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File: 21ee7b298efec62⋯.png (29.51 KB, 859x413, 859:413, itt_write_a_yuri_plot.png)

 No.931

Give me your best ideas for anything yuri related

 No.932

>>931

Thread theme:

DARK AND EDGY


 No.940

File: 5540fc3682b2a03⋯.jpg (167.03 KB, 1024x659, 1024:659, Amazon 4.jpg)

File: dba35874457c078⋯.jpg (351.75 KB, 800x1119, 800:1119, Fool's art succubus.jpg)

>>931

Warrior lady/Amazon goes out on a quest to fug all of the women in the land.

>>932

>DARK AND EDGY

Okay, ow the edge twist:

The reason why is because she's been cursed by a succubus. She has a kill switch where if she doesn't have sex with another woman in a certain amount of time then she'll die. There are rules to it where she can't have sex with the same woman twice to get rid of it and the higher up the woman is on the social ranking then the longer having sex with her will delay our heroine's kill switch (such as having sex with some random prostitute will only extend the time limit by a day or two, while fugging the princess of an elf kingdom will delay it by months). And the only way to get rid of it is for her to do something the succubus who cursed her has never been able to do: get a girl to genuinely love her.


 No.942

>>940

The issue with this is some girls fall in love super quick. Succubus shouldn't be having this problem either tbh.


 No.952

>>942

True.

The condition to get rid of it should probably something much harder then.

Maybe either getting the succubus to fall in love with her, or maybe to out dyke the succubus and get more girls in her harem than her.


 No.996

>>940

How contrived.


 No.997

>>940

What if we edited this? Like a Succubus Castle suddenly appearing and an army of monster girls ordered by the Succubus Queen to pillage a nearby country for its women.


 No.998

>>997

>>997

>What if we edited this?

Go wild.


 No.999

>>997

That's not editing. The only thing that is the same is that there is a succubus.

Also still just crappy boner driven plot development.


 No.1000

>>999

That's the problem with succubi.


 No.1012

What about instead of Dark and Edgy the theme is mature. Tell a story people will want to read to find out what happens next.


 No.1029

>>940

What if the Succubus was an evil bitch?


 No.1034

File: 580f9b9fb2c4032⋯.jpg (316.94 KB, 900x900, 1:1, 110224b.jpg)

>>1029

I do believe she already is one since she gave the MC a curse that can kill her. But if you want to make her even more evil, then go ahead.


 No.1036

>>1034

That's more perverted than evil.

I'm saying forget the curse. Focus on a story with an evil succubus as the main villain. The reason you need a female hero is the succubus can control men and bend/corrupt them to her will easily.


 No.1037

File: 20981b88c2abeec⋯.jpg (418.17 KB, 848x695, 848:695, 22532548_p0.jpg)

>>1036

>I'm saying forget the curse

Then how would the gay happen? Or do you have something else in mind? I will admit it is a little contrived like how >>996 said.

> The reason you need a female hero is the succubus can control men and bend/corrupt them to her will easily.

>Making the villiainess be a complete whore

Not a bad idea, I don't mind villains you genuinely hate.


 No.1038

>>1037

Perhaps some sort of alliance against the succubus and her army. Protag meets another girl/girls there.

I want succubus yuri too but from a story POV they are more useful as villains.


 No.1039

If you want to do a monster girl yuri setup - make it so the monster girl has all or most of the power in this scenario. Make the other girl afraid of her.

An idea I had was a beautiful girl being offered up as tribute to a vampiress or something in exchange for 'protection' or so they don't attack the village/town.


 No.1050

>>1036

I don't think sending a lesbian after a succubus is a good idea from a practical standpoint.


 No.1051

>>1050

Hm. That is an issue. Unless the succubus just can't control women at all. Or a woman might be immune to her charms.


 No.1053

>>1051

Maybe the succubus is just simply not interested in women?


 No.1054

>>1053

That's an idea.




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