/monster/ - The Last Bastion of Romance

We need more cute sappy shit.

NEED.

I kinda suck at writing, but i think a thread like this is a good time to start git gud. Might post some later on.

J-just don't bully pls

>>90249

>someone using my oc

Aspiring to do some writefaggotry soon, really trying to figure out a premise I like enough to write. I'm planning on running a /chaos/ quest at some point in the future, hopefully it'll be a little less dead soon.

>>90248

>>90254

Please. I would like to believe that I'm not the only one that writes these occasionally. I don't think there is enough of it on this board.

This is for writefags,you say?

StyxxnStones, if you're reading this, update The Tiny Swordsman, you fucking lazy faggot.

Gauf, I don't know whether you're on /monster/, but I'd love another Pharaoh piece, please.

Also,Niebelfader, please write more stories. Don;t even care which, you're a fucking great writefriend.

>>90254

Messy as in clumsy?

That'd be fucking cute.

>>90259

I've been trying to cook one with a tsundere shut-in medusa that gets to drop her spaghetti every now and then when she's nervous, but i can't quite get what i want it to be (or just can't find the inspiration for the plot), guess it's one of those works that you never ever finish because reasons.

I found it strange that there wasn't enough sappy shit around when i first found out about this board, i mean, it's fucking monster girls and all, should be full of platonic shit, but nope.

>>90261

I guess platonic ain't the word, i meant something more like hand holding and consensual sex in the missionary position. You know what I'm referring to.

>>90261

>>90262

>no platonic shit or hand holding

It's because all of the KC tier posts that adhere strictly to KC tier descriptions for KC tier monster grills, which include KC tier rape in 90% of them.

>>90265

I mean, all girls have a girly side, don't they ;-;

It ain't just about rape, there also need to be conflict, broken hearts, tender love and smoochies, not a buncha sadistic stuff.

That's why i don't like much the KC stuff myself, i mean i take some of it, and i can understand some parts of the reasoning, but most of the time it's just overdone sexual stuff.

>>90266

now lets not deny the fact that this is kind of a porn board. I don't mind some of the stuff, I just wish there was some other stuff. Hopefully, if we do write this kind of stuff enough, it will catch on. I've personally try to include it whenever, but that's just me. There are a couple of other people that do it on this board too, but that's about it.

>>90272

I was kind of thinking about the same thing. I didn't know there were a lot more cuddle-dom fags here until the guy's birthday thread though.

I was originally gonna try drawing some stuff, but I'm really shit at that. Kinda wanted to include illustrations in writing as well. It'd be kind of cool to have something like that.

>>90274

If I've learned anything, don't try to multi task when writing shit. I was shit at drawing too anyways. Go fourth and finish your story anon.

>>90272

>>90274

I don't mind it either, but i'm sort of disappointed that there's not enough sappy shit around, considering the waifuism. Also the story from the birthday thread was just amazing, that's the kinda shit i'd like to see around.

Gonna try and git gud so i can contribute, i tried to write for the first time while drinking and it sorta fucked it up and even ended up posting it here, i'm kinda ashamed of it, but i guess that's common for a first time, still, ain't drinking when writing again.

In any case the story's on the greentext/writefaggotry thread, the story about the dude and the red oni

>>90274

Illustrations are good if your trying to nail down how something looks in your story and is generally a good practice if you have the time for it.

If you do decide to do something like that I would say you wan't to avoid drawing people or expressions and focus on drawing scenes or objects.

People know what people look and act like, so if you fuck this up it'll be raw in their brains while their reading, but if you make a polished drawing of a locket or something, even if it shit it won't bother most people.

If you really want good drawings, commission someone.

Requesting story about a holy knight who falls in love with the spider queen he was sent to kill

>>90319

Seconded. My kind of thing.

>>90278

There's no need to be ashamed, anon. Also, I'd like to see something written when you're not drinking. I always appreciate fluffy monster girl stories.

Working on that "Messy Cheshire" story for that one dude, currently.

Also, I was able to add newlines for batch-editing in sed. (Add manual indents and double-line breaks to text) If anyone needs it for pastebins I can post the script (for Linux or Windows with cygwin)

>>90340

I can't help but to be a little ashamed of what i've done, shouldn't be though, it's a fuckin anonymous imageboard.

Currently trying to polish the story a bit, i guess i'll post it on pastebin or some crap in case i make it too long.

Sometimes i can't help but to drink when i'm feeling down and i end up even worse than how i started.

>>90292

I've always liked vanilla stuff, not going overboard with anything.

I liked your story.

>>90347

It's hard not to feel pressure, I mean you want people to like your stuff and it hurts when you put effort into something and others don't appreciate it.

Don't be ashamed to post though, I generally find this board is pretty chill as long as you don't do mean-spirited shit.

I appreciate your complement, it was a fun story to write.

Just in general, I'm trying to write stuff with less used monster girls. Not because I'm trying to be some hipster elitist but because I feel like there is a lot of unexplored territory that needs to be tapped.

So, I've decided to write a bunch of poems involving monster girls. Both for practice with poetry for a project that doesn't have anything to do with monster girls and because well, I'm posting here, because I love monster girls.

I've done a little brainstorming the other day and now that I'm off work today I was writing my first draft of one of my poems. I'm going to post them later today.

Should we post our ideas/brainstorming shit, or is not not necessary? I have a feeling that it's going to be similar ideas.

>>90278

There were some errors, but I can hardly complain about someone dedicated enough to get drunk before writing a story about an oni. If you're that worried about it, just edit while sober.

>>90495

So I finished a first draft, I will do some editing tomorrow. So I have a series planned for this, based on what I've experienced working in retail. And it was pretty fun writing this, I hope I can capture the annoyance, stress, and the stuff you learn while working in such an environment.

Anyways…

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Betty was a lamia, working at a store

One which sold saws, hammers, and more

She would work from nine to six, and that was it,

Each day, she would have someone throw a fit

On this summer day, Betty was a cashier,

this was very early in her hardware store career,

An older lamia slithered into Betty’s lane,

This lamia was going to Betty, for reasons inane

Her face was torn, and her arms were cross

She begin to bark orders, as if she were the boss.

“These plants aren’t growin’!” with plants in a sac

“I want to return these, and get my money back!”

Betty’s reply was quick and incredibly kind,

“You will have to go the service desk, if you don’t mind”

“Return my plants, right here, no questions asked”

Betty wasn’t sure, for she never did this task

This lamia was mean, and talking was a grind

And this old lady was holding up the line

Attempting to return items, all by herself,

Betty called a manager for help.

Call after call, managers wouldn’t come,

and this customer continued to be dumb

Finally, someone appears to save the day,

and talks to the customer and take her away,

Betty now free to break down the line,

free from her stress, feeling fine.

Later after that annoying situation,

the human manager gave an explanation;

It turned out she was a liar and a thieve

It was something that was hard to believe

But six o’clock finally came, time to go clock out

Leaving annoying patrons who whine and pout

Betty happily sits back at home, smiling in peace

Now she doesn’t have a headache, until tomorrow at least

>>90535

>But I noticed your poem seems pretty "bouncy" and fun, unlike a lot of edgy modern poetry.

Oh, that's mostly in part to what I read as a kid. I loved Shel Sliverstien's books as a kid, and I'm sure it for anyone who read his works it might shine through a bit. I also loved Dr. Seuss in his completely off the wall glory.

Also, I'm a big fan of comedic rap music (and just comedic music in general really) and I love how a talented poet can easily make you laugh but also give you something that is relatable or if not relatable, at least a new perspective.

Embed related. If you can laugh at annoying shit, you've overcame it in my opinion and are a better person for it.

Also, in my brainstorming notes, I've made notes of the feelings or tone I'm going for that poem. I'll post those in another post.

>You might want to look at some metrical patterns to help make it flow better, unless you've already used one and I'm too dumb to recognize it.

All I did was basic rhyme, now that I have a basic idea for the poem, I'll look into some patterns to make it better.

And I loved that I got some feedback. I want to put out something good, I'd rather have someone tell me where I can improve than some clown who will just tell me it's okay even if it's not as good as it can be.

Saw this thread and wanted to test out the first paragraph of a story. Tell me if it's worth pursuing.

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You can barely remember anything from before the change. You’ve read about it in history books and even been able to acquire banned periodicals on the war and the immediate aftermath. It’s strange how quickly history can be erased, like a modern day burning of Alexandria. You can remember your dad telling you that things were going to go back to normal. That the camps were just until the military fought back the monsters. You must have been five when it was all over. Out of the camps and back into the city. A different state, no dad, no idea of what was happening. Things were different now, you had a new home with the state and there seemed to be a lot less people around. It's not that the living areas of the cities were unpopulated; just now it the monsters living there. Elementary school was the worst of it, a broken system failing to be repaired by broken people. It took the better part of your third grade for the new books to be distributed; up until then it was trying to use the older, clumsily censored ones. You could see the anger in the eyes of the adults around you, your teacher’s stilted delivery of the new, “improved” history. The orphanage was overflowing and under-funded. You came home to a bowl of lukewarm army leftovers and a cot. Studying only interrupted by an older boy deciding that be didn’t like the way you looked. You learned to shut up and disappear. Head down and nose in a book, you focused on school and immersed yourself in fiction. Devouring the books that had survived the purging.

>>90587

If it helps you write more, I kinda want to see where this is going. I can dig this.

>>90587

>>90595

I just find the idea of how early life after a MG invasion would work.

Obviously I'm using the idea that MGs forcefully invaded and conquered the human world.

Seems like the social and logistical problems would be pretty extreme considering that the conqueror is trying to fit in with the conquered.

>>90641

While I definitely prefer situations where either the conflict was long, long ago to the main story or non-existent, this idea is still good.

>Obviously not all of the monster girls are going to be evil or may even disagreed with the invasion. Maybe the invasion was super costly on the MG's home nation or something to that effect

>A number of humans understand the first point, so you have a few people capable of befriending MGs, maybe possible relationships

Of course, all these details are assuming you're doing more than a short story, since I'm assuming you're going for a novel possibly with plenty of history and lore.

>>90587

You've defined a setting very well in just that passage, if I may say so. I'd say it'd be worth pursuing, if not just to see what more you have to write. You have a setting, but what are you thinking of doing for the plot?

Also, the story for >>90249 and >>90248 is almost complete. Might be done by tomorrow, if things go well. Will likely be 7k+ words as a minimum, so longer than the birthday dude's minotaur story. Sorry for the slow pace, but I'll have some days off starting Tuesday, so I should be able to get more in. Right now, my eyes hurt and my brain's kinda numb.

Also, nobody's answered >>90240 and >>90319, yet. Maybe someone who wants to write for fun can try one of these? I think it'd be nice to accommodate more requests here.

>>90656

nice

>>90587

>>90656

It's second-person, idiot.

>>90595

>>90654

>>90656

>>90679

Thank you for the advice and motivation!

I've changed it to first person and continued work on it.

Hopefully I'll have something to show for it soon.

>>90854

Again, I'm really fond of the Lamia working retail one. You could also have all sorts of silly monster girl guests coming along.

I'd actually prefer to read that as prose, but poems are cool too, especially if you're more comfortable with a poem.

http://pastebin.com/rJRG8Emk

This is a short story i'm currently writing, i'm sorta new to all this crap, gotta get that sweet constructive criticism and opinions.

Got my inspiration from this >>90179, >>90193, and some shit on that dude's tumblr.

Got nothing on shark grilles on the MGE and the MGQ wiki, so i guess i'm pulling stuff out of the monmusu anime for this one (With the mermaid species chart).

So tell me what you faggots think.

>>90319

>>90336

Koboldfag here, im working on a little something for you two.

Thinking of maybe giving this a go, so request something I guess. Can't promise I'll get it done soon because I still have a little bit of schoolwork I need to do, but I'll at least try.

Got some work but feel like writing. Request me something.

>>91041

Can't wait anon

>>91052

A Princess of a powerful kingdom is kidnapped by a band of Slime Girl bandits when her carriage is ambushed by them. Basically lots of yuri moments and the princess getting her body stuck inside them. Aka absorption. That's just something i'm throwing out since we don't see too many slime girl stories

>>91046

>>91052

The story I was writing for >>90249 has strayed really, really far from what he'd be expecting. Why don't one of you try that?

>>91008

I fucked up and lost a lot of what I was going to tell you, so it's a bit short. Sorry about that.

ALLCAPS definitely has to go. People often believe that dialogue should speak for itself. You can use exclamation marks and descriptions of dialogue to help with that. Don't overuse either of them, though. I noticed that this was also present in your Oni story.

Also, second person point of view has hardly worked for anyone commercially, and with a good reason too. It's forced and stilted as hell, distracting from the important parts of the text. I would understand the use of second person in CYOAs and quest threads, but I'd advise against it for any prose. Try first person, or third person limited POVs. For some reason, everything here in /monster/ seems to be in first person (sometimes even second). Maybe you could show people how it's done in third person limited.

If you're only going to upload in raw text (like pastebin, or directly here), try to use manual indents too. A tab, of four spaces works just fine.

I noticed you're using some sort of "equals-sign quotes" for displaying thoughts. You can just display thoughts as a quote if you need to. But you do this very often, so maybe first person would work better for you if you want to keep doing that. However, you don't need to write down what your characters are thinking at every waking moment. This is where "Show, don't tell" really comes into play.

Aside from that, try to proofread it at least once. I'm not going to point out every spelling and grammatical error, though.

Hope that helps, and at least you're not greentexting. It's always good to challenge yourself if you can. If you need some more help, I can help you out with specifics. Not that I have much to show for myself. And just like with the Oni story, you don't need to feel bad about yourself. Just learn from it, so you can help make things that people like.

Still though, I'm hoping people here can continue to help others learn. That way we all improve.

>>91060

Thanks anon, i really appreciate the criticism.

Anything else you'd like to add to it? I mean the suggestions and shit.

As for the upload way, i just copypasted it into pastebin, still don't know what im gonna do, and it's just too early to decide where or how im gonna upload it anyways.

>>91062

No problem dude. That's a god attitude to have.

And suggestions for the story itself? I guess the plot could use more substance (although I can hardly say that, considering I only wrote comfy SoL, and only wrote one thing for /monster/ so far). The story revolves around a single main event. Basically, two dudes got robbed at sea by weird pirates. That's just one scene.

I really like the charming pirate girls, so maybe you could include them some more? What if they come back for MC-kun and meet him again? Maybe he's their only source of livable income, or he grows attached to them (or vice versa). Or maybe, instead of the officers explaining how there's "nothing that can be done", they're actually at risk. Maybe MC-dude wants to help them, or he could also want to find them and get his stuff back. The pirates were really funny characters, is all I'm thinking of. You could even try a story from their point of view.

And as for that last part, I'm just as puzzled as you are. Pastebin isn't good for, or even meant for literature, and I personally can't think of anything better.

>>91065

*Good. I fucked up.

>>91065

No i meant more suggestions for the way of writing and all that stuff, i kinda got the story covered up and all i need now is how i'm gonna execute it. The thing i copypasted there is like a small part of the story, no way i'm gonna write something and leave it half-assed Unless i'm drunk, like with the Oni one..

Still, all suggestions are welcome, i'm here to git gud.

>>91065

Alright, i heeded your advice, changed it to third person (still ain't sure if it is 3rd person), but i'm kinda getting used to it, it's sorta easier to write like this and i can just jump into making some longer dialogue without adding "and anon said this and that and that". I also got rid of the all caps, i think i could use another name for the MC and work a little on his presentation, just used Anon to identify more with ourselves, it's just that i'm pretty bad at names and i end up thinking they're shitty.

http://pastebin.com/r5647WFt

>>91192

Oh boy i ain't writing shit tonight, i'm reading this instead.

>>91192

Man I'm glad that story had a happy ending.

>>91192

Man that was amazingly cute and sappy.

Would've been cooler if you wrote a little more after Lola moved out with him. I still liked it a lot.

Hey Heros, I wrote another thing.

Part 2 of the Chronicles of the Pax can be found here. Make popcorn, this one's bigger than part 1!

http://pastebin.com/DCUPqGH0

I toned down the lewds somewhat from your suggestions last time, and there's a lot more world-exploring.

In this one, a Samuel goes to sea sea sea, Jessie wants to know what love is, she wants Charles to Show her, there must be an angel, playing with Lloyd's heart. Also Jeremy is a fucking edgelord, and worst girl gets her just desserts.

Those of you who haven't read part 1 can find it here.

http://pastebin.com/7Fvi6AqW

Does anyone have any of the 'Prayers to Ammit-chan' we made when we were LARPing with /ebola/? I wouldn't mind incorporating them in some future writefaggotry.

>>91201

Definitely, I wouldn't be satisfied by pulling a sad ending for some cheaply-made emotions.

>>91210

Here's to hoping we can make more cute stuff. And I agree, started working on fixing up the ending as soon as I got home from work. It's about 1k longer than it used to be, most of the additions starting when Royce drops Lola off the second time. Thanks for the suggestion.

>>90319

>>90336

>>91041

>>91053

Sorry it's taking so long, Im in the middle of IRL stuff and writing is a very recent hobby for me

http://pastebin.com/eDrEUtew

this is what I got so far. I hope to be finished by the second or third part.

>>91616

I was actually thinking of doing a yeti story next, but I want to get the homework I have out of the way, and that won't be until the weekend.

>>90839

I'm looking forward to it! It sounds great.

>>92231

Of course, keep doing it m8.

I also got some ideas for a yeti story, will try to experiment with them later on.

>>92231

Yes please, this was just getting good after they met each other, would like to see more.

And also, I could use some help. Anyone here write some non-contemporary settings? I'm really worried about blatant anachronisms or just misinformation that will get on people's nerves. Are people who write that stuff just naturally knowledgeable about the time-period they're writing about? I have a feeling I'd screw up trying to write anything before modern times.

>>92416

You're over-thinking it, to be honest. If you wanna be accurate with a time period , or you're just not sure about something, just do a little research via google. Even writers need reference materials now and then.

http://pastebin.com/cbcyJK29

I wrote a thing about an adopted hellpuppy.

We talked about this in the steam chat last night and I just had to write something after I updated my CYOA last night. I don't normally write stuff like this so I don't know how well the flow is, but it was enjoyable to write this little 2,500 word story. Take a read if you'd like!

>>92432

Man fuck you I started crying at the end.

>>92432

see this >>92612 but minus the crying. but it did go well. should've posted that link with the pic of the pouty hellpuppy in the hellhound thread

>>92695

But that hellpuppy is too young…

And sure, I'll trigger them over there.

>>92695

aye, that would be the pouty hellpuppy. I know she's too young, but that first bit about the hellpuppy being defiant brought that to mind now she's wanting upsies in this thread too. /monster/ has created a monster's monster

>>92432

HHHHNNNNNNNGGGGGGG!

Fucking nice, hero.

>>91312

I think we mostly based that off of the Negative Confessions from Egyptian religion. If you look that up, you can see what I mean when I say that it's something really easy to edit in all sorts of writefag-related ways.

Requesting a sweet/sappy story, something where a hellhound, after a few attempts, pulls the guy she likes out of his depressive slump.

I had a shitty birthday yesterday, so I'm jonesing for something heartwarming to keep me going.

>>93058

sort of related >>86392

>>93109

I've been following it, I posted >>93082

Not sure if anyone will do this, but requesting a story along the lines of this:

MC is a spoiled 16 year old wealthy school girl constantly getting humiliated by her beautiful lamia class mate. Who doesn't like a monster girl dominating someone weaker than her? Specially dominating some spoiled brat who thinks she's the best thing since sliced bread

Alright guyse, i came back for more constructive criticism and general crucifixion.

This is a rough draft of the first (ish) part of my sharkgrille story:

http://pastebin.com/tzcJ0XnG

Let me know of any suggestions you guys might have, they're all welcome.

Also, don't mind grammatical errors as i haven't really checked for them, i just checked for plot consistency and shit.

Also also 4.7k works holy shit, I let myself to be carried away and shit's not even done.I'm kind of enjoying this.

>>93373

>reads sharkgrill story

no sexing/lewds/beginnings of relationship, dead fish/10

srsly? has good frame. keep hacking at it to sort it out and you're good. also needs first date stuff and hand holding lewds with sharkgrill. because >implying

Cute relationship between a man and a Honeybee. With taboo hand holding and fuzzy bee hugs.

:^)

>>93524

Well i kinda got carried away and wrote way more than i intended to with the "introductory" part.

I'm still working on the lewdest parts of the plot like hand holding and consensual sex and other fishy parts.

Thanks for the input.

>>91648

Just finished writing the yeti story I said I would do. Once I revise it tomorrow I'll post a link.

Little less spooning and more cuddling, but I can always add that in when I proofread it.

>>93654

Finished that story.

6677 words, tags include fluffy snuggles, cuddling, and cuddlesex with a yeti.

http://pastebin.com/a6N3V7hn

It really fucking sucks all the old /monster/ stories are now gone thanks to the achieve being gone forever now

>>94146

Glad I got that right. The anon over at >>93927 and >>93974 said that the structure of the story was good, but the dialogue was kind of forced or something. Less character development than there could have been. Something I need to work on in short stories.

I'm writing a spider Yuri, Ushi-oni in a gym making webs and trapping people, Ushi-oni in a shower, Apo by a pool….I got a big list of incompleat storys

>>94205

I need to see this now. We need more monster yuri in general

>>94156

You sure this ain't temporary?

I finished a bit more of the spider and paladin story.

http://pastebin.com/M8mSjJxX

Im kind of a slow writer since this is a new hobby, but I wanted to release something over the weekend. also don't expect any sex for a long while, I want the transition from hateful paladin to spider lover to feel real.

>>94881

Your spelling is shit.

http://pastebin.com/mF3keZQ4

I wrote another short little 2k word story for the soccer mom thread. They asked for silly soccer mom fights and there we go.

…these short little stories are fun.

>>94886

>>94881

I have to agree. I mean I have no trouble going back and fixing it for Kobold since I got like nothing to do right now

>>95657

There we go all fixed

http://pastebin.com/FuWBFqnV

>>95672

>>95657

Oh jeez, thanks. i was writing this in libre office, im pretty sure it's spell checking is shit.

>>95678

I use LibreOffice too, it's spellchecking is just fine. Make sure that you have hunspell installed and the appropriate locales for it as well. I'm not sure if they come by default with LO in Windows, so you should check for yourself. I haven't had any problems with LO + hunspell.

Regardless of whether or not you use a spellchecker, you should probably proofread stuff you plan to show others at least once. LO also features extensions to help out with grammar checking if you'd like that as well, but I prefer to check for grammar errors myself. So yeah, definitely proofread if you have the time.

Cute spiders though.

you know how terrible is not beign able to write shit, even though you can create stories in your head

>>92231

>>92236

>>92416

I did the second part of my yeti story. This is mostly cutesy stuff and the two getting to know each other. Will do more later when life is less oppressive. Tell me if I need to work on anything.

Also added some OCs from the OC thread. (Cheruffe and Kumiho). If we are creating some OCs, we might as well use them.

Part 1:http://pastebin.com/ALWD42BA

Part 2:http://pastebin.com/pAP8MRzQ

>>96375

I would work on making coherent sentences first.

you could just write it on paper when your not doing anything real rough like. You just need to get the first draft and you can polish it from there.

>>96375

>>96797

The writing on paper thing really helps. When I was bored I cranked out an outline for a golem girl story and then added more bits as I started writing it. Helped a lot.

After all this time is there no story about a newlywed Kobold starting a family with her husband yet?

>>100936

I liked the first one, not so much the second one.

It'd be cool if you expanded the first one, seemed pretty nice the guy trying to overcome his fears and stuff.

>>100801

see >>91997 for wan wan greentext with married kobold and anon at the end

(Crossposting from

>>18167

Because it's full now)

>>104887

I wouldn't say the focus, more like a high-level avenue to explore how the world works at a macro level. Remember all the shit that's happening to them is pretty uncommon. The rest of the world is probably plodding along like

>Message from the chancel

>Ordered to have continuance

>Priestess arrives

>qt3.14 would purge ferals for

>praisetyris.jpg

>Jealous Holstaur has milked herself all over the bed.

>priestess leaves for fear of contamination and commands me to take the abstinence of seasons

>mfw

>>104889

He's important, but he's not the once-and-future king or anything like that, but I do actually raise that as a point in this last part so I'm not going to spoiler it.

>>105292

well technically the thread over at >>18167 still has 6 posts left before it hits bump limit, but whatever

>>105305

I tried to post, got a "this thread is over 350 posts and cannot be replied to."

Not my fault the chan is a bit broken.

>>105310

that's happening sitewide since something is going on with the software and it's also probably because the move to infinity-next is happening Soon™

>>105310

>>105331

the shit with the 350 post limit is gone now and the bump limit is back up to 400 as well, but who knows what's gonna happen when the move to infinity-next is made

Old fic thread is basically done now. https://archive.is/rsBIY

>>105292

Oh hell no I never expected Sam to be the future king and all that that's more of Charles's destiny. Honestly I see all three brothers in this kind of sense based off of LOTR

>Charles is Aragon

>Lloyd is Gandalf

>Samuel is Frodo

I can see Sam somehow carrying a burden on his shoulders, something he never asked for, but the world depends on his actions. He's not like you said the one and future king, but his destiny will determine the fate of the world.

Maybe that's just my opinion personally. Can't wait to see part 4 though

>>105486

But like Frodo it wasn't destiny or anything like that. There was no prophecy that Frodo was gonna save the world. Frodo took the ring on his shoulders because he had no choice.

Sam could very well be similar to that

>>105486

Interesting. It certainly wasn't my intention to portray them as those archetypes. I more saw Lloyd as the loyalist, reliant on the status quo (his paladin ambition), Samuel as the marginalist, willing to work within the system but mostly trying to keep out of its way (his nonchalance towards heresy/blasphemy), Charles as the idealist, wanting to change the system for the greater good (I wanna know what love is) and jeremy as the pointed warning about the inherent flaws within any system of governance (shiggy diggy doo)

…yeah, I read the spots off herbert in my youth.

How do you guys feel about non-greentext stories? I've just made a thread for a story that I feel has a somewhat original premise and setting but realized shortly after that some anons may be turned off to a story out of greentext.

Here's a link to it:

>>106475

Also Danuki's are under represented.

Im just reposting some my own OC from a different thread. It's a cat gitl story.

>Get back to my apartment from work

>I spent the entire time on the subway thinking about me and my girlfriend's trip to Paris in a few weeks

>I hear glass smashing from behind the door

>As I open the door I hear my girlfriend's voice, and the sound of a metal cane she left there hitting the floor.

>"Anon! Is that you?"

>"It's me [Kelly], don't worry."

>I walk to the kitchen to see my Nekomata girlfriend on her knees, gingerly trying to pick up the pieces of the salt shaker that smashed on the floor

>"Im sorry, I was going to make myself a snack, but I-I…"

>I wasn't surprised, she's been a little clumsy since she was hurt badly in a car accident 3 months ago

>She used to depend on me, but now she can get around the apartment just fine

>besides, being with a cat girl for two years has taught me a lot about patience, some broken glass isn't problem at all

>I hug her and take out the dust pan and broom

>She holds it in place and I sweep everything into the pan

>I make her some fish and everything is well for a little bit

>Later on im watching tv

>Some sort of french movie is playing

>I watch while Kelly carefully makes her way to the couch

>She sits next to me and mushes herself in between my arm and my side

>"You excited for Paris Babe?"

>"mmn…"

>"What's the matter?"

>"Im not so sure about it anymore."

>"But you always talked about wanting to go there."

>"That was a while ago."

>Getting dressed for bed

>Im on one foot while im putting on some socks

>Kelly walks in while im facing away from the door

>She bumps into me, and I end up on the floor

>It barely hurt, so im up in no time

>"I-Im so sorry!"

>You pull her into a hug to console her

>"im so sorry, you're stuck with stupid old me."

>"Please, don't say that."

>Kelly pulls away and cups my face with both hands

>Tears begin streaming down her cheeks

>"I miss you anon, I want to see you again…"

>She is trying her best to look at me, but her darkened, blind eyes wouldn't allow her such a pleasure

>The accident left her with hyphema in both eyes

>Despite her reddish black pupils, she was still as beautiful as when I first met her

>"Im sorry too, but it doesn't matter. You're alive babe!"

>Kelly was alive and healthy, and that was all that mattered to you

>You bring her back into a bear hug

>"Please, you don't have to take me to Paris, It wouldn't be fair to you if you have to coddle me an lead me everywhere."

>"Im taking you to Paris, I know you can't see the Eiffel tower, but there's still the gardens, and the finest restaurants. I'll entertain all of the senses you still have."

>"…..even touch?"

>"Especially touch"

>Kelly dries her tears and smiles

>She couldn't see your smile, so you made up for it with a kiss

Was writing something last night and then did some editing this morning and caught this gem of a mistake.

>"As I talked to her, I scratched behind her eyes."

>Scratched behind her eyes.

>>105638

Hope its coming along nicely

>>109004

Discounting science shenanigans from different game series, not really.

Unless one headcanons that the relatively useless Tiny Being's Ring in the Dark Souls series can shrink large people down to human size.

I did this one a few months back. Floundering for the next chapter, tho.

https://www.literotica.com/s/more-than-love-ch-01

So here's the end of Chronicles, part 4 is completed and up.

Find it here on TFT

http://touchfluffytail.org/?story=chronicles-of-the-pax-pandemonium-4

And the other three parts

http://touchfluffytail.org/?author=180

Or on Pastebin, if you prefer it for some reason.

http://pastebin.com/u/ResonantDrunk

This is the last of the "Chronicles" stories, though there are clearly some obvious "Standalone story goes here" shaped holes in the narrative, as some of you have already guessed.

As always, feedback, insults, or whatever is welcomed. I am actually surprised how much I enjoyed writing this, so I hope you've enjoyed reading it.

>>109997

>Charles and Jessie are married and have children.

YES

>Arin totally not being Charon, the one guy that ferries dead people across the river Styx

Interesting.

>The entire second half of the part.

My brain is full of fuck. Seriously, I was constantly confused.

Still, an excellent story.

>>109997

So i'm curious, how old were each of the brothers?

>>110024

>Jessie and charles

Hah, yeah, I was tempted to have their outro seti going 'I still miss you' over a sarcophagus with them carved in bas-relief on the top holding hands but i thought that might not be JUSTICE enough.

>Arin=charon

Hory shet! I didn't even pick up that paralell, i was just using him as a plot framing device!

>confusion

Uh oh… do you mean confused as in 'holy shit I have no idea what's going on aaaargh!' Or 'this is just disjointed and shit' beause if the former, yay, if the latter, maybe I should look at a quick rewrite.

>>110083

Before sam goes to hell Charles would have been mid/late 20, Lloyd a couple years younger, and Samuel about 19

Remember we're talking a feudal setting. They would have lived and breathed nobliesse oblige from the moment they could walk, and were expected to be performing continuance when ordered from 16.

(and as seen in part 2, Lloyd even got a head start on that)

Gents…

Beardicus, if you are here…

There is a site out there where an author writes monstergirl stories. It's not Fluffytail. It's not MGU. It's not in the pastebin hub, and I don't think it was on 1d4chan's Smut Index.

The one story I can remember clearly is one where the leading man picks an unconscious Holstaur or Minotauress off the street, milks her into a tub at her own insistence, then takes a shower with her, presumably fucking when they give up cleaning, I didn't finish. Thing is, I can't remember what it was called, or what the site in question was (some kind of tumblr or blog), but for the fact that it had black color scheme and options laid out on the right.

This might also be connected to that Medusa/Gorgon and Mage story I remember starting months ago.

So, does anyone know what I'm talking about?

>>109997

In all honestly though this was fantastic. I really do hope you continue to make spin offs of the series, though I would like like some things a bit more explained, like Did the spell create true peace between mamano and human? Amaranth I guess is the leader of the Scions of God-Before-Tyris? I'm assuming Lloyd/Lucifer and Kyla formed some new government correct? I also assume Charles became an emperor who united humans and mamono?

The real question is Samuel? What kind of freedom did he really want in the end? Did he do all the shit he did just to give him some freedom? Immortality? To live forever and be whatever he wanted with Yumi? Or just a free spirit? Either way it feels like there's a lot more stories you can tell with Samuel and Yumi now, though that whole 600 year gap at the end might make things confusing/ I'd really rather not have just Samuel and Yumi disappear into the anvils of history to be forgotten

Hopefully you're not done with this universe just yet [spoiler

>>110113

Actually the more I read back into this, the more I think that Sam is still alive and possibly immortal thanks to this quote: Ruby made a face, sliding her tentacles around his legs subconsciously. “But it’s just so cheesy!” Arin laughed. “Only Sam… and maybe Lucifer could tell you what actually happened that day, and I’m pretty sure your brains would melt.” Which still means to be that there's 600 years worth of adventures Sam and Yumi got into. At least that'swhat I think I'm getting from all this

>>110120

>>110113

Ok one final stupid thing did Sam somehow become a god? The fact that he said he can be who he wants for however long he wants sheds some light on this theory. Again its whatever you come up with in the end.

>>110095

I don't know what site you're talking about, but I think I know the story.

http://pastebin.com/7w8A2d7H

>>110170

Ah, yes. This is indeed the story. Thank you.

"Quicksilver," huh…

That site I spoke of, I remembered another thing: It contains both artwork and writing, both done by the site owner in conjunction with a handful of other artists (I think).

>>110113

>true peace

It fixed the birthrate issue, which made the pax obsolete and stopped the mamono from being rapehobos so yes, from a macro level. Cunts are still gonna cunt though so it's not like everything's sumshine and roses.

>leader of the scions

The brides understandably become obsolete, but because they're still descended from ilias They still have an amazing amount of inherent power, even without resonance. Amaranth sort of forms a 'heroes guild', but that's an underlying plot of The War of the Angels which is another story entirely.

>emperor

The Pax is still kind of in place (in theory if not practice) for the majority of Charles' remaining years, so while he's still influential as fuck, he remains only a baron. Seti however goes full alexander and essentially ends up ruling the entire westerlands. I MIGHT tell that one, but since it's technically 'monster boy' as the MC it might not be as well recieved.

>freedom

I thought I made it clear, but maybe sam needed to rant a little more. Everything for him was duty. He covered up for Jeremy because duty. He had sex because duty. He got up in the morning because duty. He took a shit because duty. And unlike Lloyd, he despised it, but he had that loyal obligation to do it anyway. That's why **when tyris told him he wouldn't be remembered, he felt like he could finally tell duty to go fuck itself and actually find out what he really wanted to be, and as a resonant, he was fully able to make that happen.

>God

Lol no. More duty, and sam don't play that shit no more

>Immortal

Maybe. Bruce is so the potential is there.

>>110222

Woah, check my trips. Also whoops, fucked the spoilers. Hotpockets plz fix?

>Kyla and Lucifer

That's clear War of the Angels territory, so I am going to address that. Also why I included the snippet about Lyra and the new Lord Azrael

>>110222

Thanks for explaining, I still think Sam has a lot of story left in him, a chance for him to really forge his own destiny, he doesn't have to be forgotten, but he doesn't play by the rules anymore. And the fact that [spoiler[Arin[/spoiler] still remembers him means he wasn't truly forgotten. I think it was Lloyd no one will remember now that he became what he is now.

>>110226

And the fact that Arin still remembers him 600 years later means he wasn't truly forgotten

>>110226

Lloyd the man? Yeah, but he essentially stopped existing when he became lucifer. And Lucifer is a BIG fucking deal.

As for Arin remembering him, he's one of the very few that does, and really only because he was there.

>>110230

I still don't Sam to be forever forgotten by everyone though. Kind of a sad fate in a way. Like I said, there's so many places Sam can go from here to make his mark on history

>>110232

And of course the biggest question of all: what does Sam want to be?

>>110232

I see your point, and to be honest I did initially slate sam to end up as a sort of Belgarath/Pug type character, but it didn't quite mesh with his personality. Don't worry though, there's plenty of tales of the walking man and his cat left in the idea cabinet. :)

>>110193

it's definitely on fluffytail

>>110237

Glad to hear that. I came to like Sam a lot. I can see him now as a vagabond with his faggot cat waifu. Plus that possible immortality he might have means Sam will see it all, but will do his damndest to stay out of it because of a fear of duty

Yet I fear one day he might be forced to pick a side

>>110222

Question is what happened to Charles + Jessie/Horus + Hathor?

I assumed they made Seti a few okay a lot younger siblings, but since they're technically servants of Ammit, and lesser gods in their own right (or at least according to what I remember of Egyptian lore), would they still be alive too? And if so, what have they been doing for the past six centuries, give or take a few decades other than making love to each other of course.

I feel like their little arc was completed more or less. I just want a little closer considering all of this discussion on what Sam and Lloyd/Lucifer might be up to.

>>110240

>a little closer

a little closure*

>>110240

They lived out long and happy lives, and old and grey they held hands as they drifted off to final sleep. (disgusting, right?) On a secular level they do assist Kyla quite a bit as she dismantles the pax so they're kept busy. Religiously, They do remain in Ammitian doctrine, and I haven't decided if they serve a patron saint role or if they're sort of spectral demigods who bestow blessings.

Remember Ammit's the Goddess of Death and the Underworld in this setting. So whilst she could grant Charles a measure of power, immortality would likely have been seen as anathema to Her.

>>110237

but if the story of Sam isn't over, I could see him assume a new identity, a new persona to start a new life for himself and his pet cat. Old Sam might be forgotten, but "new" Sam could be a sort of silent hero in the night

>>110243

Well so long as they're together in the afterlife, I'm (sort of) happy.

Also who cares if she hates giving someone immortality, Charles and Jessie are meant to be together forever.

>>110246

I mean I know it's weird, but the "old" Sam reminds him too much of what he used to be, despite his freedom. By creating a new person, aka "new", he now can fully fledge out his own destinies and goals.

Like become some sort of powerful ally in war times, but always remember he takes no sides nor is he blind to anyone. He does what he wants to when he wants to. This should be his mark: An unknown hero who helped shaped the face of the new world

Again my two cents

>>110249

>together forever in meatbodies

>not appreciating the eternal and limitless joy they would experience together as Ammit's true and faithful servants in the world of the dead.

Sounds like heresy to me.

>>110251

Is that a challenge? :^)

>>110281

>most powerful resonant in the known world

Every resonant has the same amount of 'power', it's the depth of understanding of the Logos which (theoretically) determines what they can do with it. It's like giving a speech. Your eloquence is defined by your command of the language, not how loud you can yell.

And sometimes the Logos decides to play silly buggers and do things on its own… Another thing in my 'to be explored' pile.

As for Sam doing a road warrior gig, I LOVE the idea, but I'm trying to think of a scenario in which he's not just going to solve problems by dropping a passing asteroid on the person who pisses him off first.

>You should be happy, haven't read anything this engaging in a while

Awww, fucking shucks… I'm blushing and everything. Cheers man. :)

>>110287

Further on the subject of resonance, think of the difference between 'magic' (incorporating mamono or divine granted power) as actually channelling and controling a force within and through yourself, and resonance as telling an external, unexplained and unseen entity what you want it to do for you. Magic is intuitive, and Resonance is logical.

>>110288

Which also means, kill a resonant's ability to concentrate, and you've essentially hobbled them. A 'magician' could potentially still do shit on instinct alone.

(Damn I should really learn to finish my thoughts before posting.)

>>110287

>Your eloquence is defined by your command of the language, not how loud you can yell.

Well Sam is already pretty damn powerful as he is right now. As the years go on he's only going to get much more stronger I think

>>110288

And if there's one final thing that confuses me, is why was Sam really chosen? Couldn't someone like Bruce do what Sam did? Or Jaques? Or did Yumi just convince Mau he was the near candidate for the job because of his duty?

>>110294

**right

Fuck I hate being stuck on my phone. I got like one final tl;dr coming in

>>110294

That was the whole point of Tyris's answer to Amaranth when she asked what Sam was He just happened to be in the right place at the right time. Yumi only heard about him initially because the Council of Matriarchs got the wind put up them when the Logos annihilated that entire clan of wolves during Samuel's awakening back in part 1. (The thing about the Logos sometimes acting of its own volition, that was it's version of "Mine now, fuck off")

Any other resonant could have initiated the 'repair' (Gonna have to give it a name with some suitable gravitas for post-Chronicles stories hehe.) and remember, he had to basically get a thumping great percentage of the remaining resonants to help him with it. Sam just happened to tick all the boxes as well as be the most convenient option, there is literally nothing which sets him apart. Again, Tyris's "Just a man at the right place, with the right ability, at the right time […] But around such men, worlds are compelled to turn."

>>110296

See that's what kind of saddens me a bit. To me it makes it feel like Sam isn't all that special, not like Lloyd and Charles were in the long run, he's just too….normal and forgettable. If any other resonant could have done it Sam really is just some normal resonant in the end, destined to fade into history. And finally I can continue that tl;dr final rant, damn Black Friday sale keeping me away

Sam needs to really "cast aside" who he once was. Sam Caladon should be no more after this. That Sam was someone "normal" just some average resonant, someone bound to "duty". Sam should "reborn" himself into what he always wanted to be, to finally forge his own destiny and be remembered in the anvils of history, not as Sam Caladon, but as the Sam he was meant to be. I've really grown to take a liking to Sam as he just seems the most well like character out of all of them and the most unique, most saying the others are bad, but just that Sam stands out the most

And as time goes on assuming the theory that Sam is immortal now, he has all the time in the world to fully master the Logos, even though it can act on its own, he can still have a great deal of control over it

With Yumi now at his side I can see Sam going on some Road Warrior like adventure, going across the world forging his own path and his own goals. Eventually he'll end up getting caught into drama he can't escape from. And of course he won't be pulling a Deus Ex Machina by just dropping meteors from the sky and winning battles, but he'll have a sort of advantage, and over time he just becomes more and more in tuned with the Logos

He could also end up hiding his identity around certain important people. So when shit does hit the fan and he ends doing something important and someone like Lloyd/Lucifer ask who he is, he'll turn around and say "Someone you once knew" and then leave

Fuck that was one tl;dr rant. Sorry I tend to get carried away about this shit. Point is, don't let Sam being forgotten by anyone. Give him someone unique. Don't let him be some average resonant. Give him a destiny, an end goal he strives for

“For all the wonders yet to come, the world will not remember him. But around such men, worlds are compelled to turn.”

But couldn't this mean that Evem though at the moment Sam might not be remembered, maybe years down the line he'll do something to cement his place in time? Or maybe i'm looking into this wrong yet again? Ugh so many questions im asking

>>91199

'This page has been removed'.

Where is it?

So a while back I promised a CYOA featuring Australian-themed MGs. I've sketched it out roughly but am wondering if it would be worth just slice-of-lifeing it as a regular peice of writefaggotry due to the multiple existing cyoas and the potential for board fuckery due to scootmoot's fuckery with infinite.

What would you prefer, heroes?

>>110902

Writefagging would probably be better.

>>110902

I'd either wait a bit for shit with infinity to settle or turn it into regular writefaggotry. My biggest concern would be all the fuckery with infinite.

>>110907

>>110908

Dammit, now I've got to come up with a plot and an appropriate waifu. Fuckers. :)

>>110922

Well, you've got…

>sleepy, cranky gamer girl koala,

>fun loving, carefree, independent kangaroo girl

>Curious, playful and docile emu harpy who is dangerous when angered…

There is a lot of cool stuff you can do with Aussie MGs. It is uncharted territory.

>>110923

what about drop bears?

>>110923

Yeah, but it's the PICKING one!

Although, after spending the afternoon trying to remort a 2nd person path style cyoa into a third person 'everyone gets a waifu' I think I might just shelf it and do some little SoLs instead.

>>110972

Probably not because it would steal the comfy from the normal koalas. I did plan to expand their vulnerability to all the aussie mgs though.

>>110923

someone's already done a MGE writeup of a koala grill. can't remember where I seen it. highlights I remember are being generally friendly if a bit lazy, the ability to find booze no matter where they go with any means conceivable, and that you need to "FOOK THEIR SOPPING STRAYA CUNT" when they hit the sauce hard. wish I could find it

>>109997

for some strange reason I keep seeing Sam becoming like some Doctor Who esquelike figure

Or at least him gaining control of some kind of power and not knowing what to do with it

>>112362

Stop reading my wips :p

>>112362

Then this damn song came to mind for something about Sam and Yumi if we are going in some time lord like direction

>>112806

I think you may be looking for the feels thread >>77680

The Literary Offenses of Fenimore Cooper is basically essential reading for anyone wanting to write well (or just looking for a good laugh, Mark Twain knew how to take down a motherfucker).

http://twain.lib.virginia.edu/projects/rissetto/offense.html

sorry for the doublepost, thought writefags in this thread might find it interesting.

http://pastebin.com/SBapt6Ts

Maledom Manticore smut I did for the Manticore thread involving a tailpussy getting gently dommed by her rape weary husband. Did some corrections and also tried to clean up any mistakes I missed while posting initially.

>>112806

Runt did it first, you're literally as pathetic as an Alp

Stinkeypedes should just go die like the disgusting worms they are~

>First day in college, moved into new town away from parents few weeks ago before the school started again.

>Living alone first time ever.

>Before that had gone to private human school, build to protect the humans from monster raping.

>Mainly middle class children, like everyone else put there by parents wanting to protect their innocence.

>Having heard how messed up some become after monster rape, glad for it.

>Unfortunately there is no human only colleges.

>Wearing Megadeth hoodie and jeans I stand out from rest of the humans easily.

>Everybody else was wearing sweatpants and t-shirts.

>Learned in private school to stay hidden in plain sight.

>The school fortunately has 69% human students.

>School was still built around monster girls.

>On the class there was only 7 monster girls for 23 males.

>Chesire, Centaur, arachne sisters, lizardgirl, two manticores.

>Expecting them to jump on somebody any minute based on the stories they were very quiet and reserved.

>Even though silent type, never had problems with making friends.

>It was no different this time, easily making friends with 4 other human males.

>2 of them had gone to private human school also.

>2 other were not as fortunate, but apparently nothing bad happened to them.

>Atleast based on the surface.

>Lunch room was no different from previous school though lot bigger.

>Humans on their own tables expect from several monster girls with their human mates.

>Most of them didn't look any different from human couples you had seen.

>Some of them did look tired with slight look of fear on their face.

>First day had gone well.

>Tired, the first few classes of the next day had gone slowly as you had expected.

>After morning classes, I had urge to go to the bathroom.

>Not expecting anybody to be here.

>Bathroom looked empty, I get to the stall before able to do anything else I hear two girly giggles.

>"I knew this was perfect spot for prey" "You are always right sister".

>The two arachne sisters were there laughing with their hands almost covering their mouth.

>I felt heart jumping to the throat, before able to do anything else I feel web hitting hands and legs, sticking them to the wall.

>"First snatch of the day…" "This soon, we will surely win the prize this year." "10 extra points for a virgin." Sisters were finishing each other sentences.

>The other sister gets down to the face level, feeling her bipedals grabbing my pants and with slight movement of hand opening the belt.

>Pulling the jeans off just as fast.

>Sitting there helplessly, I open mouth to scream before anything comes out the web hits the mouth muzzling it.

>"You won't need your mouth." "Nobody is going to help."

>The other arachne sisters opens her mouth to say something but suddenly she goes quiet.

>Then I hear loud sound.

>>115270

pedipalps*

>>115270

>megadeth

Metallica is better at least up until the Black Album

also i suggest posting this in the greentext story thread rather than here, this is more for shilling your paste/bin/TFT/pbworks page and asking for advice than anything else

>>112362

OK so I was intending on taking a break from the 'Pax' universe, but this minty fucker's buttered me up enough that I've started on the next lot sooner than I expected. I have room for one more waifu, to be paired off against a pretty 'straight' MC. (Noble, altruistic, martially talented but a bit thick.)

Open to suggestions, I originally thought a Minotaur but I think I need some variation from 'always cowtits, all the time.' Beardicus plz no bully

So, thoughts?

>>117395

Lamia or Hellhound might be interesting. A salamander would be as well since the MC is supposed to be martially talented, and salamanders love a man who can beat them in combat.

>>117497

Have to say this. Would make the most logical sense if you think about it.

>>117395

By next lot you mean new story with new characters within the same universe?

Still, in the future I would love to see Sam go full on Doctor Who. That would be pretty incredible.

>>117497

Salamander I think works best

From the Drunken wastrel who brought you The Chronicles of the Pax, comes a new series of self-indulgent expansive writefaggotry.

Tales of the Walker: Valhael

http://touchfluffytail.org/?story=tales-of-the-walker-valhael-1

As usual, the rest of my shit can be found here.

http://touchfluffytail.org/?author=180

I will eventually put this on pastebin but I have to edit the formatting and I really can't be arsed right now.

As usual, feedback, critiques, thoughts, lemme have em.

>>120217

Reading story now. Make sure you repost this once we move to infinity next. Your post will not be carried over

>>120217

Really enjoyed it. Good to see old faces again in the story. Although one thing bugs me Tyris told Walker/Sam he would never be remembered in history. Did he mean this about Walker when he was still Sam? Or did this apply to Walker as well?

>>120217

GEE I WONDER WHAT KIND OF SNEK LYSSA IS

>>120295

Also curious to see how Yumi's pregnancy is going to play into all of this. She's probably almost due by now, and I keep wondering if she's going into labor during a really bad situation?

I did a thing again: http://pastebin.com/p5iWPN9E

>>120250

Noted, I was gonna use the opportunity to re-shill all my shit anyway :p

>>120295

>history

Lemme put it this way, there's never going to be a statue in a public square of him, but it's highly likely that bards are singing songs about "That walkin' man and his faggotcats"

>>120302

I KNOW RIGHT?! :p

>>120331

>childbirth

>The ultimate test of sod's law

>Ever not Happening at the worst possible time

Oh anon you so silly. :)

>>120357

Christmas themed cowtits… Mah nigga.

>>120419

No one will remember Sam at all, and I think Sam wants it that way. I don't expect Walker to be given a statue or anything. Though I do hopefully want to see him go down as a legend, or at the very least find what his true purpose in life is, what his final end game will be. But all in due time

I wrote some stuff about a monstergirl-ish demon a while back. I guess I can post it here.

Part 1 http://pastebin.com/qGeF3sKB

Part 2 http://pastebin.com/uuXLab0V

https://archive.is/dApLB Archived.

Is that TinySwordsman thing still being written or nah?

I wrote a little something for a maid thread but it went down right after I posted it. I might continue it later.

Hello /monster/, im a kikianon, and, well…

I have boy problems

>Be a maid for hire

>I needed work so I put an ad for my services on craiglist

>I get an offer from a guy who lives in the same city as me

>He needed his appartment clean as a whisle in a few days

>The pay was decent so I took him up on it

>Turns out he lived only 10 minutes away from myself

>When I knocked on his door he just yelled the door's unlocked

>As soon as I walked in it smelled like stale chips and beer

>My client is playing some shooter game

>"Um, excuse me?"

>"I can't talk to much, Im in the middle of a game."

>"Are you Rollie1988?"

>"I am."

>"Whats you're name?'

>"Rollie."

>"What?"

>"I said my name is Rollie."

>"Ok, um, could you, put down the game for a second?"

>"Just start wherever–I'll kill you motherfucker!– Wherever you want, just do the living room last, thanks."

>He didn't even turn to face me

>His appartment is an absolute disaster

>his kitchen counter has an open bag of chips, and two bottles of pop that aren't even emtpy yet

>the sink, recycling, and trash can are all way too full

>there are beer bottles everywhere

>Somehow there are cases for video games littered everywhere too

>And there is way too much dust

>If Rollie wasn't living here i'd think someone would literally suffocate from all of this, pardon my language, freaking dust

>I just start with the dishes and litter, I'll leave the dust for tommorow

>The entire time Rollie was on his playbox or whatever they're called

>After an hour the game got shut off

>I walked over to him out of curiosity

>What I saw the cutest man I have ever met in life sleeping on the couch

>He had a thick beard covering a handsome face. His shirt was stretched so tight over his musceles that I barley noticed the grease stains on it

>If he had clean clothes, a decent haircut, and a lack of chips stuck in his beard, I was sure he would have been a 9/10

>For a second, I had forgotten how discusting his home was

>He looked so cute sleeping, but I still had a job to do

>A few hours later I had at least made a dent in his mess

>I figured he had woken up, mainly because his game was turned back on

>It was around 6 when he had got off his couch

>"Wow, you're really good, the place looks amazing"

>I was flattered, even though I hadn't picked up all of the beer bottles yet

>"It's getting a little late, you can come back tommorow, and before I forget"

>He tries to hand me a handful of tens

>"But, im not finished yet."

>"Ahh don't worry, I'll give you some for everyday." He then flashes a healthy grin at me

>I can feel the heat in my cheeks

>"N-no, it's fine, i'll take it when Im done."

>"Aight, whatever."

>He then goes back to the couch and starts playing again

>"Lock the door on your way out, thanks!"

He's sooooo cute! How can I keep visiting him once the job is done? I'll post some more once I complete the job.

>>122433

this story would be perfect for the greentext feels thread >>77680

>>122701

If you're just begining, don't do smutfics. Its like trying to draw porn without learning out to do anatomy first. Try practicing by doing short, 1 page stories. Also, don't try to write without an idea first, you'll be stuck there trying to come up with something for an hour. Just wait for an idea to come to you, if that makes any sense.

>>115270

I wish anon would continue this

Tangentially related to writefagging, kind of a long shot, but does anyone else use Plover?

http://stenoknight.com/wiki/Main_Page

Would anyone happen to have a dictionary with monstergirl species names in it?

http://pastebin.com/FfyQ4xDV

Some faggots dared me to write something so I did. Shut them up. It's real short, but I guess it's MG related.

sage for small time

Does anyone know what happened to Blammer?

For now keep posting your stories here. Endchan is kind of…iffy

>>122427

Styxx said it's on the cards a few weeks back.

>>122433

Moar plz.

>>123199

No. That is not my fetish. :(

>>123550

I don't know. I have most of his stuff saved or bookmarked, although I might be missing a few things.

>>112806

I wonder if anyone here realizes that this actually happened with a r9k beta male.

>>126423

Its that time again

been digging through some notes I made while i browsed, found this link.

http://pastebin.com/Ms20LSk3

Somewhat weird but satisfying story with a bit of femdom. Anyone can recommend more like that?

God I hope we get an update of the Pax series soon.

This might be of interest to any writefags here:

http://monstergirlencyclopedia.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:413186

>Short Story - Submit a short story (2,000 - 5,000 words) about one of our lovely monster girls and have a chance to win a copy of Butter-T's artbook and a free art commission from Luth

inb4 wiki shit

Time to shill out my pastebin.

Hope you enjoy the read. Fair warning though, it is a feels story.

http://pastebin.com/VbtNCp2T

Please be soft in your bullying. I'm just starting out in the writefagging scene.

>>128150

Can't a Hero have a fuckin holiday?!

I'm on it as we speak :p

>>128088

Fap fics will be discarded? What is the point then? This is friggin mge, it's a porn setting!

>>128698

I mean, the limit's >5k and I guess they want you to focus more on telling a good story. Not that you can't put fucking in a good story, but I think they don't want it to be the focus.

I have no response to that restriction being in a porn setting, though.

>>128698

I can sort of see the point in a general writer's contest.

As far as any particular reader's appreciation, the factor that decides like 90% of whether a fap story is shit or gold is how well it fit that particular reader's set of fetishes. So outside of contests that are already limited to a fandom of some very specific fetish, fapfics would basically be playing the lottery at guess the general fetish list of the judges.

How do you guys deal with burnout? I've been doing a long running project on here and I have an end set and I know where the rest of the story is going to go, but I'm just…stuck on how to get there so it takes me a lot longer than it should for me to finish my story.

>>130360

If it's a case of point A to point B, I guess you need to ask yourself if you're willing to take detours in your road to the end, or if you want the final destination. If it's CYOA, use a gentle hand to guide the users to make choices while advancing the plot, whether or not this means you're technically on rails with things happening, or you move the random suggestions closer to the end, you need to make sure you still enjoy it.

I think the worst possible thing in a CYOA, which I assume is what you're talking about, is to get so involved and off track with the suggestions that you write yourself into a ditch.

Now, if it's just a story on your own terms, then either take a break and re-evaluate things, or buck up, because you shape the destiny here. Cut pieces out while tying up loose ends and get your ass to the finish if that's what it takes.

>>130360

I'm extremely green to writefagging but I've recently burned myself out on a story and have been dealing with it by listening to music that sets a mood I want to portray and try to write daily to keep the sparks going.

Maybe this is wrong but I just thought it might help, it seems to help me out a little bit.

>>130360

I use my writing as anti-burnout treatment in the first place for for when work/personal life gets to me. If I feel like my hobbies (gaming,reading,tv) are suddenly not fun anymore, my unfinished stories are waiting to be picked up. By the time I start getting creatively dry, those other hobbies seem fun again. Just keep cycling right than and don't stress if things are going slowly.

During breaks from writing, sometimes get ideas like little scene details - jot them down on my phone as I get them. Usually be the time I get back to writing, there is like 2 pages of little ideas which I only need to sort into a sequence and than I have a neat row of stepping stones to continue my writing by simply turning those little scenes into proper paragraphs.

>>130476

Also if it's a tiny dry bit, like you have a page or two of joining text to do in order to get awesome bit a to mesh with awesome bit b, just hammer that motherfucker. Force one word then the next, and you'll be shocked how quickly you can get there. Then you can go back and re-edit it later when you're revising.

I heard about that writing contest yesterday and wrote out a quick, 3k word story. If it wins, cool, if not, then it's not like this was some kind of magnum opus. I don't know if it's even any good, but eh.

Since somehow people found it on my pastebin anyway, here we go: http://pastebin.com/rwfDMf8n

>>130689

It's solid work ace, nice to see a jinko in something.

I think I'm going to dust off the cobwebs on a jiang-shi story for the contest. Hopefully that will get me out of my slump.

>>130394

>>130476

>>130481

>>130392

Thanks for all the advice guys, I'll try everything you guys suggest and see how I feel.

>>130703

Thank.

Short stories are kind of the best for getting out of slumps too because you can just bullshit someone out pretty quickly and have fun with it.

Which is why we have basically everything on that pastebin.

ERMEGERD! MOAR PAX-FAGGOTRY.

http://touchfluffytail.org/?story=tales-of-the-walker-cocytus

Hope you likey, this one is where I introduce the waifu I asked you guys about last year.

>>130860

still confused about the plot and fuck Azrael for what he did

also oh boy salamander

>>130860

Reading now, great to see another chapter from you

>>130860

Once again another good part to the story. You're probably my favorite writefag

I am curious about that last paragraph though. Hopefully more will get explained soon. Also hopefully more Walker screen time.

>>130964

for the next chapter I meant

>>130689

Wow, that was really good.

>>131001

Focus less on the act and more on the pleasure and emotions of the two doing the act. It's good to have a description of going on, but at the end of the day, we know a penis is just thrusting into a vagina.How the couple reacts is the most important thing you are trying to convey.

Try not to directly refer to something as penis and vagina, it just seems awkward. Womanhood, snatch, pussy and manhood, dick, cock are examples. On the flip side, don't be too over descriptive. "And then his orgasm bloomed inside of her as though it was a white explosion of fireworks" in other words I'd try to stray from awkward metaphors/similes.

Practice, of course, is the most important thing. I don't consider my first couple of smut fics my best, but I learned a lot from them.

Hope that helps.

>>131001

Focus less on the act and more on the pleasure and emotions of the two doing the act. It's good to have a description of going on, but at the end of the day, we know a penis is just thrusting into a vagina.How the couple reacts is the most important thing you are trying to convey.

Try not to directly refer to something as penis and vagina, it just seems awkward. Womanhood, snatch, pussy and manhood, dick, cock are examples. On the flip side, don't be too over descriptive. "And then his orgasm bloomed inside of her as though it was a white explosion of fireworks" in other words I'd try to stray from awkward metaphors/similes.

Practice, of course, is the most important thing. I don't consider my first couple of smut fics my best, but I learned a lot from them.

Hope that helps.

>>131001

I don't write much smut either, but I suppose take >>131010 to heart and remember, look at what you wrote afterword and ask,

"Does this sound cringy?"

If so, maybe you should change it.

>>130689

Oh and the subject is Jinko. I should have put there on there.

>>130919

>confused

Shit, thats no good, what's confusing you? I'd be more than happy to cliffs notes if it means you enjoy it more.

>fuck azrael

Yeah, I am going into it in the next book but Azrael was a really, really bad choice for Lyra. For all his machinations and airs of complexity, he's an unsubtle little climber who only has the capacity to percieve one worldview at a time.

for instance, when Barbatos the goetic was leading him down the garden path with Abbadon, not once did he stop and think 'hang on, for him to be here means Maou beat the everloving PISS out of him… maybe listening to the crazy titan thing isn't the best idea.' But nope, he saw huge, he saw powerful, he saw an offer to get in on that, which is all he needs to turn on you.

>>131030

it's more of the fact that the arc isnt completely done yet

it's kind of like with metal gear solid: you need to play all of the games to get the overall story arc and references

>>130860

We all like waifus and everything, but I think it's about time you gave the fans what they really want. More Jeremy.

Jeremy fighting, Jeremy fucking, Jeremy standing on top of a hill thinking about life, Jeremy sitting down in his comfy throne, Jeremy in one thousand years time when everyone realises he is the Son of the Sun and that he was sent to Earth to suffer for their monster loving sins, Jeremy eating an icecream, etc.

>>131049

>Jeremy

>Throne

Laughingmanticores.jpg

I know you're funposting, but seriously. One of the Ammitian cultists in Caladon would have lightened him by the weight of a heart the first night of his rule if Lani hadn't caught him in patricide.

(Also this post is giving me the impression people are thinking Azrael=Jeremy, which is totally NOT the case. Jeremy had absolutely zero Scion blood in him at all.)

>>131091

But he's literally the perfect anime man.

He gets my fujo heart fluttering.

>>131114

He's 'baby fuck' with better hair, dunno what kind of anime you're watching…

>fujo

…or you're just taking a roundabout way in telling me you think my stuff is trash, in which case please, go into more detail. I'm a big guy, 4u I can handle it. :)

>>131030

Not that guy, but I think cliff notes would help people who are a little lost with things.

>>131144

No problem. You lost on anything in particular or was that just a 'that sounds like a good idea' post?

>>131152

More or less it sounds like a good idea. You're building a really great world and your stories are really enjoyable.

Though I would like to see more of Walker/Sam in focus. Yumi pretty much gave off the hint that Sam was pretty much getting tired of adventures over the centuries, and it does show in his personality somewhat. I do wonder if Sam really does still believe in freedom and all that and not being bound to duty?

>>131132

Nah m80, just having a bit of autistic fun. Pax is without a doubt the best fantasy story in monstergirl dom tbh. Keep it up bro.

>>131460

I know I'm late to reply, but I really did enjoy it a lot. I'm a sucker for breastfeeding from a Holstaur

>>133258

>Gallipoli

I got a theme for your story. Not really, I was just reminded of the song.

If the guys yearning for sappy shit are still around, is there any specific kind of cute stuff you're looking for? I write mostly for other people, so I'd like some ideas.

>>133414

Teenage monmusu getting 'the talk' or other sage advice from her parents.

Bonus points if you don't default the dad into a stuttering moron with a permanosebleed.

>>133414

Not really cute, but still fairly sappy.

Teenage guy and his dad move into a predominantly monster neighborhood after drunk driver accident. Emotional mess of a teenager being "put back together" by some of the neighborhood girls (who he wants little to do with, if anything), while his dad is trying to exercise good judgment on the older side of the dating scene.

>>133457

This actually sounds like a good premise… how 'teenage' are we thinking? First year of university or guts of highschool?

>>133457

Sounds great to me

>>133474

Same guy (mobile user). I was thinking late HS to College Fish.

anyone know where i can find the -succubus with a fetish- greentext and/or the -running laps- greentext?

>>133867

i dont have the succubus one, but here's Running Laps: http://pastebin.com/A5V24NtH

>>133414

I sorta have an idea, an advanced machinist (computerised lathes and mills) ends up finding a harshly treated living doll at some estate sale or something. he takes a liking to it and begins to teach himself some of the traditional crafts (woodworking, painting, sewing, etc.) in order to help repair her.

>>133258

Is there rape?

And I'm not talking about Turkish mines :^).

>>134460

ah when the ultimate weapon backfires… that 1/100000 chance.

> write requests

kind of like an 70 noir with monster girls

they try to act like good 70's girls but can't come over the fact that they want to ravage men.

I need some assistance. I wanted to write a sandworn piece for the mge wiki writing contest but I'm having a hard time making a sandworm story interesting. I was thinking about having a guy get lured into her maw by having the cute girl part naked in the desert and luring him in because he's afraid she's been robbed . The problem is, how do I make a monster that tries to keep her partner contained inside of herself interesting and how can i give her character?

I was thinking of having her aggressively assert they need to mate to make babies but have the mc assert that love isn't just seeing the first stranger you meet and forcing them to be your mate. Maybe play with the Sandworm's controlling ,over protective nature?

>>134753

The best way would be to come up with a personality for the sandworm. Is she shy? Confident? Seemingly okay in large groups of people, but is timid when alone with the object of her affections?

Actually giving the monstergirl a (believable) personality can help you write actions that she performs, or how she interacts with other characters since then you have a reason to say "this is why she's doing this".

I have a question: Does anyone really care about stories that aren't romantic and/or lovey?

>>134852

I mean, by nature monstergirl stories tend towards being waifu stories or at least involving fugging but if somebody wrote a good adventure story involving monstergirls I'd read it.

>>134852

I tried to write an adventure-ish MG story a few months ago, then got bored of writing altogether. That being said, I'd be very interested in monster girls interacting with other monster girls.

>>135092

That's actually a good idea, thanks. Also, what's that pic from? It's cute as fuck and I've seen it everywhere. Girl on the right and her quirky dance is nice too.

>>135117

I honestly really don't know, I've been looking myself.

If i may make a request, I kinda would like to see how >>134453 may play out, but I can't write for shit.

>>135117

>I honestly really don't know, I've been looking myself.

>If i may make a request, I kinda would like to see how >>134453 may play out, but I can't write for shit.

>>135117

Muromi.

>>134856

I just think there's so much more that can be done with monsters, but people limit themselves so much.

>>135147

>I just think there's so much more that can be done with monsters, but people limit themselves so much.

True. It would be interesting to read a monstergirl story focused more on adventure than waifus.

>>135147

Thank you kindly. I will read it soon.

>>135134

I'd love to indulge your request, unfortunately I've always stuck to "write what you know". And none of those are things I know of. Sorry about that.

Speaking of write what you know, how would you feel about monsters in a band? What instruments would specific mamono play/do funny things with?

>>135154

ogre/oni-drums

Dullahan-violin, or some other classic instrument. (electric violin you wish)

harpy- sax(good lung capacity I guess)

satyros-flute/pipe

lamia-Guitar or base I guess.

spidergirl- piano/keyboard

cheshire- cymbals/triangle (some obscure meme-tier instrument)

Holstaurus- base/acoustic guitar

cyclops- singer/lead guitarist

I guess kinda play their roles I suppose. but do put a few of them against their type to stay interesting

I may also be only listing my favorites though

>>135167

>arachne-type on drums

>eight separate kick drums

dear god that would be insane

>135197

true, but I would think that an arachne would prefer something a bit fancier, like a string instrumentHUE

also, drums are kinda a tough guy/gal instrument. unless said arachne is some kinda biker-girl character

>>135197

Octo kick, ouch. Considering how fast we can already go with double bass pedals through heel-taps, eight would be hardly decipherable, which might work for some sounds. Then again, spider girls don't have heels. Still though.

I'm still imagining a Yeti or other fluffy-handed girl trying out a string instrument and muting herself by accident. Man, I wish I were an artist.

no new stories?

>>137723

I haven't been able to find the motivation to write one even though I have a few ideas for stories although most of them are generic smut, plus I'm in the middle of college classes so I have homework.

I was planning on running a CYOA near the end of March (that I originally planned to run in December but Pig-kun fucked with the site too many times) once classes get out for like a week anyway, and maybe then I'll get some motivation to write more again.

>>137723

Working on it…

>>139100

Dot a cute, and so is Felicity.

>>139100

Fuck yes! Gonna start reading it shortly

>>139169

>>139100

Finished reading the chapter. Really enjoyable as usual man. This is really becoming my favorite monster girl series to read. You got a lot of talent I'm not gonna lie about that.

And so Azrael is dead, serves him right for killing his wife. The Dragon apparently managed to kill The God easily, and now that Azrael awoke him, The Dragon is now going to start reigning hell all over the world. Corvus I'm guessing is maybe a reincarnation of a God or The God, and that the final battle is going to be between him and The Dragon. I still got this feeling Sam is going to play a major role in all of this, more than he thinks. The fact that Tyris reached out to him and told him to keep his friends safe says a lot. That and Lloyd seemingly not giving him more information means that Tyris wants Sam to find out what it is he's going to do.

One more thing, I'm starting to realize what Tyris meant by Sam not being remembered. I'm assuming Tyris can see into the future, much like Maou did. So Tyris knew Sam was going to fake his death, and because of that, all the scriptures would say Sam was truly dead. The fact that Tyris reached out to Sam seems to prove that Tyris still has plans for him. While we all know Sam isn't going to get a statue, he is going to be remembered throughout history as Walker. So obviously Sam's role going forward is going to be quite major

>>139181

>Azrael

Yeah, I was tempted to let that exchange drag out a bit, but he's just called up something that ate an elder incarnation of The God for breakfast and I didn't think The Dragon was the sort to wax lyrical when food is being annoying.

>Tyris can see into the future

Well he IS God after all… :p

>Corvus

The Logos only THINKS Corvus is a God. I'll be honest I haven't quite established what's required to assume the mantle of a Divine. Remember Charles was the only mortal (that we know about) to have been offered it, and even that was just Ammit testing his devotion to Jessie. Even Tyris was essentially an archdemon by the time He Ascended

>>139347

Are we ever going to find out why Lyssa is so special? And I'll be damned if everyone in this story doesn't end up with their current lover either. I like happy endings.

>>139372

>Why is she so special

Yep. :)

sage for deliberately vague reply

I need an opinion writefriends.

I want to do a story(eventually) where monsters have assimilated into human culture around a Victorian age, ie lots of clashing of high libido with the precieved sin of enjoying pleasures of the flesh. I wanted the main character to be a gentleman who falls in love with a noble's daughter. Once a full moon, her father allows her to prowl the estate and indulge in her animalistic instincts. Eager to see his daughter married, and knowing she loves the gentlemen, he invites him to sup with him on the night of a full moon, and the locks him outside and at the loving mercy of his daughter. Now the question is, should I make her a manticore or a hellhound? I wanted something predatory. Hellhound would be funnier to see blending into a regal society, but manticores have a fine air of sophistication about them. I'd also take suggestions on different girls if you give me a good argument

( I know hellhound and manticores see a lot of exposure, but I think they'd be the best fit.)

>>139814

Having a "regal" monstergirl would definitely fit in with the Victorian theme, but it would also be funny to see one of the less "proper" monstergirls try to act like her parents.

As for the actual girl, I think a hellhound or manticore would work well. For something rather difficult to write, but the end result being hilarious, would be to have the monstergirl be a wurm. Onis, jinkos, minotaurs, and any other "macho" monstergirl that partakes in physical activities like sports or hunting would be interesting too.

>>139814

Make her a wight.

Hey, how exactly do you keep motivation up when it comes to writing?

I've been having a bad habit of quitting partway through writing, then deleting everything related to what i wrote in disappointment.

>>140680

I'm not entirely sure, since I can't seem to find the confidence right now to write the bits between the smut parts. Maybe in a month or two I will…

For now at least you could either carry a notepad around with you and write down ideas for stories based on what you see in the real world, or remember all of that and then type it into a word document on your computer.

>>140680

Oh you'll do that. You'll think up a scenario and go 'that's awesome!' Then put it on paper and go 'that's shit.'

I usually find sketching out an obscenely rough timeline serves to weed out those ideas quicker than actually starting the story. Plus if it's good, you've got the beginnings of a narrative backbone right there.

>>140703

I have a very… opposite problem. I generally take an idea and then just keep writing and writing until I somehow form a cohesive story out of it. At the very least it's connecting the dots to important parts I'd like in the story anyway…

Basiclaly, yes, doing barebones ideas and storyboards helps, but if you want to sit down and just… just type whatever comes to mind, you also find some really cool stuff.

>>140746

Personally, I don't find cyborgs to be "Monster" as opposed to androids or an actual monstergirl getting a prosthetic, but I doubt anyone would argue about it, especially if it's a feels trip. Go ahead and write what you want.

Speaking of writing, I'm jonesing to write a short story and I'm lazy to search through this thread, if anyone has a quick suggestion for something preferably not smut I could power that out. Although likely this weekend unless I tire of my current project and need a break

>>140746

Cyborgs are /monster/ enough for me.

>>140754

A man and his oni waifu during the prohibition.

For people who don't know; cyborgs are just humans with parts replaced with machinery. Adam Jensen is a cyborg.

Androids are robots with a human-like appearance. Aegis is a android, gynoid for technicality.

Just because a human girl replaces her arm with an automatic onahole hand doesn't make her a monster girl. It just makes her sexy.

>>139100

I was thinking back to this story and I got to the thinking. What if The Dragon was actually doing the right thing? What if in its mind it was trying to save humanity and mamono from something far, far worse. Maybe something that happens far the future, something Tyris and Maou cannot see, and that its so bad destroying everything is the only way to stop this event from happening. I don't know I just like the idea of The Dragon being more than just evil, like it has good intentions secretly and that maybe he's the good one rather than say Tyris

>>141673

There will be no mass effect multiverse scrub brush in my trash fantasy, thank you very much!

>>141688

We're not talking about synthetics killing organics so they won't create synthetics who will kill organics, its more or less like a villain who is actually in the right, or seems reasonable when you listen to him. Kind of like Ozymandias in Watchmen.

>>139881

She would be good for a Victorian setting, but not this story. I want a more predator/prey thing juxtaposing their relationship.Wights feel more like they entice men to be with them with regal elegance instead of pursuing them with brute strength.

>>139829

I might do a Jinko. Imagine a Jinko in one of those beautiful chinese dresses in high society. Plus I have not written a Jinko, and I have written hellhounds twice and manticores once.

>>134303 Part 2

>>139069 Part 3

I started my story around the middle of Part 2, and it is currently being worked on in Part 3.

Enjoy.

>>141743

I figured that since there aren't many stories about wights, I would request one.

>>141905

http://pastebin.com/kV65TcTr

This is a story I did with a wight. Not sure how well received it was, but it's about a poor medical intern and a wight mortician.

It's fine. Written well, and begging for a sequel.>>141936

>>141936

You can't just leave it at that.

>>141936

Maybe little too gloom, coming from a guy that likes them slightly edgy.

>>141936

Needs a sequel, but very good. Actually didn't think it was that dark. I like how it points out suicide isn't a good option most of the time because when you die, your absence affects others.

>>142043

>>142012

>>142009

>>141940

I originally wrote it for the suicide thread on the topic of how an MG would deal with a suicidal person. I left it in the dark after that but I dunno, I guess I could write something up at some point.

I've been debating with myself as to whether I should do this or not, but whatever.My name is Orzh. Been write fagging awhile on here in the shadows, but I've gotten confident enough in my writing to give myself a name. I'm the guy working on the Nerd Orc in >>97265 and a couple other things on here.

Also shilling my pastebin because if I'm going to be a jew, might as well go all the way. http://pastebin.com/u/gundam80

I made my pastebin a long time ago and didn't realize you had to get some special pastebin pro bullshit to change your name.

>>142297

*Nerdy Orc Story

>>142297

>Worker Ant and Pet For A Day

I knew I'd seen that writing style before! Good shit man!

>>142297

Well hello there. Your story about Lorka and Thomas is grade A stuff man, love it.

>>142297

Dammit man, I want to see the conclusion where Thomas and Lorka try for a baby after getting married of course, can't have a child out of wedlock now can we?

>>142315

Awww, I'm surprised anyone remembered those.After you mentioned them, I went back and edited them again. It's embarrassing catching all your old mistakes. I wish I had someone who could edit for me.

>>142316

Thanks friend, been enjoying reading yours too.

>>142325

Maybe, maybe. Thomas did say everything doesn't always have a fairy tale ending.

Considering doing a short one shot about an ara ara lilim working in the porn industy for valentines day. Or just updating tusktaker with valentine cuddles.

>>140783

http://pastebin.com/bY7y1YRu

I said I'd do it, and I did it. Oni waifu, prohibition, done!

Would have been easier had I actually had my computer, because this tablet is a nightmare to copy things into pastebin on. Or in general. Oh well feels good to write short(ish) stories again.

Whelp, I got dubs in the Futakuchi-onna thread and now I have to make a monster girl cosplay club.

The story premise is simple enough but I need more than one monster girl to make a club. Thought about adding a scylla who cosplays in princess gowns but I need maybe two to three more monsters each with their own cosplay themes.

Any suggestions?

>>143151

An inari as Gordon Ramsay.

>>143151

Ogre/Oni with a secret love for harajuku loli outfits.

>>143157

>>143159

Perhaps I should have linked the story first.

>>140798

>>140802

>>141279

>>141593

>>141595

There. All parts I think. The story doesn't take place in Japan but in the US. So I'm really looking for more monsters from just about anywhere.

I'll see if I can make your suggestions work somewhere somehow. Maybe at a convention.

>>143159

Well I was looking for the sissiest, frilliest thing I could but the scylla already got dibs on the princess dresses. :)

>>143128

You cunt, never get to complain about your writefaggotry ever again. That was glorious.

>>142695

Oh really? I'm glad you like it. I am kinda jelly at how good you are at going full Tolkien on your greentexts, I don't have the patience to describe every single flower in the backround n' shit.

>You're very good at it though, looking forward to reading the rest of yours

>>143633

I guess I could also namefag, now that I think about it, but now that my CYOA is done, it doesn't really feel like there's much of a point…

I need a loli-esk species or at least a species that can work as a loli for Monster Girl Cosplay Club.

I have 2/4 of the initial cast planned. Just need 4 more monsters. Could add more while I write on the way. I'm not looking for monsters exclusive to Japan either.

>>143650

Baphomet, do this and Aux will love you for showering him in loli goats

>>143650

Baphomet for sure. I'd also say add a Dormouse

>>143650

I going to suggest adding a kobold, and a loli cat girl.

>>143861

Damn, that sucks.

What I'm currently doing is I have a mega.nz account that I back stuff up on (you get 50 GB of free space, and MS Word documents rarely get above 200 KB in my experience), along with putting outlines to stories I want to write up on my pastebin, but making those private/unlisted.

That way I at least have all my ideas saved in case shit breaks.

>>143394

I'm a detailfag, I like putting lots of little stuff in. I'm not sure if it comes across as tedious, I just want my stories, and tusktaker in particular, to have a fleshed out world.

looking forward to seeing where you take the hellhound story.

>>143864

I should have been doing that from the beginning, I just didn't think anything would eff up because I'm an idiot. Thanks for the advice, definitely going to back stuff up via pastebin.

I was hoping I could get added to https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1DvxGFmqaFMH7cP1xPFYEF6Xhr7TMozJacKUfJiBHHos/edit?pref=2&pli=1#gid=0

I finished my alp story. I'll be writing more soon. Here's the link if you'd like the whole story: http://pastebin.com/cEeQVkNF

>>144218

I'm glad you did. It was a fun ride.

>>144218

That looks like the list run by /mgg/ on halfchan.

I don't know who you'd have to talk to in order to get on it, but I don't recognize any 8chan writers on there.

Oh, you could try to get stuff hosted on Touch Fluffy Tail, it's pretty easy to do so and I was pretty happy making that decision.

Aspiring /monster/ writefag here. Any tips to getting into it?

>>144242

Write, post, ask for feedback, improve. It's a thing of patience and practice. Just like with drawfags, if you ask, people will help you improve. I should probably ask more often

Starting in greentext is a nice safety net, and you can find many threads where you can do stuff, but as you feel more comfortable writing, try to do regular prose because greentext is lazy and it's difficult to be taken seriously if that's your only medium

Hey everyone, Starglider from the Engineering CYOA. I actually made a piece for that competition but locked it to my thread and deleted the unedited links. This is the finished piece, or atleast the one I submitted. There's still some work I could do to make it better but considering I wanted to make the Knights of the Slightly Ellipsed Table a series, I thought I'd drop it off for you guys to enjoy/critique.

http://pastebin.com/HYh0xZ60

No lewd, SFW, just a funny Subjective but story

>>144306

Great write! Love the humor, detail, and the present tense.

>>144309

Thank you! I do have a concern though that always trips me up. When writing words like 'wyvern' and 'arachne' I always have the urge to not capitalize them, because they're species not races. Like you wouldn't capitalize Elephant, but you'd capitalize the latin version because it's scientific or some silly rule like that. I always mix it up though, because Arachne sounds like a race but it could just be arachnid, as you would write any other animal. It is not a pronoun. It's a silly concern but it's one that always catches my attention during editing.

>>144311

..And it's also something I frequently fuck up as you can tell from how I just capitalized elephant… It's a damn mess.