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 No.453

Main list of 8/u/ approved fics:

https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6863858/

Old Complete /u/ fics still worth reading:

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4004316/1/Windows-of-the-Soul

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/3599530/1/Astraea-Lake

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4717151/1/First-Light

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5276092/1/Elementary-My-Dear-Natsuki

Still updating and worth a read:

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/3816271/1/Inter-Nos

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5022695/1/Legend-of-the-Vampire

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7406866/1/To-the-Stars

Recent stuff (will update as people add new things to the thread)

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11466862/1/MagiHelp

Read and discuss what you want. I operate the acct at the top and there are a bunch of fics there that I didn't list here that are also worth reading and in some cases downloading. Post any fic you want to add to the list in the acct in this thread and we'll see about adding it to the list. Also post anything from AO3 that you like.

I need to add a bunch more to that list so feel free to make suggestions.

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 No.457

…what kind does /u/..read? Like, what's your OTP/genre? Do you go for fluff or angst? Pure "I wuv u" romance that ends at the confession scene, stories that start at the confession scene, stories about "discovering"? That sort of stuff.

 No.462

>>457
I feel any kind of serious angst tends to be unconvincing unless the story is pushing a 10,000+ wordcount, but then many authors seem to drift in their intent over the time it takes them to write, which can make for very unfulfilling resolutions despite the effort expended. But it's the common pitfalls that make fanfiction what it is, I guess

 No.463

>>462
or higher, really. 10,000 is pretty regular

 No.1281

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Bumping this thread with some discussion

I've been reading this one fic by Twisted Eternal Wolvetta lately:

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10822796/1/Renascence

It's the first good Mai HiME well Otome Shiznat fic in a while. Seems to be building up an actual plot with some action whilst also having a lot of yuri loving. I feel there are too many lesbians in that old EVERYONE is gay in this universe sort of way but it's been a pretty good read so far. Natsuki is allowed to be strong in this one and it's not super perfect mary sue Shizuru saving the day 24/7. Big points on lots of sex scenes and lots of intimate scenes with Shizuru and Natsuki. I think /u/ will like it if it they aren't already reading this story. Oh also it's treating the side characters pretty well so far. Even Shiho has gotten a good number of scenes.

The author is writing a bunch of other /u/ stories atm as well. Seems to want to focus on a lot of the side characters in more of them and alternate pairings.


 No.1282

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>>1281

Also the fic is over 180,000 words at this point and it's been updating at a fairly quick speed and it's only on it's 10th chapter. Rather impressive all things considered. Last time I remember an a/u/thor writing this much this fast at this quality was Lestaki. Hopefully Wolvetta doesn't burn out.


 No.1303

A good place to find more high quality yuri fanfiction:

https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2133180/Sugoi-Story-Anego

It's the old 4/u/ acct that had links to most of 4/u/'s favorite stories.


 No.1309

>>1281

Thanks for the recommendation. I haven't read any good yuri fanfiction since I was in middle school/high school.


 No.1311

>>1309

Yeah there has been a lack of good yuri fics in recent years.


 No.1339

…..did a bunch of posts get deleted in this thread?


 No.1340

>>1339

There was a second fan fiction thread here:

>>872

The posts you are referring to were likely in that thread.


 No.1343

>>1340

Ah, o.k.. I guess the same Remilia x Patchouli images confused me.

sage so I don't bump


 No.1383

>>1281

Author posted another M rated one shot for Shiznat: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11374101/1/Seductive-Smile

Otome with Natsuki dominating Shizuru in the bed.


 No.1400

Inter Nos updated:

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/3816271/67/Inter-Nos

I still preferred this fic when it was a bit more slice of lifey prior to Suou's death. Also Renascence will be updating soon.


 No.1417

>>1400

Another update to Renascence:

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10822796/11/Renascence

Good chapter that finally explains a bit about what's going on with Natsuki mentally.

I might come up with a personal list of some old fics people should read or at least check out.


 No.1518

I wouldn't recommend Archive of our Own's Skullgirls as a whole, but I always liked this fic:

http://archiveofourown.org/works/1706267?view_adult=true


 No.1569

Hey, any fics around with a goddess/mortal pairing?

>>457

I'm open to pretty much anything that pushes a plausible story without hetshit, but I prefer the happier side of /u/ that doesn't take itself too seriously.


 No.1575

I recently read a nice Azumanga Daioh fic if any of you are fans of that.

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/2552320/1/Cold-Nights


 No.2096

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Another update on Renascence a few days ago:

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10822796/12/Renascence

Lestaki put out a IRC Madoka fic a few weeks ago that I liked:

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11466862/1/MagiHelp

Here's some other old stuff that I liked:

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4004316/1/Windows-of-the-Soul (probably the best ShizNat fic ever and my personal favorite fan fic - long and takes the rape as canon and still makes the pairing work)

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/3599530/1/Astraea-Lake (Kaname x Momomi - StoPani fan fic - bretty gud)

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4463438/1/Chains-of-Memory (KnM - unfinished but it's gud still)

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4717151/1/First-Light (fuck it just bookmark Lestaki's fan fiction page)

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/3750170/1/Giving-In (really good smut/drama ShizNat fic from Centauri2002)

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5276092/1/Elementary-My-Dear-Natsuki (ShizNat fan fic set in victorian era england with Shizuru as Sherlock and Natsuki as Watson - part of a series which you can find on the author's page)

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/3816271/1/Inter-Nos (Shizuru is Julius Ceasar conquering the Gauls - suffers from Mary Suezuru syndrome at times due to source material but still good - lots of sex and a great amount of attention is spent on Roman history so it's interesting in other ways too)

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5022695/1/Legend-of-the-Vampire (Shiznat vampire/werewolf fic by Icemera)

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7406866/1/To-the-Stars (Haven't read this in a while but it is seriously good)

I got more stuff to add. Also made a yurianon profile on fanfiction.net with a list of a bunch of fics and some not even listed here:

https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6863858/

If anyone has anything they want me to add to it I will do so after reviewing it for quality. Gonna add a lot more later.


 No.2341

Didn't feel like making another thread for this:

Does anyone know of any good /u/ literature to read that doesn't fuck around and focuses almost entirely on the main couple and their various interactions together?


 No.2362


 No.2366

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>>2341

Nothing comes to mind, not even LNs. Japanese yuri that has focus on a couple does have a strong tendancy to focus on how the characters get to the relationship, rather than the relationship itself.


 No.2367

>>2366

I wasn't just asking for literature with a post love confession scene focus. What I was asking was more for yuri literature that didn't screw around with tons of side characters and unnecessary plot instead of just focusing on the main couple. If I were to give an example: look at Windows of the Soul which I linked above. Every chapter has a Shizuru POV and a Natsuki POV and it flip flops halfway through the chapter. Both characters are given a big and equal focus and they never once ever really stop thinking about each other so it never goes off the subject of yuri even though it takes 50 chapters for Natsuki to finally realize she loves Shizuru.

Something I hate is when stories are supposed to be yuri but they focus far too much on things that aren't yuri or have side plots that get in the way of the actual relationship because you go from romance back to some other character that has nothing the fuck to do with anything going on in the actual relationship. I guess you can say I want something that is pure yuri. You can still have other plots but don't just have both main characters split up for half the damn fic only to get back together 200 pages later and then finally admit their love for one another.

Couples separating for multiple chapters so we can focus on other bullshit is probably the literary equivalent of blue balls.

>Nothing comes to mind, not even LNs. Japanese yuri that has focus on a couple does have a strong tendancy to focus on how the characters get to the relationship, rather than the relationship itself.

Even in fan fiction yuri it's rare for a story to continue after the characters finally admit their love for one another. Most of the yuri fan fics that actually do this I already have listed in this thread.


 No.2447

>>2367

Oh boy you described my woes perfectly. I fucking hate the bullshit you described, which is present in the vast majority of the fics I tried. I don't even mind other subplots either, but god damn it if I read a fic about two girls in love, let it fucking be about two girls in love, not go on every tangent possible just to inflate the wordcount.

Not even fucking published books get it right, unfortunately shit taste is prevalent in every domain.


 No.2544

>>2447

Sorry for the late response.

>Not even fucking published books get it right, unfortunately shit taste is prevalent in every domain.

Goddamn this. Sadly this is why I was asking to begin with. I can't find anything worth reading anymore. My standards are too damn high and sadly most yuri spends almost no time on the characters or relationship and it's such a niche genre you can't find anything decent.

Frankly romance benefits from form in a similar fashion to art. Great ideas and unique concepts are less important than general quality of the work and how it fits into the romance genre. Too many yuri stories just don't get the basics of romance and I'd even say most romance stories in general don't get the basics down. It's such a simple and formulaic genre. Girl meets girl/girl falls in love with girl/girl goes on mass killing spree for said girl because of forbidden love/both girls get past murder rape spree and make the forbidden love etc. Romance should be fucking easy and yet all too often I see people fuck it up.

>Oh boy you described my woes perfectly. I fucking hate the bullshit you described, which is present in the vast majority of the fics I tried. I don't even mind other subplots either, but god damn it if I read a fic about two girls in love, let it fucking be about two girls in love, not go on every tangent possible just to inflate the wordcount.

What's really sad is that most yuri fics don't even break the 100,000 words mark and still do all of the above.


 No.2559

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I need some Alice Aya fanfiction


 No.2608

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Download link for Tsuyazakura Kouyuki's deleted Kannazuki no Miko fics:

http://www.mediafire.com/download/8a8mi375llya7e6/Tsuyazakura+Kouyuki+archive.zip

I read two of the fics ages ago and they were both pretty good (Lovers Eternal and Little Mermaid). I couldn't find the link to the original archive (which was made by an anon on 4/u/) so I made a media fire acct and reuploaded it myself.

Also I was recently playing both Shantae games on steam and I felt after the ending of Pirate's Curse like looking for some Risky/Shantae and I thought this fic was a pretty decent smut fic:

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11160687/1/Rear-Rivals


 No.2610

>>2608

I might see about converting the individual fics into a single pdf for easy reading since they are split across multiple documents.

Also if anyone knows of any decent fiction press yuri romances please post them.


 No.2657

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Anon on 4chan posted a link for Ange Sinestre's two Shiznat fics Antipode and the The Kyoto Hunt. I heard these were both good but never read them myself. Anyway here's the link:

http://www48.zippyshare.com/v/qcwTupnK/file.html

And a link to the thread:

https://boards.4chan.org/u/thread/1875256/havent-seen-one-of-these-in-a-while-so-lets-have

I might make a duplicate upload on mediafire later if this goes down.


 No.3910

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I'm thinking about deleting this thread (or potentially locking this thread for a set period then deleting) and reposting it but with an OP of suggestions of fics to read. Nothing recent on my mind but a lot of the old classics as seen here (and any recent fics anyone can think of posting) :

>>2096

Also if anyone else has anything they want to add to the fan fiction acct here I will add it:

https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6863858/

Only reason I'm posting this is cause I don't want to upset …. well the OP made this in 2014 so I doubt he will care that much but generally because woodcuck does this shit on /u/ because of the way the threads always have the same OP image and because I've personally been viewing fan fiction threads he has deleted and reposted whenever he loses an argument mid thread.

Just gonna see if the community is OK with me doing this before I go about locking and making the deletion. And also to keep things visible.


 No.3978

>>3910

>well the OP made this in 2014 so I doubt he will care that much

I'm still here, but you're right, I don't care.

>I'm thinking about deleting this thread (or potentially locking this thread for a set period then deleting) and reposting it but with an OP of suggestions of fics to read.

Go for it

[spoiler]>Also if anyone else has anything they want to add to the fan fiction acct here I will add it

I made a bunch of yuri fics some time ago on ff, but they're kind of shit and I'm not sure how I feel about self-promotion like that anymore.[/spoiler]


 No.3980

>>3978

Fuck me for fucking up spoiler tags still :/


 No.3982

>>3978

If you want to link the fic you wrote go ahead. Anything else as well. Any old or newer fic etc. I'd ask if you could do write requests as well but I might have already asked if you could in another thread.

I'll give this thread another day and then delete and make another with a new OP so you got time to decide what to do.


 No.4013

>>3910

Can you or the board owner edit the OP? That might be the way to go.


 No.4018

>>4013

I could do that as well. But I would prefer to keep my mod powers less visible. This is a smaller community so it's not as important but if I abuse them it will lead to backlash eventually. Also I'd rather the community be somewhat independent of the mods.

The only reason I'm thinking about doing this is cause it would generate discussion potentially and a lot of what I'm recommending was generally considered to be some of the very best fics and authors. We need to add a lot more to it but I've been busy and not reading as much lately so I'm asking if anyone else has read anything.

Also I tended to be a big fan of Shiznat and the current state of the Mai HiME fan fiction section is really bad thanks to all the spanish and futa fags infesting it.


 No.4035

>>3982

>If you want to link the fic you wrote go ahead.

I'm obviously apprehensive to sharing 6/7 year old fanfiction.net fics, but against my better judgement, earliest to latest:

Tamao x Nagisa:

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4784041/1/Tamao-and-Nagisa

Mariali:

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5288165/1/Alice-x-Marisa

Pairing shitposting fun:

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6443410/1/Gossip

Remipatchu:

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7301323/1/Patchouli-X-Remilia

More Mariali:

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6046589/1/Continuing-Marisa-X-Alice

>I'd ask if you could do write requests as well

I'm not really sure I'm at all good enough too :/

>>4013

Between it being a year ago, my use of Tor, and never living in the same place for more than a year, I can't really edit it anymore.

I mean, this post would have slid off of the board anyways, and mod-san could've made a post then. So, I don't really see what the difference is.

>>4018

>But I would prefer to keep my mod powers less visible.

I think we do appreciate the thought and concern over using The One Ring.

>Also I tended to be a big fan of Shiznat and the current state of the Mai HiME fan fiction section is really bad thanks to all the spanish and futa fags infesting it.

At least you have people writing for your pairing, my original purpose in posting this was to hopefully find some Remipatch other than my own ;_;.


 No.4036

>>4035

>At least you have people writing for your pairing, my original purpose in posting this was to hopefully find some Remipatch other than my own ;_;.

Ouch. I can at least understand. There are very few if any Shizuma/Nagisa fics worth reading and Chimeko suffers from being 100% resolved in the show itself.

>I'm not really sure I'm at all good enough too :/

I used to suck myself. You just gotta work at it. Granted I haven't even look at your fics yet (Ok I glanced and I feel bad for asking you to post them now).

I used to be even worse than this.


 No.4040

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>>457

I prefer the confession to happen a little later, after they meet and get to know each other and slowly realize they are falling in love. No bisexuality though, I don't care for that confused faux sexuality. I don't care for sex, it's degrading and i lose respect for that shit. I mean, sure, one scene, maybe, but for the most part I just like reading day to day bullshit. if anyone has anything relevant to this, please, I need to read more. definitely romantic and wuv duvvy stuff, hand holding and blushing, you know, the lewd stuff.


 No.4048

I decided to just edit the OP post instead of locking/deleting and creating a new thread. I'll edit it in the future as needed to reflect new recent fics worth reading.

At least till the board is fast enough to warrant you guys just making a new thread when needed.


 No.4080

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>Been out of the academy for awhile.

>Champion of my own division for awhile now, I want a challenge to test my skill

>Strange woman comes up to me after one of my matches.

>Praises my high pain tolerance and says she selects the best of the best for her league.

>Oh great, another talent scout. I try to shoo her away.

>She continues to pester me. A prize pool for any wrestler to win 15 straight matches, millions of yen at stake, some of the best people you've never heard competing weekly.

>That makes me stop. Ask her to present paperwork. She hands me a few intro sheets.

>The info packet talks up the perks of the league, nothing I haven't already been told.

>Scout tells me she's looking for someone to go against the "Queen of Ice" Freia. An exhibition match, says I'll get 100,000 yen just by participating, win or lose doesn't mater.

>Inquire to how good this 'Freia' is.

>Scout says that she use to be a dominatrix but when she attended one of our league matches with a female client, she wanted in. One of the best they have.

>Curiosity gets the better of me. Ask her what I have to do to get in.

>Scout tries to subdue a smile and hands me a contract to sign, liability clause, pain-waver, that sort of thing.

>Scout gives me a card, says to meet at this place at 5:00 PM sharp.

>Scout leave and all I'm wondering is what I got myself into.

>Arrive at a small building in a dense part of the city.

>I make my way through the doors to the reception area.

>Receptionist shows me in through the back, we go down slowly into the earth until we come out at a sharp rise.

>That's when I see, the squared-circle. The rig, lights brightly shining down. The seats arrayed around could easily sit 500. A small but important audience .

>The receptionist had left while I was admiring the ring and the talent scout appeared in her place.

>She takes me around back where the locker room is.

>She points out a locker with my name on it, “Chisato.”

>Says a special outfit has already been prepared and I'm to wear it.

>Open the locker and see the outfit. A bit revealing but I can still move in it.

>I turn back to her to ask about the rules of this match but the scout has disappeared.

>I shrug and begin taking off my street clothes.

>The outfit is a bit tight, but I stretch my legs and it loosens up.

>”Looks good on you.”

>I spin around and see a white haired woman with sharp red eyes dressed in black, almost as skimpily as me.

>She approaches me and I begin to feel self concious, so I cover myself and retreat a bit.

>It's only when my back hits the wall of the locker room that I realise I'm stuck between her and the exit.

>”Mmmmm, I love it when they can't escape…” The woman is now right in front of me.

>She reaches a hand out, I quickly grab it.

>I'm about to say “Keep your hands to yourself” But the scorn she puts into the glare directed at me falters my resolution to speak.

>My grip weakens and she smacks my hand away.

>Her face is harsh for a few seconds, then softens. She fiddles with my outfit, making sure it fits right and licks a finger and strengthens out my eyebrows and hair fringe.

>”There we go, all presentable.” She steps back and turns around.

>I stand there in complete silence until she's gone then slump against the wall.

>It was only then that I realised my heart was beating like crazy for some reason.


 No.4081

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>>4080

>I wait in the locker room for a few more minutes before the Scout comes back again and says it's showtime.

>She explains a few rules to me while walking to the ring.

>It's pretty much a normal wrestling match, although your opponent might do a few 'special moves' on you.

>I ask the scout what they were but all she did was wink at me.

>We reach ringside and the Scout offers me a drink. Having not drunk anything in a few hours I accept.

>I can see my opponent on the other side of the ring, it's the white haired woman from before.

>The lights dimmed and focused on the announcer in the middle.

>”Distinguished Guests. We have the pleasure of bringing you tonight an exhibition match.”

>”In the blue corner, you know her for her icy demeanour and skilled submissions, the Queen of Ice herself, Freia!”

>The woman enters the ring and strides around. The crowd gives her a warm reception.

>”In the red corner, the outsider chosen especially for this match, let's hope she gives it her all, welcome Chisato!”

>I enter the ring and a few people cheer for me, although the crowd is much less subdued after Freia.

>The announcer exits and the lights go up again. The referee enters.

>”Ready? Fight!” The bell goes off.

>I circle to the left while Freia goes right.

>We size each other up but it doesn't look like she wants to make the first move.

>Now that I'm moving around, I'm feeling a bit unsteady on my feet but I'll finish her off quick and go home.

>I know she's probably a good grappler if she's good at submissions, so I got for a strike.

>She easily dodges and moves behind me.

>She puts me into a hug and then has both hands grope my breasts.

>I… what?

>It takes a moment for my brain to comprehend but I struggle furiously and she lets me go, almost deliberately.

>She's got a nasty grin on her face.

>I appeal to the ref but she says it's all in the rules.

>I ask what does she mean by groping being in the rules.

>Freia slides in and kicks out my ankle. It hurts and I tumble over.

>She puts me in this weird hold, my legs spread and having my hands pinned behind me.

>I struggle to get out but my senses are dulled for some reason. Her grip is strong too.

>Using a free hand, she moves the leotard covering my breasts and begins to rub them

>”So soft but firm. I'm going to have fun with you.” She whispers in my ear.

>I gasp as she pinches a nipple.

>”Nice and stiff as well. Glad you drank that 'stimulant' before the match.”

>Her hand moves further south and that's when my mind screams, 'NO!'

>I headbutt her and escape her grasp. I scamper away and turn to face her.

>She blinks her right eye, trying to regain focus. A cruel smile grows on her face.

>”I always like the ones that have spirit. Makes it so much better to subdue them.”

>She charges into me, throwing me against the ropes. I rebound off and she throws me to the other side.

>I land on the ropes, facing the crowd, naked breasts on display.

>I hear Freia running behind me then feel a sharp kick to my back.

>That blows all the air out of my lungs and I'm pretty much stunned from that.

>Freia puts me in this awkward position on the middle rope then sits on the top rope facing away.

>She forces her crotch into my face and moves her leotard to the side.

>She rubs her pussy on my face.

>”Mmmm, good girl.” I struggle to resist but my heavy panting from what's happening isn't helping. If anything, it's making her more excited.

>”Right, time to finish this, I think.”

>She grabs my shoulders and drags me to the centre of the mat.

>There she forces my arms back and puts her feet into my kneepits.

>She slowly lifts me up and the pain comes on stronger.

“Oh! Looks like Freia is using the Northern Divide! Can Chisato hold out?”

>Hold out? The pain is too much at the moment. I can't… I can't…!

>”Look at that! Looks like Freia has made Chisato pee herself!”

>Freia relents on the hold and I slump to the map, a soaked, panting wreck.

>She lifts one of my legs up and puts me into a pin.

>The referee moves in. “1!”

>I'm so tired. I can't focus anymore. “2!”

>Wait, Freia gives me a wink, why? “3!”

>The referee grasps Freia's hand. “Winner!”

>The crowd cheers and that's when I loose conciousness.


 No.4082

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>>4081

>When I begin to stir, I notice I'm somewhere comfortable.

>My whole body aches but I manage to open my eyes.

>I'm resting on a bed, in someone's bedroom. I also hear the shower going.

>I prop myself up a bit and then notice I'm naked. I begin to panic and recall what happened.

>I struggle to move but manage to roll off the bed. I thump to the ground and the pain becomes unbearable. I let out a small scream.

>The water from the shower stops. The door to the bathrooms opens and a white haired woman with red eyes pokes her head out, hair still wet.

>Freia but… why am I here?

>”No please, don't move. You'll be better if you rest.” She opens the door, her naked wet form rushing to my side.

>She gently picked my up and placed me back on the bed.

>”Just let me dry myself off and I'll be back.” Freia returns to the bathroom.

>Even though I was still in pain and she was the one responsible for that, I think I could trust her.

>I closed my eyes and decided to rest.

>A few minutes passed and I heard the bathroom open again, Freia moving to one side of the bed.

>She moved the covers and joined me under them.

>There was only a little distance between us and I could hear her soft breathing.

>She looked away from me. “I'm sorry I was that aggressive during the match. But I figured you could take that much punishment. The talent scout did say you had a higher pain tolerance than most.”

>I voiced my objections, as to what was happening to me.

>”Well… you didn't read the full contact did you? You're pretty much in indentured servitude now, except in a wrestling roll. You own 100,000 yen to escape and the only way is to win 15 straight matches, to get enough of the pot. You're pretty much stuck here till then.”

>The reality of all this was just hitting me, I began to tear up.

>Freia drew me into a hug.

>”It's okay, I was like you at first as well. But I promise you, I will take care of you. We'll start a tag team and compete together, win the prize and be free, together. Is that agreeable to you?”

>I looked up at her with tear stained eyes. I gave a small nod then broke down sobbing.

>Freia hugged more tightly and stroked my hair.

>I cried myself to sleep that night but if I stick with Freia, I think I'll be okay.


 No.4083

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>>4082

>I looked over the file.

>Chisato Sakurai. Good body, high pain tolerance. Wrestling style compliments my own.

>Yes, she's perfect. I handed her file back to the talent scout and said likewise.

>Scout commended my good decision and that she'll schedule her for an exhibition match.

>An exhibition match… A match where the opponent you pick is publicly humiliated in front of a crowd. Usually the first match you do when you enter this league. And usually… the opponent is drugged to ensure victory for the selector. No one likes to see an upset.

>Fortunately, I'm one of the only ones to have won my first exhibition match. Even while drugged.

>Unfortunately, I'm going to have to subject Chisato to my usual repertoire of moves.

>It's a good thing she has a high pain tolerance.

>But the reason I picked Chisato is I think I can use her.

>I'll personally subject her to humiliation, then when she's had enough, I'll show a soft side. A standard tactic I used in my days as a dominatrix.

>But… I'm a little interested in her. I'll likely be working close with her as I put my plan into motion to escape. So I want someone I could be comfortable around, someone who was… submissive. I had a feeling about her.

>We'll see if that feeling is correct.

>The Scout informs me that Chisato is in the locker room changing, so I go to see her for myself.

>I peek from around the lockers. And yeah, she's beautiful, Full bust, curvy hips, nice long hair.

>She shimmies into her outfit and it looks perfect on her. I appear to her and make a comment .

>She jumps back in shock. “D-don't scare me like that. Who are you?”

>Cute, she's frightened. I approach her. She covers herself and backs away from me.

>She backs into the wall and I smile as I get closer. I say something about her being flustered.

>”E-eep…” I reach my hand out to touch her hip but she grabs it. I glare at her, hoping it would loosen her up. The strength goes out of her grip and I fix her outfit a bit, that and I get to touch more.

>Her skin was soft and spotless, I think I'll enjoy leaving my mark on it later.

>I quickly fix her hair and well and say she's ready.

>She blushes slightly. “Th-thank you…”

>I turn around and leave her. I have to get ready for my match as well.


 No.4084

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>>4083

>The big match is here and I'm ringside but I've mostly tuned out the announcer and the crowd. I'm only focused on Chisato.

>It's a few minutes before I see her being led by the Scout. She appears nervous but capable.

>The announcer introduces me and I enter the ring. The crowd already knows I'll win, so I have to give them a good show by getting into character.

>Then Chisato enters the ring and I can already see the drug effecting her. Poor girl… I'll try not to inflict too much pain but she should be able to take it.

>We face each other and the referee rings the bell.

>She circles left, so I go right. It's a good chance to size her up at least.

>But the drug has kicked in and she looks hot in the face, her movements are just a bit slow.

>She moves first, intending to strike me. I easily dodge her and move behind her.

>I put her into a bear hug and lightly grope her breasts.

>”HIYAA!” She screams. I continue for a few seconds before she finally realises what I'm doing and struggles away. I let her go and she backs off, trying to cover herself.

>I give a grin, this match is too easy.

>She starts appealing to the referee for what I did. I give a small sigh, I was like that once as well.

>I sprint, slide and kick her ankle from under her.

>She falls over and I put her in a hold that will expose her to the crowd. Time to give them what they paid for.

>I get a free hand and start rubbing her breasts again, slowly and heavily, making sure she feels it.

>I whisper in her ear as well. Her body responds accordingly.

>”No… no-ah!” The breathes in as I softly pinch her nipple.

>Then I slide my hand down… “No…”

>I continued to whisper in her ear.

>”NOOO!”

>She headbutts me and escapes my grasp. I blink, trying to restore vision to my eye.

>I like the ones that fight back. I say something like that.

>I advance on her and throw her against the ropes. I the use her rebound the throw her again across the ring. She leans against the ropes, helpless. Time to have some fun.

>I set her up into a position and move myself above her face. I move my leotard and lean on her face.

>Her hyperventilating blows warm air down there. That gets me going even more.

>I move my hips a little but she's still resistant. Time to finish things.

>I remove myself and drag her to the centre of the map. Sorry Chisato, this is gonna hurt.

>I grab her arms and place my feet in her kneepits, then I lift her up.

>”Nooooo! It hurts! Please, please stop!”

>I increase the force and stretch out my legs.

>”No, I can't hold it! I can't… I gonna…!”

>Poor girl, the announcer calls it and I see a yellow liquid flow down her leg.

>I let go of the hold and move to pin her.

>The referee moves in. “1!”

>Chisato is out of it, I give her a wink. “2!”

>There's a moment of clarity on her face.”3!”

>The referee grabs my hand and lifts it up. I won.

>Chisato's eyes starts to loose focus and then she's out like a light.

>I wave to the crowd while the medics take Chisato away.

>They'll check on her to make sure I haven't done any serious injury, then I'll go and claim her myself.

>When I find Chisato in the medical ward later, she's been cleaned up, given a medical smock and is resting quietly in a cot. I give a small smile and carry her back to my room.

>I remove the smock and place her under the covers in my bed.

>I watch her for a minute or two, just gently breathing. Then I head to the bathroom to wash off the stress of a match.

>The warm water feels nice. I start getting shivers as well, remembering the battle and how Chisato will react when I begin dominating her.

>I hear a thump outside. That's probably her trying to escape, time to play nice.

>I stick my head out and she's awake, looks like falling on the floor hurt.

>I go over to her and place her back under. For some reason, she looks a little flustered.

>Good, being naked around her should start to remove barriers she has about modesty.

>My hair is still wet though so I go back into the bathroom, dry my hair and then return to the bed.

>I need to start acting kind, so I apologise about my aggressive performance from the match.

>”Why… why is this happening to me? I should be at home, not here.” Chisato responds.

>I explain to her what's happening. She needs to learn there's no escape, then I can begin to cultivate her.

>”W-what…? That's not… am I ever going to get out of here…?”

>She starts sobbing, so I go for a hug. She doesn't resist so I pull her in close.

>Her skin still feels soft and her hair is smooth even if it's sweaty.

>I then say what I feel. That I will look after her, protect her in this new world. That together, we can get out. But only if she submits to training, I leave that part out. I ask if she wants to start a tag team.

>She gives a weak nod and cries herself to sleep in my arms.

>I will protect you Chisato. MY Chisato.


 No.4085

File: 1458302398677.jpg (76.74 KB, 555x566, 555:566, 1443946984656-1.jpg)

Sorry for the autism, I kinda wanted to do a green text story from the snippets in the wrestling thread.


 No.4087

>>4080

>>4081

>>4082

>>4083

>>4084

>tfw you will never cuddle a crying Chisato in a warm soft bed

Nice story, although I'm not a fan of girls pissing themselves though.


 No.4089


 No.4101

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 No.4104

File: 1458336950021.jpg (9.3 KB, 208x242, 104:121, Iris smile.jpg)

>>4087

Yeah, me either. Don't know why I wrote that part but doesn't matter I guess.

>>4089

Thanks, I have very low confidence in my writefag skills. Should have edited a bit more before posting as well.

But that was actually kinda fun. Might continue the story if I get some free time sometime.


 No.4106

>>4104

Yeah try pastebin next time if you don't want to use ff.net or anything like that. It's easier to edit on the fly.

If I were to give some criticism I'd say add more details and I'd skip out on the drugs and some of the other stuff that implies she is going into slavery with some sort of criminal ring full of men. Less piss more hand under her uniform molesting Chisato's pussy if you know what I'm saying. Maybe some crotch rubbing with Freia's feet. I'd also make it more obvious Chisato's attracted to Freia from the get go. Less rape more non consent so to speak where in Chisato wants it but is trying to resist only for Freia to grab her arm and pulls her in close for the kiss as Chisato swoons into her arms.

Also general writing more will help.

For me I actually don't like the exhibitionism of the yuri wrestling since it usually is crowds full of men. Something I've always thought is for them to be just regular wrestlers but for their to be a sort of sempai kohai thing going on among the female wrestlers with girls basically secretly fucking whilst practicing moves on one another when no one else is around. Maybe like a clear limit on what happens in the public matches (just general wrestling stuff with humiliation but nothing going too far) and in their own private training sessions (sex wrestling).


 No.4108

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>>4106

Fair points all. Yeah, okay.

Also, exhibition events are a main draw card as they're designed to break in a new wrestler to the league, while normal matches only draw small crowds unless hyped up. Could also make grudge matches a thing where they fight privately but it still counts as a win/loss.

I'll give this some thought before the next part though, I think I can improve the story a bit as well.


 No.4114

>>4108

>Also, exhibition events are a main draw card as they're designed to break in a new wrestler to the league, while normal matches only draw small crowds unless hyped up. Could also make grudge matches a thing where they fight privately but it still counts as a win/loss.

They better end in lovey dovey hand holding. And the girls better not let their lovers get raped by other girls. Basically you are only allowed to molest your own willing kohai!

>I'll give this some thought before the next part though, I think I can improve the story a bit as well.

Cool. Looking forward to your future updates.


 No.4116

>>4087

>pissing

Wew I almost read that story too.


 No.4132

File: 1458518940319-0.jpg (1.7 MB, 4913x3460, 4913:3460, otoha the cuckquean.jpg)

File: 1458518940319-1.png (19.58 KB, 400x300, 4:3, otoha getting cucked.png)

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Writefag Request:

Otoha/Chikane KnM fic

Translating this latest doujin has got me fixing for more of this pairing. No summary or anything specific. Go nuts.


 No.4148

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So anyone got a list or even just a few titles where one of the characters is like crazy jealous all the time, or maybe has abandonment issues? Something like this manga ( http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/midnight_gravity )

I'm sure most of you have read it.

Thanks!


 No.4151

>>4148

Do you just want jealousy as an element in the story or for the story to be full on about someone who is constantly jealous? Abandonment issues I can think of a few examples but none are fully about abandonment. I tend to only read things that have good endings and a good portion of the stuff I've recommended in the thread deals with yanderes who typically get bretty jelly at people but never go full jelly. I'm not keen on the crazy stuff cause people always go too far with it.


 No.4158

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Chisato tossed and turned in her sleep. Her unconscious mind tried to drag her away from the nightmare she had ended up in. Degraded in front of all those people, the possibility of even worse acts being forced on her. She was shaken and traumatized and the endless loops of what had happened played through her head.

She could hardly sleep. But whenever she woke up startled, she felt the warmth that emanated from Freia. Freia had kept a tight hug on Chisato throughout the night, fearing that something like this would happened. Chisato gazed at Freia's sleeping face in the black of the room and nuzzled closer. She soon fell into a deep sleep, hoping to find comfort in blackness instead of the horrors that lurked in her mind.

Chisato's mind surfaced and while she was blinking the sleep from her eyes, she briefly smelled something burning. She leaned up from bed to see Freia dressed in a bath robe sitting at a small dining table in the center of the room eating toast. Freia noticed her movements and gave a smile.

“Morning sleepyhead, about time you got up.” She nods to the door behind her, “Shower's over there, go get freshened up.”

Chisato was staring at Freia for a few moments before she remembered her modesty. She quickly covered herself and rushed to the bathroom. Freia grinned and continued to eat her toast. She could hear the water from the shower but thought against disturbing Chisato, at least at this point in their relationship.

But then her thoughts turned to the things she could do to deepen said relationship. She was thinking such things until the water stopped, the door opened and Chisato, who was now wearing track pants and a form fitting T-shirt, sat down at the other end of the table. She looked uncomfortable, not directly gazing at Freia. Freia sighed and stood up. She strode over to the kitchen and put on two more pieces of toast. She turned and gazed at Chisato more, who was uncomfortably fidgeting in her chair. She kept her gaze till the toast popped, quickly placing it on a plate and making her way back to Chisato. She placed it in front of her and resumed her seat.

“T-thanks…” Chisato gave in a small quiet voice. Freia hesitated for a moment before pulling a paper document from a nearby shelf.

“You're still uncomfortable around me. I get that. And if you want me to apologize for what happened yesterday, I will.” Chisato shook her head.

“It's not your fault… you weren't doing that maliciously right? It was just a performance for the crowd… So despite what happened, I don't blame you. In fact…” Chisato's cheeks grew in redness, “I should thank you for taking care of me last night. For… cleaning me up and stuff…”

“It was actually the medics that cleaned up up. But don't worry, all staff inside the facility are female. The ref, the talent scout, the trainers, the medics, everyone. What separates them from us is they can leave at night. Outside though, they've hired some of the best security you can buy. So we're pretty much stuck here.” Freia could see Chisato's confusion. She handed her the document.

“That's the real information package. You only get that after you go through an exhibition match. Read it, I'll answer any questions you have.” Chisato nodded and while munching on a piece of toast, flipped through the pages.


 No.4159

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>>4158

It was very different to the information she had received before entering this literal underground league. Said wrestlers were housed 20 meters underground and had access to the best facilities, training equipment and coaches. There were only three ways to leave.

1. Win 15 straight matches, get the prize pool and buy your way out of the league.

2. Deemed to be past your prime (Usually mid 40s), your contract will be deemed settled and you'll be randomly dropped somewhere in Japan with a million yen to your name to start over.

3. Bodybag.

Chisato felt the colour drain from her face.

“So there's no way out… and you can die? But I thought…” Freia interjected.

“You're correct, matches are usually to first blood or KO. The sponsor hates their merchandise being damaged too roughly, so they steeply punish anyone that deliberately inflicts a serious injury. That doesn't stop Kroshka though.” Freia lets the name hang.

“Kroshka?” Chisato wonders.

“A brute of a Russian wrestler. She holds no regard for anyone in the ring and deliberately inflicts pain in a brutal fashion. I will inflict pain for pleasure but I know the lines not to cross, but she…” Freia paused, “… She has seven confirmed kills. And from what people have told me, she's been in the league since she was 16. She's 32 now. Anyway though, newbies like you aren’t pitted against her for a reason. I'm not so lucky though, there probably will come a day where I have to fight her. But I'll be ready. Count on it.” Chisato looked up at Freia and could feel the confidence radiating off of her.

“Um, how long have you been here, in the league I mean.” Chisato asked curiously.

“Three years now. I haven't seen the outside world in three years.” Freia reflected, casting her gaze down.

“I was a professional dominatrix. People paid money to feel worthless before me. And I was good at what I did. A female client asked me to accompany her to an event and I did. Turned out to be an exhibition match. I was hooked though. I signed myself into the league, took some classes then made my debut. They drugged me, but I still won. The crowd didn't like that. But I've been here ever since.” Chisato let the silence hang for a moment.

“What about the client, did you ever see her again?” Freia sighed.

“No, unfortunately no. She was a cutie though, I hope she's doing well.” Chisato was just staring at Freia, who noticed her and gave a wink.

“All my clients were female. And you just happen to be the current target of my attention. I wonder what will happen?” Chisato could feel the heat rising to her cheeks, so she focused on the document again.

Wrestlers were 100,000 yen in debt that could only be paid back by winning the pot of 15 straight matches. All facility staff are female employees, to help ensure some level of comfort and security while in the league. Outside security was contracted out and nasty things could happen if people tried to escape. Contact with the outside world is cut off. Wrestler's assets shall be looked after by the Sponsor.

Chisato spoke up. “Hey, who is organising all this? They must have a lot of influence right?”

Freia's attention was elsewhere but she nodded. “I've suspected as much, it's why I often refer to them as a group. They don't seem to mean us harm at least, we're pretty much wrestling for their amusement. They've also never contacted us directly, only going through the talent scout or the referee in some matches if they change the rules mid match or something.”

“They value their privacy. And it might be something to focus on later at least.” Chisato nodded to herself and kept reading.


 No.4160

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>>4159

There are various match types. Single, tag-team, first blood, first orgasm, exhibition, grudge match. Some secret match types as well.

Chisato blinked. “Uhh… first blood, first uhh…” Freia smiled.

“The talent scout said out wrestling was a little different, right? Well, she's right. Later on I'll run you through a few moves but essentially, making your opponent orgasm is a viable move in a few select matches. Moves that target erogenous zones and the like are allowed as well. But this is only allowed in the more extreme matches. Normal single, tag team and first blood matches are straight wrestling and are the matches you'll probably go through first. Of course a tag team match can have the clause that someone is eliminated when they orgasm but that's a rare match anyway.”

“So… okay… the exhibition…” Freia looked down again.

“Yeah. It's an unpleasant event for a reason. The only rules in that one are sexual rules as well, ripping of garments, erogenous attacks, that sort of thing. And to do it in front of a sold out crowd, even if it's only 500 people. That's what makes it a shock as well. Usual matches are completely empty, maybe sometimes getting a max of 20 spectators. And being given that drug, it's a combination of a few things and you saw what happened yourself. That wouldn't happen in a normal match, it's frowned upon by the other wrestlers as well. But in exhibition… yeah…” Freia trailed off but Chisato set her gaze straight at her.

“It's okay, really. You had to do what you were told and then you took such good care of me afterwards. I'm glad I had someone like you looking out for me.” Freia looked at Chisato's honest expression then quickly looked away, slightly embarrassed.

Don't make me fall for you already. She thought to herself. And mentioning aftercare, does she have experience with my profession? She shook off that last thought.

“There's one more thing you need to know though, Chisato.” Freia could feel the words inside her wanting to get out. It was hard to say but she needed to say it.

“I… chose you. It was my turn for an exhibition match and the talent scout came to me with a selection of candidates for introduction. Sometimes you go against an established wrestler and other times you can choose outside candidates for introduction into the league. I chose you because…” Freia wanted to say the real reason, that she had taken a liking to Chisato. But she couldn't, not so early into their relationship.

“Because… I knew you could handle it, at my side at least. I'd guide you into the league and we'd work together to escape. I want you to know how you ended up here, so that there's no lies between us.”

Chisato was stunned for a moment, then clumsily reached over the table and held Freia's hand with both of her own. She couldn't meet Freia's gaze, so she held her head down, blushing deeply.

“I'm… I'm in your care then.”

Freia gently returned Chisato's gesture.

“I'll take good care of you. Count on it.”

They stayed that way for a short moment before Freia released her grip and stretched.

“Whelp, time to do some training, no use lying around here all day.” Freia quickly took off the robe and Chisato looked away, though Freia knew what she was doing. She picked out some easy to move in leggings and got into her wrestling uniform.

“Right, follow me. If we're going to work together, we'll need to spar occasionally. Get to know each others moves and such.” Chisato filed in behind her and they walkout the door into a metal hallway. Freia turned left and continued down it.


 No.4161

File: 1458708476884.jpg (74.62 KB, 640x360, 16:9, Show me.jpg)

>>4160

“Most of the complex is like this, each wrestler gets their own small room as well, although some can choose to share rooms if they wish. I already put in the application for you staying with me, if that's alright?” Chisato nodded instantly, she didn't mind staying with Freia.

They continued on for a ways before hitting a small intersection with signs pointing in different directions. Pool, social room, gym, private training, arena, A/V. Chisato thought to herself that the facility must be huge. Freia pointed to each room,

“Pool is obvious, it's where you can swim and work on muscle training as well. Social room is a small place to relax. You'll probably encounter other wrestlers as well around there. The gym is where you can work on stamina, running and stuff like that. PT is pretty much a private ring to practice moves before a match. The main Arena would be that way, with the locker room. A/V is to review matches and such. Ah, the recordings are private, the whole point of the league is exclusivity and all. If our matches were to get out, the sponsors would loose a lot of money. But that's why exhibition draw in so much money and attention. Throw open the doors for a one time event people get to see. Draws in a lot of attention.” Freia mused as they turned to the PT area.

They continued walking, footsteps echoing off the metal floor until they reached the private arena. It was just like the real thing, minus the seats on the side. The lights shown overhead and Freia approached the ring and under the rope, sliding onto the mat. She pranced around, going through various stretches warming up. Chisato stared for a few seconds before following under the bottom rope and sliding onto the map.

Chisato and Freia paced around the mat for a few minutes, just getting use to each others company. When Freia moved into the middle of the mat, Chisato followed.

“For today, I'm going to go through a few moves, just to see how good you are. We'll continue this for tomorrow as well but after that, I'll introduce you to Hathor, she coaches a lot of the girls around here and is the closest thing to a mother figure you'll find around here. She cares for us, so you can trust her.”

“Hathor? Kind of a strange name.”

“Yeah, well, before your first official match, you'll take a new name, if you want of course. I chose Freia because it worked for me. Kroshka and Hathor aren't their real names either, but it's easier to survive here if you have an identity you can shed once you get out.”

“So… you'll tell me your real name sometime?” Chisato inquired, Freia gave her a rueful smile.

“Maybe, one-day. Anyway, come at me with all you've got and let's see what we can learn from each other.”

Chisato nodded, jumping left and right, then charging Freia.

The two fought for hours and was the most intense session Chisato had experienced. But they both learned a lot about each other. Freia learned that Chisato did indeed have a higher tolerance for pain, putting her in various 'soft holds' that would normally hurt normal wrestlers but that she brushed off, kinda how Indian burns don't hurt if you train up that area of skin. Freia also learned that Chisato was inflexible, sticking to moves she had trained over the years rather than trying to innovate on the fly. The next session tomorrow would have to focus on trying to improve that.

Chisato had noticed however that Freia was a very technical wrestler, able to get out of leg locks, arm-bars and holds simply by wriggling out of it or by attacking a weak point on the attacker. But one of the things that surprised her was that Freia almost never struck out at her, except in instances where she was sure to land a hit or otherwise avoid striking entirely.


 No.4162

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>>4161

While they were walking back to the room after training, Chisato wondered about this.

“Freia, why is it that-” Freia covered her mouth and held a finger up.

“Not now, you don't know who could be listening. Talk when we get back.” Chisato nodded and Freia removed her hand.

They continued in silence until the door to Freia's room clicked behind them. Freia moved to the small couch and slumped into it, visibly tired.

“What is it you wished to ask, Chisato?” Chisato paused for a second, savouring how Freia's voice sounded speaking her name.

“During training, why is it you didn't get close to me? You only struck me a few times while it was very hard for me to hit you.” Freia gave a glance at Chisato before staring back at the ceiling.

“I don't like getting hit. Weird, I know, considering that I'm a wrestler. But that's why I don't get close except for holds and submissions and what not. It's why I dodge and wait for an opening. One punch, anywhere on me and I feel it a hundred times worse than some people. That head-butt you gave during our match, that hurt like hell. But I kept going, because I had to.” Freia paused for a moment.

“In a way, your fighting style compliments mine so well, I stay back and drag them out, straining their muscles and such for them to tap out. While you can take a beating and strike like a professional martial artist.” Chisato nodded and looked at the ground, thinking about this.

Freia leaned up from the couch and stretched her strained muscles.

“I'm going to go take a shower, after that, I'll cook you dinner.” She slowly removed herself from the couch and made her way to the bathroom. The door closed with an audible click and Chisato was left alone again.

Chisato thought about her mood and although staying here was a gloomy prospect, having someone like Freia looking over her made her feel at ease. Freia had been nice and hadn't made her do anything unreasonable. And the sponsor seemed to value his wrestlers, so nothing unseemly would happen to her if she stuck with Freia. She almost began to feel relived when Freia stepped out of the bathroom in nothing but a bathrobe.

“Your turn now.” Freia brushed past her and Chisato could smell her still damp hair, she smelled fresh and pretty and other weird words that popped into her head. Chisato stormed into the bathroom and Freia chuckled. She prepared a small, Japanese style meal for the both of them.

By the time Chisato had popped out of the bathroom, Freia was setting the table with dinner.

“Umm… clothes…” Chisato tried to say, wrapped only in a towel. Freia pointed to a nearby dresser,

“Should have arrived while we were out. I'm positive there are some clothes in there with your size.” Chisato peeked into one of the drawers and saw a small collection of t-shirts, pants, jeans, panties, pretty much everything she would need. She scooped up a few items and got changed back in the bathroom.


 No.4163

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>>4162

When she reappeared, it was pretty much the same outfit as that day, loose plain t-shirt and comfortable track pants. Freia gave a small clap and urged her to join her for dinner.

They both made some small talk, about how today's training went, about what daily live would be like from here on out, but things were still a little tense between them.

After a quiet dinner, Freia gathered up the dishes and deposited them in the sink.

“What now?” Chisato wondered. Freia paused for a minute before offering her hand to Chisato.

She looked hesitant but eventually took it. Freia guided her to the bed and softly pushed her down onto it, a pomp =3 coming from the mattress.

“Wha… Freia?” Chisato wondered before Freia put a finger over her lips.

“Sssshhhh. Think of this as training. I need to find your erogenous zones so I can help you increase your sexual stamina tomorrow.” Chisato eyes widened and she struggled but Freia held her down, staring right at her.

No, please Freia… I thought you were nice… Chisato thought.

Freia could see that her proposition has visibly shaken her, so she leaned in and gave Chisato a kiss. Chisato stiffened and Freia moved her hands from holding her down to massaging her chest. Chisato let out a moan and that brought her back, so she tried to move Freia's hands but Freia applied more pressure and Chisato moaned louder. Freia continued to apply pressure and then kissed Chisato's neck. Her back arched a little and Freia stopped, with Chisato staring back with blank cloudy eyes.

“Your neck is a weak spot, huh? I'll remember that.” She commented but Chisato was still trying to catch her breath.

Please Chisato, let me have this. Please. Freia thought.

Chisato could see the troubled expression on Freia's face.

As long as it was Freia… I don't have any experience but if it was her… Chisato thought.

Chisato looked at Freia then looked away.

“Please… be gentle…”

Freia nodded and kissed Chisato again while rubbing her chest, eliciting another moan.

What happened that night, well, it's between them. But let's say they started growing closer from then on.


 No.4164

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>Made me get serious about the story.

I was just gonna be happy with a one off green text story. But now, I can't it stop there.

>>4132

Noted, I'll see if I come up with anything.

>>4148

Jealousy huh? Well, Yandere is a good place to start.

http://dynasty-scans.com/series/happy_sugar_life

http://dynasty-scans.com/series/lovedeath

Jealousy is an element in this one.

http://dynasty-scans.com/series/lonely_wolf_lonely_sheep

Oh, Citrus as well.

http://dynasty-scans.com/series/citrus

That's all can think of right now.


 No.4166

>>4158

>>4159

>>4160

>>4161

>>4162

>>4163

>Getting killed in the ring

Gah, first it was the peeing, now it's this.


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>>4166

Not a story without some excitement.


 No.4169

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Freia seems a little too nice. I was hoping her personality would be more like Echidna from Queen's Blade. She shouldn't be worried that Chisato doesn't like her, because she'll have her way with her anyways.


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>>4169

She's being nice to begin with so when she actually does introduce S&M type elements and acts a bit harsher, it won't scare her away.

Kinda like dating, where you put on a front till your comfortable enough with the other person to reveal your true self.

I do wanna continue this story though, seeing as how I'm getting interested in it.


 No.4171

>>4164

yander is batshit insane. I will have none of that, more like self harm because she can't see her, god that sounded fucked lol. I'm over exaggerating, but i mean, a love that strong, tears one of them apart to be away from her soul mate. I only gave the manga as an example of what kind of Characters I'm looking for. I wasn't looking for mangas, but, literature.or fanfic, or poems, whatever. anything that is just in writing I guess


 No.4174

>>4171

>yander is batshit insane. I will have none of that, more like self harm because she can't see her, god that sounded fucked lol. I'm over exaggerating, but i mean, a love that strong, tears one of them apart to be away from her soul mate. I only gave the manga as an example of what kind of Characters I'm looking for. I wasn't looking for mangas, but, literature.or fanfic, or poems, whatever. anything that is just in writing I guess

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/3816271/1/Inter-Nos

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4004316/1/Windows-of-the-Soul

Inter Nos actually has a pretty jealous Shizuru in it. It just takes a while for it to show. Then it's there for the rest of the fic in various forms. Her jealousy gets so strong she tends to lash out at others rather than self harm though.

Windows has more of a neurotic Shizuru that can be jealous from time to time when Natsuki is talking to somebody else other than her. She never expresses it to Natsuki it but in general Shizuru is very neurotic in that fic. Yeah I know you said no yanderes but both of these fics aren't yandere beyond WotS being a direct sequel to My-HiME and taking the worst that Shizuru did as canon for it's story.

I can't really think of that many fics that even go down the jealous line just cause of how much fluff there tends to be in yuri. Also the jealousy thing is pretty uncommon in the fan fiction department due to how few lesbians there are in any given show. And if there are multiple lesbians it usually has destined partners for everybody. Do you know any jealous yuri characters? That might help my search cause I can't remember any off the top of my head.


 No.4175

>>4166

I will agree with this. Story is definitely edgy. Wrestle Angels is supposed to be fairly light hearted stuff.

>>4163

>What happened that night, well, it's between them. But let's say they started growing closer from then on.

I won't accept this. This was Chisato's first time outside of the ring with Freia and you chose to hide it from us. Show us what happened!

This chapter(update?) was better written than the previous though.


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>>4175

>Story is definitely edgy. Wrestle Angels is supposed to be fairly light hearted stuff.

Fair point. But that's the nature of fan fiction, what if the story took place in a darker league and the only solace they could find was with each other? I don't know, maybe a darker tone highlights the struggles of the characters more?

I might tone it down or two a notch, next chapter or section is gonna be singles matches anyway.

>Show us what happened!

To be honest, I was kinda exhausted from writing that much. So I was thinking of having Freia reflect on the previous night at the start of the next section.

This is the most I've written for about a year and a half and I'm not feeling the usual burnout issues yet.

But yes, more wrestling, less depressive stuff.


 No.4188

>>4187

>Fair point. But that's the nature of fan fiction, what if the story took place in a darker league and the only solace they could find was with each other? I don't know, maybe a darker tone highlights the struggles of the characters more?

>I might tone it down or two a notch, next chapter or section is gonna be singles matches anyway.

It's your story. Just trying to help you improve.

>To be honest, I was kinda exhausted from writing that much.

I understand that. Just saying don't leave us hanging right when it's about to get gud.

>This is the most I've written for about a year and a half and I'm not feeling the usual burnout issues yet.

I know that feel. Haven't written in years myself. Need to get back into it but translating is taking up a large portion of my free time now in addition to all the hours I spend elsewhere.

>But yes, more wrestling, less depressive stuff.

Cool.

>>4164

>Noted, I'll see if I come up with anything.

Thanks in advance.




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