/pol/ - Politically Incorrect

>>5466396

That line should read rather not lose to a communist. No idea how I could fuck that one up.

Here is the draft for Immigration:

Trump has a strong focus on immigration into our country. Everyone knows about The Wall. Illegal Immigrants are streaming into our country while ignoring our right as a nation to have a secure border. We cannot allow this to keep happening. A wall on the southern border would decrease the flow of illegals into our country. We as a nation cannot ignore our own laws and allow the borders to be open. Some Illegal Immigrants come here to kill. Some come to commit heinous crimes. It has to be stopped. These are a lot of points Trump has said during many of his rallies. He has visited the southern border and talked to the security forces there to see how he could help them out. He has listened to those who work on the border every day to see what needs to be done.

Trump has repeatedly said that Mexico will pay for the wall. Many scoff at the statement, while others laugh. Trump just smiles knowing that Mexico won’t have a choice in the matter. Mexico is already in a trade deficit to the States that far surpasses the cost of The Wall. They will pay for the wall or face fees at the border until the cost has been paid.

>>5466412

Here is the draft for Health Care:

Trump has had more than a few unkind words about Obamacare, but he has agreed with some of the policies it had. He wants to keep it so that the insurance companies cannot deny a person because they have a pre-existing condition. Everyone can get on board for this because no one should be unable to find insurance that will cover them. Trump also wants to keep the catastrophic coverage policy so the costs of medications are not hampering a person’s financial situation. After a person spends a certain amount of money on their medication, then the will gain coverage. Instead of paying full price, they will only pay a small copayment.

Trump is using his knowledge in the business field to help with keeping health care costs down. Trump wants doctors and healthcare organizations to be honest in how much they charge for their services. Why spend more money at this hospital when you can spend less at that hospital for the same service? He also wants to cheapen the price of drugs by making it easier for reliable companies to ship their products into the United States.

>>5466445

Here is the draft for Economy:

Trump wants to make America rich again. We are nearing 20 trillion dollars in debt and the light is not able to reach our depth unless Trump’s golden hair is their to light the way. Trump’s focus during his time in office will be securing jobs in America. He wants to make it so businesses don’t need to offshore their factories to make a profit. By having companies set up shop at home instead of in China, the economy will boom. The fear of being let go because your job has been given to some guy in China won’t exist when Trump is in the Oval Office.

>>5466412

Go into more details into why illegals are dangerous, the average normie doesn't understand that criminals do it to make it harder for police to track them. Also they wouldn't believe "come here to kill" even if it is true, try using an example of a notable criminal that will show up in a google search that came in illegally. Or just talk about cartels in general.

Also explain more why Mexico will pay for the wall, high school students wouldn't even know what a trade deficit is.

>>5466412

When you bring up the wall, also mention the drug cartels and the number of drugs passing freely over our border.

To spin this to the leftists reading,since they don't really care about their countrymen, mention that cutting down on the strength of the cartels will be helping the poor poor non-white Mexicans ;_;

Bump

>>5466475

>>5466485

The thing is is that I am limited to a page and a half and I'm already done with a page within the first three subjects. I can't add too much detail. I'll try and throw more in, but something will have to be cut.

>>5466475

I think this is my weakest one yet, but I don't have much material to go with. This subject was only added to talk about Bernie being a commie bastard back in the 60's.

Here is the draft for Civil Rights:

Trump does not want the rights of American citizens to be infringed upon. He believes in equal work for equal pay. He would enforce the anti-discrimination laws on the book and may add a few of his own to make sure that no one is kept from having the American Dream.

If you believe that gun rights are civil rights, then Trump is your man. He has seen that the current laws are a joke and criminals will not follow them. He knows that limiting the good people from having guns helps the bad people do what they want. Trump wants every citizen to have the right to carry and protect themselves.

>>5466567

I don't remember writing that. It has been fixed to :

Trump wants to make America rich again. We are nearing 20 trillion dollars in debt and we are having a grueling time fixing it.

>>5466412

>Trump has a strong focus on immigration into our country.

Should read " a strong focus on ILLEGAL immigration into our country. "

>Some Illegal Immigrants come here to kill. Some come to commit heinous crimes. It has to be stopped.

Don't even touch on crime - it is the LAST part of the the thing to be considered. Mention public education, welfare, emergency health care costs, and the cost of jails and deportations if they DUI and get deported or imprisoned. Mention that they do not pay tax to cover these costs, in addition to sending welfare cheques back home in some cases.

Then bring up The fact that American workers cannot compete with illegal immigrants willing to work for less than minimum wage and no benefits, because it is the law. Even in states with no minimum wage Americans still cannot compete because their lifestyle and their families in the US carries much more overhead than a fugitive illegal and his family back in Mexico, which the exchange rate with the peso helps offset.

Then mention the fact that not all illegal immigrants come from Mexico, some from guatemala, honduras, el salvidor etc. Then ask what it would be like if the reader was one of these people, hopping the Mexican border and travelling overland through Mexico. How long and dangerous a journey that must be. There are snakeheads, gangs and cartels to consider along the way. As many as 80% of female South American illegals experience a sexual assault before reaching the US border.

>>5466556

Here is the Military Policy draft:

In order to destroy ISIS and prevent any other wars, Trump believes a strong military is needed. With the strongest military in the world we won’t be challenged by any other nation. ISIS wouldn’t stand a chance against a bombing campaign of our expanded military.

Trump wants the best military to protect our nation and prevent any conflict from arising with other nations. He also wants to speak to countries, like Russia, whose relationships have been strained during the Obama administration. He is willing to talk before using military action. He is hardly the warmonger that the media portrays him as.

>>5466666

Good quints son, good quints.

>>5466412

describe the mexican border as an "Unsecured border" this will convey the sentiment that we aren't even watching who comes into the country

>>5466453

This is too short. Remember nobody but econfags will even read this section

>>5466666

I am unable to write down everything you have because I'm reaching my limit of a page and a half. I took out those lines and replaced them with:

Illegals drain our economy by filling our prisons filling our already struggling public school system, and filling jobs meant for American workers.

>>5466445

>Trump wants doctors and healthcare organizations to be honest in how much they charge for their services. Why spend more money at this hospital when you can spend less at that hospital for the same service? He also wants to cheapen the price of drugs by making it easier for reliable companies to ship their products into the United States.

He doesn't want them to be honest. He wants them compete rather than having no-bid contracts with the state. Obamacare was drafted by healthcare insurers FOR healthcare insurers what Trump is working toward is actually closer to universal healthcare, which is the standard all over the western world. Expelling illegals will make this more affordable.

>>5466804

Mention they don't pay taxes and send welfare money back home and you're good.

>>5466792

I can't add anymore than what is there now sadly. If you could give me pointers on making it more informative, it would be appreciated.

>>5466817

I took that off his website and summarized it. If you could show me how to reword it without going off the source, it would be appreciated.

>>5466838

I'm already at my limit now and have one subject left to go. I need to cut lines and not add now.

>>5466453

Trump wants to make america rich again by fixing the trade deficits with foreign countries. Trade is meant so both sides will profit, however the US has a deficit with all it's major trading partners. Trump wishes to restore the manufacturing backbone in the US so America sells more than it buys, and has jobs for people. Tariffs will also help this, because the US has the largest market in the entire world, and everyone has been getting a free ride. Trump also wants to remove the tax on foreign capital so multinational corporations can repatriate their money made in other markets and build infrastructure and create jobs for the locals like they do in other countries.

>>5466687

Trump says the middle east is a mess due to weak leadership. He wants to fix it through prudent deal making and a strong army. Toppling ISIS and seizing their oil reserves to cover the cost is his chief goal, second to bringing stability to the region.

>>5466890

Sorry,I speared out there. Guarantee writefag Bernieboy is going to go over the limit and they are going to let him, because of leftist privilege.

>>5466893

Tried not to take too much from you, but I did.I cut the last part because it won't be understood by most in my school. Thanks for the help.

America has trade deficits with many foreign nation and Trump wants to fix that. Right now America is not getting anything from our current, while the other nations are getting everything. By restoring the American manufacturing industry, we will have the products to sell and the jobs to fill. Foreign countries will have to pay their dues in order to trade with us. They have been given a free ride and now they have to make up for it. Jobs will be made under Trump and America will truly be great again.

>>5466556

>Trump does not want the rights of American citizens to be infringed upon.

You need to talk about property rights

>>5466453

> Trump’s focus during his time in office will be securing jobs in America.

>By having companies set up shop at home instead of in China, the economy will boom.

>The fear of being let go because your job has been given to some guy in China won’t exist when Trump is in the Oval Office.

You could probably get away with just one of these.

You need to talk about how his tax plan would improve the economy according to experts (Kevin O'leary to name one)

You should also mention how without corporations paying politicians to buy specific weapons for the military, Trump will simply buy the cheapest and best available.

>>5467022

I honestly can't add any more. I have yet to finish the foreign policy subject and I've passed my limit.

>>5467063

What do you have so far for foreign policy?

>>5467075

It is unfinished now, but I don't plan on adding much more.

Trump wants the world to know that America has the power and it needs to be respected. Under the weak leadership under the Obama Administration, the world has walked all over us. Russia does not take us seriously and China laughs about being able to devalue their currency without any issue. Trump won’t allow this to go on any further. He will enter the talks by labeling China as frauds

Thanks for all the help guys. I could not add everything that was given, but I tried my best. I'll be going over the entire thing again and would still like your help making it better.

Here is the complete first draft:

Trump has undeniably changed the game this election year. No one would have thought that a businessman such as Trump would ever run for politics let alone cause a fracture in a major party. Trump is blunt. He says things that a lot of people disagree with because they think it is offensive. Trump doesn’t care if feelings are hurt. He cares about the American way of life. He cares about the people. Trump is the best man for the Presidency. He will revive the American Dream and make America Great Again.

Immigration

Trump has a strong focus on illegal immigration into our country. Everyone knows about The Wall. Illegal Immigrants are streaming into our country while ignoring our right as a nation to have a secure border. We cannot allow this to keep happening. A wall on the southern border would decrease the flow of illegals into our country. We as a nation cannot ignore our own laws and allow the borders to be open. Illegals drain our economy by filling our prisons filling our already struggling public school system, and filling jobs meant for American workers. It has to be stopped. These are a lot of points Trump has said during many of his rallies. He has visited the unsecured southern border and talked to the security forces there to see how he could help them out. He has listened to those who work on the border every day to see what needs to be done.

Trump has repeatedly said that Mexico will pay for the wall. Many scoff at the statement, while others laugh. Trump just smiles knowing that Mexico won’t have a choice in the matter. Mexico is already in a trade deficit to the States that far surpasses the cost of The Wall. They will pay for the wall or face fees at the border until the cost has been paid.

Health Care

Trump has had more than a few unkind words about Obamacare, but he has agreed with some of the policies it had. He wants to keep it so that the insurance companies cannot deny a person because they have a pre-existing condition. Everyone can get on board for this because no one should be unable to find insurance that will cover them. Trump also wants to keep the catastrophic coverage policy so the costs of medications are not hampering a person’s financial situation. After a person spends a certain amount of money on their medication, then the will gain coverage. Instead of paying full price, they will only pay a small copayment.

Trump is using his knowledge in the business field to help with keeping health care costs down. Trump wants doctors and healthcare organizations to be honest in how much they charge for their services. Why spend more money at this hospital when you can spend less at that hospital for the same service? He also wants to cheapen the price of drugs by making it easier for reliable companies to ship their products into the United States.

Economy

America has trade deficits with many foreign nation and Trump wants to fix that. Right now America is not getting anything from our current, while the other nations are getting everything. By restoring the American manufacturing industry, we will have the products to sell and the jobs to fill. Foreign countries will have to pay their dues in order to trade with us. They have been given a free ride and now they have to make up for it. Jobs will be made under Trump and America will truly be great again.

>>5467089

If you need anymore talking points

>Build military- You could mention the point I made earlier about buying cheaper weapons

>Also mention staying neutral on Israel because it plays the anti-trump democrats off of the anti-trump conservatives

>>5467225

Civil Rights

Trump does not want the rights of American citizens to be infringed upon. He believes in equal work for equal pay. He would enforce the anti-discrimination laws on the book and may add a few of his own to make sure that no one is kept from having the American Dream.

If you believe that gun rights are civil rights, then Trump is your man. He has seen that the current laws are a joke and criminals will not follow them. He knows that limiting the good people from having guns helps the bad people do what they want. Trump wants every citizen to have the right to carry and protect themselves.

Military Policy

In order to destroy ISIS and prevent any other wars, Trump believes a strong military is needed. With the strongest military in the world we won’t be challenged by any other nation. ISIS wouldn’t stand a chance against a bombing campaign of our expanded military. We’ll take their oil and sell it to pay for the cost of our military.

Trump wants the best military to protect our nation and prevent any conflict from arising with other nations. He also wants to speak to countries, like Russia, whose relationships have been strained during the Obama administration. He is willing to talk before using military action. He is hardly the warmonger that the media portrays him as.

Foreign Affairs

Trump wants the world to know that America has the power and it needs to be respected. Under the weak leadership under the Obama Administration, the world has walked all over us. Russia does not take us seriously and China laughs about being able to devalue their currency without any issue. Trump won’t allow this to go on any further. He will enter the talks by threatening force against Russia and labeling China as frauds. He also wants nations guarded by the United States to start to pay up. South Korea has been protected by America for free for decades. Trump would use our bolstered military as his trump card during negotiations in order for America to get a fair deal. The world will recognize that we are a great power and will not be trampled on.

>>5467226

I can't talk about Jews in my school. Teachers have already heard me yell in German about the juden. Can't get away with anything like that without solidifying their suspicions.

I added this after the 2nd sentence of the Military Policy section.

He would cheapen the cost of the military by not having to buy from corporations that pay politicians to use their products.

>>5467225

>>5467229

I don't think I will be able to write a closing statement by the looks of it. Damn the page limit.

I rewrote your intro but was too lazy to do the rest.

Trump has undoubtedly changed the game of presidential politics this election year. It is a surprise to many that a businessman such as Trump could so drastically impact the sphere of politics, creating a fracture in a major party.

Trump is blunt. He says things that are disagreeable and offensive to many people. Rather than shying away from controversy, Trump embraces it and thrives from it. He is devoted to the preservation of the American way of life and fights to uphold the best interests of the American people. It is therefore clear that Trump is the best presidential candidate. He will revive the American Dream and make America great again.

>>5466412

make a point about how el chapo had a californian licence

>>5467265

Don't say cheapen say "cost effective"

>>5468911

Thanks for the pointers, the intro looks a lot better.

>>5469717

No one knows about El Chapo and it would be odd to have only mention one guy.

>>5470070

Duly noted, thanks a lot.

OP needs some serious help. Need to get some drafts up in here that will demolish all comers with irrefutable logic and reasoning as to the change that is happening within our own civilization.

When is this due? I'll write up a draft tonight

Are you going to call out the ZOG machine?

>>5472349

Due Wednesday. Limited to a page an a half.

>>5472426

I'll write up a goddamn manifesto for you. Your school with shit themselves and call you a hero

Read this too:

https://www.donaldjtrump.com/positions

>>5472426

>a page and a half

That aint shit, you fucking write and write my friend. Never limited yourself because your school says so.

>>5472463

The school newspaper won't publish something that long.

If it's just 1.5 page limit, then hit one issue. And hit it hard. Use it to redpill.

>>5472498

We have to write about all the subjects. I can't focus on one issue while the commie writes about all of them.

>>5472492

Then publish your document yourself. Use the newspaper as a little eye opener.

Not entirely related but I made new lyrics for this song:

>the lyrics become relevant at 0:20

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kHmYIo7bcUw

Springtime for Donald and USA

'Merica will be great again

Mexican border will have a wall

You can't climb over it 'cause it is so tall

Springtime for Donald and USA

Tears of the leftists will be sweet

Springtime for Donald and USA

Come on, illegals, it's time to go home

You can't even hope to stump

The great man called Donald Trump

Get on board or get run over

The ride on the Trump Train 's far from over

Springtime for Donald and USA

We’re gon’ get back our jobs

Establishment is on suicide watch

we’re So strong that no one will fuck with us

Spring time for Donald and USA

Second amadment remains infringed

Spring time for Donald and USA

Means that new era begins

Revolution begins

And glory comes to USA

>>5472521

Publish it where? Not like the liberal media will allow trump to be shown in a good light around here.