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275a38 No.31994

Good evening, Fappers!

I've been considering writing something for a while now, but this is the first chance that I've had time. Well, that's not entirely true, but I didn't have a spur of motivation until now. But here I am now, and I'm happy to bring you Spring Break!

"Jessica. Jessica, wake up. We're here!"

You crack your eyes open, squinting in the bright sunlight. Rubbing your eyes, you sit up, and look around. Your friend Amanda is standing outside the door of the cab, holding your shoulders. She must have shaken you awake.

"Come on, get out of the car!" She exclaims. "You can't expect Caroline to carry your bags the whole time, can you?"

Sliding out of the taxi, you absorb the area. You've finally reached your destination, the Viva Alegre Resort, in Cabo San Lucas.The building before you is huge, and beautiful. You're near the beach, and it's hot. You're glad that you won't be spending time here in heavy clothing, you wouldn't be able to handle it. You look past Amanda, to where Caroline is standing next to your bags, waiting with a smile.

"Come on! Let's go check in!" she exclaims. "I want to start having fun, we've been traveling long enough!"

Still a little asleep, you pay the taxi driver, and take your bags. "You girls ready for our first ever spring break?!" You exclaim with excitement, and both your friends squeal as the three of you move towards the resort entrance.

275a38 No.31995

A short while later, having checked in, gotten to your room, and unpacked, the three of you stand on the balcony, looking over the ocean.

"Amanda, it's, like, so cool that your parents were okay with paying for this," Caroline says, laughing.

"I know! They just made me promise we'd be safe, and they were happy to pay, and give us spending money, and everything!" Amanda agrees. "Oh, speaking of which, they gave me two hundred dollars for both of you. We can convert it later on, or just hope to find people willing to take US money. Anyway, here you go!" She hands you both an envelope, which you thank her for, and put into your bag.

So, do either of you know about stuff that's going on today?" You ask. You hadn't ever been one for planning in advance, and were going to just assume your friends knew where to find the fun. They always did. Besides, three pretty American girls wouldn't have trouble finding a party the week of spring break!

"Totally!" Caroline says. "Robby told me a bunch of people are having a thing down on the beach tonight, we should totally go! Until then, I don't know, we could explore the town, or go down to the beach and have some fun, or hang around the resort and try to meet some people. Of course, if you have any suggestions, let me know!"

a) Explore town.

b) Go to the beach

c) Hang around the resort

d) Suggestions


73bf49 No.31996


84d43e No.31997


19a5fa No.31998


275a38 No.31999


275a38 No.32001

"Let's go into town, we'll spend enough time on the beach later," you decide. Amanda and Caroline both agree, so you gather your things together, and head into town. You don't have a car, as you'll be spending all your time at or near the resort, and you didn't want to spend money on a cab, so the three of you decide to walk. After a short distance, you find yourself in a beautiful city.

You see dozens of other people who are clearly college students on break. You get excited smiles from the girls, and appreciative stares from the guys. All the while, vendors try to sell you souveniers. You find a club, which is closed, but that you consider coming back to at a a later date. your exploration is halted outside a bar, though, when three tall, obviously athletic men stop you.

"Hey there ladies," The one in the middle says. He has sandy blonde hair, and sunglasses.He's quite attractive, and looks to be a few years older than the three of you. "Can we offer to buy you some drinks?"

It's only about 4:30 in the afternoon. Normally you'd never drink this early, but you remind yourself that you are on spring break…

a) Yes

b) No


19a5fa No.32002


1ae9c0 No.32003


84d43e No.32004


9b8abd No.32005


7746b1 No.32006

>>32005

Love the idea for this story!

Voting A because only good things can come from getting drunk at 4:30 in the afternoon with strange men.


5e0c1c No.32008


d70919 No.32012


53cbcc No.32029

>>32001

A

>>32006

I don't see how it could gona be wrong


275a38 No.32055

A wins by a landslide!


275a38 No.32056

I need a Drunk test of 25+!


ff1e00 No.32057

Dice rollRolled 53 (1d100)

>>32056

drunk


275a38 No.32059

"Yeah, totally!" You reply with a smile. Amanda and Caroline both sile sweetly in agreement, and the man takes you under his arm, and leads you into the bar.

It's dimly lit inside, but not in a way that seems dark. There's lighthearted music playing, and you can tell that the bar is intended for tourists, and is fairly high quality. You're the only ones in there, apart from the bartender, an old Mexican man. The man and one of his friends lead the three of you to a booth, while the other friend of his goes to get you drinks. You find yourself sitting next to the man who spoke, with Amanda on your other side. Caroline is across from you, and when the third man returns from getting drinks, she is between the two who had been silent this far.

"I'm Andrew," The one who spoke introduces himself. "And these are my friends, Jordan," he gestures to the skinny, but toned Asian, "And Calvin." The tan one smiles. "What are you all named?"

You, Amanda, and Caroline all introduce yourselves, as you begin to sip on the margaritas Calvin brought over. They're stronger than you had expected, but you've drunk your fair share, and barely even feel anything. It is just one drink, after all.

After you finish introductions, Jordan leans forward. "So, tell us about yourselves."

How would you describe yourself?

a) I'm an athlete (Bonus to physical rolls)

b) I spend a lot of time studying (Bonus to mental rolls)

c) I like to party (Bonus to seductive/drug resistance/charisma)


275a38 No.32060

Also, I have a couple different ways I might take this. I have plans for both, it won't affect the quality, so I just need to know what you want to see. Do you want me to implement supernatural aspects, or leave it to stuff involving normal humans? I could also do stuff that isn't supernatural, per se, but stuff involving augmented humans/advanced science stuff. That isn't as fleshed out, but I'm happy to do it if that's what you want to see.


1ae9c0 No.32061


d70919 No.32062

>>32059

A

>>32060

I'd rather stick with mundane stuff. I feel liker supernatural/superscience things get in the way of normal things like tattoos, cameras, and blackmail.


84d43e No.32063


518db0 No.32070


3f1c79 No.32071


9b8abd No.32073


53cbcc No.32085

>>32059

C

>>32060

I'm more for vanilla stuff : you sold me this like a normal american spring break in the first few post, but supernatural and advence science stuff won't bother me


275a38 No.32103

A wins, and I guess that we'll be staying vanilla


275a38 No.32104

"I've always been the athletic type," you say, brushing your hair behind your ear. It's true. Ever since you were a child, you had been very phyisically fit. You can outrun all your friends, and are oddly strong for any girl. You've experimented a little in every realm of fitness, from rock climbing to a little bit of martial arts.

"Oh, so you're a strong one!" Andrew says. "Maybe I'll want you for my beach volleyball team, if you're good enough."

"Excuse me? Good enough? I'll kick your ass!" You reply. Your friends nod in agreement.

"She's, like, a natural at everything sporty," Amanda comments. "It's really not fair."

Calvin smiles, though his expression seems slightly patronizing. "Well, we'll see about that. There's a tournament tomorrow night at six. If you're so confident, why don't you three enter against us?"

Caroline looks nervous. "Well, the thing is, Jessica is the only athletic one of us, but you guys all look pretty good at sports…" Her voice trails off. It's true, all three of them are quite toned, with varying degrees of muscle. You don't doubt that they could beat the three of you.

"Well then find some other girls to play with, we aren't picky!" Jordan laughs.

Andrew must be able to see you getting angry, so he cuts off the argument. "Guys, please, be decent. They know about the game, they can enter if they wish to. For now, though, let's have more drinks." He slides Calvin some money, who goes back up for more.

a) Keep drinking

b) Stop


53cbcc No.32105


1ae9c0 No.32106


3f1c79 No.32107


275a38 No.32108

>>32106

>>32105

>>32107

A it is. 40+Drunk test


9b8abd No.32110

Dice rollRolled 69 (1d100)

>>32108

drunk


8c5e1b No.32111

Dice rollRolled 46 (1d100)

>>32108

Rawl


53cbcc No.32112

Dice rollRolled 44 (1d100)

>>32108

drunk roll !


53cbcc No.32113

>>32111

>>32110

>>32112

3 roll and no one under 40, disapointing


c0d351 No.32114

>>32113

We're just getting the good rolls out the way early on


275a38 No.32115

>>32111

>>32110

>>32112

You are very clearly not drunk


275a38 No.32120

Downing another drink, the conversation continues. You learn about the three boys. They're in their third year, and are from Southern California. You and your friend are all freshmen, from Washington. Andrew an hsi companions seem friendly enough, you decide that you like them, but you don't forget about their challenge to beach volleyball. If you want to go against them and not get destroyed, you'll need to find some other people for your team.

As the conversation wraps up, you all trade phone numbers. Andrew stops you, as you're leaving. "Hey, the guys and I are going clubbing tonight. You should join us." You thank him for the invite, and part ways. Now you have two things you could do tonight, the other being go down to the beach party some of your other friends will be at.

There's still a lot to see in town, and you don't have any plans for the next several hours, so you and your friends move along, and find yourselves in a performance center, surrounded by stores. There are street artists all around, and a lot aren't what you'd expect in Mexico. You're particularly surprised to see a snake charmer. Several other acts and stores stick out to you.

a) Snake Charmer

b) Knife thrower

c) Photography studio

d) Street musicians

e) Spa


ff1e00 No.32121


3f1c79 No.32122


53cbcc No.32123

Dice rollRolled 45 (1d100)

>>32120

C


53cbcc No.32124

>>32123

Damn dice who don't desactivat itself !


9b8abd No.32125


1ae9c0 No.32126


84d43e No.32129


c0d351 No.32134


523747 No.32135


2c3205 No.32155

>>32060

Don't know if I'm too late to weigh in on this, but I would like to see some supernatural shit in this. Regular life just seems so boring to me


1605a9 No.32156

A


c0d351 No.32157

>>32155

I personally wouldn't mind it, but I like a break from the normal by having something… normal


bee1eb No.32158

>>32155

I like regular life. Supernatural shit just seems so… well, supernatural. Anything could happen in the supernatural world so slutty sex isn't a big deal. But to think of this happening in the real world is super hot!


d70919 No.32159


2c3205 No.32183

>>32157

>>32158

well let me clarify a bit here. I don't mind the story involving just humans, but I think if the only concern is gonna be passing resistance checks with fellow college students, then it'll be boring. If we somehow fuck up majorly and find ourselves strapped to a table in a rape dungeon somewhere, I'd be totally okay with that.


c0d351 No.32191

>>32183

Oh yeah, that sorta stuff is cool. But the original question was phrasing supernatural as 'not involving just humans', so I'm cool with that.

Also things don't have to be entirely realistic, say people's dogs


a70bb2 No.32195

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C

>>32191

You had me at other people's dogs


275a38 No.32216

It looks like the general consensus is mundane world. I'll keep it exciting, it won't just be endless amounts of college guys feeling you up. C wins.


275a38 No.32217

"Hey, let's go check out the photography studio!" You suggest.

"What? You want to buy a camera? I'd much rather watch one of the performers." Amanda says.

"No, come on! I want to make some memories of this trip, maybe we can pick up a camera there," you reply.With some wheedling, you eventually convince your friends that the photographjy studio will be the best place to be. You go to the white building, where a mexican man greets you. He looks to be in his mid thirties, and is average looking.

"Welcome to my studio!" He cries out as you enter. "Please, take a look at my wares, tourists buy from me all the time. You'll never find yourself saying you wish you had taken less pictures, after all."

As you're looking at the cameras, he walks over to you. "Additionally, for three fine young ladies like yourselves, I can offer you some work,m hmm? I'm in business with several travel magazines, and pictures to advertise Spring Break are always welcome. I can offer fair compensation, of course, you will be paid. So, are you interested?"

a) Do the photoshoot

b) Don't do the shoot; leave

c) Don't do the shoot, buy a camera (Options will be given)


a97de1 No.32218


d70919 No.32219


07d2f2 No.32220


275a38 No.32221

>>32218

>>32219

>>32220

A wins. Also, because I don't want to do the conversions, I'm planning on sticking with US dollars for currency, despite it not being accurate/realistic. If people would prefer me to use pesos, let me know, I'm just saying how I'm planning to do it for now.


275a38 No.32222

You consider how much money you have. Only two hundred dollars, and knowing you, you'll need more than that for this vacation. Some extra money would definitely be useful.

"Sure, totally!" You say. "How much will you pay?"

"Well, I can offer you twenty dollars for a shoot in what you're wearing now," he gestures to your decidedly unimpressive outfit of a tank top and jean shorts. "If you were to come back dressed differently another time, I could offer more. Alternatively, I can offer fifty dollars for a swimsuit shoot, in a swimsuit that I can provide, and if that still isn't enough money, I'll throw in an extra twenty dollars if one of your friends does a swimsuit shoot with you. What do you prefer?"

a) Do a clothed shoot alone

b) Do a swimsuit shoot alone

c) Do a swimsuit shoot with a friend


07d2f2 No.32223


a97de1 No.32224


a97de1 No.32225

>>32224

oh sorry i meant B


d70919 No.32226


a97de1 No.32227

btw newfag here. how the hell do i roll?


31e24d No.32228

>>32222

B

>>32227

In the reply click "Show post options & limits"


a97de1 No.32229

>>32228

thanks!


9b8abd No.32230


a97de1 No.32231


d70919 No.32232

>>32224

>>32225

>>32231

nigga what are you doing


a97de1 No.32233

>>32232

i got confused. i tried to delete it but i made it worse


bee1eb No.32234

>>32233

This is hilarious. Thank you.

Also B


191ef6 No.32242


c0d351 No.32248


151a47 No.32252

C


daf849 No.32275

C, but your 'friend' goads you into nudity and more while she stays clothed


3c7235 No.32279

>>32275

C This


523747 No.32280


a164b1 No.32282

>>32222

B, swimsuit alone. Doing the swimsuit with a friend is only $30 each, assuming you split it. Let's not devalue ourselves (or our friends).


a164b1 No.32283

>>32282

sorry, $35 each; not much better.


2c3205 No.32287

>>32216

Yes thank you, that's all I was asking


bbd07a No.32294

>>32222

On C, is that 50 and 20 dollars total or 50 each and an extra 20?


daf849 No.32369

>>32294

Maybe he's counting on them not being able to do math


275a38 No.32407

For clarity, what I had said for C would just give you $70, I had forgotten that I had given you and your friends different budgets. Now, because C won 9-6 anyway, I'll be writing the group swimsuit scene. What I've decided to do to be fair is to give your friend $50, and you $70. I'll try to explain myself better in the future.


275a38 No.32408

Deciding that you could use the extra cash, you turn to your friends, and roll the decision around in your head of which would be the better one to ask.While you love her, you have to admit that Amanda is definitely the easiest of your three, and would be more likely to agree to a photoshoot than Caroline, who is fairly shy.

However, Caroline is definitely the prettier of the two. Amanda's ass is considerably nicer, in your moderately heterosexual opinion, but Caroline simply has a better body and face for this, and if you get her to agree to the shoot, you might be able to weasel more money out of the photographer.

Additionally, you decide that if you ask one and she disagrees, ther other one would probably disagree as well, as the two typically agree on everything. You could still do the shoot alone, but you'd be out twenty dollars.

a) Ask Amanda

b) Ask Caroline


3b16b5 No.32409

>>32408

A, then cancel and offer it to Caroline.

If that's too cheap of a strategy, B.


275a38 No.32410

>>32409

I don't understand what you mean. As in, ask Amanda, but before she answers change your mind?


3b16b5 No.32411

>>32410

If they both tend to agree, ask the easier one. Shortly after act as if you changed your mind and back down. Later change your mind again when talking to Caroline and see if she's up for it.


a9c88d No.32412


275a38 No.32413

>>32411

I'm gonna go ahead and veto that, because it's working the system. If you'd prefer a reason that's more in line with the story, it's because Caroline would feel bad that you specifically rejected Amanda after asking and wouldn't want to take Amanda's place.


9b8abd No.32414

>>32408

B

go for the gold


054db9 No.32416


d872d0 No.32418


b46e6a No.32419


9724f6 No.32420


daf849 No.32441

>>32408

A. You're the hotter of the two and you want the focus to be on you


78ba67 No.32444


275a38 No.32447

B wins! Give me a 60+ Persuasion test


b99dc5 No.32448

Dice rollRolled 61 (1d100)

>>32447

Persuasion


d70919 No.32449

>>32448

noice


daf849 No.32460

>>32448

So Caroline's gonna be kind of 'meh, I suppose…' about the idea, huh?


275a38 No.32473

You slowly wander over to Caroline, who's looking at the wall of photos. You doubt that any of them were taken by the man, as the sign advertising them claims. Most of them look like stock photos, with the occasional landscape or bird. You'd be willing to bet you could find most of them given twenty minutes on Google. Still, given that there are some empty hooks on the wall, some people must have been willing to pay the man's outrageous prices. "What do you think?" You ask Caroline.

"I think he didn't take any of these. In fact, I think that one is straight from the wikipedia article on ducks." You laugh with her, and you two spend a few minutes trying to find the photo that is the most blatantly plagiarized. As the laughter grows, you decide that it's time to make your move.

"Hey, so, the guy offered me some money to do a photoshoot, and let's be honest, some extra cash would be nice. Do you want to join me?"

Caroline looks slightly caught off guard. Nervous. "Umm, I'm not sure. I mean, you know I'm not a big fan of, like, being in the spotlight…" Her voice trails off.

You giggle sweetly, and put a hand on her shoulder. "I know, but it'll be the two of us together! Besides, it'll be so cool. Imagine being able to tell people you're a model?"

"No. No, sorry Jessica, but that really isn't for me. I hope you have fun, though." She begins to walk off. You quickly close in, and look her in the eyes.

"Caroline, please. You know I'd never ask you to do anything you wouldn't enjoy. Besides, it's paid. And come on, it won't make us famous, it'll just be one shoot and we'll be done." Caroline looks from side to side. You can tell she's breaking down."Come on! It'll be a great bonding experience."

That does it. Caroline is very into bonding as friends, getting closer to each other, having that perfect small group. Once you bring up bonding, you know she'll join you.

"I… I guess so. Fine, yeah, I'll do it," She sighs. You clap with excitement.

"Yay! Come on, let's go tell him." As you walk away, you call to Amanda, "We'll be right back, kay?" Amanda is totally absorbed in taking pictures of herself holding a camera, and you know she'll be fine for a while. You head to the owner, who smiles.


275a38 No.32474

"Very good, very good. Please, follow me, I'll take you to the changing rooms." He leads you down a hall, and reaches a white door. "This one will be for you," He says to Caroline. "Your clothing is inside, please go through the door marked Studio when you're ready." Your friend nods, silent, and enters the room. You follow the man down to the other changing room, where he gives you the same instructions, adding, "Oh, and I'll be throwing in an extra fifteen dollars, the girl you brought will likely sell more than the other." You thank him, and head into your changing room.

It's nicer than you expect, but not high quality. It's about the size of a college dorm room, with a full length mirror on the wall, hooks for clothing, and a wooden chair. It's clean, though, and well lit. Walking over to the hooks, you see two blue pieces of fabric hanging. You strip, and put on the bikini. Looking at yourself in the mirror, you're surprised, you had half expected something with tiny triangles of fabric that barely covered your nipples. This is, while still quite revealing, something you'd expect to see from the average hot girl. The top is slightly small, though, which pushes your breasts up and in, accentuating your cleavage.

Once you've changed, you step into the studio, where Caroline is already waiting for you, and the man is setting up his camera. You'll apparently be taking pictures on a beach scene setup, which you find funny, as the studio is surprisingly chilly. Caroline's green bikini is slightly more modest than yours, while still showing off her impressive rack for a girl as short as her. You two stand together, and talk for a few moments, complimenting each others looks, until the man calls you over.

"I'll need you two to start out lying down on those towels. Look like you're sunbathing, okay?" He orders, pointing the camera. You nod, and walk over, followed by Caroline. Following his instructions, you lie there until you hear a few quick snaps. "Good, good." He says, adjusting the focus. "Now, you in the blue, turn, and lie on your side, facing your friend. No, not like that, prop your head up with your arm. Bend that top leg a little. Good." More snaps.

The man throws you a bottle of sunscreen. "Both of you, stand, facing each other. Green, I want your back to me. Blue, take the bottle, and reach around her and smear it on her back." You do as he says, and squirt some sunscreen into your hand, and get close to Caroline with a hugging motion, andf start massaging lotion into her upper back. "Look into the camera," He says, and you do. After he takes a picture, he orders "Lower." You move to Caroline's lower back, but he still says it again. you're confused at first, then you realize he want you to grab your friend's ass. You don't really want to, and as you're about to say no, the thought of money pops into your mind.

Roll a 55+ Resistance test!


f0e220 No.32475

Dice rollRolled 90 (1d100)

>>32474

Resistance


275a38 No.32504

"Hey! you didn't say anything about that!" You exclaimn. The man looks surprised. He begins to try and protest, but you don't let him get a word in. "I agreed to a regular old photoshoot, and that's allI'm going to do, got it?!"

"Yes! Yes, I understand," the man says. "Just a regular photoshoot. Yes"

He begins directing you to do poses again, and you do as he says, albeit somewhat cautiously, making sure they're nothing overtly sexual. however, after a couple minutes, you relax, as it seems he's given up with any more than you agreed to.

"Good, good," He says, as you kneel, making a sandcastle while Caroline watches. "Now, Green, stand up, facing me. Blue, hug her from behind. Yes, just like that, your chin on her shoulder. Now give me smiles, both of you. Like two friends, like you'd post online.

perfect." He pulls back from ther camera, and motions to you. "Blue, come here."

You walk over to him, where he motions for you to come in close. "I'm going to do that shot again. Before I take the picture, I want you to pull the tie on the back of her top, understand?"

"What?! Fuck that!" You whisper back.

"No, no! It's nothing like that, just as a prank. Girls do it to each other, it's realistic. Besides, her top will stay on, nothing will be revealed, the neck tie will still be in place. It'll be totally harmless, nothing will be seen."

You consider his offer. While you don't really want to, Caroline wouldn't be happy, he's right. Her top wouldn't come off, and you'd be a liar if you said you hadn't done it before to a friend. Also, it might help Caroline break out of nher shell a little, but she'd be angry at you for a little bit.

Roll a 60+ Resistance test. If that fails, I need a 45+ Judgement test as well.


d70919 No.32505

>>32504

This seems like the sort of thing we should get a choice on, rather than rolling for it.


275a38 No.32506

>>32505

Good point, I hadn't considered that.

A) Do as he asks

B) Don't do it

Also, if you guys ever don't like how I'm running the game, please comment, I'm still quite new to this and some stuff probably won't work


d70919 No.32507


9724f6 No.32508


b46e6a No.32510


a9c88d No.32511

>>32506

A

Quick comment you may be already catching on.

Unless the decision is clearly a terrible idea, I think you can assume players will vote for the most "sexy" choice (ex: drinking, ask the prettier girl and now this vote).

My recommendation is to try and not have too many votes with binary options.


daf849 No.32512

>>32506

Given how reluctant your friend is, I think you might instead offer to reverse positions and have her undo your top instead.


653b7f No.32513

>>32512

This !!!


19a5fa No.32514

>>32512

this!


8c5e1b No.32515

>>32512

Seconding


b99dc5 No.32519

Dice rollRolled 99 (1d100)

>>32506

I'll support this

>>32512


b99dc5 No.32520

>>32519

Whoops didn't mean to roll there.


9724f6 No.32533

>>32512

Changing vote to this


275a38 No.32537

>>32512

This wins. I still need a 45+ judgement roll.


bbd07a No.32538

Dice rollRolled 14 (1d100)

>>32537

Judgement


daf849 No.32539

Dice rollRolled 48 (1d100)

Judgement (first time rolling


e30eec No.32541


d70919 No.32543

>>32538

Oh no, we're a terrible friend.


daf849 No.32544

>>32543

I'm guessing it's our horrible judgement that fails spectacularly. Maybe it means we agree to topless photos, or to having our bottoms undone as well. "It's not like anyone will be seeing this pictures…"


275a38 No.32600

"How about she undoes my top? I mean, I know that my top will stay on, and I won't get pissed over it," you suggest. the man looks surprised.

"Seriously? I mean, I hadn't expected either of you to say yes, I was just hoping to get one or two pictures in. But yes, yes that's fine." he agrees, so you head back to the set.

"What was that about?" Caroline asks.

"Oh, nothing. Just that he was having some camera issues." You respond, reaching behind your back to untie one of the two knots of the bikini top.

"Jessica, you know literally nothing about photogra- What the fuck are you doing?!" Caroline exclaims as your top suddenly hangs loose.

"Don't worry it, it's just for the shoot. Besides, come on, it's just because it'll be hot, my boobs are still covered, mostly," you reassure her. Caroline looks nervous, but goes along with it. The man continues taking photos, and having you pose. the stances you take slowly get more and more erotic, up to pulling the top away from your body so your nipples are only barely concealed. The photographer eventuyally just starts saying variations of "Be beautiful, ladies," and trusting your good looks to be enough.

"Come on, girls, be sexy. Be sexy for me," He requests. Sexy. You can do sexy. In fact, that gives you a great idea. Before even letting it fully register, or thinking over it, your hands move and undo the other tie on your top, letting it drop to the floor. You press your bare breasts together, and smile into the flash of the camera.

"Jessica! What the fuck?" Caroline yells, staring at you.

"Come on, Caroline, pose! He's still taking pictures!" You never drop your smile while taking various poses showing off your breasts as best you can.

"Yes! Yes, blue, more of that!" the man yells with excitement, sweating, and taking pictures so fast you think his camera might explode.

Hey. More of that. You can do that too! You can give him more. You wait for a moment when Caroline isn't ready, as she is still on the set with you, but seems rather mad. Then, you reach over, and undo the straps on her top as well. She begins to looks angry, but you want the guy to have good pictures, so you move behind your friend and pinch her nipples. Her angry words turn into a gasp of pleasure as she leans into you. The camera flashes.


275a38 No.32601

When you let Caroline go, she turns and slaps you. "What the fuck, Jessica!" She screams.

"Come on, Caroline, it's just boobs!" You laugh.

"Yeah! MY boobs!" You can tewll your friend is almost in tears, so you hug her.

"Oh, come on, Caroline, it's okay. Come on, just have some fun with it!" you say kindly. You continue to calm Caroline, until she's no longer close to hysterics. "Now, let's do this. As friends. I mean, you don't want me to do this alone, do you?"

Caroline shakes her head no, and stands next to you on the set, giving a small smile. You can tell she's still sad, though.

The photoshoot only continue for a couple minutes more, before the man pulls back.

"Well, I believe that's enough forn today, ladies. I just need you to fill out some paperwork, and you can get paid. Feel free to change, and meet me in the front." He smiles, and heads out the door. You and Caroline go to change, and come out to the front, where Amanda is still playing with the cameras. The man has you fill out some paperwork including your name, email, and phone number, and then hands you seventy dollars, and Caroline fifty.

The two of you walk to Amanda, who smiles. "Hey!" What were you two doing?"

"Nothing much, just looking around," you say. Caroline is silent.

"Well, it took a long time," Amanda says. "We should probably head back to the resort, to get ready for tonight." You agree, so the three of you head back, Caroline laggin behind, not talking to either of you.

When you reach the resort, you realize that you have to make a choice, and base your clothing choices on it. Should you go to the beach party, where some of your friends will be, or go out clubbing with Andrew, Jordan, and Calvin?

a) Go to the beach

b) Go clubbing


fd7cfa No.32603

Well, that was oddly… dispiriting.

A.


d70919 No.32604

>>32600

>>32601

That's not a failed judgement roll, that's outright retardation. I won't be reading any more.


054db9 No.32605

>>32601

B

If we get in more scenes like the photoshoot will there be repercussions that affect our friendships?


275a38 No.32606

>>32604

Thank you for you input.


275a38 No.32607

>>32605

Yes, if they involve you sabotaging your friends. But based on the response, I won't be doing that unless you guys specifically choose it, from now on. I'm planning at this point to have Caroline forgive you, and just use that scene as a setup for future scenes, as I didn't really give you a choice.


275a38 No.32608

>>32607

To clarify, there will only be repercussions if you sabotage your friends, not if you make a mistake that ends poorly for them.


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fd7cfa No.32610

>>32607

Personally I wouldn't go as far as "retardation", but the scene felt more like a critical fail (in the range 1-5 or 1-2).


daf849 No.32611

>>32601

B. So many more possibilities. Personally I liked the photoshoot, though I would've liked if instead of undoing Caroline's top you dropped your bottoms. :-D


a9c88d No.32612

>>32607

A

>and just use that scene as a setup for future scenes

Cool, I would love to see some repercussion to what happen.


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7f2aa5 No.32622

>>32604

I wouldnt go that far although id like to see the scene to last longer, giving us possible choices or some lust rolls. Just saying… i like the general concept so far


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9724f6 No.32653

>>32622

I'd agree with this. I enjoyed the scene, but it would have been better if we'd had more chances to roll or make choices


054db9 No.32789

>>32608

I hope you continue I enjoy this story and it has great potential


275a38 No.32791

>>32789

I will but I'm having a very rough time in my personal life right now, and I just can't really write. Hopefully I'll continue sooner rather than later. Sorry for the wait.


054db9 No.33197

>>32791

Hope everything is alright




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