Haiku About Your Waifu

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Haiku About Your Waifu Anonymous 02/19/16 (Fri) 05:04:44 No.883

Write a haiku about your waifu, but let's make it a tiny bit harder, you can't use your waifu's appearance in it in any way. They don't have to be deep or anything, they can if you want, this is just a challenge I guess. They can be corny as shit too, don't be embarrassed. I have two Haikus. The first one is focused on her while the second is just our relationship.

Angry but happy,

Working hard at everything,

Hard shell soft inside

Loving each other,

More than people like us should,

Dimensions split us

Anonymous 02/20/16 (Sat) 00:47:58 No.885

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>>884

>Make me smile again

You did alright but,

You used six syllables when,

You should have used five

But I also fucked up in the sense that I didn't put three units, so let's do this again. First haiku is about her, second is our relationship.

First:

Angry but happy,

Working hard at everything,

Hard shell soft inside,

Your greatest flaw is,

The stress you put on yourself,

To achieve your goals,

But it also shows,

How motivated you are,

To be number one

Second:

Loving each other,

More than people like us should,

Dimensions split us,

But despite that I,

Will treat you like a person,

Like the rest of us,

I will be seen as,

A weirdo for this but I,

Won't let that stop me

Anonymous 02/20/16 (Sat) 06:27:29 No.887

Erm… OP, I think we have different definitions of what haiku are/should sound/look like, but I won't be an ass and pedantically explain unless you want me to elaborate.

Here's my attempt:

soft, sun splays over

scrunched shoulders, your sigh broken

by my promised kiss

(I could probably write more but it takes a lot of effort to get a haiku right, moreso than most other poetry forms. I may try to make this into a series when I have time.)

>>884

The last one made me chuckle.

Anonymous 02/20/16 (Sat) 06:38:40 No.889

>>887

I had a feeling this would come up

"Haiku is one of the most important form of traditional Japanese poetry. Haiku is, today, a 17-syllable verse form consisting of three metrical units of 5, 7, and 5 syllables."

is what I'm going off of. I have heard that haikus are more about seasons and stuff, at least when I was a kid. Maybe that was wrong. But what I wanted to take from it was the 5,7,5 with three units thing. I'm for sure no master at poetry. I don't even try to write poetry, just was thinking this would be a fun exercise to write in a different way about our waifus. But if you'd like to elaborate I'm all ears, maybe I can improve. Maybe others would like to know more too.

Anonymous 02/20/16 (Sat) 07:00:21 No.890

>>889

*nature not seasons

Anonymous 02/20/16 (Sat) 18:26:17 No.892

>>889

Now I think I'm understanding the three unit thing better. It doesn't mean three verses it means the 5,7,5 is the three unit thing. God I'm fucking retarded. Well I guess that means I just wrote six haikus that were really related to each other.

>>885

Anonymous 02/21/16 (Sun) 16:29:41 No.893

>>889

> But if you'd like to elaborate I'm all ears, maybe I can improve.

Sure. Give me a day or two, my computer is acting up.