484507 No.8378[Last 50 Posts]
The third thread for the ongoing game I'm running, Seeker. When we last left off, you (Jennifer) had recovered the first of several map artifacts, and successfully evaded your rival, Alex. You've also picked up a new pet, Siegroy, who you've just asked your companion Emily to help you train. Here's the Google Doc containing your status:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ArSnKHevF0LC-YN8pEGsb6GPwR0ZRTEYU9vnYYWPzjQ/edit?usp=sharing“So, want to help me train Siegroy?” you ask. Emily looks confused. “Train him? How? Like, with treats or something.” You shake your head.
“Actually, Siegroy is best trained with… um… sex.” Emily looks at you, dumbfounded.
“Are you telling me you want me to… ew! No, thanks… you… you have fun.” She looks a little disgusted, clearly not open to any discussion on the matter. “I’ll just stay here and watch my show.” It’s clear that you’ve made her feel uncomfortable, so you leave, walking back out to the common room.
Siegroy is lying on his new bed. You snap your fingers, beckoning him to you, and then you enter your room with your pet in tow. You strip down, standing naked before him, and then you grab him by the head, showing him who has control. As you did before, you dip a finger into your vagina, swirling it around until it has your taste on it, and then you place it in his mouth.
Make a 50+ training roll to see how successful your training session is!
f7c442 No.8379
 | Rolled 75 |
>>8378>training roll 484507 No.8386
75 training roll, success
Siegroy purrs contentedly, obeying you and carefuly slurping your juices off your finger. Once its clear who’s in charge, you fall to your hands and knees, snapping your fingers. Siegroy plunges his snout into your damp pussy, lapping at it with his thick, smooth, tongue. Pleasure fills your mind, but you remember to snap your fingers, stopping him. The cat obeys you as you go through the motions, demanding that he eat you out and then stopping him, over and over again. Though its clear he’d prefer to simply lick you, he always stops when prompted. His tongue runs all the way from your clit to your ass with every lap, bringing you explosions of pleasure. You look back and see that his cock is fully hard, hanging between his furry legs, more impressive by far than that of a human.
Do you stop Siegroy, or allow him to mount you?
A) Conclude your training session, boosting Siegroy’s obedience to you
B) Let your pet stick it in you
C) Anon suggest
6bdba1 No.8388
He'll soon have sex with nadia again..
6bdba1 No.8389
80cc67 No.8390
>>8386B) We blue-balled him once already. Let him have some fun.
e3f9e6 No.8391
>>8386A keep that pet under control
Or C stroke him off?
f7c442 No.8392
>>8386>>8391>C stroke him off 15336d No.8393
I'm liking option C
80cc67 No.8394
>>8390I guess C will do. Changing my vote to C.
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484507 No.8399
Taking some pity on the poor cat, you snap your fingers. He stops licking your cunt, and you crawl around to his side. You urge your pet to lay down and he does, revealing his huge cock to you. You take the might shaft in your hands and begin to rub it. His pre oozes down to your fingers, rolling over your skin, as you pump his impressive rod. With one finger, you trace light circles around the head, teasing him a little while you jack him off. Your stroking and caressing causes him to purr contentedly. Surely in his head he is imagining mounting some beautiful female. Your hands begin to work faster and faster on his shaft, hurrying to get him off. His breathing gets very heavy as his legs begin to twitch. Throwing in all you can to get Sigroy’s load out, you lower your mouth to his cock and begin to trace your tongue around his head. The taste of his pre is tangy and slightly sweet, not bad at all, and so you happily lick it up.
In another moment, he growls loudly, and his cock explodes in stream after stream of hot, sticky cum. His huge load splatters all over you. A few drops fly into your mouth, rolling directly down your gullet and into your stomach. Your face and chest get the brunt of it, white gloop splattering over your cheeks, on your nose, and in your hair. Luckily, you manage to shut your eyes in time. Your tits are similarly covered, draped in his seed. Several long streams run down your stomach and over your thighs to pool on the floor. It looks like you’re going to need another shower.
A few hours later, you’re cleaned and showered. Your ship touches down at the main spaceport on Tarrasin, a bustling port filled with ships and people, in the middle of the city. You feel a little lost. After all, you have no leads. It’s possible that the orb has already been discovered and sold, or locked away in a museum. It could be for sale in some dusty antiques store as you think. Who do you bring off the ship? And where do you head first?
A) Bring all of your group
B) Bring two of them (specify)
C) Bring one of them
D) Go alone
You go to…
A) The shopping malls
B) The party district
C) The regional administrator
D) The local historical society
E) Anons suggest (it’s a massive city, anything you desire exists)
80cc67 No.8403
>>8399B) Bring two of them (specify)
Nadia and Emily.
D) The local historical society
6bdba1 No.8404
f7c442 No.8405
>>8399>D) Go alone>D) The local historical society 15336d No.8411
>>8399B) Nadia and Emily
D
484507 No.8412
>>8411>>8404>>8403Looks like you're bringing Nadia and Emily to the historical society
484507 No.8413
Roll a 50+ luck check please
f7c442 No.8414
| Rolled 14 |
>>8413Lucky!
484507 No.8415
fb40d3 No.8417
484507 No.8419
You, Nadia, and Emily step out of your ship. Siegroy will be more than enough to protect your vessel, and if you brought him into the city, it might cause panic anyway. You head out of the spaceport, onto a busy taxi port. Hovertaxis come and go with great speed. You’re not sure which one you want to take, all the destinations are strange and confusing to you. Hoping to get some help, you pull a young man aside.
“Hey, can you help me?” you ask with a friendly smile. He nods. “Which cabs to I take to find the historical society?”
He points to a hovercab at the end of the terminal. “Uh… that one. That’ll take you ladies where you need to go.”
Roll a 30+ intelligence check!
484507 No.8420
>>8414I don't count epic wins/fails on luck check. You just fall into the luck range of 10-20
80cc67 No.8423
| Rolled 88 |
>>8419Int roll.
484507 No.8427
484507 No.8433
You give the cab a look. The small red dot on the destination sign gives it away. That’s the universal symbol for a cab going into criminal territory. You can guess how this guy’s plan goes. He sends you out in a cab to the slums, where a few of his friends are waiting to jump you, rape you, and maybe even sell you on the black market. Angered, you reel your fist back and smack him in the cheek. He yells in pain.
“What the hell is that for!?”
“Get the hell out of here!” you yell. “Before I call the cops!”
“Fine, alright!” He turns and walks away. “Crazy bitch…”
After he leaves, a middle aged women waves you down. “Excuse me, young lady. I heard you asking about the historical society. The cabs that take you there are just over there.” She points to two cabs with signs reading “Elmark’s Row”. You thank her and walk over to the cabs, hopping in one. The driver accepts your payment of 2 credits, and then he pilots his cab into the busy skyway. Your journey only takes a few minutes, and then you’re dropped off in front of a tall, stately building in the Greek architectural style. You let yourself inside.
A mousy receptionist looks up from her desk. “Sorry. No appointment without prior arrangement.”
A) Explain your situation
B) Pass her a few credits
C) Hope the receptionist swings both ways and try to seduce her (Hard seduction check)
D) Anon suggestion
80cc67 No.8435
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484507 No.8448
You slide ten credits across her desk. “Oh, I made an appointment earlier. I’m in the records, I promise.” She stares at the credits, then back at you.
“Oh, that’s right, miss. I didn’t see you at first. Yes, you have an appointment in five minutes. Let’s see… Mrs. Asare is available, as is Mr. Hedgins. Which would you prefer?
A) Asare
B) Hedgins
f7c442 No.8450
>>8448Can we ask about who they are?
15336d No.8451
484507 No.8452
>>8450Mrs. Asare has been at the society for about 5 years. She's an Olsair (a highly intelligent race known for their large ears and transluscent hair) and she's lived on-planet all her life. Hedgins is a human who's worked there for two years. Before that, he was a field archaeologist.
80cc67 No.8459
f7c442 No.8460
1a2343 No.8461
>>8448A. Gota go with the alien babes
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484507 No.8471
By the way guys, I'm an idiot and I forgot to ask you this before you left the ship. What are you three wearing? Remember, less clothes or tighter clothes increase mobility, more clothes make it harder to be stripped. Pick one for each of you
A) Keep your current clothes. (shorts, short sleeved shirt)
B) Wear long pants and long sleeves (people will think of you less sexually)
C) Wear a one-piece jumpsuit made of sturdy material.
D) Wear a one-piece jumpsuit made of breathable material. (more skin-tight and sexual, but still hard to remove)
E) Wear a coat and protective gear (more slowing, but the safest option)
F) Anons suggest
6bdba1 No.8472
09355b No.8473
| Rolled 89 |
>>8471what kind of climat is on that planet?
e3f9e6 No.8474
f7c442 No.8475
09355b No.8477
if its cool enough id say B
484507 No.8479
>>8473It's a city in the spring. Warm, for the most part, but climate-controlled to a comfortable 70 degrees or so
352997 No.8480
>>8471I'll go with A,
(Btw, join the chat!
http://webchat.freenode.net/ channel:#storyline)
484507 No.8482
Remember you have to pick for Emily and Nadia too. Heat is 70 degrees Again, sorry for not doing this on the ship
f7c442 No.8486
>>8482>>8475Oh yeah, casual A for all
e3f9e6 No.8487
>>8482so maybe ourselves D
Nadia B
Emily uhh any? maybe A or C or D again?
80cc67 No.8490
1a2343 No.8498
15336d No.8499
>>8471A for all seems most reasonable
484507 No.8500
Alright, we'll say you've all decided to wear shorts and short sleeved shirts
484507 No.8501
“Hedgins, if you please.” you say. The receptionist nods, pointing you down the hall to her left. “Third door on the left. You follow her instructions, knocking twice on the third door.
“Come in!” says a tired-sounding voice from inside. You open the door. Hedgins sits behind a desk packed with papers and books. He is young, not more than 30, but the dark circles under his eyes age him beyond that. “Did I have an appointment? Terribly sorry, I must have forgotten.” he says, in a clipped and polite accent. “Please, sit down.
You take a seat in front of his desk. Nadia and Emily remain standing behind you. “Thanks. I’m on planet because I’m looking for an artifact. Very old, unknown in origin. Might have been discovered in mountains.” You take the map orb out of your bag and hand it to him. “Looks like this.”
Hedgins takes the orb from you and looks it over carefully, adjusting his thick glasses. “Hmm. The writing is certainly ancient…” he stops for a second, setting the orb down on some papers to type into his computer hurriedly. After a minute he turns back to you.
A) Tell him the truth
B) Tell him you’re trying to protect it from the Awakened Union (charisma)
C) Tell him it’s not his business (charisma)
D) Anon suggest
484507 No.8504
>>8501I don't know how I forgot to type this but: Hedgins asks "Why exactly are you looking for this item?"
f7c442 No.8505
>>8501D Need to know only, it is for his own good.
1a2343 No.8506
>>8501Semi truth. There are a crew of known criminals after it and were trying to stop them gettin to it first.
484507 No.8507
>>8505Alright, option accepted
484507 No.8508
>>8506I would say this is option B
362e77 No.8509
>>8501D tell him you're a fellow archaeologist
80cc67 No.8510
6bdba1 No.8511
| Rolled 58 |
>>8501B
15336d No.8512
484507 No.8515
Looks like a tie between B and D. Someone roll a tiebreaker
1-50: B
50-100: D
04979a No.8518
| Rolled 28 |
>>8515tie breaker
ccf7c6 No.8519
| Rolled 26 |
>>8515Tie breaker
484507 No.8525
Give me a 60+ charisma roll
15336d No.8529
| Rolled 39 |
>>8525 04979a No.8530
| Rolled 35 |
>>8525charisma
484507 No.8533
“It’s being sought by the Awakened Union. I’m trying to keep it safe from them.” you explain. He nods slowly, his expression highly skeptical. “Admirable. Likely a lie, but admirable. Honestly, I couldn’t care a bit either way, though it does irk me a little when people lie to me.”
Hedgins removes his glasses to massage his temples. “If you had come looking for this item a few days ago, I would have been able to let you see it. We had it here, in our collection. Unfortunately, about 3 days ago, it was stolen. They came in during the night, broke a window, and absconded with it. They left no clue to their identity, but if you ask me, it was a member of some low-life gang. I believe a young man named Sven may have had something to do with it. He approached me the day before the robbery, looking to buy the orb. I informed him that it was not for sale at the moment, which was true. He looked rather angry as he left. I can’t give you any help as to locating him, but he wore a tie and vest, which makes be think he could be a bellhop or a bartender somewhere.” He shrugs. “I’m sorry for the trouble, but I can’t help you any further. Nor do I want to, really. For all I know, your motives could be as dark as the thief's.”
A) Leave
B) Try to sell him one of your artifacts (map orb, attribute absorber)
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15336d No.8537
80cc67 No.8539
1a2343 No.8541
f7c442 No.8543
09355b No.8546
484507 No.8552
Give me a tiebreaker
1-50: leave
50-100: sell the orb for 150 credits
1a2343 No.8556
| Rolled 42 |
>>8552we can come back and sell it later right?
484507 No.8557
484507 No.8559
You head back out onto the street, waving for a cab. Nadia grumbles as you do. “Well, that was entirely useless. Now we know someone who MIGHT be a bartender MIGHT have been involved with a robbery. Very helpful.” You feel much the same way. This doesn’t leave you with many leads. A cab pulls up to you, and the driver asks for your destination.
A) The shopping malls
B) The party district
C) The regional administrator
D) Anon suggest
f7c442 No.8562
1a2343 No.8564
6bdba1 No.8565
484507 No.8566
>>8565>>8564>>8562Looks like we're going partying
484507 No.8567
The cab pulls up to a street in the bustling entertainment district. An explosion of neon color greets you. The crowds here are thick and fast moving, threatening to separate you from your companions. You look at the signs in front of some nearby buildings. The most elegant, well-maintained building reads “Le Mignon”. Beside it is a building with a large entrance called “Elber Brothers’ Fights”. One’s sign features a dancing blue woman, proclaiming “The Dark Sun”. A seedy-looking establishment is signed as “Porter’s House”. Down the road there is an obvious brothel called “T and A and A”. Finally a sign for a building featuring a whip and a pair of handcuffs reads “Issues”.
Where do you go?
A) Le Mingon
B) Elber Brothers’ Fights
C) The Dark Sun
D) Porter’s House
E) T and A and A
F) Issues
G) Hail another cab and get out of here
80cc67 No.8569
f7c442 No.8570
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484507 No.8585
I think I'll let the voting on this run for a little longer
15336d No.8590
c561ff No.8592
F
484507 No.8596
>>8592>>8577>>8571Alright, it looks like you're heading to Issues. Roll two 50+ luck checks to see if the crowd separates you from your companions
09355b No.8597
| Rolled 4 |
>>8596luck 1
09355b No.8598
welp
1a2343 No.8599
| Rolled 33 |
>>8596Lucky numbah 69
17c1de No.8600
| Rolled 37 |
>>8596luck
484507 No.8601
>>8599>>8597Well then. Looks like you're heading to Issues all by your lonesome. Next part coming asap
1a2343 No.8602
>>8567>C) The Dark Sun>E) T and A and AWish we could go to these two aswell.
OH SHIT we could split the already split party into each place or would that get to cluster fuckey?
484507 No.8606
>>8602You might have time to visit more than one, depending on how things go.
And yes, your companions might wander into other clubs, depending on rolls. I can already tell you based on that 4 that at least one will for sure. If they do, you won't play as them, but you will have to go recover them.
484507 No.8612
4 rolled for Emily, fail
33 rolled for Nadia, fail
As you make your way toward Issues, the crowd pushes against you. You manage to fight your way through, but when you look back, Nadia and Emily are gone. Oh well. They knew where you were going, surely they’ll arrive as soon as they make it through the crowd.
Give me two luck rolls, please.
You walk up to the door of Issues and the bouncer lets you in without a moment’s hesitation. The club is dark inside, lit by dim mood lighting and elaborate candelabras. The walls and corners are built as extravagant lounge spaces, where patrons recline and even have sex. Curtains hang down from the ceiling in many places, as do all manner of strange harnesses and contraptions. It doesn’t take much imagination to figure out what they’re for. The population of this club is every bit what you guessed it’d be. Most wear some form of leather or spandex, and all wear tight-fitting clothing. A few people are naked, but for collars around their necks or cuffs on their wrists. Some are led around on leashes while others wield riding crops. As you step further into the room a woman walks by in a bright pink spandex suit with a hole in the crotch. All in all, you fit in rather poorly here, in your white and navy shorts and shirt. It’s no secret that you’re not a regular.
You look around the club. The bar itself appears to be in the center, built around an impressive liquor cabinet. To the left of you there appear to be changing rooms, with small cubbies for street clothes. Above the changing room is a sign that says “Free clothing rental”. Off to one side of the club is the “play” area. Over there, men and women alike kneel or lie on bondage pedestals, being molested by machines or passersby, many held in place with ropes or chains. Atop a stage over there, one man is being roughly spanked with a paddle by a woman in leather. A neon sign above the stage reads “sub and dom competitions, cash reward”. To the other side of the club is a lounge area, where patrons relax and drink.
A) Go to the bar
B) Go borrow some clothes to blend in
C) Enter a competition
D) Take a seat in the lounge
E) Leave
F) Anon suggest
0fa283 No.8615
| Rolled 71 |
>>8612luck
f7c442 No.8616
| Rolled 34 |
>>8612Lucky!
B
17c1de No.8617
1a2343 No.8619
>>8612B. we clearly chose the best club
80cc67 No.8620
cde154 No.8622
B
484507 No.8625
You head over to the changing rooms. There’s one free stall, and you step into it. You quickly strip down, pulling off your shorts, shirt, bra, and underwear. You place these in an open cubby. You look at the clothes hanging on the rack. There’s a red full-body latex suit, with zippers on the crotch and butt. Next to it is a similar black suit, which has openings on the crotch and on the breasts. Further down the rack is a leather corset, a pair of black stockings, and a pair of long black gloves. Further is a see-through frilly, lacy nightgown-ish garment that leaves you totally exposed. Also on the rack is a full-head black mask with openings for your eyes, nostrils, and mouth, and beside it is a leather dog collar with a nametag reading “bitch”.
A) Zippered suit
B) Suit with holes
C) Corset, stockings, and gloves
D) Frilly nightgown
E) Nothing at all
Do you wear the mask or not?
Do you wear the collar or not?
484507 No.8627
>>8625As usual, F) anon suggest is open
17c1de No.8629
>>8625B
yes mask
yes collar
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484507 No.8632
>>8625Of course, participating in lewd activities without a mask will lower your respect. Not by much, as the club has a strict "no camera" policy, but by a little
f7c442 No.8633
>>8625A (Cover the most)
Yes mask (Cover ID)
No (We are not yet a "bitch")
cde154 No.8634
B
No mask
Yes collar
1a2343 No.8635
5d46eb No.8636
| Rolled 17 |
>>8633Seconded
484507 No.8637
I'm going to have to let voting run longer here, considering that mask and outfit are tied
c561ff No.8638
B, no mask no collar
c561ff No.8639
B, no mask no collar
fb40d3 No.8641
c561ff No.8642
>>8639Sorry for the double post, internet is shitty right now
0fa283 No.8643
>>8625>E) Nothing at allno mask
collar
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09355b No.8646
>>8625A
no mask
dont care about collar
1a2343 No.8647
But B is literaly the second worst outfit to A. C, D, and even E are much better. I just want to be the best sub we can be.
484507 No.8649
Alright, if I've counted right (I triple-checked but still, tell me if I somehow fucked up) your choices are:
B
No mask
Collar
484507 No.8650
>>8647I tried to make sure each outfit could dom or sub. B gives free access to all holes, plus breasts. That can go both ways, I think
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1a2343 No.8653
>>8650Yeah but the revealing nightgown is better
;_; 484507 No.8654
Tossing your bag and gun in the cubby with your clothes, you pick out the latex suit with the holes. It takes a little difficulty to get it on over your curvy hips and D-cups, but you manage it. Once the black latex is clinging tight to your body, you pick up the “bitch” collar and clasp it around your neck. You stop to admire yourself in the mirror. You look like the pure incarnation of lust. You run your hands over your latex-clad hips and breasts, stepping outside the changing rooms with confidence in your step. A passing man in a leather vest whistles. “You ever need a leash for that collar, you come talk to me.” he says with a laugh before leading his naked slave away. What’s your next move?
A) Go to the bar
B) Enter a competition
C) Take a seat in the lounge
D) Leave
E) Anon suggest
17c1de No.8655
0fa283 No.8656
>>8654
>B) Enter a competition fc3985 No.8657
484507 No.8658
Make a confidence roll also, if you don't mind. This is your first time naked in public, after all
cde154 No.8659
>>8654Can we go to the "play" room
fc3985 No.8661
| Rolled 33 |
>>8658Confidence
80cc67 No.8662
484507 No.8663
>>8659You may, though unless you want to fondle bound people or ask someone to tie you up, there's not much of a reason for you to
484507 No.8664
>>8662>>8657>>8656Alright, looks like your first destination is the competition stage
1a2343 No.8665
>>8663You say that like we need a reason to get tied up other than wanting to get tied up. And thats exactly what I want to do.
f7c442 No.8666
1a2343 No.8667
>>8665Or at least have something lead into the play room.
484507 No.8668
>>8667Anything can lead anywhere. I promise, I wouldn't have written it in if there wasn't a way to end up there. Everything I hint at is 100% possible
484507 No.8669
Though you know you look as sexy as Aphrodite with your pussy and tits exposed, the feeling also makes you slightly uncomfortable. Knowing that all these people are looking at you, completely naked, is a very new feeling. You’ve never so much as flashed someone in public before. Part of you wishes you’d put the mask on as well. You shake off your discomfort, reminding yourself that nobody here knows you or will see you again, and then you set off across the room. The stage at one end of the club catches your eye. Perhaps the community will accept you quicker if you show them that you’re one of them. As you approach, a man in a white opera mask greets you.
“Are you here to compete?” he asks. “We have another competition starting in just a minute. The premise is this: two doms each spank, whip, or otherwise play with a sub. The first dom to make his or her sub submit and give up wins 50 credits. The sub who lasts longer also gets 50 credits. We need one more sub and one more dom to get started. Which would you like to compete as?”
A) Dom
B) Sub
C) Thank the man and leave
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17c1de No.8671
0fa283 No.8672
f7c442 No.8673
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484507 No.8676
“Er…” you think about it. “I think I’ll be the sub, thanks…” He nods, waving you up onto the stage. You climb the steps. Atop the stage there are two leather benches, each with built-in cuffs attached to all four of the legs. It looks like these cuffs are intended to hold the sub’s arms and legs in place while they take their punishment. The other sub, a willowy young man wearing long latex gloves and knee-high boots, is already secured to his harness. You slip into yours, and the masked man gently closes the cuffs on your ankles and wrists. You feel a momentary bolt of panic as you’re bound and fastened in, rendering you bound and utterly helpless before whoever your dom may be. A blonde woman in a leather corset stands behind the male sub, holding a riding crop in her hands. A minute later, you feel a pair of hands squeeze your partially latex-covered ass. Looking back, you see a very tall willowy woman with mousy brown hair standing over you. Her face bears an expression of cold confidence and disdain.
The masked man clears his throat, picking up a microphone from beside the stage. “Greetings, patrons of Issues! I have the honor of presenting to you another of our signature ‘Red Asses’ comptitions! Allow me to introduce you to your entertainers! First, a young gentleman many of you may know, sub Paul! And domming him tonight, Mistress Crystal! And competing against her we have Mistress Stella domming sub…” he bends over, whispering in your ear. “what’s your name, dear?”
A) Give your real name
B) Make up an alias (specify)
0fa283 No.8677
>>8676B) Make up an alias (specify)
Briar Rose
cde154 No.8678
>>8676B Rose (on account of our hair)
80cc67 No.8679
>>8676B) Alex Whateverherlastnameis. Our rival.
fc3985 No.8680
f7c442 No.8681
484507 No.8682
484507 No.8683
“Alex Enovich!” he proclaims. The observers cheer. “When I say ‘go’, you may begin!” Mistress Stell kneels down before you, locking her eyes with yours. She reads your collar. “Bitch, huh? Is that your real name? It’s fitting. Tonight, Bitch, you’re going to take me to a victory.” She stands, walking around behind you and picking out a wide paddle with small holes in it.
The announcer yells “Go!” Not even a second passes before the paddle comes down on your ass. The latex seems only to magnify the pain. You scream, the strike catching you totally off guard. The crowd cheers at your misery. The male sub took his first hit without a sound. Your “mistress” continues to strike you, several more blows raining down on your rear. With each one, you make a pathetic noise, and the crowd revels in your misery. You can hear Stell’s laughter echoing through the room. “You must be new to this, Bitch!” she mocks.
Roll a 50+ pain resist roll!
09355b No.8685
| Rolled 8 |
>>8683feeling lucky
17c1de No.8686
| Rolled 77 |
>>8683pain
09355b No.8687
or not…
484507 No.8688
8 pain resist rolled, epic fail
Your body is wracked with a pain as strike after strike hits your ass. The paddle leaves your exposed skin bright, burning red. You pant, gasping for breath, hoarse from yelping. The crowd jeers at you. Stell laughs again, smacking you with her hand. You want to submit, but you know that if you do you’ll lose. Stell gives your poor ass a break for a moment, stepping back to the table of equipment to fetch a slender toy. She drips lube over it, and then your puckered ass. Your blood runs cold as you realize she’s holding a butt plug. You glance over at the male sub. He’s still being smacked with a paddle, but he’s taking it silently, his face red with pleasure. You feel the cold plug against your ass, lube running over your rear hole. Then, slowly, sadistically, Mistress Stell pushes it in.
“Ohhh, poor little Bitch. Your ass is so tight! You’re lucky I’m using a little plug.” She pushes the plug deep into you. The horrible little thing pushes your ass wider as it goes deeper, stretching your limits. You feel a momentary relief that the slime took your anal virginity, for if it hadn’t, this would be hurting far more. The idea that you’re thanking that monster for sodomizing you sickens you. The plug reaches its widest girl, stretching your ass wide, and then slips in, firmly stuck. The odd feeling of fullness is uncomfortable. Mistress Stell raps the plug a few times, then picks out a riding crop from the table and goes to work. These blows hit a smaller area of your ass, but they sting even more, making your already sore ass feel as if it’s on fire. “Bitch, Bitch, Bitch, Bitch!” Stell cries as she lays waste to your behind. “Give up, Bitch!”
Make a 40+ roll to see if you give up!
Make a 60+ pleasure resist roll!
17c1de No.8689
| Rolled 69 |
>>8688give up
04979a No.8690
| Rolled 64 |
>>8688resist
484507 No.8691
69 will roll, success
64 pleasure roll, success
You grit your teeth. You HAVE to hang on. You have to. Stell continues to whip you with the riding crop, every strike filling you with pain, and also a hint of twisted pleasure. “Is it embarrassing, Bitch, to be beaten with a tool meant for a lowly horse? I mean, for a human to be smacked around with a crop? How degrading!” She laughs obnoxiously. “Oh, but that’s right! You’re not a human at all, are you? You’re a Bitch! You know, I have a great big mastiff at home. It’s a shame I didn’t bring him with tonight, I could provide him with a suitable wife! Would you like that, Bitch? That thick, doggy knot, deep in your cunt?” As she says this, she plunges two fingers into your pussy. “You’re wet! You like this, don’t you? Don’t you, Bitch?” You don’t respond.
Mistress Stell kneels down behind you. Her talented fingers manipulate your pussy, flicking your clit and rubbing against your g-spot. The pleasure you feel is incredible. Stell continues to crop you as she does this, the pain mixing with the exctasy in your brain. Between the thick plug in your rear, the fingers in your cunt, and the crop on your behind, you think you might explode. Shooting a panicked glance at the sub next to you, you see that he too has begun to feel the heat, his ass bright red and his cock rock hard.
Make a 50+ roll to see if you give up!
Make a 60+ pleasure resist roll!
17c1de No.8692
| Rolled 46 |
>>8691pleasure
80cc67 No.8693
| Rolled 38 |
>>8685>>8691Give up roll.
484507 No.8694
d914d9 No.8695
Sighing pretty hard here. It's Bogwarts' fuck machine sequence all over again.
Why no choices, OP? If it was going to be rolls-only, why waste time with multiple rolls?
484507 No.8696
The fingers in your pussy are simply too much for you to take. The feeling of this goved stranger playing with you, abusing you, using you… it’s unknown, and incredible. All you want in that moment is to submit to her, to be a perfect sub, to obey her every command. As Mistress Stell smacks your ass, the pleasure and pain take you over, and with a loud moan, you cum all over her gloved hand. You can hear the quiet sound of your juices dripping onto the stage’s wooden floor. Stell laughs again, loud and mocking, and gives your ass a hearty slap.
“Bad Bitch! Mistress didn’t give you permission to cum, did she? DID SHE?” She grabs you by the hair, lifting up your head for the audience to see. You shake your head. “That’s right! Bitch came without permission. And so now, Bitch is going to be punished harder than she’s ever been in her life.” She swaggers to the table, fetches a seven-tailed flail, and holds it up to your mouth. “Kiss it.” When you hesitate, she grabs you by the head and forces your mouth against the leather of the flail. “Better! Now, Bitch, prepare your ass for utter destruction!” The crowd cheers as Mistress Stell walks around behind you. You steal a glance at the other sub. He is clearly aroused, but it doesn’t look like he’ll be finishing soon. Worse still, his mistress lazily smacking him with with a rubber paddle.
Mistress Stell raises the flail above her head and brings it down hard. The tails smack across your latex-clad ass, and they also strike the upturned base of your butt plug. The plug vibrates when it’s hit, sending even more joy radiating through you. It’s too much. You can’t take it. You’re a strong, powerful woman, but you can’t take another hit of your mistress’ flail. Bitch wants to continue, and submit forever, but Jennifer has had enough.
“I submit!” you cry.
Make a luck roll to see what Stell does.
484507 No.8697
>>8695What do you mean? The rolls determine the effects. The effects determine whether you win or loose. I'm happy to take critique, but I don't think I understand your complaint.
0fa283 No.8698
| Rolled 92 |
>>8696>luck roll e1b6ad No.8699
>>8697statistically speaking multiple rolls over a certain number… say 60… are always doomed to fail after 3 rolls unless some miracle god luck comes out
d914d9 No.8700
>>8697My complaint is that the players don't have any control over what happens. You may as well roll yourself, and there won't be any difference to the outcome.
And if you say 'well you're in a submissive position, of course you don't have any control' I will fucking cut you. We can still choose what our character thinks about, at the very least.
f7c442 No.8701
>>8699I agree multiple rolls does lower the impact of each roll, however to be fair it goes both way success or fail.
484507 No.8702
>>8699A 60+ roll has a 40% chance of success. The reason the rolls were high in this particular situation was because you started the encounter with an epic fail. Also, had you passed those both rolls, you would have won the contest
>>8700Good rolls mean you win, bad rolls mean you loose. Same with a d&d check or any roll of the dice. You have a point though. I didn't think to give you choice over your character's thoughts, but I'll certainly do that in the future. Beyond thoughts though, I don't see how I could have given you more choices, and really the thoughts wouldn't have had any impact on the outcome anyway. Still, noted
484507 No.8703
>>8698epic win! I'll get the next part out as soon as I can
04979a No.8704
| Rolled 14 |
>>8691stop bitching about the player losing control in a situation where we deliberately give up control.
It's called good writeing you knucklehead.
d914d9 No.8705
>>8704In a real-world consensual BDSM relationship, the sub is the one that's actually in control, not the dom.
484507 No.8706
>>8705Yes, you are 100% correct. But you're not in a relationship. You entered a competition where the goal was to endure a certain amount of pain for a certain amount of time. You're not a sub, you just took on the "role" or sub in the competition. I promise you that if you should end up entering into a real BDSM relationship, it will be handled in the way you're describing.
484507 No.8707
Mistress Stell laughs. She steps off the stage for a moment, and then hurries back. When she steps back onto the stage, she’s holding a lazer tatoo pen. “You lose to me, you get my mark.” she hisses into your ear. “Where would you like it? Your pathetic tits? Your hideous stomach? Your revolting face? Let’s try there, why don’t we.” Stell kneels before you, lifting your head by the hair and aiming her pen at you. The tip is about to touch your skin when you hear a yell.
“Hey!” Yells the announcer. “Get away!” He pulls Stell back from you, pushing her into the arms of two bouncers. “Nonconsensual body modification is expressly a violation of Issues’ house rules!” He nods at the two men. “Throw her out and put her on the no-entry list.”
Stell looks shocked as the bouncers cart her away. “No! You can’t kick me out! I’m… I’m a fixture here! I’m more important than all of you!” She keeps up this protest until she’s hurled out of the front door and onto the street.
The masked man unlocks your cuffs. “Sorry about that. She’s never tried to pull anything like that before.” He pressed a few credit chits into your palm. “Here, take her prize. You deserved it, having to deal with that. He shakes his head and walks away. You rub your sore bottom. With that ordeal over, you can get back to looking for your target. You wonder why exactly you even did that.
A) Go to the bar
B) Take a seat in the lounge
C) Leave
D) Anon suggest
f7c442 No.8708
>>8707A
I think we need a drink
80cc67 No.8710
7b11ce No.8711
| Rolled 87 |
>>8706I understand people's criticisms, but they're just being unfair, it was a special situation for a competition we were in :P thanks for the bdsm by the way, I like it, and there isn't much of it in these stories (at least the ones I've read)
If you wanna give people control, maybe let us select what we're beaten with, and not tell us how hard the roles will be, or make them equally as harsh
All in all, still enjoyable :-)
484507 No.8712
>>8711Thanks, I appreciate the support. That's an excellent idea. If something like this ever happens again, I'll use it
484507 No.8713
>>8710>>8708To the bar, then
484507 No.8715
You make your way over to the bar. A few people offer their condolences to you as they do. One woman shakes her head, commenting “She’s a fucking psycho. Nobody else here is that crazy, really.” You nod, thanking her, and sidle up the bar. The support the people here have shown you makes you feel a little more comfortable being almost naked around them. You can start to see that this club is really quite a friendly place.
Your sore ass aches a little as you sit down. The bartender walks over to you, a middle-aged man wearing a tie and a vest. “What’ll it be?” he asks, pointing to the menu.
A) Morla shot (very strong)
B) Fanto ale (moderately strong)
C) Col’s draft (moderate)
D) Sunshine splash (light)
E) Sissy’s spit (very light)
F) House special (insanely strong)
G) No drink
0fa283 No.8716
>>8715>F) House special (insanely strong) 7b11ce No.8717
>>8715B)
Drunk enough to be friendly, and these people seem nice so maybe we can make some new companions and also get some info about the orb.
e3f9e6 No.8718
484507 No.8719
Don't forget, you're still here looking for info about Sven the maybe-bartender-or-something
484507 No.8721
>>8718>>8717Ok, Fanto ale then
484507 No.8723
“I’ll take a Fanto ale, please.” The bartender nods, fetching the drink and pouring it into a tall glass. He slides it across the bar to you. You take a sip. The taste is strong but slightly sweet, with the faintest hint of raspberry. The bartender heads off to serve another client as you finish it off.
As you sit, two others come to the bar. With a glance, you see that they are the domme-sub pair you competed against. The sub, Paul, raises his hand. “A round for everyone!” The bar cheers as he pays for their drinks with part of his winnings. The domme, Crystal, looks slightly disappointed, but only until the bartender slides her a strong drink, which she gulps down with great vigor.
A) Order another drink (from the same menu)
B) Talk to Paul
C) Talk to Crystal
D) Talk to the bartender
E) Leave
F) Anon suggest
7b11ce No.8724
C) and if we have time could we also talk to the bartender? If so D) after
80cc67 No.8726
f7c442 No.8729
15336d No.8731
e3f9e6 No.8733
484507 No.8741
>>8733>>8731>>8729>>8726Give me a tiebreaker to decide if you talk to Paul or the Bartender (you'll probably get a chance to talk with the other afterwards)
1-50: Paul
50-100: Bartender
f7c442 No.8748
| Rolled 63 |
>>8741tiebreaker
7b11ce No.8749
| Rolled 81 |
tiebreaker brah
e3f9e6 No.8750
| Rolled 2 |
>>8741rooolllll
188c82 No.8751
| Rolled 97 |
tiebreaker brah
188c82 No.8752
>>8749>>8751My bad, I reloaded and guess I double posted. Bad weather.
484507 No.8753
484507 No.8754
When the Bartender finishes serving Paul’s round, he drifts near you. You wave him over. The music in the club is quiet enough that you can hear him sigh a little. Clearly he’s not the sort who usually enjoys talking to patrons.
“What’s up?” he asks.
“What’s your name?” You think a name would be a good way to start this conversation.
He thinks for a minute. “Earnest. Can I help you?”
What do you ask Earnest?
15336d No.8761
>>8754What the process to applying to work at a place like this is like.
7b11ce No.8765
>>8754Let's ask him about the other people sitting at the bar, Paul and sasha, what they're like, in case it helps us talk to them later
Then let's ask him if he knows about a bartender or something named Sven maybe.
484507 No.8766
>>8765Unless someone else votes within 10 minutes or so, we'll go with this
f7c442 No.8767
>>8754>>8765We should ask about Sven for sure
484507 No.8768
“So, how are these guys?” you discreetly point to Crystal and Paul. “Do you know them?”
He sighs. “Yeah. Those aren’t their real names, by the way. Almost everyone here uses an alias. Some of them are rich and famous, so they have to. Paul is a trust fund kid, for example. Daddy doesn’t like his sexual tastes, so he hides it the best he can. Crystal’s much more of a regular. I don’t know what she’s like outside of the club, all I know is that she drinks a lot and swears like a sailor. She’s not an alien, by the way. The blue skin’s just some aesthetic choice she’s decided on. At least, I think it is. Nobody knows with that girl.” He shrugs. “They’re good people. Paul bitches about his dad a lot, but I’ve never heard him say a bad word about anyone else. Crystal’s a bit more abrasive, but I hear that once you know her and she likes you, she’s pretty loyal. Beats me, cause she doesn’t like me. You gotta assert yourself, with her, and remember that she doesn’t mean half the shit she says.”
You nod. “Thanks. Say, you ever hear about a bartender named Sven? I heard he works around here.”
The bartender’s face hardens. “No. I don’t know anything about him.” He turns away.
A) Press the issue (charisma)
B) Talk to Crystal
C) Talk to Paul
D) Leave
80cc67 No.8769
f7c442 No.8770
15336d No.8771
7b11ce No.8772
484507 No.8773
>>8772>>8770>>8769Alright, how will you start your conversation with Crystal?
7b11ce No.8774
>>8773Ooh ooh I know, let's buy her a drink :P
f7c442 No.8775
484507 No.8776
>>8775>>8774Alright, coming right up.
484507 No.8777
Crystal gulps down her drink to your left. Finishing it off with a hiccup, and brushing her white-blonde hair back from her face, she orders another one. She sees you looking at her and shoots you a glance. “Hey there. It’s Alex, right? How’s it going?”
“Could be worse. Can I buy your next drink?” you ask, sliding her a credit chit.
She nods, brushing foam off her blue lips. “You most certainly can. I could use one, now that I’m out 50 credits. Damnit Paul…” she sighs. “So, first time?”
You nod. “Eh, not bad.” she comments. “When I first started coming here, I don’t think I would have held out longer than thirty seconds, getting hit like that.”
What do you want to talk to Crystal about?
484507 No.8778
Do you guys like this style of conversation, by the way? Would you prefer I give you options instead of letting you decide yourself?
f7c442 No.8779
>>8778I would like options simply because I'm lazy. And you can always leave the last option open for original players (we do have a couple of those)
80cc67 No.8780
>>8778Options would be faster. We can always write in if we think of something else we'd like to talk about anyway.
7b11ce No.8781
>>8777Now that we're a little drunk at least, let's ask if she likes playing for the other team
>>8778Donno how I feel about it. It's alright, considering we still all have a general direction to go in. Options are still nice, too.
15336d No.8782
>>8779Yeah. I think options are a bit more focused. It's not like they were that limiting in the first place, considering that there was always the option to add your own idea.
484507 No.8783
>>8780>>8779Alright, I'll do that then.
Options for this conversation:
A) Ask about her skin
B) Ask about her life outside the club
C) Ask about her sexuality
D) Ask about Sven
E) Ask if she plays for the other team
F) Suggest
f7c442 No.8784
7b11ce No.8785
>>8783E) but when I said "plays for the other team" wouldn't that fall under sexuality? I meant if she liked girls :P
And yeah, if someone thinks of a good option, we can just vote on it if we all like it.
80cc67 No.8786
7b11ce No.8787
>>8785Well, change my vote to C, probably covers more.
484507 No.8788
>>8785Oh, that's what you meant! I assumed it was in relation to her BDSM
484507 No.8789
>>8787>>8786>>8784We'll go with C and D
7b11ce No.8790
>>8788Haha, it's way to ask if you're gay or bi, but I guess I forgot we just played a "team game"
484507 No.8791
Crystal accepts her new drink and starts to slowly nurse it. “So, what is it you want to chat about? I assume you didn’t buy me the drink for no reason.”
You nod. “So, you ever swing the other way? I mean, you know… girls?”
She laughs. “Why, interested? Don’t get your hopes up. You’re cute, sweetie, but you can’t step to my speed. In terms of attraction though, I don’t give a shit. Boys, girls, robots, I like ‘em all… hell, I’d probably screw a dog if I felt like it. Not Guargans though. Fuckin’ gross, those guys. You start all your conversations with questions like that?”
You shake your head. “Just the ones I have with interesting people.”
She laughs again, the alcohol seeming to hit her a little. “I’m flattered. It’s too bad you’re not more experienced. I could use someone to take out my aggressions on after that failure.”
“So, I don’t suppose you know a guy named Sven? Bartender around here, maybe.”
She shrugs. “Maybe I do. I know a lotta people. Why, does this guy mean something to you?”
A) Offer her a bit of cash (starting at 20 credits, then a charisma roll)
B) Try to appeal to her compassion (Epic charisma roll)
C) Drop it and change the subject
D) Talk to Paul instead
E) Anon suggest
f7c442 No.8792
80cc67 No.8793
484507 No.8794
>>8793>>8792Give me a 50+ charisma roll
80cc67 No.8795
| Rolled 39 |
Charisma roll.
Did we get any more respect with Seigroy from that training session with him?
484507 No.8796
>>8795Yes, you did. Every successful training session increases his respect (and failed ones decrease it)
484507 No.8797
You flash a credit chit. “You know, you might find it’s worth your time.”
She nods. “I might. If, say 30 credits somehow fell into my lap…”
You pass her the chits she wants. She smiles. “Great. See, the thing about my buddy Sven -and I use the term ‘buddy’ VERY generously, is that he doesn’t just work one bar. He works in every bar on this street. Makes more money that way, and it’s easier for him to avoid people like you who come looking for him. Tonight I’m not too sure what he’s doing, but if I had to guess I’d say he’d be in… Porter’s House.”
A) Talk about something else
B) Thank her for her help and leave for Porter’s House
C) Ask her to come with you
D) Anons suggest
f7c442 No.8798
e9f855 No.8799
7b11ce No.8800
>>8797D) let's challenge her to a bet an see if we can take her punishment? Before we head out to porters house.
484507 No.8801
>>8800This is viable, but it will definitely be hard
f7c442 No.8802
>>8800Hum I like it, but what if we bet we will last longer on one of the machines?
484507 No.8803
>>8802Sure, I'd allow that too, I guess. I'll give you guys some time to decide whether you want to pursue it. It'll require a mid-range charisma roll to convince her to take your bet
7b11ce No.8804
>>8802Either one. I want to challenge her and show her we're not so weak as our first showing on stage. What if we challenged her to something and let her decide?
f7c442 No.8805
>>8804Sure let her decide what will be the challenge, should make the charisma roll to convince her easier right?
80cc67 No.8806
>>8803Sure. We'll probably lose but whatever.
484507 No.8807
>>8806>>8802>>8800Alright. I'm going to need a 35+ charisma check. If you succeed, the bet will function this way: every "round" of the contest will consist of you rolling against me (you for Jen, me for Crystal). Every time one beats the other, the loser gets closer to giving up. Both women get two losses each before they give up. Crystal will have a small bonus to her rolls, since she's more experienced.
f7c442 No.8808
| Rolled 52 |
>>8807charisma
80cc67 No.8809
| Rolled 11 |
>>8807Charisma roll.
7b11ce No.8810
484507 No.8815
“So, you think I’m weak?” you ask. She nods.
“Yeah, I do. You’re new in this business. I’ve been domming for years.” She scoffs.
“Would you be willing to but that to a bet?” You challenge. Crystal almost spits out her drink. You continue. “You win, I’ll give you, say, 40 credits. I win, you give me the same, and you treat me with some more respect. What do you think? I’ll even let you pick the game.”
She laughs. “Alright, you’re on. If you’re so eager to throw away your credits, I’ll oblidge. And because I’m nice, I’ll play whatever game you want. I’m better at anything, I guarentee it.”
You look around the room. A few machines catch your eye. One has two rubber dildo fastened to it, the idea being that a victim will get on their hands and knees down in front of it and be double-penetrated. That could be a problem though- your butt is newly in use, and she’s had years to use hers. Another machine has a single dildo, but what appears to be a vibrate setting. You wonder if she uses vibrators. Additionally, you could always dom her, or have her dom you… and it wouldn’t be hard to gather participants for a gangbang-off. If you wanted, you could just go at her with traditional sex too. Or maybe you could think a little harder and come up with something different.
A) DP machine
B) Vibrator machine
C) Dom her
D) Let her dom you
E) Gangbang
F) Lesbian sex
G) Anons suggest
H) Back out.
I) Change the stakes
80cc67 No.8816
17c1de No.8817
f7c442 No.8818
>>8815E we may get some help from other (maybe Paul) to make her lose?
7b11ce No.8819
>>8815I think our best chance is A or B
I guess I'll throw in for A
80cc67 No.8820
>>8819She gets a bonus to A.
484507 No.8821
>>8818I'll let you make a charisma roll for this, should you pick E. After all, the bartender said she's rude. You might be able to convince people to go rougher on her and easier on you. MIGHT.
1a2343 No.8826
e1b6ad No.8827
484507 No.8828
>>8820This is correct. She may get a bonus or penalty to other things as well, though you can't discern that based on what you know about her right now. I'm heading to bed for the night, so tomorrow I'll check in and tally votes.
280af2 No.8889
09355b No.8891
>>8815C and D are probably bad choices
E promises a good chace for us
but what i really wanna see is A
so vote for A it is
5d46eb No.8892
| Rolled 72 |
>>8815E
97e212 No.8895
45c9a3 No.8897
80cc67 No.8898
7c5f80 No.8901
A
45c9a3 No.8903
>>8433is something like getting sold on the black market possible?
(yeah I know I'm lacking behind)
484507 No.8904
>>8903Not really. I'm not planning on giving you any game-overs like that. You could lose companions in similar ways though.
484507 No.8906
>>8901>>8898>>8891>>8827>>8819Looks like A is your choice. I'll write up the next section and then we'll begin the roll-off. Hopefully rolling against you myself will make this encounter seem much more fair.
484507 No.8908
“That one.” you say, pointing to the double-dildo machine. The blue-skinned girl laughs.
“Alright, sugar-tits. Whatever you say. Let me warn you now, you don’t know what the hell you’re dealing with.” She drains the rest of her drink. “I’m Mistress Crystal. Ask anyone here, they’ll warn you never to go up against me.” Jumping up from the bar, Crystal walks over to the ‘play’ area, her naked cyan hips swinging seductively. She climbs up on a pedestal in front of one of the machines, positioning herself on her hands and knees. “Come on then!” she calls to you.
Steeling yourself, you slide off your barstool and head over. You don’t walk with the same arrogant self-assurance she does, but in your mind’s eye you know you have the will to win. You’ll show her who’s tough. You hoist yourself up onto the pedestal next to hers, your latex suit squeaking a little as it rubs against the leather. You get on your hands and knees, lining your butt up with the two dildos. Crystal wolf-whistles at you, and you shoot her a defiant glare.
The crowd seems to have noticed that something’s going on, and a few people wander over to watch you. Crystal calls to one of the men. “Hey, you! When I say go, switch these machines on, got it?” He nods, walking over to place a hand on each machine’s “on” switch. Crystal redirects her attention to you, pushing her pale hair out of her eyes. You notice for the first time that it really is quite a striking pairing with her blue skin and dark eyes. “We start on the highest setting. No babying. Feel free to chicken out at any time.”
A) Go through with it
B) Back out
076e63 No.8910
5d46eb No.8911
| Rolled 99 |
>>8908A
e1b6ad No.8912
484507 No.8913
>>8912>>8911>>8910Alright, give me a roll, and I'll roll myself for Crystal
f7c442 No.8914
| Rolled 38 |
>>8913Go
484507 No.8915
>>8914That is an incredibly narrow win!
484507 No.8917
38 rolled for Jennifer
32 rolled for Crystal, plus 5 for experience = 37
One of the other men in the crowd comes forward with a bottle of lubricant, pouring a generous amount of it on your butt, where it slowly drips down your thighs. Crystal grabs the bottle from him and does the same to herself, smiling a little at the sensation of the cool liquid being poured over her most sensitive spots.
“Go!” Crystal yells. You don’t get a chance to even process the word before you hear the ‘click’ of the machine being turned on. The lower dildo thrusts forward first, pushing deep into you, invading your innermost sanctum. As you are filled for the second time today, you can’t help but breathe a sigh of arousal. As the first dildo pulls out, the upper one thrusts, pushing into your clenched anus. The pure force of the machine drives it inside, pushing past your body’s best efforts to keep it out. You groan as that curious feeling of fullness rushes through your body again. As the first dildo thrusts inside you again, you get the feeling that this could be a hard battle to win. Since the contest, you’ve been in a state of arousal, and the rough thrusts of the machine only compound it. The dildos themselves aren’t very big, but the force that pushes them inside you like jackhammers is getting to you.
Crystal seems to react in much the same way. When the dildos begin to work on her, plunging into her blue pussy and ass, she bites her lip hard, face twisting in an expression of pleasure and surprise. The crowd watches her, transfixed, as her shoulders shake. It occurs to you that since Crystal is a domme, it’s possible that she hasn’t had anything inside her in a while. That thought gives you hope, and you gather your resolve as the top dildo opens your ass again.
Suddenly, you see a man approaching Crystal. It's Paul, the sub from before. Her brown eyes widen as he walks up to her. She opens her mouth to say something, but as she does, he grabs her c-cup breasts roughly, squeezing one in each hand. She groans in pleasure, slowly struggling to say "St… stop…"
Do you tell Paul to stop being unsportsmanlike?
A) Stop him
B) Let him continue (gives Crystal a penalty)
Give me a roll and I’ll roll for Crystal. If you win this roll, you win the contest!
45c9a3 No.8918
A
f7c442 No.8919
80cc67 No.8920
| Rolled 38 |
>>8917A
484507 No.8921
>>8920Is this your roll for Jennifer? You didn't call it, so I'd let you roll again if you want…
15336d No.8922
>>8917A
Might as well win this fair.
80cc67 No.8923
| Rolled 94 |
>>8921Okay. Rolling for Jennifer.
484507 No.8925
>>8923Good job, you turned a fail into an epic win.
484507 No.8929
94 rolled for Jennifer
65 rolled for Crystal, + 5 for experience = 70
“Hey! Stop that!” you say, in between gasps. Paul looks surprised, and then a little sheepish, releasing his grip on Crystal’s sky-colored breasts and backing away. Crystal looks over to you, opening her mouth to thank you, but the only noise that comes out is an elongated mouth as the dildos continue their assault on her.
You redirect your attention to resisting your building orgasm. Trying to blot out the sensations of being double-penetrated, you try to think about the mission, about the orbs, about Sven being at the Porter’s House, about Emily and Nadia, but none of it is enough to pull your attention away from the pleasure at hand. The rubber dildos hammer into you with force and speed, making wet slapping sounds as your well-lubed holes accept them. Every second alternates between fullness in one hole and fullness in the other, competing signals of happiness shooting to the pleasure centers of your brain. They rub against each other as they alternate, only your thin inner walls keeping them apart. Your panting gets louder as louder as you feel your arousal building. Who would have thought you’d get off on this so much? The crowd is silent, waiting for a winner with baited breath.
And then, without a hit of notice, their winner is chosen. Crystal screams, her jaw dropping wide open as she reaches orgasm. Her body quakes like a leaf, helpless and fragile before the twin shafts of the machine. Her arms collapse from under her, smacking her face into the leather of the pedestal. She turns her head to give you a look of failure, a trail of drool running out of her mouth to pool on the leather. Her face is sweaty, her hair tangled. The dildos, not caring that she’s cum, continue to pump in and out of her, the wet “splort” of each thrust somehow compounding the weakness she has shown. The crowd cheers loudly, celebrating her defeat, as the machines are shut off. The upper dildo ceases its movement while buried in Crystal’s ass, creating a lovely tablaeu: Mistress Crystal on her knees, her face lying in a puddle of her own drool, with a rubber cock deep in her twitching ass.
You hop down off your pedestal, raising your arms above your head in victory. You walk over to Crystal, staring her down. “Looks like I was tougher than you thought, huh?” you ask. She nods, smearing her drool all over her blue cheek. Getting an idea, you grab a fistful of her hair and use it to lift her head up.
“Who’s tougher than you?” you ask, yelling the question loudly for all the club to hear.
“Alex!” she replies. You grin, releasing her head. Out of decency, you gently pull her forward off the dildo, helping her down from the pedestal. She sighs.
“That was a good show you put up. I loose, fair and square.” She hands you 40 credits. “You know, I like you, Alex. You’ve got guts. It seems like nobody on this planet has will like you do. That’s why I hate it here so much. What I wouldn’t give to get off this rock…” she shakes her head. “Anyway, good luck going after Sven. Come see me again sometime.”
A) Go after Sven
B) Ask Crystal to come with you to get Sven
C) Use your communicator to contact one of your companions
D) Anon suggest
80cc67 No.8931
>>8929B) If she can prove herself useful in the field maybe she can be part of the team.
15336d No.8932
>>8929B. Might as well try to make some use of our new friend.
f7c442 No.8933
5d46eb No.8937
97e212 No.8938
484507 No.8940
>>8937>>8932>>8931Alright. Make a luck roll please
15336d No.8942
| Rolled 77 |
>>8940 17c1de No.8943
| Rolled 6 |
>>8940luck
484507 No.8948
“Actually, do you think you’d like to come with me? I’m probably going to be leaving the planet before too long. You could always catch a ride with me… I won’t charge you if you help me out with a little job.” you suggest.
Her eyes widen. “Are you kidding? Yes! Totally! What’s the job?”
“I’m looking for an old relic. I’m pretty sure Sven knows where it is. If you can give me a hand and help look for it, I can give you a lift off the planet.”
She nods. “Hell yes. Count me in.”
The two of you retrieve your street clothes and head back to the changing rooms. One of the stalls is taken so you find you have to share. Crystal unlaces her corset and tosses it aside. You notice there’s a long scar on her stomach, almost hidden entirely by the blue tint of her skin, but still clearly there. The blue girl slips into an all-black outfit consisting of leather pants, a tank top, and a motorcycle jacket. She helps you finish peeling your black bondage suit off your skin, then politely pretends averts her eyes while you dress back in your shorts and short-sleeved dress shirt. Crystal puts her corset away in a locker with her name on it, and then the two of you step out onto the street, waving good-bye to the bouncer.
As you head over to Porter’s House, successfully cutting through the crowds, you get a call on your communicator. It’s Emily. You take the call, and her face appears as a hologram. “Jen! I’ve been trying to call you for 5 minutes! We found the guy! He challenged Nadia to a drinking contest, said he’d tell us about the orb if she won. She.. uh… didn’t. She’s sleeping now. Still, I’m hanging out over at Porter’s House, and he’s still working the bar. Get over here!” You assure her you’re on your way, and then hurry into Porter’s House. The place is rather dingy, and almost completely unoccupied. You’re surprised it manages to stay open, competing with the snazzier bars in the district. Emily waves to you from a corner booth.
“Hey, Jen. Who’s your friend?” she asks
“This is Crystal.” you explain. “Is that the guy?” you point to the man behind the bar, a handsome young man with a hairless face and elegant features. Emily nods. You see Nadia sleeping peacefully on the booth seat beside Emily. You guess the girl couldn’t take her alchohol. What’s your next move?
A) Go talk to Sven
B) Draw your gun and shoot him, ask questions later
C) Anons suggest
15336d No.8951
f7c442 No.8952
80cc67 No.8954
45c9a3 No.8956
>>8705>>8700>>8695@Narcolep
you don't have to listen to all shitters (his first comment in this thread, critizing not having enough effect on the story).
You can't write a story on the fly and meeting up with everyones expection. You are doing great, there is really not much to criticize. If I had to name critic (and thats just nitpicking)
-character information is spread over multiple posts (clothing/damage/perks/items)
-pretty low shame level (its nice to have the options like eg. walking around naked, with a "bitch" collar… but it takes the wind of the sails for later body exposure, having a character who is not only accustomed to beeing naked but also strips on her own will).
more a personal opinion, maybe consider other characters (emily) beeing more ashamed and unwillingly to just strip naked
484507 No.8957
484507 No.8960
You step up to the bar, Crystal close behind you. Sven looks at you, raising a well-maintained eyebrow. Between his carefully styled brown hair and his perfectly clear skin, he gives the impression of someone who takes his appearance very seriously.
“Crystal. Nice to see you.” She nods, not smiling.
“May I help you?” he asks, his voice confident and slightly smarmy.
A) Confront him about the orb
B) Ask him about his “drinking contest” with Nadia
C) Intimidate him into telling all (intimidate)
D) Anons suggest
80cc67 No.8961
15336d No.8962
>>8960B. We'll probably be able to have an easier conversation if we don't jump straight to business.
fb40d3 No.8964
484507 No.8965
>>8956The google doc in the first post should clarify the character's details.
I agree with you on the second point. I'm trying to give the character as many varied options as possible. I honestly didn't expect the players to pick the way they did, but I rationalize it by saying that she needed to fit in to gather information. And, of course, the characters I control all behave in a much more logical way, simply because they're not up to the players (You've already seen Nadia as an example of a much more modest and uptight character, when she's not drugged). I tried to convey that Jennifer was uncomfortable with it at first, though perhaps I didn't go far enough to do that. Thanks for the critique, I appreciate it.
fb40d3 No.8966
>>8965I for one think that you are doing great. Keep up the good work!
484507 No.8967
“So, I hear you out-drank my friend?”
“Hardly. She passed out in the middle of her second drink. And the whole time, she had the most repulsed look on her face. I have a feeling she’s never drunk before in her life. I almost felt bad for pressuring her into it.” He laughs, shaking his head. “I made sure you give her a nice blanket when she passed out- I felt bad about doing anything else, honestly.”
A) Confront him about the orb
B) Challenge him to a drinking match
C) Ask Crystal to challenge him. (hard charisma check)
D) Ask Emily to challenge him (moderate charisma check)
E) Intimidate him (intimidate)
F) Anon suggest
f7c442 No.8969
>>8967A
>>8965Yeah nature of the beast. Players can pick option completely out of character. I think you did a good job while giving the players what they want.
15336d No.8971
fb40d3 No.8972
484507 No.8973
80cc67 No.8974
80cc67 No.8975
>>8974On second thought, I'll switch to E.
45c9a3 No.8978
>>8965didn't saw the googledoc, nice idea, still has a little flaw. If someone tries to catch up story or re-read everything, it's pretty useless
with the second point, its just that I want to prevent, that one day you have another audience, who abuse your generous range of options, turning the main character into a cheap whore.
like I said, those are just minor issues; I really love your stuff.
484507 No.8979
>>8978Good point. I'll do my best to be more consistent in reminding you about HP and inventory, when it's relevant.
I think that if I get a crowd that's intentionally sabotaging progress for sex, I'll step in and make the options more constricting. So far though, all the lewd choices you've made have gained you something (if you'd dressed more modestly or not competed in the whipping game, for example, you wouldn't have your new companion or Sven's location)
484507 No.8980
>>8975>>8972Looks like E is the way you're going. Give me a 40+ intimidate roll
fb40d3 No.8982
| Rolled 14 |
>>8980Feeling lucky
15336d No.8983
>>8982
>epically failing an intimidationOh boy, here we go.
80cc67 No.8985
>>8979As long as we don't have to avoid sex all the time I don't mind tighter restrictions. I don't particularly like the stories where smut scenes are usually the result of some lose condition.
484507 No.8986
This thread hit bump limit, I've made a new one
15336d No.8999
Link to the new thread for any stragglers.
>>8984 1a2343 No.9232
>>8979I serioustly dont think anything needs to change since nobody is going to purpoustly sabotage the quest like that, I would have been realy disapointed if we wouldnt have been able to do what happened at "Issues" because it wouldnt have been in character (something that has not exactly been established or realy needs to be fot this kind of story) or you were afraid of players abusing the options. There was no reason to not realy stop the players form having fun in a BDSM club which is a safe enviornment and designed specificaly for that reason, since there were no severe consequences for it, it was for fun and players clearly wanted to do it there shouldnt even be any fear of sabotage now or later. Just look at the Fell'os fight where is said a part of us wanted to submit to him and become his bitch, there was no option for it and nobody sugested it. You have been doing fine and dont haveto start tightening the player choices and starting witch hunts, take it casualy and have fun. Thats what we're all here for anyway.
a04986 No.9282
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>>9232>there were no severe consequencesOP even mentioned walking around without a mask may lower our respect, and we were pretty close to that happen (Stella).
It's a game. I want that we "earn" our erotic, not just say; screw the story lets just fuck the next thing that walks up.
I don't say, it wasn't hot stuff, exposing our character and join that contest, but that reduces the character's shame level faster (from the players viewpoint). A character with a low level of shame makes some erotic scenes wear of faster.
I want a real protagonist I empathize and feel the thrill with not a dumb puppet, that strips in the middle of the streets because someone tells her to do that. Somewhat like onyx's "She won't just lie down and masturbate" rule.
That's just my opinion and I'm okay with people thinking different about it. I don't want to restrict the players options, but maybe a little obstacle for the extra lewd stuff like rolling for it,
Or we start small and increase our lewdness level over the course of the night.,
Or we drink a few drinks to get the courage.
a04986 No.9283
>>9282 (continue)
>>9232Just to give you an example, it could have been as follows:
You choose to wear the suit with zippers. After walking around some time seeing all those people shamelessly wearing practically nothing,
you get a little hot and eager to experiment and decide to expose your breasts too. A bartender walks by and offers a drink,
beeing quite thirsty we take one and gulp it down like hot cu…, " wait what am I thinking about". You continue walking around and eventualy peek in one of those stalls we noticed earlier.
Options
A: peek inside one of those stalls
B: the mission! don't forget about why you are here
You chose (A)
Looking inside we see a guy sucking of a cock through a gloryhole. You get a little hypnotized by his motion. As you snap back to mind and turn around,
you notice some people staring at you, more precisly at your crotch. Just a moment later you feel a hand at your crotch-zipper, revealing what you didn't plan showing.
You look down and see a young man kneeling in front of you, before you get a hint what's going on he runs off, high-fiving two of the people from the staring crowd and dissapears.
You think you heard him shouting "See, I told you she's shaved" you don't think about it for long, with your focus beeing at the moment to cover your crotch.
You try to move your zipper back up but it jams. With every following second you face turns more visibly ashamed. As you increase the force on your zipper,
you loose balance and fall on your buttocks. A hand reachs for you "may I help", you grab it and heaves you back to feet. You forget for a moment that your vagina is still visible,
rubbing your backside and looking at the buck naked alien appeareance in front of yourself. "Thanks, aehm sir?", "This is what happens to peeping toms, by the way I'm actually a girl"
she replies. You look at her genitals in disbelieve, noticing this she adds "oh, you never saw a space cucumber before? Imagine a living strap-on and add the feeling of having cock yourself.
At least that's what I think having a cock feels like. About your zipper problem" before you can react she pulls herself on the zipper without luck. A little ashamed of her sudden assitance,
that remembered you about your mother back when your were a little girl "don't worry, I just leave it like it is, it's not like I have anything to hide here"
you reply with an shaky undertone while looking at her naked flesh. The (starring)crowd also dissolved by now and you indeed feel better, speaking to yourself
"well, most people here are naked"…
sorry, wrote more than I intended to do