/monster/ - The Last Bastion of Romance

>How would it start?

Ingestion of demonic essence, sources are myriad and varied.

>How long would it take?

How long's a peice of string? It would depend on the source of the energy, its potency, does the individual actually WANT to be transmuted, and so forth.

>Is it painful?

Humans get growing pains naturally, so I'm gonna go with yes.

>Reversible?

HERESY

>Are there some monster girls that are only born and not made?

The majority I'd say are born rather than made. It is their preferred method of reproduction after all.

>what personality changes would it entail?

No longer genetically and instinctively trending towards hypergamy, as the male's traits matter a whole lot less than with a human pairing. An accellerated sex-drive, a fight-or-flight response re-keyed towards their new natures… Apart from that probably not much. Neuroplasticity is a cunt of a thing.

>Would you forget about your past human life as a monster girl?

I'm going with no, otherwise why would succubi do it to people who piss them off?

>Changing overnight or gradually?

I'd say it could be either way, again, depends on the source.

>males being turned into monster girls?

What are alps?

Not to go edgelord here but it would be interesting to read something exploring the worse implications of monsterization. That would fundamentally alter a person, it would be pretty frightening to have your body altered, your instincts altered, all that other shit.

>>154616

Honestly, every cyberpunk book since William Gibson has covered this with the whole "Cybernetics eats your soul" thing. Transhuman treachery gets in on that fun, too. You can explore monsterization being horrible and awful, but by and large, you're going to be covering ground that a LOT of people have covered already. That doesn't mean it's wrong, but it's going to be tough to make it something fresh and exciting for readers.

What else is new, though?

>>154617

I can hardly see getting monsterized as a soul eating process. As >>154613 put forward, the main thing lost is inhibitions toward one's desire. Pointing to the stories of >>154614 and >>154615 I'd say the big consequence of this is a shirking of obligations. Monsters lean away from group social dynamics of humans. This is especially true for human women and how dependent upon one another they are. For the woman, the man is the only thing, not status or resource accumulation. Monsters hunt for the best mana from a man they can get. What is the best mana isn't always climbing the alpha scale for good genes, but rather a certain aspect of soul. So no a monster strives for personal fulfillment. At least until that mate is secured. Once marriage is achieved, there appear to be no limits and life goes on as normal, albeit with a much greater sexual appetite which pretty much replaces hunger as we would experience it as humans. three square sex sessions per day.

>>154624

Oh god muh dick

is there more?

I'm going to guess you are new to /monster/

> Are there some monster girls that are only born and not made?

None off the top of my head, human women can turn into monster girls if they absorb enough demonic energy. Or in the case of Matangos, women can get infected with its spores.

>Males turned into monster girls?

The only monster males have been known to turn into are Alps, and that's only because they were feminine to begin with. Its kind of terrifying if you think about it: transforming against your will, your thoughts and feelings changing as well until there's nothing left of the male you once were.

>>154640

Alps are in the closet gays who were already full of demonic energy. It's literally KC's way of passing the gay buck.

Anyway, I remember making a thread about this few months back, and it's sort of terrifying and interesting to me, the concept of a woman losing her personality to become something else. It's why I love parasites, because I'm terrified of the mind altering ones.

Based on KC lore, it only plays on what they already felt and brings their true feelings to the forefront but I think that's a load of crock, and it's a violation, the worst of violations because you're not yourself and yet you are? The change in body is terrible, but acceptable, yet the change in mind is horrfying, especially if you realize it slowly and yet know there's nothing you can do about it, hell you LIKE it.

Ugh. Uggghhhhh.

I really should have written this instead of letting that CYOA happen which was doomed to failure from the start

I’ve got nothing better to do so I’ll just give you my thoughts.

It comes down to how you interpret KC lore and and well you follow it.

See, KC is really vague about some stuff and monsterization is one of those things.

It should be noted that KC has said that >>154614 is the extreme case of monsterization. Meaning that, for most people, it wouldn’t be near that level.

One way to look at it is that “normal” monsterization will change your body while you mind is mostly intact. Outside of the fact that you will have a higher libido and will be generally more accepting of sex and lewd things. You will also have a very strong desire to get a husband and love him.

Another way to look at it is the old “Oh god what have I become?” and then “Why does it feel so good?”. This is the one that people don’t like and mostly ignored as a result. It leaves little of the original person’s mind and values intact. In this one only the most basic trait are left of the one that once was.

You were good at sword fighting? You will like to duel others still, but you will only do it so that you can get a husband.

You didn’t want to have sex or wanted to have a relationship with abstinence? Well now you will love sex and will always want to have it, but you will only want to do it with you husband.

So it really comes down to how you want to view monsterization. Do you want to have “They are more or less the same, but they look like monster girls and fuck a lot more” or the “there is nothing human about them, all they care for is sex. Nothing of you will remain.”

Also

>males being turned into monster girls?

As previously mentioned Alp. But did you know that skeletons can also be created from men?

It’s true, but alp and skeleton are the only MGs that can be originally a man.

>Is it Reversible?

It might be reversible when caught early, but once it completes? Probably not.

>>154722

I forgot about the skeleton monster girls, that's my fault as I am not as familiar with the undead monsters.

>>154732

I suprising how many don’t know that. But it's ok since skeletons are fairly obscure, even for undead girls but we all know that undead girls are the best girls.

>>154653

The thing is, KC implies that having sex is the only thing worth pursuing in life and that anything else is at best a waste of your time. Which means that sophonts are reduced to little better than rodents.

If you're not fucking, then you are denying yourself what you truly desire deep down and thus you'll be forced to indulge no matter what your reasons may be (which doesn't say good things) - but, KC forgets that said reasons may be legitimate, thus monsterization/incubization is no guarantee that the person affected will suddenly drop everything to rape their beau. No inhibitions does not mean no standards, no conscience, or no regard of consequences.

Corruption, as KC presents it, is just like Inoino's corruption, just like every instance of Transhuman Treachery in porn, where the person is effectively murdered and a rapist takes their place. The difference is that KC tries to pretend (and fails miserably) that the corruption he presents is not like the cases of corruption in other series despite being so similar that it might as well be.

Even on this board, we don't take that shit (mostly, anyway). What are the things most written about on /monster/? A human man falling in love with a monster girl and having a happy life together, and while there is sex it does not become the only reason they are together or the only thing they do. Just look at My Vow and how well it was received.

The only good thing about the MGE are the artwork. Even Monster Musume is far superior to anything KC can come up with.

THAT SAID, enjoying some corruption in your porn is not the worst fetish out there (not even close). After all, look at how many horror fans there are.

My tf fetish is on fire

>>154722

>It’s true, but alp and skeleton are the only MGs that can be originally a man.

Not quite, monsters that are old enough to have been from the old system could have originally been male.

And as I recall some like Pharaohs could have been made from human men in the first place.

>>154784

Ok, let me correct myself.

Alps and Skeletons are the only current way for a man to become a MG through corruption.

Better?

>>154786

>Alps and Skeletons are the only current way for a man to become a MG through corruption.

I am reasonably sure that KC said on his twitter, that alps aren't really a separate species, but just succubi of unusual origin and that under the right circumstances a man could theoretically alp into another species, in the same way that only most women monsterize into succubi.

>>155963

It would alp and then get infected by matango spores.

>>155963

worst alp

Actually now that I think about it. That would be an extremely dangerous fusion.

>mutation causes an alp to have the infectious properties of an matango.

>>155974

Perfect for Pozz loads bug chasers.

>>154743

>>Even Monster Musume is far superior to anything KC can come up with.

wat

>cucking everywhere

>haremshit

>lel girls beat the shit out of you when they are embarrased

>the goverment was hiding monstergirls all along till today, just take one, or 5!

There is literally nothing original about EMG.

Crabman buying NTR doujinshis of his girls while KC decides to draw a lovey dovey Wilmarina doujinshi just to stick it to NTRfags tells you a lot about both of them.

>>154743

I don't see why people like MonMu.

Like, the story's near nonexistent, and all the girls are retarded in some way or the other.

And even it it presents itself as a romantic comedy, I've never laughed at a single second of it.

>Haha,look he's getting his ass beat up and almost raped you guys so funny ahahah

>>154743

Western fags are so hung up on having their special snowflake personalities altered or atleast HAVE ONE THING ADDED to their autism.

You people are retarded autists who dont read the lore, some personality traits stick even after the transformation happens.

You just add extra personality trait to yourself via incubi crap or these girls being transformed with MM, being triggered by this sort of stuff makes you look like some lost tumblr faggot.

>>155982

>crabman bought ntr doujinshis

I think rather than being a fan of ntr he bought those dribbling shits as more of a obligation to show his fans that he supports whatever shite they come up with

Also he never said he liked those doujins or being a fan of worst fetish for the weak-willed man so it was his fault for not elaborating on that

>>156013

He obviously likes NTR. Centaur society is based on cucking, with fathers unknowingly raising another man's child. And he has no reason to buy that kind of doujinshis, you just don't do that.

>males becoming monstergirls

Not likely. Not to mention in a world with no demon energy/magic plot device you wouldn't get superpowers.

>>154743

>Just look at My Vow and how well it was received

My Vow's writing was insubstantial at best. It updated quickly, had some alright art (lack of lighting or shadows, but I'll forgive it because they were drawn in less than 3 hours), and turned shitposting into an ending. That's all I'll say in it's favor.

>>156011

http://monstergirlencyclopedia.wikia.com/wiki/Incubus

>Mental changes

>On first being attacked by a Monster-girl, humans are likely to be consumed by an instinctive fear and revulsion at their demonic appearance. Such atavistic terror and Order moral objections are thrown aside with the transition to an incubus: Their thoughts and values change, all becoming centered around having sex with monsters [7]. Lust skyrockets to keep pace with the monsters' insatiable hunger for cock, and their interests in other things (like work and hobbies) decrease, as sexual activity becomes a more important part of their lives

>Also, after being completely charmed by a monster, one's aesthetic sense will have changed so that he feels that the grotesque parts and organs of monsters are beautiful. Other than that, one's sense of time, and values concerning work and recreation will also change so that it becomes more convenient to live with monsters.[8]

>Incubi never get bored of sex or lose the mood after doing the deed; they just keep going. Whereas a human first being attacked by a monster is likely to pass out from pleasure before his rapist is close to being finished with him, incubi flip the dynamic on its head and "end up being unable to be satisfied, unless he has sex with all of the monsters in his harem".

So yes, no evidence of any personality changes sans that "one thing added to our autism". That said, this lust is apparently so overpowering all an incubi grows to do is centred around fucking at the exclusion of former interests, hobbies, dreams, and any other emotion.

So yeah, being incubized doesn't really effect your personality outside of making you impossible horny and giving you an insatiable hunger for sex that overshadows everything else you are. On a similar note, being blessed by Khorne doesn't effect your personality much outside of becoming impossibly furious and giving you an insatiable hunger for slaughter that overshadows everything else you are.

This is what I understand out of KC lore on the monster change

>For males, you turn into an incubi, which is just you with purple eyes and sex stamina no normal man could have. Also your semen turns human girls into monsters. If you are gay then you turn into an alp.

>Females can have a full personality change, depending on which species it is. Upfront though a monster personality is just inner feelings including the need for sex to be dumped out. If a girl liked a guy before she became a monster, that monster will go and claim him for her own.

That's what I understand.

>>154743

>>156053

> KC implies that having sex is the only thing worth pursuing in life and that anything else is at best a waste of your time

> That said, this lust is apparently so overpowering all an incubi grows to do is centred around fucking at the exclusion of former interests, hobbies, dreams, and any other emotion

You guys are full of shit and get an F on your reading between the lines comprehension.

>>156054

S-source?

>>156140

Monsterization doesn't seem that bad relatively speaking. Incubization seems pretty shit though.

>>156127

It's an indie horror game called DreadOut.

>>156053

>getting sudden nymphomania isn't a personality change

>refers to Chaos corruption as "blessings"

You evidently don't know what you are talking about, heretic.

>>156140

>KC says that it is generally yourself after transforming

>Too be precise you just be the person you wanted to be or who you where afraid to be. Also you will likely still have most of your memories intact, just with a sexual/romantic alteration to it. (e.g a loving brother is now seen as a person to a romantic candidate or a best friend turned to a lover)

You just contradicted yourself sport.

You also cannot say that monsterized women don't have their personalities changed when they get monstrous instincts and equate hunger with sex (in all senses of the phrase). KC's work is less well thought out than bikini armour, since he lets his dick do the thinking for him.

>>156212

Before I try to counter your arguments, I just to make sure that when you mean change of personality of those who turn to monsters/incubus you don't mean that that the person themselves are not them anymore, like death of the personality right? For example Wilmarina Noscrim the heroine is not the same person as Wilmarina Noscrim the succubus; they are two different characters.

To me it appears that the monster change only changes perception; take Mersé Dascaros for example she was a total tomboy out of fear that femininity was a bad thing and being womanly was weakness but after her transformation see it as something worth while (she still thinks that human women are weak though)

>>156248

I DO mean that they are not them anymore, yes. That IS the point of corruption!

With Merse as an example, her beliefs are changed, not as a result of life experiences or rational discourse, but through a literal transformation of mind and body. This is like the first episode of Futurama where Bender walks away from Fry after refusing to help him, getting shocked, and then immediately agreeing to help Fry.

As an aside, while it'll never happen in "official" works, I really want to see Merse get her ass kicked by a human woman, more than a few times in a row. How's that for character development?

>>156197

Inquisitor pls. I was being sarcastic, get a sense of humour.

>>156269

Heresy is no laughing matter.

>>156254

I have to say, what you define as personality and self is a tad too strict. Are you a believer of bundle theory or an atheist?

With a few exceptions of transformation, I would not say that the personality and the self would be destroyed.(I would agree on the more parasite type monsters could cause this, like the mitango or the some of the slime species).

Destruction of personality or self would be more of soul removal or hijacking; something akin to what doctor octopus from spiderman taking over Peter Parker's Body and kicking out Peter's soul sending him to the afterlife.

You would not say that just because someone lost their memories or may have a hormonal change does not mean that their not that person right?

I would say corruption in MGE is a more of a physical suggestion/hypnosis than destruction of the self/personality. In the most extreme scenario it may be like lobotomy that does not involve damage to the brain.

In regards to Bender dilemma, it is not like Bender change his personality all together for him, hell he got worst in the later episodes (for comedy's sake). A better example is where Bender was forced to like a robot that that threaten to replace him. he still had his core personality intact even then. Also related to futurama Bender did not change personality when he turn to a human even when he had biological motivators to change himself: he drinks himself to the point of vomiting, he ate to the point of obesity and vomiting , and party to the point of death due to his human body,

My point here is that just because you have a new physical need (sex is necessary as eating or eating as a new need) or hypnotized/suggested to like something or be more loose (being more expressive, being more active when you are a introvert in general) does not mean your personality is dead or altered to the point that your a different person.

>>156350

>Am I bad person for wanting to take the latent body horror inherent in monsterization and turning it all the way up?

Not necessarily

>>156350

nope

>>156329

So you're arguing that it's not a personality change, but rather its addiction and mind control.

That's like saying that drunk driving is better than brain-eating algae.

>>156387

You can technically stop a drunk driver from driving.

>>156388

>>156387

Ah, /monster/…. where the desire for boners runs aground on the Ship of Theseus Paradox.

Never change, you philosopher-letches.

>>156388

>>156387

Ah, /monster/…. where the desire for boners runs aground on the Ship of Theseus Paradox.

Never change, you philosopher-letches.

Let me post you wretched nigger of a code

>>156406

>>156407

Fucking hell, bakedtires.

Have had a story idea revolving around monsterization for a while. This might be the saddest thing I've written yet. So… if you're allergic to sad, don't read.

>You were never much of an outgoing individual, and low self esteem and crippling shyness didn't help you much socially.

>Sure you tried to go out on dates, ask out girls that seemed friendly enough. But you were always turned down. You began feeling like you were just meant to be alone.

>That's why in your college years, as you, you were shocked when a young woman by the name of Cindy approached you and asked you out. You were so excited!

>She was the same height as you, had short, drab brown hair that hung down straight. She really had absolutely no curves to speak of, an extremely boyish figure. Her face was… unique, despite her thin figure, her jutting neck and weak chin made her neck and face seem seamless in some lights. She had sharp facial features that weren't feminine in the slightest, and her choice in eyewear from the 60's didn't compliment it well at all.

>But you weren't shallow, she was very nice to you, and you were so happy that she cared about you.

>You dated all through college, your dates never got any more intimate than holding hands when you walked, at least when no one was looking. She would always let go if someone was around. She was still sweet in private though always doting on you and complimenting you, and making you feel special.

>When you two graduated college, you got married. She… still wanted to wait for sex, maybe she was just nervous, but you loved her and she loved you right? Right, you could wait for as long as it took, the kiss from your wedding day was enough excitement for you. You… found it a bit odd how she didn't kiss you before or after that, but you didn't want to be selfish. This was her choice, and you didn't want to make her uncomfortable, you cared about her.

>You luckily both got careers in your field soon after graduation. Yourself getting an office job at a large plastic products company, and your wife joining a major law firm, her specialization in matrimonial law was just what they needed, and they gave her a generous starting salary.

>While she made the most money, you also contributed to the finances as best as you could. She was sure you would succeed in life, she knew you were a hard worker.

>Then one day on the news, something huge happened. Portals began opening up all over the world, and strange creatures began emerging from them. Scientists were baffled, struggling to learn all they could, news outlets were in a speculative frenzy, misconstruing everything scientists said for more viewership, politicians used it to further their public image, religious leaders used it to push their ideology. It was chaos and the whole world looked on with bated breath.

>>156425

5 Years Later

>It's been a long time since the invaders, who called themselves 'Mamono' integrated into society. An entire colorful and varied race of monstrous women. Their world was destroyed by cosmic forces beyond their control, and in a last ditch effort, ripped portals open in time and space and happened upon ours by chance.

>You don't know much about them beyond that, Cindy doesn't like you talking about it, say's you shouldn't talk about things you don't understand. You try not to upset her too much, her work is stressful enough, she doesn't need an idiot like you causing more.

>She's still the bread winner in the household, and she doesn't let you forget it, You're so proud of her. You wanted to be a better man for her so you started exercising, got in good shape for her. It was difficult since you had so many hours at work, but you made good progress over the years, and can bench 300lb no problem now. She never seemed to notice, she was probably making sure you didn't get cocky and rest on your laurels. You wouldn't let her down.

>Your hard work was rewarded in your office job, you were offered a good position with good pay and benefits. Cindy told you that you were working too much and she was feeling neglected, so you turned it down. She was always busy with work, so she rarely interacted with you anyways, but you didn't want to hurt your wonderful wife.

>You always made sure the house was always clean for her when she came home, but there was always something wrong with how you did it. You're sure you'll get it right one day, even if she doesn't seem to think so,

>She tells you that you shouldn't try so hard, that you'll just fail like you always do. She's so thoughtful, always thinking of your well being. But you can't stop working hard, one day you'll be the man she deserves. Maybe one day she'll hold your hand again like when you were dating…

>>156427

>One day after getting home from work, you manage to clean the entire house for your wife to return to, just in time to start cooking dinner.

>She comes home earlier than you expect, wearing a scowl on her face. Your poor sweetheart works so hard.

>"Ugh, why the hell haven't you finished dinner yet!? I'm hungry." She says somewhat upset, you feel bad for making her hard day worse.

>"I'm sorry honey, it's almost done and I promise you'll love it, it's a recipe my grandmother sent me, Curried Chicken Casserole." Your grandmother always made the best food when you were growing up, you were glad to take up her craft.

>She scoffs, "That's what smells like crap? Guess it's no surprise a wrinkled up bitch like her can't even make a proper casserole. Throw it out and order some Chinese takeout, at least those lazy chinks can make a meal I can keep down." She turns on the TV and starts watching the news. "Ugh, fucking monster sluts again. I swear the news never stops talking about that dumb race of bimbos, the raccoon bitch who owns the network now is probably to blame, typical."

>You feel a bit sad that she didn't give your homemade meal a chance, but she was right, the curry would probably upset her stomach. You pick up the phone and order the food from the Chinese takeout restaurant across town. About twenty minutes later the door bell rings and you answer it. A pale woman is handing you the bag containing your order in her outstretched arms.

>"Thank you for order from Red Ryu, that'll be $14.95!" the girl says in a thick Chinese accent, her voice cheerful and polite.

>You count out money to pay for the order and give her a generous 50% tip for her timely and well mannered service.

>Cindy snatches the money from your hand as you begin to hand it over. "DON'T GIVE HER THAT MUCH FOR A TIP! Stupid bimbo zombie chink will probably use it to hire a gigolo, fucking slut." She throws half the money she snatched from you out the door before slamming it loudly. "You ungrateful piece of shit, you were staring at her tits weren't you!?" You seem to recall her wearing a loose t shirt and apron, you had no way of making out her breasts. But you probably were staring at them, men are pigs by nature, it's not out of the question that you did it subconsciously.

>"Ugh, I knew you were a weird little man, but I never knew you were a necrophiliac. You're lucky I love you so much to look past your MANY short comings." She can barely look at you, you wish you didn't shame her as a husband so much. One day you will be good enough though, you just need to keep working hard.

>"I'm sorry honey, I love you too." You attempt to hug her.

>Your wife recoils in horror, "Ugh! You reek of that curry shit, go wash yourself off, you're sleeping on the couch again for the next few days, That crap has probably seeped into your skin."

>>156433

>As you were cooking dinner, you heard the door open. You wife walked in with a tall young man with slicked back black hair and confident appearance, looked like he was a freshman in college.

>"Welcome home honey, who's this? Should I make some more food for our guest?"

>"No it's fine sweetie, we ate out before coming here. This is Chris, he's one of the new interns that isn't a waste of space at the firm, I'm taking him into my office to show him the ropes, so don't disturb us." She says sharply before leading him to the other room.

>You sigh dejectedly, maybe one day your wife will appreciate your cooking, you pull open a cook book and try to find where you went wrong.

>Your wife came home from work, looking particularly pissed off. You saw tears in her eyes. "That stupid shit Chris, had to fire him. Had an interoffice relationship with one of those bimbos they made us intern at the firm. That fucking ordinance they passed stuck us with a whole fucking herd of cows, that we can't even fire, fucking tit for brains can't keep it in their pants for two seconds, ruing young man's bright future in law."

>You had just finished baking a cake for you wife, and it turned out to be perfect this time! The timing was unfortunate, but everyone likes chocolate, and no one can stay upset when eating it right? "Would you like some of the cake I baked for you honey? Maybe it'll take your mind off work."

>"Eh, sure, maybe you'll surprise me this time." She cautiously takes a bite, and chews slowly, her face twisting into an odd look. "Bleh, it's so dry, you should toss it out." She walks over to the kitchen and throws the plate away before she grabs a bottle of wine from the fridge and starts chugging it, "You're lucky I love you so much, no one else would have the patience for a talentless loser like you."

>"I thank my lucky stars every day honey." You smile at her

>The door slams open, "UGH! DISGUSTING FAT COWS! I thought they couldn't fuck up bringing me a goddamned coffee! And I didn't even notice until I took a big swig of it that there were WET SPOTS in her fucking sweater. Fucking monsters trying to poison me with their fucking fluids!"

>You quickly dump out the hot milk toddy you were preparing for her to wind down after work with.

>Your wife came home from work, she looked exhausted. She slowly walked over to the couch and plopped down.

>"Welcome home honey, did you have a good day at work?" You ask concerned. "Are you okay?"

>She waves at you dismissively and falls asleep. You grab a blanket and cover her with it. You think of kissing her goodnight, but you know she hates that and think better of it.

>>156444

I think I can see where this is going.

>>156444

>Your wife comes home looking nervous. "Honey… we need to talk."

>"You know you can tell me anything honey, I'm your husband. I love you more than anything in the world!" You smile at her warmly, it hurt you to see her upset, but you stayed strong for her.

>"I cheated on you."

>Your heart stops

>"It was with Chris."

>You feel like you should be angry, mad, indignant… but you can't. This was your fault some how, you never touched her, so obviously she didn't feel satisfied by you. But… she never wanted you to touch her since you held hands all those years ago… You feel like this is your fault, it must be. "I-It's okay honey, I know it was my fault. I forgive you."

>Your wife's face seemed to strain, like it was trying to twist into the right expression, but couldn't figure it out. "I-I… okay…I…love you…"

>"I know you do, thank you for being with me, even when I disappoint you so much." You have to struggle smiling, but you're not sure why.

>Your wife's eye twitches as she smiles sadly, before she goes off into her bed room.

>You hear the door knob jostle, and the door gently swing open, your wife walks in calmly. You wonder if she's feeling okay. "Honey, how was work?"

>"It was great, thank you for asking." She says in a gentle tone. "Something smells good, are you cooking dinner?"

>"Yes, I thought tonight we would start with some salad, and have a nice steak with some steamed vegetables and baked potatoes drizzled with olive oil and herbs," You place a TV tray at her spot on the couch and place her meal on it. You pour her a glass of her favorite wine and place it next to her plate.

>"Actually… could you give me some water? I don't feel like wine tonight."

>"A-are you feel alright honey? I got your favorite wine…"

>"And I appreciate it, but I just don't crave it right now, some water would be fine."

>You replace her wine glass with a tall glass of filtered ice water. She reaches up and touches your hand, making your heart skip a beat.

>"Thank you honey, this is really sweet of you." She looks at you and smiles.

>You felt like something was wrong, but your entire brain seemed unable to wrap your head around it. You figured it was probably best not to think about it.

>You're panicking, something came up at work and you needed to stay late to take care of it. Your wife is going to come home to no dinner if you don't hurry! You're sure you can make something work!

>You see her car in the drive way and your heart sinks. You walk slowly into your home, bracing yourself for the verbal tirade you earned.

>"Welcome home! I got home before you, so I figured I would make you dinner for once." She smiles, "I've never cooked… but the interns at work gave me some pointers. They're still kind of annoying… but they're not that bad. They're actually a lot smarter than I gave them credit for."

>You smell slight burning. "Um, honey, I think the food is burning."

>"Oh! I'm sorry honey, I wasn't paying attention… we can just order out if you want." She looks upset.

>You walk over to her, "Or we could cook together… if you wouldn't mind." you feel like you overstepped your boundaries and reflexively flinched.

>Your wife looks at you sadly, before smiling, "S-Sure, that sounds fun."

>Throwing the ruined meal away, you begin preparing to make it again, walking your wife through the process. As you're explaining everything to her, she leans against you gently. Your heart starts beating faster, you weren't used to this. You wanted to get used to this, but something was tugging at the back of your brain more violently now. Like you were trying to grasp some concept in a foreign language. It was harder to manage, but you ignore the feeling as you continue cooking with your wife.

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>Your wife stayed home today, she wasn't feeling well. She had a fever and had trouble keeping her balance. You decided to stay home from work as well, you never used your sick days, so no one at home complained. You waited on her hand and foot to make sure she got better as soon as possible.

>You brought a bowl of homemade chicken noodle soup to her bedside, and carefully fed her spoonfuls, making sure not to spill anything. Setting the bowl down, you nervously bring a hand to her head to check her temperature. She doesn't seem upset, thankfully, but her head is burning hot.

>"H-honey… could you stroke my hair?" She looks at you, willing herself to smile through the pain.

>"S-sure, anything for you sweetheart." The nagging in the back of your head is starting to give you a headache as you gently run your fingers through her hair.

>She smiles and hums contently before her face twists, her expression changed to one of immense sorrow. "Honey… I'm sorry."

>Your head is pounding from that nagging feeling, "W-whats wrong? You have no reason to be sorry, you're the one sick, I probably gave you food poisoning, I know how terrible my cooking is, I probably undercooked-"

>"HONEY STOP!" She yells, shocking you. She remains silent, before sniffling, "I'm sorry… for everything." She takes a deep breath and begins sobbing, "You deserve better than me… You've done nothing but love and care for me all these years. And how do I repay you!? By treating you like garbage, belittling you, dragging you down, stagnating your career to feed my own sick sense of pride…"

>Your head feels like it's going to split open, you're trying to make sense of everything, but your mind is rejecting it, it CAN'T understand. "H-honey, no it's not your fault, it's m-"

>"IT'S ALL MY FAULT! You married me! Gross frumpy me! I was so afraid of losing you to someone prettier, I put you down! I wanted you to feel like you couldn't do better so you wouldn't leave me! But even after all that, you stuck by me, you stayed with me, you still loved me…"

>The feeling is gone. Everything makes sense now. All these years your fooled yourself into thinking it was your fault. But it wasn't. It was her. Why did she treat you this way. WHY!? YOU DID EVERYTHING FOR HER!!!! You feel disgusted by your wife, but most of all you feel disgusted by yourself. You look in the mirror, and see a strong confident man, that could do anything he set his mind to. But your own shattered ego kept you from seeing that, and kept you from flying as high as you could.

>"You're right. I did deserve better. I'm just now seeing that… I can't believe I stuck with you for this long. You were always a petty angry woman." You glare at her, "I never cared about how you looked, I was just glad someone care about me. I never thought I deserved it, and I let myself fool myself into thinking that all this time.

>"AUGH!!!" Your wife screams in pain, you feel little pity for her… but you're not going to leave her. You made a vow on your wedding day that you would stick by her, and just because she didn't take them seriously didn't mean you were.

>"I'm here for you… just tell me what's wro-" You're cut off by an ear splitting, sickening cracking of bones

>Your wife yells at the top of your lungs, you throw the blanket off her to see what's wrong as you see her legs have changed into furry hooves. What? Your wife groans and grabs at her head, trying to massage away at her temples, "My head feels like it's cracking open… AAGH!" curved horns violently jut from her skull her skin tearing and a small smear of blood coating the white bone as it grows in.

>"Cindy, what's going on!?" You shout.

>"I-I don't know! P-please stay with me… I'm scared!"

>Her words sting, you know she wouldn't have done the same for you… you struggle not to leave, it would be easy to leave. But you stay, holding her hand whether she liked it or not.

>She grits her teeth as he ears stretch and elongate into white fuzzy floppy things, she almost looks like a cow… like one of those Mamono? With another groan, a tuft tipped tail slithers out from underneath her, and wraps around your waist.

>"Y-you're still here… t-thank you." She looks at you with tears in her eyes. She grits her teeth again, her homely face crackling, slowly changing into something more feminine, more soft and inviting. Her face changed into something that naturally looked sweet and caring.

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>>156486

It's been a while since we had a tragic tale. wew

>>156486

>Her breathing begins to increase in tempo, "I-I feel so hot… I'm burning up…" You hear more bones cracking, and look down to see her boyish hips widen to something pronounced and motherly. "I-It hurts so much… but it's starting to feel… Ahn~! She reaches down and grips between her legs. You're… really not sure what to make of this, this is all too much for you to process.

>"W-why does my chest feel so hot, p-please, honey, rub my chest… it hurts so much… please." She struggles between shallow breaths. You feel angry, she never wanted to be touched by you before, why did she want you to now!? Why doesn't she get one of her interns to do it!?!? You take a deep breath, calming yourself down. Fine, you'll just do it… for your wife… You slowly begin rubbing her flat chest, something you wish she let you do when you wed. The feeling is bitter sweet, and you have little emotional investment in it.

>"T-thank you… so much… it feels… it… ah…. Ahhh…. AHHHH… AHHHHH!!" She screams, in an erotically pained voice. Your face burns at her uncharacteristic show of passion in front of you, when you feel her small nubs, slowly grown in your fingers, steadily increasing in size until they're boisterously large, her areola puffing up, nipples pink and engorged and nearly as large as the tip of her pinky finger.

>You… can't help but feel somewhat aroused by this, your wife was never much to look at, and seeing her now, squirming at your touch, after so long of crushing loneliness despite being married… and it was all tainted.

>Her changes seem to stop, and she finally calms down… mostly. "H-honey… I… I feel… I LOOK amazing… I'm finally the woman you deserve… I'm finally the woman you deserve… please… make love to me… ravage me all night! I want you so much, I LOVE you so much!!!" She starts crying, her lips stretched into a wide smile as she grips your hands tighter.

>"No."

>"W-what?" She looks utterly devastated.

>"No. I deserve better. You had your chance, and you shat on it. I want a divorce."

>>156504

"Hey honey, I know denied you physical and emotional love for years, and I cheated on you despite us being married and you giving me nothing but your undying loyalty, but it was because I felt ugly and insecure, and now I'm not ugly, and am now biologically incapable of being unfaithful! So that makes it all okay right?" :^)

Felt relieving to shit this out though. It's been in the bowels of my mind for over a month.

>>156520

I actually did originally want to give it a happy ending where they stay together, and Cindy spends the rest of her life being the wife MC deserved. But it felt wrong, which is weird because I always want my stories to be saptastically saccharine sweet.

>>156525

Fucked that up.

>>156503

Eh, the part where Cindy finally blames herself seems off. The MC put up with so much shit for so long, why would he just flip the switch instantly right when she takes responsibility? He would either break long before that, or would have going a lot longer. The sudden attitude change is jolting. Other than that tough, it was good, if a little short. Maybe make a few more parts about the two discussing their failed relationship?

>>156582

Thank you!

>This overly easy and convenient resolving of issues through something like monsterization modifying her entire view on certain defining aspects of herself, that just so happen to benefit monsters in general in the short term.

It's very Stepford Wives how KC treats his characters. Merse could have been a fairly complex character and not only takes away what could have been interesting about her, but makes her an unlikable twat who looks down on half the human race with no good evidence and a traitor who just so happens to support KC's darlings. You know, the ones he just can't bear having bad things happen to?

>>156717

the funny thing is that the stepford wives is a story that triggers sjws, even when its considered satire to begin with.

>>156559

If the MC showed more doubt before that it would make sense. The timing on everything at the end is also a bit rushed. I know mamono are sex fiends, but right after having horns burst through your skin?

Her also being a lawyer in charge of marriage law is also going to mean that won't be the end of that. I can easily imagine a mamono wife trying to rig the courts against a divorce.

>>156736

*practicing marriage law

>>156739

It's fine. The issue is more that the MC is set up as an abused spouse. Even if you add in her commenting on that; that will only remind people of the fact that she works as a marriage law lawyer, not give hints that the MC is considering leaving her.

That kind of threat would also heighten the feeling that the MC won't be able to walk away so easily.

>>156757

Yeah, In the epilogue I was writing before I scrapped it, MC is terrified of what his ex will do, but Cindy uses her expertise merely to streamline their divorce to make it as painless as possible, while also being completely fair with the split in the property and finances. Ends up with her setting him up with one of the interns that helped her stop being a mega psycho bitch, they hit it off, get hitched. Cindy remains single to remind herself of the man she lost due to her own hubris. etc. I kind of got frustrated with how mediocre I executed the idea so I just went back to the other story I was doing. Thank you for critique though, don't get much of that around here, it's frustrating.

>>156559

I kinda figured that was because part of her was already slowly making the change into a mamono, and it was affecting her mind.

>>156765

As Cindy slowly changed, so did MC. Her slowly mellowing attitude began forcing MC come to terms with the fact that his wife really didn't love him all those years. It made him realize that what Cindy was becoming WAS a loving wife, and that he had fooled himself thinking that she had actually treated him well over the years.

I guess more simply its like this.

Human Bitch Cindy > Abusive > MC blames himself

Human Mellow Cindy > Caring > MC struggles to come to terms with the past 5 years of abuse

Mamano Caring Cindy > Apologetic > MC wants to love Cindy now, but can't after marriage is tainted with 5 years of ego smashing and infidelity, despite her being loving/loyal wife now. Her mistreatment planted seeds of doubt that will never die, dooming their relationship forever.

>>156769

Not to mention that sudden Monster Caring should raise some alarms - is she trying to use the monsterization to run away from her past? Trying to destroy the old self? Trying to be manipulative?

>>156796

It was by accident. Remember how she said a bunch of fat cow bimbo interns were forced on to them, and she complained how she couldn't fire them because of an ordinance protecting them. Being constantly exposed to them at work, combined with her insecurity and jealousy rooting from her homeliness.

Basically she hated/abused her husband because deep inside she felt he could do better than her, covered up by the delusion that she could do better than him. In turn she hated mamono because they represented something she wasn't, beautiful, loving, loyal. She wanted to be one (but she didn't know of monsterization, she never wanted to talk about them, so she never knew.) So her desire to be someone actually desirable (like mamono) so she could be someone her husband deserved, combined with long term exposure to mamono mana (plot convenience) made her change unknowingly into the 'fat cows' she was jealous of

>>156717

Well, she looks down on them by using her mother as an example for humanity. Weird twist of fate really. Not to mention due to the format that these are presented we are getting the main course and not the side dishes with this. For all we know maybe afterwords things got very good for Merse and she did keep her personality. But without dialogue or anything to accurately depict the events we don't know.

>>156729

How? Do they think it's satirizing them? If anything it satirizes the whole ordeal.

>>156840

It was pretty upfront about some of the changes being immediate. Which is irritating, because corruption and purification require a bit of time and effort to be good for story material and for fetishes.

>>156840

I doubt Merse would get better about her viewpoint of human women and stop tarring them all with her mother's brush. Remember, her source material constantly glorifies the monsters and demonizes humans, regardless of what would logically happen.

>>156969

All of them Glorify monsters and demonize humans.

>Koyoi considers humans as a race that harms their loved ones.

>Primera hunts down Elves and Humans and turns them into monsters because she believes that's the only way for them to be together.

>Wilmara and Mimil no longer see the humans worth protecting anymore and just indulge themselves in their loved ones.

>Sasha was already a race-traitor so not much changed with her.

>Francisca just rapes anyone that enters the castle.

>>157032

I was talking about the stuff KC writes specifically, the guides and such, not just the Fallen Maidens who we know are full of shit.

>>156817

write an epilogue where MC finds and fugs that chinese delivery monster in front of her

>>157053

My shadenfreude is getting a bully boner from this idea. But realistically, MC would never want to see his ex again. So I wouldn't feel right writing it. I kind of want to though. I'm aware this makes me a bad person.

>>157167

He could fug the delivery monster, take pictures, then send it to the ex-wife.

>>157167

hey man go full on reverse NTR if you want, bully to the max.

>>157335

Anon, if someone cheats, the relationship "deal" is broken and there is no relationship anymore. It would only be revenge and not reverse NTR.