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190270 No.20285

>>18709 old thread

Hey everyone, I finally have enough time to continue this story. While I write the next scene I'd like to gauge current activity on this board, so if anyone that intends to stay here for the next few hours to play could give me a heads up that would be awesome.

e823ed No.20287

>>20285

im here


190270 No.20288

You lean down to kiss A'na, but she turns her head away, intent on refusing you. Unfortunately for her she has little room to evade you and you simply grab her head to keep her in place. She tries to protest, but the constant fucking she receives from behind prevents her from anything but simply moaning into you.

You stay like this for a while, Me'na sucking on your dick, while you kiss A'na and play with her nipples. Although you can't ignore that Lariana is the one doing the actual fucking, but after the recent events you feel grateful for this opportunity to show Me'na and especially A'na that you're not completely broken…yet. (regained some dominance over A'na and Me'na)

You keep a lazy pace, in contrast to Lariana's rough treatment of A'na, to regain some of your strength. (status changed from exhausted to tired)

After several orgasms A'na is finally released from Larina's grip, and she slumps over to the side, mirroring your own collapse. You can see cum leaking from her pussy, and you feel again the hunger inside you.

Meanwhile Lariana turns her attention to Me'na, who's still sucking on your dick. You didn't cum yet, and you don't really want to stop now, but if you stay it seems likely that Lariana will also turn her attention to you.

Maybe you could “take care” of A'na some more? You should probably not do it next to Lariana though.

A)stay like this

B)”take care” of A'na

C) so sth. else

Diana:

Arousal: 70%

TFC: 60%

Status: tired

time: late morning


e823ed No.20289


e829fc No.20290

>>20288

>B

Are there ever situations with multiple futas in a community? It seems like it would be safer to share a harem along with patrol/defense duties.


a39762 No.20292


8a1241 No.20293

>>20288

B

Glad you are back.


69f1a1 No.20295


190270 No.20296

>>20290

Considering that people here are already planning on backstabbing Lariana, you should not be surprised that it's not really a common arrangement.

>>20290

>>20292

>>20293

B wins, do you want me to give you some options first, or do you want to outline a scenario by yourself?


c6bf66 No.20297

>>20296

It's a prisoner's dilemma, so it's not that surprising that people want to betray immediately. I've been trying to vote with a mindset of at least attempting to cooperate but that doesn't mean much since Lariana obviously does not see us as anywhere close to an equal.

Also yeah, give options I guess. If it makes much difference how we do it.


190270 No.20298

>>20297

alright I'll give you some options (you are as always free to suggest your own ideas)

You'll have to consider two things:

being excessively dominant might jeopardize your relation with A'na and Lariana. (using your dick to fuck her is definitely this)

being excessively submissive will encourage A'na to dominate you, but might make Lariana less cautious of you.

first choice:

You can try to carry A'na away from Lariana. This might make Lariana suspicous of you, but allows you to do more dominant stuff at lower risj of discovery.

Or you can simply do whatever you want to her here.

second choice is what to do with her.

fuck her, make her suck you off, or eat her out.

fucking her is the most dominant choice obviously, and eating her out the most submissive (or rather the least dominant), but eating her out will reset your TFC since she's filled to the brim. This might be your best way to get rid of that without blowing Lariana.

A)carry A'na away

B)leave her

1)fuck her

2)make her suck you off

3)eat her out


dc81ab No.20299

>>20298

Carrying her off makes it obvious we're gonna fuck her anyway, so A1 is my vote


190270 No.20300

>>20299

it depends on a charisma roll, but you might convince Lariana that you're going to clean her in the river. I'm going to roll for Lariana's awareness, and she might not even notice you carrying her away.

Either way, if you carry her away it gives you deniability.

I don't recommend fucking A'na directly next to Lariana, unless you really want to spend the rest of the day with Lariana.

But ofc that's your choice to make.


8a1241 No.20301

>>20298

It's pretty difficult to know where we are going to go… It's really good but I think people naturally want to pick the options where they are in charge. The people who want to be submissive probably prefer to pick the more risky options to deliberately fail at them also which makes it hard to tell what people want I guess.

I like 2 though as it allows the potential to get A'na to compete with Lariana potentially and resets tfc

My vote is thus B2, 2nd choice is surprisingly A1 I guess.


dc81ab No.20302

>>20300

It seems like the most transparent lie ever, but if it could work B1


190270 No.20303

>>20301

>I like 2 though as it allows the potential to get A'na to compete with Lariana potentially and resets tfc

did you mean Option 3?


8a1241 No.20304

>>20303

oops yeah B3


c6bf66 No.20305


6135e9 No.20306


190270 No.20307

Alright it looks like we have:

>>20302

1 vote for B1

>>20304

and 1 for B3

>>20305

>>20306

and 2 for A1

I'm gonna limit votes to those three choices now, first to 3 wins.


dc81ab No.20308

>>20302

>>20307

If there's support I'll switch to A1


7a26a5 No.20309


8a1241 No.20311

>>20307

I'm swapping from B3 to B1 which should bring it to 3 votes now?

>>20308

>>20309


d52de5 No.20314

B3


190270 No.20315

>>20308

A1 reached 3 votes first, so it wins, but since people are pretty devided I feel like I should clarify again.

Unless Lariana rolls pathetically for awareness, or you roll epic charisma, your dominance will likely suffer in the longterm.

If nobody objects I'll go with A1


f857e4 No.20316


f857e4 No.20317

>>20316

Come on guys, think about it. All the 1 options are guarenteed to fail. Make her blow us, it's the safest way to increase dominance.


c6bf66 No.20319

>>20315

Oh I wasn't sure if A1 would be that risky based on what you said. In that case I'd switch from A1 to B2.


190270 No.20320

Alright I'm gonna count again, just to make sure.

>>20302

1 vote for either A1 or B1

>>20311

1 vote for either B3 or B1

>>20319

1 vote for either A1 or B2

>>20306

1 vote for A1

>>20309

1 vote for B1

>>20314

1 vote for B3

>>20316

1 vote for B2

I'm not entirely sure how to count that, but I'd say B1 is slightly ahead of A1. Should I you guys continue to vote until there's a clear favorite? If not i'm going with B1


f857e4 No.20321

>>20320

I don't think >>20302 can really be counted as a vote… maybe roll-off between A1 and B1?


f857e4 No.20322

>>20321

I mean, I'd prefer to go with A1, since it's pretty clear that >>20311 is deliberately trying to sabotage the character, but I suppose that's not fair…


f857e4 No.20323

>>20320

Actually, it looks to me that right now there's a three-way tie between B1 and B2, right? Since >>20302 wasn't really a vote as much as just a comment or an inquiry? I dunno OP, your call. I'd rather do a roll-off than just call it B1 though


190270 No.20324

>>20322

well, technically every vote is a deliberate manipulation of the character. Unless you're in the majority vote :P

Does that mean you want to switch your vote to A1?


f857e4 No.20325

>>20323

Sorry, two-way tie


190270 No.20326

>>20323

I guess there is an argument to be made that B1 and B2 have 2 votes if you count the two that switched from B3 and A1, but I'm not sure how to count the one that is between A1 and B1.

I'm guessing he would prefer B1 over B2, so I'd have to go with B1.


f857e4 No.20327

>>20326

Since it seems pretty dead right now, I'll switch my vote from B2 to A1 and we can go with that. Lesser of two evils I guess


fb6020 No.20328


f857e4 No.20329

>>20328

>>20327

Changing my vote back to B2. That's 3 for B2, right?


190270 No.20330

>>20327

well considering there's another vote for B2 now, your chances look good. You still wanna switch to A1? If you switched to B1 it would have been more decisive imo.


f857e4 No.20331

>>20330

Yeah I'm back on B2. Fuck B1, that's suicide


c6bf66 No.20332

>>20320

I'm definitely for B2 now if that wasn't clear.


e829fc No.20333


190270 No.20334

>>20331

Alright that's 3 for B1 and 3 for B2 (counting every vote after they switched)

give me a tie breaker for each pls so we can move on 1-50 for B1 and 51-100 for B2


190270 No.20335

>>20333

nvm B2 wins


e829fc No.20336

>>20335

Split second finish!


f857e4 No.20337

>>20336

Edge of my fucking seat


190270 No.20338

Dice rollRolled 6 (1d100)

>>20335

Alright B2 is the option with medium dominance pay-off and medium risk.

I'm rolling for Lariana's awareness, if I roll below 20 she doesn't even notice anything that's going on around her, but if I roll 20+ you need to give me a charisma roll to see how she reacts (the higher the better, 50 is neutral)

I also need a dominance roll 30+


f857e4 No.20339

Dice rollRolled 24 (1d100)

>>20338

GET REKT LARIANA

rolling for Dominance


f857e4 No.20340

>>20339

Dammit


190270 No.20341

>>20338

yeah. I guess Lariana is even more oblivious than you, who would have thought that was possible.

>>20339

that's pretty hilarious, give me a moment, I'll write something up.


190270 No.20343

You decide that you Lariana for now, so you pull your dick out of Me'na and move over to A'na.

You sit yourself on top of her chest, your dick pointing at her face. But before you can force yourself into her mouth, A'na grabs your junk and keeps you from advancing.

“You think you can just facefuck me like you did with her? I'm surprised you still have this dick, after showed what a little buttslut you are really are. But judging by your pitiful size that will be corrected soon.” She gives your dick a little squeeze and a tug, making you moan in a mix of pleasure and pain.

A'na laughs at your reaction. “You like that, don't you? Why don't you cum for me one last time before you lose your sad excuse for a dick.” She starts stroking you, and you can feel yourself getting close very soon.

You're not sure if you want her to stop or not, it just feels too good.

Meanwhile Lariana is busy fucking and kissing Me'na in missionary, too focused to notice anything around her. She would probably only notice you if you physically shook her.

A)try to escape her grip

B)try not to cum

C)let her her do as she wants

D)sth. else

Diana:

Arousal: 80%

TFC: 60%

Status: tired

time: late morning


f857e4 No.20344


c6bf66 No.20345


190270 No.20346

>>20343

You decide that you *should avoid* Lariana for now

missed something in the first sentence.


190270 No.20347

>>20343

A) and B) will require resistance rolls first, which will not be easy, since you're pretty aroused already.


f857e4 No.20348

>>20347

Which will hurt our dominance more, failing A or B, or just choosing C?


190270 No.20349

>>20348

At this point you're almost guaranteed to lose your dick during the night, so it doesn't really matter, unless you pull off something amazing.

But to answer your question. failing a resistance roll does not damage your dominance as much as failing a dominance roll, and giving in is basically equivalent to that.


190270 No.20350

>>20349

I should probably mention that choosing A or B and failing will make A'na more likely to torture you even more.


190270 No.20351

>>20344

>>20345

A wins.

give me a 50+ resistance roll followed by a 40+ strength roll (if you fail the resistance roll you get -20)


f857e4 No.20352

Dice rollRolled 53 (1d100)

>>20351

Come on, resist


190270 No.20353

>>20351

I forgot you are still tired, so your strength roll gets -10.


f857e4 No.20354

Dice rollRolled 19 (1d100)

>>20351

Aaaaand strength!


190270 No.20355

>>20353

in addition to the -20 if you had failed the resistance roll, so you need to roll 50+ now


190270 No.20356

>>20354

you're too fast for me, I'm getting ninja'd too much in this thread.

resistance passed, but strength failed, next part up in a bit.


190270 No.20357

You grab her hands and try to pry them off you, but you simply can't muster the strength. A'na keeps jerking you off while you helplessly hold on to her arms.

Suddenly you feel A'na pinching the base of your shaft while simultaneously stroking you faster than ever before. You can't hold on any longer and are pushed over the edge again. But A'na is preventing your release by sealing your cum with her fingers. Your dick is twitching and you cry out in frustration while A'na simply smirks at you.

“Aww, do you cum so badly? You seemed pretty exhausted already, I thought for sure you wouldn't need any more release.” She starts stroking your still erect cock, making you wimper in response.

“I think you owe me an apology before I let you cum.”

A) apologize

B) keep struggling (very difficult)

C) stay silent

Diana:

Arousal: 90%

TFC: 60%

Status: tired

time: late morning


f857e4 No.20358


c13079 No.20359


c6bf66 No.20360


190270 No.20361

>>20358

>>20359

>>20360

C wins

give me a resistance roll followed by a dominance roll.

both are 60+ but if you fail the resistance roll you get -20 to dominance


f857e4 No.20362

Dice rollRolled 36 (1d100)

>>20361

resist


c6bf66 No.20363

Dice rollRolled 10 (1d100)

>>20361

dominance


c6bf66 No.20364

Dice rollRolled 67 (1d100)

Failing every roll today it seems


190270 No.20365

>>20362

>>20363

well, not your day it seems. next part coming right up.


190270 No.20366

You try to keep silent. You try to resist. You fail miserably.

A'na has you moaning and aquirming helplessly. Soon you're begging for mercy, but she keeps denying you your release, until you have no strength left for the second time this day already.

But even when you slump to the ground A'na doesn't stop. You lie on your back, with her sitting between your legs, stroking you methodically. When you stop responding to her she starts stimulating your asshole with one hand while the other keeps a tight seal in your dick.

You crack eventually. “I'm nghaaaaaa… soorrryyyyy.. ahhhhhhh, pleaaase let me cuuuuuuum.” You start begging pathetically, but A'na waits for you to once again egt denied an orgasm before she removes the hand from your base.

“Please please ahhhhhh.” You moan again when she keeps stroking you while simultaneously fingering your asshole.

“Was that so hard, my little slut? Now cum for me.” You don't have to be told twice, and you immediately start spurting more cum than you thought you still had in you. A'na points your dick towards your face, making sure not to get anything on herself.

Afterward you feel like you ejected a part of yourself, so exhausted are you. You feel A'na crawling up to you, and lick some of your cum up. Before you can wonder why she gives you a kiss, making you swallow your own jizz.

“You're mine now, slut. Remember that.” That's the last thing you notice before you pass out from exhaustion.

Diana:

Arousal: 0%

TFC: 60%

time:?


190270 No.20367

Roll for endurance to see how long you're out, depending on that roll I will roll myself to see what happened in the meantime.


190270 No.20368

higher endurance roll = shorter time spent asleep btw.


f857e4 No.20369

Dice rollRolled 66 (1d100)

>>20367

Endurance


190270 No.20370

Dice rollRolled 5 (1d5)

>>20369

alright it's now early afternoon.

next part coming right up.


190270 No.20371

When you come to your senses you notice that the sun has passed its zenith recently. When you look around you see that Lariana apparently left the three of you alone again, and that A'na used that opportunity to jump at Me'na again.

A'na is sitting with her back to the cavewall, with Me'na sitting in her lap. From this position A#na has easy access to grope Me'na's breasts and finger her pussy, making her moan.

They haven't noticed you yet, and you consider what to do now. You're still messy so maybe you should clean yourself in the river. You could also go over to A'na and Me'na, but you're not sure how to feel about that. Maybe you should just leave her alone for now.

You could also leave the cave, maybe look around again.

A)clean yourself

B)go over to A'na and Me'na

C)leave the cave

Diana:

Arousal: 0%

TFC: 60%

time: early afternoon


f857e4 No.20372

>>20371

A

Do we have the bonus from our exercise now? And is our exhaustion/tiredness over?


190270 No.20373

>>20372

yes and yes, sorry forgot the status.

you now have a +10 to strength and enduracnce rolls. But I have to warn you, you're strength and endurance rolls just got a lot harder.

You can still beat Me'na easily and A'na with a little luck, but don't get your hopes up to beat Lariana any time soon in a straight up match.


f857e4 No.20374

>>20373

Are we able to flee the camp at any time, or will we have to contend with Lariana to strike out on our own? (not that I necessarily want to do this, I'm just wondering)


c6bf66 No.20375


190270 No.20376

>>20374

You can leave whenever you want. If she's not there she can't really stop you can she? The only thing holding you back is yourself.


190270 No.20377

>>20376

I should say that if you tell Lariana that you wanted to leave she will likely try to convince you not to.


d52de5 No.20378


d23f6b No.20379

>>20371

A

>>20376

I think its mainly that we would be back at square one if we leave, and probably some people don't want to leave Me'na behind, also some people probably want to get revenge on Lariana (probably A'na as well).


190270 No.20380

>>20379

I understand completely, and I'm not telling you to leave. I just want to make clear that I'm in no way preventing you from leaving. That is comepletely up to you.

Also, A wins, give me a 30+ awareness roll (I should probably make this harder but I trust you guys to suck at rolling at awareness almost as much Diana sucks cock ;P)


f857e4 No.20381

Dice rollRolled 70 (1d100)

>>20380

…Awareness?


f10564 No.20382

>>20381

awareness passed, but the next part has to wait for a little bit, I'm grabbing something to eat.


f10564 No.20383

You decide to get cleaned up first, and walk towards the river. You slip into the water and make sure to wash all the dried cum from your body.

After a while you hear footsteps behind you, and turn around to see A'na walking towards you. You feel a little intimidated and vulnerable right now, maybe you should ask her to stay back? You're not sure if she will listen to you after what happened earlier, but still.

A)Tell A'na to stay back

B)just keep an eye on her

C)Ignore her

D)Do sth. Else.

Diana:

Arousal: 0%

TFC: 60%

Status: Invigorated (+10 to strength and endurance)

time: early afternoon


c6bf66 No.20384


f857e4 No.20385


d23f6b No.20386


f10564 No.20387

>>20384

>>20385

>>20386

B wins, next part coming right up.


f10564 No.20388

You watch her suspiciously, but A'na doesn't seem bothered by that. In fact she starts to smile at you, apparently enjoying your reaction.

When she gets within arms length of you, she quickly reaches for your breasts and pinches your nipples. You yelp in shock, surprised at how sensistive you've gotten. You grab A'na's wirsts reflexively, but you don't pull her hands away immediately, instead enjoying the sensation.

“Look how big you've gotten, I really like it.” The comment makes you realize that your breasts have indeed gotten bigger since this morning, and you're not sure how you feel about that.

You consider how to react. Right now A'na seems content to simply play with your nipples, and it does feel nice, so maybe you should just stay quiet? Or you could tell her to leave you alone, but she probably won't like that very much.

A)stay silent

B)tell her to stop

C)pull her hands away

D)sth. else

Diana:

Arousal: 10%

TFC: 60%

Status: Invigorated (+10 to strength and endurance)

time: early afternoon


3033e7 No.20389

>>20388

D

turn the tables on her


f857e4 No.20390

>>20388

C, since we have that bonus


dc5127 No.20391

>>20388

D grope her breasts back?


6fc555 No.20392

>>20389

>>20391

So I'm guessing you want to just grab her back? This would mean you roll for dominance and resistane against me.


dc5127 No.20393

>>20392

actually given our rolls might be good to do C changing D to C


6fc555 No.20394

>>20393

or maybe it just means you saved the good rolls for now, who knows?


d23f6b No.20395

>>20388

D, we might have a chance to turn the tables.


dc5127 No.20396

>>20394

but the rng gods love to fuck wth us


ed162c No.20397

>>20388

C, because afterword we can try to turn it around on her


6fc555 No.20398

>>20390

>>20393

>>20397

C wins, give me a 20+ resistance check followed by a 45+ strength check (you get +10 because of your training, but -20 if you fail the resistance check.)


99ab85 No.20399

Dice rollRolled 97 (1d100)

>>20398

resist


ed162c No.20400

Dice rollRolled 14 (1d100)

>>20398

Str


6fc555 No.20401

>>20399

>>20400

the other way around would have been better for you. How useful is resisting if you can't fight back?

next part coming right up.


99ab85 No.20402

>>20401

What, crit success does nothing?


3033e7 No.20403


6fc555 No.20404

>>20402

If the strength roll had been closer it might have, but a 14 is way too low, even with a +10 bonus from the training. I know people want to be rewarded for high rolls, but I don't see how I can reward this while making sense in context.

I want the rolls to matter for the specific thing they apply to. In this case it means you're better at resisting stuff, but that doesn't matter if your strength is shit. Does that make sense? If your strength roll was 97 you would have been able to easily overpower A'na and likely fuck her any way you wanted. But you rolled a 14.

anyway next part in the next post.


d23f6b No.20405

>>20401

A crit success could give us more opportunity to resist her.

It would kinda be bullshit when you make an epic fail = loss the encounter while epic win = normal win with extra fluff.


6fc555 No.20406

You manage to ignore the sensations coming from your nipples, and try to pull A'na's hands away from them. But unfortunately for you she manages to hold on to your breasts while you futilely pull on her hands.

“It seems like you keep pulling on my arms today, doesn't it?” You can hear the smugness drip from her tongue while your breasts get massaged.

Suddenly A'na lets go of your breasts and instead grabs your crotch with one hand, while pulling your head in for a kiss with the other.

You're caught by surprise, and before you think about it you start kissing back.

You're not sure how to react. You think you wanted to stop her, but it feels so nice.

A)give in

B)struggle free

C) sth. else

Diana:

Arousal: 10%

TFC: 60%

Status: Invigorated (+10 to strength and endurance)

time: early afternoon


6fc555 No.20407

>>20405

yes you can still resist, I suggest you go for active options. I didn't put it in the options, because people have been playing rather passive, but you can always say "push her on her back and pin her down"


ed162c No.20408

>>20406

C, pull her in for the kiss with one hand and finger her ass with the other


6fc555 No.20409

>>20407

on second thought lets put that as option C)

C)try to overpower her


ed162c No.20410

>>20408

I figure with a buffed strength and our current resistance this is the best plan, since she IS a buttslut it might catch her off guard


d23f6b No.20411


f857e4 No.20412

>>20406

C, targeting her butt if possible


99ab85 No.20413

>>20403

Well then what is even the fucking point of rolling. Just make everything an autofail and be done with it.


6fc555 No.20414

>>20410

I will say that because of your high resistance rolls you will have an easier time with further resistance rolls, but your option would need dominance rolls instead of strength rolls.


6fc555 No.20415

>>20413

I'm curious, what would you have wanted me to do, ignore the 14 and simply let you win the strength roll?


d23f6b No.20416

>>20406

>manage to ignore the sensations coming from your nipples

sounds like a normal pass

>caught by surprise then start kissing back

so did our epic win not count for resisting that?


ed162c No.20417

>>20414

I'd disagree, only because A'na normally is dominant through her words, if we hold her kissing us and start fingering then I believe it should be strength, and the resistance works as normal. But you are the DM so whatever you think i guess. just throwing that out there


d23f6b No.20418

>>20415

Probably with a epic/phenomenal win with resistance rolls then we be less affected by them, but still held down.

Just throwing it out there.


f857e4 No.20419

There's nothing that says OP HAS to count epic wins/fails. Although I think in this case we just completely resisted to the fullest extent. The epic win on the resist just doesn't carry over to any other rolls. If I were writing it I would probably have the epic roll make her attempts completely unsuccessful, causing her to either get bored or get frustrated and reckless. But come on guys, it's OP's story, he can write it however he prefers.


6fc555 No.20420

>>20416

well maybe I didn't convey this clearly (I'm pretty tired sorry). The kiss is not yet decidedly dominant, you didn't gain any arousal or lose any dominance because of that.

If you do decide to take charge of the kiss you could probably do so easily, making the early kissing back irrelevant.

But since people are always telling me to respect the high rolls more, and I'm pretty tired already, I'm willing to put it up to a vote.

Instead of voting for the options I'd like you to discuss wether or not you are unhappy with me handling this particular roll and get a consensus of what you want to happen instead:

for ease of counting:

A)Everything is fine, don't worry

B)I think this should have gone different, here is how:


f857e4 No.20421

>>20420

Don't worry about it man, there's no need for a vote on anything. What you wrote was just fine, and you're the writer. Just move on. I'm sure that nobody who really had a problem wants you to change it. It's just constructive criticism, so just keep it in mind for the future. You're the most dedicated writer on the board, nobody wants to put you down.


f857e4 No.20422

>>20421

If you're set on voting, I vote A. Seriously though, just keep going, nobody's jimmies are that rustled.


6fc555 No.20423

>>20422

Thank you for saying that, but I always take criticism to heart, and sometimes it's hard for me to tell the difference between what people tell me and what I tell myself. This is probably just my insecurity showing, I'd appreciate it if you could go along with it.

I'm gonna head to bed now. I'm not sure how much time I'll have during the week, probably not enough for a full session, but I'd appreciate if everyone that's interested in this story would offer their 2 cents in the meantime.


ed162c No.20424

>>20420

A, what happened is fine, my comments were about what happens next and how that is handled


6fc555 No.20425

>>20424

Oh I wasn't concerned about your reply, that was actually helpfull in that it showed me how my characters are perceived, and I might change the type of roll based on that.

I'm mostly concerned about the constant comments on me being too harsh, if it pops up often enough there's a good chance they're right (at least that is what happens in my brain when I read something often enough)


4eb39d No.20426

>>20425

Having to succeed multiple rolls to succeed at all can make it a bit frustrating. If the average DC is 50, but you have us roll twice the encounter's probably a loss, and a lot of times the DC's are quite a bit higher than that. Just my two cents.


ed162c No.20428

>>20425

Well in that case, my two cents would be when you have to incorporate a crit/phen fail/win, you should make an immediate follow up post after the post explaining the value/effect of the fail/win. this way people are less likely to complain. like they do for very nearly every crit.

And I enjoy how hard the rolls are. Diana, our name for those who forgot, is not meant to be exceptional, she is the average Jane trying to make her harem, if anything we are less than average due to our inherited cum addiction. Therefore the rolls are harder and the game needs to be played with our brains not our dicks, if we want to get our rocks off in the long run, whether we want to be dom or sub.


d23f6b No.20431

>>20425

most people are frustrated when the progress we make suddenly vanishes after a fail (mostly out of our view/thus out of our control) that causes a chain reaction of loss, and it makes it feels like you are pulling the rug from under them.

if you just make it all losses then you would enter "why should i care what happens to these characters" territory.

It also doesn't help that some of the previous players been playing to the detriment of the character.

Don't take this all as negative, i am enjoying the story and besides the drawbacks with how the rolls are handled and our terrible luck when dealing with multiple rolls, everything seems fine.

>>20428

If we were to use our brains then we would be using branches as clubs and slings (like most survivalists), but since that is frowned upon then we have to find more of those insects that raise lust and probably make use of that tree which affects Lariana heavily.


8a1241 No.20432

>>20423

>>20420

A

You are doing great in my opinion. You write well and it has a good plot. If I had any suggestion though maybe it would be to show the rolls that need to be beat before the vote. As pace it really has only been fucking in a cave for what feels like a whole thread…

It is really good though, reading yours is what got me to try attempt one of my own.


a8f262 No.20439


7a26a5 No.20443


5843df No.20487

Alright, from the looks of it the majority is ok with the way I handle rolls, but there's definitely some legitimate critique, and I'll try to make it more transparent how rolls affect your character.

I'm still gonna change the way I handle the resistance rolls that influence the next roll.

Here's why and how:

I made it so that failing the roll gives you a malus on the next roll but winning didn't officially a bonus (it does but I should have told you) and it wasn't evenly balanced.

rolling a 100 means you win (unless you roll a 0 on the next roll) 95 and over gives you + 20 (which is not enough to pass the last strength check) 90 and above gives +10

for failing it's mirrored, witht he exception taht a fail above 10 still gives you - 5 (this makes it slightly unbalanced but I think you guys can handle that).

Before I open the voting again I wanna say something about how I handle crit rolls, since I haven't said it clearly before, which I think caused some of the grievances in this game.

I alway thought that making anything 15 and below or 58 and above "epic" didn't really do the name justice, since that's basically a 30% chance of any given roll to be "epic". I'm gonna break with tradition here and only make a 1 or a 100 an "epic" (or whatever you want to call them) which means will give you massive bonuses during the encounter (almost alway instant win/loss). and a 10 or below/90 or above a "crit" which gives additional effects/bonuses but not as massive as a 100 or a 1.

Exceptions are rolls that already have epically high or low numbers to pass.

With that said: here's the new options (vote count will be resetted)

A)take charge of the kiss (dominance roll against me with a small bonus for you)

B)struggle free ( slightly easier strength check + your bonus)

C)overpower her (harder strength check but cou get your bonus)

D)submit (should be obvious)

E)sth. else


3c1f71 No.20491


c6bf66 No.20492


816414 No.20493


c7eaf0 No.20494


dc5127 No.20498


acc2a4 No.20499


cc42e3 No.20503

>>20487

A

And 1 is the lowest you can roll, so you mean a 100 is cancelled by a 1, I guess.


5843df No.20505

Dice rollRolled 2 - 5 (1d100)

>>20503

yes you are right

>>20491

>>20492

>>20494

>>20498

A wins, roll for dominance against me, you get +5


5843df No.20506

>>20505

alright, just don't roll a 1, and you'll be golden.


c6bf66 No.20507

Dice rollRolled 4 (1d100)

>>20505

dominance

goin for that 1!


c6bf66 No.20508

>>20507

well that was closer than expected


5843df No.20509

>>20507

well seems like the two of tried to out-submit each other, with you being slightly worse at it.

Since both of you rolled pathertically, A'na will still be able to try and fight back (which she wouldn't ve able to had you rolled above a 10)

I might have enough time to post the next part either saturday or sunday, in the meantime you can discuss how you want to exploit your current advantage.


ed162c No.20510

>>20505

>>20507

Is this when Me'na shows up drunk on sex and rapes us both?


b2d9af No.20708

Hey guys, sorry for the long wait, but I'm just not able to focus on this story as much as I want to. I'm pretty stressed at the moment, so it might take a while for me to pick this up again.

But I will not abandon you, promise.


8a854b No.20793

>>20708

Hey MR so do we still have a dick or not? The story obviously says no but you haven't given us a dominance % since we lost the dick. I'm just asking because I think it would help inform us about what our strategy should be


5de0db No.20844

>>20793

No you still have your dick, but probably not for long. Sorry for not making it clear, A'na is currently fondling your dick, I'll make sure to mention it in the enxt update.


a48f53 No.20857

>>20708

Looking forward to seeing you start it up again OP! See you then!


f7799a No.21427

Hey guys, finally have some time to squeeze a session in, sorry for the long-ish pause. The next week will still be very busy, I'm sad to say.

Without further ado, here's the next part:

You start to kiss back with gusto, grabbing A'na's hair and mirroring her actions. Your hands start roaming her body, groping her ass and fondling her breasts.

Meanwhile A'na keeps stroking your dick, making you moan while you thrust your hips into her hands. But A'na seems to get more and more aroused herself, letting you press her body against yours, and moaning softly into your mouth.

For now it seems that you have the initiative, how should you use it?

You could just stay like this, it would give A'na the chance to retake the upper hand, but maybe she won't press her luck either? Maybe the two of you can stop your childish bickering.

Or you could try to put A'na into her place since you have a slight advantage right now. This might strengthen your position over A'na at her expense.

Or you could try to end this right now before it escalates.

A) Try to stay like this without pressing your advantage (takes dominance checks from both you and A'na but only below 10/above 90 will have any effect)

B) Press your advantage (will roll for dominance against me, but you get a medium bonus)

C) Put an end to this (easy resistance check followed by easy strength check)

Diana:

Arousal: 30%

TFC: 60%

Status: Invigorated (+10 to strength and endurance)

A'na:

Arousal: medium

time: early afternoon


c6bf66 No.21428

>>20507

Hi again

B


c6bf66 No.21429

>>21428

oh whoops I meant

>>21427


d15bf3 No.21430


f7799a No.21432

Dice rollRolled 58 - 10 (1d100)

>>21428

>>21430

B wins

roll for dominance against me, you get +10


1eec99 No.21433

Dice rollRolled 49 (1d100)

>>21432

Back off everybody, I'm about to roll a 1.


f7799a No.21434

>>21433

That's a pass, next part up in a bit.


e8578d No.21438

You decide to press your advantage. Your groping grows more forceful, and your kiss more demanding. You massage her firm ass and try to slip a finger into her asshole. Her lustful moans turn into grunts of protest, and you can feel her trying to struggle free.

You could try to keep her like this, which should not be too difficult, but makes it more awkward to dominate her fully.

You could try to change positions, which might give A'na an opening, but would make it easier for you to subdue her.

Or you could simply let go of her, she might have learned her lesson now.

A) Keep her in your embrace. (Strength check should be easy considering your bonus)

B) Let go of her to change position (agility check against me with small bonus for you with followup roll depending on how it goes)

C) Let her go (you can decide to taunt her, which would take an easy dom roll)

Diana:

Arousal: 30%

TFC: 60%

Status: Invigorated (+10 to strength and endurance)

A'na:

Arousal: medium

time: early afternoon


e029ad No.21439


c6bf66 No.21442

>>21438

A

just keep going for the ass


ab6a0d No.21444


d15bf3 No.21445


9bf6ab No.21446


e8578d No.21449

>>21439

>>21442

>>21445

>>21446

A wins, roll for strength 40+ (you get +10 bonus)


7553e6 No.21450

Dice rollRolled 72 (1d100)

>>21449

Strength. Crit success incoming


e8578d No.21452

Dice rollRolled 37 (1d100)

>>21450

not the crit you were hoping for, but a pass nontheless.

rolling for resistance 50+ for A'na


e8578d No.21453

>>21452

looks like the A'na is cracking I'd say one mroe round of this and you got her on the ropes.

next part coming right up.


e8578d No.21456

You hold on tight to A'na, preventing her from gaining any kind of ground. She struggles feebly against your embrace, unable to break your embrace.

You keep fingering her tight butthole, and force her to grind against you, rubbing your dick against her netherlips.

Your tongue keeps invading A'na's mouth, and she's powerless to stop you. After a while her struggling dies down, and her moans start to sound more and more submissive.

It seems like whatever she planned to do has backfired on her.

A)Stay like this (very low risk, but ends the encounter)

B)Force yourself on her (easy strength check, but makes A'na resent you)

C)Tell her to bend over and submit (dominance check, if successful strongly reduces A'na's aggressiveness towards you)

D)Let her go (leaves A'na unsatisfied, can have varying effects on her)

Diana:

Arousal: 40%

TFC: 60%

Status: Invigorated (+10 to strength and endurance)

A'na:

Arousal: high

time: early afternoon


7553e6 No.21458


d15bf3 No.21459


e8578d No.21461

Dice rollRolled 92 (1d100)

>>21458

>>21459

C wins

rolling for resistance for A'na. (10 or below means you don't have to roll for dominance, 100 means you have to force her, everything in between needs a dominance check I'll specify after the roll)


e8578d No.21462

>>21461

alright, that's pretty high, roll me a 60+ dominance roll.


7553e6 No.21463

Dice rollRolled 36 (1d100)

>>21461

Another high roller for dominance


e8578d No.21466

>>21463

too bad, next part coming right up.


e8578d No.21469

You let go of your victim, confident in her willingness and lack of resolve.

“Why don't you turn around and bend over like a good girl.”

A'na takes a step back and takes a deep breath. She is visibly aroused and her legs are shaking a little, but she manages to pull herself together.

“So you can put your little twig inside me? I don't think so. You lost all right to do that.” her condescending words sting, and you realize that A'na is not so easily subdued as you'd hoped.

A'na seems intent on leaving now, and you consider what to do now. You could still try to force yourself on her, but you lost a big part of your advantage now. Or you could try to taunt A'na into doing something reckless.

Or maybe it would be best to let the matter drop.

A) Force her to submit (agility followed by strength against me, both slightly in your favor)

B) Taunt her (above average charisma check)

C) Let it drop, she got the shorter end of the stick this time (ends encounter)


ab6a0d No.21470


d15bf3 No.21471


e8578d No.21474

>>21470

>>21471

seems like there's not many people around right now, so give me a tie breaker between A and B.


7553e6 No.21475

>>21469

B. The high roller is back!


e8578d No.21476

>>21475

>>21470

B wins, give me a 60+ charisma roll to see how A'na reacts.


e823ed No.21477

Dice rollRolled 2 (1d100)

>>21476

charisma


e823ed No.21478

>>21475

the low roller is here


9d5108 No.21479


e8578d No.21480

>>21477

that's pretty embarrassing, next part will take a little longer, I need to eat something.


e8578d No.21481

Dice rollRolled 64 (1d100)

“You're just saying that because you like Lariana's big cock.” you blurt out.

A'na looks at you with disbelief before she starts to crack up, laughing at your remark.

“Yeah, you can't really measure up any more, sorry to say.”

You realize too late that you pretty much owned yourself with your weak attempt at insulting A'na.

A'na walks away, still laughing, leaving you standing in the water. Your cheeks burn with shame.

You consider following A'na, or saying something else, but you would probably only embarrass yourself further, so better not risk that.

You could either kill some time at camp until Lariana comes back, or you can leave the camp and have a look around.

A) follow A'na (you need to roll a 80+ Spaghetti roll to not embarrass yourself further)

B) spend some time at camp (multiple options, will be specified)

C) leave camp (specify what you want to do)

Diana:

Arousal: 40%

TFC: 60%

Status: Invigorated (+10 to strength and endurance)

A'na:

Arousal: high

time: afternoon

Note: time has advanced, I'm rolling encounter for Lariana


ddf894 No.21482

>>21481

C, look for some more fruit


ddf894 No.21483

>>21481

What exactly are the options for B though, out of curiosity?


e8578d No.21485

>>21483

basically the same as the last time, minus the physical training since you alrady did that. Maybe I'll come up with mroe options, we'll see. If any of you have suggeestions for activities I'm happy to hear them.


c6bf66 No.21487

>>21481

B - Talk to Me'na

I think we should at least talk to Me'na at some point. We haven't said anything to her the whole time we've been here.

Though it may be difficult if A'na is also there, so if she's around I'd probably say do something else.


e8578d No.21490

>>21487

A'na is not currently with Me'na, but might be prompted to join your conversation.


ab6a0d No.21492


e8578d No.21493

>>21487

>>21492

B wins, here are some options (most are just the old options)

A) Talk to Me'na

B)train sexual endurance/masturbate (raises or lowers resistance depending on roll)

C)fantasize about being dominant (raises lust always, if you roll too low it will backfire)

D)fantasize about pleasing (also raises lust, raises charisma, lowers dominance)

E) Do something else.


c6bf66 No.21494

>>21493

Eh, I'll still say A. At the very least she isn't actively trying to dominate us so we should probably gauge how she feels about us now.


ab6a0d No.21495


a63911 No.21501

I'm gonna have to call it a night here, sorry. Not sure when I'll have enough leisure time again for the next session.

Right now It looks like we're going to talk to Me'na but I'll keep the voting open. sorry for the snail pace.


ddf894 No.21509


cd6e00 No.21511


cd6e00 No.21512


cd6e00 No.21513

>>21512

Whoops, my bad, sorry about that.

please don't count that as two votes


ed162c No.21553


a16a65 No.22159

Hey everyone, sorry for the wait.

I will have time for another session either later today (in about 7 or 8 hours if I don't get tied up, apologies in advance if I do), or tomorrow.

I've been thinking about the problem with rewarding player choices with something other than dominance, and I thought about adding a "confidence" stat.

It's only a vague idea at this point, and input from you guys would be greatly appreciated

The general Idea would be that Confidence is mental "dominance" while the old dominance is physical dominance (might need to be renamed)

BTW, A wins, and while I'm not implementing the stat as such quite yet, I'd like you to give me a general confidence roll (bonuses start at 71+, and 30 and below respectively)

Also, tell me what you want to do/say to Me'na.


b960df No.22246

Dice rollRolled 40 (1d100)

Welcome back, I guess I'm not the only one you did not see your new post.

>>22159

here a confidence roll

However I don't know what to do/say :D small talk?


a16a65 No.22275

>>22246

yeah seems like not much is going on right now, I'll stick around though, maybe more people will show up.

I'll write something up in the meantime.


a16a65 No.22294

“You're just saying that because you like Lariana's big cock.” you blurt out.

A'na looks at you with disbelief before she starts to crack up, laughing at your remark.

“Yeah, you can't really measure up any more, sorry to say.”

You realize too late that you pretty much owned yourself with your weak attempt at insulting A'na.

A'na walks away, still laughing, leaving you standing in the water. Your cheeks burn with shame.

You consider following A'na, or saying something else, but you would probably only embarrass yourself further, so better not risk that.

You could either kill some time at camp until Lariana comes back, or you can leave the camp and have a look around.

A) follow A'na (you need to roll a 80+ Spaghetti roll to not embarrass yourself further)

B) spend some time at camp (multiple options, will be specified)

C) leave camp (specify what you want to do)

Diana:

Arousal: 40%

TFC: 60%

Status: Invigorated (+10 to strength and endurance)

A'na:

Arousal: high

time: afternoon

P36.1

You decide not to pursue A'na right now, you will have to deal with her later.

Your mind starts to wander, and you think about your current situation. Although you've only left your home a few days ago it seems like your old life is long behind you. A lot happened in those few days, and although you seemed to be on course to establish your own harem, you're now looking to be on the receiving end. At least if you don't take some drastic action. But you don't know where to start.

For now it seems like A'na is intent on subduing you, and Lariana appears to be content to let her girls fight it out between themselves.

You're not sure what Me'na thinks about the situation. Considering she was the first you met after leaving home, you feel like maybe you should spend some more time with her.

You see her sitting by herself, apparently she was watching your little encounter with A'na.

You decide to walk to her to start up a conversation.

“Hey, what's up?” you open nonchalantly. Me'na looks at you with what appears to be suspicion, and maybe anger?

“What do you want?” She appears to be either annoyed or cautious, you're not sure which.

Diana:

Arousal: 40%

TFC: 60%

Status: Invigorated (+10 to strength and endurance)

time: afternoon

Yeah, so basically tell me what you want to say/do.

If people want I can put some options, but they would be easier if I knew what you were looking for.


48756f No.22399

>>22159

I personally think dominance is fine and we don't need another stat, but your call


48756f No.22400

>>22294

Tell her we're sorry for letting her get kidnapped.


16b00d No.22402


c6bf66 No.22404

>>22400

This but even more so I think we should express that we don't intend to give up trying just because we got beaten once. We're going to keep trying for dominance and we don't intend to give up on the idea of her eventually becoming our first mother.

though we'll probably roll badly telling her this and drop our spaghetti anyway.


8276a2 No.22406

>>22400

>>22402

>>22404

Apologizing wins, roll me a 20+ Spaghetti Roll.


e823ed No.22407

Dice rollRolled 47 (1d100)

>>22406

spaghetti roll


8276a2 No.22408

>>22407

passed, next part up in a bit


8276a2 No.22410

“I just wanted to apologize… for not being there for you when you needed me.”

Me'na stays silent for a while before answering. “You know, I was pretty mad at you at first, but I realized that it wasn't your fault really.” She gives you a smile. “But still, apology accepted.”

You feel reliefed, and sit down next to her, putting your arm around her waist, causing Me'na to raise an eyebrow at you.

“This is just a temporary setback, I haven't given up just yet. You know that right?” You're not sure you believe your own words, but Me'na seems not to notice. You start stroking her side with your hand, causing her to shift uncomfortably.

“I don't think we should do this… A'na won't like it.” Me'na looks fearfully in A'na's direction, but makes no attempt to stop you.

You see A'na keeping an eye on you. She might try to stop you if make a move on Me'na. You consider your options. You could back off for now, and try again when A'na is distracted, or you could try to see how far you can go before A'na decides to intervene.

Or you could simply go it, which would certainly cause A'na to try and stop you.

A)Back off (ends encounter)

B)see how far you can go (challenges A'na's hold over Me'na, but gives you the option to back off)

C)go for it (will cause A'na to intervene)


bfdf45 No.22415


c6bf66 No.22416


c64642 No.22417


8276a2 No.22419

>>22415

>>22416

>>22417

B wins, give me 3 rolls, the first is 20+, the second is 40+ and the third is 60+.

if you fail it will prompt A'na to come over. If you pass all three A'na will be less likely to directly challenge you over Me'na

each passed roll gives you a slight dominance bonus.


c6bf66 No.22421

Dice rollRolled 97 (1d100)

>>22419

Roll 1

(i'm have bad luck at rolls please help)


bfdf45 No.22422

Dice rollRolled 70 (1d100)

>>22419

1st


8276a2 No.22423

>>22421

>>22422

timestamp on the 70 says it came earlier? Not sure how to deal with that.


8276a2 No.22424

since both called the first roll, imma have to say that the 97 is invalid, but you passed the first anyway, roll for second and third is still needed.


c64642 No.22425

Dice rollRolled 21 (1d100)

>>22419

second


8276a2 No.22426

>>22425

no pass on the second one, next part coming right up.


8276a2 No.22427

“Don't worry about her.” you say to Me'na, your hand slowly wandering to her breasts. You start to squeeze them slowly while keeping an eye on A'na to gauge her reaction.

Me'na starts to get breathy, and you increase your efforts, squeezing her nipples and sucking on her neck. You can hear some weak protests from her, but you ignore them.

You bring your face to hers and silence her with a kiss. You can hear A'na coming over to you, unable to sit by idly any longer.

“What do you think you're doing?” you keep kissing Me'na for a few seconds before breaking the kiss and turning to face A'na.

You could tell her off, which might lead to another confrontation between you. You could try to ease the tension between you by asking her to join (which would lead to an indirect powerstruggle if she agrees) or you could simply back off for now.

A)tell her to get lost (needs dominance roll against me in your favor)

B)ask her if she wants to join in (medium charisma roll)

C)back off (might make A'na more or less likely to confront you based on a dominance roll)


302521 No.22429


c6bf66 No.22430

>>22423

I've been getting errors when posting lately, so it's probably something related to that. It didn't really end up making a difference though so whatever.

>>22427

A


c64642 No.22432


8276a2 No.22433

>>22429

>>22432

B) wins, give me a 45+ charisma roll (rolling above 80 will get you in a more favorable position, rolling below 20 and A'na will rekect you.)


8276a2 No.22434

>>22433

*reject your offer


c64642 No.22438

Dice rollRolled 3 (1d100)

>>22433

charisma


8276a2 No.22439

>>22438

that's pretty terrible, give me a 50+ spaghetti roll to see is you can salvage the situation.


bfdf45 No.22443

Dice rollRolled 43 (1d100)

>>22439

spaghetti


8276a2 No.22444

>>22443

close but no cigar, next part coming right up.


8276a2 No.22452

“I thought… well, do you.. I mean…” You try to be smooth and sassy, but you stumble over the words, and can't even manage to form a coherent sentence. The look on A'na's face somehow causes all the words to get stuck in your throat.

“Well… if you want to apologize, get it out!” A'na seems pleased with the reaction she's getting out of you. The fact that you're embarrassing yourself in front of her again, and Me'na too this time, takes all the fight out of you.

“…I'm sorry…” you mumble defeated, avoinding eye contact.

“It's okay, just don't do it again. Come here Me'na.” Me'na gives you an apologetic look before following the command. A'na gropes and kisses her demonstratively in front of you, solidifying your defeat, before the two of them leave you alone.

When they're out of earshot you curse under your breath. Nothing seems to be going your way today it seems. You're not even sure if there's any point in trying to fight it any more. Maybe you should just accept that this is your life now.

As you soak in these thoughts Lariana returns from whatever she was doing. You can guess what she plans to do by her erect member swaying in front of her, and her excited smile fixated on you.

You can't seem to catch a break.

As Lariana walks trowards you you consider what to do. You could try to initiate conversation with her, maybe that will distract her. Or you could try to avoid her, but you don't think it's likely that she will give up easily. Looking at her rock hard dick reminds you of your craving again, maybe you should offer to take care of her, she would probably like that, and maybe you can earn a fovor that way?

Or you could simply wait and see what she intends on doing

A)Initiate conversation (specify what you want to talk about)

B)Try to avoid her (very difficult)

C)Offer to suck her dick (will increase your standing with Lariana)

D)Wait and see

E)sth. else

Diana:

Arousal: 40%

TFC: 60%

Status: Invigorated (+10 to strength and endurance)

time: late afternoon


c64642 No.22454


8276a2 No.22456

>>22454

I should probably mention that choosing D) will make you more likely to go along with whatever Lariana proposes.


c6bf66 No.22461

>>22452

Dunno if it's A or E but maybe try to deflect onto An'a and Me'na by mentioning they went off somewhere and suggesting she join them instead? I can't think of any other way to get out of getting fucked for the rest of the day since we're not going to be able to roll our way out of much against Lariana.

>You can't seem to catch a break.

That's pretty much how I'm feeling about this too.


8276a2 No.22462

>>22461

I'll put that as E), adn seems like a smart thing to do. If you can specify what you're trying to suggest to her it would help your chances very much :)


c6bf66 No.22477

>>22462

Just bringing it to Lariana's attention that A'na has been very active/uppity today compared to us which might suggest she would benefit from a good dicking more than we would. There's also the added two for one bonus since she's gone off with Me'na.


8276a2 No.22479

>>22477

alright, if people vote for this I'll give you a 55+ charisma roll


e823ed No.22480

Dice rollRolled 81 (1d100)

>>22479

charisma


8276a2 No.22481

>>22480

sorry, but the vote is still open


48756f No.22488

>>22452

Will C) decrease our dominance? If not, I vote for that. If so, I vote for what >>22461 said.


8276a2 No.22498

>>22488

nope, I'll count your vote as E then.

give me a 55+ charisma roll to see if your plan works.


c6bf66 No.22499

Dice rollRolled 27 (1d100)

>>22498

charisma (break)


48756f No.22500

Dice rollRolled 45 (1d100)

>>22498

charisma roll


6eb966 No.22501

>>22499

too bad, seems like all the good rolls are getting wasted and only the bad ones count. It's getting late here, so I'm ending the session here.

hopefully I'll have time for another session after wednesday (and maybe there will be more people participating). I'll see if I can give you an early heads-up so people know when to check in.


48756f No.22502

>>22498

Wait, "nope" as in "no, it won't decrease your dominance"? In case I wasn't clear, I'm only voting E if C decreases dominance


c6bf66 No.22503

>>22499

>>22501

well worst case she'll just say no and have a go at us.

possible better case she'll say okay but take us with her and make us participate.

Not that bad of an outcome either way I guess.


ed162c No.22504

>>22499

Man, at this rate I almost think we should try to escape and cut our losses, with or without Me'na. which sucks because I really like Me'na. But I also can't remember the last time we had a good set of rolls so I kinda think we should be playing our safest options.


c6bf66 No.22505

>>22504

I'm still not sold on starting over with nothing, especially because I don't want to give up Me'na. Removing ourselves from an environment that has two people that are consistently domming us makes sense, but I feel like our problems are more due to bad RNG than us making all that many bad decisions. We'd probably run into similar or worse situations elsewhere if we keep having unlucky rolls.

It would probably feel a bit better if we had more to do than "sit around and try not to get fucked too much" though, I agree with that.


6eb966 No.22526

>>22502

Sorry, I was too tired to read it correctly. I thought you asked if it "increased" the dominance, which it obviouly wouldn't (unless there is very special circumstances).

It would lower dominance, but significantly less than getting fucked senseless, which might be what Lariana has in mind for you.

>>22505

while the dice god have not favoured you recently there are two things which I would consider "less than optimal" decisions if you wanted to stay dominant.

The first was confronting Lariana while she had a clear advantage over you, and the other was not taking advantage of her epically failing at the tree encounter, where you epically resisted (which could have turned bad of course considering your shit rolls following that encounter)

I might have enought time to do a short session, I'll see how much I can get done.


6eb966 No.22532

Lariana reaches you just as you you get up, wraps her arms around you and pulls you in for a kiss before even saying anything.

When she breaks the kiss you are a little short of breath. Lariana starts caressing your body possessively. “Did you miss me, cutie? I sure missed you.” her words are surprisingly sweet, and you are a little ashamed how happy they make you.

“You weren't gone that long, you know. And don't you think you're neglecting the others?” you try to deflect the question and turn Lariana's attention away from you.

She raises an eyebrow and leans back to look at you. “What do you mean?”

“Well, I think A'na is getting a little jealous is all, and she seems to occupy a lot of Me'na's time, and she's trying to boss me around when you're not here.”

“Aw, is she mean to you? Don't worry, I'll take good care of the two of them… later.” With that she leans in for a kiss again, silencing your protests.

Well, it seems like that didn't work, but it was worth a try. Although, maybe if you insisted you could still persuade her, but she might not like you trying to boss her around.

Maybe you can get this over with if you give her what she wants, at least a little bit. Or you should just see where this goes.

A)Try to convince her again (will need to roll 80+ to pass, you will anger her if you roll below 31)

B)Get on your knees and blow her (medium chance of Lariana being satisfied and moving on)

C)Let her do what she wants (will end in sex, and pretty much the day)

D) sth. else

Diana:

Arousal: 40%

TFC: 60%

Status: Invigorated (+10 to strength and endurance)

time: late afternoon


c64642 No.22540


7553e6 No.22541


48756f No.22543

>>22526

Wait if this is the case I don't see how option E won the vote. We had one vote for E, one for D, and mine ended up being for C


6eb966 No.22545

>>22543

Wait I thought you wanted to vote for E if going down on Lariana meant losing dominance (which it does).


48756f No.22546

>>22545

Ah, I see, I misread your response. My apologies


48756f No.22547

>>22532

I vote B


6eb966 No.22555

Alright I gotta leave again, feel free to keep voting though.


c6bf66 No.22556


869335 No.22600


074726 No.22617


647e18 No.22629

>>22541

>>22556

>>22600

>>22617

B wins, roll for luck 30+ (I know I said medium but I changed my mind and made it a little easier)

If you roll fast enough I might even be able to write the next scene befoer I have to leave again.


776b4f No.22631

Dice rollRolled 61 (1d100)

Feeling lucky


647e18 No.22632

>>22631

that's a pass, I'll see how fast I can get it done, if not today, then I'd say either thursday or friday.


30508c No.23103

Hey guys, sorry for the delay, but something has come up that can't wait, and I'll have to keep you waiting for at least another few days.

Hopefully I'll have more time next week :/


0c7327 No.25121

>>23103

alright, this sure does look like I abandoned you guys. sorry for not checking in earlier.

There's a lot of stuff that conspired to keep me away, but the main reason is that I didn't feel very inspired anymore.

Also there's a lot of stuff i realized that I could have done better.

Before I ramble on too much let me get to the point.

I'm thinking about starting a new story, but I haven't decided yet what exactly it should be about, so I want to ask you guys what you would want me to write about.

Suggestions can range from another game to Jungle fever (starting with a new character) or something completely different that you think I could handle.

Hope you guys can fogive my long absence.


0c7327 No.25127

>>25121

This is me btw.


0c7327 No.25130

Here's an idea I wanted to throw around to see what you guys think:

A story where the main character ahs a condition that makes him switch between male and female forms (think Ranma 1/2)

Setting could be almost anything, the specifics of the conditions could be put to vote (male and female form, transformation trigger etc.)

I'm just not sure what the plot should be in that kind of story.

Thoughts?


69a374 No.25134

>>25121

>>25130

I'm happy you came back alive and well. I'll share my thoughts if I come up with something, but feel free to start anything you like, I'll follow you.


0c7327 No.25188

>>25134

it's nice to have fans :D


8eeb22 No.25197

>>25130

It sure, would be funny if he(she) switch at the wrong time. Not sure how you would make it sexy, but I'm ready to trust you, since I don't really have a better idea at the moment.


a48675 No.25208

>>25197

let's say your goal is to fuck as many chicks as possible, while not getting fucked by guys. you get locked in your current form until you at least orgasmed once.

I think I'm gonna mull this one over a little bit more and then give it a test run when I have it a litle more fleshed out.


9933e8 No.25220

>>25208

I like this


16f53e No.25249

>>25130

Personally I really love the idea and execution of Jungle Fever, and would like to either continue this game or start over with a new character. But you're the author, so I'll read whatever you write.


dff1fe No.25515

>>25208

Just an idea, but you ran into some flak on this quest because the dominant players and the submissive players were in direct opposition to one another a lot of the time. If you do the Ranma idea, I would suggest that you have a shifting, but hard-coded role. Like Male/Dom > Fem/Sub > Male/Sub > Fem/Dom > Male/Dom, etc. That way, no matter the player, they each know they'll get something they like eventually.


2ebe0d No.25517

>>25515

yeah, something like that is what I had in mind, I'm not completely sure yet how to handle the details.

I think having 2 set "modes", one for each gender, is what I'll be going with. I think I'll make a "character" creation at the beginning, where the player vote for advantage/disadvantage packets (gain a useful perk in one form that has drawbacks in the other, like strong/weak dom/sub, addictive cum/cum addiction etc.)

I think if you switch personalities too much it might get too chaotic. Though it's not set in stone yet.

I might continue Jungle fever a little more before starting the new story, no promises though. Have to sort out some personal business, clear my head and such nonsense.


2ebe0d No.25518

>>25517

forgot name again, woops


e829fc No.25523

>>25517

That makes sense, I can see why you might worry a bit about flip-flopping too much. I only made the suggestion like I did because having one state per gender limits the content a bit but it's not a huge deal.

The packages are a neat idea. If you do that, maybe consider making each chosen trait exclusive to the gender it's picked for? That way you won't have people pick the same fetishes/dominance options for both.


e829fc No.25525

>>25523

Speaking, for the record, as someone who likes Turbo-dom all the time.


2ebe0d No.25535

>>25523

> maybe consider making each chosen trait exclusive to the gender it's picked for

that was what what I meant, for example if you pick the dom/sub packages, your male form would be very dominating but the female form would be very submissivem or vice versa.

I'll try not to limit content too much, but of course a package like "dom/sub" would do that, but that is still the player's choice.


4dc18b No.25603

Is there a faq for how to roll? New here and can't find anything.


d7175d No.25610

>>25603

click on [> Show post options & limits] below the reply box.


d3c611 No.25708

ou decide that it would be easier to get your way if you played along, at least for now. You start stroking Lariana's hard member, and when she breaks the kiss you start to sink to your knees.

“Hmmm, you sure need someone to take care of this, allow me.” your words elicit a smile from Lariana, and she runs her fingers through your hair.

When you see her rod from up close, you notice the bulging veins on the shaft, and a small drop of precum oozing out of the shaft. You can feel yourself getting excited, and take a moment to take in the sight.

You start stroking the shaft again, and give her head a lick, appreciating the taste of the her juices.

You weap your lips around her shaft and start fondling the balls, making Lariana moan with pleasure.

You can hear words of encouragement from above, but you focus on the task at hand. Every couple of strokes you manage to coax some more precum out of Lariana, making you eager for more.

You start bobbing your head faster faster, taking in more and more of Lariana's dick, trying to push her over the edge.

You are almost swallowing it whole when you can feel Lariana tense up and her cock starting to twitch inside your mouth, announcing her climax. You try to pull back to savor the taste, but suddenly Lariana's hands are on the back of your head, keeping you in place.

You try and protest against this, but to no avail. Lariana pumps her load directly into your throat, denying you the release you seek.

Fortunately for you Lariana doesn't go limp after only cumming once, and you quickly get back to work. This time you stay shallow, careful not to allow Lariana to go in too deep. You lavish her head with attention, enjoying the velvet texture of Lariana's skin. When you hear the grunting signaling the incoming climax you make sure to position Lariana's member on your tongue, and you are rewarded with several big spurts of delicious cum.

You make sure to draw every last drop out of Lariana's rod before releasing her with an audible *pop*.

“Alright sweetie, let's take care of A'na then, shall we?” Yes that's what you wanted, right? Your head is now clearer than before, but you still feel a desire to worship that cock in front of you. You're pretty sure Lariana would appreciate that.

A)Tell Lariana that you changed your mind and keep going (will raise your standing with Lariana immensely, but will make you very subservient to Lariana)

B)Go to A'na with her

C) user suggestions

Diana:

Arousal: 0%

TFC: 0%

Status: Invigorated (+10 to strength and endurance)

time: early evening


d3c611 No.25709

>>25708

surprise update, got some inspiration/motivation.

Sorry again for the huge delay on this one.


c6bf66 No.25710


bb3539 No.25711


d3c611 No.25712

I'm gonna have to leave again, but I'm optimistic about the next tim I'll be able to update.

While you vote on how to proceed, what do you guys think of Quill's idea of switching stories between authors?


69a374 No.25713

>>25708

B

>>25712

That certainly would be funny, and incredibly hot.


c6bf66 No.25719

>>25712

I don't know what this is referring to.


d3c611 No.25721

>>25710

>>25711

>>25713

B wins

>>25719

to this >>25703

You nod, and the two of you head over to where A'na is. Unsurprisingly, she is forcing herself on Me'na again, although you have to admit she doesn't look like she minds it much, being pushed up against the wall.

Not waisting any time, Lariana moves up behind A'na, sandwiching her.

“I hear you've been a bad girl today, and need to be punished.” You watch A'na struggle shortly, but more out of shock and reflex than actual resistance, before Lariana grabs her hips and starts to fuck her.

You watch the scene before you, getting a little aroused at the sight. Unfortunately the positioning of the three leaves little room for you to join in. You could either slide up behind Lariana or you could try to pull Me'na away from A'na. A'na would probably try to prevent you from taking Me'na if possible,

The thought crosses your mind that you could try to fuck Lariana in the ass, but t immediately strikes you as a stupid idea, you doubt Lariana would let you do that. But you have to admit that the sight of her tight cheeks is making you hard.

A)Slide up behind Lariana, but don't try to fuck her (will end this day, neutral to dominance)

B)Try to fuck Lariana (just crazy enough to work, or just crazy?)

C)Try to pull Me'na away so you can have her for yourself (A'na will likely intervene, and might even try to get back at you for this)

D) other (leave cave, go swim, etc.)

Diana:

Arousal: 0%

TFC: 0%

Status: Invigorated (+10 to strength and endurance)

time: early evening


201bca No.25725

>>25721

D) Give Lariana a rimjob.


1cf5b5 No.25726


d3c611 No.25728

>>25725

I'll include that in A)


c6bf66 No.25731


e823ed No.25734

>>25721

B cause why not^^


d3c611 No.25735

>>25734

cheeky little…

In case B) wins, would you guys prefer to have one extremely hard roll or would you want me to split it up into several rolls (that are not quite as hard to pass).

just to be clear, voting will stay open until one option gets at least 3 votes.


1cf5b5 No.25737

>>25735

It should be writer choice. However I do have one suggestion. Have one roll to see if she accept or not and then multiple roll as we are getting more and more bold (grab her tits, slap her ass…)


d3c611 No.25738

>>25737

that's basically what I was gonna do :)


d3c611 No.25739

>>25737

also, your id gives you away :P


d23f6b No.25740


1cf5b5 No.25741

>>25739

lol, cover operation failed


d3c611 No.25742

>>25740

>>25731

>>25726

>>25734

Give me a tie breaker between B and C


31a619 No.25743


568f91 No.25744

Dice rollRolled 65, 40, 43 = 148 (3d100)

>>25743

C wins

I'm rolling awareness (30+), resistance(70+) and strength for A'na (in that order)

If I fail the awareness roll ignore everything.

If I pass both awareness and resistance you roll for strength against me (you get +10)

If I pass awareness but fail resistance I get -20 on the strength roll


568f91 No.25745

>>25744

for clarity: you need to roll 13 or better to pass


40103f No.25746

Dice rollRolled 81 (1d100)

>>25744

Feeling lucky. Rolling strength!


16b00d No.25747

>>25712

So A'na just crit failed, or did she get a 23 and we got a crit at 91?


568f91 No.25748

>>25747

bonuses don't affect crits.

A'na rolled a pass and a fail, you rolled a pass.

next part in a bit.


568f91 No.25749

You decide that you should probably leave Lariana alone and focus on Me'na instead.

You walk over to Me'na, who is still pinned against the wall, and try to pry her away from A'na. Who of course tries to stop you, but since she's getting fucked from behind is unable to put up much of a resistance. You do notice several angry grunts coming from her between the moans of pleasure.

Me'na looks back and forth between you and A'na, and you consider how to proceed. You could either make out with Me'na in right here in front of A'na and Lariana, or you could pukk her away first.

If you stay here you'd force A'na to watch you, which would send a clear message, but you'd also have to keep in mind that Lariana is also right there.

What to do?

A)Make out with Me'na right in front of them (small dominance boost, low risk)

B)Fuck Me'na right in front of them (significant dominance boost, but high risk)

C)Lead Me'na away first (Lariana would have to pass a 75+ awareness check to notice)

Diana:

Arousal: 10%

TFC: 0%

Status: Invigorated (+10 to strength and endurance)

time: early evening


c6bf66 No.25750

>>25749

C

Historically, everyone in the story has been shit at awareness.


eb4f34 No.25752


e823ed No.25757


40103f No.25766


bb3539 No.25771


69a374 No.25773

>>25749

B

Fuck everyone's opinion, I want B


568f91 No.25774

File: 1434393087541.jpg (19.78 KB, 230x306, 115:153, Sean Connery.jpg)

Dice rollRolled 6 (1d100)

>>25773

mah nigger

C still wins though, people are trying to play smart, let's see if it works out for them

rolling awareness 75+ for Lariana (might need more rolls if she passes)


568f91 No.25776

>>25774

Apparently the curse of low awareness remains unbroken, and you are left to your own devices, I'll write up some flavour text for you, but I'm pretty tired atm so it might take a few days for me to get it up.

I'll give you some choices though so you can still vote/discuss

A)fuck Me'na hard (will get you some dominance back, but probably not enough to keep your dick)

B)make sweet love to her (will mostly affect her relationship with you and with A'na

C)tell her to leave with you, you want her all for yourself (this is probably the best chance you're going to get to reestablish your dominance, but keep in mind that it's almost nightfall)


568f91 No.25777

>>25776

also C) will need a 40+ charisma roll, or if that fails a 50+ dominance roll to succeed


c6bf66 No.25778

>>25776

I'll vote B but that might change depending on the flavor text (or honestly just if I feel different later).

C is tempting but probably dangerous.


1cf441 No.25779

Dice rollRolled 70 (1d100)

>>25777

dominance


1cf441 No.25780

Dice rollRolled 52 (1d100)

>>25777

charisma


568f91 No.25781

>>25779

>>25780

no need to roll yet, the vote is still open, I was just saying what would need to be rolled in case C wins

also, here's the promised flavor text

You tug at Me'na's arm, leading her away from the copulating couple. Although hesitant at first, Me'na soon gives in to your demanding stare and follows you without further resistance.

You look back to check if Lariana noticed anything, but she is completely focused on fucking A'na completely shutting out everything around her (In the future Lariana's awareness rolls will always be at least 80+ while fucking someone).

When you put some distance between you you turn to look at Me'na. She seems a little nervous, but also excited. You're reminded again of the first time you saw her, and how much you want her. A thought crosses your mind, that you'd rather have her all for yourself than share her with Lariana and even A'na.

Well, for now she's all yours, but still…

Diana:

Arousal: 10%

TFC: 0%

Status: Invigorated (+10 to strength and endurance)

time: early evening


6e1095 No.25782


1cf441 No.25789


6c1ee2 No.25794


c6bf66 No.25802

>>25778

>>25781

I would switch over to C if I felt like we had any kind of plan. If we're leaving right now we would have to travel overnight through an area we know almost nothing about and hopefully get far enough that Lariana wouldn't be able to track us. It doesn't seem like something that would work out well for us.

Actually, would it be possible to talk about C, do B, then leave at a better time like possibly tomorrow? Though that might also be less ideal because we won't have a penis by then. (It also assumes we don't spaghetti while talking about C)


69a374 No.25831

>>25781

C, gotta try while we still have a penis


4cb8bc No.25833

>>25802

your points are all valid, it's a choice with risks but also with rewards if you manage to pull it off.

something to also consider is that Lariana will probably not notice that you're gone until nightfall, when shes's more likely to wait until morning to look for you.

>>25789

>>25794

>>25831

C wins, roll for charisma 40+, if that fails you can still pull through with a 50+ dominance roll

only one of them has to succeed so that Me'na follows you, but your relationship with her will be influenced by the successfull roll


69a374 No.25834

Dice rollRolled 78 (1d100)

>>25833

charisma go


4cb8bc No.25835

>>25834

That's a pass.

I gotta leave for now, I might be bale to update later today though.


4cb8bc No.25836

>>25835

almost forgot, I'll still give you some choices on what to do next:

A)Go back to your old hideout (you'll have a good chance to reach it if you don't run into trouble, but Lariana is very likely to find you there)

B)Look for a hideout somewhere (can specify in which direction you search)

C) focus on getting as far away as possible (can specify if you want to enter the forest or move along the river)


4cb8bc No.25837

>>25836

B) should read *somwhere else

you'll need some luck to find a decent hideout, especially since it's getting dark, but you won't be found as easily

C) makes you almost impossble to be found, but you will need to be very lucky to find any shelter at all.


69a374 No.25841

>>25836

C along the river


40103f No.25845

>>25836

C along the river


558e2d No.25846

>>25836

C along the river


f6f66d No.25854

>>25836

C along the river


4cb8bc No.25861

>>25841

>>25845

>>25846

>>25854

C wins,

do you want to go upstream or downstream? if you go downstream you could try crossing the river where the fruit-trees are, but doing it without daylight will be risky.

going upstream will get you to a new location.

either way roll me an encounter roll.


988a2f No.25865

Dice rollRolled 76 (1d100)

>>25861

Encounter

upstream


4cb8bc No.25877

>>25865

he thought of spending the rest of your life getting bossed around by Lariana and having to share Me'na with them is suddenly unbearable to you.

“Let's bail. Right now. Just you and me.”

As soon as you said the words you feel yourself getting excited and anxious at the same time. You see the worried look in Me'na's eyes, and you'r afraid she'll refuse, but to your delight she nods after a few seconds.

You feel your heart singing with joy, and kiss Me'na deeply before quickly taking her hand and hurrying away.

You decide to travel upstream along the river, since your old camp would probably the first place for Lariana to look for you. She'll probably be pissed at you if she sees you again, you're not in a hurry to meet her again.

As you get further upstream the daylight starts to fade making it harder und more dangerous to keep traveling. You don't find any shelter, but at least you haven't run into any trouble…yet.

When the sun has finally set you have to make a decision. You could either keep walking to get some more distance between you and Lariana, and maybe to find some shelter, but you would be almost guaranteed to run into trouble.

Or you could just spend the night where you are, underneath a tree close by the river shore. It wouldn't really provide any kind of protection but it's the best you can do for now.

You can feel Me'na pressing herself close to you, trembling. You're not sure if it's out of excitement, fear or lust. Maybe all three. You certainly feel that way yourself.

Do you:

A)Rest where you are (there's a medium chance you'll keep your dick if you don't get fucked during the night)

B)Rest where you are, but fuck Me'na first to increase your dominance (good chance of you keeping your dick if you don't get ducked during the night, but you might attract attention)

C) Keep going and look for shelter (high chance of getting a potentially dangerous encounter, you'll need some luck + awareness to find something)

Diana:

Arousal: 20%

TFC: 0%

Status: Invigorated (+10 to strength and endurance)

time: sunset


6c1ee2 No.25878

>>25877

>A)Rest where you are (there's a medium chance you'll keep your dick if you don't get fucked during the night)


69a374 No.25882

>>25877

>B)Rest where you are, but fuck Me'na first to increase your dominance


bb3539 No.25883


988a2f No.25885


40103f No.25897


223078 No.25911

>>25882

>>25883

>>25897

B wins, give me another encounter roll.


1cf441 No.25920

Dice rollRolled 1 (1d100)

>>25911

Sleep tight


d3dc85 No.25926

>>25920

Dice hate us


223078 No.25927

>>25920

this is pretty bad news.

this fight will be stacked against you *hard*.

do you guys still want to roll your way through the whole fight or just concede defeat and speed things up considerably.

I'm heading to bed for now, so feel free to discuss.

I'll give you the first rolls tomorrow if you decide to go down fighting.


c6bf66 No.25931

>>25927

Whether I want to vote to go through the fight probably depends on what we're up against. It probably won't make too much difference but there are some things that I'd be okay losing to more than others.


d3dc85 No.25936

>>25927

Concede


1cf441 No.25938

>>25927

Fight

May get a chance to runaway then


e829fc No.25949

>>25927

If you're pretty much going to make us lose, just write the scene so we can move on.


3fe34b No.25956

>>25949

I'm not going to "make " you lose. You are in a terrible position, since you are currently distracted by fucking Me'na which means your awareness roll needs to be petty fucking high to notice this one coming, and it's night time which means monsters are pretty strong now, and you rolled a 1 and you are attracting attention by fucking.

This is not me making you lose, it's a mixture of choices and rolls.

We'll start this fight, if people want to concede at a later stage they can still do it.

Roll for awareness 85+


e829fc No.25957


e829fc No.25958

Dice rollRolled 74 (1d100)

>>25956

Nevermind, dice boxes.


40103f No.25959

>>25949

He's not making us lose. We chose a risky option because it increased our chances of keeping our cock. It was our call, and we accepted the risk, then rolled the worst possible result.


806cea No.25960

>>25959

In this storytiem you really should always try to play safe.


3fe34b No.25963

>>25960

depends on what you're trying to achive. In this case there was a combination of recklessness and bad luck.

I'm busy over the next few days, so the next update might take a while.


55f617 No.26456

Hey everyone,

it's been longer than I anticipated, unfortunately there's no end in sight with everything that has popped up recently.

I'm gonna have to leave you hanging on that cliffhanger for a little (maybe a lot) longer.


b5f4d9 No.32654

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Hey, it's been a while.

It will still be a while until I have as much free time as when i started this story, but I think I should start to get back in the saddle.

First: I'm not sure if and how I wanna continue this story, so what I'm gonna do is write some gallery bad ends which will be semi canon until I reach a final decision.

Second: I've been a little dissatisfied with the meachanics and the set-up of this story as the only clear goal was dominating people and that's not what I wanted. (Also there were many things that many things that wouldn't have made sense if the story went on or would have been tedious to properly implement such as food and shelter)

So I've been mulling over how to best approach these problems and currently I'm thinking about starting a new story set in this world, but at a time when society advanced to about current levels. This would allow me to create the classic school setting, where you naturally encounter people around your age, and where there is a cleary defined goal which is independent of domination/submission, but both can be used to further your goals.

I'd be interested in your thoughts on the matter and I'd be happy to discuss the new story, especially if there are things you really liked or disliked in this story which you want me to keep/change.

Also vote on the kind of Gallery stories you want (I'm willing to do a few if there are good ideas).

For starters: You and Me'na encounter:

A) a Rah'sik

B) a pack of Mun'sa

C) a Drider

D) a mad Lariana

E) something else


18d7c0 No.32657

>>32654

B

and welcome back


83c716 No.32659

>>32654

E

The main woman from the beginning who fucked your mom


000000 No.32668

A,B, or C


fd9bb6 No.32670

>>32654

Since I'm assuming you're discontinuing the temporary thread, I'm gonna repost this:

E - A'na regains her cock and we lose ours, so she takes the opportunity to fuck us and dominate us to get revenge for us repeatedly humiliating her and treating her like crap throughout the story


b5f4d9 No.32672

>>32659

you mean Te'estra, your other parent? Any specifics you want me to work in?


83c716 No.32677

>>32672

Yeah her. I don't know about specifics, one option is for Lariana to find us and then Te'estra to find everyone and fuck Lariana so we could see some karma in action. Seeing Lariana again isn't too important to me, though. But I think bringing us back to the village alongside our mom would take things full circle.

After all, like mother like daughter.


14cb7a No.32684

>>32654

Holy shit, you're back. I hope you continue this story in some capacity, it was my favourite on this board for a while. Your writing and your settings were both very interesting. Personally I liked the primitive jungle setting more than I do modern settings (and schools are a little cliched, maybe) but I will read the hell out of anything you write, and I'm looking forward to whatever you come up with.

>>32670

I vote for this


035f13 No.32687


b29e2d No.32689


6ef92f No.32699

>>32654

Happy to see you back! The gallery I'm requesting might be a bit off, but I'm only suggesting it as I love your idea of a story but I'm not quite sure the story will progress to a certain point.

In the beginning of the story, you said total submission ends in pregnancy and some sort of becoming property? I'd like to suggest a gallery in which we totally lose and become pregnant/fully submissive (probably with Lariana or Ana).


dddf96 No.32704


e829fc No.32713

>>32654

>Drider!

Eggs and silk pls


fefe77 No.32716


e02f2f No.32722

>>32699

I could probably combine that with the A'na revenge request if you don't mind.

The drider seems popular too. I'll probably start with the A'na gallery over the next week.

I'm waiting to see if 8chan gets unfucked any time soon before starting the new story, or the Beta to add rolls. I might start writing setting/set up for it though.

I'm still busy atm so don't expect too much too soon.


a5edbc No.32723

>>32722

I, for one, am all for seeing this >>32699 added to the A'na revenge gallery.


0c494d No.32726

>>32722

That would be perfect! Thank you so much and I hope the story continues! Good luck!


49bd79 No.33265

uhhh… rip thread?


1ba446 No.33288

>>33265

Sorry, I've just been busy over the holidays and starting school of fuck. I'll get around to this eventually.


0c494d No.33815

R u going to put up the total loss gallery on your anonkun? Just wondering.


196744 No.33816

>>33815

He has an anonkun?


884478 No.33817


884478 No.33818

I'm sorry I'm trying to push this MR but I seriously want this gallery.


884478 No.33819

>>33818

ok. Update time. I'm an idiot. It's not MR, its another author.




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