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A Star Is Born Mistuh C 02/09/15 (Mon) 16:06:56 1d1331 No.9647

This is my first attempt at modding one of thse, so bear with me and be patient. In this game, your name is Riley Valentine. You are a young girl at the age of eighteen whose ultimate goal is to make it in the entertainment business in any of the sub-genres of entertainment you can. During this game you will make decisions that will affect your stats differently. Every decision you make can also affect you in the future. For example, lets say you decide to strip or do a porn shoot while you're an unknown. They might be good for the pocket books early on, however, a bad luck roll and those can come while you're a rising star and fuck you over. Happiness, Respect and Fame are the bars that need to be watched the most. Too low happiness and you run the risk of turning to drugs or suicide. If your respect and fame balance badly, high fame, low respect you'll essentially be unable to be cast in anything not by the wayans brothers… for example.

Anyways you have just arrived on the streets of Los Angeles ready to fight, claw and scratch your way to your own big break. So much to do so little time.

Current Stats:
Clothing:
Jeans
Plain Black T-shirt
Sneakers

Happiness: 25/100
Respect:50/100
Fame: 0/100
Cash: $1000
HP: 10/10
Acting: 0
Singing: 0
Improv: 0
Athletics: 0
Creativity: 0

Home: Less

Items:
Suitcase: Currently only has 3 sets of clothes.
1 pair of jeans, 1 mini skirt, 1 pair of short denim shorts
1 black tanktop, 1 Ramones t-shirt, 1 white blouse
3 plain white panties
3 plain white bras
2 Pairs of Socks
1 pair of pantyhose
1 pair of 3 inch black heels

Day: Monday, 12 noon.

Options:
A) Look for a place to stay
B) Look for a job
C) Go Shopping
D) Look for classes/seminars
E) Other (Playa Suggestion)

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 16:12:06 fad7e6 No.9648

>>9647
A

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 16:56:17 7af9ea No.9649

>>9647
B

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 16:57:05 9c9b39 No.9650

>>9647
A

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 16:58:51 83f65c No.9651

>>9647
A

Mistuh C 02/09/15 (Mon) 17:01:59 1d1331 No.9652

A it is. Someone roll a luck test.

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 17:03:12 b47e20 No.9653

Rolled 16

>>9652

You go it.

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 17:03:18 b47e20 No.9654

>>9653

>got it

At least we avoided an epic fail, I guess.

Mistuh C 02/09/15 (Mon) 17:13:59 1d1331 No.9655

Awareness Check 60+ please

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 17:14:20 9c9b39 No.9656

Rolled 23

>>9655
Awareness roll.

Mistuh C 02/09/15 (Mon) 17:17:41 1d1331 No.9658

You found a modern newspaper floating in the ground and began to look through the housing section. Something immediately caught your eye. A fairly spacious one bedroom apartment for just $150 a week. You thought about your current money and realized you could last at least a month, even with other expenses. That would give you plenty of time to hunt a job.

You immediately hail a cab and have the driver drive you to the adress. He simply grins when he hears the adress and when you get out he refuses payment. Odd. You find the apartment, the door is wide open, presumably for possible tenants to explore. For just a second you wonder if you should be suspicious of the open door [awareness fail], but it passes, you figure theres nothing to worry about. You walk in and the door slams, suddenly people come out of hiding. Nine men are now surrounding you.

"Ohohoho, would you look at the time, boys, its rape time." The man who slammed the door shut, trapping you in laughs. The men slowly start to close in.

A) Beg them to stop [epic charisma check]
B) Dive through a window and hope for the best [agility check]
C) Try to fight em [multiple combat checks]
D) Player Suggestion

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 17:20:11 d8cb90 No.9659

Can't wait to see how we're clawing to the top in this story.

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 17:20:14 9c9b39 No.9660

>>9658
B

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 17:21:20 d8cb90 No.9661

>>9658
What a great start to the story :3
B)

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 17:21:45 7af9ea No.9662

>>9658
this for a failed luck roll? isn't a little too harsh?

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 17:22:05 d8cb90 No.9663

>>9662
To be fair, we were given an okay awareness roll to pass…. We got unlucky.

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 17:23:49 b47e20 No.9664

>>9658

B

There's no way we're taking on nine men at once in a fight and they don't seem the type to listen to reason.

Mistuh C 02/09/15 (Mon) 17:25:34 1d1331 No.9665

55 agility check
Lets hope this one passes

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 17:26:31 7af9ea No.9666

Rolled 40

>>9665
agility

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 17:27:51 7af9ea No.9667

>>9663
yeah, but the awareness roll was difficult

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 17:27:56 b47e20 No.9668

>>9666

We are so cursed.

Mistuh C 02/09/15 (Mon) 17:34:20 1d1331 No.9673

This is bad. Real fucking bad. You're locked in the room with nine thugs ready to gang rape you… you knew at this point that you needed to escape. Right now you were wishing you hadn't picked up that newspaper or you had picked up a more expensive apartment. Regardless, there was nothing you could do… until you noticed that one window was slightly ajar.

You had hope. You had a chance. You sprinted, passed the men, you sprinted you could taste the freedom and for a moment you forgot about them, You took a dive through the window, but got caught. One grabbed your feet, one grabbed the window and shut it, effectively trapping your now vulnerable body. You felt the cold metal of a pocket knife as it cut your pants completely off, leaving you in your white panties. The men laugh and start making lewd comments about your ass, taking turns slapping it, laughing and screwing around for now…

A) Scream
B) Struggle
C) Players Choice

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 17:34:24 7af9ea No.9674

>>9673
A

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 17:35:15 0cfd84 No.9675

>>9673
B

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 17:35:57 d8cb90 No.9676

>>9673
A)

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 17:36:53 b47e20 No.9677

>>9673

B

I don't see a white knight riding into a place like this.

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 17:41:18 7af9ea No.9678

>>9673
A

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 17:41:49 7af9ea No.9679

>>9674
>>9678
damn, i already voted and forgotten, sorry

Mistuh C 02/09/15 (Mon) 17:43:30 1d1331 No.9680

Okay still at 2-2 then. Next legal vote decides.

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 17:43:14 c6f71e No.9681

Mistuh C 02/09/15 (Mon) 17:44:46 1d1331 No.9682

A it is. Gimme a 50% luck roll.
Also gimme a 60% Resistance roll

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 17:45:03 b47e20 No.9683

Rolled 54

>>9682

Luck

Mistuh C 02/09/15 (Mon) 17:45:58 1d1331 No.9684

>>9683
Finally a win!

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 17:45:29 7af9ea No.9685

Rolled 11

>>9682
res

Herpyderp 02/09/15 (Mon) 17:46:13 6c7cec No.9686

Rolled 2

>>9682
Resist

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 17:46:15 d8cb90 No.9687

Rolled 64

>>9682
resist baby

Mistuh C 02/09/15 (Mon) 17:47:05 1d1331 No.9688

….well fuck

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 17:48:07 d8cb90 No.9689

Rolled 31

>>9684
>>9685
We were so close to victory. Guess this is the entertainment business we're working in now

Mistuh C 02/09/15 (Mon) 17:50:36 1d1331 No.9690

Gimme a generic roll. No floor on this one.

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 17:50:37 d8cb90 No.9691

Rolled 69

>>9690
Generic roll come on save us

Mistuh C 02/09/15 (Mon) 17:52:48 1d1331 No.9692

>>9691
>69 in roll and in post number.
>69 is best number.
>Double 69s
>Oh shit

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 17:53:57 7daa76 No.9693

>>9692
>>9692
what a horrible storytiem to have a curse

Mistuh C 02/09/15 (Mon) 17:59:49 1d1331 No.9694

One last luck roll.

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 18:01:02 7af9ea No.9695

Rolled 2

>>9694
luck

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 18:01:13 7daa76 No.9696

>>9694
what are we bea-…..nvm

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 18:01:25 b47e20 No.9697

>>9695

Jesus Christ, Riley. Can anything go your way?

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 18:01:49 7daa76 No.9698

>>9697

A star is born they said…they never told me we were gonna be a star of failed rolles

Mistuh C 02/09/15 (Mon) 18:02:27 1d1331 No.9699

Well… on the plus side… that roll was a small deal and nothing bad happens per se.

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 18:03:27 7daa76 No.9700

>>9699
I guess that's good??

Mistuh C 02/09/15 (Mon) 18:08:16 1d1331 No.9701

You screamed and screamed and screamed. You would get attention you would get help. You screamed rape just as loud as you could as you struggled against the men pulling you in. You noticed a black van pull up right in front of the complex and a man inside looking right up at you. Perhaps you have a new hope after all? Perhaps your screams worked?

Before you could think on the new situation enough the men yank your legs, you try to struggle but you simply don't have the strength with four of the men pulling on your legs, and in an epic fail of bad luck a sharp piece of wood shreds your top and your bra meaning once you're pulled back into the room with these nine hooligans you're left in just your panties. The nine men almost simultaneously begin to unzip their pants, pulling their cocks out. One goes straight for your mouth, you twist and turn and try to avoid it but it plunges in. He begins raping your throat. You choke and gag and struggle trying to get away. Suddenly BANG BANG BANG. The door flies open having been kicked in by the man who had looked directly at you earlier. He looks fucking pissed.

"HOW MANY FUCKING TIMES DO I HAVE TO TELL YOU. YOU. DONT. RAPE. ON. MY. TURF." He pulls out a gun. Bang. Bang. Bang. Bang. Bang. Bang. Bang. Bang. Bang. Nine headshots. Whoever the fuck this dude is he just saved you from a fate worse than a forced blowjob. The man looks at you. "This is Don Corleone's territory. I am Don Corleone. You came to a really, really bad part of town. I might not be around next time to save you, but if I am I don't accept any violence towards women happening in my turf. You seem to be a bit shaken so tell you what. You're free to use this place for a week since they obviously cant bother you anymore. You cana also take any money they have on them. I'll send a guy to dispose of the corpses later." With that he leaves.

You figure what the hell and decide to raid the guys pockets. A single dollar is all they had between them. Whelp that was almost a complete waste of time. You decide to wash the taste of the dick off, getting a drink of water from the sink. You then put on new clothes, figuring in this neighborhood your safest bet is Jeans and a T-shirt you quicky get dressed. You got a temporary place so you're set for a week… what do you do next?

A) Look for a new place thats not in this part of town.
B) Look for a part time job
C) Look for gigs
D) Shopping
E) Seminars/Classes
F) Other [suggest]

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 18:11:21 d8cb90 No.9702

Rolled 35

>>9701
C)

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 18:12:35 b47e20 No.9703

>>9701

E

gotta get the skills to pay the bills.

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 18:51:22 9c9b39 No.9705

>>9701
C

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 19:50:18 83f65c No.9707

>>9701
B

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 20:08:01 ef8ace No.9709

>>9701
C. Jesus, what a way to start a story. A nine on one gangrape where they promptly get their heads blown off before they can realy get going. And that talk of low happiness leading to possible suicide, yeash. Not looking to erotic from where im standing, but maybe thats just me. Hopefuly things will get better for us aswell.

Mistuh C 02/09/15 (Mon) 20:43:36 1d1331 No.9711

>>9701
C wins
Luck Roll pls

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 21:00:59 83f65c No.9713

Rolled 48

>>9711
Luck roll

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 21:25:24 edfd84 No.9722

>>9709
Yeah this story looks like complete garbage to me.

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 21:29:31 ef8ace No.9724

>>9722
I didnt meen it was bad, just not a great way to start. the events just arent exactly something I would consider "hot".

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 22:41:11 5063db No.9737

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>>9647
>>9673
we are wearing underwear? when did this happen? (you forgot that in your top post)

what the fuck, we roll a minor fail and get 7 enemies at once, we roll a minor luck win and everyones get's fucked up. Deer Lord, Op you should balance this more out

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 22:43:52 ef8ace No.9738

Might have been bad to throw your players into a locked room with 9 (serioustly NINE fucking guys is a bit much) to get face fucked because of 2 failed rolls as the first thing to happen. It want even going to be something that would have been fun to read even, like usualy iteres some twist or something to make it more than just fucking someone who doesnt want to be fucked (usualy sexualy dminating untill they begrudgingly start to like it is best). The possible rapeing came to soon without any set up or introduction.

AlphaWanker 02/09/15 (Mon) 23:57:50 ef8ace No.9747

>>9711
I hope all this criticism hasn't discouraged you OP, you're just starting off after all.

AlphaWanker 02/10/15 (Tue) 00:54:30 cb25f6 No.9748

>>9701
What a strange start to a story. I have trouble to understand how we got there after all the different rolls. I would agree it wasn't really erotic. However, you are giving a try and I do like the idea of something closer to real life situations.

Narcolep 02/10/15 (Tue) 01:52:40 b3e54f No.9753

>>9701
Holy shit, he straight up murdered those guys. This is already the darkest thing on this board times a hundred.

Narcolep 02/10/15 (Tue) 01:55:18 b3e54f No.9755

>>9738
>>9737
>>9748
You guys definitely have a point, but it's ok, it takes practice. I'm 4 posts into my own story and I'm still having a hard time with certain elements of the format. Don't feel discouraged, OP, criticism doesn't mean we dislike the story. I'm enjoying it thus far, even if it needs a little tweaking!

AlphaWanker 02/10/15 (Tue) 02:08:30 ef8ace No.9762

>>9755
>I'm 4 posts into my own story
Threads bro, 4 threads in.

AlphaWanker 02/11/15 (Wed) 16:41:16 ef8ace No.10088

>>9711
If you're going to stop for a few days or even entirely, do the courtousty of telling us so we know if your coming back instead of just dissapearing.

AlphaWanker 05/16/15 (Sat) 18:28:45 125df6 No.22201

sage