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 No.3267

Post any story ideas you want to see written. Be descriptive about everything you want to see in it. Include the characters and what anime/manga they are from etc. Upload images from the source material as well so the writer knows what the character looks like etc.

Note for me personally: I'm not keen on lolis. Like my girls to have some plot on them if you know what I'm saying. Also a bit of an old fag but I do like some new things like pic related.

 No.3276

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I presume that as an oldflag, you've already seen Kannazuki no Miko. Correct me if my assumption is wrong.

Since Kaishaku has a habit of recycling the KnM pair in their other works (Towa no Sora, Amnesian, Himegami no Miko), I want to see a alternate-setting story about the two, but with Tokyo street racing. Himeko, an out-of-work limo chauffeur, crosses paths with Chikane, a celebrity street racer on the run from the Yakuza. The two are pitted in a tournament against the Orochi, a gang of outlaw riders, while evading Yakuza enforcers and the police. Can they win the championship pot of their dreams, or will their lust for gold destroy their budding romance?


 No.3280

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>>3276

>Meet up with a mechanic who's more than she seems.

>Fixes their cars for them.

>Yakuza show up, car isn't fully repaired yet.

>She tosses the keys of a loaner .

>"Take it for a spin."

>The girls pile into the car and notice a few things.

>Body panels are 5mm reinforced carbon-steel. Window panels are tinted plexiglass. License plate is T4NK.

>Burst out of the workshop.

>Yakuza out front fire upon them.

>Bullets just bounce off the panels.

>Pretty much end up driving a vehicle designed escape.

I like the idea though.


 No.3282

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>>3276

>Meet up with a mechanic who's more than she seems.

>Fixes their cars for them.

>Yakuza show up, car isn't fully repaired yet.

>She tosses the keys of a loaner .

>"Take it for a spin."

>The girls pile into the car and notice a few things.

>Body panels are 5mm reinforced carbon-steel. Window panels are tinted plexiglass. License plate is T4NK.

>Burst out of the workshop.

>Yakuza out front fire upon them.

>Bullets just bounce off the panels.

>Pretty much end up driving a vehicle designed escape.

I like the idea though.

Mine would be tale of a Knight and a Lady. The female Knight had known the Lady growing up and were the best of friends. They could tell each other anything. But the Knight harbored secret affection that was dangerous to the both of them. Sadly, life would divert them, the Lady training in various affairs of state and the Knight training to use a blade. They kept in contact with letters however and wrote to each other frequently.

The Lady was traveling one day when she saw an injured figure. It was a Medusa that had been driven off from it's den by greedy adventures. The lady stepped out of her carriage against the driver and escort's advice and went over to her. The Medusa couldn't face the Lady and told her to stay away but the Lady lifted her head and looked in her eyes.

The escorts were furious that the Lady had turned to stone and drove the Medusa off. They loaded the statue onto the stagecoach and fled back to the capital.

When the Knight found out, she was devastated. She set out in search of the Medusa but couldn't find her even after months of travel. When she returned to her barracks though, she discovered that a letter had been sent to her. It was from the Medusa. In it she tried to explain what happened but the Knight tore the letter up in frustration.

The next day, after she had been given a chance to cool down, she noticed a return address on the back. She wrote a reply letter condemning the Medusa. And in the next few days, another one arrived saying that she would take full blame.

The Knight quickly formed a tactic. She wanted to lure out the Medusa to kill, so she lent a sympathetic ear to her and over a few months of coaxing. they agreed to meet.

The Knight saw the Medusa curled up in the middle of a forest clearing, staring at the ground. The Knight dropped all pretext of conversation and charged at her. The Medusa quietly said that the Knight must love the Lady so much to strike her down without any hesitation. The Knight lost her anger and the grip on her blade. No one knew her secret, not even the Lady in question.

The Medusa proposed that they travel together.. to try and find a way to unpetrify the Lady. The Knight grumbled but agreed.

The thing that the Knight didn't know was, the Medusa longed for the company of someone, anyone to keep her from being alone. The Medusa struggles with her own feelings as to how she feels about the Knight.


 No.3283

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Was kind of expecting shorter single shot stories.

>>3276

>I presume that as an oldflag, you've already seen Kannazuki no Miko. Correct me if my assumption is wrong.

Oh yeah I love KnM. I was the one who re-watched it recently in the other thread.

>Since Kaishaku has a habit of recycling the KnM pair in their other works (Towa no Sora, Amnesian, Himegami no Miko), I want to see a alternate-setting story about the two, but with Tokyo street racing. Himeko, an out-of-work limo chauffeur, crosses paths with Chikane, a celebrity street racer on the run from the Yakuza. The two are pitted in a tournament against the Orochi, a gang of outlaw riders, while evading Yakuza enforcers and the police. Can they win the championship pot of their dreams, or will their lust for gold destroy their budding romance?

Can I make some alterations to this cause Himeko and Chikane would not lust for gold. That would require a complete alteration of their core characters to the point they wouldn't even be the same. I could see Chikane getting into street racing more for the need for speed angle just cause she is actually a highly competent swordswoman, mecha pilot, and great with the bow. Himeko herself tends to be an artist or a photographer in her reincarnations. Although she has been raised to be more competent in a fight as well (original mikos in KnM and Himegami) so I don't know about her being a mechanic or limo driver. I want to keep the classier appeal of both characters so they still resemble the originals. I hate works that just radically change characters just to justify them being in an all new setting.

Maybe instead it could be Chikane racing to help Himeko or something. Or we could go full KnM and have the cars and their drivers be demons that the miko have to exercise by beating them in a race lol.


 No.3284

>>3282

You basically just wrote the entire plot of this yourself - why ask me to write what you have obviously already written in your head? Gonna have to ask that you guys keep this stuff a little shorter in nature. Whilst I've written before I've never actually been a write fag for any chan. Try and keep your ideas to something that I can do in a single pastebin. I'm not looking to write a novel here and I'm sure any other write fags we attract are also not looking to do that. Oh and remember just cause you request it doesn't mean any write fag will want to do it - doesn't mean you can't keep requesting it either though until someone does do it.

Seriously though less is more with these write fag requests.


 No.3285

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>>3283

"Lust for gold" is poorly phrased, I admit. But I really meant was that they really need the prize money to get themselves out of their predicaments.

In the story, Chikane is born to an affluent family, but leaves the creature comforts and ennui of upper-class society for the grungy, high-adrenaline life of illegal racing. Her daredevil antics catch up with her, however, and she now owes money to the Yakuza. Her family is unwilling to help out, having effectively disowned her.

Meanwhile, Himeko comes from a respectable line of limo chauffeurs, but she is knee-deep in debt due to her parents' terminal illnesses, and her recent layoff doesn't help her at all. The tournament is the one shot she has to repay her debts before she loses her family home and possessions. Her career experience is surprisingly useful in street racing, as she is well-versed in defensive and evasive maneuvers needed in serving high-profile clients like executives, politicians, and diplomats.

Their money problems become a focal point later in the story, as both Chikane and Himeko desperately need to win the prize money and this puts a strain on their feelings for one another. Whether this issue will be resolved by a deus ex machina or a heroic sacrifice by one of the two is your call.


 No.3286

>>3285

>"Lust for gold" is poorly phrased, I admit. But I really meant was that they really need the prize money to get themselves out of their predicaments.

Yeah I knew that but a lot of it just feels like more of mecha/yuri. The reason KnM worked as a yuri show was cause it focused far more about the yuri than the mecha.

The problem is like mecha tokyo racing is not exactly something one thinks of for romance and it's not an environment conducive to romance. They represent hurdles for the girls to go through but ones that are not tied directly into the yuri plot. The mecha still worked better than car racing does because ultimately the show was about one of the mikos having to sacrifice themselves to save the world at the cost of any happiness they might have had together.

>In the story, Chikane is born to an affluent family, but leaves the creature comforts and ennui of upper-class society for the grungy, high-adrenaline life of illegal racing. Her daredevil antics catch up with her, however, and she now owes money to the Yakuza. Her family is unwilling to help out, having effectively disowned her.

Neither Chikane nor Himeko seem to be fiscally irresponsible (or irresponsible at all) in any of their reincarnations. And the thing about Chikane is how she is basically driven by love more than anything else. She was quite satisfied with her life up until she met Himeko and then the dissatisfaction began as she fell deeper and deeper in love with Himeko.

>Meanwhile, Himeko comes from a respectable line of limo chauffeurs, but she is knee-deep in debt due to her parents' terminal illnesses, and her recent layoff doesn't help her at all. The tournament is the one shot she has to repay her debts before she loses her family home and possessions. Her career experience is surprisingly useful in street racing, as she is well-versed in defensive and evasive maneuvers needed in serving high-profile clients like executives, politicians, and diplomats.

See this works a little better cause you aren't changing Himeko's personality so much as your changing her skill set (to a radically different one that would involve some sort of personality change). What you should be focusing on though is how the hell these two even meet and develop some sort of relationship without immediately fighting with one another. Because you're just basically locking these two in a cage match with a tiger who is going to eat one or the other and expecting them to somehow fall in love atm which is too much work just to get to the yuri and not romantic at all. What you should do is find a way to get these two to meet and then introduce the side plots about racing after they have gotten to know each other. You're introducing the plot before the yuri instead of the other way around. It's good to give characters their own individual problems but these two are supposed to pretty much be best friends and then lovers. Their problems are supposed to come from their love for one another in addition to the objective. Give them a common objective that they work towards and then introduce additional problems that forces one or the other to act in a fashion that creates tension.

>Their money problems become a focal point later in the story, as both Chikane and Himeko desperately need to win the prize money and this puts a strain on their feelings for one another. Whether this issue will be resolved by a deus ex machina or a heroic sacrifice by one of the two is your call.

You've already written the entire plot for this. And this is sounding more and more like a novel request. When your requests start to sound like a multi-part novel you need to then consider writing the fic yourself.

Also you should consider original characters for this instead of Himeko/Chikane. And it feels far too western in nature as well.

I hate the majority of Alternate Universe fics do to shit like this. Focus too much on crap other than the yuri.


 No.3287

>>3285

>>3276

>Tokyo Street Racing

Wouldn't Natsuki work better for this story what with being an avid bike rider? Maybe have Shizuru get involved somewhere down the line?

There are a bunch of other lesbians as well but Natsuki already has her whole thing with the government and shady business deals so she would actually fit in nicely.


 No.3289

>>3284

Ahh, writefag advice thread. I thought it was general writefagging thread. Got it.


 No.3290

>>3289

Request something with less plot. Why is the princess necessary to this even besides getting eventually NTR'd by the Medusa and the Knight as they head out on some magical adventure where they fall in love? All you are doing is creating more hurdles before we can get to yuri. It's the same with all the plot in the Tokyo Street Racing idea. Too much unnecessary plot when all yuri stories have a built in plot which is two girls falling in love.

Besides where the fuck did I make this thread? I made it on /u/. I was expecting requests that didn't require me to write up some giant whole backstory just so we can get to two girls maybe kissing and holding hands desu.


 No.3291

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Can you write crossover stories? I would like request a short story where Koumori Kuroko (Murcielago) has a hot steamy threesome with Azuma Tokaku and Ichinose Haru (Akuma no Riddle).

Any excuse plot will work, to be honest. Maybe an attempted hitjob on Kuroko gone horribly wrong, or Tokaku becoming Kuroko's new apprentice/fucktoy. Perhaps Tokaku and Haru wants Kuroko's "advice" on how to take their relationship to the next level. Whatever plot you deem short and adequate is good enough.

Alternatively, other AnK pairings (Isuke/Haruki, Hitsugi/Chitaru, Sumireko/Banba, etc.) will also do.


 No.3293

>>3291

Haven't read/watched either series.


 No.3294

>>3276

>>3285

If I switched this to bike racing over car racing would you be ok with it? It's just bike riding is more intimate since you can have Himeko holding on to Chikane and all that. That and it's the obvious modern horse for Chikane/Himeko.

Also I'd change some other details just to keep things interesting. Basically keep the characters and setting but change up the actual plot a little bit.


 No.3295

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>>3294

I'd be totally fine with a bike race, but just make sure that the story doesn't take itself too seriously. It should have the feel of a parody, and be sure to add tons of action and ham. Also, toss in a few references to other Kaishaku works if you want.


 No.3296

>>3295

Alright cool. I was planning on inserting some sort of Initial D reference anyway.


 No.3309

>>3290

Hey, there's no need to get angry. My story could use improvement. Okay, I'll take it under advisement.


 No.3310

>>3309

Nah I'm sorry. I should have just asked if I could make modifications to your works just to keep it interesting for me to begin with. Writing out the entire plot for me just annoys me although I gotta ask why Medusa of all monsters?

Snake hair is not really sexually attractive on anyone and it ruins the whole kissing thing and makes love as a hole a pain in the ass between the two characters. Hell if I did write the story I'd have to have the knight make a point of never looking at the medusa and then keep both of them away from civilization at all times - which granted could make for a much shorter fic since I can just focus 100% on transforming the Medusa into a normal human being again and also saving the princess. But it would also get in the way of setting any sort of romantic mood.


 No.3314

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>>3296

>>3295

I'm making decent progress. Should have the first chapter posted soon. Tomorrow maybe day after. I needed to get into the characters and plan out the plot a bit.


 No.3318

>>3314

I've finished the first race of the fic but I still want to write some more for this chapter and rewrite a bit of it cause I'm writing in first person for the whole fic and I need to make sure I'm using the tenses right. First time actually doing first person and it might not have been the best choice for a driving fic but I'm gonna stick it out cause I know it makes for better yuri and also as writing practice for myself. Also I'm not sure on whether I want to remove a plot element or not that I added myself.

I should probably plan out all my races in advance down to the minute details (especially making a map of the race track/area) going forward. I thought I could bullshit this but this is turning out to require as much detail as writing a competent fight scene does which I should have expected and planned for although I think I did a decent job on this first race.

Also I'm sure I can fit in your limo scene that you guys wanted now although I'm having multiple thoughts on how I'm gonna end this story and I'm not sure on any of them.




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