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"Tits Are life, Ass is Hometown" - Kenichiro Takaki

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 No.45429

Old Thread

>>1689

Pastebin of stories from old thread

http://pastebin.com/VPgk6aaF

Any format welcome (Pastebin/Ghostbin/Greentext/etc)

 No.45487

I'm gonna take the time to read through all of these again, thanks for the compilation!


 No.45682

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This is only the first part, but what I've written out so far is already a full story's worth, so I'm just going to post it now and make it a multipart adventure as I write out the rest.

No, this isn't just an excuse to pop the new story thread's cherry, don't be silly!

http://pastebin.com/pBH8uLK7


 No.45722

>>45682

So far, so good. Definitely cute, and the way it's written so far feels like Ryoubi


 No.45728

>>45722

Good to hear, though I don't think my writing is that flat. :^)


 No.45886

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At the beach with Shiki: http://pastebin.com/FtfNRLB0

And something for Leo's birthday:

http://pastebin.com/1mTs03EK


 No.46107

>>45886

Read these already on /skg/

Surprised you're here too anoncchi


 No.46207

Wasn't expecting so much cross-over between boards. I guess there's not that many lively places to discuss senrans.

I can still keep posting my new stuff here if people want.


 No.46209

>>46207

You're more than welcome to keep posting stuff here. And what Shiki did with the sunscreen was cute.


 No.46217

>>46207

That's be cool. More Shiki love is great.


 No.46223

>>45886

I like them.

The Shiki story was definitely a lewd-to-cute. Always fun. The Leo was a lot of fun, too, especially since just last night I mentioned in the last greentext thread that I feel they really help me get an idea of what the NW girls are like, since I know very little about them but the writers tend to use what is known about them.

>>46207

Feel free to post new stuff here!


 No.46279

Thanks for the feedback guys

>>46217

Well I have a lot of Shiki stories…

These are probably the most positively received and were written at different times so quality is a bit over the place:

Cute:

http://pastebin.com/trFj4bYh

http://pastebin.com/EjpZvmm3

http://pastebin.com/wiqPPqLe

Bit of a giggle:

http://pastebin.com/QZFaJX74

http://pastebin.com/VsANudt5


 No.46292

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>>46279

Anoncchi is cute


 No.46340

>>46279

Cool. It'll be fun to read these! Thanks for the dump


 No.46456

Another post in which I write awful things about Minori

http://pastebin.com/scHbVNrd

Maybe one day I'll write a normal Minori story


 No.46515

>>46456

And doubly done

http://pastebin.com/rdbHtPpM

I should probably say there are both futa


 No.46560

>>46279

I really liked these. The cute ones really touch on that side of Shiki that gets mentioned once in a while, but is seemingly lost in most discussion about her, and the fun ones are good little date stories. Thanks for sharing

>>46456

>>46515

I enjoyed them both but how long will it take Kat to recover from that brutal bathroom scene?


 No.46563

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Murasaki story involving an online friend:

http://pastebin.com/dWLDdLBy

Touno Tengu get a new instructah:

http://pastebin.com/e3QyJNq7

Previous Murasaki and Touno stories can be found here: http://pastebin.com/u/Anoncchi


 No.46564

>>46563

There seem to be a lot of stories here to get through.

Just read the first two links. I like both stories but I really enjoyed reading the Murasaki one. Would Mirai be cool with continuing to play with voice, or would she try to convince Saki to go back to text chat in future game sessions, I wonder…


 No.46589

>>46563

Neat, there are some I don't think I've seen before here


 No.46603

>>46564

You don't have to read them all. It's just neater to post that instead of posting multiple links.

Thanks for kind feedback


 No.46655

>>46603

I know I don't have to, but I want to. I just know I can't get through all of them today. The stories are fun to read, and they're probably mostly new to me because even if you were writing on /skg/ last summer, it has been a year since I'd read them.


 No.46890

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>"Alright, Minori. It's time for bed", you inform her, eyes on the clock

>"Whaaa?, but Minori isn't tired yet!"

>"Come on, Minori. You know Yozakura wouldn't like you staying up late", you remind her, knowing Yozakura trusted you to be a proper guardian for her teammate

>thankfully Minori gives in and comes along without a fuss, clutching her hamster pillow tightly to her life

>she gets onto bed, sitting up so you can give her a goodnight kiss on her forehead

>As soon as you lean in, however, her hamster pillow swings up and catches you on your chin, actually staggering you

>Minori fought to contain her laughter,"Hehe, Minori got you you!"

>Minori stayed poised to strike again, clearly wanting to have a full on pillowfight with you

>deciding to indulge her just a bit, you try to get a pillow for yourself, enduring hits for getting within her range

>you grabbed two and used them more as shields to block rather than actively retaliating, just giving her a small push sometimes

>may as well play a bit more with her for a while before she goes to sleep, you know?

——————————————————————————————–

>10 o'clock found you watching TV on the couch with Minori

>if Yozakura knew she'd kill you, but you found it easier to let Minori tire herself out than trying to send her to bed early

>plus you had a hard time saying no to her, her smile was something you wanted to nourish as much as possible

>looking over at her she had her hamster pillow hugged tightly to her chest, sort of hunched over it, giving away how tired she was

>"Minori", you try to get her attention

>she merely perks her head a bit in your direction, not turning too much away from the images flashing before her

>"Are you ready to go to sleep?"

>instead of replying, Minori just sets her pillow at her side and puts her arms out shoulder-level

>you take the hint and move in front of her, your back facing her as you sink low enough for her to catch a ride

>Minori climbs onto you piggy-back style, letting her hands hang freely over your shoulders

>making a note to make a second trip to get her pillow, you tote the tiny girl up to your bedroom

—————————————————————————————–

>you take special care to get her on the bed gently, sinking low enough for her to sit down on the edge

>Minori immediately lays down, not even caring to cover herself up

>you exit quietly to fetch her pillow for her, returning to find her fast asleep and sprawled out over the bed already

>as you rest the pillow on one of her arms, almost as if she sensed it, she turned onto her side to wrap around it

>you take a moment to just watch her a bit, a sense of pride welling in your stomach

>you always wonder if this is how Yozakura feels when she takes care of her

>you place a tender kiss on her forehead, "Goodnight, Minori"

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 No.46898

>>46890

That was really heart-warming, just the right amounts of cute! Thank you for the story!

I'm in the middle of reading all of Anoncchi's stories so I'll be back with an opinion on those later.


 No.46907

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>>46898

looking forward to it!

I also have another new story a "bad end" route for my favourite character: http://pastebin.com/k2bt7f9W


 No.46910

>>46907

I was just browsing through that pastebin you had with all of the stories and saw that on there, can't wait to get to it! I really want to find out how that ends up going.


 No.46926

>>46907

One thing I will say is that I'm really glad that you're writing a good amount of Shiki stories. I like how many settings and situations you're putting her in and it all feels believable to her character, good job so far!


 No.47049

>>46926

She's an easy character for me to write for. I can always find one layer of her character or one story beat or situation and run with it. I also have fun writing Murakumo and Kumi/Misato

Just a warning though 2/3 of my Haruka stories are lewds. So it's a game of russian roulette. The birthday cake story is the clean one.


 No.47372

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>Yozakura was staying up waiting for you tonight, keeping dinner warm as she took care of a few more chores she was planning to leave til tomorrow

>you coming home late isn't a rare occurrence with your line of work, so Yozakura learned to stop fretting over it

>she knew that the knowledge that she's worried at home would hang over you, so for both your sake she'd just wait patiently for you to arrive

>even then she wouldn't give up the chance to greet you warmly as soon as you came through those doors for anything, so sleeping was never an option

>some oddly paced knocks on the door signal your arrival

>Yozakura quickly wipes off her hands and leaves what she was attending to to welcome you

>the you she welcomes surprises her though

>she opened the door to find you slouching against wall, whispering nonsense to yourself

>the scent of alcohol was heavy on your breathe

>"Anon, are you okay?", she tries to get you to snap out of your daze

>you roll on your side towards her to try and push off the wall to straighten up, unfortunately misjudging how close you were to the open door

>Yozakura cradles you as you slump against her, trying to help you back onto your feet

>you, however, would rather stay leaned up against her, trying to place some sloppy kisses on her

>you tend to get really lovey dovey when you're out of it, "Yowzakuwa, I wove you, you knoooooW?"

>"Yes, yes, come now", Yozakura endures your overflowing affection as she brings you inside, still propped against her

>Yozakura guides you to bed, leading you to sit down so she could undo your work top at least to get you more comfortable

>she wrestles an under-jersey onto you, all the times with Minori working as sufficient practice

>once Yozakura has you a bit more fit for bed she kisses you on the forehead and positions herself behind you and guides your head to her lap

>Yozakura just pets the side of your head, shushing your drunk babbling, "Shhhhhhhhhhh, go to sleep anon…."

>"Yozakura?", you spoke up, a bit more legible than before

>"Yes anon?"

>"I love you"

>"I love you too anon"

>with that you finally felt at ease enough to drift off, your eyes letting themselves close


 No.47380

>>47372

I just woke back up and decided to check this thread and was greeted with this. I really needed this after waking up from what I was dreaming about.

Thank you, from the bottom of my heart. This is all I needed tonight.


 No.47777

>>46563

Those stories really were a lot of fun to read. I really liked the one about living with the Crimsons, and I couldn't stop laughing at the Dai/Rin date one. Also, even though I never watched any Star Trek, I liked that setup too. That bad end story, too, was really touching and while I was reading it I wasn't sure if you'd have her take her own life

I enjoyed all of your stories, but those are the ones that really stuck out, for whatever reason.

>>46890

Really cute, and reminds me of what my babysitters were like with my brothers and myself.

>>47372

I like it a lot, and not just because Yobro was pretty drunk last night.


 No.47947

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>"Hey… Homura", you call for her attention

>there was something you've been needing to get off your chest ever since you met her

>"What's up anon?", she leans in closer

>"I really need to ask, cause it's been on my mind for a while"

>"Where do you get your sense of fashion from?"

>"HUH?", she reels back a bit with that one

>"I mean, the only 'casual clothes' I ever to see you in are plain t-shirts and jeans or your bandages and underwear"

>"So… are you complaining about getting to see me in my underwear now?", the confusion on her face grows

>"No, you've got a rockin body. You know it", she blushes at the sudden complement,"it's just I wish you would show more variety sometimes"

>"More variety…?", Homura seems lost in this conversation

>taking that as a sign to press on, you start to give examples from your fantasies

>"Like you live around two girls that wear sweaters all the time. I'd love to see you in one sometime, just a nice tan one, lighter than you are", you start to go into detail even

>"…or maybe even a V neck, that gives a glimpse of those tanlines of yours…"

>"You've spent a lot of time thinking about this, haven't you?"

>"Is it wrong to want to see a cute girl like you in cuter clothes?", you try to justify yourself

>"You say cute clothes, but that bit about my tanlines leaves me unsure…"

>"Maybe I came on too strong…", this isn't going how you hoped

>Homura just sighs, "It's not that I don't like dressing up. Those white tees are just comfy and cheap as hell so they're easy to replace, there's no way we could get away with expensive clothes while Yomi draws breath…"

>"What if I bought them for you?", this is it

>you saw the chance you were hoping for and jump at it immediately

>"Wait, you really would?", you didn't let your eagerness come through too strong but the offer still surprised her

>"For you? I'd love to", you take her hand in yours to drive it home

>at this point she couldn't turn you down, sheepishly accepting your offer

>"Because, too be completely honest with you…", you got this far, may as well go all the way

>"I actually have been holding onto some clothes I bought for you", you come clean

>"What the!?"

>"They were gonna be gifts! I just saw them and knew they'd look great on you, so I gave in!", you try to explain before you lose her

>Homura seems to accept your explanation, thankfully, looking a bit less shocked

>"W-well, I guess. If that's the case, mind showing me them? I kinda wanna see what you picked out"

>she fortunately offers herself to try them on instead of you needing to float the idea

——————————————————————————————–

>you lay out the small assortment of outfits before her

>Homura immediately spots a tan sweater like the one you described before,"What, you couldn't find a V neck?", she jabs

>looking through the other outfits, she must admit that you have a good eye

>"Did you get help picking these out? I'm kinda surprised you'd choose so well"

>you quietly accept the praise, moving to close the closet you fetched them from

>"Hey, wait, anon. What's that in there?", Homura spots something interesting in there

>uhoh

>her curiosity guiding her she easily pushes past and reaches into the closet, pulling out some outfits you were regretting buying now

>out from the closet comes a maid outfit and an extra frilly kiss the cook apron

>Homura just takes a moment to take them in, lost for words

>"Cute outfits, huh?!?, Homura questions, some embarrassment clear on her face


 No.47983

>>47947

That was really cute, and a good story to tell how she gets all those nice clothes


 No.48166

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Real short Rin story:

http://pastebin.com/UQHsrXwa


 No.48199

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>>48166

>the students fw


 No.48201

>>48166

awwww yeah


 No.48209

>>47947

I love it. Of course I would love it but still

>>48166

Oh wow that is just brilliant


 No.48398

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>you finally get home after a day that was pretty stressful in general, just flinging yourself into the couch to decompress

>you prop your arms on your knees and your chin on your knuckles, letting a heavy sigh out as you hear the door open

>"I'm home,", Daidouji proclaims her arrival, noticing you on the couch as she locks the door behind her,"ah, anon. Are you okay?"

>"Just a bit tired", you confess

>"I see. I myself have just finished my training routine for today. Maybe you should join me in unwinding, it might do you some good", she lays out the offer

>she means join her for a bath, right? You remember she'd take a nice long bath after training sometimes

>you decide to take her up on her offer, it'd certainly be better than sitting her doing nothing

>a bath sounds like a great idea, not to mention sharing one with a beautiful woman

—————————————————————————————————————-

>you make your way to the bathroom, towel around your waste and a new bottle of body wash inhand

>you excuse yourself as you enter, coming just in time to see the bandages that bind Daidouji's chest fall to the floor around you

>catching them being revealed made your eyes linger on them quite a bit

>Daidouji was very well endowed, a beautiful pair hanging from her chest

>and they locked so soft in contrast to her sculpted stomach beneath them, some very faint tanlines marking where was covered

>your eyes drift down to her impressive hips and legs, usually (unfairly) hidden beneath her clothes

>Daidouji didn't seem to notice, or care about, your piercing gaze, running her fingers through her hair as she made her way to the tub

>as she walks away you get a fine view of the backside that goes with those hips of hers

>Daidouji steps into the tub, slowly sinking back into it until her breasts where half submerged

>she inhales deeply and lets out a contented sigh as her mouth curls into a smile

>only when she's finally settled in do you snap out of it, realizing that you're just lingering naked

>you move carefully as you try to join her, trying not to disturb the comfortable position she's already found

>when you settle in you try to relax with her, just gazing around the room and breathing deeply long with her

>Daidouji's chest swells and heaves with each breath, hypnotizing you as you watch them go uuuuuupp

>and ddooowwwwnn

>"Anon?", Daidouji breaks the silence, "since we're both here, would you like me to wash your back?"

>the suggestion comes a bit suddenly, but you aren't gonna turn her down

>"Hopefully this helps you relax", she comments as you shift to turn your back to her

>you brace yourself as Daidouji lathers up the sponge, touching it to your back and getting to work

>she works slowly on your back, moving outwards to your shoulders

>her hands stall a bit to rub you shoulders before moving down your arms

>her hands go all the way down your arms into the water, resurfacing under them to get to your side

>Daidouji leans in to rest her head on your shoulder as her hands go for the underside of your arm and across your chest

>the closeness has her breasts pressed on your back, and under the water you can feel her legs around your body, holding you close

>when she's done washing she just wraps her hands around your waist for a hug, leaning back to bring you to lay with and on her

>you can't help but slide low enough to have your head rest on her chest

>you both enjoy each others company in silence, soaking in the bath together

>you should relax with Daidouji more often, this was wonderful


 No.48427

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Well here it is. Part 1 of the The Creamiest Birthday

http://pastebin.com/fUk7A50U


 No.48428

>>48427

>The Creamiest Birthday

Uh oh


 No.48434

>>48427

>where the lewd girl rumors came from

Ohhhhhhhhhhhh

That was interesting. You working that in really caught me. Had this in mind for a while?


 No.48435

>>48427

>Cliffhanger ending

So far so good.


 No.48443

>>48428

The title just came to me right before posting it.

>>48434

Yep. I wanted to work on a story about Ikaruga getting upset about the "Lewdkaruga" stuff for awhile.

Originally It was a toss up between Leo and Ikaruga to get the birthday story, but I decided to just do something like this instead; just to challenge myself. Happy you enjoyed it.

>>48435

Glad you liked it.


 No.48526

Finally got around to catching up on this thread.

>>46890

That was adorable!

>>47372

This one almost made me cry.

>>48166

Delicious, though I can just imagine the Hebi girls watching the whole thing.

>>48398

This was a nice read. Dai needs more love.

>>48427

Who threw those pies?

WHO threw those pies?

I really liked this one. A great event and a diverse cast of characters to work with. Looking forward to your next part.


 No.48606

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Here's a thing, read it if you want.

https://ghostbin.com/paste/23q6f


 No.48627

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>>48606

I really, enjoyed reading this. Excellent work!


 No.48628

>>48627

Thanks! Glad you liked it


 No.48632

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>>48628

Yeah, it was pretty well constructed. Would read again.


 No.48664

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>>48606

Wow. I just woke up and this already made my day!

There's next to no info out there about Asuka's parents, but this felt believable. I can totally imagine that this is how it went down between them, and I'd love to drink and share some stories with Papasuka myself. Maybe even Hanzo.

But yeah. Thanks a bunch for writing this, Yobro!


 No.48846

http://sta.sh/01eowpjpv34i

Here we go!

Fair warning, the title isn't a lie.


 No.48850

>>48846

Not gonna lie, I was expecting something else.

But it was nice.


 No.48878

>>48398

I read the first line as fingering yourself into the couch

Really cute

>>48427

>All that cream

Is Dr. Katsuragi making a house call? I'm interested to see where this goes.

Good thing she didn't run out crying - that stuff seems kind of crazy for someone to do on their birthday

>>48606

Really cute. I liked the way you put their meeting together, it felt perfect.

>>48846

Fun, but I do think the title might be a little misleading. I was expecting some hard M shit, though I still liked it though. Will you be continuing stories of this trend?


 No.48888

>>48878

Once in a while, yeah. Only when inspiration hits me though, haha! Glad you liked it. Sorry the title threw you off.


 No.48898

>>48632

I'm glad you said that, it felt like everything got scrambled, pacing wise after I finished it.

>>48664

It took me a good long while on decided on whether it should've been Hanzo or Papasuka. I decided on what I did because Papasuka doesn't have developed character so it felt easier to write something for him and make a fun little story of him and Mamasuka.

>>48878

Thanks for the compliment man, appreciate it.


 No.48926

>>48888

Cool - looking forward to it!

>>48898

Yeah, it was a fun read, and I could tell you had fun writing it


 No.48940

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New story. Something a little different this time: I had planned a story where Gessen got a new instructor. It ended up looking too long so I broke it up to be multiple chapter and multiple perspective. Let me know if you want more after this:

http://pastebin.com/7GEPgVSt


 No.48949

>>48940

>only on a trial basis

I would like to see more. How did you pick the name, if you don't mind me asking?


 No.48965

>>48949

Shinobi in the senranverse can have "given names" as their codename (eg. Asuka, Miyabi, Minori, Kaede)

So I went with something popular, unisex and attached to important figures. Hajime was a name given to two important samurai (and the founder of Sammy) and is used (in certain context) in Japanese martial arts. It seemed to fit.


 No.49015

>>48965

I had no idea Hajime was a popular name. I like it.


 No.49072

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Bonus Homu:

http://pastebin.com/zBZiqsNk

>>49015

I think its more popular with older generations but still!


 No.49075

>>49072

I get you now. For what it's worth, the name fits.

Also, I kept a dumb grin on my face the whole time reading this

and then I saw your asterisk, and bust out laughing


 No.49155

>>48940

I'd like to see where things will go from there.

>>49072

And this is just beautiful


 No.50080

>>46563

I finally did it, I read through all of your stories! I really liked them all you did a really good job on the lewds. Your works with original characters were all really well done too, none of them felt like they were out of place in any of the stories you wrote and felt like believable characters! I also really like that you're putting out work consistently too, I know I'll have something to read almost everyday. Keep up the good work, you definitely have a new fan.


 No.50085

>>48846

Not what I expected, but it was a good read!


 No.50293

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Part 2 of Gessen-sensei

http://pastebin.com/epQMtYZh

>>50080

Thanks for the feedback. You also helped me solve the mystery of why the hit counter was going up on "those" stories.


 No.50322

>>50293

Oh wow. I wasn't expecting that. Keep it up


 No.50364

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Here's a thing, read it if you want.

https://ghostbin.com/paste/s45a6


 No.50368

>>50293

I like where this going, keep it up!


 No.50470

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Someone "subtly" requested a spooky Haruka story on that other board:

http://pastebin.com/pxQFUiXb

>>50368

>>50322

Thanks. Will post more later.


 No.50563

>>50470

Just read your latest one, a nice little horror-esque story was pretty refreshing to read, thanks man!


 No.50633

>>50470

Wow. That was an interesting take on Haruka


 No.50674

>>50470

That was pretty awesome. Fits her surprisingly well…


 No.50676

>>50364

Damn. That was good…

And it reminds me of a recurring fear involving our waifu choices…


 No.50811

File: 1438381701686.jpg (154.47 KB, 992x1241, 992:1241, e790acf8.jpg)

Who likes pyjama parties?

http://pastebin.com/6YpJKVTJ

>>50364

ch-cherry blossom-chan


 No.50883

>>50811

Cute. Minori and Mirai in the same room sounds interesting. Actually that collective group of senrans sounds interesting.


 No.50973

>>50676

>>50811

Glad you guys liked it!

I just got done with the 2 latest stories. I'm glad to see you making it a party between girls that normally aren't together like Minori and Mirai, very cute. Those scheming girls though, they totally wanted to see Anon when she was done with him.

The Ryoubi story was very cute as well, I really like that it was a short story. It had just enough detail to keep it interesting the whole time.

Good job on both!


 No.51436

File: 1438480432826.jpg (158.86 KB, 800x1131, 800:1131, 1435861062860.jpg)

>>50973

I hadn't even posted that here yet was surprised you'd jumped on it.

shilling time: http://pastebin.com/nRmErM9V

And some of the responses are giving me ideas for another story.


 No.51496

>>51436

To tell you the truth, I usually keep a tab open with your pastebin archive in it since you usually upload a story or two a day. I like your stuff man.


 No.51501

>>51436

Hilarious


 No.51565

File: 1438495814710-0.jpg (98.83 KB, 640x800, 4:5, 9a8a0ba68b1015fe.jpg)

File: 1438495814730-1.jpg (539.83 KB, 1000x1000, 1:1, Imu 9.jpg)

I didn't forget! Part 2 of the Ryobi/Miyabi story.

To the end, I still wasn't sure how I wanted to handle Miyabi, exactly, but I feel I managed to make this work.

http://pastebin.com/h5NakSQ8


 No.51613

File: 1438502118191-0.webm (807.3 KB, 1280x720, 16:9, Feeling inspired.webm)

File: 1438502118321-1.jpg (99.18 KB, 640x800, 4:5, 16b93634513942ec.jpg)

>walking in on them changing event

I can feel it

>Haruka had come over to spend the day again, now changing up in your room after a refreshing bath

>a part of you wonders what it must be like to bath with a waterfall with the way she seems to happy to have hot water

>you empty the fresh load into the clothes basket and make your way to the bedroom, wanting to bring her a dryer-fresh outfit

>"Haruka, your clothes are done drying", you call out to announce your entry, catching a former elite ninja off-guard sounded like a bad idea

>"Ahh, come in, come in", you take her response to mean that she was covered, excusing yourself as you enter

>as she comes into view, however, you see her almost fully naked save for a pair of panties and drying her hair with a towel

>she picks up on the surprise your reaction gives off, chuckling as she continues tending to herself

>you dump everything onto the bed, sorting your things from hers

>"Ah, anon, Don't look~", Haruka feigns embarrassment now that you're closer to her, covering her exposed breasts and turning away to hide a pretend-blush

>deciding to play along a bit, you lay a kiss on the cheek turned to you,"I can't help it. That body of yours can't be ignored"

>you leave the clothes for a bit and sit next to her on the edge of the bed, you move for her lips this time

>"Ah, calm down anon~ At least let me get dressed first", Haruka slips away, getting up to dig through the clothes you brought

>she lifts a tiny black bra and a pretty pink one before you, each dangling off one her pinkie fingers

>"I can't decide. Which would you like to see, hmmm?", she lays your options out for you

>you vote black without pondering it too much

>you'd be happy with either result anyways

>Haruka accepts your choice, flinging the pink one at you as she turns her back to you and slides it on

>she watches you over her shoulder the entire time, looking for any hints of disappointment the entire time

>"And now~", her hands trace down to her sides and begin to remove the panties she was wearing, her hometown still turned to you

>she sinks down slowly as she bends over to slip them off, seeming to linger a bit as she steps out of them

>she tosses it into the empty clothes basket with flick of her wrist and reaches for the black pair of panties to go with these

>making sure her rear was aimed at you the entire time, she goes through the motions of slipping into this pair

>the fabric dangles a bit as it glides up her legs, but as it is worked up her body it gradually fills out, stretching over her sizable backside

>Haruka gives it a few more tugs before she lets go of the waistband, propping her hands on her hips and turning to face you with a wink

>realizing the show was over, you give her some small applause

>"Oh my, you'll make me blush, anon~", she hides her grin with one hand

>having had her fun, she goes back to getting dressed, "Now where was I?", as she lays out her trademark outfit on your bed

>she runs hers fingers through her un-styled hair as she searches for a curler

>you quietly move to take your leave, giving her quick peck on your way out

>before you can pull away, however, she stops you for a moment, "We can continue where we left off soon, just let me get ready"


 No.51615

>>51613

Weird. I'm pretty sure I ticked enable sound


 No.51793

>>51565

I really liked that, you pulled it off way better than I could have imagined, I really like how you kept having Miyabi second-guessing people treating her more like a woman without her chest even though she was happy with it. You also did a good job in portraying Imu to where she wasn't a crazed lesbian, I'm always happy to see her acting more 'normal' for the most part. One of her best traits is caring for people and I'm glad you wrote it in.

Good job!

>>51613

Very nice story involving Haruka being playfully erotic. I like the tie-in to the NW event as well. Very good use of relevant events happening, I really like this concept of walking in on her that you setup.

Good job!


 No.51797

>>51565

>Miyabi's boobs are masculine

Fantastic. Definitely want to see more of how Imu will handle things.

>>51613

I can't believe there still isn't a Haruka card that shows off her booty.


 No.51799

>>51436

I really like the idea of Rin and Dai being rivals in love-making. That story was pretty hot.


 No.51816

>>51793

You saying that makes me feel a lot better about it.

And yeah, I like Imu's relationship with Miyabi a lot more than Yagyu's Hibari obsession. Maybe it's because Imu also has her thing with Murasaki, but I feel like she has a lot more moments where she's able to act as her own character and not just lust over her love interest. As a result, she and Miyabi actually complement each other as characters and cover one another's weaknesses, so I'm glad I was able to highlight that side of her.

But yeah, thanks for the compliment! This makes me feel a lot better about writing the next part!

>>51797

Almost every bit of Miyabi art has her boobs on full display, so if she still gets mistaken for a man all the time then I can only assume that she has the most masculine tits in the world!

>>51436

>huge American meatsacks

I like it. A lot of stories tend to gloss over the fact that senrans are Japanese while the anon more often than not isn't, so it's fun picturing how both parties would deal with that.

>>51613

And just like that another fresh load was emptied, I imagine.


 No.51817

>>45682

>>51565

Heh, I put off reading this for so long I forgot Miyabi was gonna lose hers

It was awesome, I especially liked how you handled her waking up with them


 No.51818

>>51816

>And just like that another fresh load was emptied, I imagine.

Lewd!


 No.51849

>>51816

Flawless logic


 No.51974

File: 1438549371752-0.png (345.76 KB, 600x352, 75:44, 1428841633099.png)

File: 1438549371756-1.png (433.41 KB, 640x600, 16:15, 1430775407633.png)

New one: Mirai babysitting Minori

http://pastebin.com/TfVMcNda

>>51799

lewd!


 No.52074

>>51974

>dis gun be good

I never would have thought to do a story between these two but you made it work. Poor Mirai, I felt so bad for her.


 No.52669

File: 1438655381273.png (1.73 MB, 1920x1080, 16:9, 1427537903888.png)

Gessen-sensei Part 3

http://pastebin.com/VgdwYjGV


 No.52672

>>50293

Interesting turn. I really liked it.

>>50364

That was really cute, and the ending was really touching. I did not see that coming, to be honest.

>>50470

Definitely a fun take on the horror genre!

>>50811

Really cute. Who dared her? Mirai?

>>51436

Poor Ryoubi. I really like how you had her speak broken English. It reminded me of how Mirai interacted with Shiki in SV, and that might be one of my favorite exchanges in the game, if not my favorite.

>>51565

I really like where this is going


 No.52684

>>51613

Definitely an inspired one, with that event last week. I always love reading the descriptions, like what you have here for how she turns dressing into a performance.

>>51974

Adorable, for both of them. I really enjoyed this one.

>>52669

I really like what you've done here. I like the honesty coming from Hajime at the dinner table, and I'm excited to see what comes next!


 No.52843

File: 1438676971073.jpg (102.18 KB, 960x544, 30:17, 1433881209926.jpg)

Murasaki goes on a date

http://pastebin.com/vdV3RY24

>>52684

>>52672

And wow that's a lot of feedback. I'm glad its positive though. It was probably masked Murakumo that started the mess


 No.52852

>>52843

Gonna have to skip this one. Sorry. I just really can't stand her…


 No.52868

File: 1438682868263.png (273.76 KB, 792x950, 396:475, 1429233439065.png)


 No.52879

>>52843

That's really cute. I guess the one thing I was expecting was for Murasaki to sniff Anon and decide he's a good person or something like that

I'm glad you appreciate the feedback. Your stories have been a lot of fun to read. I'm sorry it took me so long to get to all of these stories


 No.52899

>>52843

Big sis just wants to make sure everything goes well


 No.53032

File: 1438726996662.jpg (115.71 KB, 640x800, 4:5, ce5e9c4864098393.jpg)

>the rain was coming down heavily today, drowning out any noise that dared compete with it

>you felt kinda stupid right now, struggling through the downpour with your umbrella and jacket when you should have been inside

>but Asuka was supposed to be training after class today, so you were worried she got caught in this mess

>the jacket and umbrella did a very poor job of keeping you dry, but you soldier on

>a fool in love is what you are

—————————————————————————————

>you had finally arrived Hanzo's sushi shop, shaking water from the umbrella at the door before you entered

>given the weather, you weren't surprised that the restaurant was empty, the only other person in the room was Hanzo himself behind the counter

>"Ah, anon, I wasn't expecting to see anyone, much less you. What brings you around, my boy?"

>as you take off the thoroughly soaked jacket you explain, asking if he knew where Asuka was or if she got caught in the rain

>"Ah, Asuka? She's here right now, actually. She's in the backroom if you're looking for her", the relief is obvious in your expression

>excusing yourself, you make your way to where Asuka apparently was, wanting to verify for yourself that she was okay

>approaching the shut door, you start to call for her as your hand turns the handle

>"Asuka?"

>"Anon, wait!"

>the door swings open to reveal a drenched, flustered and half undressed Asuka, caught midpose as she was stepping out of her wet panties

>her wet uniform was in a pool/pile at her feet, her hair ribbon and red scarf on top

>you couldn't help but notice that her hair was reaching her shoulders undone, the ponytail style she wore made it look deceptively short, and just having down was quite a change

>her skin was still wet with rain, small droplets dotting her chest and face

>through the cooperation of her soaked rainbowkini top and the cold atmosphere, her pokies where showing through

>Asuka's voice snaps you out of staring at her any longer

>"Anon!", you're shoo'd out of the room before you can explain yourself

>you decide back to where you left Hanzo to wait on her, spotting a knowing grin splashed across his face as you come around the counter to take a seat

———————————————————————————–

>Asuka finally joins you two, dressed in the only spare outfit she had on hand, her gym wear

>wearing those bloomers that left her legs out after being exposed like that can't be helping her get over it

>she seemed to embarrassed to look your way, staring down in front of her as Hanzo served some futomaki to her

>So, how did training go today? I saw that rain so I wanted to check on you", you finally get a chance to explain yourself

>"Huh? That's why you came over?"

>"Yeah, I was worried when I saw how hard it was pouring", you explain that that whole incident was Hanzo's fault

>Hanzo seems somewhat surprised that you threw him under the bus like that

>"Grandpa!!", her embarrassment just inspires some hearty laughter instead of an explanation

>"Didn't grandma say to not mislead poor anon!?"

>that one quiets him, "O-oh. I wasn't misleading him. it was just some harmless fun, trust me!", he's suddenly in a rush to justify his actions

>Asuka just watches with a pout as he makes up a reason to end the conversation, leaving to fetch more seaweed sheets

>"He's really afraid of your grandma", you comment

>you go on playfully, "Wonder if I might end up scared of you like that someday"

>Asuka puts on her most strict expression, "If you start running around after girls boobs like him, maybe"

>"Good thing there's only one chest that catches my eye", Asuka barely catches on before you've grabbed her from behind, fondling and kneading as you like

>"H-hey! Did Katsuragi possess you or something?"


 No.53043

>>53032

Love it! The rain coming down right now only adds to the atmosphere.

>a fool in love is what you are

Hehe… yeah…

Good work, man!


 No.53048

>>53032

That was really good! And it reminds me I haven't written for a bit… I'd better fix that tomorrow.


 No.53086

>>53032

That was really cute. I hope Hanzo doesn't use your throwing him under the bus against him - I get a vibe he wouldn't.


 No.53125

>>52843

Aww, that was really adorable! That was a really cute story, thanks for sharing!

I've been wanting a Minori story like that for a long while now, thanks for that as well.

>>53032

>pokies

Oh man, that was really good. I really like the situations you set up in your stories man, keep it up!


 No.53133

>>53125

>Minori story

I guess I should get back to that "Anon had a bad date and Minori cheers him up" story that I was planning a sequel for


 No.53170

>>53133

I'd be more than happy if you wrote a sequel to that.


 No.53191

>>53170

I had a couple of smaller parts planned before the date, so the whole thing could take a while, if that's ok with you


 No.53206

>>53191

That's more than fine man, I'm in no rush. It's your story after all, I'll just be glad to read it when you decide to publish it!


 No.53405

File: 1438778973647.png (Spoiler Image, 222.27 KB, 1082x1148, 541:574, FutaMaki.png)

How do we not have this yet?

> I was only 20 years old

> I loved Asuka so much, I had all the Senran Kagura merchandise and mangas

> I pray to Asuka every night before bed, thanking her for the life I've been given

> "Asuka is love" I say. "Asuka is life and hometown

> My dad hears me and calls me a faggot

> I knew he was just jealous of my devotion for Asuka

> I called him a cunt

> He slaps me and sends me to go to sleep

> I'm crying now, and my face hurts

> I lay in bed and it's really cold

> A warmth is moving towards me

> I feel something touch me

> It's Asuka

> I am so happy

> She whispers in to ear, "This is my Hometown!"

> She grabs me with her powerful shinobi hands and puts me on my hands and knees

> I'm ready

> I spread my hometown for Asuka

> Her futamaki penetrates my butthole

> It hurts so much but I do it for Asuka

> I can feel my butt tearing as my eyes start to water

> I push against her force

> I want to please Asuka as she gives me something large and thick

> She roars a mighty roar as she fills my butt with her love

> My dad walks in

> Asuka looks him straight in the eyes and says. "It's all Hanzover now"

> Asuka leaves through my window

> Asuka is love, Asuka is life and hometown


 No.53409

>>53405

> I'm crying now, and my face hurts

That pic is relevant, it seems.


 No.53421

File: 1438787210325.jpg (94.5 KB, 640x800, 4:5, Mirai in another amazing o….jpg)

And now, for my weakest greentext yet…

>"Ngh…"

>You yawn and sit up, your eyes shut tight.

>You rub them and finally open them after a minute, slightly annoyed by the light shining into your room.

>You exit the room, not bothering to change out of your pajamas.

>You still feel sleepy as you get downstairs, not wasting a single moment before you get seated in front of your computer.

>You close your eyes and yawn as your outdated machine is booting up, but your gaping mouth is suddenly filled by something, making you jolt up.

>"Shhh, don't worry…"

>You're quickly soothed by the voice of the maid you had hired, and you swallow the spoon's content: a delicious stew. It wasn't the most conventional breakfast, but exceptions to some things are rarely a bad thing.

>You had only hired Mirai recently, but you really, really liked her. You didn't know if it was just part of her job to be so appealing, but you had trouble finding flaws in her that actually made her less of a great person.

>"So, uhm, young master Anon, how does it taste?"

>"It's really great… Thanks a lot, Mirai. Oh, uhm, but… I feel weird being called 'young master'. I mean, I'm only slightly older than you…"

>"Oh, right, sorry, Anon…"

>"It's ok…"

>She fills a bowl with the stew, and then she turns around to head back off again, most likely to organise the fridge or dust something off.

>"Wait, uhm, Mirai… Before you continue doing your job, do… I know it's a conflict of interest, but… Want to… Go on a date with me?"

>Mirai stops walking, and she turns back to you.

>She has a bit of an awkward smile on her face.

>"Eh…? Anon, why do you suddenly…?"

>"I… If you don't want to, that's… I'm sorry I asked."

>"W-well, we can give it a shot, i-if you really want to…"

>She turned a bit red, and you realise she's just as shy as you are.

>"So, uhm… If you don't feel sure, we can just keep it simple… Play some Smash or something…"

>Her demeanor seems to change as her face becomes surprisingly smug.

>"Now we're talking. How about this evening, when my shift is over?"

>"No question!"

>She now turns around with a smile on her face, and you smile on the inside. You had secured your first date!

>The only thing you couldn't account for was how good of a player she turned out to be…

Oh, by the way, for my next story… Should I continue with that one involving Mirai and clothing damage, or should I go for something extraordinarily lewd again?


 No.53423

>>53405

Dank

>deitoing your meido

But that's againts the rules!


 No.53424

>>53421

Oh, and clothing damage then lewd


 No.53425

>>53423

Well, he did admit it's a conflict of interest…

>>53424

Alrighty. If others agree, that's the road I'll go down.


 No.53497

File: 1438807060628.png (174.19 KB, 602x482, 301:241, 1424422405571.png)

>>53405

God dammit.


 No.53506

>>52843

That was nice story thanks. But yeah like >>52879 said I was hoping she would sniff him and awkwardness that would've followed but other than that it was nice.


 No.53533

File: 1438821637726.jpg (392.75 KB, 1920x1080, 16:9, 1435980380219.jpg)

More Gessen-sensei (Pt. 4)

http://pastebin.com/sCfG6X9Q

Definitely one more part coming. I'm thinking of taking all the parts at and fitting them together into one long piece that flows a bit better at some point.

>>52879

>>53506

I did put in a line about her "sensing" his intentions but I guess her reaching over the table to sniff him and get cream from her scone all over her dangling chest would have been fun


 No.53576

>>53421

That was cute. You might call it your weakest, but I think it's a cute little snippet of the day.

As for your next story do whichever comes together first, since I'm sure at some point you'll do both

>>53533

That's an interesting bit and way to leave it.

Don't worry about the sniffing - it would've been fun, but it isn't mandatory for the story you told

>>53497

>>53423

>>53409

Glad you guys liked my ebin shitposting:^)


 No.53833

>>53405

Le ebin for the meme! I'm surprised we don't have more Senran'ified versions of copy pastas.

>>53421

Nice! Meido score! Good job man, short, sweet, and to the point.

>>53533

You got me curious as what happened, please keep up with this story!


 No.54104

File: 1438892805614.jpg (94.28 KB, 640x800, 4:5, Weapons-grade waifu~.jpg)

>What the fuck did you just fucking say about me, you little pussy ass bitch?

>I’ll have you know I graduated top of my class in the Hebijo Clandestine Academy for Girls, and I’ve been involved in numerous secret raids on Hanzõ, and I have over 300 confirmed kills.

>I am trained in snake warfare and I’m the top sniper in the entire Evil Shinobi forces.

>You are nothing to me but just another target.

>I will wipe you the fuck out with precision the likes of which has never been seen before on this Earth, mark my fucking words.

>You think you can get away with saying that shit to me over the Internet?

>Think again, fucker.

>As we speak I am contacting my secret network of spies across Japan and your IP is being traced right now so you better prepare for the storm, maggot.

>The storm that wipes out the pathetic little thing you call your life.

>You’re fucking dead, squid.

>I can be anywhere, anytime, and I can kill you in over seven hundred ways, and that’s without even using my skirt.

>Not only am I extensively trained in unarmed combat, but I have access to the entire arsenal of the Hebijo Clandestine Academy for Girls and I will use it to its full extent to wipe your miserable ass off the face of the island, you little shit.

>If only you could have known what unholy retribution your little “clever” comment was about to bring down upon you, maybe you would have held your fucking tongue.

>But you couldn’t, you didn’t, and now you’re paying the price, you goddamn squidiot.

>I will shit fury all over you and you will drown in it.

>You’re fucking dead, squiddo.


 No.54143

File: 1438895410049.webm (2.94 MB, 1280x720, 16:9, 1438842999873.webm)


 No.54152

File: 1438896156850.jpg (97.82 KB, 640x800, 4:5, 1438390595147-2.jpg)

>>54104

Mirai Battlefield/CoD/CS DLC when?

I feel like doing a Ryoubi greentext story based on those idea suggestions from yesterday though I don't know if someone is already writing one.


 No.54214

File: 1438901703254.jpg (97.53 KB, 640x800, 4:5, 1437177734594.jpg)

Can Kumo get a game of [Generic Fantasy Tabletop RPG] going with a group of Senrans?

http://pastebin.com/wYtjSMhP

New Gessen-sensei soon. Thanks for those waiting for more


 No.54225

>>54104

It's funny, because it could be Yagyu she's going after - Burst style Mirai - or she's just playing Splatoon.

>>54152

If you want to do a greentext, go for it. It'll be like when we all wrote those Yo stories. It'll be fun to see different takes on her, in my opinion.

>>54214

That was a fun one.

>Mirai and Shiki

>Ashiya gettin told

>That Daidouji

and I'll eagerly await the new Gessen-sensei, but don't worry about rushing it out


 No.54229

>>54152

Don't let me hold you back. That just means more Ryoubi love


 No.54344

File: 1438914563369.jpg (526.71 KB, 689x1000, 689:1000, 1438784070159.jpg)

Can Yaggers help Hibbers finish a spooky game?

http://pastebin.com/YiMfzsxT


 No.54353

>>54344

>Silent Evil 2

This one brings me back. Cute story, I really liked it. I also like how you played off of both series with the monsters


 No.54448

File: 1438928569965.jpg (154.71 KB, 800x1131, 800:1131, 1438924859757-0.jpg)

>You were staring at the tits on the employees!

http://pastebin.com/1vsV87EJ


 No.54530


 No.54578

File: 1438965095340-0.jpg (56.85 KB, 243x277, 243:277, 1423798624333.jpg)

File: 1438965095341-1.jpg (4.33 KB, 200x228, 50:57, dongexpands.jpg)

>>54448

Damn, good job.


 No.55133

File: 1439022399832.jpg (165.49 KB, 640x800, 4:5, 1438390595106-0.jpg)

Wow, I wrote alot more than I expected and this is just part 1.

http://pastebin.com/gN63Xn5i


 No.55159

>>55133

Nice. Looking forward to part two


 No.55216

>>55133

That poor, poor, lucky anon


 No.55405

File: 1439074462712.jpg (507.23 KB, 836x1030, 418:515, 1438382111461 (1).jpg)

New Gessen-sensei

http://pastebin.com/2emTeGUG

Now to decide whether to continue from here and wrap up a loose ends or to redo the story and fit those loose ends in there.


 No.55701

>>55405

That was really cute and endearing.

Which loose ends are you concerned about?


 No.55711

>>55701

It just feels like there should be a rematch to an earlier conflict and some more relationship building with the other girls leading up to this


 No.55726

>>55711

Well if you're looking for a rematch with Hebijo I think continuing from this point is actually a really good way to do it, just because now the Gessen girls and Hajime have learned of their pasts, especially since the relationships can build between student and teacher and one another in training.

Of course, I'm only making a suggestion. I like what you've written so far, and I'm ready to read whatever these 6 get into next


 No.55972

>>55405

I like it! The only thing to note about it though is that Murakumo seemed to disappear half-way through the story.


 No.55996

>>55972

I think a lot of that had to do with a time skip and so many potential voices at once but I added more of her for the rabid muracutie fanbase.


 No.56310

File: 1439157482776.jpg (90.64 KB, 960x544, 30:17, 2015-07-10-161722.jpg)

Shiki plays matchmaker for Rin

http://pastebin.com/XJaDimmD


 No.56327

>>56310

Cute and simple. I wonder how Rin would take to another man.


 No.56552

File: 1439189337015.jpg (545.35 KB, 1100x1600, 11:16, 1436552615798.jpg)

Let's kick off the Miyabi birthday celebration a little early with this one:

http://pastebin.com/Uejhukg5

>>56327

Perhaps she'd have a healthy glow and a silly grin on her face?


 No.56582

>>56552

I'm crying bitch tears right now. I went through a similar experience one time. Thanks for the story man, I appreciate it.


 No.56601

>>56552

Sounds about right for a new relationship

Also, well written birthday story. I feel like that really could've been how Imu acted and why I found her one of the easier Hebijo to feel for


 No.56878

>>56552

Jesus Christ I didn't see that coming


 No.57649

File: 1439324135083.png (69.06 KB, 845x1005, 169:201, 1429112706861.png)

Another Miya Miya birthday story. Can't have people crying on her big day so this is a cutesy one.

http://pastebin.com/DDnHqDqg


 No.57660

>>57649

That was a cute one, but I can only imagine how hard this was on Imu


 No.57661

>>57649

Poor, poor Imu…


 No.57780

>>57649

Wasn't expecting that ending


 No.57941

File: 1439347378233.jpg (349.11 KB, 727x1000, 727:1000, 1436551089333.jpg)

Well I guess it is only right to let Imu have some fun with Miyabi

http://pastebin.com/uqw11VCn

>>57780

Husbando got the best present of them all!


 No.57947

File: 1439348183796.jpg (98.81 KB, 640x800, 4:5, oMV3wbs.jpg)

>>57941

TEAHOUSES: CONQUERED

Miyabi shouldn't be this adorable but it works


 No.58320

File: 1439409872856.jpg (96.87 KB, 640x800, 4:5, 1429421696822.jpg)


 No.58444

>>58320

Holy shit Ryouna


 No.58475

>>58444

She's the life of the party


 No.59043

>>57941

Nice story! I really enjoyed Imu's reactions.

>>58320

Could Ryouna get Anon killed by Imu, or is Miyabi going to protect him?

Miyabi was really cute here


 No.59417

File: 1439542562134.jpg (97.8 KB, 640x800, 4:5, 1429450118031.jpg)

>you weren't even the 'new guy' for more than a week before there was talk of another hire joining you at the counter

>you had gotten settled in fairly easily, so the other (lazier) employees were leaving showing her the ropes up to you

>so here you were, waiting for them to arrive during a pretty uneventful morning shift

>at the sound of the door opening you perked up a bit, watching as a young woman made her way to you

>she was dressed in a pink skirt and a yellow sweater that didn't try to hide the black straps of what she wore underneath

>a large pink bow sat upon her head, moving a bit with her as she approached

>you waste no time introducing yourself and extending a hand to her, her response confirming that she was the person you were waiting for

>"Ah, nice to meet you, anon", she flashes a smile at you, "so you'll be training me today?"

——————————————————————————————–

>after giving her the basics and guiding her on what does what, you ease up on the instruction as the conversation lightens up

>Haruka seemed to be very playful, keeping you pretty enthralled in the light small talk you were making

>…"It can get pretty boring around here somedays, though"

>"We'll just have to keep each other company, won't we?"

>…"I'm actually pretty new here, too. Started a last week"

>"Really now~ You seemed pretty accustomed to here when you were guiding me. You must be a quick learner"

>…"So feel free to come to me for anything if you need help"

>"Oh my, how considerate of you. You're pretty eager to help me out"

>you find your interest in her building more and more, you really start to look forward to working alongside her

>maybe more

——————————————————————————————–

>not a week after Haruka was brought in she was fired for inappropriate conduct

>the mother of a young customer she was talking with felt she was being indecent and raised hell in the middle of the day

>even though her son certainly didn't seem to feel the same way she did about it

>there was nothing you could do to take the heat off of her, containing your bitterness as she walked out the front door

>you had grown to like her company so much in that short time, you didn't want to see her go

>in fact, you refused to accept it laying down

>excusing yourself/apologizing for abandoning them for a bit, you leave another coworker to handle things as you rush to try and meet up with her

>fortunately you manage to catch up with Haruka, who'd stopped by a cafe to sulk a bit

>you sneak up on her as she sighs into her drink

>"Hey, sorry to hear you got canned over that", you welcome yourself to a seat across from her

>"O-oh, anon. You surprised me. I wasn't expecting you to follow me"

>"well, I never got a chance to say goodbye, you know", you offer an explanation you hope she'll buy

>taking a deep breath, Haruka perks up a bit and seems to change back to the herself

>"Oh my. In that case I'm touched", her playful tone was back, "But I wonder. Is goodbye really what you came here to say?"

>you can't deny that you enjoyed her company, and even if you could she'd see through it

>"So you did want to see me one last time?", Haruka presses on

>feeling brave, you confess that you wouldn't mind seeing her even more than just this last time

>agreeing on a date, you and Haruka part ways so that you could get back to work

>no reason for both of you to get fired today


 No.59424

File: 1439543088807.jpg (103.11 KB, 850x726, 425:363, Miyabi.jpg)

>>57649

>>57941

>>58320

Finally got around to reading all of these. Nice stuff


 No.59468

>>59417

That's a really nice pick-me-up kind of story.


 No.59471

>Started a last week

Go.

To.

Fuckin'!

Jail.

The story was nice, I liked it.


 No.61354

File: 1439845227749.jpg (98.84 KB, 640x800, 4:5, Kurohoro_2.jpg)

>Kurohoro had finally fallen for someone and he made her heart flutter and heat rise inside her in a way she'd never experienced before.

>She had to make her feelings known but not just in any old way. It had to be a truly devious and dastardly plan to match a Machiavellian mind like herself.

>"Perhaps" she thought "I could reveal my true intentions through some kind of secret communique."

>A brilliant idea.

>So Kurohoro put a quill to paper and got writing but what? "I must be sharp and succinct! I'll get his attention with a stunning and unique line."

>'I can conceal dozens of deadly weapons on my person but I can't hide my love for you.' Kurohoro shook her head. "Too on the nose."

>'You've put a dagger through my heart.' This wouldn't do either. "That just makes it sound like he hurt me."

>'I find you intoxicating.' Kurohoro sat back "Too promiscuous."

>Suddenly a shiver went up Kurohoro's spine and she turned ghostly pale "I might like him but what if he doesn't reciprocate my feeling for him?"

>Her plans were ruined!

>"Hold on!" She thought "What if I came up with a way to hint at my feelings while also gathering information about him?"

>Of course, it all made sense. To her.

>So she got writing on a fresh piece of paper and wrote out 'Do you like Kurohoro' and marked out two boxes with 'Yes' and 'No.'

>"You genius Kurohoro!" She giggled to herself "Soon he will be mine!"

>She sealed her note with wax and put it in a safe place. If she got to school early enough she could hide it in a place only he could find.

>Maybe his locker?


 No.61494

>>61354

Ah, young love~


 No.62490

File: 1440018645954.jpg (1.5 MB, 1446x2046, 241:341, 1426728252005.jpg)

Did a rewrite of a story

Its supah best end Shiki in a wifey story

http://pastebin.com/DUFkeLNy


 No.63538

File: 1440148730324.jpg (101.18 KB, 640x800, 4:5, 1440112153931.jpg)

Welp

>"AUGHHH, KASUMI!", Misato's screams broke the silence of the afternoon

>she ran out into the living room of Touno's base, followed quickly by a large pink cushion that flew with a surprising amount of force

>not long after Kasumi rushed into the room as well, another pink projectile in hand as she quickly scanned for her target

>"What, you asked for me to pass you one, didn't you?", Kasumi spoke through her giggles

>"Kumi, Misato…", their leader, Yuyaki, was trying to draw their attention

>"There you are!", the fox snapped into launching position, leaving the caught tanuki no option but to try and cover her face

>before Kasumi could fire, however, she herself was struck in the face by a cushion that came from behind

>Misato's tanuki familiar taunted the foxbutt, drawing praise from its master, "Good job!"

>"Uh, guys…"

>her celebration was short lived, however, as Kasumi simply closed in on her with her pillow primed

>"ENOUGH!!!", the sound of unsheathing sent shiver up both girl' spines

>uh oh

>Yuyaki had finally made her presence known

>"Whoops, Yuyaki's pissed", Kumi dropped her weapon and backed a bit away from the crow, standing side by side with her former target

>"Yuyaki, we'll stop! Please calm down!", Misato started to plead

>"Yeah, see?", Kumi nonchalantly pecked Misato on the lips,"we kissed and made up and all that. Calm down already"

>the kiss was about as affectionate as a kiss between family, but to Misato it seemed to be a grave offense

>Misato jumped back, her face flushed red in embarrassment and anger

>"Whoa, what got into you"?

>"Y-you! H-how dare you!?", Misato seemed to be bubbling over with anger

>"What, that? I was just trying to calm down carrion crow over there. You're acting like I stole your first kiss or something", Kumi explains

>even after spilling her guts like that, Misato didn't seem to calm down

>what was up with her reaction

>then Kumi pieced it together

>"Oh wait, don't tell me…"

>her silence was all the confirmation the foxgirl needed

>"Oh this is amazing!", Kumi grips her sides in laughter

>"H-hey! That's not a joke, dammit!", her friends reaction didn't help calm her down at all

>"Don't worry, tanukibutt", Kumi loops an arm around her friend's waist,"I'll take full responsibilty for making a woman out of you!"

>Misato quickly wriggles her way out of her grasp,"Let go of me, already!"

>oddly enough, this argument seemed not to upset Yuyaki even more

>she was actually calming down

>"And what's up with her now? Why is she smiling!?"

>Nachi, who'd been observing quietly over her cup of tea chimed in

>"Yuyaki can see the difference between an argument and a lover's quarrel, it seems"

>"Lover's what!? Not you too!?"


 No.63898

File: 1440206410361.jpg (279.66 KB, 1447x2047, 1447:2047, 1432400622275.jpg)

Here's my Ginrei birthday story a few weeks early. I figure a New Wave like her won't get much love with Asuka and Hikage celebrating at the same time.

http://pastebin.com/AHnUJWs3

>>63538

Fox-tits x Tanuki-butt forever!


 No.64581

>>63898

Damn she went all out


 No.65160

File: 1440388408165.jpg (101.61 KB, 640x800, 4:5, 1440384838286.jpg)

Ushimaru story. You have no idea how hard it was to not make itmilky

http://pastebin.com/8unqe2tV

>>64581

Leo spares no expense!


 No.65270

File: 1440402308111.jpg (1022.62 KB, 800x1236, 200:309, foreplay.jpg)

'Aight, lemme try my hand at this.

>At the edge of the city sits a quiet, grassy field to the casual observer

>To a shinobi, however, it rings with the sharp sound of clashing swords

>Asuka and Homura dart all around swiping at each other, only to meet the other's blades or shred clothing

>Dummies occasionally pop up, only to be cut down immediately

>Asuka eventually makes a misstep; Homura seizes the opportunity and rushes her

>Both tumble to the ground, Homura atop her opponent

>They stare at each other, panting heavily

>Homura impulsively leans down and kisses Asuka, a move that surprises both of them

>She pulls away quickly, blushing profusely

>"S-sorry Jugs!" she stammers. "It's just… you looked really pretty w-with the sun setting and the light and…"

>She stands up and turns to leave before she spills any more spaghetti

>"Yeah, I'm just going to–"

>A hand falls on her shoulder and turns her around

>"Not yet."

>Asuka pulls her in and tenderly returns the favor. She pulls back after a few seconds and smiles

>"I thought you looked amazing myself."

>She gives the renegade a quick hug. "See you tomorrow."

>And just like that, Asuka is gone

>Homura stands there in shock for a bit, then grins like a dope

>"Yeah. See ya."

Uwaah, that was cheesy.


 No.65426

>>65270

Dammit jugs


 No.65645

File: 1440454143972.jpg (91.97 KB, 960x544, 30:17, 1432752497805.jpg)

New Shiki. She's getting some cravings lately

http://pastebin.com/gWFCszam


 No.66177

File: 1440533621788-0.png (50.02 KB, 182x190, 91:95, 1419341555770b.png)

File: 1440533621789-1.png (51.08 KB, 182x190, 91:95, 1428057387470.png)

>>65645

Anoncchi is a big ol perv!


 No.66178

File: 1440533662850.jpg (165.74 KB, 640x800, 4:5, 1440299743851.jpg)

Aimu's not a kid anymore! She'll make Zodiac stop babying her!

http://pastebin.com/7VVainGW


 No.66180

>>66178

Time for Aimu to get serious!

>Nachi leaves them with the bill

[Hand rubbing intensifies]


 No.66184

>>66177

>>66180

Am not! Except for the times I was

And Nachi couldn't resist getting another petty victory over Zodiac


 No.66885

File: 1440654089197.jpg (99.13 KB, 640x800, 4:5, Stamping Haruka.jpg)

http://sta.sh/0uk4gxehog8

Here we go… I think I did a good job with it. I wanted to make Anon really meek and quite demure, someone who has trouble making choices, but… I specifically tried to avoid all rape-y undertones while it's implied that Anon is a young adult at best, I wanted to make it a clear choice. Especially because I think the rape of boys/young men is a more serious issue than most other forms of rape, considering the reaction to it. I think I did a good job with it… Even if there's a clear power gap, I wanted to make it a somewhat natural one. One where there was a clear choice at hand, where she did let him truly decide for himself.


 No.68779

File: 1440826821490.jpg (98.12 KB, 640x800, 4:5, 83e231d5abb2a4ab.jpg)

Been a while since I posted here or did a lewd, I even neglected to check this >>66885 out

Oh well

http://pastebin.com/94Q6tcqS


 No.68792

>>66885

Poor anon has no idea what they signed up for


 No.68890

>>68779

Only mistake I found is that you said there are four people, when it only says you, Mirai and Haruka are in there. Besides that…

It was really good!

>>68792

Aye…


 No.68965

>>68890

To tell you the truth that wasn't gonna be a lewd at first. I ended up going back and removing the parts that mentioned Hikage because she ended up being there for no reason


 No.69164

I'm going to try to keep going before the weekend is over, I promise.

>>61354

Cute - is she the team strategist?

>>62490

Fantastic end and nice detail. Really liked this one, and I'm sure Shiki would make a great mom.

>>63538

I know nothing about these girls, but I really liked the attention to detail on this one. Also, that first kiss….priceless

>>63898

Poor drill-chan. Tanookis causing problems all up in these stories so far. Leo did all she could to make it a happy birthday though…

Fun stories all around, as usual!


 No.69171

>>69164

>is she the team strategist?

Yep

>>69164

>I know nothing about these girls

Well, Kumi, the fox, often ends up bullying Misato, the tanuki, til their leader Yuyaki, the crow who also always tries to resolve situations peacefully, gets involved. If/when Yuyaki fails she often snaps and goes crazy.


 No.71047

>>69171

Thanks for clearing that up! Seems they'd be interesting in a game that would give them a good deal of screentime, because they could do a lot with the bickering and given the animal connection, I'd expect them to be heavy in the game they're in, if it were to happen

>>65160

>Wake up stiff

I didn't think she'd be that massive, but then again I guess I'm underestimating her cow-like tendencies.

>>65270

Cheesy, but still cute. Short and sweet.

>>65645

This was a lot of fun to read. The cravings were what I'd expect for Shiki. Have you known someone who would eat sponges or soap? Also, the lactation was hot. There, I said it.

>>66178

Really cute Are Zodiac and Tengu rival factions?

>>66885

I had fun reading it. Good thing you took her offer. If you thought a rat could make noise in your house like she did, it might be best to relocate to her kennel

If you don't mind my asking, could this figuratively be about your shell?

>>68779

Nice. Definitely something I'd expect from her. It's always fun how Haruka can be caring, lewd, and everything in-between. Had you not mentioned how you used to have Hikage there, part of me wouldn't have wished she was to be attentive but not care, while Mirai got all worked up


 No.71104

>>71047

>Zodiac and Tengu

Those two are probably the only defined rivalry among New Wave schools. Beyond some cards that kinda hint it the super form event that just ended had both team leaders face off, and from some translated dialog from it apparently Yuyaki and Leo are bitter enemies


 No.71171

File: 1441049812306.png (366.03 KB, 514x383, 514:383, 1440469658130.png)

Can Anon impress Hanzo by being daring?

http://pastebin.com/xXEzvt8m

>>69164

Shiki would be a supah mom

>>71047

Ushimaru is charmingly poochy

There are cases where cravings lead to wanting to eat inedible items and you'd probably like certain lewds I've done


 No.71173

>>71171

>Even trying that with Sayuri around

Hanzo's getting ballsy in his old age.

Very nice.


 No.71201

>>71171

Oh that wacky Hanzo! Sayuri took that pretty well


 No.71495

>>71171

>the test

>the result

>Holy crackers

Top notch, I laughed the whole time

You've got something hidden away in that pastebin file? I thought I read each story, including the lewds


 No.71565

Ok, time to begin.

>>57649

Really cute story, I greatly enjoyed this one! There's just something so adorable about girls wearing their man's shirts and clothing. Good job.

>>57941

This one had me cracking a huge smile as you described how Miyabi was dolled up. Loved the setting and scenario!

>>58320

Holy shit, that ending. Poor Miyabi, she just wanted some loving!

>>59417

Aww, Anon is so romantic! What a sweet story.

>>61354

Good job with this one, it's nice to see Kurohoro get some love, and fall in love herself!

>>63538

When I saw the ideas of the story come up in that one general, I thought this was gonna turn into a lewd. Any reason why Kasumi was hanging out with them? Having a girls night with Touno?

>>63898

Mmm, delicious drills. Poor Ginrei though, glad everything turned out alright for her!

>>65160

Way too cute and adorable, loved it! Hardly get to see anything about Ushimaru compared to her teammates.

>>65270

It was cheesy, but good! Hardly get any yuri stories so this was a breath of fresh air! Thank you for this greentext!

>>65645

Oh boy, I could feel Anon's pain in this one. Good job on this one, I really liked the scenario you set up here!

>>66178

Oh Aimu, you're so adorable! I'd love to see Zodiac and Touno stories like this, it was so cute!

>>66885

Nicely done, I didn't quite expect that when you had shared the draft of this story, good read man!

>>68779

Totally sounds like something Haruka would try, good job man! I was almost expecting Hikage to have been watching the whole time and then just kinda mumble to herself something about it all.

>>68965

Oh, I just saw that Hikage was almost there. It felt like she was there the whole time, at least to me it felt like that.

>>71171

Hanzo, that sneaky snake! I could just imagine Anon doing some dodge rolls like in Dark Souls to avoid all of the traps in the house. Good job!


 No.71601

File: 1441090523901.jpg (99.88 KB, 640x800, 4:5, c718b7caee9045f1.jpg)

>>71565

>this is how I realise I typed Kasumi

>it's literally the 2nd word and I didn't notice

Kill me


 No.71627

>>71601

Mistakes happen, it's all good man! Thanks for the stories!


 No.71808

File: 1441125308007-0.jpg (98.82 KB, 640x800, 4:5, ef23f797d933f26e.jpg)

File: 1441125308033-1.jpg (99.93 KB, 640x800, 4:5, 25446799eb76b0d6.jpg)

>"Are you still getting ready?", you call from Chiyo's front porch

>"I'm coming, I'm coming. Keep your skirt on!", she retorted, finally emerging from the doorway

>with the outfit she was wearing, you could imagine that she was taking that long to try and squeeze herself into it

>her top exposed her entire midriff, being just long enough to cover her chest

>and those shorts were outrageous, not hiding any of her supple thigh meat

>as Chiyo turned to lock the door behind her you had to consciously pull your eyes up before they lingered on her legs too long

>"Right, let's get going, shall we?"

—————————————————————————————-

>days like this where you would just kick around with Chiyo were the best

>around her you felt like you could take it easy, you didn't worry about somethings you may have if it were some other girl

>"Hey, slowpoke, what are you lagging behind for?", she looks over her shoulder, a few paces ahead of you

>"Sorry I can't keep up with a ninja I guess"

>Chiyo spins to face you, "Don't give me that. I'm just walking here. Do you lose to girls that easily?"

>she comes a bit closer to you

>"I bet you were staring at some girl, weren't you?", a playful grin comes over her face

>you try to deny, but Chiyo doesn't seem to buy it

>"C'mon, don't try to hide it. You aren't as sneaky as you think you are, ya know? I've seen you staring"

>her comment caught you offguard, and she could tell, "What are you talking about?"

>"Don't play dumb. I see the way you look at Fuga sometimes. Those traditional types are your thing, huh?"

>you're both confused and relieved over the misunderstanding, you don't know where she could've gotten that idea

>stopping at a bench to continue the converstation, you watch as Chiyo drops onto her seat and sits spread legged in those ridiculous shorts of hers

>"Hey, don't you feel cold like that?"

>"What, this? I feel free in it. I can do whatever I want in these", she explains

>"Yeah, but I can actually see your panties with how you're sitting now"

>"Woah, perv", Chiyo snaps her legs shut, "Didn't think you were a legman"

>"I was just trying to keep you from getting in trouble for being indecent"

>"Well isn't that nice of you?"

>the conversation fades out as a pleasant breeze flows in, both of you just basking in it

>you turn to look at Chiyo, who's sitting with one leg crossed over the other and her hands behind her head

>the wind was playing with the bit of her top that hung below her chest, drawing your eyes to them

>it's sometimes easy to overlook it, but Chiyo is a damn beautiful girl with a stellar body

>a pair of nice, round tits, her thick thighs and butt, further enhanced by the pants and shorts she loves to wear

>Chiyo's eyes flicker open, "Ready to head off again?"

>you raise up from your seat at her question and, without thinking, offer a gentlemanly hand to help her up

>she grabs your hand and pulls herself up, taking a moment to tug at her top and adjust her shorts before you set off again


 No.71982

>>71047

Actually I hoped it implied that Haruka was silent, rather than mice being loud as fuck. But I like your interpretation more.

Yes and no… I did kinda think about that, but that was something I only thought after the story was basically done.

>>71565

Glad you like it! I'm somewhat proud of it, haha…


 No.72125

>>71808

Cute

>"I was just trying to keep you from getting in trouble for being indecent"

preventing her from getting arrested?

>>71982

Well I figured if it was enough noise for you to notice, those rats are HUGE. I actually didn't consider mice are traditionally quiet.

Cool - do you often think about the stories like that afterward? Or do you prefer to plan them out like that first, if you don't mind my asking


 No.72199

File: 1441162534715.jpg (2.13 MB, 1161x1700, 1161:1700, 6aa4890782c717ecacbd2d86f6….jpg)

Hikage early birthday story

http://pastebin.com/MHUxZPPz

this could have ended up lewd

>>71495

ctfl+F haruka and ryouna for the milky stuff

>>71565

That's a lot of feedback. Thanks for taking the time.


 No.72483

>>72199

Something something the presents will come later because they're coming first


 No.72578

File: 1441203763229.jpg (305.79 KB, 850x478, 425:239, 1429483651220.jpg)

Another Hikage birthday story. What happens when snakelady follows you home like a lost puppy?

http://pastebin.com/V2GVWnT9

>>72483

That's a real knee-slapper.


 No.73690

File: 1441322600977.jpg (82.16 KB, 640x800, 4:5, Mai_01.jpg)


 No.74391

I made an account. Expect Leo's part today or tomorrow.

http://pastebin.com/u/Birthday_Anon


 No.74640

File: 1441427973936.jpg (52.48 KB, 1280x720, 16:9, 1429469050562.jpg)

Asuka story. High school romance and bentos.

http://pastebin.com/LhPNbhLC

>>74391

totes looking forward to it


 No.74682

File: 1441431939103.jpg (19.76 KB, 400x300, 4:3, 1421020603438.jpg)

>>74640

Come on, heart… stay with me… Gotta make it… a few more… days…

Asuka's so cute. This was a really adorable story, Anoncchi! Great work!


 No.75523

Time to get caught up on these

>>72578

Poor Hikage, being alone on her birthday

>>73690

Cute, I liked it


 No.75533

>>75523

Whoops

>>74640

I need to get my Asu-birthday done


 No.75596

File: 1441511912043-0.jpg (254.75 KB, 640x800, 4:5, 8jDhHpd.jpg)

File: 1441511912048-1.jpg (99.16 KB, 640x800, 4:5, cuCvSXd.jpg)

File: 1441511912078-2.jpg (99.08 KB, 640x800, 4:5, jzE1tR2.jpg)

File: 1441511912078-3.jpg (99.5 KB, 640x800, 4:5, Yuyaki5.jpg)

Well here it is. I really don't like it compared to part 1.

http://pastebin.com/0nMu5VUn


 No.75601

>>75596

I forgot my name.


 No.75754

File: 1441516834938.jpg (894.46 KB, 4469x6358, 4469:6358, 1435004375594.jpg)

Another Asuka

http://pastebin.com/EgaE237n

>>75533

Hikage's not alone. She has her anon. d'aww


 No.75778

>>75754

Aww…

I really needed this tonight. Thanks for writing it, Anoncchi.

I'm still behind on a bunch of stories, but personal bias has a way of moving an item further up my to-do list.


 No.76072

File: 1441568783579.jpg (98.26 KB, 640x800, 4:5, 3ded2e6d81fce35f.jpg)


 No.77258

File: 1441689966839.jpg (104.07 KB, 640x800, 4:5, 1441422997093.jpg)


 No.77458

>>77258

Always nice to have more AsuHomu.


 No.77559

>>72199

>Staying in bed

Sounds good! I liked it. Simple yet sweet.

>>72578

Ballsy anon allowing a sneg to come home with him. I know a few people who would do just that, though. The questioning was good - felt like something Hikage would do

>>73690

Cute. I like the interactions you make up, especially with characters that don't have much to really go on except small blurbs from NW. Keep it up!

>>74640

Cute. Young love, really romantic, and cute in a way I can't really put into words. It's simple, but powerful.

>>75596

Cute, but I will admit it took me a while to put it all together.

>Wacky

I forgot all about this guy. Looking forward to part 3!


 No.77624

>>77559

>Wakaki

Thanks Autocorrect


 No.77673

>>77559

Glad you liked it.


 No.77901

>>75754

I love stories about that playful side. It feels like the Asuka we always see in the art, where she's always just so happy and jovial and others, like Homura, are aghast

>>76072

really cute Are those three her cousins in EV?

>>77258

Story 1 : Nice. I liked the inclusion of the scars

2: I'm surprised Yagyu didn't bounce Haruka. I wonder who got more time with Asuka

3: I wouldn't be surprised if she pulled off something like that. I liked it, felt like Asuka was getting people for her birthday all day!


 No.78218

File: 1441771719644-0.jpg (526.66 KB, 1280x960, 4:3, Futomaki Birthday.JPG)

File: 1441771719700-1.jpg (321.48 KB, 944x893, 944:893, Asuka 177.jpg)

File: 1441771719700-2.jpg (116.57 KB, 814x816, 407:408, Futocakey.jpg)

It's time. One last hurrah! A happy, happy birthday to Asuka, personally prepared! Just pretend pic 3 is how it actually turned out.

http://pastebin.com/7kbkP95s


 No.78223

>>78218

Well shit. Didn't get to finish mine. Posting now would just make me feel inept by comparison. Yours is way better

Mine wasn't even a birthday story anyway…


 No.78227

>>78223

Go for it!


 No.78228

>>78218

You really went all out, man. That was a fun read! All of the pieces fit well, and even though the cake didn't turn out as planned the rolls look and were written in great.

Happy Birthday indeed.


 No.78229

>>78223

Don't feel that way, man. It's the thought that counts.


 No.78264

>Devastation is widespread, fires raging all around

>Homura crashes through a pile of rubble, slamming back-first onto a concrete slab. What remains of her clothing is in tatters

>A humanoid monster follows her. With it comes a horrifying power. What appear to be large tentacles made from the rubble sway behind it. Though clearly inhuman, it is still recognizable, much to Homura's chagrin

>The renegade spits out some blood and glares at the beast before her. "Dogen you bastard," she snarls. "I keep killing you, and yet you keep coming back. How?"

>Dogen smirks. "Nanomachines, sonAll puppets and illusions. You never killed me. You never will kill me."

>"We'll see about that, you coward. One of these days, I'll find you and tear you to shreds."

>The beast lets out a booming, raspy laugh. "You fool. You won't get the chance. You will instead have the pleasure of watching all your friends die slowly before I kill you."

>He punts Homura aside, eliciting a sharp gasp and another stream of bloody saliva. "Now… who will die first? Your weakling teammates?" Homura glares, but says nothing. "No? Perhaps that one girl you're so fond of… Asuka, was it?"

>"No!" The Crimson Squad leader lunges at Dogen. "Stay the hell away from her!"

>A large tentacle slams her aside into more rubble. "You're in no condition to fight. Even if you were, you would still be no match for me!"

>Dogen dangles a scroll in front of Homura's face, waving it tauntingly. "Not only have I become one with Orochi, I also have the power of your Super Secret Ninja Art scroll. I am fucking invincibleunstoppable!

>He throws his head back and laughs. Homura squeezes her eyes shut, resigning herself to her fate. "Asuka…" she whimpers. "I'm sorry…"

>Dogen's laughs suddenly turn to pained screeches as a flash of emerald blazes past him, the tentacles on his back crumbling to dust

>"I'll take that!"

>The scroll disappears from his hand before he is sent flying into a crumbling building

>Homura's eyes squeak open, her savior standing before her. "A-Asuka?!"

>The Hanzo student smiles warmly and pulls her friend up. Her body is enveloped in a bright green aura, her hair loosed from its usual ponytail. "Are you alright, Homura?"

>"Ah… aside from getting my ass kicked by an ugly son of a bitch powered by my Super Secret Ninja scroll, I-I'm just fine." She finds herself unable to meet Asuka's gaze

>Asuka frowns. "I want to talk to you once we deal with him." She hands the aforementioned scroll to Homura. "I only got him by surprise. I can't do this by myself, but we can kill him if we–"

>"Work together, I know." Homura smiles at her best friend and takes the scroll. "You've made damn sure I know we can do more together."

>Power flows through her, turning her hair red and relieving her of her pain.

>Meanwhile, Dogen busts down the wall he was sent through with a haunting, earsplitting roar

>Asuka drops into her battle stance as Homura draws the crimson sword on her back. They grin at each other before belting out the same battle cry:

>"Let's dance!"

There's going to be an entire other part to it, but I'm cutting it off right here for now.


 No.78300

>>78218

Man, I'm impressed with how muc h you poured into it

>>78264

Awaiting part two


 No.78374

Finally catching up on backlogged stories!

>>54214

This was fantastic. Great cast, great banter, feels like something that could keep going for multiple parts.

>>54344

Really adorable. I almost never play horror games, so Yagyu is pretty much me in that scenario.

>>56552

Happy boobs are gone.

>>57649

And they're back! Miyabi can be really cute when she wants to be.

>>57941

Cute and silly! Good ol' Imu.

>>58320

Miyabi just can't catch a break. Also, god damn, Ryouna!

>>59417

Not even a week? More like almost a whole week!

This was touching.

>>61354

Oh, the joys of being an obsessive planner…

>>63898

Now THAT'S dedication!

>>65160

Built for cuddles. Totally worth it.

>>68779

Bueno~!

>>71808

Chiyo's pretty cute.

>>72199

>>72578

These were both really sweet. Hikage's an odd duck, but it's hard not to love her.


 No.78423

>>78264

Nice. Will part two be a fight sequence or a post-fight, do you think?


 No.78489

>>78423

Post-fight. Can't write action sequences to save my life.


 No.78846

And the rest!

>>73690

Mai's so adorable. This was really cute.

>>75596

A but hard to follow, admittedly, but a good read.

>>76072

I wish I read this one sooner. One of the ideas I was toying with before deciding on my own story was pretty much this, so I'm happy to see it given life. Good work, man!

>>77258

1, not my thing, but it's written well.

2, a very touching celebration with friends.

3, deliciously lewd!

Good stuff, Anoncchi! Good stuff!

>>78264

We don't get a lot of stories that are straight-up fights. This was an interesting read. Looking forward to seeing how the second part turns out.

>>78300

>>78228

It took a lot of work, but it was completely worth it, I'd say. Even the fail-cake was delicious.


 No.79153

>>78489

Sounds good - looking forward to it!

>>78846

Good to hear! It was great to see and read. You really made the whole experience great.


 No.80266

File: 1441955933306.jpg (82.91 KB, 640x800, 4:5, 1441749983583-1.jpg)

>was supposed to be about soapy tits

>ended up as long ass feelsy shit

Welp

http://pastebin.com/qHz4UbUF


 No.80279

>>80266

Yeah, it was more sappy than soapy, but it was nice. I think it worked.


 No.81194

>>80266

That was really sweet. Nice


 No.82507

File: 1442200588222.jpg (99.17 KB, 640x800, 4:5, 12.jpg)

How's about a Karasu story? Complete with music for your enjoyment!

http://pastebin.com/kkUPZAjj


 No.82549

File: 1442204003415.jpg (66.32 KB, 566x800, 283:400, shinycard.jpg)

>It had been over a week since TPP had released and your copy arrived at your doorstep, you haven't spoken to anyone since then, fearing that doing so would leave an opening for a rival to invade your FOB without you to protect it

>your phone rang but you ignored, putting on your wireless headset to block out the noise of the outside world

>for 30 minutes you continued to obsessively play in peace until a soft hand covered your eyes, Shiki couldn't deal with being ignored by her neetie-kun

>"Heya neetie, how ya been?" Shiki took off your headset and blew into your ear, taking your full attention

>"S-Shiki b-babe I can explain!" you panicked and blushed and Shiki smirked and watched you try to come up with a good excuse for not speaking to her

>"I-I'm…sorry, I got caught up in this game b-but I'm turning it off now" you reached down and turned off your console "Besides, I need a little Shiki love once in a while~" you smiled and curled up near Shiki who had been laying on your bed

>Shiki brought your head into her lap and petted you gently, smiling as you closed your eyes and fell asleep

>"Its almost sunrise, I think I'll just bunk here tonight 'kay? oh, you wanted to invite me to stay for a few weeks as an apology for ignoring me? I'll gladly accept hun!" Shiki said loudly as you slept, or so she thought

>"mmhhh…stay till spring babe….." you mumbled in your sleep

>Shiki flustered, pulled the covers over the both of you and brought you up to her chest

>"s-shush well figure this out later" Shiki kissed your cheek goodnight and cuddled you, blushing as her feelings were reciprocated by her crush


 No.82582

>>82507

I liked it. I also really like how you've got the Angels as up-and-comers since it helps allow you to have some freedom with what to do with Karasu's setting. Obviously, if she were famous she'd never be in the park. The duets were sweet.

>>82549

Shiki would. I really liked this one, especially since it feels so real. A blushing Shiki is totes adorbs.

Those FOBs, man…


 No.82610

>>82582

From what I can tell, there's no source saying just how major ARC is compared to Milky Pop, where an idol group would obviously have a great deal of exposure and it would be harder for the members to go anywhere without squee-ing fans chasing them. All I've read just says that ARC is a band, they have a good number of fans and they've done interviews. I always took them as more of a garage band/up-and-coming group myself, and I think it works for them.

Glad you liked it!


 No.82854

>>82507

She's got some big ambitions

It was nice

>>82549

Shiki didn't waste anytime planning more quality time with them, I see


 No.83094

File: 1442263807433.png (1.08 MB, 1000x688, 125:86, 1440880159680.png)

Imu story. Foxy-boxers had a big evening planned but it looks like it didn't work out, now she has to rely on the people she loves to make it all better.

http://pastebin.com/NbQk5GBG

>>82507

rocking out with karasu


 No.83108

>>83094

That's really cute. It's nice to see Miyabi and Murasaki get to love Imu some, since she needs it. I also think it's hilarious how quickly Miyabi takes charge here with the ice cream and provisions.


 No.83124

>>83094

That was really good. Glad to see the best Hebi girl getting her evening fixed…


 No.83820

File: 1442302858742.png (108.05 KB, 1000x846, 500:423, Murasame.png)

After a hard day at work, Murasame drags his co-worker Anon out for drinks.

http://pastebin.com/yH3Kd8Ss

>>83108

>>83124

Thanks for the feedback. Will do some more Imu since there seems to be a demand for Imu stories.


 No.83950

>>83820

Part of me wants to say "Classic Murasame" but I know that's not the case. I say that because you captured him exactly as I've envisioned him, a bit of a foolhardy everyman. I like it helps I've got a friend like that too


 No.84069

>>83820

That was awesome! Though one small correction…

He did get a trophy, but it's an incredibly small, 6th place trophy. Really just a consolation prize, but a trophy nonetheless. I know, because it's a weapon he can use in SK2.


 No.84092

File: 1442350668557.jpg (163.04 KB, 535x810, 107:162, 1433175445450.jpg)

Some more Shiki. Because there's always more Shiki. I put this on hold for a bit since someone had a similar story.

http://pastebin.com/kzmkrieK

>>83950

Murasame's quite a guy and that friend sounds like a riot too

>>84069

Alrighty, I made a change to that part

'I would have even gotten on the podium in a tournament if it wasn't rigged. Instead all I got what some participation trophy, I should have used it to wail on 'em. It just burns me up, man. I'm still fighting that injustice to this day.'


 No.84155

>>84092

>since someone had a similar story

It's like writefag cockblocking

Ah, Shiki is such a romantic~


 No.84178

File: 1442358864082.jpg (Spoiler Image, 165.8 KB, 553x600, 553:600, 1442164311358.jpg)

Since SK2 is out, can i expect some Kagura in the future?


 No.84194

>>84178

Where there's a will there's a way


 No.84199

>>84194

T-thanks, Goku.


 No.84226

>>83094

This was really sweet. Imu is criminally underrated.

>>83820

Had a good laugh with this one. Murasame's lucky to be alive after trying that.

>>84092

Bathtime is fun, and there's a lot that can be done with it. No shame if a similar premise gives you ideas. It's what you do with it that matters.

This was nice. Shiki's such a tease.


 No.84363

File: 1442372066799.jpg (111.7 KB, 640x800, 4:5, c24b548f598de91d.JPG)

http://pastebin.com/GbDzeJ3N

A short one about a poor, sick anon in Haruka's care

Post last edited at

 No.84523

>>84363

>"If you were sick you should've said something", she her tone switches back from ,"and let me take care of you~"

Really good, besides that line sending you straight to jail.


 No.84536

>>84523

Dammit, I wanted to change that part and got distracted.


 No.84979

It occurs to me I should probably put this up here in case some folks don't visit the original /vg/ threads anymore.

http://pastebin.com/u/Storytiem_Anon


 No.85000

>>84979

Cool - it'll be nice to see what's new!

Yeah, I haven't gone back since my initial banning/return, especially when my return to /skg/ was just a big fight on the thread trying to build animosity between 4/skg/ and 8/skg/


 No.85473

>>85000

Everything after Hikage 23 is what's new, everything before that is the old collection finally being uploaded.

As far as the threads, you're probably not missing too much. It's about much of the same.

On an aside note, would people like me to bring S3 over here in addition to the the old general? I figure it's relevant to this thread's interests, but I'll let you guys decide.


 No.85521

>>85473

That'd be nice. I'm up for it


 No.85766

File: 1442535546622.jpg (100.63 KB, 640x800, 4:5, 1430205758476.jpg)

Bashou birthday story

http://pastebin.com/g2TFvf8W


 No.85917

File: 1442548114767.jpg (101.64 KB, 640x800, 4:5, 1437162608015.jpg)

Kasumi Birthday Story.

http://pastebin.com/eQjMKki0

Does this story make it painfully obvious I've been playing a lot of Toukiden? Kumoanon could scratch out Kasumi and put in Kumo and he'd have a story.


 No.86212

File: 1442602383193.jpg (4.09 MB, 4303x6060, 4303:6060, 1439995541897-3.jpg)

Murakumo and Yozakura story. What happens when Kumo needs a new subject to pose for her?

http://pastebin.com/BUSh7KUQ


 No.86349

File: 1442622879887.png (Spoiler Image, 242.46 KB, 1024x768, 4:3, 52338854_p0.png)

>>71808

Nice little story, the only thing I got lost on is the mention of Fuga. Not that it's bad but it felt like it kinda came out of left field for me.

>>72199

Are you telling me Hikage didn't want to eat right away?! Cute snake story!

>>72578

Poor Hikage, sad to see her not have anyone to spend her birthday with. Good thing Anon was a nice guy though and helped her!

>>73690

I think this is the first Mai story I've ever read. It was a great introduction to her character and personality! Thank you for the read!

>>74640

Can Asuka be any more adorable with all of that food? Good job!

>>75596

Even though you might not like it, I still had an enjoyable time reading it! Can't wait to see part 3!

>>75754

Playful Asuka best Asuka!

>>76072

I never thought to think that the Mikaguras are technically Asuka's cousins, thank you for including them in the story! I really liked the scenario.

>>77258

1. I really liked that you worked in the main schools. Poor Miyabi, you gotta learn to be nice on someone's birthday!

2. Someday Homu will just be honest with herself from the get go, nice story!

3. Playful even when being lewd! Asuka's a good girl

>>78218

I can feel the love and dedication coming out of this one, very nice job!

>>80266

I really liked it more being about her trying to get over being shy and timid instead of it being a straight lewd story, not that I don't like lewds of her, it was just nice to see this specific scenario play out, good job!

>>82507

Nice, a Karasu story! Thank you bunches for including links to the songs as well! I couldn't figure out what the 2nd song was until I clicked the link then felt stupid I forgot it. Thank you for the read!

>>82549

Good to see Shiki caring for her NEETi!

>>83094

Imu ;_;. What sort of monster would turn her down?! Glad the girls were able to help her out with her rough time!

>>83820

Murasame is a good guy, a GOOD GUY! I would go get drinks with the dude, definitely seems like a fun guy to hang out with!

>>84092

Oh Shiki, you're such a tease! Good story man!

>>84363

Nice story man! I really liked that Haruka really wanted to take care of him, but I can't blame poor Anon for thinking the way he did, I know I would've as well!

>>84979

Thanks for the link man, definitely appreciate it!

>>85766

So the calm, collected beauty almost lost a hold of herself because of her Anon forgetting about her birthday? That's super duper extra adorable!

>>85917

I think this is also the first Kasumi story I've read, thank you for writing it up! That Anon sure is a lucky guy to have someone as cute as her to 'play' with!

>>86212

I think you did a really good job in capturing how both of them would act in this given situation! Also the whole time, this is the picture I had in mind when you were describing it. Thank you for writing a story between these two, there nothing that involves them so it's nice to see members of the team who hardly interact get a story together!


 No.86368

>>85766

That's why you don't surprise ninjas, man

>>85917

Cute how she expressed herself through the chat

>>86212

Kumo was gonna scare off another potential model for a second, there

This also sent me on a hunt to find a pic with a similar pose, but my tag-fu was too weak


 No.87347

File: 1442743568628.jpg (414.71 KB, 920x571, 920:571, 1442568125443.jpg)

Yozakura and Shiki went phone shopping! Let's see what happens. Hope you like it Yobro

http://pastebin.com/iGdiwDmj

>>86368

>>86349

and wow all the feedback!


 No.87356

File: 1442744765304.gif (2.91 MB, 320x240, 4:3, heart rate monitor flatlin….gif)

>>87347

The cuteness… it's too much for me…!

That was a really adorable story, thank you for writing it! I really liked their little shopping adventure and it totally felt like something that would happen between those two!

I really really enjoyed it, thanks for writing it. It's way better than what I could have imagined when I was rambling that one night. I can't thank you enough for listening to my request


 No.88072

>>84363

No reason to be suspicious. It's no fun tormenting a sick man, after all.

>>85766

Dang, this was cute! I don't think I'd read Bashou's full bio before now. That's an interesting quirk she's got.

>>85917

D'AWW! Nerd love is the cutest love!

>>86212

This was really nice. Makes me wish I could see Kumo's sketchbook some time.

>>87347

Totes adorbs! This gives me painful flashbacks to when I first got my smartphone. Poor Yozakura… It's not easy dealing with this newfangled technology…

>>86349

It's reactions like that that make it all worthwhile for me. If at the end of the day someone gets me, I must be doing something right. So thanks, man!

And I had a lot of fun with the Karasu one. I tend to listen to music while I write, so I just took the first couple guitar-heavy songs that shuffle gave me and wrote them in. I'm tempted to do another similar one some time. It's surprising what kind of effect music can have on a story.


 No.88074

File: 1442826255764.jpg (113.42 KB, 470x600, 47:60, 49698019_p0.jpg)

>>88072

No no no, thank you. And thanks to everyone else that writes stories, you guys are doing amazing work. I can't tell you all how happy I am anytime I get to read a new story, you guys are giving that extra bit of life to all these fine characters and I can't thank you all enough!


 No.88424

>>88074

This - I love reading the stories and always love seeing what people do next.

although I'm really far behind. I promise I'll try to catch up this week


 No.88502

File: 1442878719743.jpg (99.98 KB, 640x800, 4:5, 2e0d76c56340d679.jpg)

>>87347

Oh that wacky Shiki!


 No.88923

File: 1442923533620.jpg (99.45 KB, 640x800, 4:5, 1430275657561.jpg)

Yuuyaki story. I was working on birthday stuff for her and this was one idea I was playing with. I have another story for her birthday but didn't want to let this go to waste.

http://pastebin.com/wtBa0CKC

>>87356

glad you like it. better message her!

>>88072

All this good feedback! Thanks.

>>88502

She's a cheeky one.


 No.89114

File: 1442945872628-0.jpg (155.45 KB, 640x800, 4:5, 1430082401281.jpg)

File: 1442945872629-1.jpg (101.22 KB, 640x800, 4:5, 1440617159825.jpg)

Murasaki and Imu story.

http://pastebin.com/VXbBUWqa


 No.90069

File: 1443026745719.jpg (20.08 KB, 640x360, 16:9, 1430845942989.jpg)

Murakumo and Shiki involve Minori in one of their play fights. Gotta get that next manga scene just right!

http://pastebin.com/CNEyMQTG


 No.90496

>>90069

>relying on Minori

They asked for it, really. She caused so much havoc so quickly


 No.91552

File: 1443184056393.png (109.22 KB, 653x845, 653:845, 1429506129256.png)

Shiki is in the mood for some Italian.

http://pastebin.com/M7FA0qgA

>>90496

Never underestimate the Minnow.


 No.91807

File: 1443222214207-0.jpg (60.24 KB, 480x384, 5:4, 1429314563961.jpg)

File: 1443222214262-1.jpg (100.56 KB, 640x800, 4:5, 1429645439412.jpg)

Birthday Stories for Rin and Yuuyaki a little early:

Rin

http://pastebin.com/9P58JrX1

Yuuyaki

http://pastebin.com/Yg7XTuGf

Have more Rin planned


 No.92008

File: 1443239060819.png (2.28 MB, 1600x1200, 4:3, storytiemsenransundayweek3….png)

Storytiem Senran Sunday voting (Week 30) begins now! Which girl belongs to which letter? Find out when voting closes.

http://strawpoll.me/5582190

=Rules=

>There are 10 options available. Each Letter corresponds to a random Senran that will not be revealed until the voting is over. Select which ever Letter you like.

>Sunday, I will check the results of the poll, and the Senran with the highest vote count will have a story written for her sometime during that week.

>The runner up will have a seeded entry into next week's selection, but the associated Letters will all be randomized once again. The current rotation, save for the Runner Up, will not be included in the next week's selection, but they can be selected in the week after and so forth.

>In the event of a tie, I will roll to decide a winner (and a runner up if needed).

First post here for this, but most certainly not the last. Good luck, everyone!


 No.92058

I've got a bit of catching up to do

>>92008

Sweet, these are happening again


 No.92187

>>92008

Man, to see this again…brings back memories.


 No.92277

>>84092

This one was fun to read. Good to see the teasing going both ways!

It is fun having a friend like that, not so much fun trying to keep up with them

>>84363

Not surprised she'd slip something in your drink, but it's always nice to see a calmer more adult side to Haruka amidst all the lewd but that's fine too

>>84979

>>85473

Nice to see some of Storytiem's works here! Looking forward to reading all of the new ones!

>>85766

That was cute, but man is that always a dangerous game or what? Pretending to not know it's a birthday could be a death sentence, especially with a ninja girlfriend.

>>85917

That was sweet yeah, definitely shows. Reminds me of when we were carried by Kumo big time.

>>86212

After reading this picture, I can only imagine the picture drawn of Yozakura is that very simple portrait that Yobro posts that takes great detail into Yozakura's face and hair.

>>87347

That was cute, but poor Yozakura. Phone mishaps are a terrible thing, and it's great that it all worked out for her in the end.

>>88923

This one was sweet. Hard to believe years had passed…

Is her hobby shiny things?

I'm hoping to continue moving through the thread later today, but I've got to get back to work. Great stuff all around!


 No.92278

>>92277

>flag


 No.92551

>>89114

This one was really cute and also kind of sad. I think EV is really going to show us a side of Saki that I think will have fans wishing the toy was destroyed years ago

>>90069

I wouldn't have figured Minori would get such respect from the wolves. Gonna rough with them getting sick, though Really cute.

>>91552

She really knows how to make dinner crazy. That end was fantastic.

I wasn't anticipating getting as far as I had catching up on greentexts today!


 No.92695

File: 1443325080215.jpg (95.58 KB, 400x240, 5:3, 1443308156151.jpg)

Two Harukas!?

http://pastebin.com/nA19rJ4L

Time to get back into writing


 No.92803

>>92695

That was really good!


 No.92878

File: 1443372824876.png (575.01 KB, 850x700, 17:14, week30results.png)

>>92008

Storytiem Senran Sunday (Week 30) voting is now closed. Thanks for playing everyone!

A Daidouji (2 votes)

B Kasumi (1 vote)

C Yomi (3 votes)

D Tachibana (5 votes)

E Katsuragi (6 votes)

F Imu (1 vote)

G Kisaragi (4 votes)

H Fuma (1 vote)

I Aria (2 votes)

J Kurohoro (1 vote)

Story later this week!


 No.93048

>>92878

Even when it's random Immie can't get a break.


 No.93051

>>92878

>>93048

I voted F

Poor Immie.


 No.93080

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>>93048

>>93051

To be fair, Imu was the one who won Week 0, spawning the birth of this idea of mine to begin with. She might not get picked a lot otherwise, but she isn't too bad off considering that.


 No.93094

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I know you all are waiting for the third part of The creamiest birthday but for now I have August and September's story.

This is Miyabi and Asuka's Dream Date. Its not full blown yuri, you bakas. But just something nice since we never see any Asuka and Miyabi stuff. I hope you all like it.

http://pastebin.com/S5zta1BM


 No.93268

>>91807

These were really cute. Yu's gotta learn how to handle that team. The Rin/Dai one especially got to me. It's one of those I need you, too kinds of things that really works in this series.

>>92695

That was unexpected, and I don't quite know why…it's something I should have anticipated given Haruka although I don't know if I could keep my composure the same way anon did

>>93094

That was really cute. Leave it to Asuka to get Miyabi to finally relax. Miyabi and Asuka should have a pair card by now, especially since Homu and Yumi do


 No.93298

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Because you all asked so nicely

http://pastebin.com/0sHerpqR


 No.93360

>>93298

Very nice, hope to see more of this soon!


 No.93370

>>88923

Short and sweet! Good stuff Anoncchi!

>>89114

Poor Murasaki ;_; Glad she mustered up the strength to help Imu-oneechan!

>>90069

I like to think the story went the route of the comical sidekick who was there just for laughs ended up being the main villain all along! Also

>Allmother

That's pretty good, I like that. I can't remember what it's a reference to, though.

>>91552

Oh Shiki, you naughty little minx! Anon is a much stronger guy than I am, that's for sure!

>>91807

I like to think that Kiriya sent Dai to her on purpose with the message, "No sex with the students". Good to see Dai keep her on the straight and narrow!

Luckily that murder of crows didn't turn into a murder with crows. Gotta be hard keeping those two in line, especially on a special day like a birthday!

>>92008

Oh man, I'm glad to see this over here now, thanks man!

>>92695

I see Anon has been taking advantage of being able to pair a girl up with herself! That lucky devil too bad it was a dummy though

>>93094

Oh shit, it was all a dream! That was really cute, thanks man! I can definitely appreciate yuri stories, so this was a fun read.

>>93298

I definitely enjoyed it, thanks for writing it man! Getting to see Minori do grownup things is fun!


 No.93406

>>93298

As much as I dislike stories where Minori is taught things like this I think you really did a good job building the scene and the event taking place. I also think the tone for Haruka is well done. Glad you wrote it!


 No.93421

>>93406

I need to go cleanse my soul now


 No.93426

>>93421

Eh, if you're enjoying writing it there's no cleansing to be done. Just have fun with it. I could tell you did with this one, and that's why I can say I'm glad you wrote what you wanted to.


 No.93496

File: 1443464361973.jpg (46.35 KB, 500x707, 500:707, 1430606839887.jpg)

Rin Birthday Story #2 A lazy at home celebration for a tired business woman.

http://pastebin.com/DpSTEMQS

>>92551

>>92277

>>93268

All these responses! Good to see you enjoyed my stories.

Yuuyaki's based off of crows so like corvids she likes to hoard shiny objects

>>93370

Thanks for all the positive feedback. Glad you liked them.


 No.93516

>>93298

Great story, would love to see a continuation


 No.93660

File: 1443472733960.jpg (114.07 KB, 640x800, 4:5, 6f5b52ce411df873.JPG)

Daidouji recieving endurance training from Haruka.

Turned out a bit more action-y than I thought it would

http://pastebin.com/ck0DteQn

>>93496

Rin really takes it easy once she's off work, damn


 No.94021

>>93496

I honestly don't blame her for wanting to be lazy on her birthday, sometimes you just need to relax. Good stuff man.

>>93660

I've always wondered how a fight between those 2 would turn out, and that's pretty much exactly how I'd imagine it would go. Down to every last detail. Thanks man!


 No.94047

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>>93298

>>93660

I should've known this level of lewdness would come out of you. Great stuff.

>>93496

Sensei is so silly on her birthday.

Okay, so I've actually written a prologue to my next story. This is the HNK File 000: the Prologue of a Project. Hopefully its not a jumbled mess. Enjoy.

http://pastebin.com/DK4VXzpY


 No.94427

>>88923

This was pretty cute. It would have been nicer if there was more to it, though. You really had something going with this one.

>>89114

Poor Saki… Sometimes you just need to tell the nagging doubting voices to shut up and you'll be better for it.

>>90069

>That ending

Now THAT'S a Deus ex Machina!

Chaotic and hilarious! Very nice! I loved it!

>>91552

>That game

>THAT ENDING

Come scandaloso! Amazing job with this one! Your more exotic stories are always fun reads!

>>91807

For the Rin one, I wasn't expecting a flashback. This was really neat.

The Yuyaki one was nice. I have yet to get tired of seeing Touno's antics, and poor Yuyaki needs at least one day of peace.

>>92695

>Not even phased

>Just goes along with it

Being with Haruka must prepare you for anything.

This was really something!

>>93094

This was better than I expected. Makes me wish New Hebi and Hanzo got more scenes together. And that ending got a good chuckle out of me. I knew I had nothing to worry about.

>>93298

That poor, poor traumatized girl…

Yes I know I asked for it.

>>93496

A chance to relax is always appreciated.

>>93660

This was interesting. I imagine it'd take no less than rhino tranquilizer to wear Dai down.

>>94047

So much Ara… You have my interest.


 No.94746

File: 1443587991306.jpg (1.08 MB, 1920x1080, 16:9, 53.jpg)

Another Rin birthday story. Distraught over facing another birthday Rin asks Shiki to arrange a sleep-over so she can feel young again. I just wanted to put Shiki and Rin together again

http://pastebin.com/0L8pyHcU


 No.95006

>>94047

Huh, didn't know what to expect from the title. Somewhat interested.


 No.95038

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Another Rin birthday story. This time she'll be seeing red.

http://pastebin.com/fa720J1f

>>93660

>>94021

>>94047

Rin works hard and snoozes harder.

>>94427

All this feedback. You made it easy to pinpoint your taste.


 No.95181

>>95006

Basically Haruka, Nachi and Kurohoro watch hallucinated fantasies of certain Senrans. Its an excuse to do things like a story where Murasaki a popular cheerleader and catches the eye of Imu.

But hey, even if its a little I'm glad you are interested.


 No.95687

File: 1443669860257.jpeg (99.25 KB, 640x800, 4:5, 4bfb008a9d18d1ac.jpeg)

http://pastebin.com/swJZyLB8

Trying to get Ryouna to go to sleep

>>95038

>'Rin'-rin'

Oh goddammit. Nice one


 No.95781

>>94047

>This is a series

I really like the concept, can't wait to read what else you have cooked up! It's a good setup for whatever scenario imaginable, so good job man!

>>94746

Very very nice! I like to think the people messaging Daidouji are those spam emails everyone gets, I just can't imagine her knowing how to use a phone in the first place. I really liked this story!

>>95038

Man, that was super duper sweet. I really enjoyed reading this and seeing what everyone did for her, thank you!

>>95687

Silly Ryouna, he can't be a good master if he can't sleep! Nice quickie man, thanks for the read!


 No.96082

>>93496

Short and sweet - a really nice birthday story, and it really is a story that feels right, close to her age.

I really do enjoy them - they're really good!

>>93660

Damn, that's a hell of a fight, fighting vs poison. Could Dai build an immunity to Haruka's potions, perhaps?

>>94047

It'll be interesting to see where this goes. Honestly, the way you wrote the kiss, I was a expecting it to linger a little longer

>>94746

I liked this one a lot

>Daidouji's phone

Rin should take her up on it

>>95038

This was a fun read, definitely a good laugh in there too.

All of these Rin Birthday stories have been so heartfelt, they're fantastic.

>>95687

That was a fun one. I'm surprised anon didn't punish her with neglect play, just walking out and sleeping elsewhere. They got some sleep, though, and that's important to properly dominate.


 No.96220

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>>95781

I'm gald you do. I'll do me best to keep it up.

>>96082

Sorry, that wasn't originally planned, but its Haruka so I needed something.

I know you guys have been waiting on this so here you go. HNK Files 001: Yagyuu the Samurai. Its futa so if you aren't cool with that go read something else. Also this is my first lewd story so I nervous about it. Its rather long no pun intended I hope you all enjoy it.

http://pastebin.com/titBzrnK


 No.96234

>>96220

I liked it, between the action and the fucking, I think you did a good job.


 No.96251

>>96234

Well I'm glad you liked it. Like I said I was worried about how the lewd parts would turn out. But as long as one person enjoyed it that's enough for me.


 No.96255

>>96220

That poor, poor mook she ran into

Nice one. Wonder what else their machine will show them


 No.96256

>>96251

>I was worried about how the lewd parts would turn out

The action was easy enough to follow and imagine. They came out fine I'd say


 No.96271

>>96255

Who knows. I may do a followup of this one day. Yagyuu's birthday is in 2 months after all

>>96256

That's good. But that also tells me that I need to work on some stuff. But I guess this really is a success.


 No.96907

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The tale of a young heroine taking her first steps as an adventurer!

What the hell did I write?

http://pastebin.com/afdkEEZx


 No.96978

>>96907

Really cute. I really enjoyed reading the whole thing. How did you settle on the twins as the villains?


 No.97044

>>96978

I spent a good bit of time thinking of who I can match a class too for that. I was gonna have it be Murasaki being harassed but had no ideas, then Hibari being harassed but a brown haired chemist, then I settled on the twins. Was gonna have Bari be a bard but it didn't add anything so I just went with a girl. I also considered having a tanned berserker save her instead of a blonde monk but changed my mind.


 No.97053

>>96220

Damn, that was really good. The actions scenes were well described and easy to follow. Same with the lewd bits, I was able to follow them really well so good job man!

>>96907

Just like in all my Japanese animes western fantasies! That was pretty cute seeing Asuka try out all of her abilities, I really liked what you did here. Thanks man!


 No.97100

File: 1443832974242.jpg (96.49 KB, 800x1000, 4:5, 1412843490820.jpg)

http://pastebin.com/FXAKXnVB

What would you do if Katsuragi saw your mushroom?


 No.97113

>>97044

That's cool - will you be coming back to it sometime, do you think?

>>97100

I like it. Short, sweet, cute and a little naughty. It's also nice to see Kat in a story after talk in the general about her Even though I knew you had picked her with the poll and the talk had nothing to do with it


 No.97229

>>97113

Possibly for when she runs into the monk again, along with a Samurai, a white haired summoner and (whatever I could have Hibari as)


 No.97412

>>97229

Nice - looking forward to it!


 No.98209

File: 1443992978630.jpg (98.53 KB, 640x800, 4:5, 6d82eab000dc4337.jpg)

A mook tries to go after Yagyuu and Hibari!?

http://pastebin.com/sfd8D1Hd

Poor Crow-chan


 No.98266

>>98209

The ending sounds like something out of an H-game

I was not expecting it - a lot of fun to read! Poor Crow-chan indeed


 No.98326

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Murakumo birthday story #1

Young Murky goes on a search to find her ninja animal.

http://pastebin.com/XY883m4v

I made a few little changes after some things were pointed out. I need to hire Kumoguy as my editor


 No.98561

>>97100

sor y ima drunk arig tnwow but htis was cute! Katsu would be s goood firglfriend!

>>98209

>>98209

WHOAAAA mane srthe at tentcals lewding! por crow mooksn chan! but she waw skaif for it cinex she idntwe leave hibaier and Yaguy alone!

>>98326

>>98331

that saw super suderp cute!!! thanks aofr the storry!


 No.98618

>>98209

And now for part 2 of that request, anon gets tentacle'd

http://pastebin.com/LvdZTuAS


 No.98674

>>98618

Damn, that got steamy pretty fast, and that's not because it was in an onsen! Good job lewding Anon!


 No.98916

>>98618

Hot damn. I feel now that the poor anon will be stuck looking for Yagyu specifically from now on


 No.98924

>>98326

Really cute, and I really like thinking that's how she did it.

I couldn't find the edits, if this was any different from the one you posted last night in the Chatango.


 No.99004

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Murakumo birthday story # 2 : sneaking gifts into the house

http://pastebin.com/bc6tNMtP

>>98674

Thanks drunk yobro

>>98924

Just a couple of inconsistencies that are resolved now


 No.99020

>>99004

For some cute doggies they're quite a handful


 No.99061

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>>97053

I'm really glad you liked it, Yo. Like I said it was kinda nerve racking writing a lewd. But yeah, I may do more in the future.

So this story is based off of my very first greentext on 4 last year. ST said he liked it and that really was the reason I wanted to write stuff. I just wanted to make people feel something.

Now this isn't going to be as good as my other stuff, but this is just meant to be a cute short story.

Enjoy Meimei and the Forgotten Birthday

http://pastebin.com/B2DT0WaS


 No.99477

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>>99020

smugkumo wouldn't like them being called doggies.

but yes they are


 No.100194

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I can't have been the only one that was "Bewitched" by Murasaki's new cards.

http://pastebin.com/Uf5YeKxY

What's next I Dream of Genie with Kat, Ryouna or Haruka?


 No.100380

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Kaede birthday story.

Shopping with rainbow megane!

http://pastebin.com/mQedsuMW


 No.100560

>>99004

Darnit guys, let Anon have one surprise for the birthday girl! I can totally see this happening, I love seeing the wolves antics. Thanks for the story!

>>99061

Whew, glad she was fine with it, even though Meimei is a good girl and deserves to have her birthday remembered! This is where the namesake Birthday Anon came from, right?

>>100194

I know it's supposed to be like a scenario from Bewitched, but I wish Anon stood his ground a bit more! Murasaki deserves a strong willed man! Thanks for the story!

>>100380

That was super duper cute! I feel like the part with Kumo and Kaede happened just a bit differently in another story of yours. Not that it's bad, I think it's cool to see stuff like that! If that isn't the case though, ignore all of this. Thanks for the stories!


 No.100800

>>100560

Yes. /skg/, last year before SV's release, no one really payed attention to the birthdays of the NW girls so I took it upon myself to give them some recognition. "Every Senran is special and deserves one day to herself, this I believe." Was what I said. My first forecast was Murasaki, but I was still pushing for people to give recognition to the NWs.


 No.101152

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Oh no, Murakumo is sick on her birthday! But don't worry nurse Shiki is at hand to make sure she's okay and doesn't get bored from being stuck in her room.

http://pastebin.com/G3iBgVJP


 No.101155

>>100560

>>101152

I've had Kumo and Kaede in a story before but don't think I had them meeting.

I can do some Anon standing up for his NEET teats moments but I think it's important for a shy girl like Saki to stand up for herself too.

And Kotaro and Kagero are too clever for their own good.


 No.101202

File: 1444308015085.jpg (203.49 KB, 800x800, 1:1, 1410327027814.jpg)

http://pastebin.com/rP7sqHr2

Kumo birthday story for her loyal Anons. Hope you guys like it!


 No.101372

>>100380

Poor, poor anon. Hisui will never look at them the same way again. I also like that part where even if you don't share their enthusiasm for their hobby, your happy to see how it makes them. I feel the same way about the Shinozuka crew.


 No.101403

>>99004

That was cute - it's nice to see Kumo accept how attractive she is.

>>99061

Poor Meimei, forgotten for titty ninjas Cute nonetheless

>>100194

This one was really cute, and I'd be ok with any of those choices in the spoiler if you're going to do it. It would make a great follow-up, just like the old Nick-at-Nite

>>100380

Really sweet, and I hope things turn up aces for him.

>>101152

This one was a lot of fun. One day she'll get that Shikissi

>>101202

That was really sweet. I didn't see that result coming, loved the twist!


 No.101451

>>101403

The guys over in the mother thread came up with the idea. I just put it to paper.

Glad you liked!


 No.101454

>>101451

>mother thread

/skg/?

Yeah it was a lot of fun - at first I thought anon was going to drive Kumo to tears, and then the twist! It was a really fun read


 No.101466

>>101454

Yes, /skg/. Site may be a bit piss hole, poor especially currently, but gotta honor your roots.


 No.101485

>>101466

>but gotta honor your roots.

True it's a shame what happened


 No.101769

File: 1444370768112.jpg (99.09 KB, 640x800, 4:5, d26852cb08bc77b7.jpg)

http://pastebin.com/hK0gdwYn

Taking a bath with You tonhelp her relax


 No.101804

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>>101152

Aww, Shiki is totes a good mom! That was super cutely lewd, I really enjoyed it. Thanks!

>>101202

That was cute! CUTE! Just like the birthday girl! I really liked Anon's gift, it was really sweet. Thanks for the story!

>>101769

Oh boy, I can't tell you how long I've been waiting for a story like this! I really liked the hand massage bit, I know it's what I would've done! Thanks a ton for the story man!


 No.102115

>>101769

Oh wow, that got naughty in a hurry

I liked it a lot, actually. I feel like that's exactly the kind of relaxing Yozakura would succumb to and this guy >>101804 would be the culprit


 No.102474

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Storytiem Senran Sunday voting (Week 31) begins now! Which girl belongs to which letter? Find out when voting closes.

http://strawpoll.me/5696556

=Rules=

>There are 10 options available. Each Letter corresponds to a random Senran that will not be revealed until the voting is over. Select which ever Letter you like.

>Sunday, I will check the results of the poll, and the Senran with the highest vote count will have a story written for her sometime during that week.

>The runner up will have a seeded entry into next week's selection, but the associated Letters will all be randomized once again. The current rotation, save for the Runner Up, will not be included in the next week's selection, but they can be selected in the week after and so forth.

>In the event of a tie, I will roll to decide a winner (and a runner up if needed).

Good luck, everyone!


 No.102486

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New Murakumo. Hubby needs help getting those wolves under control but it looks like Kumo has other ideas.

http://pastebin.com/VD98fiUQ


 No.102917

>>102486

Nice

Kumo did a good job training her new animal


 No.102918

>>102917

flaagpost


 No.102959

File: 1444515144899.png (2.23 MB, 1029x1121, 1029:1121, Homu 96.png)

Some of you are really going to hate me for this one. If you're not a fan of Homuposting, you have been warned.

http://pastebin.com/9YQFkQhe


 No.103117

>>94746

>>95038

Some really good Rin stuff!

Dai was especially great in the first one, and the Crimson girls were really sweet in the second. Good stuff!

>>95687

Dangit Ryouna!

>>96220

I loved it! It was pretty well-written, easy to follow, deliciously lewd… You're really improving!

>>96907

This was really cute, and I needed cute Asuka right now. It'd be fun to see this continue if you ever have the time or inclination–just have her try out a bunch of different jobs with hilarious results.

I'd pump her full of job points until she's mastered every role~

>>97100

I've always liked your Kat stuff. She's great fun and a great tease.

>>98209

>>98618

Good lord, that's lewd! I approve~~

>>98326

Aww… This one really melted my heart…

>>99004

You really can't take your eyes off those wolves for a second! This is probably why I'll never own any pets. They're always trying to outsmart you.

>>99061

That ended better than expected. With a bang, you could say!

>>100194

This was a fun read! Makes me wish I actually watched Bewitched. I'm sure senrans make it more interesting, though.

>>100380

This was really cute! I loved it! Poor Anon, though…

>>101152

This was some good fun.

>>101202

CUTE!!! Good stuff, man! Really adorable! Kumo needs a constant reminder of how cute she is!

>>101769

YOOOOOOO!

I don't know what she's on about. That's my idea of relaxing!

>>102486

Learning confidence from Kumo of all people! Very nice!

Finally caught up!


 No.103155

>>102959

That was incredibly sweet

and I actually bust out laughing at the rapier joke after I realized what I had read

I'm happy she has a fan, but this comedy club seems pretty stuck-up with people groaning and booing and nobody offering an alternative


 No.103355

>>102959

How

HOW

How did you even come up with those!?


 No.103361

>>103355

Isn't it obvious? He's Homura


 No.103364

>>103155

Tough crowds, man.

>>103355

Years of training. It just comes naturally to me at this point.

>>103361

Fuck, I think I might be, minus the tan. This is going to make talking with Homusex awkward.


 No.103421

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>>101403

>>103117

I'm glad you guys liked it.

I know its a little late and its a bit different from what I wanted to do but I'm content with it. Here is "Kaede, Kasumi and the BL Sphere". Enjoy.

http://pastebin.com/eskFJ92z


 No.103633

>>103421

That was cute, especially the way you made it feel like Kasumi talking with emoticons. Datamon was a good touch

How will Kaede feel when she learns it's also Kumo's birthday

>>103364

I mean it's either that or you're her agent/writer and she's just selling your product


 No.103707

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>>102474

Storytiem Senran Sunday (Week 31) voting is now closed. Thanks for playing everyone!

A Mirai (1 vote)

B Shiki (2 votes)

C Ryobi (2 votes)

D Kagari (2 votes)

E Kaede (4 votes)

F Tachibana (5 votes)

G Souji (4 votes)

H Seimei (1 vote)

I Leo (3 votes)

J Kanzaki (1 vote)

Story sometime later in the week.


 No.103776

>>103633

Glad you liked it. I'm no expert on emoticons, especially Japanese ones, so there might've been better choices.

That may be a story for another day. Originally I wanted to do a Kaede vs Kumo story. It was gonna be like Soma if you know what I mean. I still may do it if I have the time.

>>103707

Glad someone is doing a Tachibana story. I was wondering how long mine was gonna be the only one.


 No.103789

>>103776

I have two in the pastebin of her actually. But she is long overdue for a new one from me, so this works out…


 No.104012

>>103789

You do? I guess this was before I started saving stories. Well I know you'll whip out a good one.


 No.104030

File: 1444594622412.jpg (338.13 KB, 1200x1690, 120:169, Senran_Kagura_Artbook_090.jpg)

>>104012

Yep. Fairly old ones actually.

http://pastebin.com/DqxzfR9J

http://pastebin.com/E8JXKEqA

To save time.


 No.104981

>>102486

Now was all of this with or without the mask? Looks like you CAN teach an old dog new trick! Good job

>>102959

I would've been laughing my ass off if I was there I really liked the setup man, thanks for the story!

>>103421

Oh wow, it was great to see some characterization for Kasumi! She's one of the few NW girls I hardly know about, so seeing her get to interact with Kaede was a super fun read! Thanks man!


 No.105743

File: 1444787623594.jpg (98.34 KB, 640x800, 4:5, 1444780486575.jpg)

Got a birthday story for Meimei

http://pastebin.com/8FQDQh1N

>>104981

First the mask comes off. Then her panties.

>>103117

Whoa so much feedback. Thanks!


 No.106028

>>103707

So, with two runners-up, what becomes of Kaede?

>>103776

I don't either, but I tend to just assume they use them a lot. A Kaede vs Kumo could be fun - remember to write what you want!

>>104030

>The first story

I remember this one - so cute!

>Second story

That one's really cute too. Thanks for sharing!

>>105743

This one was cute - it often slips my mind there's an international school, and this story is good to remind me. I also really liked the differences in languages and text!


 No.106600

File: 1444924641558.jpg (101.61 KB, 640x800, 4:5, 1441165154380.jpg)

Ushimaru Birthday stories

Clean:

http://pastebin.com/UdGvVQLG

Milky:

http://pastebin.com/kb9Gajgd

>>106028

Thanks. Looks like the bit of homework I did for the story paid off.


 No.106621

>>106600

Yeah, the different languages did have me looking into google translate, but it helps me remember who the girls are. I really liked it!

>First story

That was really cute, I'm glad she got out for a bit. Seems she's learning to eat Ice Cream from Hikage, though. Good for anon, bad for her, or good, depending on her feeling that day.

>Second story

My man, that sounds like a fantastic birthday treat all around. I really don't understand why I always enjoy lactation stories so much especially since I really dislike the taste of milk


 No.106708

File: 1444933854461.jpg (99.13 KB, 640x800, 4:5, Stamping Haruka.jpg)

Jesus, I haven't opened this thread in a while… Well, I'll have to fix that later. Here's a new greentext, but beware: it has mindbreak, albeit in a rather different way:

http://sta.sh/0q8o0zx9bgl


 No.106722

>>106708

Definitely a really cute story, with a turnabout I didn't expect. I like where you went with this. The end felt rushed at first, it felt like you wanted to save the suspense or the message for everyone until the end, and that makes it work out.

You were right, I enjoyed it.


 No.106727

>>106722

Glad you liked it, man! I was afraid it would look rushed too, but I hoped people would see where I was going with it. I did have trouble ending it properly at first, but I realised this would be a fairly good ending. An anti-mindbreak fic through the eyes of mindbreak. Not a bad idea, right?


 No.106728

>>106727

Not bad at all

>I did have trouble ending it properly at first, but I realised this would be a fairly good ending

Is that why you took a break from it earlier?


 No.106731

>>106728

Partially. And to watch more dumb Youtube videos, and to study. But yeah, not being sure where to go was some part of it.


 No.107670

>>106708

Very interesting take on the idea. It tied into Hanzo and Kiriya hoping the girls would go on to change the ninja world well


 No.107729

>>106708

>You started in hopes of taking down evil shinobi down

Delete the second down and do tens reps of chest massage.

>you had a full training

"you had full training", or "you had finished training". Ten reps.

>Shinobi, for their excellent training, supposedly made

"because of their excellent training", for to mean because is basically archaic in modern English, to my ear. Five reps.

>sorts of folks

Kind of folks or sort of people, the later in this case because you're using a neutral accent on the narration. Five reps.

>both your real name nor your shinobi name

Nor pairs with a negative, eg "neither… nor…" which would require a rewrite of the previous sentence. I'd replace nor with and in this sentence to preserve the flow and because nor is a bit old-fashioned. Ten reps.

>similar to others that were in the same situation

Like others, five reps. Also avoid using same and similar in the same sentence, it feels like repetition.

>Her house was large, and out there.

Out there? Out of the way? Not sure. Ten reps.

>For a second you thought it could be the lady, seemingly named Haruka, her daughter

"For a second you thought it could be the lady's, Haruka's, daughter". Ten reps.

>"Good. Be a big guy."

>"For you…"

Thirty reps, you little hothead.

95 reps in total, so just under half a day's reps, so squeeze in another session. I really liked the story, auction and public display under glass really do it for me, and the repair segment is really touching. A great story, you did good. The repair paragraph might have worked better if it was a little larger, but I guess greentext is made for brevity. Would love to read this stretched out into a short story in a more normal format.


 No.107857

File: 1445045405723.jpg (162.47 KB, 640x800, 4:5, 1442407413324.jpg)

Minori gets her first real kissu

Time to burn through a backlog of ideas

http://pastebin.com/m2q81gdX


 No.108060

>>107729

Boom, fixed most of it~


 No.108101

>>107857

That's really cute. Like, really cute.

Maybe I'll have to revisit my old "date with Minori" story soon


 No.108250

>>106708

I liked it. I do felt like it ended prematurely. But it was a nice read.


 No.108283

>>108060

Yay~ Great work.


 No.109238

New Haruka story based somewhat off a dream I had.

http://pastebin.com/wJQNtCEw


 No.109251

>>109238

I'm really glad to see this idea finally put into a proper story. It really touched me.

For as much as I love my stoic teasing Haruka those little vulnerable moment she sometimes has makes me love her even more.


 No.109276

>>109238

That's really sweet. I like this side of Haruka - this more human side that comes out in SK2 and the Crimson story in SV. It really makes her a fuller character than what people see at first glance.


 No.109369

http://pastebin.com/zp0H43Ru

Hikage catches Mirai doing chest massages and decides to lend a couple of hands. Started out cute, turned a little lewd. Enjoy~


 No.109376

>>109369

That story was a lot of fun to read. Really cute, turned quite lewd, and ended on a laugh. Good stuff man!


 No.109377

>>109376

Thanks, I was a bit worried it was a cheesy sitcom ending, but I guess it fits Senran hijinks.


 No.109379

>>109377

>worried

Honestly, I think it was a fantastic way to end the story


 No.109398

>>109377

>worried

Honestly, I think it was a fantastic way to end the story


 No.109488

>>103421

This was a fun read. I loved it! This is why you password-protect all your computers.

>>104981

In retrospect, the audience was more or less based on my experience homuposting on /skg/: 1-2 people praising or punning along with me and everyone else begging for mercy and cursing my name. Glad you enjoyed!

>>105743

Very nice! The accents and traditions were a nice touch. Maisen's another one of those really fun schools.

>>106600

Ushimaru is pretty great. I'm a sucker for milk, in every sense. Good stuff!

>>106708

Not what I was expecting at all, though I mean that in a good way. The story ended a bit quickly, but it was intriguing.

>>107857

This was super-cute! And that card is still one of the cutest things I've ever seen. I'd be hard-pressed not to oblige her. Very nice!

>>109238

This was a touching story. You showed a side of Haruka that we don't often see.

>>109369

A fun mix of cute and lewd. Crazy sneg indeed!

Wow, we're getting close to finishing off another story thread.


 No.109529

>>109369

That was really-

"Well, that's as many as you normally do."

H-how does Hikage know that?!


 No.109857

>>109529

Sneaky sneg a sneaky.


 No.109880

File: 1445302775760.jpg (1.63 MB, 1424x2050, 712:1025, 1427579465274.jpg)

Shiki story well of course it is

A little redo of a request I got once.

http://pastebin.com/wZuztZN9


 No.110463

>>109880

I don't think I ever saw the original one, but I really thought this one was fun. Nice cute little read here.


 No.111485

File: 1445482299544.png (436.17 KB, 796x931, 796:931, 1442219906122-2.png)

Yozakura storytime.

http://pastebin.com/bdyKP4RQ

Missed some feedback:

>>106621

>>109488

Good to know people like it milky!

>>110463

General idea of "waiting until Shiki becomes a full-fledged ninja to propose" I kind of like how this one went down in comparison to the old one.


 No.111792

>>105743

I really like this one. You hardly ever get to see all of Maisen, let alone together, so it was definitely fun seeing all the girls get together to celebrate!

>>106600

Anon is such a nice guy to take her on a date and have a surprise at the end of it all! Anon is such a lucky guy to have a girl with that kind of problem, I'm quite envious of him! Could drink milk from the tap for days!

>>106708

I really like this take on the whole mindbreak thing, good job! Like others have said, it feels a bt rushed but I get why though, but still, good story man!

>>107857

Man, that was super duper cute! Minori is a good girl, glad she was finally able to get that kissu from anon, she deserves it!

>>109238

Its nice to see someone who's usually so strong and capable in a vulnerable position like this, thanks for the story man!

>>109369

L-lewd! Crazy sneg indeed, good job man!

>>109880

Aww, that one was totes adorbs! Anon sure does have an eye for good girls! Thanks for the story man!


 No.111793

>>111485

I'm glad I already quit drinking before this, but both your story and Kaede's made me realize that I was gonna head down a ruinous path. Thank you for the story, it and Kaede's definitely helped me


 No.111797

>>111485

Yo is one hell of a girl, Anoncchi


 No.111995

File: 1445552841303.jpg (152.36 KB, 422x500, 211:250, 37184626_p0_master1200.jpg)

Working on backlog, working on backlog~

New experiences with Haruka and a blindfold

http://pastebin.com/yAXe7F2u


 No.112454

>>111995

That was enjoyable - thanks for the read! I didn't see the onahole coming


 No.112813

File: 1445652439450.jpg (296.99 KB, 647x864, 647:864, 1440878836814-1.jpg)

Murakumo time. Our motormouth mangaka gets all pervy for hubby

http://pastebin.com/EHpSWBGW

>>111792

>>111793

Shiki is totes a good girl.

I wasn't sending a direct message with this one but it's interesting to see the effect.

>>111797

I'm sure Yobro would agree.


 No.112821

>>112813

It wasn't so much as me interpreting it as a direct message, but more of me seeing that same situation play over and over again with my parents when I was really young. Stuff like your story is what ended up causing my parents to divorce, and seeing anon put Yo into that situation just broke my heart into tiny little pieces. It was a good story, don't get me wrong, it's just the situation itself is something I would want to avoid from ever happening.


 No.113019

>>112813

I never would've imagined she'd actually stop drawing

Must've been that good. Really cute story


 No.114108

File: 1445841491610.jpg (102.29 KB, 640x800, 4:5, 1428886308579.jpg)

Birthday Story for Murasaki. Got some more ideas for her I'll finish later.

http://pastebin.com/BUEL6jrH

>>112821

Never pictured a story of mine having that kind of effect

>>113019

Kumoanon is a lucky guy


 No.114480

File: 1445901115815.jpg (98.14 KB, 640x800, 4:5, 1435418254609.jpg)


 No.114628

File: 1445926283826.jpg (243.29 KB, 1920x1080, 16:9, 1429720561170.jpg)

One more Murasaki story for her birthday

http://pastebin.com/UtB2p09D


 No.115027

>>114108

>>114480

>>114628

Great Birthday stories all around

The first one was adorable. I could see Saki gawking at such a castle, just like in all those stories, and it's cute to see her take charge.

The second one was really cute given how it started, and the ravenous urges were great

The last one was another cute story and you hit the nail on Bebe so hard I could see an image out of a Girl's Heart with Saki and Bebe getting massages, and the masseuse being completely floored

Thanks, these were great

Also, wow, 400 posts. Greentext thread 3 soon?


 No.115304

>>111995

Oh man, there's something hot about just gently letting someone else just take control like that. Good stuff man!

>>112813

Oh wow, she be mirrin' hard. Good job hubby, gotta look good for your gal! Kumo obviously appreciated it!

>>114108

Oh cool, I really like this one. It's definitely nice to see Saki come out of her shell and just have a fun time!

>>114480

Oh wow, the confidence just keeps building up for her! That one was really good, thanks man!

>>114628

Aww, that one was really cute! The girls turning to mush as the day went on was enjoyable to watch! Good job!


 No.115655

File: 1446072246542.png (660.22 KB, 640x800, 4:5, 98.png)

Here's to getting lewd with food!

And it's doujin-tastic!

http://pastebin.com/W5h1LQPb


 No.115965

>>109880

I don't recall if I read the original or not, but this was really cute nonetheless.

>>111485

Yobro's a lucky guy.

>>111995

Very lewd, very fun!

>>112813

This was great! Go, Kumo! Get a thorough reference!

>>114108

>>114480

Too cute for words! A Saki who's confident, outgoing and passionate is a miracle of the universe!

>>114628

Cute and funny! Saki has some good people in her life.

Good stuff for a great girl!


 No.115973

>>115655

Your cucumber is cucumbing inside me!

Fucking amazing, 10/10. Great story man!


 No.116001

>>115655

That was really hot and goddam hilarious

Line 54 catches my feeling entirely


 No.116096

>>115973

>>116001

>That's my fetish .gif

Glad I was able to do it justice!


 No.116517

>>116096

Thick is justice after all


 No.116646

File: 1446242157387.png (754.73 KB, 640x800, 4:5, 1445953741488-4.png)

I was going to do a Halloween story but I ended up writing a lewd about Shiki in a costume. Giddy-up cowgirl!

http://pastebin.com/uLy3zyME

>>115655

Orange you glad there wasn't a banana?

>>115304

>>115027

>>115965

Kumo is hungry like the wolf

And gotta let Saki have some fun on her birthday.


 No.116687

File: 1446247566788-0.png (930.08 KB, 640x800, 4:5, Halloween Homura.png)

File: 1446247566791-1.png (705.2 KB, 640x800, 4:5, Halloween Yomi.png)

File: 1446247566806-2.png (735.16 KB, 640x800, 4:5, Halloween Hikage.png)

File: 1446247566806-3.png (564.61 KB, 640x800, 4:5, Halloween Mirai.png)

File: 1446247566807-4.png (756.58 KB, 640x800, 4:5, Halloween Haruka.png)

http://sta.sh/02242wck5dx7

Time for a spoopy story!


 No.116691

File: 1446247724093.png (677.02 KB, 640x800, 4:5, 1445952510636-2.png)

Playing the "Packy Game" with Shiki

http://pastebin.com/pgK0atSt


 No.116741

>>116646

So lewd but so good. Shiki was real nice to her hubby, and the assplay was a nice touch

>>116687

That was an good halloween read. I will say that I liked how you played off fear well, even if compared to what happened with Homura and Yomi, what happened with Haruka is powerful, and something you feel terrible for her about while reading I liked it, and you played off fear very well for Halloween.

>>116691

Very nice! I was expecting the phone to have switched to video or something This one was very cute!


 No.116744

>>116741

>switch to video

I wonder if its too late to make a change


 No.116746

>>116744

Up to you, man, but I like what you've got here already


 No.116747

>>116744

Go for it! I think it'd be a cute addition


 No.116770

>>116687

Nice. A shame Hikage didn't do much but overall pretty good

Homura being afraid of ghosts is great

>>116646

Lewd. Also lovely description of the skindentation

>>116691

Really cute seeing Shiki get flustered like that


 No.116800

File: 1446260112926.jpg (906.15 KB, 1920x1080, 16:9, 1441746836009-0.jpg)

I know there's someone around here that likes Yozakura stories

http://pastebin.com/J8789KkD

>>116770

Well Shiki gets me motivated.


 No.117059

>>116646

Oh wow, didn't know Shiki would miss her hubby that much! Cute and lewd, really enjoyed the descriptions in this one, good job!

>>116687

Oh damn, that was pretty good. I felt really bad for Haruka in this one but overall is was p spoopy! Thanks for this one!

>>116691

Anon is a good guy, plays with Shiki on the phone and isn't afraid of anything. I'll read it again to see if you made any changes to it.

>>116800

Oh oh oh, I do! Poor Yo, what's a woman to do when everything is already done for her?! Glad to see her get to relax finally, raising a family is hard work! I really liked this one, thank you!


 No.118134

File: 1446521639786.jpg (99.83 KB, 640x800, 4:5, 84f1badf90b26ad4.jpg)

Shiki's worked hard to learn other languages but what happens when a P r e t t y J a p a n e s e N i n j a has to tutor her hubby?

http://pastebin.com/zAcPFKHe

>>117059

Shiki's got a lot of energy.

Tried making changes but then reverted them. I kind of liked the adorbs levels it was at. Added a new line or two.

And yoza can put her feet up for a change.


 No.118236

>>118134

Aww, that was adorable! Anon knows how to make her 'kokoro' go 'doki-doki'!


 No.118695

>>116800

Adorable. Absolutely adorable. Glad to see Yo get some time to relax in

>>118134

This was really cute - he's going to work his best for her, that's for sure


 No.119324

File: 1446770849647.jpg (572.68 KB, 1550x2245, 310:449, 1435291441910.jpg)

Katsuragi birthday stories

http://pastebin.com/qXYUg4Ez

http://pastebin.com/BnMaVbZR

>>118236

>>118695

Shiki's hubby has his eyes on the prize


 No.119400

>>119324

Darn work, having to make Katsu wake up! That was cute, I really like her and Anon's interaction. Thanks!

Hikage and Yozakura need to just lighten up, they're there to celebrate and have some good food! I can totally see it playing out like that too, good characterization!


 No.120220

File: 1446942667341-0.jpg (Spoiler Image, 99.63 KB, 640x800, 4:5, ztMoLJM.jpg)

File: 1446942667341-1.jpg (Spoiler Image, 98.6 KB, 640x800, 4:5, 1445007903120.jpg)

File: 1446942667342-2.jpg (Spoiler Image, 99.86 KB, 640x800, 4:5, (Z)RA_~1.JPG)

File: 1446942667342-3.jpg (Spoiler Image, 256.97 KB, 512x640, 4:5, 2 (3).jpg)

What happens when science and magic

Oops, that's Index. Anyway here is a late story about our Aria. I found out why she likes the occult so I went with a story about that.

Enjoy Aria and the Witch Hunt.

http://pastebin.com/Yk8ARuXa

This may be my longest story.

The last picture is a spoiler for the story though.


 No.121513

I'm gonna leave here my first Greentexts: Meeting Ryouna Part One and Two:

http://pastebin.com/888b9BFW

http://pastebin.com/V9ryBj3i


 No.121966

File: 1447333371562.png (780.75 KB, 640x800, 4:5, 11.png)


 No.122252

>>120220

Damn man, like I told you earlier, this was a really good read. I enjoyed the world building and everything and it has a really strong basis to the events in it. Good job, worth the wait!

>>121513

I really like these, they were cute to see anon try to put up with Ryouna's antics. Good job on these man, especially for your first ones!

>>121966

Oh man, there's just no foolin' mama-Daidouji! That was great, it was nice seeing her with her kids, it was nice and heart warming!

This one feels sincere, I feel like that's how Daidouji would want to spend a birthday. Good job on these man!


 No.124258

Maiding: Part One

A storm is coming tonight and Hibari and Yagyuu need a place to stay.

http://pastebin.com/b3zw6Rw5


 No.128154

>>119324

That first one was really cute. To see Kat like that is adorable.

The second one was also really cute. That race to the finish was definitely needed like that. I do wonder what Yo and Hikage would talk about at dinner, though.

>>120220

That was a hell of a Halloween tale. Sure dark as hell but man did I like it

>>121513

Wow. For a first greentext I feel you've gotten a really interesting side of Ryouna down! I really like it, it's cute but devilish and I always like seeing the more calculated Ryouna.

From what I know, though, they're twins, but that doesn't take from the story at all

>>121966

Mama Dai is adorable. I wonder if she'd have her kids work out, or if she'd just let them take their own paths in life. Either way, really cute

Story 2 is also really good.Workplace Dai is fun

>You work fast

Absolutely, with the speeds she can run at. I liked this a lot

>>124258

This one was really sweet. The two girls just need a place to stay, and good ol' Anon trying to make things better for them. I like it, thanks for sharing it!


 No.129455

So new story when?


 No.130612

>>129455

That's a good question. The well of our regular writers has dried up recently. I'd write a story if I could but ideas for them are very few and far between.


 No.131176


 No.131404

File: 1448955981305-0.png (639.02 KB, 640x800, 4:5, 15.png)

File: 1448955981332-1.png (701.33 KB, 640x800, 4:5, 21.png)

Misato and Kumi have to work together to ruse Zodiac squad. Can they succeed?

http://pastebin.com/qAuMRzju


 No.131909

>>124258

I like this! It looks like it'll be a nice setup for some good events happen! Can't wait to read part 2

>>131404

You show 'em how it's done, Misato! It's really nice seeing those two be nice to each other for once. Thank you for the story man


 No.133054

Writer of Meeting Ryouna and Maiding Part One. Gonna identify myself under that name, and I mean it.

I'll leave here some stories I made…there…

Enjoy yourselves:

Bebe-tan Effect: http://pastebin.com/dhmTevr8

Classroom Helper Series (Haruka, Murakumo, Ryoubi, Rin): http://pastebin.com/nmG7uZVb

Librarian Ikaruga: http://pastebin.com/4mJ1HLbi

Having Fun Time with Hanabi: http://pastebin.com/47WjCrk9

Quality Time with Murasaki: http://pastebin.com/Zq0iKpQ4

Ryoubi's Bold-friend: http://pastebin.com/yZ216cX4


 No.136498

>>131404

That was pretty cute! I didn't expect the ambushes and it was a fun read!

>>133054

>Gonna identify myself under that name, and I mean it.

Sounds good to me! Feel free to write whatever you'd like!

As for the stories…

>Bebe-tan Effect

I really think this one is well done. The story and the way it's like a dialogue is really nice, and I always think the Bebe stuff is interesting to work with

>Classroo Helper Series

I think these are cute little stories. I get the vibe that you're a history student yourself, given the three stories working into it. I like how you play the twins here again. You like working with them, am I right?

>Librarian Ikaruga

Very cute. I like it. Of course, I've got a bit of a soft spot for her, and I think she'd make a good librarian, especially since her hobby is reading.

>Having Fun Time with Hanabi

Another short and sweet one, just like a firework show. Glad to see she took anon out for a show and a meal after wrapping up school!

>Quality Time with Murasaki

Cute and playful. Does this story take place before the Bebe-tan Effect, or are they unconnected? Either way that's really cute!

>Ryoubi's Bold-friend

I love it. Absolutely fantastic, that was a really sweet read. Anon is definitely a risk-taker, and his reward will be great!


 No.137902

>come here expecting a Kagura story

>none whatsoever

T-thanks.


 No.138235

>>136498

Well I'm not sure if they're connected but I think I saw it that way.

People, before growing roots here maybe I should talk with you (but if any of you visits /skg/ you might already know who I am. Otherwise…).

Despite all I have written, and most of my last post was born from requests from there, I have never played any of the SK games and everything I know is from the internet and gameplays. Also I LOVE getting RPed. Those things brought me…troubles, there…

Is any of this gonna be a problem here or in /senran/ too?


 No.139637

>>137902

Soon, friend

>>138235

That's fine if they're not connected. The stories themselves were still fun!

As for your spoiler

If you're a fan of Senran Kagura I do think it's fine to introduce yourself to the community in the general. As for the never played part, so long as you don't act like you have played I don't think people will mind. There have been people here who have only seen the anime, or haven't played the games and asked for opinions on them. We don't mind that at all, so long as people don't shitpost with sweeping generalizations. As for the RP stuff, I wouldn't role-play in the general discussion thread since that wouldn't be seen as the place for it, but you could ask if people are interested, as well as set up a thread here on /senran/ for it, as we'd like to move all RP to the appropriate RP threads. /senran/'s motto is For all your Senran Kagura needs, and so long as you're courteous of others and keep RP in a thread for it I don't think there will be any issues.


 No.143480

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Haruka's Challenge. Someone refuses to lose against Crimson's teasing girl but she won't give up that easily.

http://pastebin.com/sdm3RXwM


 No.148145

>>143480

This story was a lot of fun to read! I really think you played Haruka well despite saying you hadn't played the games and having him care for her like that was really sweet! Thanks for sharing your story with us, man!

Although now I really want Burger King


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