>>4187
>Fair point. But that's the nature of fan fiction, what if the story took place in a darker league and the only solace they could find was with each other? I don't know, maybe a darker tone highlights the struggles of the characters more?
>I might tone it down or two a notch, next chapter or section is gonna be singles matches anyway.
It's your story. Just trying to help you improve.
>To be honest, I was kinda exhausted from writing that much.
I understand that. Just saying don't leave us hanging right when it's about to get gud.
>This is the most I've written for about a year and a half and I'm not feeling the usual burnout issues yet.
I know that feel. Haven't written in years myself. Need to get back into it but translating is taking up a large portion of my free time now in addition to all the hours I spend elsewhere.
>But yes, more wrestling, less depressive stuff.
Cool.
>>4164
>Noted, I'll see if I come up with anything.
Thanks in advance.