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Film Club #15 - The Strange Color of Your Body's Tears (Hélène Cattet & Bruno Forzani, 2013)


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 No.2218

I made a short with my friends for the 48 hour film challenge (come up with an idea for a film and shoot it in 48 hours). And I want to know what you think.
If you have letterboxd you can rate it here
http://letterboxd.com/film/door-to-door-2014/

here's the film itself
https://vimeo.com/109970186

 No.2221

>>2218
>intro
Funny and relatable, wish it was a bit more smooth just felt like the cuts were a bit to sloppy but a 8/10 for the intro.

>Second bit at house number 13

Funny as well wish the dude you got to answer the door was being more impatient and annoyed, the joke at the end was funny but I wish he said it more smooth again but it does fit in with the hole creepy Jehovah people 7/10

>the bit after the second bit at number 21


Like the two Mormons a lot more, starting to like them even though in real life I would just not open the door, other dude is a bit dull with his dialogue, the two Mormons I like the other dude not so much 6/10

>at house number 4 with the dude at the tree


Guy in red wish he was shouting more not trying to be angry but knowing he is in a public place so he just makes him look like he is putting it on, make him more beta not alpha

>them looking at the letter


Don't feel that was needed, I know some atheists get together and talk about shit, but never about "EXPOSING DA LIES OF OTHERS1!1!" and no need for the ending happy bit and that dude said it too fast and I could not hear him.

Also gods not real they should be at home playin vidya or taking shrooms.

6/10 the last bit killed it for me.

 No.2222

Well done for actually doing something.

Please don't listen to anyone who uses the the terms 'beta' and 'alpha'.

 No.2226

>>2222
Nice quads

 No.2394

It was an appealing little thing, nice job. The only thing I'd say is maybe invest in a tripod, but really, you should be proud of this.



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