>>1565
At 2:28 I'd add a kick along with every snare, I'd fatten the snare at that moment, and at 2:40 I'd remove every second snare, sticking with the pattern from 2:28, and do a massive build-up from there, introducing more instruments, some organic sounding ones maybe. I'd fade in a new lead melody on top of it, add more bass, and then go from there. Pretty good though.