/writ/ - Writing

This board is for the writefags of fullchan, amateurs and professionists.
you can discuss about everything related like
-Asking opinions about your brand new novel
-Discuss about publishers and literature "industry" in general
-Dumpig all your emo poems
-Every char is a mary sue
and more.
fanfics and expanded universes are accepted but i suggest you to try this board istead: >>>/fanfic/
Rules
-NSFW must be covered in spoiler

-Stories/novels/whatever must be in english, if you want to link something from another author in another language please translate it.

-As i said before, fanfics and fanfics discussions are accepted, but for a more focused audience etc its better if you go to the proper board

feel free to post here your questions about this board and ideas for improving it (like new rules, banners etc)

Dream and Dream

The colors of the leafs are blown away,
The beauty of the season goes away
A white layer comes and it won’t go away
Cold , it is cold but we have fun anyway
The beauty of the world, it is her and everywhere
You just have to look , look closer
Can’t you see, it's not all gray, black or pink
Its a mix of everything you want to be and everything you don’t want to see
And that is what makes earth what it should be
The world full of magic and mystery
Sad and happy
We all want something we cannot be
But one day, one day we will all find our lucky charm
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As things stand now, I am going to be a writer. I'm not sure that I'm going to be a good one or even a self-supporting one, but until the dark thumb of fate presses me to the dust and says 'you are nothing', I will be a writer.

I've been wanting to write a fantasy story with someone. Like RP, but not.
Anyone interested?
Also, so I don't seem like a faggot, share your collab experiences.

Ever got dosh for writing? were you not ashamed to show off the work to family?

Tell me, /writ/, what are you working on?

It is the 5th Era and the only Civilization known to man is the enormous Land of Monacia. According to legend Monacia once stretched across the entire Continent of Golgatha but after 5 Eras it was reduced to nothing but a coastal Empire stretched thin but staying strong against the Aberrants that took have taken so many lives.

Nobody knows anymore how big Golgatha is as those 5 eras stretched a total of 10000 years and their might have been more Eras before those and Monacia is the last bastion of Humanity.

The story focuses on a boy named Lucian Gulbrand and his mentor/Godfather Falke as they try to mend the boys relationship with his Father and Lucian becomes the type of man that strives to find Humanities lost history.

If any of you want to know more I can tell you some more details.

The books almost fully written and ive gotten it legally protected and soon im going to send it out to publishers.

What I'd like is to maybe find some editor-fags here. once i have the completed draft that i feel comfortable with I could use one of you guys as my editor and push your name in my book. if it does well enough you can make a name for yourself in the industry.

A rose rides low like erosion of comets
A meteor strikes foes, imploding upon it
A shakespearian sword, a soldier of sonnets
only fearing the lord whose hold is stone, onyx
but if he stood in opposition's facing
would he be praised or would he be chasing?
A dream falls to pieces unless it is pursued
esteem for complacence means envy all consumes
and if a man chases desires, not embracing the fire
He does himself disservice as great as a pyre
Lust for possession, a gluttonous weapon
and thus intersection must fade for a function
So fear not my child, this fable is nothing
fear only inaction, disabled and stunting.

I get inspired to make them every once in a while. I'll post some I've written over the past few years, feel free to post yours.

I want to write a story and would like you opinion on it.

>anon is trying to masturbate but is too uninterested to finish
>starts thinking about how shit his life is
>decides to turn a new leaf (again) and go for a run
>starts to run down the stairs and trips
>breaks neck and blacks out
>wakes up in a new fantasy world
>thinks he is going to start an epic adventure, optimistic
>enslaved by orcs and used as fuck toy cause his long hair and bony skin makes him look like a girl to orcs
>broken anon is despair/delirious, goes full /d/
>orc camp is raided by elves
>elves take slaves including anon to frontier fort
>anon and non-elven slaves is used for experiments by alchemists to test healing properties of certain medicine
>anon accepts his fate while missing his own world and prepares to commit suicide
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Hey /writ/, a shitty fucking writer here. I've been working on this story for a while and plan to eventually publish it as an eBook. I'm having trouble on how I want to release it, though. I've been thinking about putting it out as a series of novellas. However, there's a huge time skip in the middle of the story and I feel like it might work better as two novels instead.

In case anyone is curious, it's basically a coming-of-age story about vaguely defined sky pirates and is set to include a total of 18 illustrations.

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I recently migrated here from halfchan and this seemed the most appropriate place to post my short stories. I encourage others to do the same!

"A Disquisition of Elysia"

http://pastebin.com/8HTX8Byn

It is a short story, written in the style of a documentary, about an explorer's experiences on the elven island of Elysia. This was originally written for the Weekend Smut Thread on halfchan's /tg/ so there is explicit smut involved (I hope that is alright)! Please feel free to comment, critique, and share your own works for everyone to see!

Hey /writ/ first time posting here. I've been investing alot of my time into scripting and other kinds of writing. And I continue to find myself "not in the mood" to write.

So, how can I get in the "writing mood"? Dim lights? Calm music? Anything helps, thanks.