>>14222
Not bad; I like the interactions between Morgan and Jack. Though some of the other characters feel like plot-movers, they work within the context of the two being in the park, so it's acceptable.
Although I might be biased, because I enjoy power-play scenarios, I'd enjoy reading the full thing once more when it's finished. Not a bad work, I must say.
As for the OP's question, I love tickling related stories and the like. Here's a shameless self-bump with one of my older stories I was working on.
http://www.tickletheater.com/showthread.php?t=79527
It was originally part of a three-part series I wanted to do, but had mixed feelings on once I finished the first part and began drafting the second and part of the third. Not sure if I still want to finish it how it was originally supposed to go, or spin it off into something more serious.
Another of my most recent stories; the product of a binge drinking session a few months back.
http://www.tickletheater.com/showthread.php?t=80879