/storytiem/ - Onyxdime's Storytiem

So just a general question, do you guys prefer longer overarching storylines that lead to one big important showdown, or smaller more quickly advancing encounters.

An example of the first would be Battle girl and an example of the second would be like cock of cthulu.

>>21276

Maybe somekind of dungeon story (like that temple of Ra one that didn't get very far), maybe something with giant monsters or robots and something that isn't so… gritty I guess, Its just kind of off putting when you're trying to jackoff when things are bleeding all over the place and dying and stuff. And how have we not had a monster girl story yet, who doesnt like stories where big dumb monster girls are trying to get the righteous dickings from the pure paladin untill one or both can't move anymore.

>>21284

Like CoC but that doesnt mean you cant have boss encounters or an overarching story. Actualy just do a story however it would be done best instead of trying to force it into the way others do it.

>>21306

Now that's a relevant question about the monstergirls. I can totally get behind that. Monstergirl quest anyone?

>>21284

Personally I prefer a solid story, but encounters are the most important. Once there is enough background to have reason for the event (i.e fighting orcs, or invading monster areas as an adventurer) I prefer encounters

>>21284

I think that each author should just write in the way that lets them put out the best content, but I prefer an overarching story when I'm reading personally.

I think that it would be nice to see some stuff with more male protagonists/feminization, though that's more of a personal fetish.

>>21276

I don't have a blog, but you can put up my email, it's moosenflok@gmail.com

>>21392

Do you guys believe it would be possible to run a story with a male protagonist who's still the dominant part in a world of primarily straight sex? Perhaps the majority of encounters would be with different types of monstergirls?

I'll add your email to the list, thanks!

>>21317

Or hell, even a monsterboy story with a female MC. Monsterboys are criminaly underrepresented and need more love, Its just near impossible to find good art that isnt just twinky tumblr boys or muscly guys with slight monster features. So hard to find it like the Monster Girl Encyclopedia does it with girls.

TFW no story with Monsterboys that find girls and make them cum their brains out before bringing them home and caring for them tenderly and making them their wife ;_;

>>21424

I cant think of a reason why a story like that couldnt work but I'm not sure if you mean the MC being mostly dominant or straight sex being mostly what happens or something else, I cant quite figure out what you mean there. No objections to anything with monster girls.

>>21284

i personally prefer a longer storyline as well but since i happens every once in a while that authors disappear i rather go with shorter storys taht get finished over a longer storyline that might get canceled in the middle.

>>21457

Perhaps I should look into Twine. It could give me a way to publish a longer story with more thought behind it, but with less customization.

>>21464

I duno, that sounds realy limmiting for a story tiem thing which usualy is all about going in the directions the author didnt expect and going with it. You can try a more locked in type of story, It could probably be done well and I'm just warey because its just a lot more different than story tiem is used to.

>>21472

With a bit of luck I'll have a twine-demo out by Sunday night. Perhaps it'll be something I do on the side except for hosting games here. But I'll let you guys judge if it's something that works or not!

>>21457

how is a story finished? The way most stories told here are sandbox or (respectivly) respect games.

So what can you do? Annoucing that the game will end after the next encounter and write something like "and then they procreated happily until the end of time"?

>>21727

I'm sure most stories can come to a natural conclusion, like the Lelda story is prety clear when its going to end so an ending is possible for any story.

did onyx ever do the gallery for the vivian james story?

>>21826

the elf one or whatever the vote was again, No. The succubus mind break by another player one, yes. the guy has a bit of a backlog of stuff to have written.

>>21826

Opps, I honestly forgot about that.

I'll get on that later tonight.

Alright, my current backlog that I've found so far is:

-I promised two Vivian James gallery stories; but I can't remember what they were. I'll throw up a poll later on.

-The 500 word prize for naming 40k game.

-I think there is a Purge of Sengraria gallery story that I haven't finished yet.

>>21840

There was also the Bogwarts one where Mufloy becomes a happy slut after the transio tentacle fucking, stays as a girl and wants to turn hermione into a slut and show her how much fun it is as a genuine, well meaning thanks to her.

>>21840

I also have a great need for those slutty socks man, I need to see those socks being used.

>>21845

>>21850

Grand, I'll add those to the list.

Right, I'll get this backlog cleared up tomorrow.

>>21946

Where exactly are you putting them? Also could you link to any new galleries you make on your blog because sometimes they are realy easy to misss and I would hate to miss any. You've done a great job with the Lovehammer galleries being at the top of the Doc but the Bogwarts one can be prety scattered.

Hey, thought I should post here rather than necro ye olde thread.

Sorry for the whole leaving without saying thing but Uni life got the best of me and I kind of forgot about /storytiem/ with all the stuff on my plate. However I was going to through my coursework for uni and I found the word document that I was writing all the my stuff for the story in.

So basically just wanted to ask if anyone would interested in seeing more stuff from me? (Specifically more of the story I started unless people would rather a change of scene)

I really haven’t kept track of how /storytiem/ has been doing but if there is still a demand for it I’m game to keep going. Especially considering it /is/ the summer holiday where I am, now would be as good a time as any to do some writing.

>>22695

Welcome back! Authors and players are always welcome to the storytiem community and I for one are looking forward to see you writing again. We've had our ups and down, sinking to near extinction before bouncing back. At the moment we're sitting pretty comfortable around the bottom of the top 50, much because of the hard work of Onyx who's been hunting for new players at both 4chan's /b and /tg (which he got banned from).

I think we're going to have a really good time over summer when people have time to read, write and participate in the games we play <3

>>22695

Holy fuck, thtought you were gone for good. Always room for more storytiem, glad you're back and looking forward to more of your stuff.

guh how do you roll

>>24072

You should write how ever you want. If that means no rolls then so be it. So will like it, others will complain. It's free to write and read here and a player interactive story keeping with the boards themes.

>>24072

Hey! Welcome to /storytiem/

Here, the numbers aren't necessary,

The Nazis aren't triggering,

And the lesbian smut flows freely!

On,y real requirement is that there is some level of player direction in the stories :)

See you around!

>>24072

I'm interested in what kind of story it will be, could you give us a hint as to what it's going to be about or when you will put up a thread?

I don't think there will be a problem with you not doing rolls, especially if yo say it in the OP. Usually for rolls the number needed to pass is thought up on the spot for what writer would think is a fair roll so it's not really a big deal.

When it comes to fetishes the only thing people might have a problem with is scat and guro but besides that practically anything else you can think of is fair game. Ifyou are worried you could always just ask your players if they are ok with it after all.

This is the place where dreams come true and then we fap to those dreams

>>24094

>I'm interested in what kind of story it will be, could you give us a hint as to what it's going to be about or when you will put up a thread?

Ah, I'm not sure yet. Honestly I'm still thinking stuff up but I wanted to poke around to see what my options are.

And hey, this is good, I dislike scat, and guro? Well, depends on what you mean by guro. Bloodplay can be nice but I'm not big into mutilations.

>>24091

Alright alright. I'll probably put a thread up at some point this week then. Thanks for the welcome~!

>>24115

I think you would be alright with a bit of bloodplay but anything heavier than that might be too much. Personally, something like an encounter with a sexy vampire wouldn't be complete without a little blood.

You also should come up with a name for yourself by the time you make your thread and I really hope you check out the other stories on here if you have not already, im just going to slip in a recommendation for my personal favourite story, WIB right here. And pretty much all of onyx's stuff here and on his blog.

On an unrelated note I would love to see someone do an X-men story.

I'm not gonna impose rules on what anyone wants to write about. Live and let live.

The only problem from guro and scat is a much lower readership - at least theoretically, I could very well be wrong about this.

Minor blood play shouldn't turn anyone off too much.

Never seen X-Men! I might check it out.

In other news I got quite inspired by Quill's story. I'd like to do one set in a school where you are a superheroine and student; the goal is to avoid losing your virginity either in school, or while fighting crime, or you lose your superpowers. Anyone interested? Any suggestions?

>>24122

Always, but don't you have a superhero story already. I would love to see that come back especially from when you last left it. There's also that angel story. But both of those stories do have a part where they get sent to school as a student so maybe this is something you wanted to really wanted to do for a while so go ahead, alone it'll be great. Btw the part where the superhero fails the mental check and becomes a ditsy bimbo was one of my favourite parts.

As for suggestions, it sounds like it would be a "you cum you lose" oneshot kind of story since she loses her powers with her verginity which would be good because you probably shouldn't keep making long running games and having stories stop dead. That's not to say Hogwarts and 40K aren't masterpieces but it's sometimes sad to see really fun stories get forgotten. That said what you decide to do is completely up to what you want to write and I wouldn't want you to write something you're just not into anymore so just do what you do best.

P.S. I am drunk and tired to proofread thisrambe sorry.

>>24122

It was actually your Nicky's School Days story that got me going with this one. That and because high school erotica is easy to write.

SO many fetishes. All of them good.

>>24072

I don't think rolls are really mandatory, but I think in that case you have to have really interesting choices to compensate.

>I generally like lesbian stuff, but I don't know how popular that is here.

Is there any place in the universe where lesbian stuff isn't popular?

Yes yes to Nazis I don't have nearly enough World War II aesthetic in my faps

>>24122

>>24149

Seconding these posts too. We always need more high school erotica and >muh virginity! on this board

I would say we need more parodies and one shot stories.

but nothing against some good old school porn (it just reminds of those many annoying teenage high school graduation movies)

Ok!

I'll get started on designing a school smut story focused around keeping your virginity. When you lose it, you lose completely.

Would you guys prefer a realistic setting for a change? Sort of like trying to avoid going too far with the Quarterback; etc.

Or the possibility of monsters being added? Various things that try to mind-control, hypnotise or seduce you into giving up your body to them.

>>24726

If its going to have superpowerrs I kind of want it to be silly like having a rediculous supervilian show up with whatever he hase come up with for the week to try and fuck (Protaganist) with a bunch of mutant monsters from demtion XXX, his henchmen and their bimbo blaster rayguns trying to turn the whole school into sluts, his hypno_waveafier device that has turned your friends against you and into mindless sex drones that only want to fuck, convert more people into slaves and obey their master or even the dreaded COUNT COCULA and his evil harem of cucula bried that "Vont to zuk your diiiiiiiiick" and expand his harem.

None of this might fit into what you were planning but I had fun wrighting this damnit.

>>24731

Or maybe even something like, one day the main characters boyfriend that she has been going steady with for a couple years, (but refuses to put out till marrage)Dick Mc Ironrod, finds that a strange unmarked box has been sent to his house without any idea who it is from. Upon opening it he finds a (plot device) and an advertisement that goes with it explaining "Is your dame giving you the old blueballs? Says she has to wait till you put a ring on it? Not even letting you cop a feel of those yams even? Well those problems are a thing of the past! Now with the newly developed (device) from Mcguffin ink. you can turn that prude into the biggest slut and the best fuck of your life. GUARANTEED!!!! (warning: not actualy guaranteed)." And then he turns his superpowered girlfriend into his slutty bimbo maybe?

Rolled 77 + 5 (1d100)

>>21276

Testing

>>24726

Kind of off topic but

Onyx, if you read this, You REALLY need to try doing what Lizzie has done with the unseen stratagem series. Multiplayer cyoas are so much more fun when players have direct control over their own characters and the story itself. It easily blows every other thread on this board out of the water in terms of fun and interactivity and i think you should try doing it at least once.

>>24998

1) I agree that I'm awesome

2) I agree you should try it

3) Warning: It's a huge time commitment, hard to coordinate, and at times incredibly confusing

>>25043

How fun is it for you?

>>25053

Oh, it's a blast when I'm not screwing something up. Make it's a busy blast where I'm constantly trying to find a few free minutes to make food or take a shower. And this has been 4 days of my life out of the past 9. I'm lucky that I have a very free schedule right now, otherwise this just wouldn't practically be possible to run.

>>25056

I'm glad it's not just a chore for you, given how much fun we get from it. Every session continues through hours and hours until someone has to stop for whatever reason. Occasionally screwing something up should go unnoticed with so much time put into it.

>>24998

Thanks for letting me know! I checked over it and it looked pretty good!

I'm going to run a Lovehammer 40k spinoff thread. Original plan was to do it via email, but I can put it up here if you guys want.

I'll host it in the same style Lizzie did, since it seems to be so popular. :)

Good work, Lizzie!

>>24115

Are you still planning on doing your story?

>>21946

Where are the galleries Onyx? and did you finish the last 2 days of the milk cum cannoness because I cant find it if you did.

>>25707

Getting my ass whipped at work; and not in a good way!

I'll get them done ASAP. At the minute the Canonnres story stands at about 3000 words. There will be one final sex scene with her bodyguard then a small humorous ending.

Other gallery stories will come once I get a story back on track

>>25723

Well if you have more important things you need to do then it can obviously wait untill you can do it comfortably in your own time. I was just thinking you might have forgotten with all the other stuff you're doing or that I might have missed it somewhere.

Thanks Onyx

>>27980

Bro, I just recommend doing what you feel works best. I also wouldn't worry about lack of replies. This is a pretty slow board, and we get a lot of lurkers who only really come out to vote for something. I enjoy conversation and discussion, so I'm glad someone has something to talk about.

>>27980

It is hard to judge interest when you only have the description of a simple idea. If you wan to do it, just go for it.

Explain in more detail the back story and characters in a new thread, I'm sure you would get a better feeling of the general interest.

Same with your question about play as a guys or a monster girl. It could be the first vote at the beginning of the story.

>>27981

>>27982

I had prety much the same amount of stuff planned for whichever people prefered to play as, I was just asking because stories generaly prefer to have females as the main character so I just wanted to make sure before starting but I think I'm going to go with a guy because I might have more to work with there. Just need to round some things out and I will see if I can make this work.

>>27983

more people are comfortable with female getting fucked and dominated than with a male, especially anything concerning anal.

Since that comes along in almost every story with a male protagonist i wont read those.

>>27986

I don't think I would do any guy butt stuff.

The "Nicky the highschool girl" Respect game by onyxdime was so incerdibly hot, I really wish he had continued it, or any author picking it up. There should be more highschool stories.

>>27986

You see, Im into a male protagonist, but anal isnt a fetish of mine, so its real hard to fill my niche

So. Opinions on a story where you play a demon who tempts heroes/adventurers/magical girls/not too sure what with power in exchange for favors?

>>28611

Would be different to play the "bad guy" for once.

Could be fun to come up with corrupting favors.

>>28612

I wouldn't mind chatting about it before hand, get some scheming done and turn it from a loose concept to a solidified and actually capable concept.

(Was on phone, now on comp)

>>28613

Like one question I have is: what setting should it be and who does the demon interact with?

Fantasy with poor adventurers who need more than level 1 to do stuff?

Capes with heroes who want to sell their marriages?

Anime with magical girls with mascot creatures who don't have their best interests in mind?

>>28613

>>28614

One option, if you don't already have a setting and scheming in mind, you could crowd source it.

There have been stories on other sites, where the QM left the players decide almost everything about the world and characters.

Only issue, it is a dictatorship by the majority and something doesn't feel really original since the same fetish keep coming back.

>>28621

what i think would be fun for once to actually have a more realistic setting in the sense that thers no encounter now fight and all fights are about the same difficulty but sometimes having opponents that are really waek and sometimes some that are ridiculously more powerful wher you have to be diplomatic

>>28623

Could you rephrase that?

>>28626

sure

so right now most encounters/fights are pretty linear several rolls on dodges punches or kicks at 30+ to 50+ depending on whos story it is but barely depending on what enemy it is.

so what i would wish for is some deiversity like some fights are for example slimes you dont even really roll for to stomp them and others could be deamons that can stomp you without any problem, where you have to talk to them be diplomatic maybe bribe them with something and the like. If you dont and charge in because demons are evil youll just get fucked up.

i hope this is more understandable if not ill try again^^

I want to get a general opinion from the playerbase.

Do you guys enjoy it/prefer it when a game has a really prominent stats system?

I've never really used such a thing because A) I think it encourages players to make decisions based on math instead of what's logical for the story and B) I hate math

But I'm seeing more and more games here that incorporate this in some way, and I'm wondering if it's something you guys think adds to a game's value? What do y'all think?

tl;dr do you like stats?

>>29186

I like stats, when I see that they make a difference. Not like, they are here and trust me, they change the difficulty of rolls, but real difference of sort. It doesn't have to be big one, but it has to be noticeable.

>>29186

You dont realy need to do stats. Most of the time it only ever comes up once or twice but it remains largely irelevent through a story. Perks and marks on the other hand have status effects and character alterations that have a better and more noticable impact than just bigger or smallre stats.

So I say leave out stats like you did in your multiplayer games and go for things within the story that would effect the character and their rolls if you wanted to do that kind of thing. But then again if it aint broke dont fix it.

>>29202

You actualy screen caped your own roll…

>>29202

I have tried to contact him several times with no success. He may have taken a break, or decided to stop writing.

I like running the stats, and having them affect the gameplay in one way or another. It might be the gm in me speaking, but I think it adds to the experience. Then again, I also think it's completely fine to do something with merely narrative and no tracking of stats. So it really is up to the writer.

>>29216

>I'll get back to writing soon enough if you'll have me.

As if you even need to ask. Welcome back.

>>29216

"Eventful summer"

Holy crap did someone on this board actually go outside in the summer. What are you? Some kind of normie?

>>29222

Why would anybody do something like that.

>>29223

Good question. I'd hazard that he did it recently, and that the post is still floating around somewhere.

>>29224

Well, you're not wrong.

guys where are you all?

it has been days without really any posts…

>>29228

Recovering from a night out. Nice ID btw :3

>>29228

I've been busy with university, working on the salamander gallery story whenever I get chances to (which is not often when you share a dorm with 6 other people).

>>29258

I don't want to speak for everyone on the board, but stories that go heavy on character customization tend to almost never make it to a thread 2 (I can't think of one that has). You might be able to do it, but I wouldn't recommend it. I think the main reason for the trend towards failure is that starting on something that could go as many ways as character creation on such a low-traffic board tends to break any momentum the author had in their mind when they create their threads.

Maybe you can tie some allocations of the attributes to the base forms and offer a severely trimmed-down list of traits, and/or make traits available at a later point.

>>29258

voting on form is important

attributes could be done via every person has one point to spend so with 10 post possibly during the vote on form that should be over.

on traits i would say just random them and then give us 1 post to vote on a reroll for every trait eg.

reroll trait 1 yes/no

reroll trait 2 yes/no

and so on

>>29258

It's your story, and your rules. Things have been slow around here, so I say go for it. The players have never abandoned or ignored a story, at least that I know of. Just remember it's a lot of work you put on yourself, and you gotta be willing to follow through.

Personally, I went the fixed character route because I had a character in mind before beginning. There are modification options, but they're limited to 'trait packs' that come with a preset amount of things. I only do that because I *don't* want to spend all the time and effort to have a super customized character.

People will read your story, that's a given. You might have to trog through some extensive creation, but if you can get past that I'm sure it could work.

>>29267

I must say, that what Maker said is true. Most of dead threads here are like this because OPs abandoned them. So host a thread and as long as you will post it will stay alive.

Hi guys, Nonnymoose checking in while on a short hiatus. So I was thinking before starting another contract for Hera (But after I finish the current one) , of doing just a short run-til-they lose game in film noir style. Would anyone be interested?

and the rest of threads naturally ended by story being over

i dont know what you have in mind but hera story is amazing so ill go with only hera story or both if you can manage

>>29258

Drop one or two of hte least likely to be picked or least intresting forms, do some serious trimming on those traits. Cut the useless stuff and keep the more important stuff and everything should be fun. Once you make the thread things should get rolling on their own.

>>29259

>>29266

>>29267

>>29268

>>29271

Thanks for the input everyone. I will be simplifying things and I think I know exactly how to do that. It will probably take me another day or two to make sure all the numbers crunch properly, so I'll probably make the thread during the weekend.

2 more gallery stories have been unlocked for Lovehammer. Feel free to suggest your ideas for what you want to see written in the thread, or over on my blog :)

>>30946

'sacred' cleansing between the squadmate thanks to diseases. Oil and girls and nurglite infections and all that fun.

also why the hell isn't this in the lh thread.

Continuation of the sarge in dark eldar land story - you said it would continue, and hey, look, opportuntity.

>>30951

Lovehammer thread reached bump limit and I didn't want to create a new one until book 3.

Just making sure everyone saw so they could get their ideas in.

I'll add yours to the list with a few options for futa/non-futa variants

>>30956

>>30946

Please Read

>>30816

>>30956

Personaly don't like it when you do futa/non-futa versions because I feel like it kind of cheapens the scenes. I don't think I have seen you do a futa scene on its own without alternate non futa part, would be intresting to see you write something with the intent to have it BE a full futa scene and not a regular scene re-writen with a dick slaped on it.

Also finished Cannoness gallery story when? Just bustin ya balls a bit brov

>>30964

>Personaly don't like it when you do futa/non-futa versions because I feel like it kind of cheapens the scenes. I don't think I have seen you do a futa scene on its own without alternate non futa part, would be intresting to see you write something with the intent to have it BE a full futa scene and not a regular scene re-writen with a dick slaped on it.

I'm gonna have to agree with this.

Consider this a thrown-down glove. I want to see if onyx can stand up to the challenge.

onyx can we have some bogwarts please?

>>30951

Dark Eldar story is being continued for free btw. Don't worry about it counting as one of your 2 free galleries.

>>30961

Read and noted. Levels of alien rape have been increased to 300mg.

>>30964

Appreciate the feedback. I'll keep that in mind in future.

Canonness Gallery story is about 80% complete. Just tidying up the last chapter where she gets completely corrupted by the Rapeanid cum.

>>31007

Challenge accepted. Next time there's a futa scene, it'll be specifically futa.

>>31021

God, your ID gives me the stiffest erection every time I see it.

Yes, Bogwarts will be continuing. Before that though I want to finish up Hitchhike. And maybe that Angel in Hell game. My goal is to try and tie up some of the (dozens) of loose ends I have lying around.

>>31027

Are you going to resume multi-lovehammer at any point?

If so, will there be a fresh round of recruitment because players hanging for months have possibly dropped out?

>>31055

Afraid I haven't had time since I started my 2nd job. So the answer is probably not anytime soon.

Sorry :(

Poll has closed!

Winners are

1.) Serena getting webbed by a barbed strangler and fucked by a variety of aliens that find her.

2.) Jezebel can't resist the Plaguebearers and ends up getting gang-banged!

Canoness story is almost finished and will go up tomorrow.

Next in line is the Dark Eldar rewrite, followed by these two galleries. :)

>>31099

would you please link them somewhere when they do go up?

Hey Onyxdime, can i have your approval for make Hitchhike like game ? It will be, of course, different.

I will put a lot of time to write it , 'cause english are not my mother tongue, but i like the concept of a storytiem who have a goal.

>>31154

Will do! It's already 90% written, just need a good idea to close the final scene.

>>31174

Of course, it can be as similar as you want. Steal all the ideas you want to if it helps you write a good story :)

>>31176

Cool, I work on it immediately !

>>31178

If you want help with writing in English feel free to email me at onyxdime@gmail.com :)

Good luck for your story!

>>31178

You should probably work on your English too.

>>31178

this is some well meant advise, dont take it the wrong way please.

Team up with someone who speaks/writes proper english.

Yours is fine for getting information across but reading a story like this wont be much fun.

>>31184

It's a good idea, but I have no clue where I can find a teammate, any volunteer ?

>>31180

And my objectif is, with a stong motivation, to drastically upgrade my broken english

1 point fot who can guess my nationality :D

>>31185

I'm more than happy to help - also, I know Solstice likes helping too.

My guess is French? :)

>>31189

It was 'Objectif' that gave it away. ;)

>>31215

you think this because you never hear me trying to speak english ;)

Onix I send you the begining tonight, do the time you want to check it

Solstice if you went it too, just give me your mail

>>31248

Sure thing buddy. You should be able to click my email now.

Hi storytiem! You dont remember me but I used to play around here back when it moved from 4chan, and it is great how much this has grown full of stories! I got busy and couldn't keep following the threads, but I returned now because I had an idea for a story about a monster high school, only to see Slack had beaten me to it, but since his story ended I'd like to know if anyone would still be interested in a thread with this plot. If you are, the monsters of the highscool would be the female versions of Onyxdime's monsters vs. girls monsters, and I would like to keep it simple as Onyx's Respect Games used to be, using a respect meter to decide your fellow student's actions towards you. Would anyone be interested in this story? (Shout out to Solstice, great to see youre still active, I loved your WIB stories)

>>31540

I for one am always happy to see new stories. I'm looking forward to seeing what you do!

>>31540

Yes

Hey ! I need new corrector since Onix and Solstice are too busy by their works, any volonteer ?

>>31540

Man, I know is hard to start a story, but I will happily read it if you do it !

>>31891

Eh, I suppose I can spare the time as long as it's not 1000-word documents or something. Shoot me an email with what you need.

Onyx, I would like to ask you. Will you be resuming Bogwarts anytime soon?

>>32332

Hey,

Current plans are:

-finish Hitchhike

-start a Monsters vs Girls game of Orcs vs Sisters. Or possibly pride and fall cheerleaders

-continue with Bogwarts or Lovehammer book 3

>>32342

Well, I'll definitely root for continuing Bogwarts

>>32343

Me to. I miss Bogwarts!

yeah we all waiting for bogwarts^^

>>32344

Speaking of stories on hold, Solstice, when will you resume WIB? :P

Would anyone mind or be mad if decided to run my own Jungle Fever thread? I loved the concept behind the old one but it didn't go anywhere….

>>32348

I wasn't a reader of that story, but I think you shouldn't continue directly, but do something like it.

>>32349

Well I don't intend to just pick up where the original author left off, but merely to start a new chapter in the same setting.

>>32351

I don't think there woud be anything wrong with using the setting so long as you don't use the characters and make your own story with it. I would like to see it happen.

>>32348

Hey man, I'm glad you like my story :)

You are welcome to do your write your own story in the same setting.

I apologize for the continued silence on my part, but there's been nothing to say.

i still plan to come back and continue the story when I have the time (if people are still interested in that).

>>32396

that's me btw

>>32397

Thank you very much, I just wanted to be sure I wasn't coming in and stepping on anyone's toes, hate to be that person

>>32342

>>32396

Just putting it out there, Bogwarts and Jungle Fever are my two favorite /storytiem/ games. I'd always be down to see them continue if your lives allow for it

>>32509

Both of those games were positively great. Loved both of them, and Bogwarts was what really started this entire board so I'm nostalgic.

>>32516

>>32509

It's nice to hear that. I'm mainly trying to figure out how i want the game to work, and how I can get that across. Right now there isn't really a reason to really submit to anyone, since there's nothing to gain in that way.

I really like the set up in perilious journey, which does some of the things I wanted to do better than I probably could. I hope that story doesn't get abandoned :(

Also I need to figure out how to start writing again without letting it consume all my free time -.-

I anyone wants to discuss the story with me i'd be happy to oblige. Sometimes a little discourse works wonders in figuring out your own ideas.

>>32545

1)

There's not really much to prepare other than the plannig what kind of story you want to run (every autor does their own thing basically)

2)

I'd say put a warning at the beginning of the thread so people now what they're getting into but nobody will force you to write/ not write something. Worst case scenario is that nobody reads your story because they don't like your kinks but you'll probably find at least a few guys that like even the weridest stuff.

3)

I'd recommend taking a name right away so your readers know which posts are yours. makes it easier.

>>32545

Can you name a few kinks you want to write but think might throw people off, I think you might be suprised what people here can be into.

>>32547

My, where to begin? Well, for starters, I know some people are sort of fed up with dickgirls, which I can't honestly get enough of. The RP partner I mentioned really scratched an itch beautifully when it came to scent/sweat/musk to a bit of a minor extreme. (It's a bit of a shame that their mood was so incredibly fickle that they couldn't keep their attention to a one-shot scene any more than half-way most of the time.) Also, I tended to do a lot of stuff from an underaged 'femboy' perspective and have a bit of a neglected mpreg fetish.

>>32546

Thanks for the advice. I was also wondering, since I'm so used to short-term ERP formula and do enjoy bad ends, if I should avoid a premature ending, or are short stories not necessarily frowned upon?

>>32548

anyone who reads my story can probably guess what my stance on futa/dickgirl is ;)

Personally I also am a fan of bad ends, if handled well, and I'd say go for it.

The most important thing imo would be communication with the ausdience, and avoid making the reader feel cheated or frustrated.

If you invest a lot in a character only for them to pointlessly fail then people might not care about your story.

Then again there will always be people complaining and it's your choice if you want to listen to them or not. It's your story.

I hope I'm not rambling too much. In the end it's "learning by doing".

>>32549

So, I should probably not worry about whether or not I turn some folks off then? I think I can manage that.

Oh, one more concern I was having: what's a good rate of update? Or is that simply variable?

>>32550

I'd say whatever you can manage. Some people have a update schedule (like once every day or so) and some just post a lot when they have time. Of course people like it when you post often, but sometimes it takes a while for people to vote because of time zones.

If you read/participate in some of the stories on this board you'll get a feeling for these things from the reader perspective which helps judging these things as an author imo.

hope that helps.

>>32558

Once a day or so was what I was thinking of aiming for. I haven't participated here before, but I have read a CYOA after its conclusion on ULMF before. From what I remember, it really ran away from the author.

>>32559

I would say people prefer more than once a day because depending on the writer it can be prety slow depending on how much they write for that once a day update. Generaly the more often you can update the better, but you dont need to cause yourself trouble in doing so.

As for those fetishes I can tell you they are not so crazy here to drive many people off, mostly people that just arent into dickgirls and femboys, that underage part might make people feel weird if you were planing on puting it in. Everything else is alright.

Estimated time untill you begin your story?

>>32562

When I say "underage," I don't mean like a definitive child. It's more like early puberty, since that's kinda my most believable idea of femboy. Although I could maybe do something-something like a latebloomer 16-18 year old. Hell, the idea I was toying around with might even open up for something kinda like that with good enough reason. In general, femboy is just my favorite flavor of malesub. I'll just give it a whirl like that and see how that goes. I suppose I should avoid pushing too many negative buttons on my first go through. Think I might put mpreg to the side as well.

As for when I'm going to start, probably some time within the next few hours. I've got a general idea for a setting I want to work with for the moment.

>>32563

I hate replying to myself, but I figured I would make the quick distinction as well that when I'm talking about a femboy, it's usually someone unwilling to be so effeminate in the first place. It's almost kinda an automatic assumption, sorry.

>>32564

Femboy subs are prety great, even better when they start to find themselves enjoying it.

>>32562

Eh. Both Blink from Legend of Lelda, Alex from Women in Blue, and The protagonist of Cock of Cthulu were met with quite a following. I'd say femboys can be good, as long as there is a pop culture foil. Art helps too

>>32563

Welp, I've decided to dive in with the whole thing. I suppose I just ran into one more question after posting: Is it alright or frowned upon to make an extra post to put up a few more reference images? I had three, one for the setting and two for characters, in mind right away, and later I'd like to be keeping track of a map on top of it all.

>>32573

I've seen it done a couple of times and nobody seemed to mind it.

I posted in the old Jungle Fever thread, not realizing it went over bump limit so I tried to start a new thread, but apparently 8ch. has issues right now.

I posted a thread on the beta site:

https://beta.8ch.net/storytiem/thread/32005#reply-32005

Hopefully this works -.-

Alright guys, gonna start up a New Game with Jungle Fever mechanics, just in a different setting. So the setting options I have right now are

A) Hunger Games themed

B) Norse themed.

C) Spy/Special Op themed

Go ahead and tell me which one you want more and we can roll from there.

>>32675

>Hunger Games

I'm guessing you mean the battle royale/arena portion of the story. If so that would allow for a quicker story with some consequences just to get comfortable with writing and how the voters can be. Not a bad idea for a first story

>Norse

To me this would be your most open ended story. It's a good idea but I'd wait until you have a good rhythm with writing and game mechanics first.

>Spy

Really dependent on who/how you plan to play. Could be short lived or long like Women in Blue.

I'd suggest the Hunger Games one first, but go with the one you're most comfortable tackling.

>>32675

A) Hunger Games

Can you tell us a little bit more, like will everyone be girls with or all without cocks? Will they beat other girls and slowly make harems or will a girl be out of the game if something specific is done to them by another girl?

>>32678

Sure, Let me explain. You will be tossed into the Arena with a bunch of other girls, all dickless. From there the objective is to either kill or dominate your opponents.

>>32680

Naturally the more girls you kills or dominate raises your Dom score. Standard Jungle Fever Mechanics.

>>32681

Do dominated girls stick with you and follow you around, can they be dominated by other girls to become theirs? Can girls grow dicks with high Dom score?

Can I make a suggestion that instead of killing you do something else if you're able to. Something about detailed sex scenes and straight up murder being two options in the same story is just jaring for me. Maybe knocking them out and leaving them tied up to be found by whatever sex crazed beast comes their way?

>>32676

What this guy said

>>32675

I vote A)

>>32676

I vote A too. Story with predictable ending is good for begining !

>>32693

>>32678

>>32685

A it is then! I will start the thread up here shortly.

Hey guys, I'd like to start a little discussion about 2nd person storytelling versus 3rd person storytelling (main character adressed as "you vs main character adressed as "he/she")

I feel like 2nd person makes things more personal and immersive but gets repetititve fast (a lot of sentences starting with "You decide…")

3rd person puts more distance between the readers and the charater which might make it easier to accept things happening to them that you wouldn't enjoy yourself.(maybe?)

Main reason i ask is because I think about switching to 3rd person in the next story and I'd like opinions on whch style people prefer.

>>32826

I prefer the second person "You" way because it reads better and you're making choices for yourself and not having someone else just doing it. But do third person if you think you would write better that way.

put my vote on second person as well, just feels more immersive

>>32826

>easier to accept things happening to them

I understand the goal, but I'm not sure having players feeling less involved would be beneficial in the long run.

Not sure if this is the right place for a request, but does anyone feel running a quest centered around Lara Croft, Tomb Raider?

>>32976

Hum… a tomb full of sexual traps to stop the unworthy.

Just replace the gory porn of the rebooted games with some bondage porn.

Young heroine discovering her inner strength or her inner slut…

Yeah I could see the setting, working great and second the interest.

>>32976

I feel like onyxdime has already done a story just like that. Have you checked his blog?

>>32976

I'll be honest, I was considering running a storytiem like that. At the very least, it was going to start out with an "archaeological" adventure.

My current semester is almost over, so while I finish things up for my last couple finals I was going to plan things out (you know, come up with settings, dungeon layouts, traps, NPCs, etc. and also gather up some images to have on hand for some of the major encounters). Then, if I decided to do it, I was gonna get it all started sometime a little after Christmas.

If there's some definite interest in a story with that kind of setting, then I'll probably go ahead with it.

>>32982

>>32983

>>33002

As in, playing as Lara Croft on archaeology adventures gone wrong. Not sure about onyxdime's blog, but I'll give it a look to.

>>33135

And I mean the older version of lara, not the new one that came out in the rebooted series.

Kinda off topic, but given the slow nature of this board, is there any place that has a large collection of finished games? Preferably with bad ends and/or galleries

>>32655

I was wondering if there was still a chance of you posting the Jungle Fever A'na Revenge gallery. I know this place is pretty dead atm, but the premise of that gallery has been probably my favorite fantasy ever since our character lost to Lariana and started getting shamed by everyone.