80d345 No.5541
hey there /storytiem/ i will be starting a game called the mist in which you will be a teenage protagonist finding yourself by venturing to point b,point a being you home village on your planet which conveniently is packed full of flora and fauna to raep and enslave you
but i want you the readers to create the character from gender to the half a right little toe i will be basing it around your character of choice and want to know if you think this could work and if any of this made sense
game details and such will be worked out soon as i cant update as regularly as i would like
80d345 No.5542
This is my first game so bare with me as I work out the kinks (and brush up on my writing skills) although I have an alright idea how to run thanks to based onyx and based solstice,
let me know about any ideas you have and feedback is greatly appreciated
981fdc No.5544
>>5541Hi, can you clarify a few points? We, the players are creating a character, who will be travelling from point A our safe home village, to point B. In between these is a large amount of flora and fauna to sexually assault us. Do I have the gist of it?
b2709e No.5547
I think you should have said this in the Game ideas and requests thread that already exists instead of making a thread to say you will be doing a story. It's not very clear what the story will be about but I will check it out anyway. Please fix your capitalisation, spelling and punctuation. Nice tits.
b22342 No.5548
>>5541it's better if you give us a list to vote
5f6935 No.5550
>>5548I agree with this, I'm excited about what you're going to write but I would like some examples!
94150d No.5607
>>5547I did try that but it was a bit messy for me i sort of wanted to contain it
>>5544You are a young boy or girl who wants to leave your home village in search of the unknown knowing the dangersbof venturing beond the tall log waalls that protect you your parents have locked you into your room you must escape and follow your dreams.
Sorry about being a bit vague and for any mistakes im on my phone at the moment
>>5548I like this i will write up a list of traits for you guys to vote on once i get on my pc
Thank you everybody
b2709e No.5608
>>5548It realy makes things easier since there isnt much fuss about the character since vague is best anyway.
94150d No.5621
>>5608It would mainly be gender penis or cup size hair colour ect but ill set it up once i get to a pc
And again thanks guys and sorry for any mistakes im still trying to get organised
055f30 No.5627
>>5621Yeah the first post was a bit disorganized. But you are ready to try, and I can respect that.
I will answer your questions to start the ball.
I would prefer Female character. No preference for hair color, but breast should be normal size.
3ed531 No.5685
>>5627Hmmm, my vote is also for female, preferably red hair, and normal cup size
fa8571 No.5690
Well for gender, maybe the character could be a hermaphrodite? That way s/he can have both the fun of a male AND a female.
9b9f0d No.5812
I'd also like a redhead girl, but maybe smaller than average boobs
b9c5a1 No.5818
b5cd47 No.5845
Character options are as follows
Gender
A) Male
B) Female
C) hermaphrodite
D) Other
skin color
A) White (Albino)
B) tan
C) olive
D) Brown
E) Black (Nigger standard)
Hair Color
(Suggestions?)
Cup/Penis size
(suggestions
i think that should be about it but for instance you could suggest to make a loli type character or a mature one depending on your preferences or could just leave age up to the imagination like based onyxdime
a few things also i am an ausfag so i may not be able to update when some of you are most active but mail;y i will be posting around night for you after work and some of my grammar will be slightly different but please correct me on anything you see fit im still trying to get everything sorted out for the main part
after a character has been created i will start typing out the first chapter and probably post the next day around this time please let mew know if anything needs clarifying or further explaining
And again thank you for making this possible i hop you will enjoy my story
b5cd47 No.5850
>>5845i forgot to name myself ffs
hopefully i will be more organised in future im writing out tat sheets at the moment and was wondering what you guys would think of rolling for your stats to start off with?
489eef No.5851
>>5845B - B - Blonde / Violet - DD
65cb5e No.5862
>>5845B / A if it's 'just' pale, not ghostly chalky deathly pale, otherwise B / Red / anything A to E goes
5f6935 No.5865
>>5845B and C. Make her a beautiful greek inspired girl with black hair and D cup tits.
d9eb3a No.5867
>>5845I'd vote A, B.
As for hair color I have no preference.
Honestly I'd just want us to have a normal penis size. No need to have a mammoth dick or anything.
3ed531 No.5870
B)female
A)pale, but not ghostly-pale
And red hair
3ed531 No.5872
>>5870And I forgot, B cups
055f30 No.5873
>>5845B
B
[any color]
Around B or C
b5cd47 No.5880
Rules
Action rolls will be classified as follows
1-5 Epic fail 5-15 bad fail 15-30 moderate fail 30-50 slight fail
50-70 slight win 70-45 moderate win 45-95 good win 95-100 epic win
You are a slightly tanned girl with a bright red head of hair and D cup tits living in a small village in the centre of a Forrest shrouded in a thick mist every day of the year nobody has been past the villages tall log walls in year for fear of being taken, but you are sick of it being stuck in this tiny village where everybody knows everybody and your parents treat you like a little kid
YOU MUST ESCAPE
You wake screaming as the dreams of being demoralized and humiliated by all kinds of flora and fauna native to your home planet fill your mind, you know you shouldn't be curious about it, you hear the stories of young boys and girls being taken and used and breeding slaves for the sick creatures that call the mist their home.
You pull yourself from the confines of your warm bed into the cold night air and walk to the window, as a breeze flows in you notice the wet patch on your lacy underwear and blush knowing that being raped by plant tentacles and force fed beast cock was turning you on,slowly you brush your fingers over your moist panties ripples of pleasure rushing up your spine and spreading through your whole body, a moan escapes your mouth as your knees buckle as you pick up the pace of your fingers rubbing on your clit you manage to catch a shadow rush past your window
What do you do?
A) keep pleasuring yourself
B) stand up readying for action
C) rush and close the window
3ed531 No.5882
B
b5cd47 No.5885
>>5880sorry guys forgot stats
Clothing-
lose pajama shirt
tight lace panties
Items-
Nil
Hornienes - 15%
Orgasm - 10%
Submissiveness - 0%
Dominance 0%
5f6935 No.5887
>>5880B, our snatch is not up for grabs just yet! (Btw I think you got the win rules wrong, they overlap)
b5cd47 No.5889
>>5887sorry about
1-5 Epic fail 6-15 bad fail 16-30 moderate fail 31-49 slight fail 50-70 slight win 71-45 moderate win 46-95 good win 96-100 Epic win
Do they seem like reasonable rolls??
5f6935 No.5890
>>5889Absolutely, I'm excited to see where this goes!
fa8571 No.5891
>>5880C, we have barely started and something is about to attack us! Also, did you mean to put 45 instead of 85?
fa8571 No.5892
I mean did you mean to put 85 instead of 45.
b5cd47 No.5893
>>5891yeah im a bit spaghetti at the moment i will fix it up next post
thank you
b5cd47 No.5894
B it is let me just review the next post
b5cd47 No.5896
if there was one good thing about this village it was that they heightened your combat skills from birth training you every day to defend yourself against monster and human alike, you leap to your feet only to find that your legs are still weak and you wobble a little trying to stand
Give me a balance roll
b5cd47 No.5897
in future i will make the posts longer im still just trying to figure the gist of it out for now thanks guys i really appreciate your patience
5f6935 No.5901
>>5897No thank you bro, no need to stress. Focus on making it the best you can! <3
055f30 No.5902
 | Rolled 12 |
>>5896balance roll
055f30 No.5904
5f6935 No.5911
b5cd47 No.5913
>>5902as you jump upright your legs collapse under you and you land face first onto the ground scraping your knees and pulling your loose fitting night shirt up slightly before you can react you feel a gust of wind and hear your windows slam shut behind you to scared to move you lay still for a minute but nothing happens
What do you do?
A) roll over and inspect your room
B) jump to your feet and spin around preparing for combat
C) lay still
5f6935 No.5916
055f30 No.5920
>>5913A_ I don't trust our body anymore
b5cd47 No.5926
>>5916>>5920tie breaker roll
1-50 A 51-100 B
5f6935 No.5928
| Rolled 33 |
>>5926Breaking the tie
055f30 No.5930
b5cd47 No.5941
you roll over onto you back to inspect your room and notice nothing out of the ordinary everything is untouched but the air is musky and thick you walk over to your bed and notice a crude piece of paper with barely legible writing scrawled on it from what you can make out it says "the marked one requests you presence" brushing of the strange note you climb back into the warmth of your bed and quickly fall asleep. your dreams are once again filled with the idea of having your holes taken advantage of and breasts milked, you wake sweating in the morning and feel you panties drenched from your dreams. pulling yourself up out of bed you walk to your closet and pull out some adventuring clothes a matching set of loose khaki trousers and shirt and throw them on wandering downstairs you decide there are a few things you should do before fleeing the confines of your village
A) take you savings and head to the market
B) hang around the training stages
C) clean up and talk with your parents
I will try and have more of this pre typed in future i had to edit a bit of it
Clothing-
Loose khaki shirt
loose khaki pants
lacy bra and panties
Items-
Coins 12 Gold 65 Silver and 80 copper
Backpack - 12 item slots
Small decorative dagger
3ed531 No.5945
C, then B
055f30 No.5946
5f6935 No.5947
b5cd47 No.5949
C it is
What do you guys think so far and im slowly getting organised
5f6935 No.5950
>>5949You're doing well bro!
3ed531 No.5951
>>5949It was a slow start with all the character choosing process,but it was fun, your writing is good, keep it up!
055f30 No.5953
>>5949Still early to comment, but no complaints from me.
fa8571 No.5954
I'm all good. Do the parent's know that Sary Mue is going on an adventure?
b5cd47 No.5962
You decide to have a nice hot shower to start the day and head to the bathroom and quickly pull your clothes of throwing them to the ground and and jump into the hot stream of water letting it caress your body and flow over you grabbing the soap you begin to scrub your body surprised at have filthy you have gotten in that last day but quickly clean up and dry off and dress yourself before heading downstairs
Hey guys i have to go so i will continue tomorrow sorry about that
>>5954No they don't and sorry forgot to mention that you are named Alice
fa8571 No.5964
b5cd47 No.5965
>>5964Fuck….i will add them next session sorry
5fcf39 No.6945
Hey guys sorry about leaving some stuff came up and was unable to continue im on my phone at the moment and still have to pretype most of the stuff i want to do befor i continue so i can keep it constant for you thanks for helping me get into this i sometimes have a short attention span when typing so going to try and get sessions pre typed
You decide to have a nice hot shower to start the day and head to the bathroom and quickly pull your clothes of throwing them to the ground and jump into the hot stream of water letting it caress your body and flow over you grabbing the soap you begin to scrub your body surprised at how filthy you have gotten in that last day but quickly clean up and dry off getting dresed before heading downstairs
To talk to youre parents
Do you
A) tell them you want to leave (64+ persuasion roll)
B) ask the about the mist
C) ask them about the monsters
D) anons choose
(You can choose 2 options)
4fdf4b No.6946
b2709e No.6947
>>6945B. Dont tell them our plan to leave.
4ec913 No.6948
5fcf39 No.6949
B&C it is give me a minute ill do a sort of mini sesion while on phone may take a little longer
5fcf39 No.6950
After cleaning up and diong your morning routine you decide its time to head downstairs and get probably the last full meal you will have before leaving on your adventure
As you are heading down you think it would be wise to ask your parents what lies beond the confines of your town walls before you venture out
Sitting down at the dark oak table your mother presents you a plate stacked with fresh fried eggs spicy baked sausages wrapped in greasy bacon topped with hot tomata chutney. Inbetween forkfulls you manage to ask your newly present father about the outside and tell him about the sounds last night, a worrying look crosses his face as he sighs "i suppose its time to tell you he days with gritted teeth.
(P1)
If you guys have any complaints or suggestions as to what youbwould like to see just ask
Next part coming…
5fcf39 No.6951
>>6950Standing up the broad figure of you father heads to the door of his office and promtly dissapears into the messy space your hear him rummaging around and swearing about the mess but he soon emerges with two thick leather bound books tattered and covered in dust he drops them infornt of you and goes back to his breakfast and grunts about not wanting to tell you this early but overall not putting up too much resistance looking down the dusty books one is titled flora and fauna of the mist and the other the mist:origins
After breakfast your stomach is bloated and you decide tobread the books before lunch then check out the town a bit before you say your goodbyes
New items added to your inventory
-Flora and fauna of the mist
-the mist:origins
I will be going through these when i get back to my pc (mabey a day 2 at most) but for now i will leave you with the options for the rest of the day
After your read the books you decide to head into the town centre to catch up with your friends and train at the barracks a little before you journey
Do you:
A)Talk with your friends
B)train (all stats +1 for a last ditched efort to prepare(uses the reat of day))
C)walk aeound and check oit an escape rout
D)anons suggest?
Again thank youbguys for being patient it means alot
b2709e No.6953
>>6951B
I have no idea when or where this is suposed to be, at first I though it was like a medieval setting with a village surounded by magic mist with plants and monsters in it but we live in a regular modern house with showers and fried egg breakfasts. I dont even know how that would even work with everything surounded by mist and monsters. And aparently theres a baracks that we can just go train at? Why do we need an escape route to lave, cant we just walk out, whats keeping us here? Why would anyone want to even go into the mist in a modern day setting and we have two books that are so old they are dusty on this stuff?
391a2b No.6955
bd76d2 No.6971
>>6951C
Thanks for giving us an update. My only comment would be to take your time when writing and read it again before posting. Good chance it is because you are using your phone, but it look rushed.
0ba78d No.6996
89e182 No.7067
>>5941just as a friendly bit of criticism, you used the word 'and' nine times in that paragraph; commas are your friends.
"…you walk to your closet and pull out some adventuring clothes; a matching set of loose khaki trousers and shirt. Throwing them on you wander downstairs, deciding there are a few things you should do before fleeing the confines of your village"
Take it as you will and keep up the good work!
>I got a c in English lit at GCSE pls respect me c86353 No.7091
Hey guys thanks for the advice i was at work on my phone i just wanted to get a small update up to get going again before i pre type this next session i am really sorry for any inconsistencies and thank you for telling me i am still trying to get things for the most part worked out and thank you for your patience
not having an amazing start but thanks for sticking with me i am writing up the next full session now on my day of so will post in a few hours or so
again thank you it means alot that you sort of sticking with me love you guys and hope you enjoy
a9b24b No.9128
Seeing as there is nothing happening at work at the moment i would like to address a few thing and appologise
I have been quite busy lately and unable to post while also the hard drives i had in raid failed and lost most of my planning for this thread which is for the most part what kept it coherent for me i think that i started of quite ambicious and failed you
I know i can write and i hope that you can enjoy it i will be starting a new thread and planning the start over today i realy want you guys to enjoy this and continuing on the train wreck i created doesnt seem to be the best option so if anybody has any ideas or suggestions for what to do next i would greatly appreciate it and again thank you all for your kind words,critisisms and support