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4912f4 No.29235

Welcome to Thread 5 of The Adventures of Battlegirl. After a lengthy hiatus that ended up going longer than any of my plans, I’ve finally gotten back to writing. For those of you who have missed what happened in previous parts of the saga, you can check the previous threads or view the archive here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1M9H0ESs4OFhEdvyIBfqsmLRXhUzeLQ9DWQuQ4y4oUdk/edit?usp=sharing

If you need a reminder about the characters, the setting, or current happenings you can find them here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Q32JLM9IfzbiXNejIE-hqQ8VFGk6EQjaA1ny1f08XQg/edit?usp=sharing

If either of these links doesn’t work for you tell me and I’ll figure out how to fix them, I’m new to this whole "actually using Google Docs" thing

If you don’t feel like reading either of those, the basic premise of the story is that you are a non-powered vigilante by the name of Megan Thompson (superheroic alias: Battlegirl). In your civilian life you are a freshman at the Central Utopolis Metropolitan University (CUMU), but in costume you are just finding your footing as a hero in your own right. You’re trying to emerge out of your mentor’s shadows now that you’re in a new city and more importantly help the good people of Utopolis. Unfortunately, there are many bad people in Utopolis who would like to have their way with you…

As always, the following is a recap of last thread’s happenings Becky got in a bit of a catfight with you because of a misunderstanding. You managed to not compromise your civilian identity much in the fight although you demonstrated combat prowess to Becky, Isaac and Hideo that they would not have expected from you. After the fight, you managed to restore peace with Becky, but you're still not really friends. Another event in your civilian life of note would be your first rehearsal for Romeo and Juliet in which you play the female lead. You also got to tutor Kyle again, but failed to make anything in the way of meaningful progress with him. After an otherwise uneventful patrol around campus you overheard a rumor pertaining to some kind of secret illegal underground fighting tournament apparently being conducted by nefarious criminal-types. You decided initially not to pursue the rumor, but after a day, you’ve decided it would be worth verifying the rumor in your civilian identity…

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4912f4 No.29236

You decide that all you want to do is verify the rumor of an illegal fighting tournament you’ve heard, so you figure it’s not worth worrying your best friend by leaving a note. After all, this should be a really simple reconnaissance mission for you, so it’s not like you’re putting yourself in any considerable danger. Worst case, you have to pretend to be lost, or failing that, outrun some security guards. This should be no problem for a trained heroine such as yourself. Following the path described in the conversation you overheard, you head to the Commercial district as the rumor indicated and enter an alleyway between a Chinese restaurant and an antiques shop. There is a blind corner leading into a doorway towards the back of the Chinese restaurant. Instead of using the door (which is likely an actual employee entrance to the restaurant), you push on the wall to the right of the door and the wall slides over to reveal a dimly-lit set of stairs leading downwards into a tunnel. At the end of the tunnel, you take the steps up and find yourself looking at the entrance to what looks like some kind of stadium type setting. Your view out the window shows you some shipping crates so it’s safe to assume the building you’re in is disguised as some kind of warehouse. In one direction, you see what looks like an entrance, a set of thick tan-painted double doors. In the other direction, you notice a reception desk with what looks to be some kind of security guard taking a nap.

Give me a 25+ stealth check to see if you can avoid alerting the guard to your arrival.


dd06a2 No.29237

Dice rollRolled 39 (1d100)

>>29236

Stealth


4912f4 No.29238

>>29237

(25+ stealth check… 39 rolled – Pass)

Fortunately, the door you entered through was well-maintained and your footsteps were light enough not to wake the sleeping guard. You sneak past the desk and find what looks like a ticket window where they probably sell tickets to whatever it is they do here or take bets on it. It appears as though you’ve arrived on a night where they aren’t having any fights as the ticket windows are completely unmanned and it appears as though the security staff is barebones. Next to the ticket windows is a set of doors, this time significantly nicer looking than before as they are solid black kind of like what you’d see at the entrance to a theater. You also notice an elevator although where it leads is a bit of a mystery.

What do you want to investigate?

(All choices with the exception of leaving now have some small risk of some patrols pathing into you. If you manage to go undetected or not will depend on some luck rolls that will remain undisclosed to you until you need to make them.)

A) Take a ride on the elevator and see where it goes

B) Check out what’s on the other side of these black doors

C) Check the ticket window for any scheduling information you can find

D) Check the desk of the sleeping guard, maybe he’s looking at something interesting (easy stealth check)

E) Just leave. This is risky enough without trying any more exploration. The secret passage is enough to indicate that something weird happens here.

F) User Suggestions


6e8d74 No.29240


1d6d8b No.29241


000000 No.29242

C


8cd594 No.29243

Shit, man, this was one of my favorite storytiems. Glad to see it getting revived

>>29238

C


299b6f No.29244


dd06a2 No.29245


fb5bd2 No.29246


fb5bd2 No.29247

Also I'm so hyped to see you writing again. I wanna see Battlegirl with more tattoos


30396a No.29249


4912f4 No.29250

>>29241

>>29242

>>29243

>>29245

>>29249

C it is then. Give me a 20+ luck check to see if any patrolling guards run into you.


fb5bd2 No.29251

Dice rollRolled 76 (1d100)

>>29250

Luck


d08bfe No.29252

>>29235

welcome back, i missed you and your story <3


9e8d2d No.29253

>>29247

If the dice land right, she might.

>>29243

>>29252

Thanks. It's good to be back.

Next update in a couple minutes.


9e8d2d No.29254

>>29251

(20+ luck check… 76 rolled – Pass)

You decide to go check the ticket window more closely to see if you can find any information about upcoming events. You find a poster advertising for “the second night of the renowned Global Champions Series of Fighting Tournament”, which boasts that it has “some of the best martial artists in the world, including both genders”. The date featured prominently on the poster is Friday this week starting at 8:00 pm. There’s an attention-grabbing red bubble at the bottom with the word “Bonus!” on it. Under the bubble is the following paragraph verbatim:

“This Friday only, see the beautiful, but deadly ninja Tina Tatsumi get punished in an ‘escape or rape’ match. If she escapes her bondage within the five-minute time limit, she’ll get another chance to prove herself in the loser’s bracket of the tournament. If she fails, you get a show. Remember to stick around after the night’s fights are through, you won’t regret it.”

You’re taken aback by how brazen the wording on the poster is. This is definitely illegal. Unfortunately, the poster is locked up in the ticket booth, so unless you wanted to try breaking in, you can’t take it as evidence. If you were to elect to do that, depending on what you’d do about it you’d be risking making a lot of noise, and you will still have the risk of a patrol encountering you. If they were to encounter you while trying to break into the ticket window, you’d have a hard time talking your way out of it. On the other hand, you know exactly what you need to know about the tournament so getting out now would be safe. Of course, if you want to investigate any other parts of this make-shift event center, you can.

What do you want to do?

(The same note about the possibility of encountering a patrol from last post still applies)

A) Attempt to break into the ticket office (options regarding how to do so will appear in follow up post if you pick this)

B) Take that elevator ride

C) Check out what’s behind the black doors

D) Go back to see what the sleeping guard was doing

E) Leave while you’re still undetected

F) User Suggestions


9d8404 No.29255

>>29254

C

Good to have you back!


829b0f No.29256

>>29254

>C) Check out what’s behind the black doors


e1839f No.29257


1d6d8b No.29260


299b6f No.29261

>>29254

C

and agreeing with this guy >>29255


772d67 No.29262


8cd594 No.29263


9e8d2d No.29264

>>29255

>>29256

>>29257

>>29260

>>29261

>>29262

>>29263

I think it's safe to call the vote here.

Give me a 30+ luck check to see if you run into any security


1d6d8b No.29265

Dice rollRolled 84 (1d100)

>>29264

Luck


b94486 No.29273

>>29265

(30+ luck check… 84 rolled - Pass)

You decide that you have to see what’s on the other side of those doors, so you open them to investigate. You’re greeted with a large open area that reminds you that you’re in what was originally a warehouse, despite how clearly remodeled it’s been. There is an elevated platform in the middle of the room that has a small group of stairs on either side leading up to it. The platform itself appears to be completely flat and smooth and is elevated about two-and-a-half feet off the ground. Surrounding the platform are rows of chairs with cloth seating on them in a similar fashion to the kinds of chairs you would see at a movie theater. At the ground level every few chairs are vents where cool air presumably comes out during events to keep spectators at a reasonable temperature. Upon closer inspection, you notice that there are two areas on the stage which have lines around them in rectangular shapes similar to trap doors in a stage. Suspended above the arena is a steel cage that presumably gets lowered prior to the fights. On the side of the room opposite of the entrance is a single door marked with a typical “emergency exit alarm will sound” warning. You’ve confirmed where they must be holding the fights, but you find nothing else of interest in this room.

What do you do now? (all options still have some risk of running into a patrol)

A) Go back and attempt to break into the ticket office

B) Take that elevator ride in the previous room

C) Go back to see what the sleeping guard was doing

D) Leave while you’ve still escaped security’s notice

E) User Suggestions


299b6f No.29274


1d6d8b No.29275

>>29273

E

Could we check what under the stage, I would like to know if those trap doors are real.


772d67 No.29276


e1839f No.29277


2afa1b No.29278


8cd594 No.29279


1d6d8b No.29280

>>29273

If >>29275 doesn't make sense I'm switching my vote to

C


b94486 No.29281

>>29275

>>29280

That E is a reasonable choice.


f0e404 No.29282

C


ca1b8c No.29283


9d8404 No.29284


dd06a2 No.29285


6d0a64 No.29286

>>29276

>>29277

>>29282

>>29283

>>29284

>>29285

C is the clear winner here. I'll need a 25+ luck check to see if you run into a patrol before getting there.


1d6d8b No.29287

Dice rollRolled 20 (1d100)

>>29286

Luck


772d67 No.29288

>>29287

welp xDD


6d0a64 No.29292

>>29287

(25+ luck check… 20 rolled – Fail)

You decide it would be worthwhile to check what the security guard was doing prior to falling asleep. As you head back past the ticket window and around to the reception desk, you hear the sound of the knob of one of the tan double doors turning. You have only a few moments to decide how you want to deal with what is most assuredly a roaming security guard about to see you.

What do you want to do?

A) Run for the exit (guaranteed that you will be spotted, medium agility check to see if you can escape being apprehended)

B) Duck under the reception desk (medium stealth check, you’ll need another stealth check to escape or continue your exploration if you don’t get noticed)

C) Run back to the arena to hide (easy agility check, you will make noise which will alert both guards, easy stealth check to hide)

D) Try to talk your way out of this (hard charisma check)

E) Try to ambush the guard (hard stealth check)

F) Try to fight the guard directly (initiates combat, high probability of waking the sleeping guard)

G) User Suggestions


e1839f No.29293


ca1b8c No.29294

>>29292

A and then D if it fails?


1d6d8b No.29295


8cd594 No.29296


29da87 No.29297


dd06a2 No.29298


000000 No.29299

B


3ce9c7 No.29300


6d0a64 No.29301

>>29294

>>29293

>>29297

>>29298

>>29299

>>29300

B it is. Give me a 40+ stealth check.


d08bfe No.29302

Dice rollRolled 87 (1d100)

>>29301

stealth roll


d08bfe No.29303

>>29301

>>29302

we are batman


3ce9c7 No.29304

>>29303

You mean Brianna?

kek


ca1b8c No.29305

>>29302

noice


6d0a64 No.29306

>>29302

(40+ Stealth check… 87 rolled – Epic Win!)

Without a sound, you duck under the reception desk and tuck your legs in to minimize the likelihood of getting spotted. The sleeping security guard’s chair is currently parked at another part of the desk separated by a few drawers. Unfortunately this means you don’t have much in the way of mobility under the desk, but as long as you just have to wait here, you’ll manage without an issue. You hear the patrolling guard’s footsteps as he casually approaches the desk and nudges the sleeping guard to wake him up. You hear the patrolling guard’s voice say, “Sleeping on the job again I see, Paul. You’re lucky you haven’t been demoted again to janitor or something. Anyway, it’s time for me to punch out. The boss will want you patrolling this floor once I’m gone. Don’t screw up this time.” With that, you hear the patrolling security guard casually walk off in the direction of the elevator. After about half a minute, you hear the ping of the elevator arriving on your floor and the sound of its door closing. Paul mutters to himself, “I really hate that guy. It’s not my fault the boss posted me to a hot target for corporate espionage. I wasn’t even told about the research going on there, how was I supposed to know someone would actually try to break in?”

As soon as his coworker is gone, Paul wheels his chair over to your part of the desk and starts moving the mouse situated above you. You bring yourself as low as possible so as to avoid any contact with his legs. Fortunately, Paul sits with his legs spread wide, so you’re in next to no risk of running into him. Paul starts clicking around and typing on the computer, which you assume might somehow be work-related until you start hearing a woman’s moans coming out of the speakers saying things along the lines of “Fuck me, baby” and “Your cock feels so good.” Paul unzips his pants and pulls out his dick as he goes from being semi-erect to full-staff in seconds. His left hand starts rubbing up and down it and you’re stuck watching him jerk off, unless you have some other ideas.

What do you want to do?

A) Sit and watch Paul masturbate

B) Lend a helping hand in the hope that he’d overlook your trespassing in return (easy charisma check)

C) Avert your eyes, you’d rather watch the inside of the desk than any of this

D) Go for a low blow and try to run away (epically easy combat check, easy agility check)

E) User Suggestions

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829b0f No.29308


1d6d8b No.29309


40524e No.29310


dd06a2 No.29311


000000 No.29312

>>29306

can we just knock him out?

check for keys if he has any take them and lock him in

write a note of he makes a ruckus hes dead


299b6f No.29313


6d0a64 No.29314

>>29312

If you want to try to follow up the low blow with knocking him out that's an acceptable E option. I'll say it has an easy combat check on top of the epically easy one for the low blow.


3679cb No.29315


772d67 No.29316


8cd594 No.29317


a5e539 No.29318


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d08bfe No.29321


3ce9c7 No.29322


4e0ed7 No.29323


ca1b8c No.29325


54c3d9 No.29326

>>29307

>>29310

>>29313

>>29316

>>29319

>>29322

>>29325

It looks like B is the winner.

Give me a 35+ charisma check.


8fe72b No.29327

Dice rollRolled 61 (1d100)

>>29326

Charisma


54c3d9 No.29328

File: 1442096353116.jpg (53.03 KB, 480x366, 80:61, stargirl handjob.jpg)

>>29327

(35+ charisma check… 63 rolled – pass)

You sit underneath the desk in complete surprise at what is happening right now. The fact that your choices are really between watching a sight you initially found to be slightly revolting and the inside of your desk forces you to take notice of the guard's hands gliding up and down his hard cock. After about a minute of watching you feel curiosity creeping up on you. The moaning coming out of the speakers reminds you how pleasurable sex can supposedly be and you find yourself growing curious. Against your better judgment, your hand slowly traces its way over to Paul's cock and you gently wrap your soft hand around Paul's pole.

What the fuck!”, Paul's chair rolls back as he expresses his shock. He assesses the view of you under the desk as you start to crawl out. Paul attempts in vain to cover up as he starts talking to you. “Shit, you really gave me a shock there. I was worried one of the guys was taking a prank too far or something. Anyway, who are you and what are you doing here?”

You still want to fulfill your curiosity over Paul's act of masturbation, so you crawl over to where Paul is, kneel down at his side, guide his hands away from his crotch, and start giving him a handjob. “I'm an urban explorer. I found some weird secret hallway back by the Chinese restaurant and I decided I'd follow it here. I was about to leave when your buddy entered the room and woke you up, so I hid under the desk.” You come up with a plausible sounding story that doesn't give away who you actually are or what your real interest in this site is. “You seemed to be having fun doing this so I figured you might appreciate a helping hand.”

“I do appreciate it…”, Paul says through groans of pleasure. You start to notice his penis twitching as it responds to your touch. Your hand increases the rate at which it is stroking and cum shoots out of Paul's cock, some much of which lands on your hand. Paul wheels his chair over to the tissue box on his desk. “We're officially supposed to scare off trespassers of any kind, but considering how nice you've been to me, I figure I'll let you off with a warning this time.” Paul hands you a tissue, which you use to wipe his cum off your hand. “I can't let you continue exploring tonight, though. Another guard is set to come in in about 10 minutes to relieve me of my shift. If you're here then, I'm going to get fired.” As Paul explains this, he wipes up the mess he made of his work area and exits the internet browser. “However, you seem like a pretty nice girl and I don't want to kick you out of my life that easy.”

Paul rips a sheet of fresh paper off a notepad and jots down his phone number. “Here's my number. I know I might not look like much, but this job scores me tickets to really big, exclusive fights. If you're into that kind of stuff, it's really an amazing time. They've got all kinds of bigwigs attending and great fighters from around the world competing. It's a great time and any Friday you want, I'd be glad if you'd be my date. The name's Paul, by the way.” Paul hands his note over to you and you instinctively fold it over and put it in your pocket.

You feel like you might want to give Paul a name that he can call you, but it might not be a good idea to use your real name. How do you respond?

A) Tell him your real first name.

B) Use another name (Specify, different choices will be counted as different options)

C) Don't give him a name at all.

D) User Suggestions


4e0ed7 No.29329


907082 No.29330


772d67 No.29331


1d6d8b No.29332

>>29328

B for Becky


829b0f No.29333

>>29328

>B) Use another name

Delta


fc98ef No.29335


3ce9c7 No.29336

>>29328

B

>29333

Delta sounds good


dd06a2 No.29337

>>29332

I wanted to vote a, but this B is too good. Backing this.


8fe72b No.29338


a325aa No.29339

>>29329

>>29330

>>29331

>>29338

"It might not be a good idea to use your real name"


54c3d9 No.29340

>>29339

And sometimes honesty is the best policy. I'm not trying to steer you, it's just up to your discretion if you think Paul can be trusted with your actual name.


8fe72b No.29341

>>29339

…Ghost Mom and Dad suggested we slut it up in our dream before. I mean, that's kind of what they were implying.

I think…


8cd594 No.29342


ca1b8c No.29344


a65b39 No.29345


f491c7 No.29360

>>29332

>>29337

>>29342

>>29344

>>29345

A devious smile creeps across your face as you decide which name you want to give this almost perfect stranger who you, in your sexual curiosity and boredom, had given a handjob. “I’m Becky”, you tell Paul, using the name of the girl you fought with recently. With your introduction out of the way, Paul walks you to the exit the way you entered, giving you a light pat on the ass as he sends you on your way and tells you, “Hopefully, I’ll see you around, Becky”. You walk back the way you came, emerging into the alley and you immediately head back to your room.

Your exploration of the arena took about a little longer than a standard patrol, so you feel the urge to get some sleep as soon as you can. When you open the door to your room, you see Kelly dressed in her workout clothes doing a downward dog stretch. As you enter, she exits the position and starts talking to you. “Looks like someone decided to spend the night out for once, huh? You left your gear here, so you couldn’t have been doing anything heroic. What were you up to tonight?”

What do you tell her?

A) Tell her the truth (omitting details she doesn’t need like the encounter with Paul)

B) Studying at the library

C) Playing video games with Isaac and Hideo

D) Exploring the city

E) Training

F) Ask her about her day instead

G) User Suggestions


299b6f No.29361

>>29360

D, if I remember correctly she wanted us to tell her Before we did something potentially dangerous so a white lie isn't to bad


1d6d8b No.29362


e1839f No.29363


dd06a2 No.29364

>>29360

A, although the anon speaking of white lie is not wrong, I think we shouldn't lie to her.


772d67 No.29369


d08bfe No.29371

>>29360

C. i think she want us to have some social life.


8cd594 No.29381


a65b39 No.29419


f491c7 No.29426

>>29364

>>29362

>>29369

>>29381

>>29419

You decide it’s best to tell Kelly what you were actually doing tonight instead of coming up with some white lie to cover it up. You tell Kelly about how you heard a rumor on patrol last night about some secret illegal underground fighting tournament and how you decided to investigate it tonight, just to confirm if it’s true or not. As you start explaining yourself, you see Kelly’s body language change to look more confrontational and she interrupts your explanation.

“What the hell, Megan? I thought I told you to tell me before doing something like that. You could have at least left a note or something. What would’ve happened if you got caught? I’d have no idea what exactly happened to you and no way to help you out. You can’t just keep me out of the loop, if something happens to you there would be no one left to save you.”

Kelly is usually a lot more level-headed than she’s acting right now. News that you went off and put yourself at risk without so much as a word to her seems to have pissed her off. Although if you were to ever keep her in the loop on this situation, she would have found out eventually and she would probably be more pissed off if you put off telling her or lied about it. In any case, you’re a little too fatigued to justify yourself to Kelly, so you tell her that you’re tired and need your rest. Kelly probably needs a little time and space to calm down and this day has seemed like it’s gone on way too long. You close your eyes and brainstorm about how to justify keeping Kelly in the dark on this as you fall asleep.

(I'll post the start of Day 10 (Tuesday 2) tomorrow, sorry to leave you on no choice or roll, but that's kind of the nature of ends of days.)


1d6d8b No.29427

Dice rollRolled 63 (1d100)

>>29426

>sorry to leave you on no choice or roll

Well too bad! I still roll and vote for C

=p

It's all good, take your time.


2c39c4 No.29542

You enjoy your sleep while it lasts. For some reason you can’t articulate, it feels like it was far longer since you last slept than any previous day. You awaken to the sound of your alarm clock telling you that it’s time to get prepared for your day. Kelly is already on her way to her first class, so you have to put off talking to her again until later today. You do all your typical morning activities to prepare for school and head off to your Theater class.

Professor Smith arrives in a punctual manner as usual and starts lecturing. “I’m sure you’re all well acquainted with this fact, but in the early days of drama, the Ancient Greeks characterized all plays as belonging to one of two genres – tragedy and comedy. You probably don’t need me to tell you the distinguishing characteristics of these categories; they’re ubiquitous to fiction even today. Sure, in the modern era we usually split hairs and define the genre of a story by the setting or the tropes it plays on, but at their core, all stories may still be one or the other. An interesting note about comedy is that the Ancient Greeks referred to their comedies as “Satyr plays” (after the mythical creature) and tended to perform them after a series of thematically-linked tragedies. The name is not, as you might think, the etymological root of the genre “Satire”, which actually originates as a term in Ancient Rome, totally etymologically unconnected to the similar in both name and concept Greek genre plays.”

Professor Smith’s lecture ends and you are free to go to the cafeteria to eat your lunch. After getting your food you survey the cafeteria, looking for someone to accompany you for lunch.

Who do you want to eat with?

A) Kelly and Gabby

B) Isaac, Hideo, and Becky

C) Tony and his frat friends

D) Snaps (from your art class)

E) Eat alone

F) User suggestions


850cf5 No.29545

A)


bf0a0a No.29547


dd06a2 No.29549


e1839f No.29551


299b6f No.29552

>>29542

A, we kinda need to hang out with our best friend a little more often then we have been


1d6d8b No.29556


1d0e83 No.29559


52931f No.29567


6aa648 No.29602


6c4d04 No.29603


2a036d No.29716


630b4d No.29820

Sorry about the lack of updates in a while, I'm very busy right now and will be for a while in the foreseeable future. If time clears up I'll update later this week. Otherwise it might take until the weekend.


05120f No.30843


2e7fb5 No.30915

2 weeks and some change of absence past when I've planned and I'm back. Sorry about the hiatus, things have just been busy for me. I'd like to get back to writing, so I intend to do at least one more update today (votes permitting) and get back to a standard minimum one (significant) update a day pace, like I intended when I got back from the great hiatus.

>>29545

>>29549

>>29552

>>29559

>>29567

>>29603

A it is. Next post in less than a minute.


2e7fb5 No.30916

Reasoning that you have to get on better terms with your best friend, you decide that eating lunch with Kelly and her friend, Gabby, would be the best choice of what you are presented with. You walk over to their table and ask them if you could join them. Kelly acts as though she’s thinking about it for a second, but Gabby doesn’t notice her friend’s hesitation as she offers you a seat. Although the thought of giving your friend some space passes your mind, it would be rude to change your mind now, so you sit down and join them. It seems like Kelly and Gabby were likely talking about the usual stuff (tv shows, boys, and parties) before you showed up. Because Gabby is here it would be impossible to discuss the cause of your current rift with Kelly right now, so you make light conversation about school mostly pertaining to how your classes are going and what you like as well as don’t like about them. Kelly initially acts overly stiff whenever she is expected to contribute to the conversation, but she’s naturally friendly enough that even when she’s trying to give you the cold shoulder, she’s not good enough at it for Gabby to really notice. By the end of the conversation, Kelly seems like she’s given up on trying to get you to leave her alone and she’s returned to treating you like normal, at least in front of Gabby. You finish your lunch and head to your second class of the day, art.

You find that by the time you arrive and get your supplies in order, there’s only one seat available, which is next to the petite blonde girl you met last week, Snaps. You take your seat and class begins as usual. Today you’re going to be doing some drawing of scenery. There’s little in the way of technical instruction being presented to you, your professor explains that today’s exercise as well as the one on Thursday is intended to help him assess what kind of skills you’re starting the semester with, so he can know what everyone in the class needs help on. Professor Oliver brings a box full of magazines containing pictures of scenery that he encourages people from the class to take inspiration from. As you set to work, picking the image that was most aesthetically pleasing to you, a shot of a pleasant-looking valley, you notice Snaps seems to be having a pretty hard time with her drawing. She seems to have elected to draw some farm-like environment from memory and is making constant erasures and shaking her head as she corrects her work. Because you’re not particularly close (you’ve only sat next to each other in class once) you figure it would be inappropriate to try to give her some pointers that might help her out. After all, you’re good, but it’s not like you’re the best artist in the class or anything. You finish your work and leave class as usual. It is now afternoon on the second Tuesday of your academic career.

What do you want to do?

A) Go on patrol as Battlegirl

B) Hang out with some of your friends

C) Visit one of your professors during their office hours

D) Work at a part-time job

E) User suggestions


667c71 No.30922

>>30916

B

I doubt there'll be much crime to fight on a Tuesday afternoon


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d08bfe No.30938


e1839f No.30939


d6d175 No.30944


2e7fb5 No.30972

I feel like leaving the poll open until tomorrow (today technically, I guess) afternoon/evening. Calling a 3-2 decision so quickly after a long break doesn't seem fair. Just to be clear, the lack of an update tonight is not be backpedaling on my plans, it's to accommodate people that might need a little more time to notice that I'm back that will probably want to get their vote in. In the event that there are no more votes posted in that time, I'll accept the decision as is and move the story forward.


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dd06a2 No.30974


2e7fb5 No.30980

>>30938

>>30944

>>30973

>>30974

You don’t expect there will be much crime to stop on a Tuesday afternoon and you figure you can hang out with your friends some other time. Considering that your personal funds are still pretty low, you decide to earn more money at a part time job. Thanks to the miraculous structure of student work at your university, you are able to choose from a variety of jobs instead of just picking one and settling into it. You check the available postings and find the following job offers.

High School tutor – tutor struggling students and desperate over-achievers alike – pay is $10 per hour for a four hour session - you have tutored a student in the past and may choose to tutor him again, or you may elect to try to help someone entirely new

Nursing home caregiver – elderly people have a number of needs that need attended to: from making sure they take all their pills, to helping them get around, to simply providing them companionship. As a caregiver, it’ll be your responsibility to assist them in all the ways they need it. Unfortunately, older folks are also prone to unreasonable requests and tend to complain a lot, so the job might not be all that pleasant. The job pays $12 per hour with a four hour shift.

Animal rescue shelter worker – Usually falls under the spectrum of volunteer work, however Utopolis has been leading the way in having a unique alternative structure for this service. Utopolis’ animal rescue shelter has been privatized and generates revenue off of selling videos, merchandise, etc. featuring animals they rescue as stars. The pay is lower than some of the other jobs at a starting salary of $8 per hour, once again for a 4 hour shift, but maybe you like animals enough for it to be worthwhile.

Which job do you want to work at?

A) Tutor Kyle

B) Tutor a new student

C) Nursing home caregiver

D) Animal Shelter worker


e1839f No.30981


96a7b0 No.30982

>>30980

D

BattleCat


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2cc827 No.31037

>>30981

>>30983

>>30993

>>31000

>>31006

>>31013

>>31020

The chance to work at the animal shelter sounds tempting, but when you weigh the option against possibly making the difference in the education of Kyle, you decide tutoring him could do more good. After indicating that you agreed to tutor Kyle today, you head over to his house. As usual, your arrival was predicted by Kyle’s dog, Bogart, who is barking at the door when you arrive. Before you can ring the doorbell, Kyle’s dad opens the door and greets you, with a trace of grogginess in his voice. “You’re back. The boy will be glad to see you. Just try to get a little more progress this time than last time. That boy needs every bit of structure you could give him, even if it means you gotta bend the rules a little to keep him going.” As you enter Kyle’s house, Bogart rushes up to you, barking less intensely as he recognizes your appearance and smell. You extend your hand for him to sniff and pet him once he’s satisfied.

You head towards Kyle’s room and notice the door is closed and that there’s the same kind of mysterious sound coming from the other side as the first time you were here. You could knock to politely announce your presence or you could just barge in and get right to work. Which do you do?

A) Better be polite and knock

B) Barge in

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2cc827 No.31056

>>31038

>>31041

>>31042

>>31044

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>>31052

You don’t know what could be going on at the other side of the door, so you politely knock to announce your presence. “Give me a minute!” you hear Kyle yell as the noise stops immediately, with the sound stopping as he says that. You hear some rustling on the other side of the door as you wait for a few seconds before Kyle tells you that you can come in now. Kyle is sitting on the edge of his bed holding his math textbook in his lap. It looks like he’s at least kind of ready to learn. You say “it looks like you’re pretty ready”, which causes him to squirm a bit for some reason. He explains that he knew you had to be coming over and figured once he heard the knock at his door it had to be you.

You have to consider how you want to approach the tutoring session today. Last time wasn’t a total disaster, but you made no progress. A repeat of that might make Kyle’s dad try to switch tutors, meaning you’d have to work with some other high school kid. Considering that you’ve already built up a solid working relationship with Kyle, that wouldn’t be a good thing. On the other hand, this time you have a rare circumstance where Kyle seems uncharacteristically ready and eager to learn. You might have to not change much from the friendly approach you took the first time you tutored him. A third option remains of trying to incentivize his studying in some way, but that’s more or less what you tried last time and failed at. Maybe a stronger incentive will get him to try harder.

How do you want to approach this tutoring session?

A) Like the first time, in a friendly not overly strict manner (medium charisma roll)

B) More strictly, last time showed that you got too off task (slightly easier medium charisma roll)

C) Try to incentivize it somehow (will bring up more options each with their own rolls being required if chosen)

D) User suggestions

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ca8208 No.31057

>>31056

C. We can't lose this job


e1839f No.31059


772d67 No.31066


c161cb No.31067

>>31056

C. Maybe we can bribe him?


561457 No.31068


299b6f No.31069


2cc827 No.31070

>>31057

>>31059

>>31066

>>31067

>>31068

>>31069

Considering that Kyle so drastically needs academic improvement, you decide somehow rewarding him for progress he can make would be worth considering at least. There are a number of ways you can try to give him incentive to perform well. You could try what you did last time and offer to play video games with him if he does well this time. Last time failed, but then again this time might. Another option available is to offer him monetary compensation for good performance. You’re making $40 off of this session, so you could offer him a cut of it if he does well. You don’t have many items to part with, but your escrima sticks are in your backpack, so you could part with them but considering their value for crimefighting, it’s unlikely you’ll want to part with them. Kyle would probably think they’re pretty neat though.

More options are available like what Kyle’s dad suggested last time. You could try to lead Kyle on and make him think he can have a shot at a romantic relationship with you, or at least some aspects of it. It would likely be a powerful motivator, but you aren’t exactly experienced in these matters, so it might be a little hard to seduce him and if you even suggest the possibility, it would be impossible to return to the way you are now. Alternatively you could appeal to his sense of jealousy. By making Kyle think another male is taking up your attention, you could force him to try harder to make progress to get your attention back. Kyle’s father mentioned two possibilities; you use a boyfriend (which you don’t have) or Kyle’s father. Since Kyle’s father would be in on it, the plan involving him would probably be the easier option to work with. It would take a bit of effort to convincingly manufacture a boyfriend who won’t show up.

(For the sake of having this be a decision instead of being dictated to you (some will work better than others), the difficulties on these rolls will be withheld)

What kind of incentive do you want to use?

A) Playing video games together

B) Money

C) Escrima sticks

D) Seduction (you'll have further options pertaining to how far you want to go)

E) Jealousy (manufactured boyfriend)

F) Jealousy (Kyle’s dad)

G) On second thought, the friendly approach sounds good

H) On second thought, the strict approach sounds good

I) User suggestions


e1839f No.31071


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c86b94 No.31081


bf8819 No.31085

>>31070

D

For every correct answer Megan looses an article of clothing!


bf8819 No.31087

Or Kyle can choose the outfit that Megan wears!


c161cb No.31088


2ef759 No.31091

>>31085

>>31087

I appreciate the suggestions, I'll be sure to include them as options. If anyone else feels like suggesting any options for how we should go about seducing Kyle into performing better on his homework, I would like any input you can provide.


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35f7ac No.31097


299b6f No.31100

>>31079

>>31085

changing vote to this


2ef759 No.31101

>>31072

>>31075

>>31077

>>31078

>>31080

>>31081

>>31085

>>31088

>>31093

>>31097

>>31100

You decide the strongest motivator you could use with Kyle would be his attraction to you. Even if you have to lead him on a little, it’s all for his own good. There are several ways you could go about this. The simplest way would probably be to just flirt with him. Flirting might distract him from the lesson, though. Alternatively, you can promise him some kind of reward for good behavior. One idea that creeps across your mind is that you can offer him the opportunity to see you remove pieces of your clothing as he finds correct answers. It’s a little inappropriate, but you wouldn’t be crossing any serious lines. You could also promise to dress up in some kind of way he wants if he does good. Considering that the only costume you have on you is your Battlegirl costume, the reward itself would have to wait for the next tutoring session (assuming there is one), so you can acquire whatever outfit he’d desire. Other seductive rewards you can promise him could include the possibility of going out on a date with him or making more direct romantic contact (hugging, kissing, etc.) if he does well. Other options along these lines may occur to you as you think about it.

(Same case as last time, some options are better than others, so difficulties will be withheld)

How do you want to go about seducing a good performance out of Kyle?

A) Flirt with him (charisma roll)

B) Stripping for good answers (charisma roll)

C) Playing dress-up for him (charisma roll)

D) Offer him a date for a good performance (charisma roll)

E) Romantic contact (will result in another vote)

F) User Suggestions


96a7b0 No.31102


e1839f No.31103


561457 No.31104

>>31101

Could we give him the options and let him pick what he want?


036df7 No.31106

>>31101

B. It ought to make him try his best.


277bf0 No.31107


036df7 No.31108

>>31104

As if he'd say anything else than seeing poor battlegirl naked.


c86b94 No.31110


299b6f No.31111


8cd594 No.31112


bf8819 No.31113


54c3d9 No.31114

>>31104

If you restrict it to a choice between B-E, sure. Since the flirt with him plan (option A) isn't based on being a reward, it's very ineffective if it's a choice, so it can't be included unless you can find some kind of way to justify it.

I guess mechanically, I'd roll for his choice, in the (currently unlikely) case that this option F would win. I don't really know what option Kyle would prefer, so that seems like the optimal solution.


535a5e No.31115


05120f No.31116

>>31101

B or E


54c3d9 No.31117

>>31106

>>31107

>>31110

>>31111

>>31112

>>31113

>>31115

>>31116

Looks like we're very in favor of stripping.

Give me a 20+ charisma check.


150802 No.31118

Dice rollRolled 20 (1d100)

>>31117

charisma


829b0f No.31119

Dice rollRolled 79 (1d100)

>>31117

Charisma check


54c3d9 No.31120

>>31118

(20+ charisma check… 20 rolled – pass)

Now that you've decided exactly how you're going to reward Kyle for a good performance, you snap back to reality. You grab a chair and sit across from Kyle. As you get ready to continue where you left off, you decide to reveal your plan to reward Kyle and see if he's up for it.

“Before we start, I think you're going to want to play a lot of attention to the lesson today.”, you tell Kyle.

“Why's that? Is there something important?”

“I think you could use a little motivation to bring your best out of you. After we're done going over all the material, I'm going to give you a little bit of a quiz to see how much you'll remember. If you do well, I'll reward you.”

“Reward how?”

“Well… I guess boys your age probably like older girls, right?”

Kyle pauses for a moment, thinking how to respond. His voice deepens as he responds, putting on the appearance of confidence. “Yeah, I do.”

“Well, it's a little against the rules, but how about for every answer on my quiz you get right, I remove an item of clothing?”

Of course, Kyle didn't have any problems with this arrangement. You study with him diligently as you try to get him completely up to speed with what was expected of him entering into his grade level. You don't get the chance to talk a lot about personal stuff, he seems too interested in making sure he remembers everything about the geometry and algebra you're going over with him. As hard as he's trying, by the time he's ready to take your quiz, he's still having a little trouble with some of the concepts. Your quiz contains six questions, one for each item of clothing you're wearing: shoes (counted as one item) and socks (also counted as one item), your t-shirt, your pants, your bra, and your panties. You figure removing the items from least revealing to most revealing would be ideal, although you're uncertain of which piece of underwear you'll remove first should you have to. Each of the questions are drawn from the material you covered today, in fact you draw them from the textbook itself, using questions you skipped over in the tutoring session. You give Kyle about five minutes to take the test, during which he appears to concentrate intensely. When time is up, you check his work and…

How well did he do?

Give me a roll for his quiz score, every 20 points counts as a correct answer, therefore an item of clothing (starting with shoes at 0).

(In the event of an 80+ score less than 100, there will be a vote for if Megan should remove her panties or her bra. Feel free to jump the gun on the vote if that's the case.)


c68c58 No.31121

>>31120

Here we go


829b0f No.31122

Dice rollRolled 48 (1d100)

>>31120

Quiz Score Roll


c68c58 No.31123

>>31121

Fuck.


3c5c75 No.31127

>>31122

Shoes socks and shirt. Not amazing but at least it wasn't only one answer


ef7bcc No.31128

>>31122

The boy is dumb..


907082 No.31130

>>31122

Ah shit come on. Give him another chance or an extra credit round or something


000000 No.31131

>>31130

next time


bf8819 No.31138

We practically gift wrapped her for him….


55ce1f No.31143

And what about a bonus question ? If he win, he can touch our boobs or an other bodie part (sorry for my broken english if a make a mistek)


2a0d6f No.31146

>>31130

No can do unfortunately. Next time you vote for this arrangement, I'll take the progress Kyle's made as a given though so you don't have to ever deal with the unbelievably lame scenario where Megan just takes off her shoes.

>>31143

Nice idea, but the quiz will have served its purpose demonstrating Kyle's progress, so there's not really much reason to go beyond the stripping this session. Next time you will be able to offer the chance to grope you as a reward though.

I'll post the update for today in about three hours or so. Sorry about keeping you guys waiting.


8cd594 No.31148

>>31146

> Next time you vote for this arrangement, I'll take the progress Kyle's made as a given though

> the quiz will have served its purpose demonstrating Kyle's progress

Sounds reasonable enough to me


2a0d6f No.31150

>>31122

(Kyle quiz roll… 48 rolled – 3 right answers)

Looking over Kyle’s answers, you can see he at least has a bit of a grasp on the algebra he is supposed to understand at his grade level. There are a few issues dealing with order of operations (specifically dealing with exponents) that you need to iron out that prevented him from getting one of the questions right, but it’s pretty accurate for the most part. The other two questions he missed were relating to geometry, which at this level boils down mostly to memorization, so you’ll just have to work on that later. Kyle tried as hard as he could, so you have to uphold your end of the bargain.

You are only obligated to remove three items of clothing to reward Kyle for his correct answers. You reason to yourself that you have to do this well enough to generate in Kyle some kind of interest in coming to this kind of arrangement again and to give him the drive to perform better. You lower your hands by the bottom edge of your t-shirt and slowly lift your shirt up, inching farther and farther until your bra-covered breasts are visible to Kyle. Your bra is a pretty plain looking, so you reason that you have to accentuate it as well as you can. You pull your shirt further up and with a roll of your arms and shoulders gently toss it on the floor. You kneel down on one knee and bend forward to untie your shoe, giving Kyle as much time to admire your cleavage as possible before slipping it off. Switching legs, you repeat the process for the other foot. Finally, you roll your socks down your ankles and place them delicately inside your shoes, making sure to lean forward and look up at Kyle as you do so.

With the show completed, you decide to go over the answers on the questions. You next to Kyle on his bed and lean in to review what exactly he missed. You lean in towards him in an exaggerated manner as you go through the questions, occasionally actually pressing your left boob against his shoulder as you reach over to show him parts of the textbook that cover what he missed. With the review taken care of, you congratulate Kyle on his progress and tell him that you’ll have a bit to work on next time, and reminding him that if he wants more, he’ll have to do better. You put your clothes back on and go meet with Kyle’s dad to collect payment. As usual, he’s a bit distracted by sports, but he seems to believe you when you say you think you’ve made progress today. He hands you your payment, the full $40 (bringing the amount in your wallet up to $125), and you leave to go on your way.

As you exit Kyle’s house, you think to yourself about how you want to spend this Tuesday evening.

What do you want to do?

A) Go on patrol as Battlegirl

B) Hang out with some of your friends

C) Train

D) User suggestions


96a7b0 No.31151

>>31150

C

Gotta get good, girl.


e1839f No.31153


561457 No.31155


55ce1f No.31156

A, but don't forget to left a note to your roomy


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299b6f No.31158


c161cb No.31162

>>31150

C, gotta get fit.


35f7ac No.31199

>>31150

C

we're gonna need a montage


86d69a No.31200

>>31151

>>31153

>>31157

>>31158

>>31162

>>31199

Getting physically prepared for crime fighting is essential for a superhero, so you decide that what you ought to do is work out for a few hours. You head back to your room and load your backpack with a swimsuit and a towel and you head over to your school’s pool. Your tuition covers access to the school’s athletic facilities (with the caveat that athletic teams take priority when they need them), but fortunately, it doesn’t seem like much of anyone is using the pool right now. Noticing this, you go into the women’s locker room (which is similarly nearly empty), shower, and change into your swimsuit. You go into the pool and swim a few laps, which allows you to develop some muscles that usually don’t get much stimulation in day-to-day life, but might come in handy in a fast-paced combat situation. You do all the usual stuff: freestyle, backstroke, and breast stroke as well as some more experimental movements through the water. As dinner time approaches, more people filter out until you’re all alone. When anyone who might think it’s peculiar is gone (i.e. anyone but you), you practice various strikes that you’ve trained on land. In an aquatic environment, water resistance makes you have to use more force to achieve similar effects and slows you down so you can work on your technique. Once you’ve exhausted yourself, you towel off, shower, and change back into your street clothes. You feel more prepared for combat, granting you a +5 bonus to any combat rolls you have to do tomorrow.

You head to the dining hall and grab yourself a healthy late dinner after the workout. Making sure you have all the energy you need is vital for your work.

It is now Tuesday night; you have one final action before you have to go to sleep. Now that you’ve finished your exercise for the day, what do you want to do?

A) Hang out with Kelly

B) Hang out with Isaac and Hideo (and maybe Becky)

C) Hang out with another of your friends

D) User suggestions


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8cd594 No.31208

>>31200

A

I think we ought to formally air things out with Kelly


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907082 No.31229


850cf5 No.31230

A


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c1aa35 No.31261

>>31202

>>31207

>>31208

>>31209

>>31230

>>31231

You feel like you should talk to Kelly. She’s been pissed at you all day and you haven’t really had much of a chance to explain to her why you didn’t tell her before endangering yourself like you did last night. You resolve to hang out with her for the rest of the night. You’ll have to address the elephant in the room at some point, how will you justify your actions last night?

You could try apologizing for doing what you did, after all Kelly is your friend and she’s only angry because of concern for your well-being. Then again, her concern reminds you of your old mentor’s. She’s acting way too protective of you. You are strong and independent; you really don’t need to check in with your best friend before you do what you have to. Being a superhero was your choice and you knew what risks you were taking on when you decided to do so. You face those risks every single night you go out to help people. Besides, there really isn’t much she could do to help you even if you did get in trouble. What would she be able to do? Tell the police and possibly expose your secret identity? Put herself at risk trying to rescue you? No matter what she would do, there’s no way that it can save you. So why worry her about it? You have a moral obligation to stop the fighting tournament, so if you agree to tell her next time you go into danger, you may be putting your identity or your friend at risk. Maybe you can bring Kelly to understand your point of view. Then again, Kelly might have a point. Keeping her in the loop could help; after all, she’s the only one who you can rely upon that knows your civilian identity.

You head to your room and Kelly appears to be doing some homework when you walk in. She looks at you like she wants to talk to you, but before you say anything; you have to decide how you’re approaching this situation.

What do you say to your roommate?

A) Apologize for keeping her out of the loop and promise to tell her next time you do something dangerous (easy charisma check)

B) Apologize, but avoid making promises about your behavior in the future (medium charisma check)

C) Defend your position. Make Kelly understand why you didn’t tell her about your exploration last night. (hard charisma check)

D) Pretend everything’s normal and don’t talk about last night (easy charisma check)

E) User Suggestions

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000000 No.31266

Apologize tell her she's right and give her the contact to Mac death


000000 No.31267

Apologize tell her she's right and give her the contact to Mac death


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55ce1f No.31272

>>31261

>>31266

A and this


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c1aa35 No.31329

>>31266

>>31272

>>31316

Considering the amount of support for this option, I'm going to consider giving her MacDeath's number (as an emergency contact) as a given unless anyone is against that idea. There doesn't seem to be a whole lot of reason not to.


cf792e No.31442

Sorry about the lack of updates for the past two days, I've been really busy (two allnighters in a row busy), but that's passed for now. I'll try to resume my normal update schedule later tonight.


54c3d9 No.31444

>>31263

>>31264

>>31265

>>31269

>>31272

>>31316

Give me a 35+ charisma check


299b6f No.31445

Dice rollRolled 28 (1d100)

charisma


54c3d9 No.31450

>>31445

(35+ charisma check… 28 rolled – fail)

You decide that you should apologize to your roommate for not informing her before putting yourself in danger. You say “Hey, Kelly. I know you're probably still mad at me about not telling you about what I was doing last night, and I'm sorry for that. I should have told you before I did it. You know what, next time I need to do something like that I'll tell you. In the mean time…”, you say as you go over to your desk and grab a pencil. You write down the number MacDeath gave you, “If I get into trouble, you can call this number.” You put the piece of paper on Kelly's desk.

“Look, Meg. I can't deal with this stuff. First you'd go out on patrol and almost get raped then go out the next night like nothing happened. Now you're sneaking into facilities run by God-knows-who. I hate seeing you do this to yourself. It's not safe and you deserve better, and worrying about you is putting a lot of stress on me as well. I can't just forget and forgive that you went and put yourself at risk like that without so much as a word to me. If you'll excuse me I'll have to finish up this homework now.” With that, Kelly turns away from you and gets back to work.

You're feeling tired after all the exercise you did today, so you are eager to get to sleep. You change into some pajamas and go to sleep, dissatisfied about your inability to get Kelly to forgive you.


54c3d9 No.31451

You awaken refreshed and ready to face the day ahead of you. Thanks to your exercise yesterday you feel extra prepared for any fighting you might have to do. You shower, brush your teeth, and change into a typical casual outfit then you head to the first class of this Wednesday day, Biology. Finding an empty seat by the aisle, you barely have time to take out your notebook before you hear your professor's high heels clicking as she heads down the aisle and the accompanying turning of many of your classmate's heads as they turn to watch her. As she passes by you, you notice she's wearing a light blue tube top, a black short skirt, and some really subtle tan pantyhose stockings. You notice even guys who are sitting next to their girlfriends have trouble not staring at your gorgeous redheaded professor as her hips sway while she passes them. Your professor gets up to the podium and gets out her lecture notes. When it becomes officially time to start class, your professor starts speaking.

“Before I start with the lecture today, I've got a little bit of a proposition for all of you. It's an opportunity to get experience helping out with research for one of our life sciences departments. We've got openings for student research assistants with our botany and zoology departments. Some of this research will be personally supervised by me, so for those of you who would be interested, I'd be eager to hear from you during my office hours. If you do want to get involved, please stop by and talk to me.” With that out of the way she begins the lecture proper.

“Last lecture we were covering survival of the fittest. The organ system I believe is most fundamental to determining what animals are actually fittest and as a result get to mate is the endocrine system. The endocrine system regulates hormones within the body, which gives it control over things like body temperature as well as cellular growth. It is thanks to the functioning of this system that men can develop the testosterone they need to be the best they can be and women have their menstrual cycles function so that reproduction can work in the first place. In its control over growth, including the development of reproductive systems is what allows animals to achieve the niche that will keep them alive and allow them to reproduce. They also assist in the development of secondary sexual characteristics which some of you may have noticed help attract potential mates. Of course, now hormones aren't only used in the way they occur naturally, steroids are often used as performance-enhancers among athletes and other kinds of growth hormones are frequently used in ranches to allow animals to grow more meat. For those of you interested in careers in Biology or Chemistry, these kinds of bio-industrial applications can be a good place to look for a job.”

The lecture ends and you head to the dining hall to grab yourself some lunch. Today your diet calls for some more vegetables, so you decide to eat a salad, which you accompany with some milk. When you finish grabbing your food, it's once again time to decide who you want to eat with.

Who do you want to eat with?

A) Kelly (by herself today)

B) Isaac and Hideo

C) Tony and his frat friends

D) Gabby and Becky (?!)


e1839f No.31452


299b6f No.31456


4f9ec8 No.31465

>>31451

A

We don't have to talk if she doesn't feel like it, it just looked like she could use the company

Also how much for tattoo removal? (assuming we still have that tattoo above our pussy)

Can't have that there when we seduce our bio professor in her office


54c3d9 No.31466

>>31465

>Also how much for tattoo removal?

$50, so you have more than enough money right now.

Of course it'll take a vote to get it removed. I think there's some fans of it being there so you might have a hard time with that one, but that's ultimately all up to you guys.


b35739 No.31468


076196 No.31470


78a5fb No.31471


c161cb No.31475

>>31451

C. Let's expand our social circle.


b58eb2 No.31583


850cf5 No.31584

A) can't let her eat by herself.


2a036d No.31590


9144b2 No.31591


67a382 No.31592

Current tally is

A - 4

B - 3

C - 4

Next vote for A or C wins it. If B gets two more votes before then, B can win. In the unlikely event that D gets five votes, D can still win.

I'll leave the vote open until I feel like on Tuesday night. If insufficient votes are cast by then, I'll call for a roll between all options at 4 votes. I'd like to avoid rolling for it if I can get a vote for the decision, so I'd appreciate it if we can avoid it, but I want the story to progress.

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d08bfe No.31598


67a382 No.31610

>>31465

>>31470

>>31471

>>31584

>>31594

You walk over to Kelly’s table and stand behind the seat across from her. You politely ask if she minds if you join her for lunch and Kelly invites you to do so. There isn’t a hint of hostility in your best friend’s voice as she extends the offer, based off of what you know of her, that would probably mean that although your talk last night wasn’t the most successful you’ve ever had, it at least provided Kelly with the opportunity to vent. Considering how weird things have been between you two for the past two days, it’s hard to tell what exactly you should talk with her about while you eat your lunches. You could try to take an interest in Kelly’s life and see how things are going for her. Alternatively you could try to bring up the issue that’s been causing a rift between the two of you, but after so many unsuccessful discussions of that, it might be hard to get her to see your side of things. If you want to avoid dealing with the issue for now, you could just make small talk about one of your mutual acquaintances. You’re sure there are plenty of other possible ways to take a conversation, but those are the directions that occur most immediately to you.

What do you want to do?

A) Ask about how things are going for Kelly

B) Try to apologize yet again to Kelly hoping for a different outcome (medium charisma roll)

C) Try to convince Kelly of your side of the issue (hard charisma roll)

D) Talk about one of your mutual acquaintances

E) User suggestions


96a7b0 No.31611


55e6a7 No.31612


4f9ec8 No.31613


299b6f No.31624


d08bfe No.31632


adc0d3 No.31633


3c53bf No.31678

>>31611

>>31612

>>31613

>>31624

>>31632

>>31633

Considering how much of the time you spend with Kelly has been all about you, you figure you should take an interest in what’s going on in her life.

“So, how are things going for you?”

“Busy. Aside from my usual classes and worrying about you…” Kelly says, half-jokingly, “I have a 100 word essay due at the end of the month.”

“Seriously?”

“No, of course I’m not being serious. I do have a lot of labs taking up my time aside from the lectures you would expect and I’ve had to do a handful of short writing assignments for some classes. Besides, I do have a social life I have to maintain. I know you’re much too busy for that kind of thing, but it’s kind of important to me.”

“How’s that going anyway?”

“Not much progress on the Tony front. Gabby is busy with some kind of group work for one of her classes, which is why I was eating alone today. I could’ve sat over with Tony and the guys, but I don’t want to appear too easy, I’ve got to get him to come to me if I want to be on good terms with him. Aside from that I’d say it’s going pretty well.”

You continue making small talk as you finish your food. Kelly seems pretty talkative today so you might almost be on normal terms. It would probably be a good idea to let her know before you put yourself at risk again, though.

After lunch, you go to your next class, psychology. You take a seat with seconds to spare before Professor Cortex rushes through the double doors at the entrance of the lecture hall and to the podium. He appears eager to begin his lecture, starting the accompanying slideshow directly on time.

“Hello, again class. Today we will be covering subliminal messages. Subliminal messages are subtly placed images, often times either through single-frame insertions in videos or careful image manipulation, that deliver an audience a message they don’t know they are receiving. Take for example this coke advertisement.” An advertisement showing a coke bottle surrounded by some ice cubes appears on the projector screen. “Looks like a perfectly normal bottle of coca-cola, right? It looks kind of appetizing, even. Then, you look closer at the ice cubes and see this.” The next slide shows a zoomed in image of the ice cube, which now shows what appears to be an erect penis about ready to receive a blowjob from someone else’s mouth. Your classmates have mixed reactions, from chuckles to whispering to their peers to gasps of shock. “There is no reason why you’d look so closely at such a minor element of an advertisement, in most cases you’d want to just move on immediately and not waste your time. But your brain registers its contents nonetheless. It associates Coca-cola with sexual gratification and you suddenly find yourself in need of a coke.” Your professor goes through some more examples of subliminal images in advertising, some of which really surprise the class.

Your professor continues, “A similar technique can be used in videos. Videos are essentially a rapid succession of pictures that imply motion to the eye. Each one of these pictures is referred to as a frame. There are usually about 24 frames in a single second of video with a standard camera. By replacing 1-2 of those frames with an unrelated image that can plant a message, you can have a similar subliminal effect on your audience. I have a colleague or two conducting research along those lines. If it interests you, I’d recommend talking to me about it and I can see if I can arrange to get you the opportunity to participate in one of their studies. Unfortunately, I’m out of time, so I’ll have to cut off here for today. I’ll see you all on Monday.”

You’re finally free from class, but not from your commitments. Your drama group is rehearsing Romeo and Juliet again today and you’re expected to attend. If you want, you can do something else instead, but you’re only allotted one absence prior to the play’s performance until further absences get you bumped down to less important parts.

What do you want to do?

A) Attend rehearsal

B) Go on patrol

C) Work at a job

D) Hang out with your friends

E) Meet a professor during their office hours

F) User Suggestions


55e6a7 No.31679

>>31678

A don't think we will find some super villains at the rehearsal, but we have a commitment.


e1839f No.31681


dd06a2 No.31682


c8fb64 No.31697


299b6f No.31698


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03a3f4 No.31769


9144b2 No.31806

>>31678

A, but we really should lift or something, bro


b415c4 No.31814

Sorry about the two weeks missing. As is usually the case, real life has been keeping me busy. I'll be back to resuming regular updates by the end of the week.

Also, next update post I'll call for a roll to see how convincingly you perform at rehearsal (assuming A stays in the lead, like it probably will). Regardless of the outcome of the roll, you'll get the credit for attending the rehearsal. It's just extra steps may or may not be required to get Megan to act convincingly.


986d7d No.32186

>>31814

Op dead


a6310e No.32251

>>31814

… So are you waiting on rolls or should we just be prepared to roll when you get back?


d463ac No.32258

>>32251

Sorry about my continued absence, lots of real life shit to deal with.

When I post the update, I'll ask for the roll. I'll try to get the update done sometime before Thanksgiving (this Thursday) (for real this time). Hold on to those dice until then.


9cfd8a No.32292

You decide to honor your commitment to attend your second rehearsal of Romeo and Juliet. You arrive at the theater where your rehearsals get held and find that the set-up that greeted you last time, a circle of chairs, is not arranged this time. All the chairs are neatly stored away, and the stage looks very plain. Shortly after you arrive, your other cast-mates, including your art classmates Tony (playing opposite of you as Romeo) and Snaps, start filing in. Your director, Max, starts this session by announcing that he'd have groups of actors read through key scenes where they interact, which for you would apparently mean a lot of time with Tony. Max's plan was meticulous in that he had assignments for almost all the actors at any given time during the duration of practice. He went between groups to give some additional direction when needed, but he paid special attention to scenes involving you and/or Tony. After running through a few more mundane scenes with other actors (most of whom you didn't know prior to the play, although you did find out that Snaps is playing the Nurse), you finally came across the balcony scene. Your director paid particular interest to this scene because it is one of the first most major instances of interaction between Romeo and Juliet.

How did your monologue go?

(Give me a 60+ charisma roll)

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96a7b0 No.32293

Dice rollRolled 92 (1d100)

>>32292

Charisma


9cfd8a No.32295

>>32293

(60+ charisma roll… 92 rolled – Epic Win!)

Your monologue went superbly. You brought more passion to your performance than you could have imagined you'd ever be able to drum up while acting opposite of Tony. Your acting was almost good enough to convince yourself that you liked him. Tony had no problems with holding up his end of the scene and everyone who had the chance to watch it came away from practice with a renewed sense of confidence in the play's central performers. The subsequent scenes you read through today felt like child's play in comparison, so nothing particularly notable happened. Following the end of rehearsal you find yourself free on this Thursday evening. Tomorrow you will probably have to plan out some kind of plan involving what to do about that fighting tournament, but for tonight you're free to focus on some other kinds of crime-fighting, or even dealing with civilian matters if you are so inclined.

What do you want to do?

A) Go on patrol as Battlegirl (and get use of that +5 combat modifier)

B) Hang out with one of your friends

C) Go to a location around campus to pass some time (as a civilian)

D) Work at a part-time job

E) User Suggestions


96a7b0 No.32296


986d7d No.32298


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899f0b No.32300


9425bf No.32301


dd06a2 No.32302


694d02 No.32303


7b96e8 No.32334


8fe72b No.32337

>>32295

A

Let's actually have some superhero scenes in the superhero story.


9488ef No.32338

>>32295

A for heroics


772d67 No.32339


afe3d6 No.32341


9cfd8a No.32370

>>32300

>>32301

>>32303

>>32334

>>32337

>>32338

>>32339

>>32341

Every moment of your life, crimes are being committed somewhere in the city. You don't have the power or even ability to stop them all, but you can leave your mark by stopping some terrible event in someone's life and you can bring the perpetrator to justice. You decide to patrol for crimes to stop this evening.

As usual, you have a number of choices to make prior to your patrol.

Where do you patrol?

A) Patrol North Utopolis (Surgeon Generals territory, site of current gangwar) (easy luck roll)

B) Patrol West Utopolis (Commercial district) (medium luck roll)

C) Patrol Central Utopolis (Campus and surrounding businesses) (hard luck roll)

D) Patrol East Utopolis (financial district, chance of supercriminals, location of the Burger Kingpin) (medium luck roll)

E) Patrol South Utopolis (Burger Kings stronghold) (medium luck roll)

F) User suggestions

You have been given MacDeath's phone number. His availability is spotty, but he may be willing to help you. Of course, reputation gains will be reduced if you use his assistance, but he will make encounters easier for you.

Do you give him a call?

A) Yes (medium luck roll)

B) No

Finally, considering all the drama with Kelly, you should probably tell her your plans before you go out and put yourself at risk. There are no obvious downsides for doing so. Will you talk to your roommate before your patrol?

A) Yes

B) No


b58eb2 No.32371


f27008 No.32372


899f0b No.32374


90cb99 No.32375

>>32370

D - Mmm… Mind Controller, maybe?

B

A


3849bc No.32376


cfc9b4 No.32380


454821 No.32382


dd06a2 No.32383


299b6f No.32384


9eebf1 No.32387

Might as well call it now. By my count (which is 100% accurate), the winners are DBA.

Give me a 45+ luck roll. As usual, epic/phenomenal failure result in negative encounters and regular failures result in no encounter.


899f0b No.32388

Dice rollRolled 70 (1d100)

>>32387

luck


61487a No.32389

>>32388

this is a good roll?


9eebf1 No.32390

>>32389

Yeah. You'll get an encounter and it won't be stacked against you or in your favor. I'd consider it to be a good result. Much better than an uneventful patrol, anyway.


03802f No.32400

>>32388

You call Kelly cell-phone to tell her about your plans to go to the East Side of Utopolis to patrol. She thanks you for being curtious enough to keep her in the loop about your heroics and wishes you luck, although you can tell by the wavering of her voice that she is still very concerned for your well-being.

(45+ luck roll, 70 rolled – Pass)

You arrive in the East Side of Utopolis and change into your costume in a relatively secluded alleyway. You would usually use a public restroom, but being mostly populated by stores and banks, most of the entrances and exits to public buildings are monitored by cameras and you don’t want to risk the possibility of your secret identity being exposed. After you change, you hide your backpack containing your civilian clothes behind a dumpster. Shortly after you exit the alley and begin your patrol of the east side, you notice a strange scene inside a bank that you are passing by. A fair-skinned black-haired woman in a black latex leotard wearing black thigh-high boots and an elaborate masquerade-style mask is talking to a teller who is heading into the bank vault and handing her an exorbitant amount of money. No one else in line appears to be suspicious because of this activity (nor do the security guards), but you decide to head inside to investigate it. You suspect that this woman may have the teller, and possibly everyone else mentally enthralled so that they can’t resist her commands, but you don’t have any solid proof of it. She doesn’t notice your entry into the bank, so you are free to act to stop her, if you think that is the right course of action.

How do you approach the situation?

A) Heroically confront the masked woman (gives up initiative in exchange for a reputation boost)

B) Sneak up on the woman and try to subdue her (hard stealth roll, if successful ends encounter)

C) Try talking to someone in line (easy luck roll)

D) Charge at her and attack her (medium combat roll)

E) User suggestions


299b6f No.32401

>>32400

C

sometime the simplest choice is the best


e8687b No.32402

B


cfc9b4 No.32403

>>32400

D

If she has everyone mind-controlled, then talking to them won't do us any good because they probably can't answer us in the first place. And if she hasn't mind-controlled them, then there may be nothing to gain from talking to them, and it may just waste the chance of a surprise attack.


96a7b0 No.32404


899f0b No.32405

>>32400

D only to use our combat modifier


cbdc76 No.32406


9c3c6d No.32425


a24e99 No.32429


772d67 No.32430


9eebf1 No.32432

>>32402

>>32404

>>32425

>>32430

B it is. Give me a 75+ stealth roll


dd06a2 No.32433

Dice rollRolled 39 (1d100)

>>32432

Rawl for glory


9eebf1 No.32434

>>32433

(75+ stealth roll… 39 rolled – Fail)

You try to creep up on this mysterious masked woman, but before you can get within reaching distance of her, without so much as glancing behind herself, she starts speaking in a tone somewhere between playful and commanding.

“I know you’re trying to sneak up on me. It’s not going to work. Save yourself the effort and don’t even try it.” You immediately reconsider your approach as you notice the confidence and the authoritativeness of her voice. She’s right, you reason. She noticed your presence and your plan was totally dependent on taking her by surprise. Normally, you’d probably feel compelled to try a standard attack because of your approach’s failure, but for some reason doing something like that is unthinkable. You know your mind well enough to know that you wouldn’t just shut down your approach like this if this woman wasn’t somehow exerting some kind of influence over you. As you struggle to find out what to do, the woman turns around, looks you over, and starts speaking to herself.

“Oh my, isn’t this just a delectable little morsel. She dresses a little too conservatively for my taste, but even past that garish costume I can see she has a decent figure. She looks to be in her prime, too. Maybe, it would be worthwhile to take her with me after I grab this cash.”

(give me a 25+ perception check)

(also give me a 35+ will check to free yourself to make an action)


dd06a2 No.32435

Dice rollRolled 80 (1d100)

>>32434

Perc


8fe72b No.32436

Dice rollRolled 79 (1d100)

>>32434

Will

Critfail


9eebf1 No.32437

>>32435

>>32436

(20+ perception check… 80 rolled – Pass)

A smile appears on the masked woman’s gorgeous lips as she looks over you. You notice that her teeth are mostly perfect, but her canines are unusually large and fang-like. The possible explanation that immediately springs to your mind upon noticing that is the possibility that this masked woman is a vampiress. As far as you know, vampirism isn’t actually something that happens in your world, but it is full of many strange things, so it doesn’t strike you as totally impossible.

After the masked woman finishes appraising you, she makes eye contact with you and starts addressing you.

“Sorry, dear. I almost forgot you can still listen to me. I suppose I should properly introduce myself. My name is Mircalla. I am in desperate need of money for reasons I can’t delve into right now, but you can rest assured knowing that it’s going to a good cause. Unfortunately, my natural gifts lend themselves best to collecting money in ways your culture considers illegal, which seems to be why we are at odds right now. I don’t want to be at odds with you, I want you to serve me in the ways I see fit. Of course I’ll need your consent for that. I do have ethical standards to uphold, after all. When I’m done rounding up this money, I’ll let you come with me if you want.”

(35+ Will check… 79 rolled – Pass)

Realizing the nature of Mircalla allows you to pull up the strength of will you needed to break her influence over your mind. You break from her power over you as she turns back to deal with the bank teller. If Mircalla really is a vampiress, she may be much stronger and quicker than she appears. You don’t carry a stake, a crucifix, garlic, or holy water with you, so the traditional solutions to her are out of the question. Mircalla doesn’t seem to notice that you are free of her will, but the second you start to act against her, she may take issue with you.

How do you want to deal with Mircalla?

A) Try the stealthy approach again (hard stealth roll)

B) Hit her as hard as you can with your escrima sticks (medium combat roll)

C) Run away (easy agility roll, reputation loss)

D) User suggestions

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269a54 No.32438


96a7b0 No.32439


90cb99 No.32440


50e9c0 No.32442

>>32437

D) Ask her what she is.

maybe she likes to monologue

we should also consider going with her to find out where she lives/figure out how to deal with her instead of rushing in without a clue. Try to be a bit more sneaky.


899f0b No.32443

>>32437

I agree with >>32442

Keep her talking, if we cannot stop her today it may help us later.


8fe72b No.32445


cfc9b4 No.32446

>>32437

B

Let's fuck her shit up


a6310e No.32453

>>32437

B

Punch the shit out of this bitch


9eebf1 No.32454

>>32438

>>32439

>>32440

>>32445

>>32446

>>32453

B wins. Give me a 55+ combat check with your +5 bonus from training last night.


1d7de7 No.32455

Dice rollRolled 66 (1d100)

>>32454

roll


048aff No.32461

>>32454

We have two sticks right?

We can form a cross


9eebf1 No.32471

>>32461

Yeah, that'll be an option next update, but simply making the shape of a cross might not be enough to win you this encounter.

Unfortunately I'll have to put off the next update until either tomorrow (December 4th) or Saturday (the fifth). I figure it's more likely that it'll be the latter. See you all then.


9eebf1 No.32502

>>32471

Make that tomorrow. I'm fucking tired right now.


9eebf1 No.32553

>>32455

(55+ Combat check… 66+5 rolled – Pass)

You don’t want to try the stealthy approach again. Considering how effortlessly Mircalla neutralized you last time, you doubt you’ll be able to get past her senses if you sneak up to her slowly and deliberately. Instead, you opt to take her by as much surprise as possible with an attack. Mircalla starts loading the money the Teller was piling on his desk into a bag as you ready yourself for the strongest strike you can deliver. Gripping your trusty escrima sticks you rush behind Mircalla and swing as hard as you could, trying to give your hit as much force as possible. Considering that she appears to be vampiric, you don’t have to worry about holding back. Your weapon collides with the back of Mircalla’s skull with an audible “thud”. Simultaneously, you feel the recoil of the impact, which feels more it would if you struck a tree than if you struck a person. Mircalla’s hand reflexively grabs the back of her head, and she lets out an audible groan as she stumbles forward, towards the stacks of money on the Teller’s desk. After she takes a second figuring out what exactly happened, she starts addressing you. “Ow! I guess you must’ve had a stronger will than I though. It’ll make breaking you all the more fun”, you can’t see her face because she’s not facing you, but you can imagine a smile creeping across her face. “I didn’t come here to pick a fight, but if you insist on opposing me, I have no choice.” Mircalla turns around to face you. As she does, you have the time to follow up your strike however you’d like.

What do you do?

A) Follow up with some more strikes (easy combat check)

B) Hold your escrima sticks in the shape of a cross (unknown result)

C) Run away before she can strike back (medium agility check)

D) User Suggestions

Status:

Battlegirl:

HP – 10/10

Horniness - 0/10

Effects:

Trained prior night - +5 to combat rolls

Mircalla:

HP – 16/20

Effects:

Vampire: multiple vulnerabilities uncommon in typical criminals, enhanced attributes

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414ca4 No.32555

>>32553

I want to take the chance with B


dd06a2 No.32556


61487a No.32557


9b4d49 No.32560


899f0b No.32561


d06967 No.32571

>>32553

A

Punches all day ere day


7b96e8 No.32574


cfc9b4 No.32595

>>32553

A

Let's fuck her shit up more

>>32571

This guy knows what I'm talkin' about


96a7b0 No.32597

>>32553

B

Because I want to say "Back! Back, fiend!"

I don't care if it works or fails miserably. I'll laugh either way.


90cb99 No.32602

>>32553

B. Mostly because I want to see the vamp laugh in our face and retaliate. I'm just hoping it doesn't lead to the whole vamp-slave schtick. I hate that crap. Hypnotism's OK though. ;-)


9eebf1 No.32623

>>32602

>I'm just hoping it doesn't lead to the whole vamp-slave schtick. I hate that crap.

Without spoiling too much, I am not going to derail the story like that.

Anyway, the results of the votes:

>>32555

>>32556

>>32557

>>32560

>>32574

>>32597

>>32602

B wins by a large margin. Give me a 50+ Faith roll.


899f0b No.32624

Dice rollRolled 78 (1d100)

>>32623

Cause I gotta have faith…


9eebf1 No.32626

>>32624

(50+ faith check… 78 rolled – pass)

Thinking fast, you recall that you could position your two escrima sticks to form a cross. Your knowledge of vampires is mostly limited to a few movies you watched back before your parents died, but you remember that religious symbols are supposed to fill the evil creatures with a sense of terrible dread. As you form the shape, you silently pray for some kind of good higher power to drive this evil woman from these people’s lives. Like one of the heroes from one of those movies, you shout “Back! Back, fiend!” Before the vampiress can retaliate against your earlier attack, she sees your sign and as if fleeing for her life, turns around, grabs the bag (which has only been filled with a small portion of the money she intended to steal), and darts out of the door with unnatural speed.

Do you take off after Mircalla?

A) Yes (hard agility check)

B) No (tend to the victims of her spell instead)


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269a54 No.32628


90cb99 No.32629


970f31 No.32630


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1bef12 No.32633


9b4d49 No.32634

>>32626

B. Vamps are too fast. Be kind instead.


96a7b0 No.32636


cfc9b4 No.32647

>>32626

A

Let's go finish the bitch off


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986d7d No.32658


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d06967 No.32661


ab71e2 No.32792

Considering that B is ahead by three votes, I figure it's safe to declare it the winner. I'll have to put off the next update until Wednesday, unfortunately. Been real busy.


986d7d No.33196

>>32792

Can we get another revival from the dead


54c3d9 No.33338

>>33196

Absolutely. I really did intend to come back with an update on the Wednesday I claimed I would, but things got busy then the Infinity Next migration happened, then they got busy again, and Christmas tore me away from /storytiem/, but I'm back.

I got the next update mostly written, but I'm a little reluctant to continue the story until the Infinity Next transition is completed (whenever that will be), because all posts made between the failed transition and now will not be saved when we actually move over to Infinity Next. I kind of like having it so that the threads of Adventures of Battlegirl are mostly in-tact so that if (for whatever reason) people wanted to view the threads as they were posted in their (mostly) unedited format (rather than use the Google Doc), they could. Continuing the story would create a bit of a gap for people viewing after the Infinity Next migration, which would force them to either miss either the most recent posts or force them to use the Google Doc. If no one else really cares that much about being able to read it in the thread instead of in Google Docs in the future, I'll get the update finished and post it by tomorrow (for real this time).

There are obviously ways for me to work around the problem such as re-posting any updates past this point after the transition, but I'd also like to keep votes and rolls (and feedback) in tact as well, which I couldn't repost. In the absence of statements to the contrary, I will assume no one is as hung up on keeping the thread in tact as I am and update as planned.


cfc9b4 No.33351

>>33338

Personally, I think it's fine to continue. I don't know when the Infinity Next migration will fully take effect, and from what I'm seeing (especially after last week's major flop, and the notice that was posted about it) 8ch's owners aren't entirely too certain about when that'll be either. You could potentially be stuck on hiatus for another couple weeks (or even an entire month) depending on how this shit flies.

Moreover, after it takes effect and it's all finally set in place, all you need to do is just post something in what remains of this thread explaining what happened and that the rest of the story is in the docs. I don't think any new readers should be too cross about it.


9cd2d0 No.33365

>>33351

I agree… simply because I cannot wait for the return of Battlegirl :D


54c3d9 No.33386

Your concern for Mircalla’s victims outweighs your desire to try your luck at catching the fleeing vampiress. She only took a small portion of the money that she intended to steal, so your encounter with her was mostly successful anyway. You start observing the bank customer closest to you. He is a well-dressed middle-aged man with mostly dark brown hair fashioned in a fairly typical short and orderly haircut, which is flanked by two horizontal streaks of gray hair. His eyes are open but blank, like he’s staring off into the distance, but you can tell by the unfocussed look in his pupils that he can’t see much of anything in front of himself. Despite this, you notice a smile across his face. Actually, looking around you see all of the people in the bank who are enthralled by Mircalla (both the male and the female victims) seem strangely pleased. In looking around, you couldn’t help but notice that some of the men were sporting erections. You assume if they were cognizant of anything going on around them, they’d probably make some attempt to conceal it, but it’s a wonder that any of these people can even stand up. It’s possible that some of the women may be similarly stimulated, but you find your observations are starting to wander a little too far off course. You have to try to help these people.

You wave your hand in front of the customer’s face and notice no response from his eyes. He isn’t even remotely close to tracking the motion of your hand, even as it is mere inches away from his face. You try to get his attention by addressing him directly. “Sir, are you ok? Can you hear me?” to which he replies “Yes, mistress…” in a drowsy-sounding voice. Clearly this man doesn’t understand who you are or why you’re in the bank, but he might be responding to your voice. As you try to figure out the nature of the apparent trance all of the people in the bank have fallen under, all of the entranced people in the bank simultaneously collapse, as though all the muscles that were supporting their bodies gave out at once. Instinctively, you reach out to try to soften the impact of the customer you were observing as he falls to the ground.

(Give me a 45+ strength check to see how that goes)


9cd2d0 No.33387

Dice rollRolled 46 (1d100)

>>33386

Strength


54c3d9 No.33418

>>33387

(45+ strength check… 46 rolled – Pass)

You reach out and grab the man by his armpits as you notice him starting to collapse. The man is of a fairly slim size, but he is still an adult and you’re still supporting his body from an awkward angle. Your body shakes from the strain as you lower the man so that he doesn’t hit the floor as suddenly as the other people around you. You’d like to have helped them as well, but you’re only one person, and this man happened to be the only one close enough for you to attend to. You squat down as necessary as you position the man’s lower half so that it’s completely flat on the ground. Without even thinking about it, your feet position themselves on either side of his hips so that you can support both sides of his upper body as you lower it. Squatting as low as you can go and leaning forward as necessary, your quivering arms and legs succeed in lowering his upper body as painlessly towards the ground as possible. As soon as you’re able to let go of his body, you notice that the man seems to have regained consciousness. In fact, you notice all the people around you are already getting up. “Well, this would have to be the most welcome sight I’ve woken up to in a while. I must still be dreaming…”, you hear the voice under you say. You go back upright as fast as possible, half to relieve yourself of the strain of lowering the man and half to get out of the compromising position you had to get in to do so.

When everyone regains consciousness, you find the manager of the bank reacting in a panic as the bank teller informs him that he doesn’t know what piles of cash are doing on the desk. You are the only witness to the crime, so you explain to them everything you know and they immediately contact the police in response. A few minutes later, Detective Grayson, who you had become acquainted with in your first crime-fighting outing in Utopolis, arrives on the scene. You tell him everything that had happened: everyone being entranced (including you, to a lesser extent), Mircalla’s talks with you, your fight with her, your suspicions that she is a vampire, and how she got away with the money. Detective Grayson appears not to be totally convinced by your story. “Utopolis has some pretty weird crimes, believe me; I’ve had to deal with a few of them. A vampire robbing a bank for what she describes as a “good cause”, though? That’s unheard of. In fact, vampires in general are unheard of. I don’t know why the woman you’re describing would have fled in that case, maybe she didn’t like the direction your little scuffle was going in or maybe she’s a devout nonbeliever, but I highly doubt she’s a vampire. Still, the other witness testimony seems to support your version of the events (at least as far as everyone being under some sort of spell is concerned), so you’re not a suspect in any of this right now. We’ll just have to continue our investigation and if she tries something like this again, try to stop her. You’re free to go now.”

You’ve spent enough of your night talking to the cops and you don’t really feel like giving them any more of your time, so you head back to the alley you hid your backpack in, change into your street clothes when the coast is clear, and head back to your room. Kelly is watching the evening news, which is sure to report on your exploits in apparent disbelief of the story after your story got put through a game of telephone being played by the police and reporters. Nonetheless, the story arouses public interest towards Battlegirl, providing a reputation boost (+15, now 795/1000) and makes it clear that you have an interest in stopping all major crimes in Utopolis, not just ones involving thugs. After the reporters finish talking about it, Kelly turns all of her attention towards you. She wants to know everything about what happened. It’s strange, you didn’t think your roommate had that much interest in vampires or anything supernatural, but she asks question after question about your experience tonight. Most of the questions you couldn’t answer to your roommate’s satisfaction, such as how Mircalla did anything she did, what exactly was her cause, or where she came from. Despite that, you feel that Kelly’s interest in your exploits has also risen as a result of the story and telling her everything she wanted to know allowed the two of you to bond. You feel like some of the recent problems in your friendship have healed up.

You still have time for some night time activities before bed. What do you want to do?

A) Hang out with Isaac and Hideo

B) Hang out with Kelly

C) Go visit Tony

D) Go visit Gabby

E) Train

F) User Suggestions


1bef12 No.33424


15d48a No.33428


dd06a2 No.33430


9cd2d0 No.33431


8fe72b No.33445


54c3d9 No.33462

>>33424

>>33428

>>33430

You’ve been having some fun talking with your closest friend, so it only makes sense to continue spending time with her. The news quietly ended while you were talking to Kelly about your encounter with Mircalla, but you both were so wrapped up in your conversation that you didn’t really notice. Kelly’s curiosity regarding your encounter with the vampiress appears to be mostly satisfied, but she seems like she might be open to speculate about the encounter. Otherwise, you could talk to her about things going on in your civilian life or enquire about things going on in hers. Of course, if just talking isn’t interesting enough for you, you’re free to suggest an activity to do with her instead.

What do you want to do?

A) Speculate about Mircalla

B) Talk about classes

C) Talk about tutoring Kyle

D) Ask Kelly about her day

E) Talk about a mutual acquaintance

F) Watch a tv show with Kelly

G) User Suggestions


9cd2d0 No.33463


986d7d No.33480


dd06a2 No.33484


1bef12 No.33485

>>33462

Ask how it's going with tony and offer help


55536a No.33622

>>33463

>>33480

>>33484

“So… how has your day gone?”

“I can’t say that I fought vampires or werewolves or anything like that. For the most part, it’s just been an average Wednesday for me. Econ is a snoozefest and calc has been keeping me busy. I haven’t been able to get much closer to Tony, but I’ve heard about a party that’s going to be held on Friday night that he should be at. If you feel up to it, you’re free to go as well. It’s at the frat. Our school’s football team is going to play the Legionnaires, who are from a school about our size, so it might be the first serious game of the year. Hopefully Tony and the others won’t be too engrossed in it, but if they are, it would be fun to have you along.”

You could think of better ways to spend your Friday night than watching football, but you don’t tell your friend that. She thinks you’re overly obsessed with fighting crime as it is, and if she knew you were making plans to try to stop (or at least disrupt) that illegal fighting tournament you were investigating (that is also being held on Friday night), she’d probably start worrying about your safety again. She has done too much of that lately, and you can always tell her later (such as via a note you leave in your room). That way she might not need to find out unless something actually does go wrong. Your conversation with Kelly doesn’t yield much more useful information. She seems happy that you’re taking some interest in her life. You both realize that it is getting late, so you make your way to your beds then drift off into a well-earned night’s sleep.


55536a No.33623

>>33622

Sorry about the delay coming up with such a minor update. As the wording of the post suggests, it marks the end of the current day (Day 11, Wednesday 2) of the story. I think I'll be writing a gallery scene before I update with the continuation onto the next current day. It'll probably be a fairly modest scene, so I wouldn't expect anything on the level of the second or third galleries, but it should be fun to write (and hopefully to read) nonetheless.


55536a No.33625

File: 1451945154720.jpeg (154.51 KB, 679x1000, 679:1000, Vampirella.jpeg)

Megan Thompson lies peacefully in her bed, totally oblivious to the fact that she has aroused the personal interest of a being far greater than she could ever even fathom. Tonight, like many nights in her life, she receives a visit from the great cosmic overseer, the Voyeur. An image of the voyeur appears in the room shared by Megan Thompson and her best friend Kelly. It is not the true corporeal manifestation of the Voyeur, he is condemned to be unable to physically interact with any of the Earth’s inhabitants. However, the voyeur is able to interact with their minds as they sleep, as the helpless superheroine in front of him now is. The Voyeur’s cosmic awareness alerts him to the presence of other observers from outside of the bounds of even his multi-verse. Turning to address you, the reader, the Voyeur begins a monologue.

The Voyeur: As you all know, I have watched Megan Thompson from afar for a very long time. I usually restrain myself, but tonight she had a very close run-in with one of her foes. It would bring me great pleasure to see her face the realization of what would have happened if at a pivotal moment in her encounter with the vampiress Mircalla, a higher power than even me had not intervened on her behalf. Vampires tend to be aggressive atheists. The only thing they have more disdain for than the powers of the cross yielded by the righteous are false moralizers: hypocrites who take up the cross but are too lazy to even go to church or pray; hypocrites who condemn the vampires’ demonic nature whilst themselves leading sinful or corrupt existences. This is the story of how the vampiress Mircalla would have punished Battlegirl for taking up the cross had she not had the faith to back it up. I call this little story…

Semi-canonical gallery 4: Take Your Cross and Shove It!

Battlegirl reaches outwards with her escrima sticks in hand as she faces her opponent and lets out a righteous-sounding call of “Back! Back, fiend!” Despite her resolve, Battlegirl’s vampiric opponent doesn’t even falter before the sight of the makeshift crucifix. In fact, Mircalla lets out a chuckle as she lets out a command to remain still that Battlegirl’s body feels compelled to obey. “My my, what have we here? It looks like you must not be as pure as the way you dress yourself and the way you fight for justice lets on. If you were, that cross of yours would have definitely sent me running. You’re a smart little self-righteous slut, though. You were able to find out what I was, but you still weren’t able to stop me…”

While Mircalla monologues, Battlegirl tries to will her way out of the vampiress’ spell as she did last time, but she has no success. It seems Mircalla took into account that Battlegirl would resist this time. “Sorry if I’m boring you, but I really really like to play with my food. Don’t get too frightened though, I may have called you food, but I have no intent to feed on you, I’m not a monster. I just mean it metaphorically. I am going to make you entertain these people here while I gather up my money.” Battlegirl’s arms hang stiffly in an extended position keeping her cross in place as Mircalla saunters over to stand behind her. Mircalla addresses everyone in the bank as she issues a command: “Everyone, I would appreciate it if you would direct your attention to this little do-gooder here. She fancied herself as some kind of champion of Justice, but at her core, she is just another slut – no different from me. She’ll be demonstrating her true nature for your entertainment.” The crowd turns to all face Battlegirl as the pale, beautiful woman slides her tights to the floor. She slowly slides Battlegirl’s modest blue underwear to the ground, revealing her naked sex to every customer in the establishment.

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55536a No.33626

File: 1451945222384.jpg (91.55 KB, 952x700, 34:25, Vampirella Crucifix.jpg)

>>33625

Mircalla addresses her directly “Alright, Battlegirl, what I want you to do is sit down on the ground and spread your legs as far apart as you can.” Once again, Battlegirl’s body yields to her command without resistance. Mircalla joins Battlegirl by sitting behind her, her legs crossing over the top of Battlegirl’s thighs as her flexibility is a little less than hers. With her left hand, Mircalla grabs Battlegirl’s still-clothed breast and starts rolling it around with her palm. Her right hand explores the entrance to Megan’s pussy. The vampiress plays with the helpless superheroine for a moment, evidently enjoying herself as she prepares her victim’s body for her next command. “Alright, now what I want you to do is to take this cross you have prepared here” – Mircalla’s left hand points to the crucifix Battlegirl had maintained a rigid hold over – “and use it on this” – Mircalla spreads Battlegirl’s now-lubricated vaginal lips with her right hand. “I’ll even give you a little inspiration as a parting gift”. Mircalla kisses Battlegirl’s cheek, gets upright, and saunters over to the stacks of cash on the desk. As Battlegirl’s cross finds its way to her entrance, her mind gets clouded with visions of the customers in the bank growing unruly at watching her show. In the vision, which Battlegirl is only scarcely aware is a vision, the men of the bank, previously meek civilians who probably work mundane jobs and live mundane lives, approach her. As the makeshift cross slides inside her, Battlegirl imagines the men taking off their pants and revealing their erect members. Middle-aged workers, who Megan would have no sexual attraction to at all start to take turns fucking her, before depositing their seed into her womb. Their wives and daughters, as well as the other female patrons look on in scorn, accepting the men’s actions and placing the blame squarely on the superheroine’s shoulders. After all, she had clearly seduced them. It’s not their fault they were responding to their basic urges after she had presented herself before them so willingly, so lustfully, so brazenly. In reality, she knows that she is merely hallucinating under Mircalla’s spell, but the combination of the escrima-stick cross’s assault on her pussy, the visions of surrender to base urges that were never really there, and the knowledge that all this time, the civilians she tried to protect are now watching her masturbate like some wanton harlot force Megan to reach a climax.

Battlegirl doesn’t even notice as Mircalla strides out of the bank with her bag full of cash in tow. Mircalla’s spell fortunately doesn’t force Battlegirl to masturbate past her own orgasm, but unfortunately for Megan, the customers come back to full control of their bodies before she cools down from her orgasm. Her momentary pleasurable relief is rudely interrupted by the female customers’ shrieks as they see the superheroine with her pants still down in post-orgasmic bliss. Moving as quickly as she can, Battlegirl pulls up her tights and underwear and flees the bank so as to save herself the embarrassment that would come from sticking around any longer.

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9cd2d0 No.33634

>>33625

>>33626

I like it, the gift of little inspiration was really nice.


55536a No.33820

Hi guys. Sorry for leaving you all hanging for months yet again. I'd like to say that life got in the way or something like that, but that wouldn't exactly be the truth. The truth is, I keep hitting writer's block or losing my drive as I write this story. When I get going, I really get going, it feels like I can hammer out chapter after chapter but that pace isn't stable. I've found through experience that shooting for a lower standard of output is even worse for my creative drive, I get hesitant to come back after a break and it keeps on piling up until I don't even want to think about Battlegirl. I've decided to officially end my time writing The Adventures of Battlegirl.

To be clear, my decision isn't motivated by the shakeups to 8chan's stability or by everyone's migration to Anonkun. Nor is it motivated by anything to do with the reception I've received. You guys have been nothing less than a spectacular audience and it was great writing for you. I just don't have the drive to write anymore and I don't want to string anyone along farther than I already have. In retrospect, the structure of The Adventures of Battlegirl was too open-ended and long-form to ever keep a good level of output going.

I'm not sure if anyone will read this post because as of the long belated time I'm writing it, /storytiem/'s crowd is already long gone, but I felt like I should give you guys some closure.

This is kind of narcissistic of me to think, but in the event that anyone wanted to use part or whole of the setting, characters, events, etc. of The Adventures of Battlegirl they have my full permission to do so. One good thing about it being established that it is set in a multiverse is any incongruities between writers (if you feel compelled to acknowledge them) can be explained away as being because the story is set in a different universe.

If anyone has any questions about my intentions about hanging plot threads or details about the world I envisioned I'd be happy to answer them. That goes regardless of if why you're asking is a desire to continue the story in some form or if it's just to satisfy your curiosity.

Thanks again for putting up with the long absences and the occasional clusterfuck.


986d7d No.33824

>>33820

Rip battlegirl

Op if you read this is there anyway you could end it like have us go on a patrol and get drugged again and sold into a sex slave or are you too burnt out?


55536a No.33825

>>33824

I've got mixed feelings on leaving Megan with a bad end that she didn't actually earn, but it's better than leaving it without any in-story conclusion. Sure, I'll write a gallery/epilogue to that effect.

I'll try to get it done by Friday next week (March 18). It might get done earlier, but I'll try to be serious about meeting the deadline.

If any one has any suggestions for how they'd like the scene to play out or what kind of content they'd like (or wouldn't like) in it, I'll be glad to hear them out. I can't guarantee that I'll be able to write it to everyone's satisfaction, but I'll try my best to make it a good send-off.


dd06a2 No.33830

>>33825

Have her lose to a mind-controlling villain and become his fuckpet or have her lose and be put in stocks for the entertainment of thugs.


1bef12 No.33836

>>33825

I´d like to have her friend raped too


1bef12 No.33837

Somethimg like she went as a backup during the infiltration mission and things went bad


0b570b No.33839

>>33825

RIP thread


55536a No.33840

>>33839

The final update's late but it's coming. It'll be done within a couple hours, I promise.


55536a No.33841

>>33840

Make that a few hours. It'll be huge. Like Great Wall of America huge. I'm still currently writing it (about halfway through it) and I'll have to find accompanying images (no idea how many I'll need), but it will be the biggest gallery yet (and some of it will be porn!)


55536a No.33842

File: 1458379821864.jpg (114.6 KB, 850x478, 425:239, Blowjob.jpg)

The scene is a cosmic void. There is blackness all around and the faint twinkling of entire galaxies in the distance. The Voyeur hovers, suspended in place, unmoving despite the slow but ever present movement of stars in the galaxies that surround him. Despite the vaccuum of space surrounding him, somehow the cosmic might of the Voyeur allows him to speak.

“This is the end. The Higher Authority has deemed that our story is coming to a premature close. It's a shame, I was starting to really like playing with Megan's mind whilst she was in her slumber. For some of you, this may be good news in a sense. Although this story comes to an end, Megan's journey doesn't actually end in any kind of defeat. Her resolve wasn't broken and her body was only violated on one occasion. Regardless of how I feel about it, the Higher Authority has granted me enough power left to give you one vision of a future that wasn't, but could have been. One so disastrous so as to bring about the end of Battlegirl's career as a superheroine and a start of something else entirely. As a final parting gift, please accept this little tale I like to call…”

What Might Have Been

Megan went through the classes in her coming days as usual and arranged a police raid on the warehouse where the illegal tournament was being held through intel gathered through her security guard fried-with-benefits, Paul (obtained at the cost of one blowjob), and relayed to her contact on the Utopolis City Police Force, Detective Grayson. The attendees were arrested without exception, including the Burger Kingpin himself and several of his high value enforcers. During the trial phase, it became revealed to the accused that Detective Grayson's contact that brought the information to the police's attention was indeed Battlegirl. Megan was forced to testify as herself, exposing her secret identity before the court to try to put away the biggest threat to the good of Utopolis. The high powered law team the Burger Kingpin hired was not only able to obtain a lot of personal information from Megan (under threat of perjury) during the cross-examination stage, they were able to reveal that the initial arrest paperwork was somehow technically unlawful, freeing their client. Despite the charges being dropped, the legitimate business front held by the Burger Kingpin began to collapse, some of his enforcers defected, and the Burger Kingpin is forced to begin operating more directly as a criminal to maintain what remains of his empire.

The Burger Kingpin became fixated on revenge. He remembered back to the one time he was in supreme power over Battlegirl. She was helpless before him as he raped her high up in his office. He was even generous enough to let her go and assume that she'd learn her lesson. But Battlegirl didn't learn not to meddle in his affairs. She kept on trying to mess with him and even somehow stumbled across one of his most valuable, directly connected, and blatantly illegal operations. And she shut it down. The Burger Kingpin's ego couldn't handle it. This abuse of his generosity could not stand unpunished. He vowed that Battlegirl would again yield her body to him and that this time, he would not be the only one to take her. All his men who were wronged by her would join in his revenge. And through taking command of her lithe, athletic body, he would renew his enforcers' commitment to his cause and be able to reconstruct his organization.


55536a No.33843

File: 1458380050190.jpg (71.54 KB, 850x566, 425:283, arrest.jpg)

>>33842 (continued)

On a patrol on the South Side of Utopolis, shortly outside of Kyle's house, Battlegirl passed by a pair of cops, who were unbeknownst on the Burger Kingpin's payroll. She tensed up as they passed by her, remembering the encounter where she was chloroformed and brought back to the Burger Kingpin's skyscraper. The police passed her without incident, allowing her to feel a moment of relief until she felt something cold and metallic pointing up against her side. Battlegirl tensed up as she noticed the object was a pistol as a redheaded thug affiliated with the Burger Kingpins started talking. “Sorry, lady. Heard about how you were captured last time and just wanted to put a little twist on it. These fellows here” - he gestures to the two cops - “are, as you might have suspected, with me. The boss doesn't like what you've done to him and his business lately. I suggest you come quietly, unless you want to end up splattered across that wall there.”

Normally, Battlegirl would have valiantly tried to fight, but forced into her first encounter with a gun pulled on her in a situation with not one, but three enemies who are all potentially armed (two of which wearing police uniforms), Battlegirl decided to drop her escrima sticks and hold her arms up. One of the police officers came up behind her, brought her arms behind her back, pushed her against the wall, and handcuffed her. He repeatedly pressed his obviously erect crotch against her backside, brought one of his hands to her tits, the other to her crotch, leaned in, and whispered in her ear, “soon”. After this display, he forced her back to her feet. The two fake cops led Battlegirl and the gang member to their squad car and set them in the back seat. Before getting in the squad car himself, the partner of the arresting officer handed the gang member a black cloth. The gang member tied the cloth around Battlegirl's head, blocking her vision and pulled down her pants. Battlegirl knew it was hopeless to resist as the thug groped her exposed pussy, stretching its lips apart and teasing his finger inside. The gang member also pulls her top up to expose her tits. As he played with her privates, the redheaded gang member told her “You're going to like what we have in store for you. We'll have a few of our mutual friends, but you might see a couple of familiar faces at our little surprise party. It'll be a blast.”

The car took some turns, but in response to the sensory deprivation, cryptic comments from the thug, and molestation that was occurring, Battlegirl was unable to keep track of what the turns were or how long it was between them. Finally the car stopped.

Battlegirl feels herself being pulled out of the door and to her feet. She hears some familiar voices yelling in excitement. “They did it, they actually did it. Finally we can have revenge on theatrical puta!” cries out a voice she remembers as the Burger Kings thug, Lingo. She gets led into some kind of open space as her blindfold is finally removed. Battlegirl notices she's in an open court yard of a large building and surrounded by a very diverse looking crowd of male thugs and low lives. In the center are a series of three unoccupied pillories. The guards escorting Battlegirl remove her handcuffs and lead her up to one of the pillories. They position her wrists and neck in the appropriate holes, shut the pillory and lock it so that she can't escape no matter how much force she uses.

The Burger Kingpin steps forward from the center of the crowd, holds his arms up, and addresses his men.

“Tonight we have a momentous occasion. Our organization has been plagued with unforeseen setbacks, the largest of which was induced by one culprit, none other than this self-styled superheroine, a girl you know by the name of Battlegirl, and I know by the name of Megan Thompson. Tonight, and for evermore, she is to pay for the damages she has caused to this organization with her body.” - a round of cheering, applauding, and yelling in the affirmative erupts from the crowd. One guy shouts, “Fuck her, I will”, resulting in a few chuckles.


55536a No.33844

File: 1458380369082-0.jpg (214.81 KB, 850x1201, 850:1201, Pillory.jpg)

File: 1458380369082-1.jpeg (411.23 KB, 800x600, 4:3, stocks 2.jpeg)

>>33843 (continued)

The Burger Kingpin clears his throat and continues, “She will not be the only one to pay for the cost of her actions. One of her dearest friends will also be punished as an example that if you fuck with the Burger Kings, it's not just going to be you that pays the price. I intend to invoke my right of Primae Noctis on the girl of which I speak, but many of you will gain access thereafter. As you may have noticed as she entered, Megan here has been used by me in the past. As a result, once I'm done speaking she will be immediately open to the public.” - Cheering once again comes from the crowd, but one thug Megan recognizes as the Italian American thug Rocco speaks up, “Yo, boss. What's with the third one?”

“I was just getting to that. The third pillory is reserved for a special guest of ours. As I understand it, she's an acquaintance of Megan here, but she's not here because of that. The third guest is here because she ripped us off. I'm supposed to be the only one that robs my banks. That absolutely cannot be tolerated. I have one word of warning, though. Do not take advantage of her mouth. As with our second girl, I have not yet been with our third girl, so once again I shall invoke the right of Primae Noctis”.

“Some ground rules before we start…” - the crowd's adulation begins to nervously turn towards booing. One bolder member of the crowd yells “Get on with it!”, which is echoed by another. - “Normally, I would not tolerate this kind of disruption, but tonight I'm feeling generous. Do what you want, but do not harm the girls, they are to be all of ours to use as we wish. You may use any of their three holes with the exception of the one I warned you about. Wait your turn, and if you feel like it, feel free to take care of your own business and share your product with the girls. Oh, and start slow. These girls will have to last us. Otherwise, have fun.” The Burger Kingpin heads off as the crowd starts to organize around Battlegirl. The arresting officer unzips in front of Battlegirl as his partner does the same behind her. The arresting officer pinches her nose to force her lips open as his partner uses his hands to pry her legs apart and the two force their cocks inside Megan simultaneously. Megan tries her best not to provide any additional pleasure to her rapists as the one fucking her face tries to talk directly to her… “You know, this will only take longer and be less pleasant for you if you keep resisting us.”

Seeing some reason to his point, Megan begins to roll her tongue across the officer's cock. “I don't know man. From where I'm fucking, this girl is real tight. It's a shame we didn't get to do this last time we took her. Way better than my wife at any rate.” The arresting officer replies, “Tell me about it…”. The partner stops fucking Megan to ask his fellow officer what the hell that's supposed to mean. “I didn't mean nuthin'. I'm too caught up in enjoying this blowjob. Now get back to fucking her because the quality really suffers.” The partner pulls his cock out of Battlegirl. “You know what, man. I'm tired of indirectly causing pleasure for you after that shit you said. Let's swap places.” The arresting officer agrees with a smile on his face as the men swap places. Battlegirl obediently but unwillingly takes the partner's cock in her mouth noticing the two sensations of his pre-cum leaking and her vaginal juices as the arresting officer goes behind her. Instead of prying Megan's legs open, the officer positions his lubricated cock by her anus. “You know how I said 'soon' earlier today. This was what I meant.” With that he takes her anal virginity. Now being fucked without taking any direct pleasure, Battlegirl takes her hands, which were briefly pressing upwards against her restraints in a vain attempt to break free and tries subconsciously to push them down towards her nipples and her pussy. The restraints would not allow her that pleasure, and she let out a frustrated moan, which reverberated on her facefucker's cock. Battlegirl also tightened her legs and rocked her hips, trying to achieve self-satisfaction. The officer at her mouth says, “I don't know what you're doing, but keep it up and I'll forgive you, partner. I feel about ready to blow any second now.” The officer's twitching cock serves as proof of the statement. Megan's assfucker increased the rate at which he was pushing into her as his partner pulled out of her mouth. The assfucker cums inside Megan's previously virginal ass whilst his partner jerks himself to completion and finishes across her face, ropes of cum landing across the top of her hair, on her mask, and on her mouth, dripping onto Megan's chin.


55536a No.33845

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>>33844 (continued)

As the two officers finish, a lot of commotion occurs in the crowd, which causes Megan to remember that she just got raped and sodomized in front of a crowd. Her cheeks blush from what's left of her shame as she sees the crowd around her. At first she expected it to just be more members of the gang eager to fuck her, but the crowd parts as a familiar face is led through. The familiar face is none other than her best friend, Kelly, and she arrived in nothing but her birthday suit. Kelly was not handcuffed, but was being strong-armed by two thugs she recognized as Tyrone and Vid. The two thugs lead Kelly to the adjacent pillory and close it on her. As Kelly looks around in confusion as to why any of this is happening, she sees the cum-covered girl next to her. Kelly's deep blue eyes widen in shock as she yells “Megan!” she yells in surprise before gasping. Out of the crowd, steps the Burger Kingpin. “Sweet, sweet beautiful Kelly. Don't worry about your friend's secret. She is well known by all of us here. I haven't had the pleasure of your acquaintance yet, but I see you are every bit as lovely as your friend here, perhaps moreso.” The crowd reaction is split with some agreeing and some disagreeing. “Nevertheless, she made the mistake of crossing us, and that is unforgivable. Now you must be brought to pay for it as an example to all of our enemies. But, if you be the good girl I know you can be, I'll be gentle to you. You see, you and I are going to fuck. It's not up to your choice, it's just the way things work around here. I'm King and you're but a humble servant I'm gracing with my presence and my potent seed. If you serve me nicely, I'll be kind in turn. Otherwise this could get very, very uncomfortable for you and your friend here.”

“What should I do?”, Kelly turns to ask Megan. “We don't have a choice. It's easier and quicker to submit than to resist”, her masked friend tells her. The diminutive Burger Kingpin unzips his pants behind Kelly, who parts her legs to allow him access. “Good, it seems you've chosen to be compliant” says the gang leader as he enters Battlegirl's roommate's pussy. As the gang leader thrusts inside Kelly, he tells her, “You know, I'm gifted with unusually potent seed. Once I'm done with you, you'll probably have a little prince growing. I know your friend must have had some experience with that. Based on some of her answers from my trial it seems like she chose to forsake that sacred honor. It's a shame, really, but it seems to have led to a golden opportunity here. What do you say to being the mother of my child?” “No… thanks.”, Kelly responds between moans as the Kingpin skillfully fucks her. “Look, let me put it otherwise. Your future is as a kept woman. If you reject my generosity, you will be fucked day after day by my thugs as a sex slave like your friend, Megan, will be.” - Kelly looks over to Battlegirl who is now being jack-hammered from behind by Tyrone, facefucked by Vid (who is recording the event on his camcorder), and jerking off Jaws and the redheaded gang-member who chatter reveals is named Izzy. “You will become pregnant with their seed and you will give birth to a mere peasant in my empire. Unlike her, you didn't wrong me. You could devote yourself to me. Be my woman and raise my child. You won't be the queen, but you will be a mistress. Tonight I'll let my men have fun with you as I promised, but after that you could secure a better life for yourself. You can even visit your friend and have fun with her if you want to.” Kelly's moans continue as her tits sway, occasionally nearing the bottom post of the pillory. She tries her best to tighten her cunt and provide pleasure to the Kingpin so her rape can end. “All you have to do is tell me to cum inside you.” Kelly listens around, hoping Megan could tell her what to do. All she hears are satisfied moans coming from her best friend, who is, despite herself, enjoying the full length of Tyrone's girth as he has switched to a more slow, deliberate and deep style of fucking the superheroine. Caught up in lust, Kelly makes a brash decision. “Alright, cum inside me. Make me your woman. I don't want to serve any other!” The Burger Kingpin thrusts inside balls deep and lets out his royal seed. The boss's cum fills her womb and he pulls out. “Alright men, new rules. In order to preserve the fidelity of my bond with this girl, Kelly, as my concubine, her vagina is now off-limits to any of you. For the night you may enjoy her ass and her mouth, but never again.”

The two men who Battlegirl was jerking off take the vacancy with Kelly as Tyrone finally ejaculates inside Battlegirl's pussy. “Sweet Christmas, I always wanted to knock up a white girl!”, Tyrone exclaims. “Wonder what her mommy and daddy would think of her now?” Vid ponders as he dutifully records the two men's encounter with the cum-covered and filled Battlegirl.


55536a No.33846

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>>33845

Another bout of commotion happens as the third girl finally shows up. Izzy and Jaws, who were lined up to fuck Kelly's ass and face respectively, let out a groan as the Burger Kingpin calls on them to stop so he can announce the new arrival. A pale brunette in a unitard that has been torn to a few tiny strips and parted to expose her vagina and tits enters. Although exhausted from being fucked every which way, Megan recalls the girl is none other than the vampiress, Mircalla. The Burger Kingpin speaks, “Men, you know normally I'm very polite to women, but this time I'll spare no feelings. This bitch here thought she could take money from us and not face any consequences. I can at least develop a modicum of respect for Megan, although she is reduced to a state lower than she's ever been in her life, she at least played well. In her position I would never have found a way to screw me as bad as she did, which is why she is now being screwed in turn. She was a worthy enemy. This woman, though… she's powerful, but she doesn't use that power towards much of an end. She stole a pathetic amount from my bank, so now she will be punished. Unlike my rather private first taking of Kelly, I encourage all of you to join me in showing this one how she ought to be thought of. Please, cum on this bitch as I fuck her. Those of you lined up to fuck the other girls, feel free to continue what you're doing.”

Mircalla is led to her pillory and her pussy was entered by the Kingpin as unceremoniously and forcefully as he could manage. The crowd of unrecognizable gang members dutifully jerked themselves off in front of her, some thinking about the ways they've seen Battlegirl and this new blond girl get fucked tonight, others focusing on the strangely ethereal beauty of the pale brunette getting fucked in front of them. Her tits, comparatively large when side-by-side with Kelly and Battlegirl, sway freely, occasionally bouncing off of themselves, as she gets roughly fucked by the Burger Kingpin. Glob after glob of sperm splatters across her as the men spread out to get all exposed parts of her body. Her back, her hair, her face, and the sides of her tits all get covered in cum as the girls next her her get fucked. Kelly takes Izzy up her ass and finds the same trouble getting off as Battlegirl, but unlike her friend, she takes her mouth off of the cock she had been dutifully serving to tell her assfucker to play with her pussy and that it's technically not against the rules. Meanwhile, Battlegirl has become totally enthralled in her submission to the thugs she would have previously been busting. Thug after thug ravage her pussy, some telling her about times they were arrested by superheroines and how much they wanted to fuck those whores the same way they're fucking this one. At this point, Megan was finding it hard to take further offense at being called a whore. She was just trying to bring all the men to satisfaction as soon as possible.

More men swap in on every non-restricted position as the party winds down to a close in the middle of the night. The girls are let out of the pillories and they all collapse, lost in pleasure and fatigue. Kelly is escorted to a luxurious bedroom by the Kingpin himself and given a brief tour of the closest bathroom, and shown the buzzer to call up a subject of the Kingpin to help her with whatever she needs. Kelly claims she just needs a shower and sleep for now, and the Kingpin lets her have that with the promise of a full tour in the morning.

Mircalla and Megan are not treated to such luxury. They are led by the thugs who enjoyed their bodies to some spartan looking “subject's quarters”. They are each sprayed down and granted a bar of soap and shown a small bed and Mircalla's coffin, which they must have taken when they captured her. The two get explained by one of the remaining enforcers that their future is as dedicated sexual servants of the subjects, except in the instances in which they are specifically called upon by the Kingpin or any of the Kingpin's concubines.


55536a No.33847

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55536a No.33848

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>>33846 (concluded)

From that point forward, the three girls have the direction of their lives changed radically. Kelly experiences greater luxury than she ever expected to on the outside world. Thanks in part to the keeping of dedicated and desirable sexual slaves, the Burger Kingpin's empire of crime reaches heights unimaginable prior. This affords Kelly with a life of abject luxury, which makes her feel like dutifully serving the man who made this all possible for her and the father of her children. Using her power as a concubine, Kelly would order her best friend to come up and spend time with her. Initially their time together was spent innocently: watching tv and discussing life before. Eventually, Kelly wants to know details about her friend's day to day life. Who gets to fuck her, how their styles compare, what ways does she like it, what ways doesn't she. Sexual questions lead to sexual molestation as Kelly uses her power over Megan to play with the girl's body, to kiss her, and to make Megan serve her sexually. Threesomes happen on occasion between Megan, Kelly, and the Burger Kingpin.

Megan for her part begins to forget life before. She forgets why she would resist the fuckings she gets now. She forgets why she fought crime and why she didn't just submit in the first place. Her strong will is turned into complete submission as she forgets the possibility or desirability of escape. Life as a cumslut is all she knows. Life as their cumslut.

As for Megan and Kelly's children, they were well provided for. Of course, as the eventual heirs to a criminal empire, Kelly's children would be better treated, educated, and lived a life of luxury worthy of royalty. Megan's were treated kindly by the other subjects, because it was almost impossible for them to determine who the father was (other than by referring to just their race). They would all grow up not really knowing their mothers as anything more than housewives, never suspecting that Megan and Kelly were sexual slaves.

As far as Mircalla was concerned, she was used frequently and often. She was provided with blood (pilfered from a bloodbank) to suppress her vampiric thirst, but because of her condition she was incapable of having any children. Perhaps because of her own biological incapability, she took kindly to Megan's children and would usually be one of her boys' first “conquests”.

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55536a No.33849

There you have it, story concluded. Final gallery finally delivered. Unfortunately, I was unable to do anything with mind control this time around (the idea appeals to me and I'd like to have done it properly, but it didn't fit in with the scene I wanted to write). I opted to do a more standard hostage taking instead of repeating the chloroform thing to mix it up a little. Also, the infiltration thing sounded fun, but didn't provide much of an opportunity to pull Kelly into things.

As far as why I included Mircalla of all characters (I'll admit I feel like I've overused her the final updates), the reason is because I had an idea when I was writing her scene in the main story that she was robbing a bank that happened to belong to the Burger Kings. As I've explained earlier in the story, the Burger Kings routinely rob their own banks as a scheme to rip off insurance companies or the banks or some shit. Mircalla wasn't intended to be part of their gang, so it was an outsider basically forcing scandal upon the banks as well as forcing them to pay higher insurance premiums. Naturally, this would piss off the Burger Kings. I intended to, if the story continued, at some point have Megan stumble across Mircalla being raped by a bunch of Burger Kings thugs and basically be given a choice to save a slightly villainous character from rape, watch it happen, ignore it, or whatever else you come up with. Being that the story ended there was no way for me to pay off that plot thread I had planned other than to include her in the above scene. I'm not madly in love with the character. I swear she was intended to be really minor.

So hopefully those of you left are satisfied. It's been fun.


3c2f97 No.33850

>>33849

Thanks for this, man. Hope to see you writing sometime in the future, if nothing changes I think most of us will sit on anonkun, so if you ever want to return to writing try there.




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