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 No.3[Reply]

If you are stuck on what to write and need a prompt, post here and an anon will give you one.
If you have a good one, post it even if nobody asked.
For fiction and non-fiction.
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 No.162

>>51
Make your premise known from the start. What we encounter is more or less a meandering rant about democracy and then only at the conclusion do we understand what your ultimate message is.



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 No.1[Reply]

Welcome to /pen/.
I've recently taken the decision to make this a place for discussing literature and posting your own work, instead of only user created content.
Stuff to post:
>Your own work, fiction or non-fiction
>'Required reading' lists
>Reading club ideas
>Writing club ideas
>Reviews

>b..but how's this different to /lit/

As before, the board is aiming to be centered around politics, but this rule isn't absolute.
Keep it civil and post new works into their own threads, if possible.
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 No.106[Reply]

There will be more to come, but this is a start

you might also want to call it an introduction to critical thinking

 No.325

I'm impressed. Good job.

 No.340

Likewise impressed. This is good stuff, OP.


 No.436

>>106

>So, truth must have a solid – an absolute – foundation, if it is to hold any weight or meaning.

Things must be proven. Whim becomes Adonai to the sheep, and truth to the man. Life’s

pursuit is this ultimate, unshakeable truth, and also its elusive, globally reviled source.

> Life’s

pursuit is this ultimate, unshakeable truth

>ultimate, unshakeable truth

Could you fucking sound more of an edgy tryhard? Could you? And then people wonders why all of this philosophic bullshit you all agressively jerk off to makes me cringe at best.

This is why most of you faggots who visit this shithole are depressed and probably are gonna kill yourselves eventually.


 No.440

>>436

Sorry, I'll use ebonics next time.




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 No.419[Reply]

If I do nothing, entropy sneaks upon me and steals my life from me.

If I think nothing, my empty mind invites the first intruder at the

gate, and betrays me.

Cogito ergo sum.

If I think not, I am not.

Degeneration is the rival of creation, and if I do not coerce this

person to some higher power,

I will degenerate.

If I do not rise, I will fall.

I must rise.

 No.420

>>419

Did you draw that painting? It's bretty good.


 No.423

>>420

Omg u can't just ask people if they drawed that!


 No.427

>>420

Yeah it took over 9k hours in mspaint.

OC do not steal.


 No.439

>If I think not, I am not.

Nice




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 No.438[Reply]

Hello /pen/

This is my first time posting here, as well as my first written piece, and I'm really invested in it. I began working on this a few weeks ago, and I would just like some opinions on what I could do to make it better, what I could add etc. Just general thoughts. I've only written 8 pages so far, and I've hardly revised it.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1esrpB70RUyMVN7jB_TGTrvnE6Aj_QqPusI_z7w4vbBo/edit?usp=sharing



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 No.437[Reply]

Anyone doing National November Writing Month?

www.nanowrimo.org

I'm hoping that at least I will be able to write a garbled but interesting mess with enough wine and barbiturates.



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 No.44[Reply]

Hey there /pen/,/pol/,and whoever else is here,let's get a poetry thread going.

we'll take it whether you wrote it yourself or if it's a personal favorite of yours.

It's an amazement to me
How those who claim prejudice
Are oft those who are most prejudiced

Forcing their views upon society
Persecution their creed;
Stealing our livelyhoods

Attempting to crush our beliefs
To crush our rights
And yet they wonder why we despise them
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 No.380

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Dover Beach

BY MATTHEW ARNOLD

The sea is calm tonight.

The tide is full, the moon lies fair

Upon the straits; on the French coast the light

Gleams and is gone; the cliffs of England stand,

Glimmering and vast, out in the tranquil bay.

Come to the window, sweet is the night-air!

Only, from the long line of spray

Where the sea meets the moon-blanched land,

Listen! you hear the grating roar

Of pebbles which the waves draw back, and fling,

At their return, up the high strand,

Begin, and cease, and then again begin,

With tremulous cadence slow, and bring

The eternal note of sadness in.

Sophocles long ago

Heard it on the Ægean, and it brought

Into his mind the turbid ebb and flow

Of human misery; we

Find also in the sound a thought,

Hearing it by this distant northern sea.

The Sea of Faith

Was once, too, at the full, and round earth’s shore

Lay like the folds of a bright girdle furled.

But now I only hear

Its melancholy, long, withdrawing roar,

Retreating, to the breath

Of the night-wind, down the vast edges drear

And naked shingles of the world.

Ah, love, let us be true

To one another! for the world, which seems

To lie before us like a land of dreams,

So various, so beautiful, so new,

Hath really neither joy, nor love, nor light,

Nor certitude, nor peace, nor help for pain;

And we are here as on a darkling plain

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 No.384

I wrote an imagist poem riffing off an Ezra Pound one I really like.

In a Station of the Metro (2013)

Only one clear face

In all the dark

People all around

Only one of mine


 No.429

With all the bravado I might muster

I repel the beast,

and so disgust her

My principal cause befouls her nature,

lays waste to her den,

in this, I hate her

The indignation runs red hot

despite all her efforts,

she forgets me not

After all I've done to light her day

she paints it black,

to scurry away;

rejects me but knows not what I offer,

such is the pleasure

of a scornful daughter.


 No.431

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Oh when I saw you standing there

Wild flowers dying in your hair

Child of harvest time, coughing up must

Black flowers' dull perfume trailing in dust

Hoisting dull pennants to the spike of that hill

Your smile started bleeding and then the mill

Shearing and sharing your love and your rage

Whilst hawk's head descending spewed out a new age


 No.435

Prison Love

Deb the Dank was the rankest of skanks in the houscow,

She stabbed and she stole, she lied and she told,

few in the lockup liked her.

Pinky the slink (a dyke we think) dwelt in the clink with Debbie. One day white power sent her to the shower with a message for Deb the dank. They scrubbed and they rubbed (which Pinky quite loved) but in the end out came the shank.

Poor little Pinky had to lick out Deb's skinky, foul taste of a turd surprised the jailbird and left poor Pinky in tears. Deb had more planned, made a fist of her hand and confirmed all of Pinky's worst fears. Much more than salad would be tossed.

Then Deb the coward, she slipped in the shower – now who would be bossed?

Deb the dank would die as she lived, by the end of her shiv – with no one but Pinky to thank.

– Result of a 5 minute poetry exercise based around trying to conjure a Dr. Seuss feel. Random words I drew were Shank/Shiv and theme 'Love'.




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 No.336[Reply]

The man to Pity and Hate, a portrait of a wretched soul.

http://pastebin.com/m3mZ0cis

 No.433

Good content, many nice turns-of-phrase, but you need an editor–many sentences lack punctuation or have incorrect punctuation in them. You need to read it over before publishing it and squash the typos. Also, The Man is a bit one dimensional.

But overall, I like it.


 No.434

>>336

The first sentence is already awful. Don't begin a story with "this is a story about…" That's a really good way to bore a reader from the very beginning.




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 No.8[Reply]

Here is the strawpoll with the current suggestions for the magazine names: http://strawpoll.me/3562537
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 No.410

I like the word Contrarian, gives our writers plausible deniability, also it kinda embodies chan culture.


 No.424

>>8

>>203

>>410

What about Contrarian Logos, or ContraLogos?


 No.425

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>>424

Or maybe just "Counterlogic"?


 No.426

>>425

Counterpen?


 No.432

>>8

I think Anathema magazine would rule, the definition pretty much fits us.




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 No.330[Reply]

Rate my updated /pol/ required reading.
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 No.362

>>361

Agreed. Finished it recently, the parallels were quite worrying.


 No.364

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You REALLY need this book in pic related. It is a MUST read. Unlike most books on the subject, whether redpill or kike shit, they mostly talk about history only. This book talks in GREAT detail about the mechanics of National Socialism.


 No.365

Should add Growth of the Soil by Knut Hamsun, Journey to the End of the Night by Louis Ferdinand Celiné and Thus Spoke Zarathustra by Nietzsche


 No.367

>>365

>Thus Spoke Zarathustra by Nietzsche

A bit useless if you don't have a solid background in philosophy though.

I would add The Culture of Critique series, and a race realist book like Race Evolution and Behavior by Rushton, or the more recent A Troublesome Inheritance by Wade


 No.430

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>>330

>Egils saga by Egil

It's actually written by Snorri Sturluson.

t. descendant of both of them.




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 No.428[Reply]

Sup /pen/ I dropped the /pol/-/new/ novella yesterday for all to read.

http://8ch.net/pol/res/2569046.html#2575975

The thread has the novella and two shorties posted there.

Also it is published on http://www.lulu.com/shop/cr-mcmahon/the-hand-that-holds-the-world/ebook/product-22264177.html

If you want a free epub or read only file or .mobi send me an email at crmcmahon614@gmail.com

Some feed back on it would be great.



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 No.386[Reply]

So is there going to be a zine or what?

I'll write a short story for it.

If it's full of faggot ass poetry count me out.

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 No.409

>>407

Yeah start a thread


 No.416

It would be interesting to make 1/2 sheet zines of single stories. My town has a few of pic related, and I'd like to contribute some material.

Stuff that wouldn't be outright labeled "Nazi" or anything. More short children's stories with traditional tones, and truth presented in a reader-friendly way.


 No.417

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>>416

>1/2

*1 or 2

forgot pic


 No.418

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>>417

dunno why that was pic for ants


 No.422

>>386

>Poetry

>faggot ass

Pick one. Also, read real poetry, poetry with meter and not postmodernist free verse garbage. Poetry is (was) a form higher than prose (which didn't exist until, IIRC, eighteen or nineteen hundred). To contemn/shun poetry is to contemn/shun your heritage, faggot.




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 No.341[Reply]

I've written a piece trying to explain the problems of mass immigration in terms of football clubs. Aimed at left wingers and football fans in particular.

Criticism is welcome

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 No.353

>>352

Nice.

Be sure to update Brit/pol/ with this as I'm pretty forgetful.

Hope it takes off.


 No.354


 No.355

>>354

Looks good.

Had any takers?


 No.359

You write quite eloquently and it flows well. I feel your points are quite solid, and even as a non-Briton I could pick up most of what you were saying.


 No.415

>>354

There's a spelling error in the article, towards the beginning. "whether or note"

It is a pretty good article, though




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 No.411[Reply]

Hey guys, I'm going to be releasing a book via PDFs here on 8ch, and wanted to know what would be the best way to release it.

The official page is 8ch.net/tab/

(will never do anything more "official" than this)

>I will be uploading the first 5 pilot chapters and will release one new chapter every week. Weeks that have a short chapter will have more than one chapter released.

Any suggestions?

 No.412

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How about releasing it via PDF on 8chan, and you can upload the first 5 pilot chapters then one every week after that.

You could even release more than one chapter, if the chapter that week is short.


 No.413

If you are going to publish it for an ebook don't post it here until it is published.

I'm doing the same for my novella.


 No.414

>>411

you plan on keeping the same trip for the whole time?




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 No.382[Reply]

First three chapters of my neocon novella:

http://pastebin.com/LtuVxJFY

 No.383

>pepe

lol




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