up so you guys don't get bored reading it. I try to make sure everything is relevant to where the story is going while still throwing in my slice of life bits. Been dropping hints about the orcs and onis having problems for a while. Though I will say the mecha videogame fight scene was completely gratuitous because I want to throw in some action while having Thomas and Lorka get closer.

Looking forward to the tengu story. Is it going to be more grounded than Detroit Matrix Meme Madness? I'm glad you are using a tengu, best harpy needs more love.

>>153697

I do plan on making it a very serious tone to start with. Low and High fantasy have never truly been properly molded together since Lord of the Rings in my mind, and I want to try and change that a little, so yes it's going to be much more grounded and a lot less ridiculous.

I chose Crow Tengu because she's relatively fresh and I've only seen a few short stories about that MG in one thread, I want Crow Tengu best flyer to be one of the protagonists, and love interests for the MC, YET ANOTHER MAIL MAN! Kind of.

>>153697

And yes I have noticed your pattern, it's a good formula, it's just that I use a shit ton of memes in my current writefaggotry.

And violent shit, + lewds

In addition to writing Marie's story I find myself inadvertently having created and started on two more, I seem to be now writing 3 stories at once, please send help

>>153725

What's Marie's story, friend? A greentext or something on your pastebin?

>>154022

check the monster school thread, people say it's good but it feels like I've always make mistakes with it, hopefully the quality improves in the later parts

A bit scared to ask, but could someone use this story I'm writing and use it as a cross sample of my writing and tell me what mistakes/traps/other dumb shit I'm repeating so I can try to break any bad habits I have? other than general spelling errors which I'm fully aware it's littered with because I try to rush out posts when I get a migraine, I'm talking more about syntax and structuring, I want to do my stupid story ideas more JUSTICE

>>152166

I really hope I didn't fuck up linking this

>>154028

Looks like it worked, and for something like this, you don't need to sage, it's not off topic.

alright guys, I have been doing a bit of writing on this website, and I think my writing is somewhat decent. but there is one thing that I have been kind of stuck on.

How do I write lewds?

It's just something that I have been putting off for a while in my story, even though it is pretty much just a slice-of-life story so far.

I just have very little experience in this.

on all counts for this really. :_:

>>154501

Reposting what I said from the last writefag thread.

"Focus less on the act and more on the pleasure and emotions of the two doing the act. It's good to have a description of going on, but at the end of the day, we know a penis is just thrusting into a vagina.How the couple reacts is the most important thing you are trying to convey.

Try not to directly refer to something as penis and vagina, it just seems awkward. Womanhood, snatch, pussy and manhood, dick, cock are examples. On the flip side, don't be too over descriptive. "And then his orgasm bloomed inside of her as though it was a white explosion of fireworks" in other words I'd try to stray from awkward metaphors/similes.

Practice, of course, is the most important thing. I don't consider my first couple of smut fics my best, but I learned a lot from them.

Hope that helps."

Also don't be intimidated by it, you don't have to go into a shit ton of detail, a lot of green texts guys do fine with just a couple lines.

I need some help.

I want to write a story involving a monster that is sweet, innocent, caring, demur, and cute. I'm having a hard time thinking of girls that fit that outside of Alice (but I really don't want to use her.)

Can you guys throw out some MGs that have those qualities?

>>154530

You could pretty much use anything (within reason). Don't feel like you're bound by KC's arbitrary rules on Mamono psychology.

Also some of the best stories come from the 'Exception which proves the rule'. (See Orzh's academic Ork-whose-name-I've-forgotten for instance.) half the fun is exploring the conflicts her non-standard behaviour/interests generate within not only her own society but within wider society's pre-conceptions of her.

I hope that made sense, sleep is being a coquettish fucking cow of late.

>>154501

>>154505

Orzh's advice is pretty solid. Ultimately, the biological realities of the act are pretty fuckin' dull.

The way I like to think of it is, a meal. There are bases, and there are seasonings, and there is hunger. Sexual intimacy is the base. You need it to give the scene substance, in my opinion- That mechanical thrusting isn't the entire scene, but it gives it something to be built upon. Fetishes are like spices. They add flavor and nuance to a dish, although if you get too focused on them, they become overpowering. Sprinkle them on gently. And emotion, to me, is the equivalent of hunger. People need to care about this sex for it to mean much to them. Think about that feeling, when you get home from a long day, starving, your body desperate. Think about how it feels to find someone having prepared something delicious for you. The tears running down your cheeks as you accept something delicious, knowing that they cared about you enough to bring you something. That's the emotional context. Water can taste sweeter than anything when you're desperate for it. A good sex scene, I think, should have a strong emotional element to it, providing that same quenching sensation as a glass of ice-cold water after a brutally hot day and a murderous physical effort.

But what's most important is that it should satisfy your desires.

>>154530

I think you should think about subverting expectations, rather than fulfilling them. Basically, almost all good writing either fulfills, or subverts, expectations. If you don't have much luck with fulfilling them, subvert them! Write about a tender and romantic Wyrm, Ogre, Oni, Cheshire Cat. You know that Ushi-Oni picture with the Ushi-Oni learning to cook? That's a powerful image because it subverts the usual image of the Ushi-Oni. Subversion can be a more powerful way to explore a character than fulfilling the usual tropes, and it often satisfies people by giving them something they're not used to.

>>154530

It really depends on what you personally like. It's more or less accepted on here that KC's canon is shit and should only be used as a base or template for the girl. So while you can have a murderous, pelvic-destroyer of an Ushi-Oni, she can have a soft side for her husbando like >>154534 said. Subversion always makes things interesting.

>>154530

http://touchfluffytail.org/?story=spirit-energy-clinic

Read this. I think there's a reason it's highly rated, although there are some obvious errors in it.

Honestly, I'm not much one for the lewds, beyond that awkward fanfiction phase of mine,but I think the jackass has it right on the emotional contexts of it. It was easy to write the lewds for a certain story because I'd spent so much time creating that emotional bond and working up the characters there. For short stories it's just so much harder, and it's probably why I can't really read most of the lewd MG stories, although that's mainly because the fetishes are just too fucked up for me most of the time.

Anyway, try to do what you think feels right and go with it.

>>154534

>>154533

>>154538

I didn't want to spoil this, but I had something planned for the virginal MG story. I wanted a monster most people seem as cute and innocent to really want to fugg the guy she was interested in, but she knows he avoids monsters because they tend to be sexually predatory and rapey. So she pretends to be a cute virginal girl when she wants to go full full semen demon on him like any other MG. That is specifically why I wanted a cute, less aggressive MG. Though with that in mind, I could see myself using a cheshire, manticore, jinko. I just didn't want to spoil outright what I was planning.

>tender and romantic Ushi-Oni/Oni.

I really want to do a romantic oni/ushi-oni story. I have an idea for one that's been bouncing around where the MC and his girlfriend are fugging and she accidentally slams into the wall, which ends up breaking a $100 model he spent a year putting together. Repairing it would be very difficult so he shelves it. Then he finds out the model went missing and the oni/ushi-oni felt so bad about it that she took it to a gazer for advice and the two repaired it, with the gazer only giving advice and part recommendation. The model wouldn't be in as good condition as when the MC built it, but it would be crafted with little touches that would make it very personal.

Both of these are just ideas I have been tinkering with in my backlog. I still need to finish some other stuff, but I just like discussing story ideas.

Also damn tumblr writer, that "sex is a meal" metaphor was fucking good, I'm going to try and keep that in mind!

>>154539

Ace, did you mean that for >>154501? Just asking because he was the one looking for how to write lewds. Apologies if I misunderstood.

>>154545

Aaaah, okay. If you want someone known for their gentleness/submissiveness…

Sylph, Troll, Alice, Angel, Holstaurus, Alraune/Dryad, Glacies, Cockatrice, Alp, Chochin-Obake, Kobold, Dhampir, Dormouse, Ghost, Hinezumi, Houri, Kikimora, Kunoichi, Living Doll, Merrow, Sea Bishop, Weresheep, Yeti.

Any of those would be pretty low-key on the sexuality, generally.

>>154545

I did, I accidently refreshed the browser somehow and the post number was changed? Weird.

>>154545

Whatever you do, you need to finish that mu-onna story over in the /ara/ thread and the Lorka/Thomas story first.

Not really, I just like those two a lot and I want more updates.

Speaking of writing stuff, I really need to start doing it again. Still want to do a generic slice-of-life CYOA beforehand when classes get out for about a week for me though. After that, I'm totally not going to write another holstaur story, no sir. And here come the replies :^).

>>154559

You didn't even need the Holstaurus quip and we'd know it was you detect man.

>>154561

:^)

>>154553

Good advice though, everything you guys have said in >>154534,>>154538,>>154533 is important for aspiring writefags to read. We are kind of conditioned to see something like a hellhound and automatically assume the story is going to be full of rape and fiery sex, but I always enjoy stories that can use the MG's natural characteristics while letting her be a 3-dimensional person instead of a fetish set piece.

Thanks for the list, I needed it.

>>154559

You need to write more nigga, I started the mu-onna story because this board was in desperate need of some milf content. Actually because I needed a break from just writing Tusktaker and it has been very helpful in keeping me from hitting burnout. I love tusktaker but I spend a lot of time agonizing over it because I want the updates to be good.

Also because you've been such a lazy feggot, I've been writing an ara ara holstaurus oneshot. It's degenerate as fuck. Consensual sex in the missionary position, with leglock. And she might get pregnant.

>>154566

Fuck you man I was planning on writing an ara ara holstaur one-shot that consensual missionary with leglock and possible conception.

Like I've said before, my biggest issue right now is being unable to think of ways of putting thoughts into words when those thoughts aren't seggs. I want to make the lewd believable rather than "mc and mg meet, five seconds later they're fucking like newlyweds"

>>154577

Generally speaking, love and lewds come from the same thing: Need. We are all of us incomplete beings by our very nature, and so, love is the recognition of something in another person which is what we lack. If you want to make sudden, intense romance feel genuine, then think in dualism. For each character, think about the things that they most lack, the parts of their personalities that are the most undeveloped, the things they hate most about themselves; And give those things to their partner. The brutal, cruel warrior and the endlessly kind but terribly weak healer. The brilliant, terribly undecided scholar and the primitive but instinctually skilled barbarian. Love is, ultimately, two people who don't think they deserve the other. You write two people who have a great strength, and a great weakness; And whose strengths cover for the other's weakness. That's the biological basis for sex even being a thing.

If that helps, anyway.

>>154581

It's more of developing the relationship between the two more than anything. I just think having two people meet and five minutes later they're fucking and telling the other person that they love them is stupid.

As for the need thing, I always like to write about cuddles and/or cuddlesex because I'm a kissless virgin who's never had a girlfriend before in his life, let alone more than half a dozen friends. I just want to snuggle up with a holstaur in front of a fire during a cold winter night and not really do anything. Also lately I've been having dreams where I actually have a girlfriend, and the dream usually starts at the part where during the fifth(?) date I confess my love for her while spilling pasta everywhere. She then spills her own pasta and confesses her feelings for me too, and then we have MAXIMUM CUDDLES. [/spoiler]I just want to know what a hug that says "I care about you." feels like, and no it can't come from a family member.[/spoiler]

>>154585

well i fucked up that last bit of spoiler

oh well

A hug that says 'I care about you'. It starts with desperation, really. Desperation is the basis of most need. It's treated as a shameful thing when it comes to the desire for physical intimacy, which is kind of silly, considering how much it can hurt to be alone. Think about that feeling when you're starving, or parched. The pain of deprivation, made manifest. Imagine reaching out to grab someone. You realize, after a few seconds, that it's gone on a few seconds too long. You've gone from a normal hug to something awkward. You've revealed your weakness. You've started to make it bad, you've fucked up, you had an opportunity and you failed. And just as you try to disengage, to release your embrace, to try to salvage your fuckup, the other person tightens their grasp. And suddenly, you realize that you're not the only one starving, desperate, for love. They hold you tight, and you realize that you're not alone in the way you feel. You realize that, for the first time in your life, instead of being the one who's too eager, who's too needy, you can offer someone else the solace they're desperate for. You have the choice- You can reject them, cold and hard, or you can squeeze them, and tell them that they're loved.

It's up to you whether you embrace them or reject them. But you know how it feels, to be cold, to be alone, to be deprived. Think about what you wished others had done, all those times when you felt alone. And it won't be hard to write something that touches the people who read.

>>154577

Fugg you man, you wouldn't write it so I made my own story holstaurus milf story with blackjack and hookers! :^)

>>154577

>Love is, ultimately, two people who don't think they deserve the other.

Damn TW, that's kind of profound. Most of my stories involve that idea, that both parties feel like their weaknesses make them bad mates and they compliment each other.. I think what you said about shoring up weaknesses and finding a partner that compliments you is very true, and that there is a sense that a character feels their faults outweigh their virtues, which leads to a lot of tension in a romance story.

>>154585

I'm not trying to speak for everyone, but I think a lot of people on /monster/ just want a partner that won't judge them and will appreciate them as well as be loyal. And don't worry about the kissless virgin part, it can get lonely at times but it's far worse than being trapped in an awful relationship like some of the people I know. I'm not saying don't try or be single all your life, I'm just trying to make you feel better. Sometimes you just want a person that cares about you unconditionally.

>>154587

Have you thought of somehow doing a writing workshop on here? I know we have this thread, but we have a how to draw thread stickied, and you give good advice.

>>154590

I'd be willing to offer what advice I can. I'm reluctant to offer too much stylistic advice, because I'm not much for saying one viewpoint or another is 'right', but it's still handy.

At its most basic, humans are very selfish creatures. This can be a dark thing, but it can also be positive, because we each have different views on what's important. We all want a mate who is 'better' than us; But what 'better' means can vary from person to person. Thus, a perfect relationship is like a perfect trade; Offering something you consider worthless to someone who considers it incredibly important, while receiving something you desperately need but which the other person is happy to give away. That's the deal with monster girls. Someone who absolutely values you for who you are, and who thinks of herself as something lesser, as something undesirable. She's a monster. You're a NEET. But what you hate about yourself, she loves; And what she hates about herself, you love. She's not a 'chaser', in the terminology- Someone who would stop loving you if you weren't a NEET. But she loves you, and it would be damn hard for her to stop.

In this wide world, we are faced with billions of enemies. What most of us most need is someone who would have our back in the face of those countless enemies. That, I think, is love.

>>154590

>"I'm not trying to speak for everyone, but I think a lot of people on /monster/ just want a partner that won't judge them and will appreciate them as well as be loyal."

I personally am a MGTOW, but I'm glad you're not trying to speak for everyone

>>154585

It's not worth it anon, I've had a lot of girlfriends and they were literally all the same. 3D is souless and subhuman, don't look for love in a woman these days.. Look to your friends and how far you've pushed yourself all the way up until this point. Be proud of yourself, not how many things you have, or who you're in a shitty relationship with, don't even worry about the whole kissless virgin thing either, getting shamed for it is society's way of trying to preserve itself and all that other bullshit

>>154590

I'm just a lonely channer that wants a friend I can talk about anything with. A "best friend" if you will, and out of the half-dozen friends I have now, only one of them I can know for certain I'd feel comfortable talking to without being judged or betrayed.

>>154587

>>154591

Based on my shitty pseudo-science, I've come up with the theory that humans need interaction and companionship to survive, both as a species and as an individual.

As an individual, if a person doesn't talk to anyone or have any friends, or a sexual partner, then they become depressed, less productive, and eventually kill themselves. It's like with food and water: without it, you're gonna feel like utter shit.

As a species, when we're happy we're more productive, and when we're more productive we survive longer.

>>154593

I just want to at least know what it feels like before I give up on 3dpd entirely.

>>154595

I used to be the same way, but trust me.. They aren't like you and me, their hypergamy and superficial behavior will never stop, being with one is like a never ending job interview where the interviewer is constantly looking for reasons to throw your application(You) away in search of a better candidate. Their brains are hardwired to make them cunts, they're all sluts by nature dude. It's seriously not worth it, not even for the sex.

>>154597

NAWALTS don't exist. All women are like that.

>>154596

All I really want in life, at least right now, is financial security and a girlfriend. But we can't have nice things now can we?

Anyways, this is starting to turn into more blogshit and less writefag stuff. I wanna try taking some requests, but I have no idea when I'd get to them, if I ever even do.

>>154600

Right, let's get back on track.

Requesting a story about a Paladindu getting rekt by a Lizard girl

>>154598

Well, personally speaking, I turned towards men, so I can't offer solid advice one way or another about women. But there are people out there who will love you. Even if they've got a Y chromosome.

>>154600

The way I started writing actual, independent things was with smut. I wanted to help people I liked orgasm, but wasn't sure how to do it. That'd be my advice for how to start; Start with people you care about, and fulfilling their ideals. Then, once you've gotten good at that, start charging money, and then, start working towards longer and more elaborate pieces. And always remember that it's okay both to write what YOU want, and to write what others want. It's okay to not write CYOAs or whatever 8channers want. There's two ways to write: Write for your audience, or write to invite your audience. Sometimes, people don't realize how much they want a given monster girl or fetish or scenario until you show how good that <whatever> can feel.

>>154600

Nah, it isn't that bad, sometimes you have to vent frustrations. I really only consider something blog posting when the entire conversations derailed. You are just trying to give us an idea of where you're coming from.

>>154603

>>154607

I know some people aren't a huge fan of you because you can write weird shit TW, but I love your vanilla stuff and I think you have an excellent grasp on telling romantic stories.

>>154602

I might take a crack at it, I wouldn't mind writing something quick. Kinda stuck on the next part of mu-onna story, and I'm prepping stuff for Tusktaker because we are meeting the family.

>>154635

I can't see a living armor monster girl working out well at all.

>Find a living armor girl deep in an a long forgotten dungeon

>Looks like a femininely shaped full plate suit, with the head of a spectral cutie.

>Poor girl is so lonely she begins talking me up a storm, her voice while lovely is marred by a metallic echoing tone.

>I ask if she would like to accompany me on my travels, which she almost too excitedly agrees to.

>I accidentally spring a trap on the way out of the dungeon, and while I remain uninjured, my simple armor has been torn asunder and rendered unwearable.

>I become somewhat distraught by my lack of protection, and the girl takes notice.

>She hesitantly offers to allow me wear her, her voice dripping with embarrassment and a little too much enthusiasm.

>Confused by her odd move I inquire that she looks a bit too small for me to wear.

>She reaffirms that due to her magical nature, her shape and size will stretch to accommodate my bulkier frame.

>Intrigued by my new surprising companion, I barely have time to react before the armor springs open of it's own accord, the spectral visage dissipating into the ether.

>I ask if she's still there, and she gives me a tinny confirmation.

>I experimentally start crawling inside, the plates shifting just before I enter. As I put more of myself within, I become uneasy as I hear a disembodied heavy breathing.

>At least I'm completely in place and the plate suit snaps shut, buckling itself securely.

>I speak out, telling the armor that she is very comfortable

>She replies in a flustered voice, thanking me for my kind words

>I begin walking through the dungeon and hear a feminine gasp.

>I stop and listen for where that came from, before resuming.

>I take but a few steps before I hear a pained moan.

>I stop once more, and ask the girl if she's okay.

>Almost too quickly she replies yes, before urging me to continue in a pushy tone.

>I keep walking and ignore the ghostly vocalizations until suddenly a scream rings out, and the suit locks up, before toppling over, crashing me to the ground.

>I stare up at the dungeon ceiling listening to the disembodied panting of the armor.

>She breathlessly informs me that's the best she ever had.

I have few ideas, which one sounds most interesting to you?

>Dwarf, male prostitution

>Lamia, /ss/ with small age gap

>Vampire, master/servant role reversal

>>154607

I tried making it brief, but the story i want to write with this idea needs some time for the two to develop, and I've already got two longer ones I'm working on so I'm going to shelve it for now. Basically Paladindu is a naïve blustering fool that gets his ass beat by lizardgirl and she takes him on as an apprentice because she pities him. He begins to question the order as he spends more time around them and finds out they are much more human than monstrous.

>>154667

Vampire role reversal sounds promising.

>>154668

*around the mg village

good lord. I asked for some advice on writing smut, and everyone here opened up and started voicing their troubles.

I guess it's odd that on a website with an infamous lineage, and in a thread about making niche porn, people are so supportive of each other.

anyway, I have an idea for another story if someone wants to take a crack at it;

a mexican day-of-the-dead skeleton nun. she tries her best to be neither spooky nor scary, and consoles people who come to her church with their grievances.

>>154685

/monster/ has been by far the most stable and non toxic of the 8chan boards i've visited. Even the bants here are less shitposting and more fun posting/discussion.I think that is why people are more willing to share their feelings here.

I hope the lewd advice helped before everything got so existential. You're idea sounds good, I'm suprised you don't want to write it.

>>154691

*Your idea

>>154691

the lewd advice was actually rather helpful. now I have a few good ideas on how to segway from the two MC's being exposition machines, to some lewd events and what to do then.

but I'm still fairly new to writing so it takes a while. and between work, classes, and my fucked sleep habits I think I would probably get a bit overburdened if I try writing several things at once. that doesn't stop me from thinking of some new story ideas occasionally though.

>>154608

>Meeting the family

Well shit..

>>154668

I like it. Would there be lewds?

>>154685

The nigger asked for advice, and I gave it. I know it was off topic, but I wasn't blog posting either, just giving the faggot advice I wish I got before I bothered with 3D, what's the harm in that?

>>154595

Spoilers for you guys that don't care about personal stuff. I just want to say Beard, I think you're a cool guy. I'm sorry you're having issues, I've always enjoyed interacting with you. I understand how lonely it can get, especially in college when everyone seems like they are going places. Just don't give up, if you continue to better yourself, I'm sure you can find someone to be happy with. That probably sounds like some Hallmark BS but I mean it.

>>154881

I'm sure everything will turn be fine.No problems will occur at all.R-right guys?

>>154884

It would be fairly light on lewds, probably just one lewd scene near the end.

>>154920

I really hope Lorka's dad doesn't go apeshit at the dinner table.. I know it's going to happen, but damn.

Well, that definitely fits considering how Lizard girls operate, bonnet tipping n' shit.

>>154990

>someone made lewd art of Octupustacy Thundercunt

I don't know why I didn't know this until now.

>>154593

I think it is best to remain optimistic. I had a really good relationship with my wife before she died of cancer.

>>154691

>Toxic

Do you want to be bullied?

>>154635

do something like guyver, it's old and people really don't know it exists

>>154920

Eh, I'm mostly just going on about "woe is me" and stupid shit like that. I just need to not sit in my room all day shitposting and playing vidya, and instead go outside and actually make friends (although it is a little difficult to do that when you don't have a job and therefor no DOSH to spend, and you don't know anyone under the age of 30 either).

Still, having a holstaur waifu to cuddle with would be really nice.

>>154990

It's sad that this is the last time we will be seeing Sam, gonna miss him. Still a fantastic conclusion to a great series. Wish you the best where you go from here.

>>154990

If you are really going to continue the series based around your world Will we ever see Yumi and Kylie again?

http://pastebin.com/am3ekbbY

BEHOLD. THE MOMENT YOU"VE ALL BEEN WAITING FOR! I hope the ending isn't rushed and the spell checking I'm too lazy for so if there's a few weird sentences let me know. Hope you all enjoy and can't wait to see your criticisms.

>>155010

Cheers man :)

>>155021

Oh I'm sure they'll cameo. Yumi's still Maou's agent after all. And yes, before you ask they came back from Pandemonium as soon as word got out the Dragon was dead

>>147266

I really hope you're continuing this, I've enjoyed this story a lot!

>>155073

Pretty good.I think I liked the first one more because of the Monty Python esque "Is she a Dragon gag?"

The bits about dog rascism and RAPE RAPE RAPE were pretty funny. Nice take on how a lot of green texts treat hellhounds just like sentient dogs and that they do dog-like things.

Sir Gaben is an asshole, as proven by how he's always the most hostile towards the MG of the week, and how badly he treats his subordinates.. Sir Cumfrence for some reason I like…I guess because he's as silly as the other three but he seems like he's more of a big kid than mean spirited. I kind of hope he finds happiness on his journey. I don't have much to say on Truman, sometimes he's the straight man, sometimes he's just as ridiculous as the other two.

I didn't really see any awkward sentences, it flowed well to me.Hope you write more.

On a second note, I've created a discord in which I hope to manage where writefags have a dedicated channel for quicker exchange of ideas. You can get in that channel here. It's text, so there's no voice required or even possible.

https://discord.gg/0sM3iGwTitMzvq4r

>>155078

Wanted to ask a few questions, considering you are most likely continuing the series.

1. I am assuming that all humans are descended from Earth correct? The Dragon pretty much destroyed all life on Earth, leaving only a few survivors, and those who survived somehow were transported to the current world, taking their history with them correct? I am also assuming that means all other Mamono came from different planets that were also destroyed in some way I think.

2. Considering the concepts of Gods and all that in this world, is it possible that in "our" world beings like God, Jesus, Buddha, Shiva, and other such gods were real as well? If they were real, then where did they go?

3. Sam took a really keen interest when he found out about humanity's true origins. When Sam does eventually come back after taking a much needed break, do you think he will become more and more obsessed over Earth and all that?

4. Considering Sam's true role was to guide Corvus, I did find it odd that Tyris said he'd make a great disciple. I'm guessing in a way that means Corvus is Jesus and Sam is Peter? Or is it something more that will eventually get explored down the line?

5. When Ariel died giving birth to Lloyd's son, Arin mentioned there was another child they were taking. Who was the other child?

All in all man, this was a fantastic series to read. You truly have a lot of talent. I honestly think you should consider a career in writing. You clearly know how to make great characters, great world building, and engaging stories. I'm looking forward to seeing more from you man! And hopefully We will see Sam return in the future, I got this feeling his journey isn't done just yet. fingers crossed though.

>>155150

>considering you are most likely continuing the series.

But from where? :^)

…wait, you haven't read the timeline? Here, this might help.

http://pastebin.com/mLYVx9NY

I'm not going to spoiler the rest because I'm feeling lazy so WARNING SPOILERS if you give a shit.

>I am assuming that all humans are descended from Earth correct?

Yes, humans are from Earth.

>The rest of that question

No, Our reality merged about 2020AD (see timeline) with a whole other plane of reality, thanks to the machinations of the Temple of Kek, resulting in Mamono and various other seemingly random changes in the world. (Japan suddenly being known to everyone as Zippangu, Joey married Dawson at the end of Dawson's creek, The Berensteins wrote about a family of ugly looking bears and Hitler actually did something wrong, you know, stuff like that.)

The Dragon had pretty much JUUUUST started in on mon-earth at that point, and apart from snacking on a few thousand angels and the manifestation of God, he hadn't done enough damage to really be noticed by the mamono. (Since they all worshipped Maou, alternate reality remember) So it gets dragged along with the merger sort of hanging off the end because the Ogdoad are careless fucks like that.

The teaser is, did the Kekites come from our reality or theirs?

>Gods

I'll admit, the original idea was to have the whole damn thing be some kind of massive simulation, and the 'Gods' essentially be the superusers, kind of a 11000AD version of /monster/ but that meant waifus still weren't real so I binned that.

You'll probably notice I borrowed VERY heavily from gnosicism with a lot of my divine philosophy. Basically, yes. All of them are real. The God is one hypergigantic shitposter who changes IDs every time it gets a new idea on where Humanity needs to go. Abbadon/Satan/Ahriman/whatever kind of acts like an acid test for The Gods ideas, smacking Humanity down a few development stages when shit goes too far off kilter.

Now, when the merge happened, the Ogdoad basically went "Hey Guise, you've still got two feet but I'm taking one of all your shoes lolololol" So suddenly you've got this scenario where The God is trying to balance a totally conflicting version of itself within itself. That lasts about ten years before it goes "Fuck it, let's give the new guys a go" and Ilias and Maou are basically given free reign over the new combined reality.

(Meanwhile the Dragon got told to have a nap because reality really was not in the mood to deal with its shit right now, fucking frogs ruining its tapestry and shit.)

When The Logos cut the tip off the Ilias-projection, The God had a sulk, because it couldn't exactly just bring back its previous incarnation because that shit got archived and there were six centuries of boxes to dig through to find it and fuck that shit, it was going to god-tahiti for a bit, the resonants could have a fucking go if they thought they could do it so well.

So Maou goes 'w00t, gonna make male mamono because fuck being The God's delete key'. Fucks up, tries to ignore the fact She fucked up for a few centuries, Resonants do their best, bless 'em, but they're still human so they fuck up.

The God gets back from God-Tahiti and goes "What the Shit?! Mutual extinction? This is not my fetish. Hey Maou, Nice Husband, would be a shame if I pinched him and made him Master of all Time and Spa… WHOOPS! Guess who's Tyris, God of the Sun."

And the story goes from there.

>Sam took a really keen interest when he found out about humanity's true origins.

Basically him and Hawa talk shit about their theories of what the world was like eight thousand odd years ago. Being Resonant they do a much better job of it than today's archeologists but it's an academic exercise. Apart from tech there's nothing much to it.

>Sam and Disciple

I was kinda going for the "In learning you will teach, and in teaching you will learn." shtick. Considering Sam's got that whole "life is precious" thing going on, Tyris is kinda relying on him to be like an Onii-Chan, also help fix any fuckups that might occur along the way.

>Other child

The Raven told Arin to scatter the children. Lucifer's kid was one of them, the others hadn't been born yet so he's likely going to make sure the surviving angels don't get clustered.

And it's Ariael, Ariel is one of those vicious little krakens in the outro. :)

>>155001

I try to be optimistic, it's just that I have seen some shit. I'm sure you understand.

Sage for off topic

>>155264

A lot of us use pastebin

>>155264

http://monstergirlcollection.com/

They have a google spreadsheet with a bunch of pastebins listed on it.

>>155264

Uhm, I guess there isnt. Maybe I or someone else could make a list this evenibg? Google doc spreadsheet for pastebins and TFT accounts I guess?

As far as what you want to read, what are you looking for in a read.

If you want lewds, i dont have the best recommendations, but if you want feels I have some short stories on my pastebin and TFT account, as well as my massive action/adventure/comedy CYOA known as Wizardquest if you're interested for something to keep you occupied for quite some time.

http://touchfluffytail.org/?author=949

Alright, call me a lunatic, but I had an idea: We take the concept of shipgirls, and add it to a mamono world.

Thoughts?

Why yes, I am a degenerate that enjoys shipgirls. How did you guess?

>>155326

The explanation for them can become comical if you use the concept behind machine spirits along with a magical projection of the ships soul as a girl.

Think about how haunted weapons can sometimes make shades or ghostly forms that wield them.

>>155332

Like those uh… Possessed lamps or whatever?

>>155332

>ghost pirate ship that can change between ship and ghost girl form

I need this.

>>155319

http://pastebin.com/u/starglider

Yeah if someone could throw me on that list that'd be real fuckin' neato because I don't use javascript thanks to muh gubbamint.

>>155469

I'll see what I can do.

>>155178

>I'll admit, the original idea was to have the whole damn thing be some kind of massive simulation, and the 'Gods' essentially be the superusers, kind of a 11000AD version of /monster/

Damn, I gotta admit I would have loved to see that play out.

>>155526

The way it was working out felt pretty bleak, essentially Corvus's whole conversation with Tyris would have been the reveal and Everyone dies because The Dragon's the system scrub, but Corvus is hopeful because he knows he'll see everyone again in the next version

(Also people would have accused me of ripping off Mogworld and my ego can't have that.)

ANYWAY, while I'm shilling my shit, I compiled some stuff that I wrote in the beginning of the timeline for the 'Monster Girl School' Threads. They're thematically different than the Pax but they seemed to go down OK.

http://touchfluffytail.org/?story=australian-in-a-strange-land

http://touchfluffytail.org/?story=under-foreign-skies

>>155178

>>155184

Quick question about Sam. Is this truly the last we will ever see of him? Or he is just on a much needed hiatus?

>>155698

When I do post-'Walker' stories, of course we'll see him again.

But at the moment My Kekhammer 10,000 tank is sucking air, Imma work on other stuff for now. :)

>>154635

It seems like a interesting monstergirl idea.

Perhaps if the living armour is a extremely shy slimegirl that collects armour pieces to cover herself/improve her confidence with men, but is prone to stuttering (or any cute/embarassing actions) if she is not fully covered in armour.

I'm not sure if it qualifies as a living armour, if anything, it's more like a metal slimegirl.

>>155712

>metal slimegirl

She sounds really shy and prone to running away.

>>155469

Good news! You got added, bruh.

>>155742

I guess I might as well ask to be added on there too, why not? Shilling is fun.

pastebin:http://pastebin.com/u/Acethewritefag

TFT: http://touchfluffytail.org/?author=949

the TFT is actually edited stuff, or at least MORE editing usually.

>>155753

*salute* I'll send them a request for you too, mane. I'm pretty sure they only do pastebins, though.

Or that pbworks site thingy. Seen one or two of those.

>>155754

I figured as much, seeing as TFT is basically direct competetion to MGC I suppose.

>>155756

Maybe put some kinda link to it in your pastebin?

>>155319

might as well shill my stuff too

http://pastebin.com/u/Beardicus

http://touchfluffytail.org/?author=97

>>155754

might as well throw both pastebin and TFT up just in case

>>155773

Hey, that reminds me, the artbook prize for third place arrived. I ate it with fava beans and a nice chianti. Thpthpthpthp.

http://pastebin.com/u/MonsterGirlExaminer Here's my shillstuff.

>>155781

Get out of here, you're the only person who I can't laugh at. If it weren't for judge 2 I'd be first place, and I'd have domain over all of you. But, alas. It was not meant to be, and now only like 1 asshole is immune to my bullying.

>>155778

>>155781

Oh god they're swarming me!

>>155802

There is great power in shilling goy… I mean, friend.

>>155803

I have been fooled.

>>155781

>>155778

>>155753

Congratulations, you punks got added!

>>155806

Thanks m8!

…..

…..

To stay on topic, I think I might do another weekend request. Guess I'll comb the requests so far…

>>155809

I still think my inane shipgirl idea had some merit. If only for rival supernatural entities fighting over a guy.

>>155712

>slimegirl living armor

i think in coc there exits a character like that

>>155806

Oh boy time more even more faggots to read about my love for cowgirls :^)

>>155997

at least you haven't thrown any of those ideas away, so if you really want to see them become stories you could always ask someone else to write

>>156001

>someone else saves the webm with the same filename i have

:3

no homo

>>156001

Funny enough, I feel as though I'd rather draw and create something of a comic for a story. That and I love music, so I keep thinking "Hell, why not make some sort of concept album around this idea of mine"?

>>156008

I had a silent version kicking around for the longest time, and I just use the save as original filename function whenever I see something cool here.

>>156014

eh, whatever floats your goat man. as long as you get your ideas out there.

>>156008

>so if you really want to see them become stories you could always ask someone else to write

I have to agree. Sometimes its better if someone else writes the story/lyrics to something, all the while retaining your ideas and world building.

Quite honestly, I was really inspired by ResonantDrunk's stuff.

>>156020

That's literally my game plan. Keep everything written down somewhere. Because fuck if Ayreon can keep coming up with insane stories for his albums, why not me?

>>155782

>>155773

Holy shit star I didn't know you would even go there. Low blow.

>>155781

R E K T

Testing to see if this shit works. I never thought I'd become an actual tripfag.

>>156908

I'm only going to use it if I need to, and if I do I'll only have to use it once because IDs are a thing on here.

>>157016

Nah I'm just fucking with ya. Tripcodes are fine. PP has one.

>>156886

It begins.

>>157141

I mean, I'm already well known here considering all anyone has to do is mention cowtits and you fuckers come out of the woodwork with BEARDICUS DETECTED, then there's the fact that I show up on Jewgle in the top 5 results when you search "holstaur".

Might as well add a tripcode to that list.

>>157144

One day we'll come in here and discover that you've somehow converted every thread into a Holstarus thread.

>>157169

>Holstaur Bully by Beardicexx

>>157169

>Holstaurs in the service industry: actually a blog edition

>>157169

>>157170

>>157171

Writefag thread 2: Holstaur Harder

I'm actually planning on writing more holstuar stuff again soon™

>>157169

Holstaur Politics Thread

Whole milk or Skim milk?

Pasteurized or Raw?

>>157197

I just realized something. Holstaurus milk is always described as tasting very sweet, which mean it's full of sugar. This means you can easily add yeast and ferment it to make booze. Even if you're a pleb that doesn't drink, you could make cheese, butter, and ice cream with a holstaur's breast milk.

>>157169

>the impregnation thread becomes about impregnating holstaurs, taking care of them while they're pregnant, and raising the daughterus

>>157201

It could also be a fatty type of sweet. There's also regular mixed drinks that exist already that use milk/cream, namely White Russians.

>>157206

>women start lactating when they're pregnant

>holstaurs lactate at all times, regardless of if they're with child or not

>a pregnancy results in a holstaur lactating even more than usual

goddamnit are we going to shitpost about me now instead of people requesting storieskind of like how earlier there was some "woe is me" posting going on

>>157208

I doubt any of us would take requests anyway. We're mostly super busy with stories we actually want to write and writing takes a bit longer than drawing because it's harder to imagine 5,000 words than 200 lines.

>>157201

I always take the Dune avenue with Holstaur Milk.

(IE, the discussion on the flavour of Spice. Initially Cinnamon but never exactly the same twice, becoming more toothsome as the body becomes dependent upon it.)

The 'Sweet' is less the sugar content than the body going "HOLY SHIT THIS STUFF IS DOING ALL KINDS OF AMAZEBALLS STUFF TO ME! BRAIN, MAKE HIM DRINK MORE OF IT!"

…actually that's a thing that could be explored. Is Holstaur Milk/Royal Jelly/Bee-Girl honey/Alarune nectar addictive, and if so, would a human experience withdrawal if they stopped consuming it?

>>157222

…I was actually coming in here looking for an idea for something. Not necessarily a synopsis admittedly, but something to act as a lodestone for my currently disorganized "wouldn't that be cool" plot threads.

>>157236

I feel like over time, the user will get addicted to the effects of whatever Holstaur Milk/Royal Jelly/Bee-Girl Honey/Alraune Nectar does.

Alraune Nectar - "It's natural sweetness is attractive, and it's often used in sweets, etc. This nectar simply has an aphrodisiac / stamina boosting effect.".

Holstaur Milk - "The milk has a nice taste that is mellow and full-bodied and it melts almost like when a holstaur is having sex with her husband. It's delicious to drink as is, and it is also highly popular as an ingredient used in cuisine and confectionery."

"Extra Thick" Holstaur Milk - "The top quality thickness and mellow sweetness will even influence a person's mind to have sentimental thoughts. Those who drink it will then be tempted into sweet, pleasurable sex."

So I'm guessing people could get addicted to Holstaur Milk/Royal Jelly/Bee-Girl Honey/Alraune Nectar just like sugar or other foods. So pretty much getting addicted to the taste because of endorphins being released when consuming it (or when having sex with their waifu after consuming it because of association if i eat this, then i know i'll be having sex with my waifu 5 minutes from now)

>>157208

I've been distracted by various things in life as well as working on a larger project I've finally gotten time for. I probably would do a request if I found one that really rocked my socks because I can hammer out a 2-5k word story without even knowing what happened to the time, cause is funsies.

Of course, even though it's spring break, all my free time will be spent now on home improvement I bet. SIGH.

Here's an idea: [INSERT PERSON HERE]'s rampant meme magic abuse has caused his computer to become possessed by a tiny [INSERT MONSTER GRILL HERE]. Now he has to get used to a rather lewd sentient computer virus.

Good starting point for some kind of nonsense?

>>157310

Well I'm planning on spending the majority, if not all, of my spring break doing a CYOA on here.

>>157322

I feel like the best monstergirl for that idea would be some kind of ghostgirl or spirit, since it would make the most sense.

Not entirely sure what the overall plot of the story would be though.

>>157324

Basically freakazoid

>>157325

Fucking golden plan m8. A ghost girl that catches criminals with her shota companion, utilizing her ability to disregard physics.

>>157327

>>157325

Ooh, I like that plan.

>>157324

I was honestly thinking something along the lines of Ene, from the Kagerou Project. Like, normal guy in a normal world… Just with possessed electronics around him. Dunno what the plotline would be beyond that basic idea, though.

>>157322

>Rampant Meme Magic abuse causes computer virus

>Gets dubs

Do you want me to not be able to writefag ever again? This fucking potato I have is barely holding on as it is nigger. Your Dubs can suck my fuckin' dick.

>>157222

speak for yourself, bruv.

>>157333

Do you want to do slice-of-life or something with a more serious plot-line? Genres exist for a reason, and they're good stuff. What's the conflict, here?

Also can you imagine if monster girls were real but all took the forms of sapient computer viruses. Why yes I can because I'm into robot girls.

>>157492

Kind of like digimons right?

>>157492

I got trips. I speak for everyone now you faggot-fucker. Go clean the jizz off your art-book.

>>158360

I actually did have some computer trouble yesterday, and even though I updated my story nobody gave a fuck

I'm blaming you, I hope Moon Man gives it to ya

I got this idea in my head and I had to write out this story last night.

It's about a poor Raiju doing her best not to embarrass her husband while his boss is over for dinner.

http://pastebin.com/FqE8tRhD

>>158386

Oh and in a SHOCKING turn of events, it actually has lewds. I know, I know, I'm breaking convention.

Also, formatting for italics doesn't work in pastebin I guess so, it is what it is.

>>158588

You cheeky bastard.

Hey, I'm doing this new thing where I have a story being updated with one paragraph every hour on Tumblr. http://constantnovels.tumblr.com/ Monster-girl related, although there isn't any sex in it. https://hellskitchensink.wordpress.com/ Also updating it chapter by chapter on wordpress. And if someone cared enough to ask, I could probably post it on pastebin here.

>>158810

I_care.jpg

I have a bad habit of quitting partway through and deleting my work after either thinking my work sucks or real life stuff gets in the way.

I then end up in situations where I don't feel like doing anything because it all seems like a waste of time.

How do I fix this?

>>158848

Post your work anyways. You'll never get better if no one looks.

>>158848

Honestly casul, I'm in the same spot for different reasons. The reason I'm not updating my shit even though I want to, is because I'm too fucking pissed off, and I don't want it to make me go full edgelord when writing up the next battle scene (There's going to be a lot of them) but you? You're giving up before you've even hit a single key, ==THIS IS HERESY== don't give up faggot, just have fun with it, or go full retard with it. I usually go full retard with it, and give people autism as a result, it's actually quite noice

>>158880

The Legend never dies.

“And to, uh… summarize, magic is split into seven basic styles. You have your Fire, Wind, Water, and Earth which is the realm of the elemental and you have your Dark, Light, and Arcane which are paralleled by Evil, Good, and Neutral, respectively. Well, that depends on how you look at it. Anyway, does anyone have any questions before I move on?” the Archmage asked.

“Is it true that monsters are better at magic than us?”

The Archmage really had to fight the urge to scoff and roll his eyes. Fuck, these people were utter retards. This was the last time he was teaching a 101 class that was for certain.

“Yes, but it depends. On paper, any race could achieve the same level of competence in the magical arts; however, some races have more mana than others and certain affinities. Before you ask, humans do not have any affinity whatsoever. That’s why we have colleges like this, but I expect you to use what I teach you responsibly and-“

‘’’DING DONG’’’

Being cut off by the generic sounding bell was only slightly better than the tirade he was going on. At least now he could pack his things and make way to his quarters. While he watched his students exit the classroom, he took notice of the surprising number of monsters in attendance. Mage colleges like these did not discriminate and sometimes even advocated for monsters to come and learn. The Archmage figured it had something to do with how “appreciative” they can be.

“Sir?” a sultry voice asked.

“Hmm?”

The person addressing him was also a monster. She was a young succubus that was understandably scantily clad. His eyes were pinned to her barely covered chest for a second too long, and he had to close his eyes to refocus himself. Her tits were something awesome though.

“If it’s not too much trouble, could you tell me more about affinity?” she asked.

“Right, I can do that. Okay, so… Affinity is intrinsic. You seem to be a demon of some persuasion, so you would have an affinity for Dark magic just by virtue of that, you understand?”

“I understand, but where does it come from? How is affinity gained?”

“That’s a complicated question. Magic is how we manipulate our surroundings via the metaphysical. You know this, I’m sure. Well, the magic you could say has a mind of its own or, rather, it has preferences. Demons are normally aligned most closely with Dark, but it varies.”

“Oh.”

The Archmage was put off by her lackluster response, but her body language suggested that she was not only listening but was perhaps in the mood for something more. He had no time for this. Besides, screwing a student would land him so deep in the shithouse he would not see the Sun.

“Look,” he said in an attempt to divert the topic, “Why don’t you just go to your reference handbook? It has all kinds of stuff on affinity and whatever you might want to know. I really don’t mean to be rude, but I really should be heading out. I do wish you well, miss.”

There was little to pack as the Archmage came to class with little more than paperwork. He simply took it from his desk and was on his way out. Then he felt something hit him. It was not a literal hit but was rather a sensation. He knew what it was. Turning his head to the side a bit, he glanced at the young succubus whose eyes were now dimly lit. That was indicative of inexperience, and he would make sure she knew it.

“Miss, if you’re going to pull that shit on me then at least do better. I didn’t become the boss around here because I sat on my ass and waited. Look… I know you’re eager, but I’m just not the person you want to do this with. When the usual professor comes back, I better not catch wind of you trying that lust spell or whatever on him.”

She crossed her arms and seemed to pout in a cutesy way at him. No matter how hard he tried, he was unable to hate her. He just shook his head and stepped out of the room going about his usual business. That sort of conduct in a place of learning was unacceptable, but it would not be the first time. News like that came to him occasionally, as you might expect. It had to be dealt with in a certain way and with certain tact. That was why he stayed away from those cases.

“Falling for one of the students, are we~?” he heard an equally sultry but older voice practically moan out.

Yep, it figures she would have seen that. Telepathically, that was the voice of Akari, expert geomancer and member of the Council. She was also kind of an older, bitchy kitsune that loved to taunt the shit out of people. In a way, the Archmage liked that about her.

“Fuck off, I was just answering a question.”

“Ara ara~ I saw your eyes. You’re not fooling me, darling.”

“Hey, do you ever get gallstones what with you throwing rocks all the time and stuff?”

“H-hey, that’s not something you ask a colleague!”

“You started it.”

He was always amused by the idea of speaking telepathically. As folks passed by, they were unable to hear any of the back-and-forth that was going on. Unfortunately for him, it was about to get verbal.

“Found you~” Akari whispered into his ear.

“Wha…? I didn’t even sense you,” he admitted.

“It was really just as simple as picking out your vibrations and walking in step with you.”

Try as she might, she still came off as arrogant. Still, the Archmage had to give her credit where credit was due. If she wanted to do something particularly nasty to him, that would be the way to do it. The thought sort of excited him.

“Anyway, we really need to get on solving this staff shortage problem. I hardly have enough time to administrate these days, and you know I can’t stand teaching. So what have you figured out?”

“You know what I think it was, darling? I think it was the most recent attack.”

“Oh, right, the one where the kid goes in and starts trying to torch everyone. Well, we can’t be held responsible for that. We can’t control what other people are going to do once they learn this stuff. The best we have is trying to teach them to be responsible.”

Akari stops and looks at him with a genuinely happy expression. The Archmage was sort of dumbfounded and started wondering if she had something up her sleeve. It was a literal sentiment as all instructors had to wear robes. The difference was that the robes for the Archmage and Council were a bit more “embellished”. To that end, Akari took every reasonable liberty she could in showing herself off complete with legs, a bit of waist, and cleavage. Having such an appearance worked to her advantage in other ways too as she was quick to be underestimated.

“You’re prickly, but you have such a good heart, Jimmy~”

“Ugh, don’t call me Jimmy. It’s James, okay?”

(Just gonna leave this here so I'm not taking up too much room in another thread.)

"You're not a hero, you know. You're a killer. You're just going to make things worse as long as you're here. Why don't you just leave, before everything falls apart?"

https://hellskitchensink.wordpress.com/2016/03/22/a-change-in-the-air/#more-12

Another chapter of A Serpent in Zion, just for you guys.

"He had three pieces of evidence to vouch for his sanity."

Chapter three of A Serpent in Zion, time for shit to go down.

https://hellskitchensink.wordpress.com/2016/03/23/dead-air/#more-14

>be me

>working out in my local gym, a really hardcore spot that only the /fit/test know about

>doing squats and gettin dem gains

>look to my right

>see a fluffy looking thing running faster than the machine can take her

>it breaks

>she gets spooked and jumps over to me

>i mean she really jumps over to me, like she jumped across the entire gym

>crashes into me and puts us both on the floor

>"OHGODI'MSOSORRYAREYOUOKAY?"

>barely make out what she's saying because she's talking so fast

>everyone is glaring at her

>see her face start to flush and her eyes start to well up like she's about to…

>"Wait," I say, "I'm fine, don't worry."

>I wasn't actually fine

>felt like my back got bruised up something fierce

>everyone seems to turn away and go back to what they were doing

>everyone except the owner

>big, muscled looking shark lady who looks absolutely pissed

>"DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA HOW MUCH THIS WAS?"

>bunny girl starts to sniffle

>"It was just an accident," I say

>suddenly feel fluffy arms grab me from behind

>see the ground below me get smaller then bigger then smaller

>tfw you're riding shotgun with a living trampoline

>get to her apartment

>she's in tears

>"WHYWERETHEYSOMEAN? ICAN'TEVERGOBACKNOW!"

>offer to work out with her until she can find a new spot

>tfw she has the body of an amazon

>ask if we can go inside

>she opens the door

>get on the floor

>everybody walk the dinosaur

James was not naïve enough to believe that the attacker would not be connected to them somehow. It could not have been true, due to just how well he had a handle on things. Thanks to his Council was in order, certainly. On the other hand, it was probably due to a bit more than stigma that membership was dwindling. At the rate they were going, students would have to be teaching each other, and they already were albeit in a more limited capacity. As long as the more “creative” girls could keep their roving rape parties to a minimum, it was doable.

“Fuck,” James said, “I just realized something. Grades are going to slip.”

“Oh?”

“Yeah, there’s going to be more PDA. I just know it.”

Akari laughed quietly to herself and spoke once more, “I swear that I have never met anyone as prudish as you. How do you come to that result anyway?”

“Nevermind,” James sighed out.

The trek they had made was coming to an end as the Archmage’s quarters came into sight. As bombastic as someone might make it out to be, it was really no more than a one bedroom apartment. It was removed from where the students were allowed to bunk, and his office was nearby. Also, as a tertiary benefit, he was supplied with everything he would need to practice his magic, courtesy of the state.

“Going to invite me in~?”

“One of these days, I’m going to tie your tails to your legs and kick you down the stairs.”

“Oooh,” Akari moans, “I love it when you bully me, darling~”

“I need you to focus though, seriously. We’re going to be doing a lot more of the day-to-day work around here until we can bolster our numbers back to what they should be. That means you need to be on the ball and not screwing with the other Council mages, got it?”

As if she could scarcely give James the time of day, Akari simply grinned and gave him the shifty eyes. This was an expression he had seen before, and he knew what it meant. Something compelled him to pat her on the head too because she just looked so damn adorable like this, so he did.

“N-not so suddenly,” she said.

Flashing him a bit of breast, she leaned forward to get herself in closer, but she was met with disinterest. The Archmage simply shrugged once and accepted how incredibly whorish his co-worker was. Honestly, he found her feminine bravado to be sort of entertaining at times.

“Come on, Akari, we have work to do. Back to your duties.”

Shutting himself into his quarters, he saw a note neatly folded and laying on the only coffee table he owned. It was pretty easy on the eyes, this table, as it was crafted from a special enchanted wood that seemed to exude mana into the air. Being a mage, he could recharge his batteries a lot faster than normal with this thing around. In other words, he was doing magic tree drugs.

A feeling inside him told him that the note was important somehow, but he ignored it. Besides, he figured he had earned some much needed rest. Mentally, he was drained, and that succubus trying to entice him earlier really made a nice setup for Akari. Truthfully, he thought about giving in sometimes and just railing her into the ground like the slut she is. Looking down, he noticed that he was pitching a tent now. Such was his way.

Inside his fridge were some various odds and ends: organs, potions, and ordinary foodstuffs. Reaching past all of the weird shit, he grabbed a beer and cracked it open. He was no stranger to alcohol, but this one here was easily his favorite – Urist’s Dark. Finally sitting down in a setting he was comfortable in, he looked around for his magic book to no avail.

“Magic book, magic book, please make yourself known,” he said, “Magic book, magic book, please write me the most entertaining thing you can. I dunno, man, just be creative or something. You’re a fucking magic book, what do you want from me?”