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 No.4311

Post your ideas for how to improve the Prequels.

 No.4317

Can Episode I entirely, have a reworked Episode II be the start of the trilogy, and split the events of Episode III into two separate movies to fix the pacing and to flesh out what happened.


 No.4323

>naboo as alderaan instead

>padme dies off screen, only to be confirmed dead by leia in rotj

>clone troopers are guys in suits not terrible early 2000s cgi

>more of a role for obi wan in tpm

>hayden plays anakin through all three movies


 No.4324

>>4317

I think TPM is the best of the prequels but yeah the story isn't very important, it's mostly filler.


 No.4325

>>4324

That's the problem, it is just filler. Which leaves just two movies to cover the actual relevant material, and that resulted in them being very poorly paced. Episode III especially suffers for it.


 No.4327

>>4323

Should have centered really around Obi-Wan with Anakin as a side character.


 No.4330

>>4323

leave out c3po and r2d2. Having darth vader be responsible for making 3po was fucking dumb

also leave out chewie


 No.4340

>>4330

>Having darth vader be responsible for making 3po was fucking dumb

Should have been Anakin making or owing R2D2 with Padme owning C3P0, seriously they got that the wrong way round. Similar to when Obi Wan jumps out the window in AOTC when it should have been Anakin.

Fucking Lucas, what was he thinking.


 No.4342

The

>I have the high ground

moment was dumb too seeing as when Maul had the high ground it did shit for him


 No.4344

>>4330

Just have C3PO be Watto's translator. Anakin's a slave, and spends a lot of time in the shop, just have him be a friend to young Ani. Problem solved.


 No.4373

>the first parts of Episode 1 completely removed.

>Start off with Anakin when the Jedi Arrive on the planet.

>Skip the Podrace.

>make the battle for naboo the start of the Clone Wars

>strip Darth Maul of his "darth title" and give it Tyranus. Keep Maul around as an accolyte.

>Maul dies at the hands of Obi-Wan and doesn't come back after Obi-Wan has taken a severe beating at Maul's hands.

>Have Tyranus own Anakin and Obi-Wan time and time again.

>Have tyranus be an actual threat to Padmé

>Pass of the writing of romantic scenes to 3d party writers.

>Pass off filming of romantic scenes to 3d party directors.

>Have Anakin turn to the dark side when he kills Tyranus.

> Show the internal struggle in Episode 3, untill he succumbs to the dark side fully in the duel against Obi-Wan.

>Place Padmé's death and the birth of the twins before the rebirth of Darth Vader.

> scrap the droid's "She has lost the will to live" line, in favour of a "force" sound-effect, as Padmé dies.

>Pause for just too long for a heartbeat.

>The force-soundeffect stops when Vader wakes up, and a shot of Palpatines hands going from outstretched to relaxed.

> Leave out the "NOOO" in favour of a silent scene with only a clenched fist of vader, and end the film with a slow pan away from vaders face and fade to black.


 No.4374

>>4373

>Skip the Podrace.

yea no


 No.4376

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>TPM would have a Fellowship of the Ring type intro that succinctly speaks about the history of the galaxy and how it came to be, the introduction of the knowledge to the star wars galaxy, the formation of the republic, the history of the jedi and sith, etc

>Count Dooku is a rogue jedi whose speech to obi-wan in attack of the clones is true: he actually recognizes that the republic and jedi have been infiltrated by the sith; however, he tries to convince them of this and they reject what he is saying. frustrated, count dooku becomes the leader of the virtuous separatist movement who aim to simply be free from the rule of the evil emperor. when they kill dooku, they finally learn the truth, and that all along he has been trying to save the republic and had warned them all along

>jango fett is given a substantially huger role, is prominent throughout TPM, and has a fair chance in attack of the clones. his death is instead glorious, and we see people like Kal Skirata in mourning

>in attack of the clones or revenge of the sith there is a substantial storyline featuring either an arc trooper or a commando squad


 No.4378

>>4376

I like it


 No.4379

>implying you can fix the prequels


 No.4391

>>4379

If I had the resources of Lucasfilm I could probably re-edit the existing prequels into something decent.

Starting from scratch though you could make some masterpieces.


 No.4392

>>4330

Lucas said that Star Wars was told from the perspective of the two droids, they were recounting the story in the distant future hence "a long, long time ago". So the droids are needed in all the major Star Wars movies.


 No.4393

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>>4392

Well I guess that explains this then.

Although seems that it would have made things flow a lot better if C3P0 and/or R2D2 were the first characters you were to see in The Prequels


 No.4394

>>4374

>podracing is the best thing in the prequels, but you can't deny it's just filler

>inb4 good pilot anukeen


 No.4398

>>4394

And Han's encounter with the giant space worm in the asteroid added nothing to the story but I wouldn't take it out.

>>4392

>Lucas said that Star Wars was told from the perspective of the two droids,

I fucking guarantee you he pulled that statement out of his ass because he thought it sounded smart


 No.4399

>>4398

Its something he has been going with since the first movie, its why those early scenes with Luke got cut.


 No.4401

Redo as much as possible to fit in with what the EU said the clone wars were. i.e. Victory-class star destroyers and a noticeable gap between the end of the clone wars and the rise of Palpatine.

http://deckplans.00sf.com/Research/Prequel.html


 No.4403

Jango Fett shouldn't have died in AOTC.

He should have been kept around so he could have been in all the Clone Wars spin off material. Imagine how much better it would have been if they had been using Jango in the the Clone Wars TV show instead of always relying on Dooku and Grevious.


 No.4433

>>4403

I kinda like Boba's journey on his own


 No.4438

>>4311

is there a story behind OP's pic? Is that portman under there?


 No.4439

>>4438

it's the naboo penthouse june cover

>>4398

>pulled it out of his ass

>deliberately borrowed from the hidden fortress

fuck off this board you normie


 No.4446

>>4433

>I kinda like Boba's journey on his own

Still could have done that after Ep III, Lucas didn't really use Boba anyway only the Clone Wars CG show had some appearances from him.


 No.4447

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Mace Windu as a character should have been completely cut. All of his lines should have been given to Obi Wan or Yoda.

The fight between Mace and Jango on Geonosis should have been a rematch between Obi and Jango, they really fucked that up by giving it to Mace, Obi Wan just gets his ass kicked by Dooku.


 No.4457

>>4311

No Jar Jar.

No Midichlorians.

Completely redo Clone Wars since it it was 78% shit.


 No.4469

Improve the Prequels?

More Qui-Gon Jinn, he was the reason Episode 1 was so good.


 No.4488

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Never make them and instead make movies/a TV show based on the X-Wing series of novels.


 No.4602

>>4438

According to wookieepedia:

Delva Racine was a cutting-edge fashion designer. Her outwardly-human appearance was altered by the strange eye goggles and the horn-like mask that covered her nose and mouth.

Her scandalous designs were based on Outer Rim Territories cultures. As a result, her summer Kubaz collection was heavily criticized by the media.

Possibly played by British fashion designer Alice Shreeve.


 No.4626

No Qui-Gon, no kid Anakin.

Obi-Wan meets Anakin, a promising pilot at the Republic Navy. Train him as a jedi. The Republic was attacked by some clone armies from nowhere. Palpatine manipulates things behind the scene and became emperor. Anakin became Vader and joins the Empire, help purges the jedi, that take some time. He bangs Padme from Alderaan, or something like that during all.

Episode I = Path of a Jedi or something. Anakin is recruited

Episode II = Clone Wars. The war and ascension of the Empire. Anakin abandons Obi Wan at the end.

Episode III = Purge or Betrayal. Anakin is now Vader. The jedi are hunted down, depicting their losing war and extinction (something more than all troops turn at once), Vader and Obi Wan fight.


 No.4630

Fight between Palpatine and Mace should have been re-purposed as a confrontation between Obi and Anakin.

Anakin wants to kill Palpatine for betraying the Republic, Obi wants to stop him because of muh jedi way or whatever.

This would be infinitely more interesting dramatically.


 No.4636

Episode I: Anakin was good and stoic as you can be, he's the absolute hero

Palpatine is known everywhere as a shitlord

no mentions of economy or conspiracies at all

Clone War begins

scrap all the original story and start again

no Yoda in all the movies

Jedi are allowed to fuck, they even see love as a cosmic stuff

They have visions and can somewhat heal, create fire and whatnot

We religion now, the Force can't be explained by science. The end.

Jar Jar is actually funny and steals the movie

he's an ambassador or something he's the key to all this

this episode is light as fuck like the 4th it's like poetry, they rhyme

Episode II: Anakin becomes darth vader

he purposely becomes a cyborg to inspire fear

trying to delay that thing is cheap IMHO

he wanted to defend the jedis

the jedis actually betrayed him because shitlord shaming

i mean he was planning a dictatorship because the galaxy was in chaos and liberals blamed the patriarchy I mean the Force

his stormtroopers saved him but failed at shooting the jedis

they go back to the Death Star

Anakin says this was a victory but when he's alone he gets sad

Pregnant Amidala is with him

Episode III: Clone war ends

No lightsabers appear in this movie

Amidala is taken hostage and dies that's the icing on the vader cake

Palpatine is surprised that Vader lost all his humanity and becomes 100% practical

Anakin was going to kill his children just to show his enemies how edgy he was

Palpatine told him "d00d, let's raise them as third world idealists and then corrupt their soul 'n shit 4 teh lulz"

stormtroopers and siths versus clones and jedis

a shit ton of siths

some jedis were trying to stop this because with this new technology I can do whatever I want and we even see a couple of jedis fighting each other

Vader betrays and kills all the siths to kill all the jedis

Vader thanks Palpatine because his mission is completed or something cooler

he wakes up and discovers he was with his mother in tatooine and this is lucas' episode I

he dies in the race

Lumpy Bacca wins

Jar Jar Binks does something unfunny

Rich Evans screams "Oh my goooooooooooooooooood"

*end credits*


 No.4647

This is the best rework I found. I think it's actually really, really good.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VgICnbC2-_Y


 No.4648

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>>4311

Just don't have them at all. It's that simple.

IV was a cultural phenomenon, V was the unicorn of sequels that caught lightning in a bottle, and VI was great but was when you started getting the feeling it was starting to run out of steam.

I never thought I'd be a purest, but Star Wars has become an undead horse. Still kicking around, but not actually alive while everyone is desperately beating it. OT is all you need, everything else is fanfiction that can be discarded.


 No.4652

>>4317

This.


 No.4653

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>>4636

>ep III

>No lightsabers appear in this movie

>stormtroopers and siths versus clones and jedis

>a shit ton of siths

That's a lot of lightsabers for a movie in which "no lightsabers appear"


 No.4655

>>4648

Lucas was planning the prequels ever since ANH was a hit. They were always going to happen. The best you could hope for was that they got made in the late 80's instead, before Lucas could latch onto CGI.


 No.4669

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>>4655

>Lucas was planning the prequels ever since ANH was a hit

>They were always going to happen

>planned it from the start

>was going to happen the whole time


 No.4675

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>>4653

>that fucking Force Run


 No.4704

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>make uncle owen more involved in the story

>actually Anakin's brother

>they climb mountains and shit and bond at the beginning

>owen doesn't want Anakin to get involved in the clone wars

>btw the clone wars is weird cloned aliens from some distant planet vs drafted soldiers

>aliens attack coruscant sending the once-peaceful republic into panic

>owen is a draft-dodger or a pacifist

>argues with anakin about fighting

>>4376

this is good too


 No.4733

>>4704

>>owen is a draft-dodger or a pacifist

Actually i wouldn't make sense put him as a soldier.

Remember what OB1 said? "He prefered to reamin here and not get involved", Anakin left for some "damn fool idealistic crusade" remember?


 No.4734

>>4626

>Promising pilot at the Republic Navy

>train him as a Jedi

Fat fucking chance. This isn't the New Jedi Order.


 No.4744

>>4734

Remember what Obi Wan said? He implied that when he first meet Anakin he was one hell of a pilot, than was amazed by the his force potential and took him as an apprentice.

Republic Navy, merc, private pilot. Whatever. The point was that Anakin was to be a pilot before being a jedi.


 No.4745

>>4744

in no way, shape or form does obi-wan imply that when he met him, he was already a great pilot.

i mean, they technically did stick to that with the podracing, but obi-wan is specifically referring to his dogfighting skills.


 No.5092

Give the prequels to tartakovsky. I think he did a great job with clone wars


 No.5147

>>4311

Travel back in time and remove GL from creative control on the entire franchise and give it to someone who can actually create a compelling story.

>>4374

The podrace served no purpose to the plot. It was literally a case of "lets make Watto immune to jedi mind tricks so we can needlessly shoehorn in a kids version of Ben Hur."

Do we really need a half-hour long scifi chariot race to showcase that Anakin has some talent at piloting? Or do we just want to sell toys?


 No.5163

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After seeing OP's pic I wouldn't change a thing


 No.5912

Fight between Dooku and Anakin/Obi in AOTC should have been ditched.

Should have been a fight between Sidious and Obi/Anakin. Sidious could have shown off some new powers instead of just Force Lightening and his face could have been concealed by having him disable the lights and keeping his hood on. He would have had no Lightsaber himself, maybe just fight for a short time using Obi's or something.

Chance for a lot of poetry and 2deep4u in a scene like that directed properly.

Bang, I'm a better screenwriter than Lucas.


 No.5913

>>5147

>implying every star wars movie wasn't designed to sell toys


 No.5921

>>4311

Buy every single copy and burn them.

Forbid anyone to every mention "metachirloans" or speak the name "Jar-Jar" ever again.


 No.5926

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>>4655

Wow! You really believe that bullshit?


 No.5928

>Scrap the whole prequels, specially all the young Anakin shit.

>Make whole new original story with new characters, fuck all the younger Yoda as a kid's teacher and Chewbacca had been around for 800 years shit, leave only Anakin/Obi Wan as young warriors

>Make the story about an ongoing war between the remains of of a retreating Republic and an unstoppable expanding Empire. One of the worse things of the prequels is the idea that one single evil politician pulled a galactic empire out of his ass in a couple of years by bribing a few aliens and brainwashing one Jedi apprentice. Make the transition happen slowly in the course of few generations.

>Fuck all the whinny Anakin missing his mommy shit. Make him strong and ambitious from the beginning. Make his transition into the Dark Side a conscious decision fueled by a personal hunger for power.

>Make the transition from Anakin to Darth Vader gradual, instead o on the operation table ripoff. He could lose body parts in different battles and replace them with cybernetic ones gradually across three movies, ending with the addition of the helmet at the end of part 3.


 No.5929

>>5928

I meant the operation table scene is a ripoff of Frankenstein.


 No.5933

>>5928

>make the transition gradual

a nice touch, but episode 3's biggest problem is showing that anakin is vader, thus making it that you have to watch the films ot then pt to save the twist that vader is luke's father. if they removed any direct connections then you could watch the films 1-6


 No.5937

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>>4311

The original trilogy didn't need a prequel trilogy. I'd just have set them afterwards. Alternatively lower the budget, exchange the recycled characters for OC creations and don't include any lightsabers. The prequels needed a scrappy crew of underdogs going on three separate but interconnected adventures.


 No.5962

>>4311

For one thing if you're going to do this shit about how the Jedi are questioning whether they've killed the master or apprentice don't spoil the mystery by having Palpatation put himself front and center every five minutes. The relation between the Sith that keep popping up and Anakin's kindly mentor among the senators should have been a mystery until the third movie when Sheev takes Anakin aside to a secret meeting between him, the Republic Naval Command and leading members of the CIS where they plot the rise of the Empire and use the supposed civil war to devastate any potential resistance to the future Empire.

Really the whole trilogy should have been one big tragedy where Anakin goes from idealistic farm boy from Tatooine raised on delicious blue milk going to fight the clones as a hotshot pilot to a broken man who lives only to survive another day and would sacrifice anything for more power. Anakin as the anti-Luke would have been a far more interesting approach than the whiny bitch we got.


 No.7507

>>5937

You sir, have shit taste.


 No.7521

Episode 1

>No fucking pod racing or gungans (Ewoks 2.0) in Episode 1.

I actually liked that they made it a bit about politics and showing that. Thought this movie is better than people give it credit for.

Episode 2 is the worst by far IMO

>Change the dialogue between Anakin-Padme as it is just cringeworthy as fuck.

> Count Dooku is the most boring bad guy yet. He sucks

> Scrape the shit with that shitty desert world where Anakin rescues Obi-wan. THat planet just sucked cock.

Episode 3

> Thought Dooku was bad? Meet General Grievous. Fucking terrible.

> Make Anakin be the one who hunts the Jedi Masters down instead of having them get killed by clones.

Overall I liked Episode 1 and 3(especially 3) so I'm far from an elitist fag. Episode 2 is the worst star wars movie to me by far.


 No.7525

Anyway, instead of bitching about someone else's shit tastes, here's my shit taste (Granted, I love the prequels as they are, but if I was allowed to do my own spin on it…):

EP I

>Movie opens the same way, Jedi arriving to resolve a trade dispute between the Naboo and the Trade Federation

>Keep Qui-gon Jinn, but instead of finding Anakin in the movie, he and Obi-wan are already his apprentices

>Set it up this way because there's no suggestion that a Jedi can't take on multiple apprentices in the films, only in the EU.

>Anakin is younger than Obi-wan, but is essentially top of his class- great fighter, strong in the Force, good pilot, but he's brash, arrogant, and out to prove himself- he's Maverick from Top Gun

>Obi-wan is calmer, older and somewhat more experienced, and Qui-gon feels he's ready to undertake the Jedi Trials, which infuriates Anakin, who feel's he's ready to do the same

>Possibly keep the Podracing seen, but have it redone as Anakin trying to show off to his master and fellow apprentice by getting them what they need to get off Tatooine. Also establish Anakin's interest in Padme'.

>Most of the film happens the same way after this point, with some extra scenes of Obi-wan and Anakin clashing a bit, in a sort of friendly brother-rival type deal

>Anakin is sent by Qui-gon to assist in the space battle instead of going off on his own as a stupid nine-year old kid is liable to do

>Qui-gon is killed, and asks Obi-wan to complete his fellow apprentice's training, fearing that without a sponsor, Anakin's behavior might get him booted from the Order

>Obi-wan, after being knighted, is drawn in as a sort of aide for Yoda, in addition to his typical duties as a Knight

EP II

>10 years later

>Obi-wan has become an established Jedi, wise in the ways of the Force, and a skilled swordsman

>Anakin is still a raw powerhouse of a Jedi, strong and powerful, but lacking in wisdom and restraint- he likes to think he's better than his Master, more worthy than him to be a Knight, but he's much less refined

>He clashes with Obi-wan in basically every conversation, questioning his lead, though it's also made quite clear that there is a strong bond between them.

>spend more time on Dooku, establish him as less of a cackling villain, and more of a genuinely good man

>Instead of a Sith, Dooku is in fact a former Jedi, and fights with a Jedi lightsaber- green, in this case

>Scrap the curved lightsaber hilt. As a historical fencer, I can tell you it does nothing to give Dooku any kind of advantage and just looks awkward. Keep the design and straighten it out maybe

>He approaches Obi-wan as a genuine revolutionary, fervent and honest and tells him how the Senate has been infiltrated and the Jedi deceived, and he can no longer in good conscience serve the Republic, and has started the Confederacy in an attempt to stop the Sith

>This is all true, but he doesn't realize he's being manipulated by the Sith.

>He only fights the Jedi reluctantly, and pleads with them to not fight him

>Give better dialogue for Anakin and Padme' throughout the movie

>Make it clear both are interested, but are struggling with their convictions and obligations in other parts of their lives

>Anakin is the first one to crack and admit that he doesn't care what the Jedi would say, he wants her.

>Make it so that Sidious ordered the clone army under the name of Sifo-dyas, a Jedi he personally killed, instead of Dooku.

>Dooku in fact knows nothing of the Clone Army

EP III

>have it play out much closer to the novel

>have it played on more heavily that Anakin is a war hero

>play up his devotion to his family

>make it more clear about his estrangement from the Jedi order due to the secrets he's been keeping

>Make it clearer that the Jedi are becoming more and more political and it's driving a wedge between Obi-wan and Anakin

>Have Dooku find out that the Chancellor is Sidious and the entire battle of Coruscant was to capture the Sith Lord

>Dooku tries to explain this to Anakin

>Anakin is so pissed about losing his hand and is so caught up in the idea of winning the war by killing the Separatist figurehead that he doesn't listen and lightsabers the fuck out of Dooku in a blind Dark side rage

>His guilt lasts longer than five on-screen seconds

>Obi-wan is still sent on a mission to defeat Grievous

>Another pang of jealousy for Anakin, who A) wants the glory of winning the war, B) thinks he could do it better than his old Master and C) wants to escape the Jedi Order's "political machinations"

Other than that, it plays out like the film as it is.


 No.7552

Episode 1:

>quick scene of Obi Wan meeting Anakin as a kid on Tatooine. Obi Wan was on Tatooine to settle some Jedi shit with Jabba.

>flash foreward to Anakin as a young adult

>him and Obi Wan are doing Jedi shit together

>they find out about the seperatists

>Dooku found out about Palpatine being a Sith so he tries to get an army of clones to stop him

>Clone Wars begins.

Episode 2:

>Anakin and Obi Wan are fighting the Clone Wars

>lots of questioning whether the Jedi should be fighting in a war

>Clone Wars is getting more and more fucked up

>At some point Anakin gets heavilly injured and has to wear a thing on his throat to breathe, basically Hayden with the Clone Wars CGI outfit + the bottom half of his Vader mask

>movie ends with Palpatine telling Anakin about a plot by the Jedi to join the Seperatists and overthrow the Republic

Episode 3:

>Anakin is still fighting with the Jedi but is very cautious near them now

>the Republic ends up going full scortched earth since the war is getting desperate

>Anakin follows orders but Obi Wan is reluctant to fight in the wars now that they've got this bad

>Anakin is going full African warlord, taking his troops through innocent planets, rounding up all the people on the planet, threatening to kill them if they don't give information on the Seperatists

>Palpatine lets it leak to the Jedi that he's a Sith

>the Jedi realize that the Seperatists were right and decide to join them

>when they try and attack Palpatine Anakin notices and realizes that the Jedi really did defect, he saves Palpatine

>Palpatine takes Anakin under his wing and together they go on to finish the Clone Wars destroying all the Jedi and Seperatists

>Anakin is still torn on whether the Jedi were even that bad or simply misguided

>Palpatine tells Anakin about how the Jedi forced the Sith to go into hiding and even blames some atrocities of the Sith on the Jedi

>he also reveals to Anakin that he's a Sith

>Anakin ends up realizing that the Jedi were the real bad guys and becomes a Sith

>fights Obi Wan and gets burnt up

>gets the suit

>kills most of the Jedi and ends the Clone Wars


 No.8297

>>4311

I feel like a lot of the Prequels was reasonably solid, but shit dialogue and bizarre casting just brought it down, as well as a handful of missed opportunities.

Episode 1:

>Anakin is a teen-aged grease monkey and racer. He's an arrogant punk who runs with slave gangs under Jabba the Hutt instead of Watto. He's ultimately the idealist he's sometimes portrayed in whenever Christensen can actually act later on though.

>Maul and Dooku get merged into one character, Maul's appearance, Dooku's backstory as an ex-jedi.

>Anakin and Padme have their romance begin early on, in more of a Han/Leia kind of way. He's a scoundrel, she's prim and proper, they need someone who can fix their ship and get the job done to survive. It turns physical, ect. ect.

Episode 2:

>Dooku/Maul and his legion of droids return from their defeat with an army of mercenaries and bounty hunters led by Fett. They've secretly amassed a rebellion under an even more secret master, and threaten to attack.

>When Anakin kills the sand people, the Lars family and the other people from his home planet hail him as a hero. He feels terrible but it's obvious the galaxy wants someone who can be brutal instead of the idealist he was before.

>Obi Wan is actually in on both the sand people and the Padme stuff and supports them. They are friends after all, and Obi-Wan doesn't trust Senators and Jedi Politics anyway.

Episode 3:

>Same as before, only now Obi-Wan is actually in on it and Anakin really does want his kid to have his lightsaber. Since he's gotten so good at getting the job done while ignoring jedi creed he's planning on quitting after the war anyway.

>Add some dialogue to the Mace/Palpatine/Anakin fight, where Anakin calls the jedi out on taking so long to reach a decision and then being stupid about it when they do.

I feel that 90% of the films problems are just weird dialogue blocking everything out. You throw away the lines about Sand and make Anakin sound like a fucking human and a huge amount of problems go away. Other than that just fix up the issues with Dooku and Kid Anakin and you have serviceable movies. The only real other thing is to give Obi-Wan and Anakin more than two scenes across the entire trilogy where they act like friends.


 No.8302

>>8297

>The only real other thing is to give Obi-Wan and Anakin more than two scenes across the entire trilogy where they act like friends.

hopefully the new comics act on this.


 No.8303

>>8297

early version of the mace/sheev fight had anakin already at the office, and sheev takes anakin's saber to defend himself.


 No.8365

>>4311

>Modern CGI

>Jar Jar is the Yoda of the Sith


 No.8378

YouTube embed. Click thumbnail to play.

>>4745

No? He stated, verbatim.

"Anakin was a good friend. When I first knew him, [b]your father was already a great pilot.[/b] But I was amazed how strongly the Force was with him. I took it upon myself to train him as a Jedi. I thought that I could instruct him just as well as Yoda. I was wrong."


 No.8380

>>8378

well fuck

it's still poetry with the podracing


 No.8438

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>>4311

>better actor for Anakin

>less squishy Padme Anakin love

>more Darth Maul

>clone brain microchip explained (tho not need)

>no Jar Jar shit

>Dooku Grevious Makashi Form training

>more Obi-Wan after order 66 (tho not need)

>Asajj Ventress apparition

Still, they pretty much did that in the clone wars serie


 No.8519

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I feel like writing some fan fiction.

Episode I:

>Anakin takes the place of Obi-Wan and Obi-Wan as Quigon.

>Anakin Played by Christian Bale

>Obi-Wan is still McGregor

World Building:

>Jedi is a religion and essentially a very very small faction of only 100 or so people on a single planet

>Very Arthurian Knights, sci-fi medieval and Blasters in the prequels are used sparingly, most people use Lightsaber, Force Pikes, Vibroblades etc.

>Droids are not common place at all

>Yoda is not the Grandmaster, and padawan is not a thing, the Grandmaster of the Jedi is Sheev Palpatine.

>Council consists of Sheev, Yoda and possibly someone like Kit Fisto and Sasee Tiin just a very small knit group

>Lightsabers come in a variety of types unique to each Jedi, Yoda has a lightsaber cane, Sheev does too, Dooku that fencing saber etc

Story Time:

Act 1: Corruption

>Anakin and his partner Obi-Wan are sent to investigate the signs of a bounty hunter who has killed one of the Jedi Order

>They follow him over Alderaan a little like Attack of the Clones but it being over mountains and valleys as opposed to a huge city

>They finally track him down with the help of Clone Troopers (which are common place everywhere in the galaxy as a universal police organisation)

>Capturing the Bounty Hunter who is a Madalorian they find out that he was hired by somebody within the order

>Mystery ensues as they try to find out who it was that would kill a knight and so too if this means somebody has in fact fallen to the darkside

>Obi-Wan has a line like "Not before Darth Bane have we had one of order fall." to imply that the darkside is a rarity but has happened in the past.

>The Bounty Hunter, Jango Fett, hints that the person that tipped him off hired him off world, on Mandalore and he'll help them get to the bottom of this if they don't hand him over to the republic as he has a family (Boba hint etc)

>Obi-Wan asks permission from Sheev to go off world and deliver Jango Fett back to Mandalore whilst so too finding out just who it was that hired an assassin. Sheev agrees.

>As they head to Mandalore they are stopped by the republic, akin to Visas Marr's attack a hooded figure wielding the double bladed saber appears and has a fight with Obi-Wan and Anakin. We see in this fight scene that Obi-Wan is more force-based but can hold his own whilst Anakin is a better at sword play although he seems far more aggressive in his style. Sabers move slow and clunky like in original trilogy.

>Masked/Hooded figure is defeated but blows himself out of an airlock and manages to escape any capture/death. The Jedi are perplexed and Jango suggests that was the man who hired him. During the fight Anakin saves Jango's life…somehow.

>On Mandalore Jango is reunited with his wife and he informs the Jedi that he is indebted to them and so will aid the party because of Anakin.

>While on Mandalore, Anakin is shown to break some rules, often flirting with women, drinking and though Obi-Wan discourages it he lets it slide. Anakin is mister personality.

>While at a Canteena an announcement that the republic is at 'war' is announced.

>Anakin and Obi-Wan are all "Well, Gotta go Jango"

Act II: Aldeeran Exposition

>Head back to Alderaan

>Anakin says he needs to check on 'her'

>Obi-Wan nods, knowing who he means, Anakin goes to find his wife Padme Organa.

>He's greeted by Bail, his younger brother in law and the Organa household who essentially tell him how fucked they are and that the senate are getting ready for something huge

>We see Anakin's human side where he and Padme are utterly close but the love must be kept a secret

>He asks what it is/What it could possibly be

>Talks about how there is something wrong with the clones, that before they were essentially emotionless easily made troops, now they are becoming defiant, have taken over entire planets.

Part 1


 No.8521

>>8519

Part 2

(Whoops wrong copy paste)

Act III: Start of the Clone Wars:

>Republic have gone to war with the clone troopers they manufacture

>Clones are being 'pushed' by a leader known only as Darth Sideous

>Obi-Wan is all 'Only a Sith goes by the name Darth'

>Clones wage war on the republic all over the system

>Since a Sith, aka a former member of the Order is pushing for the clones to attack the damn Galaxy the republic ask the Jedi just what the hell is going on

>Sheev decides to hold a meeting on Yavin IV with other temples

>The Jedi head to Yavin IV where they meet the other grandmasters, Sheev being the Grandmaster on Aldeeran with Yoda just under him. Mace Windu being a Grandmaster of the Dantooine temple. Count Dooku as another. etc etc

>They talk about whether they should help the republic or assassinate the sith leader.

>Some temples want nothing to do with war, others like Mace Windu are happy to aid the Republic, Sheev talks about how a Jedi lives to uphold the force above all things and needn't indulge in this bullshit.

>Mace Windu's second in command (like Sheev has Yoda) who is essentially Maul without facepaint insists that as Jedi they have the power to give life and take away life.

>Everyone super fucking uneasy about this

>As they all part ways they decide to have no part in this war and will simply try and sort out the sith issue without signing up

>Mace Windu says fuck that and he enlists several Jedi to come and sign up with him for the Republic.

>Anakin, surprisingly, is one of these as is Ben but being from a different order (Sheev's) they take on code names. 'Ben Kenobi' and 'Anakin Vader', the two enlist and get ready to fight for the republic.

>In a turn of events when Anakin and Obi-Wan are sent to fight they find Aldeeran is under attack by clone forces

>Anakin informs Mace and with the rogue Jedi they make their way to a republic Barracks

>Here Anakin meets Owen Lars and the two get on quite well, Owen being red leader to Anakin's Gold.

>The Jedi are placed in a single 'unique' unit for the republic to handle the Sith themselves as opposed to the Clone defectors known as the 501st Republic Legion

>Anakin and Owen wreck shit in space, Obi-Wan hates flying and as the 501st take on the Clones they take some heavy casualties.

>Mandalorians come in lead by Jango in a bunch of junk ships and inform Anakin that 'Yeah we're even now'

>Anakin, Obi-Wan and Owen make their way down onto planet where they have word that the clones have taken the Organa family hostage.

>They go in and clean house, Owen refuses to kill and is comic relief akin to Krillin

>As they prepare to leave Obi-Wan is ambushed by the masked figure who is blatantly Maul and the two duke it out

>Anakin soon arrives and loses his hand and leg in the fight

>Obi-Wan questions him during the fight and Maul reveals that the Sith funding the Clones is closer than he thinks

>Obi-Wan is going to arrest Maul and with Anakin bleeding out he prepares to take him alive.

>Instead Anakin bleeding out taps into an unnatural energy and blasts Maul with force lightning before passing out

>Obi-Wan and Owen agree not to mention this in the report but it concerns Obi-Wan.

>Anakin is kept in a Bacta tank and fitted with robo-hand and robo-leg

>The Republic are amazed with the Mandalorian prowess and form the first storm troopers platoon with them enrolling them in the 501st. The 501st are now the first storm troopers + Jedi Knights.

>The Clone Wars begins as it is revealed Sideous (Sheev) watched the whole thing with a council of Sith (Roughly 4 people)

———–


 No.8522

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>>8521

Episode 2

World Building:

>Five Years later, Droids slowly being introduced we see advertisements for them

>Civilization is very much like Naboo or Tatooine levels technologically/design wise not Coruscant level

>Jedi are hated. They are seen as the reason why the Clones rebelled and have gained emotion + Sheev has made sure he and his four cronies are often seen with Lightsabers out basically screaming 'Allahu Force-Bar'

>Jedi are still only designated to the 501st legion and equipped with a unique red robes by the republic and are known as Imperial Guardsmen when in service. A lot of people have joined the 'Jedi' but not accepted the religion and so the Jedi of the 501st have become extremely close.

>Jango Fett has been honoured as a general and is rocking a more Stormtrooper Design, Stormtroopers now no longer exclusive to the 501st.

>Technology has obviously grown as they now use primative fire arms

>Jedi of the religion (not imperial knights) still rock the robes, Obi-Wan looking more RotS and Anakin more like RotJ Luke with cape.

Act I: Alls Sheev that ends Sheev

>Opening sequence is akin to RotS with Anakin and Owen (not Obi-Wan) in space doing crazy shit, Anakin now more roboty and Owen still Krillin

>They make it aboard a ship in which a Jedi commander has been captured but they're unsure who it is

>Turns out to be Shaak Ti or some shit

>She's executed by one of the Sith (Masked and hooded as per usual) known as Ventress

>Anakin and Ventress fight and Anakin shows that with his new roboty powers he's grown stronger, relying somewhat on cybernetics and their enhancements to his body (super strength etc)

>Shaak Ti is killed, Ventress escapes and Anakin and Owen are recalled to Dantooine where they meet up with Obi-Wan, Mace and Yoda. The four swap stories about how Jango is getting soft since having his boy etc etc

>Yoda is seen as crazy as fuck just like his Dagobah future counterpart as opposed to wise and brooding

>Imperial Knights take the piss out of the Jedi talking about how they as Knights can do everything a Jedi can do with cybernetics so why bother with the force

>Yoda talks about Bane, a sith who was able to manipulate matter with the force and gets the piss taken out of him again

>Jango gives warning that he needs a squad to head out to Tatooine

>Obi-Wan straight up says "Scum and Villainry" schpiel

>Mace, Yoda, Obi-Wan, Anakin and Owen head to Tatooine

>Turns out a Sith has been spotted there

>They make their way there but soon have a crash landing when their ship is quite literally torn from the air by three Siths.

>Battle Montage ensues

>Mace dies to the three

>Yoda purely uses the force

>Obi-Wan is leaning heavily on the force as well

>Anakin is just going bananas

>Owen does Krillin things

>Obi-Wan, Mace, Owen and Yoda are all but left for dead by the three and Anakin is taken hostage

Act II: The Sith

>Fearing the worst Obi-Wan sets out on his own to rescue Anakin, Yoda states he knows of a place where they might get a clue, his homeworld of Dagobah.

>Obi-Wan hasn't heard of it

>Yeah we don't tell people about it because we're a force sensitive race.

>Owen whacky moment hears a Krayt Dragon

>Oh shit

>The Three fight a Krayt Dragon and from this victory are recognised by some watching Tuskens as godlike beings. Obi-Wan is given a Usken 'cloak' to signify his acceptance into the tribe after the three try and meet with the raiders.

>The Raiders give them a hint and Obi-Wan and Yoda decide to split up

>Yoda returning to Dagobah to speak with the spirits and Obi-Wan following the Tuskens with Owen to find Anakin.

>Meanwhile, Anakin has been taken hostage by the sith who inform him about the prophecy

>A sith who brings balance

>Anakin is all out of it and finds that Sheev has been captured by the three sith who now remain uncloaked, he knows them each as Jedi from other temples and Dooku as a Grandmaster.

>Anakin asks why

>Dooku explains about how the Republic are essentially making lobotomized servants and that the Jedi faith is going to be taken out if the Jedi don't learn to fight back

>Anakin all 'no no'

>They reveal Sheev is captured, Sheev acts like a prisoner and has been tortured severely

>The three then ask Anakin to 'Join them or Die' echoing Vader, Anakin says 'get stuffed', they "kill" sheev" and Anakin is pissed again

>Anakin tries to unleash force lightning but his cybernetics cause him to become the target of his own lightning frying the shit out of himself.

>Now with Sheev dead in front of him and being shocked to the point of burning flesh he gets all 'red eyed'.


 No.8523

>>8522

>Sith attack Anakin in beast mode only for Anakin to go ham giving fully into his anger and killing Savage and Ventress only for Tyranus to hold him at bay.

>Talks about how Jedi are dying out and the religion was all but dead, that there was a wound in the force and it needs to be balanced, that they created an enemy so grand that now people NEED the Jedi around

>Anakin all pissed off lets out a force scream causing Tyranus to realise that he aint just about the saber.

>Anakin in berserker rage kills Tyranus overwhelming him with force energy and remains in the chamber alone with no idea of where he is/how he got there, his eyes still sith like and just screaming

>Sheev's body is gone

>Suddenly out of the shadows we see what looks to be the clones, but they seem fearful

Act III:

>Obi-Wan meets up with Yoda and the two compare notes, Obi-Wan has been tracking Anakin for a few months now and Yoda has been consulting with the spirits for a while trying to work out just what the hell is going on.

>Sheev has not been seen in sometime and Anakin has been declared MIA by Jango.

>Obi-Wan has been living on tatooine with Owen for these months

>Finally with the meeting with Yoda they get a hint that Anakin has been taken to a planet known as Korriban.

>The three of them head out to Korriban with the Imperial Knights and 501st to save Anakin

>Final scene is Anakin shirtless and matted hair, wild and red eyed with an entire swarm of these odd clones looking very similar all pouncing upon a rancor beast to kill it, Anakin standing up with Tyranus's saber in his hand and igniting it roaring as the wild-clones scream out with him.


 No.8524

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I've typed too much and can't think of how to end it but

>Rescue Anakin

>The Prophecy is that his child will bring balance and so he bangs Padme

>Sheev plans to steal the kid

>Obi-Wan leads Imperial Knights and realises there is like 5 - 6 Jedi left. Nobody seems to even follow the religion

>In a night of the long knives esque moment protestors and what not turn against the Jedi when a "Jedi" (really a clone) suicide bombs a school

>Owen loses his son in that Jedi attack and retires, not blaming Obi-Wan but wanting nothing to do with war any longer

>Jango and his wife are killed by a Jedi that is acting skittish since being assaulted, Boba sees this.

>Sheev, as the Emperor, declares the war over with the Jedi all but killed off and now hated by the public but is looking more like Roan Fell than Hoody McEmperor.

>Padme and Obi-Wan go into hiding together on Tatooine. Obi-Wan does in fact fall for Padme and is raising their child for a little.

>Owen making a living on Tatooine

>Imperial Knights become Imperial Guard

>501st become 501st

>All Jedi but Yoda and Obi-Wan are dead

>Vader finds Obi-Wan and Padme on Aldeeran

>Padme and Obi-Wan are all but together at this point

>Vader kills Padme

>Obi-Wan fights Vader not knowing it is Anakin and bests him, bisecting him.

>Bail Organa claims Leia, Obi-Wan decides to raise Luke on his own.

>Goes to Tatooine to join up with the Raiders knowing he'll be safe there

>Instead finds Owen and his moisture farm

>Two decide they need to stay the fuck away from each other but Luke will be in Owen's hands

>Trouble follows Kenobi and he knows it

>Yoda and Obi-Wan regularly talk through meditation

Well it's not any good but it was fun to write.


 No.8532

>>8524

god damn how the fuck did you come up with all of this

it's tl;dr but like sheeit

anyways, only thing i would do to the prequels is make them work to be watched 1-6 for newcomers

ROTS

>don't give up sheev as the emperor throughout the pt until revenge of the sith

>don't have sheev call anakin vader, make them seem to be two separate beings

>make anakin's fate on mustafar unknown

AOTC

>make anakin less of a horndog

>focus more on how he constantly thinks about padme and his mother and less about the jedi outside of obi-wan, yoda and mace

>make qui-gon actually sifo-dyas, or go with the unused plot that sido-dyas/sidious ordered the clone army

TPM

>make gungans basically mediterranean/african underwater people

>jar-jar ends up being one of only a few of his race to survive, rest killed by droids

>no field battle, just the battles in the city and in space, but still have the rebellion lose to the droid army until anakin happens to destroy the control ship

>make anakin less of a kid since he's a fucking slave, his life is supposed to be miserable


 No.8533

>>8532

Oh I was just bored and thinking It'd be fun to write something


 No.8823

>>7525

>>Make it so that Sidious ordered the clone army under the name of Sifo-dyas, a Jedi he personally killed, instead of Dooku.

This. This right here would be amazing. I was confused as fuck on that part and it wasn't until I played Star Wars: Bounty Hunter - a badass game by the way (love Jango Fett) - that I figured out that part. It should have been more clear in the film.


 No.9723

>>8823

lets bump this thread


 No.9733

Episodes I and II

>six hours of Obi-Wan secretly boning Padmé

Episode III

>Obi-Wan, I'm pregnant

>…fuck

>…

>go bang my apprentice and we'll pin this on him


 No.9743


 No.9759

>>9733

recast obi wan as a black guy and it will get funded


 No.10050

>>4394

Do the opposite. ANH Luke is established to be a good pilot, be a good shot, and have some Force training, and it all comes to play in the climax. TPM tried to replicate that a bit (NOW THIS IS PODRACING), but push it further- the climax of it, instead of being a space battle or something, involves Anakin having to race to somewhere or out of somewhere. Mix the Speeder fights in ROTJ with the run inside the Death Star II or whatever.


 No.10576

Scrap Phantom Menace and the rule against Jedi attachments. Restrictions about older undiscovered

Force Sensitives joining the Jedi Order are less strict.

Episode I:

>Count Dooku is a former member of the Jedi Council, considered second only to Yoda. He has left the Jedi Order. Dooku does not think of the Light and Dark Side as good and evil but as two extremes, and feels the Jedi Council has become corrupt and stagnant. Disgusted with the corrupt and unstable Republic, Dooku decides to seek out a solution.

>With the Sith Empire having collapsed millennia ago, the Order of the Sith Lords is thought to be gone. However Dooku hears whispers of someone who calls himself Darth Sidious. Dooku is aware of the Sith use of the Dark Side, however Dooku does not think the Jedi are a preferable extreme, and seeks out Sidious.

>While not entirely trusting of Sidious, especially once he learns Sidious is Palpatine, Dooku begins to train under Sidious. Dooku intends to recreate the Sith Order to replace the Jedi Order that he sees as flawed, ineffective, and corrupt.

>With tensions throughout the galaxy at an all-time high, Dooku begins to meet with sympathizers and organize the Separatists. Sidious continues to play both sides, ensuring the Separatists will have to resort to civil war instead of diplomacy, intending to become Emperor regardless of whether the Republic or Separatists win.

>A staged assassination attempt is made on Senator Palpatine’s life, throwing the galaxy into turmoil. The Council sends Yoda’s former apprentice, Obi-Wan Kenobi to find the party behind the assassination. Kenobi is still young, and has not been a full-fledged Jedi Knight very long.

>Obi-Wan is unable to find the party behind the assassination attempt until he meets with Padme Amidala and her droid C-3PO, who is also investigating the assassination. When another assassination attempt is made, this time on Padme, Obi-Wan intercepts the assassin, who is then killed by Jango Fett.

>Padme has infiltrated the Separatists, but has not been given any information yet other than that a meeting is supposed to take place on Tatooine. She has heard rumors that Dooku is behind the Separatists.

>Tensions throughout the galaxy are at all all-time high following the assassination attempt, and Palpatine uses this, manipulating Senator Bail Organa into calling a vote of no-confidence and then nominating him for Chancellor.

>The Jedi Council dismisses the rumors about Dooku. Obi-Wan provides the dart used by Fett to kill Padme’s would-be assassin. Obi-Wan is sent to Tatooine to see if he can find the Separatists. Dooku’s former apprentice, Qui-Gon Jinn is sent to find the origins of the dart used to kill the assassin.

>Padme is appointed acting Senator of Naboo following Palpatine being elected as Chancellor. She heads for Tatooine to infiltrate the Separatist meeting. Obi-Wan follows her.

>Qui-Gon traces the dart to Kamino, where he learns of the clone army and fights with Jango Fett. Jango Fett escapes. Qui-Gon reports about the clone army to the Jedi Council, and then follows Jango Fett.

>Obi-Wan finds the Separatists, who are led by Dooku. Padme is exposed as a spy and taken prisoner. Obi-Wan confronts Dooku, who tries to explain his view to Obi-Wan. Dooku and Obi-Wan fight. Obi-Wan loses and barely escapes, being pursued by Separatist forces, led by General Grievous, who leads the Separatist droid army.

>The Separatists realize they are going to be exposed and begin their attack on Tatooine. Republic forces are few on Tatooine and caught off guard.

>Anakin Skywalker is a pilot for the Republic in Tatooine. He built R2-D2 himself. Anakin is the only survivors of the battle of Tatooine. Anakin’s step-brother, Owen Lars, informs Anakin that the Separatists have occupied Tatooine. Owen tells Anakin to just lay low, but Anakin disagrees.


 No.10577

>>10576

Continued:

>Anakin finds Padme’s ship, where he and R2-D2 meet C-3PO. Anakin rescues C-3PO from Jawas, who have salvaged most of Padme’s ship. R2 gets the location of the Separatist base from 3PO.

>Padme’s ship has had its communication systems taken by Jawas. Since they cannot contact the Republic, Anakin heads for the Separatist base himself.

>Anakin and Obi-Wan encounter each other in the Separatist base, where Obi-Wan is being pursued by Grievous. Grievous disarms Obi-Wan, and Anakin first displays force-sensitivity for the first time, calling Obi-Wan’s lightsaber to him. Anakin tries to fight Grievous. Having no training, he does not do very well, but they manage to escape.

>Obi-Wan and Anakin work together and Obi-Wan begins to unofficially train Anakin.

>Obi-Wan and Anakin rescue Padme, but they are all captured by Dooku and Grievous.

>This is not the time for Anakin and Padme to flirt. Anakin does not talk about sand.

>Qui-Gon arrives on Tatooine, having followed Jango Fett. Qui-Gon has brought clone forces to fight the Separatist droid army. He rescues Anakin, Obi-Wan, and Padme.

>Qui-Gon fights Dooku. Dooku kills Qui-Gon and escapes.

>Obi-Wan, Anakin, Padme, R2-D2, and C-3PO return to Coruscant. Padme becomes the official Senator of Naboo following Palpatine’s election. Civil War breaks out.

>Obi-Wan offers Anakin a position in the Jedi Order, and officially takes him as an apprentice.

>Tatooine is liberated, but the battle has wiped out any military forces. Jabba the Hutt and co. are essentially in charge of Tatooine now.

Might continue later with epsiodes II and III.




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