/tk/ - Tickling

>>4554

One day QT-mc-apparently high school girl is exploring the "seriously don't explore here" woods and as she wanders around, well past what is safe she becomes mysteeeeeeeriously lost. Oh lookie there, it's a gorgeous flower! Innocent-mc-perfect bod goes to pluck it. As she tries to grasp it a a nearby tree hooks under her arms and pulls her back and pins her to the trunk. The flower, bulb hanging from the stem, starts ringing a cute little alarm tune, mocking and confusing cutie-mc-perilous. After a few minutes of suspense the figure of a small witch girl in a traditional witch hat and filly outfit emerges from the deeper in the woods. "What a catch!" the little witch chirps admiringly, looks our heroine up and down. "Yessir, you're a good specimen for my next batch of spells". "A w-witch?!" the main character whom we shall now refer to as "Gal" fumbles for words. "What are you' please, I don't want to be cursed or hurt or made into a potion!". Witch girl snickers, "Well only one of those is arguable here. Trust me though, this will be a fun experiement. Magic is fun, we're gonna have fun, don't worry none.". "Was that rhyme on purpose-? No, I don't care, I'm NOT having fun, I'm scared! Please, I-" Gal stops short seeing Witchy lift a cute little wand and make a grand gesture, pointing at her. "Endure a few more rhymes 'cuz that's how magic works I'm afraid! Hold on tight and let me demonstrate!… Okay that last one wasn't on purpose though, I'm talking about the spells here. "Wiggy-woggy, Hokey-pokey! Boggly teasers rise, okie-dokie-dokie?!"" Witchy twirls her wand and the tree begins to shimmer green tendril vines emerge from the trunk on either side of Gal and wiggle in the air on either side of her. "What are the-" Gal starts before being interrupted by the vines snaking into the arms of her shirt and poking and wiggling into her underarms with their rounded tips. "Hey-heiii! N-no, wha-he-he-he! What are they do-hoo-hoo-ing! I-he-he! I don't like this!" the vines make twirling and spasming pokes along her underarms, making quite a show tussling the fabric at the breast of her blouse every which way as Gal squirmed yanked her body side to side squinting her eyes and turning her chin down in embarrasmment. "Don't like the vines or are they not doing their job right?" Witch joked. "Well there's more than those two, let's see if the rest can find spots to better please you." As if on cue the other vines finish making their way sneaking up the bottom of Gal's blouse and begin making their motions along her ribs. Gal struggles with a now panicked effort to shake them off and the play all along her sides. Mind and heart racing Gal tires her best to think of anything to help her endure or escape and one of the tendrils brings her a sudden surprise, shooting into her belly

button and squirming in and out of it's opening. "Wha-WHAT-hahaha! No! Hyeh heh heh! Gyuh! Heheehiiiii! No-hoho! Stop, plea-hease! Ghi hii hii!" Gal begs. "You're right," Witch begins. "I'm a little disappointed. I know I wanted them pokey but I was looking for more boggly, you know? Something like fuzz or slime? Well I can augment them easy enough but hmmm…. for now let's move on to another spell. "Pause-because"!" At this the vines suddenly halted.

>>4555

"Well I think you might have an inkling of how these spells are gonna keep going, so let's have quiz time!". "*gasp* *pant* What on earth are you talking about?! This is crazy! Let me down, I hate this!" Gal shouted. "I don't believe it for a second!" Witchy responded "You were so cute just now, it looked like you were having the time of your life!". "No siree, the way you were laughing you were surely enjoying yourself quite a bit!" "Knock it off you little monster, you know what you're doing!" Gal spat. "-and you've got so much energy to spare… but there's time enough for things to come when they cum" Witchy accentuated with a suspicious gesture that look like both a wave of dismissal and an explosion, popping her fingers out. Now it's time for question number 1! "Now to be fair you must know there's a punishment each time you fail to answer a question correctly! So don't be silly and throw the game" As if Gal even considered such a uncautious route! "-and if you answer all three of my questions incorrectly there's a special punishment in store! Try your best!" Witchy finished explaining. "Okay, question 1! How many vines were summoned to tickle you!" This reality had been driven into Gal very well, there was no need to hesitate. "five" Gal answered, relieved she would neither face a small or large punishment from this question. "Incorrect!" Witchy laughed. "My my, I know you were really enjoying yourself but you really didn't notice? You got a rather specific treatment did you not? There are more of the little guys on stand-by below you, waiting to tickle your lower body. Now it looks like they get their chance! Boom-boom-resuuuume!" Witchy sang as she twirled her wand again. "What, no! That can't-" Gal looked down and it was true, six more vines rose up to meet her legs and began their motions along with the other vines who were halted from before. Four vines chased Gals legs as she kicked every which way, they alternated, twirling along into her inner thighs. between her outside legs, above and under her kness, and into her inner thighs. Every movement Gal made they out maneuvered her and move to a now vulnerable position. All attention was made to trying to at least take off sensations from her legs and she made the same mistake she was being punished for. She miscounted, two vines were left unaccounted for and they made their move to remind poor Gal by poking at her butt. "Eeeek! Gah-hargh! gyeh-hee-hee! You perverted little twerp, Sto-hahahap it! I'll Ki-hee-hee-heeeep- kill you-hooo!" "Pause-because!" Witchy ordered. "Before queston two I'll give you a second to catch your breath so you can actually use words." Witchy laughed. What felt like five minutes passed. "Okay I think you're ready… oh! But first…". Gal looked to her questioningly and begrudgingly waiting for her words when suddenly something clasped over her mouth. She eyes in a frenzy found the sound, A hose branch of sorts had come from the tree and began forcing her lips open and son after soe liquid slowly pouring in. "This is a very special tree" Witchy began "It catches little ladies such as yourself yes, but it also works to make sure they're well taken care of. It realized you must be very thirsty from this whole ordeal so it's keeping you watered" Witchy laughed at the irony.

>>4556

"Do you best not to fight it, it's careful not to make you gag or nothin'.You think this feels weird, just wait 'til feeding time, ha ha! Gal pitifully and shamefully eagerly accepted the tree's kiss feeding and when she was sufficiently hydrated the hose unlatched, leaving an embarrassing saliva trail as it retreated. "Okay, okay! I'm getting tired of waiting, we've got more quizzing to do, so on to number 2! "…You gotta go to the bathroom sweetly?" Witchy inquired. "No!" Gal immediately shot back. "Tsk tsk tsk…" Witchy nodded her head side to side. "I would think you would have learned not to make such rash answers." In truth Gal was holding her bladder and Witchy knew it. Well on we go to the next punishment!" Witchy shrugged."Play style twisted, enhance mischief! Boom-boom resume!" Witchy chanted and twirled her wand yet again. Before the vines even started moving again Gal started preemptively laughing and crying in frustration "F-hahahack you, I hate you so-hohoho muhahahach!"

-and this is where I had to cut things off because it was getting too late. It was a bitch editing out all chatroom format and irrelevant posts so I don't think I'd consider writing on the spot there in the future.

I think I may have made a thread like this in the past but maybe it was somewhere else…? Anyway I have some other concepts written somewhere and a sort of outline for another story but I'll see if this thread generates any activity before getting into all that. This story started out with me just wanting to see more stories so I really do encourage anyone else out there to share whatever they have because I want to be entertained and offer what little input I can myself.

It's hard, because I don't know if the inherent value of stories is as high as it used to be. I mean, I dig them. I like to partner them up with art, even. But it feels like the outlets for tickling stories and a good readership for them is real hard to find.

It can give everything a certain soul. That's kinda what hooked me on a lot of the fics and the art and that back in the day.

Was bored, wrote this:

My Ticklish Angel

M/F

http://notticklish.tumblr.com/post/117553960291/my-ticklish-angel

>>4565

> I don't know if the inherent value of stories is as high as it used to be

It's not. Barely anyone reads stories anymore. Writers either hold on to their one or two devoted fans or they simply give up after a while.

No one has a large enough attention span to enjoy a story anymore.

>>4565

More and more recently I've grown to gain an appreciation for tickling stories since it seems like there are aspects of tickling which you can touch upon on in a story which are harder to convey in art.

Part of the problem really may just be hooking people in, giving them some kind of incentive to read a story. Goes for myself at least, I honestly don't read a lot anymore because there don't seem to be a lot of stories being written these days and the ones that are written either aren't written great, don't feature characters I like, don't feature content that appeals to me, aren't by authors whose works I've enjoyed in the past, or some combination of the aforementioned.

Personally I think the golden for tickling stories was on the two incarnations of the ATF, since you had a decent amount of content being produced featuring characters people may have been in to. Granted looking back, I think very few of those works have actually stood the test of time, Jaynin's stuff still being readable off the top of my head.

I like stories because there's a lot of people who write better than they draw.

>>4589

I only write stories because I write better than I draw.

And that's not saying much.

>>4608

OP here (dropping the name), this is this best I've been able to draw, I don't think I have the capacity for much better. Not a great story-teller either but with stories you can more easily see what's wrong and fix it on the fly.

I swear, not trying to make this thread about me.

>>4586

Give a link pal (if they're up somewhere, if not then post one), I wanna see if I like your stories.

>>4578

Eh, doesn't really get me excited really. I need more buildup and colorful characters I guess.

>>4641

Apologies if I somehow gave the wrong impression, but I'm no writer, find it actually kind of tiring to be honest. I'm an ideas guy at most.

>>4648

Me too really. What kinds of ideas though? Anything you would want to see worked into something?

>>4650

Most of my ideas are usually focused on characters that I've seen in a video game I've recently played or have at least played, or from anime, manga, books, etc. Once in a blue moon I may have a general idea.

The tickler in almost all cases is male and a character (Using the term in the loosest sense) created for that idea, I don't really care for using preexisting characters because my ideas are of the non-consensual variety and a mixture of foot tickling and foot fetishism, though full on tickling can work depending on the character, as can adding in other activities that could be seen as annoying, demeaning, possible of causing slight pain, etc. Besides the inherit pleasure of engaging in the tickling and foot fetishism, I also enjoy having banter between tickler and ticklee and have the whole event be a clash of wills, the tickler trying to get under the ticklee's skin and get a reaction out of them or bring their anger to the forefront. The ultimate goal being to drive them to and over the breaking point where dominance has been proven and they're in tears, can possibly be cajoled into saying or do demeaning things, stuff of that nature. I don't like full on mind breaking because that pretty much removes the defiance from them and thus most of the joy in the activities. Of course all of the aforementioned is mostly concerned with characters who could be said to have a normal or strong will, with more timid characters the fun can just be in reveling in their sense of powerlessness.

I usually prefer my ideas to be "believable" in the sense that within the universe they could possibly occur. For example, if I wanted to do an idea focused on Chun-Li I wouldn't have the character who is going to be tickling her beat her in a fight or anything of that nature, but result to underhanded methods that she may not be prepared for. I may also have a preference for working the tickler into something the character would be involved in or could come across, though I'm not shy about using the serial pervert if nothing really works. For another example using a Street Fighter character, C. Viper is a spy and could possibly find herself in the clutches of some terrorist or criminal group, I prefer having the tickler be a member of that group in charge of interrogation or a third party hired to do interrogation. Speaking of which, the scenarios can run the gamut, but I do think I may focus quite a bit on interrogation, criminals, misused authority, or doctor/scientist in addition to the aforementioned serial pervert.

Truthfully I can't say off the top of my head which idea I may really like to see worked into something, I don't write a lot of them down, am incredibly indecisive, and my mind is seemingly always flitting from one idea and one character to the next, though I do think I have perennial favorites who I may enjoy seeing worked over.

>>4652

I must say, your mindset it's abaove the average in this matter. Many people would simply go "Characters X gets tickled by Y, lolololol"

That is something not advisable, at least when I write I try to, just like you, avide to the general universe on which the characters are from to make the situation plausible.

>>4642

Get what you mean. It was kind of a spur of the moment sort of thing, inspired by the gif at the top of the story. Not much focus on heavy tickling and more arousal / build up.

I like tickle stories that are realistic, but also to the point. So in future stories if I have characters with names, will try to characterize them through their actions.

>>4657

I have certainly noticed X tickled by Y scenarios being requested or done before, which I chalk up to a few reasons. First being that it can be hard to come up with a decent idea and sometimes you want to get the process started as soon as possible. Second, lots of people are focused on pictures, in which it can be hard or downright impossible to include the more mental aspects (Well unless it's a comic) and the artist pretty much has just the face and to an extent the body to convey a character's thoughts or emotions, probably why after feet, facial expressions can be one of the most important things for me in a picture. Third is that people simply like to see different things in tickling, some like it when the ticklee enjoys it, some just scenarios that are playful or don't swing too heavily towards the non-consensual, some like myself enjoy seeing the non-consensual and tickling used as a form of dominance and torture, some enjoy a mixture of the aforementioned, etc.

I think my desire to stick to plausibility comes from the fact that I'd like to respect the source material (Not to mention, depending on how a character is captured can provided excellent ammunition for taunting) and the possibility that I get some joy out of providing a plausible narrative. Though this isn't to say that I haven't toyed with the idea of self created character triumphing over another in their chosen fields of proficiency if I think it's in the realm of possibility. For example, characters from Fire Emblem Awakening ending up losing a bout, but keeping their lives at the cost of their footwear. The one who defeated them claiming the aforementioned both as trophies and as a means of annoying the character, of galvanizing the character to try better should they cross weapons again.

I also like my the restraints and sometimes the implements in my ideas to fit the setting. For example if a character was going to be tickled in an abandoned warehouse, I'd probably have them bound with rope to a chair or other piece of detritus, not have a set of stocks just magically appear.

>>4734

The instant gratification can be another bonus and as you said can require not putting a lot of thought into. (Which I personally still like to do, does play a part in making it hard to come up with a satisfactory commission idea though) On the other hand, for me personally a lot of these picture tend to come off as sort of boring anymore. Stocks can be incredibly appealing to see used, but overuse of them eventually makes you bored in a way because it's the same thing, just with a different character in them.

Combining multiple characters from different universes with nothing in common is also something I don't really care for in pictures or stories. To me if you're going to do that then the characters in question should have decent connection between their universes, like they're created by the same person or company or they've had crossovers in the past and could be said to mesh well. (The numerous fighting games such as SF, Tekken, and King of Fighters immediately come to mind.)

Have never gotten around to properly watching Sailor Moon, but I watched it as a kid and it does have appealing characters.

http://jaynin.hisdivineshadow.net/SMstory.html

A set of stories based on Sailor Moon that I used to be fond of as a teenager, think they still might stand up well.

>>4764

The first story was pretty good for a while despite some awkward logic from the characters but overall it dragged on way too much and I can't imagine trying to read ten more parts (I did like how the one got caught because she couldn't use her fire powers near the fertilizer and chemicals though). That's something I really hate about most stories I find too, they make a ridiculous number of parts to them and obviously people won't stay interested. Ideally you should have more self-contained stories unless you have a supreme confidence you can keep things fresh and interesting.

>>4926

On the surface the first couple do not seem so long to me, then again readers want different things out of their stories and likewise writers like to try different things. I'll be truthful and say that I'm not sure I ever really read them totally myself and didn't just skip to the tickle parts. When you're writing work like this for a specific audience, I imagine it's a balancing act between providing an adequate setup and keeping the reader's attention long enough for the payoff to begin, how satisfying the latter ends up being can be influenced by the former I think. Can't say much for the length other than I think these were written over a period of time, which is different than having them all available to read at once.

I think idea wise I definitely lean towards self-contained, but I don't think I've a problem reading something long if it stays enjoyable.

So uh… I've got a pretty big thing for loli and I've started a few relevant stories, that likely to bother anyone (I'll probably end up posting anyway)?

>>5154

Ultimately depends on the content and where you plan on posting them.

>>5176

Well lewd enough of course and I was just gonna use the thread again. I mean I'm sure I'm not breaking any rules going that route but if it really bothers you that much I can link to pastebin or something but I've never tried that. Probably would be preferable anyway, adjusting the amount of text for every post is a pain.

>>5205

Whichever is fine with me, not that it matters a great deal.

I wanna apologize for posting my story in the form of posts rather than an off-site source (just discovered that was against the rules), should those posts get deleted or the story get updated I will make sure to provide a link to that one as well.

I can't say when I'll get to posting more things (not that I think anyone's really all that much looking forward to it) but I have things to do like anybody else and not a whole lot of privacy on top of that. I guess I'm throwing that out there because I didn't want it to look like I was pretending towards any kind of self-importance or promises (I'm not even entirely sure what the fuck I mean by that. Forgive me here, I'm just an awkward and anxious person).

All that said I do want to write more things and nor have just started this thread for no reason.

>>5458

Hey, at least you're creating content.

It's nice as well to have a general story thread, since some of us like them just as much if not more so than pictures.

Yesterday I uploaded this story that is getting more attention than I anticipated http://divjustice.deviantart.com/art/Naruto-The-strangest-exam-537419260

Can we just tell stories as well, like stuff we've done that is tickle related? We had just a general story thread on feetschan for stuff like that.

>>7412

We do have this;http://8ch.net/tk/res/2475.html

I just finished my longest non-chaptered story ever http://divjustice.deviantart.com/art/Fate-Touch-the-Fluffy-Tail-558158175

It's has been quite fun to work on it.

>>8707

Jesus Christ that length…

And the fact that it's for Fate makes it all the better. Bless you, Div.

>>8708

It's not 100% of the words counts about tickling. This one is long because it involves a bit of contextualization, character development, more than one ticklish situations, and jokes, many jokes.

>>8710

I noticed. Taiga's Dojo was a great addition.

A friend of mine calls my stories “analytical” and “dramatic”. That’s probably the best way to put it, too. My ideas come from splaying open whatever I think is hot and prodding at it until I get to something psychological or philosophical I can work with. Each of my stories started as a future bedroom-game I’d like to play, a world I’d like to live in, or an image that won’t go away, and I turn them into fiction so I can focus on other things. A couple things I’ve written are just sensual elaborate half-jokes, like http://yetanotherknismo.tumblr.com/post/120051075801

Incidentally, I haven’t written anything yet with anyone else’s characters, and almost all my ticklefic’s consensual, downright romantic, or else done for the good of the subject. I take most of my cues from Sablesword. If you want to read something by me, I think one of my better stories is http://yetanotherknismo.tumblr.com/post/124026057821